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PinkiePieSwear - Sunshine and Celery Stalks

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AruOtta
1,296 posts
Joined May 2012
AruOtta
From your request ~ OMG MLP !

[Celery Stalks]
00:05:967 (1,2,3,4) - Do a square with (4)
00:07:813 (9) - Symmetry
00:11:505 (1,2) - Move them down
00:46:582 (1) - Move this slider, it's ugly 'cause of the previous circle
01:17:967 (1,2) - Blanket ?
SPOILER
01:18:890 (3) - So symmetry like the (1) (If you fixed)
01:23:505 (1) - Do more rounded (like the previous slider)
02:16:582 (7) - Move that circle
02:22:351 (5) - Move at x:256 y:128
02:53:044 (2) - I don't think this patern is necessary xD
03:18:890 (4,5) - I think it's better to have a reverse slider with the (4)

Good Luck *u*
hoshisorakiseki
300 posts
Joined January 2012
hoshisorakiseki
hello, from my queue.
i feel this music like dj which i don't like.

general:
if you can, mapping 1 or more difficulty yourself.

diff:Celery Stalks
02:31:351 - so long the break here. try to add some note here?
the ending is too long, cut it or map more is better.
the note are ok

good luck.
-Srui-
94 posts
Joined October 2012
-Srui-
Hi ~ :3

[Celery Stalks]
  • 00:21:197 (3) - reduce some curve
    00:23:274 (5,7) - i feel a little confuse ;w;
    00:42:890 (1,2) - what do you think about overlapping ?
    00:51:890 (8,2) - overlapping
    01:00:197 (4) - move to (236,272) for symmetry
    01:05:505 (2,3) - exchange the position. i think it will be fun
    01:14:505 (2) - overlapping on 01:13:582 (6) - start
    01:16:582 (3) - reduce some curve
    01:17:967 (6) - NC
    02:12:659 (6,7) - avoid overlapping. many players will click earlier than necessary.
    02:15:428 (2) - opposite slider
    02:56:736 (5,2) - overlapping
Chirikatori
70 posts
Joined March 2013
Chirikatori
From my modding queue!
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/155654

[Sunshine]
00:04:121 - 00:33:659 - Huge gap, the other difficulty has notes in it. Why doesn't this?

00:41:274 (5) - Replace with two normal hitnotes. 00:41:274 and 00:41:736.
00:50:736 (4,5,6) - Make it identical to 00:43:351 (2,3)
01:18:428 (4,1) - Avoid overlap.
01:49:813 (6) - Avoid using a 2x repeated slider. Instead, make it like this.


02:12:659 (3) - ^, it's too hard to read.


03:12:659 (1) - So hard to read ..

If my mod didn't help, don't give kudosu.
I only modded this difficulty, couldn't find anything to mod in the other one. :P
Good luck!~
-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
hi From Kritio's Modding Queuse (Normal / M4M)
sorry, because time is too late. :o

[General]
Add Video to Normal

[Normal]
01:41:966 (1) - 01:42:197 - move
01:42:659 (2) - 01:42:890 - ^
01:49:351 (1,2) - same as above
02:20:043 (2,4) - circle remove
03:01:351 - Finish add (soft)


[Sunshine]
Please change the name to the difficulty. : Hard
00:33:659 - Finish add
01:58:582 - vol.20 add
02:02:274 (1) - Finish add
02:07:813 (6) - NC add
02:12:659 (3,4) - Too weird flow. image
02:22:813 (2) - 02:22:928 - move
02:30:890 (7) - NC add?
02:31:813 - Finish add
02:54:197 (7) - NC add
02:58:582 (5) - ^
03:01:351 - here circle(Finish) add?
03:16:582 (5) - NC add?

[Celery Stalks]
00:23:967 - Clap add
00:26:736 (4) - ^
00:27:659 - ^
00:28:121 (8,1) - change the new combo.
00:45:659 (5) - NC add?
01:00:428 (5,1) - Clap remove
01:03:197 - Finish add
01:32:736 - here circle(Finish) add?
02:47:044 (2,3) - ctrl + g (vocal norte)
03:01:351 (1) - finish add

GL :D/
yurunneram
682 posts
Joined January 2012
yurunneram
I-I'm sorry \(QAQ\) I'm allergic to ponies desu... deny desu gomen
Winek
887 posts
Joined September 2013
Winek
Hey, from my modding queue!

Easy
Care for hitsound?
00:11:966 (5) - Suggest you new combo this note
00:17:043 (1) - Removing new combo?
00:22:582 (4,5) - Why dont delete these two and make a slider a bit like 00:20:736 (3) ?
In general, your combo are way too short. Consider making them a bit longer, from 4-6
01:31:813 (2) - Maybe remove the reverse arrown and copy this: 01:29:043 (1,2)
01:50:043 (2) - Instead of one notes on the red tick, put 2 notes and the next and previous white ticks.
03:15:197 (3) - Stack it with the (4) not with the (2)
You also COMPLETELY forgot about the video only on this difficutly.

Sunshine
Care for hitsound?
May i suggest you put a circle 00:43:121 and 00:44:044 also, 00:44:968
00:49:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In this stream of circles, why don't you put at least like on slider, like?
01:12:197 (1) - Approach it from previous note! :o
01:16:121 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:03:197 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:09:197 (1) - Distance it from the next note; or 03:09:890 (2) - Approach it with the next note :o

Celery Stalk
I can't really see errors, since i'm not VERY experienced. But one thing would be to make your combo a bit larger.

Colorful Flower
Not that experienced, i don't think i can't mod ;_;, maybe again at short combo?

SORRY IF I WAS RUDE, or anything.
If you don't mind i could also do Easy version?
S0nic whooshx
21 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
S0nic whooshx

Winek wrote:

Hey, from my modding queue!

Easy
Care for hitsound? Copied from other diffs
00:11:966 (5) - Suggest you new combo this note +
00:17:043 (1) - Removing new combo? +
00:22:582 (4,5) - Why dont delete these two and make a slider a bit like 00:20:736 (3) ? No dfference
In general, your combo are way too short. Consider making them a bit longer, from 4-6
01:31:813 (2) - Maybe remove the reverse arrown and copy this: 01:29:043 (1,2) I think it would be wrong as it doesn't match with vocal
01:50:043 (2) - Instead of one notes on the red tick, put 2 notes and the next and previous white ticks. Same as previous
03:15:197 (3) - Stack it with the (4) not with the (2) +
You also COMPLETELY forgot about the video only on this difficutly. Fixed(I think xD)

Sunshine
Care for hitsound? +
May i suggest you put a circle 00:43:121 and 00:44:044 also, 00:44:968 +
00:49:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In this stream of circles, why don't you put at least like on slider, like? -
01:12:197 (1) - Approach it from previous note! :o It would break a nice pattern :<
01:16:121 (1) - Remove new combo? +
03:03:197 (1) - Remove new combo? +
03:09:197 (1) - Distance it from the next note; or 03:09:890 (2) - Approach it with the next note :o +

Celery Stalk
I can't really see errors, since i'm not VERY experienced. But one thing would be to make your combo a bit larger.

Colorful Flower
Not that experienced, i don't think i can't mod ;_;, maybe again at short combo?

Thank you for mod =3

SORRY IF I WAS RUDE, or anything.
If you don't mind i could also do Easy version?
Lust
osu! Alumni
2,667 posts
Joined January 2013
Lust
Hello.

  1. Your difficulty names are unrankable. Here is what the ranking criteria say:
    in other words, make sure the average human player can understand what difficulty the map is by reading the difficulty name. without knowing the mapper. without special knowledge of a niche topic.
    More information can be found here.
    So please change them to easy normal hard insane.

Since I have no idea what diffs they are, I'll just mod them in the order I see it.

[wa_'s normal]
  1. 00:17:043 (3) - You've been following the downbeats for NC's before, why stop here? NC this
  2. 00:23:966 (5,1) - Blanket is slightly off. Use the approach circle of 00:23:966 (5) - to fix it
  3. 00:26:966 (2,3) - This goes a bit high up, a different pattern. The way it is setup now is awkward and flows weirdly to the next note. Here is a bad example
    !
    I'm sure you can fix it up to look better
  4. 00:38:274 (2,3) - Would be nicer as a blanket
  5. 00:42:890 (3) - This doesn't really hold the rhythm for me.
  6. 00:58:582 (2,1) - Overlaps are confusing to newer players. Plus this one doesn't look very good :|
  7. 01:15:659 (4,1) - Blanket is slightly off
  8. 01:31:813 (2) - This doesn't quite hold a rhythm either. Try a circle 01:31:813 (2) - here 01:32:274 (3) - here 01:32:736 (4) - and here
  9. 01:36:428 - No point for this green line, please remove
[Sunshine]
  1. 00:36:890 (5) - Not good rhythm, change it to three circles. Each one 1/2 from eachother
  2. 00:53:967 (2,3) - Not a good overlap. Looks like a mistake if anything
  3. 00:59:044 (1) - Rhythm is weird. Also remove NC.
  4. 00:59:736 (9) - If you follow above NC here
  5. 01:05:967 - Need a note here
  6. 01:06:890 - ^ Please have notes on strong beats!
  7. 01:12:890 ^ Map to the beat not the vocals
  8. 01:23:967 (1,3) - Overlap again that looks like mistake
  9. 01:30:890 (6) - Not really liking this slider
  10. 02:57:659 (2,1) - Stack this correctly. 02:58:582 (1) - should be at 395:117
  11. 03:06:890 (4,5) - What is this rhythm? Make them 1/1s.. 3/4 is weird

good luck.

inb4cdfa
wa_
237 posts
Joined May 2012
wa_
Change my diff name to wa's Normal pls (just remove _ from diffname)
btw You don't have to check mods for my diff, just wait until I'll do it and send here corrected diff (pm me if I forget). Sorry for being inactive here :oops:
S0nic whooshx
21 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
S0nic whooshx

wa_ wrote:

Change my diff name to wa's Normal pls (just remove _ from diffname)
btw You don't have to check mods for my diff, just wait until I'll do it and send here corrected diff (pm me if I forget). Sorry for being inactive here :oops:
k, i already made a few changes, you can check them and keep ones which you like


Expecting a huuuuuuuge post about my diffs >_<
BigWilly
214 posts
Joined October 2013
BigWilly
[Normal]

00:20:736 (3) - Slider Looks Slightly Weird at the top, Consider Changing
00:59:505 (1) - Half the Slider + 1 repeat Arrow

Good Luck!

Thanks for using the Modding queue!
Frosi -
32 posts
Joined January 2013
Frosi -
Get this map ranked :3 Its so awsome !
S0nic whooshx
21 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
S0nic whooshx

Frosiella wrote:

Get this map ranked :3 Its so awsome !
Thank you=3

I'm actually trying, but it gonna take a long time...
deejaydray
166 posts
Joined October 2013
deejaydray
Hello, from my modding queue ~

You asked me to mod your last difficulty, Colorful Flowers, so here it is ^^

00:07:813 (1) - use a "finish" hitsound here, not "clap"
00:10:813 (4) - "clap" hitsound here, so as to sound like the beginning
00:11:505 (1) - "finish" hitsound here
00:15:197 (1) - ^ same
00:18:197 (8) - "clap" hitsound here
00:17:736 (4,5,6,7,8) - it's just a suggestion, but you should replace some of these circles with a little slider, for example put a slider that starts at 00:17:736 and end at 00:17:851
00:18:890 (1) - "finish" hitsound here
00:22:582 (1) - ^ same
00:25:582 (4) - "clap" hitsound at the beginning and end of this slider
00:26:044 (5) - "finish" hitsound at the end of this slider
00:43:351 (2) - I would move this circle to x:264 y:140
01:06:428 (5) - move this to x:108 y:284 , and this 01:06:659 (6) to x:80 y:200
01:17:044 (7) - NC here
01:20:274 (2) - I would move this to x:220 y:336
01:43:813 (8) - instead of this, you should use a slider like this 01:37:813 (5)
03:15:890 (5) - I would flip horizontally and reverse this slider, it fits better :)

Well, that's all! ^^ Nice map btw, I really liked it! Good luck with it! :3
S0nic whooshx
21 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
S0nic whooshx

deejaydray wrote:

Hello, from my modding queue ~

You asked me to mod your last difficulty, Colorful Flowers, so here it is ^^

00:07:813 (1) - use a "finish" hitsound here, not "clap"
00:10:813 (4) - "clap" hitsound here, so as to sound like the beginning
00:11:505 (1) - "finish" hitsound here
00:15:197 (1) - ^ same
00:18:197 (8) - "clap" hitsound here
00:17:736 (4,5,6,7,8) - it's just a suggestion, but you should replace some of these circles with a little slider, for example put a slider that starts at 00:17:736 and end at 00:17:851
00:18:890 (1) - "finish" hitsound here
00:22:582 (1) - ^ same
00:25:582 (4) - "clap" hitsound at the beginning and end of this slider
00:26:044 (5) - "finish" hitsound at the end of this slider
00:43:351 (2) - I would move this circle to x:264 y:140
01:06:428 (5) - move this to x:108 y:284 , and this 01:06:659 (6) to x:80 y:200
01:17:044 (7) - NC here
01:20:274 (2) - I would move this to x:220 y:336
01:43:813 (8) - instead of this, you should use a slider like this 01:37:813 (5)
03:15:890 (5) - I would flip horizontally and reverse this slider, it fits better :)

Well, that's all! ^^ Nice map btw, I really liked it! Good luck with it! :3

Thank you =3 Applied all
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Sorry for the really late reply. I wasn't in the mood to mod, and I had this project to do.

[Normal]
It says that this difficulty enable "Letterbox during breaks", but the others difficulty doesn't enable this option. Maybe disable the option?
00:04:120 (1) - Ctrl+G, and move it to x:210 y:152?
00:08:736 (2) - Ctrl+G, and move it to x:6 y:221? If so, move 00:09:659 (3) to x:171 y:122.
02:09:659 (1) - Remove the new combo?
02:20:274 (2) - The distance isn't the same as others. Move it further.
02:29:966 (1) - Make a perfect stack with the head of the slider to 02:27:659 (2) .
03:15:197 (3,4) - Move them a little further from 03:14:274 (2) .

[Hard]
00:40:582 (4) - Add a new combo?
00:50:274 (3) - Move it somewhere like x:88 y:140 to make 00:49:351 (1,2,3,4,5) a star pattern.
01:03:659 (1) - Add a new combo?
01:11:044 (4) - Add a new combo, and remove the new combo to 01:12:197 (1) ?
01:45:890 (1,2) - Ctrl+G?

[Celery Stalks]
00:08:159 (2,3) - Move 00:08:159 (2) to x:91 y:172, and move 00:08:274 (3) x:96 y:154.
00:10:813 (4) - Make a perfect stack with 00:08:967 (6) .
00:11:044 (5) - Move it to x:291 y:112? If so, move 00:11:505 (1,2) to x:213 y:257 .
00:25:467 (6,7) - These doesn't have the same distance as 00:25:121 (3,4,5) .
00:26:621 (3) - Move it to x:486 y:184.
00:26:736 (4) - Move it to x:486 y:209.
03:30:197 (6) - Move it to x:72 y:96.

I feel that your difficulties have a note with a slight different distance in the triplets. More with the last(s) note(s). Good Luck on ranking this map.
S0nic whooshx
21 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
S0nic whooshx

sheela901 wrote:

Sorry for the really late reply. I wasn't in the mood to mod, and I had this project to do.

[Normal]
It says that this difficulty enable "Letterbox during breaks", but the others difficulty doesn't enable this option. Maybe disable the option?
00:04:120 (1) - Ctrl+G, and move it to x:210 y:152?
00:08:736 (2) - Ctrl+G, and move it to x:6 y:221? If so, move 00:09:659 (3) to x:171 y:122.
02:09:659 (1) - Remove the new combo?
02:20:274 (2) - The distance isn't the same as others. Move it further.
02:29:966 (1) - Make a perfect stack with the head of the slider to 02:27:659 (2) .
03:15:197 (3,4) - Move them a little further from 03:14:274 (2) .

[Hard]
00:40:582 (4) - Add a new combo?
00:50:274 (3) - Move it somewhere like x:88 y:140 to make 00:49:351 (1,2,3,4,5) a star pattern.
01:03:659 (1) - Add a new combo?
01:11:044 (4) - Add a new combo, and remove the new combo to 01:12:197 (1) ?
01:45:890 (1,2) - Ctrl+G?

[Celery Stalks]
00:08:159 (2,3) - Move 00:08:159 (2) to x:91 y:172, and move 00:08:274 (3) x:96 y:154.
00:10:813 (4) - Make a perfect stack with 00:08:967 (6) .
00:11:044 (5) - Move it to x:291 y:112? If so, move 00:11:505 (1,2) to x:213 y:257 .
00:25:467 (6,7) - These doesn't have the same distance as 00:25:121 (3,4,5) .
00:26:621 (3) - Move it to x:486 y:184.
00:26:736 (4) - Move it to x:486 y:209.
03:30:197 (6) - Move it to x:72 y:96.

I feel that your difficulties have a note with a slight different distance in the triplets. More with the last(s) note(s). Good Luck on ranking this map.
Thank you! Applied all in my and silverboxer's diff, also fixed some other triplets :D
wa_
237 posts
Joined May 2012
wa_

sheela901 wrote:

[Normal]
It says that this difficulty enable "Letterbox during breaks", but the others difficulty doesn't enable this option. Maybe disable the option? / k
00:04:120 (1) - Ctrl+G, and move it to x:210 y:152? / nope, I think now is ok.
00:08:736 (2) - Ctrl+G, and move it to x:6 y:221? If so, move 00:09:659 (3) to x:171 y:122. same as above
02:09:659 (1) - Remove the new combo? / no, it would be inconsitent
02:20:274 (2) - The distance isn't the same as others. Move it further. / fixed
02:29:966 (1) - Make a perfect stack with the head of the slider to 02:27:659 (2) . / done
03:15:197 (3,4) - Move them a little further from 03:14:274 (2) . / fixed
Thanks~
Updated diff: http://puu.sh/6jsTk.osu
S0nic whooshx
21 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
S0nic whooshx

wa_ wrote:

sheela901 wrote:

[Normal]
It says that this difficulty enable "Letterbox during breaks", but the others difficulty doesn't enable this option. Maybe disable the option? / k
00:04:120 (1) - Ctrl+G, and move it to x:210 y:152? / nope, I think now is ok.
00:08:736 (2) - Ctrl+G, and move it to x:6 y:221? If so, move 00:09:659 (3) to x:171 y:122. same as above
02:09:659 (1) - Remove the new combo? / no, it would be inconsitent
02:20:274 (2) - The distance isn't the same as others. Move it further. / fixed
02:29:966 (1) - Make a perfect stack with the head of the slider to 02:27:659 (2) . / done
03:15:197 (3,4) - Move them a little further from 03:14:274 (2) . / fixed
Thanks~
Updated diff: http://puu.sh/6jsTk.osu
Thanks :)
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