Do you love my random mod?
[General]
02:48:021 - how about a kiai fountain to emphasise the special part?
[Sleeping]
00:22:175 (3) - Please double check whether this is offscreen or not.
00:31:406 (1,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Please get rid off the NC spam, it's not appropriate for an easy diff, imo! You should use at least 4 Combo. It works too.
00:42:944 (1) -
http://puu.sh/99fYP.png I think the Transition like this works better.
01:02:329 (4) - Please move this slider to another Point in the time line - in order not to ignore the downbeat !
01:09:714 (3,4) - Well it works, but maybe you can think of a better rhythm after 9 months XD
02:01:867 (1,1,1,1) - omg so asian wwww
02:17:560 (2) - How about -1 reverse and add a circle, to get a clickable action?
02:29:560 (2) - DS
03:17:560 (1,2,3) - Move this up so you can get
http://puu.sh/99gd7.png this, because it's way more beautiful and flows better too.
03:25:406 (1,2,1) -
http://puu.sh/99geA.png03:30:944 - Eh.. I don't think it's really cool to end the map like this, even if you follow the background mostly, you should better map the vocals here.
Could you please rework the new combos? If you need further help I'm here, but I think you're able to do it.
[Walking]
01:07:406 (6,1,2) - How about smth like
http://puu.sh/99gnB.png ? The transition works better like that.
01:25:867 (1) - remove nc
02:01:867 (1,1,1) - I'm confused by this pattern, something seems inconsistent there, but i can't get it right lol
02:13:637 (2) - Try to get a blanket like 02:11:791 (2) - (this is not so close)
02:16:867 (2) - I think this is too stressful for a normal diff, how about something more simple?
Pls go over the NC as well, it wasn't too bad but some errors were there, I think!
[Dancing]
Fun to play!
00:44:791 (2,3,4,5,6) - Take the whole thing and move it to 56 152 to have a better tarnsition!
00:59:329 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Looked a bit odd to me, can you get a better zigzag stream here?
01:09:714 (2) - That felt really weird, what exactly was it following? Maybe try to shorten it and go for the vocals for once instead.
01:32:098 (1) - Mh.. xD Not too sure if it's rankable, the other ones were good but this one is a bit .. XD
02:00:944 (5) - clap on blue tick ? I wouldn't do that. remove it!
02:47:560 (1) - How about making it a bit more silent to fit the mood?
NCing is again ab it mad sometimes, especially at parts like 02:51:252 (1) - . You're better off to look through them!
Another thing is, sometimes the jumps are really big, the diff overall is really fun, but try to remove the biggest ones, to fit the spread better!
(And maybe rework 1-2 wavy slider shapes since .. they're sometimes just not wavy XD but most of them are fine, leave them! It's an old map, so why not
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