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yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2013-10-12T06:44:33+00:00

13:46 AliomLoung: 安安^^
13:47 yf_bmp: 安^^
13:47 AliomLoung: 想請你幫我mod圖><
13:47 yf_bmp: link
13:47 AliomLoung: 不知到方不方便!!
13:47 AliomLoung: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/115521
13:48 yf_bmp: OK w
13:48 AliomLoung: thx^^
13:56 yf_bmp: 就IRC说吧
13:59 AliomLoung: p4
13:59 AliomLoung: 好的
13:59 yf_bmp: 总体很好
14:00 AliomLoung: 謝謝><
14:00 yf_bmp: 有些细节上的问题(大多是影响图的美观度的
14:00 AliomLoung: 摁!!
14:01 yf_bmp: 例如blanket 有许多没有包好的
14:01 yf_bmp: 00:01:773 (1,2) - 比如这里
14:01 yf_bmp: 00:02:589 (3,4) - 这种等就不一一指出了
14:01 yf_bmp: 修下这些可以美观很多
14:02 AliomLoung: 好!!
14:02 yf_bmp: 00:18:099 (1) - 缩短1/4
14:02 yf_bmp: 到蓝线就行了
14:04 AliomLoung: 是後面到藍線還是前面到藍線OAO
14:04 yf_bmp: 前面到蓝线
14:04 yf_bmp: 鼓点在哪就放哪
14:05 yf_bmp: 00:27:895 (1) - 这个滑条改下形状吧
14:05 yf_bmp: http://puu.sh/4NZ2f.jpg 我用了这样具体看乃吧><
14:06 AliomLoung: 好^^
14:06 yf_bmp: 00:35:650 (5) - 漏了clap
14:07 AliomLoung: 以加!
14:07 yf_bmp: 01:00:548 (4,5,6) - 感觉这个不太适合hard(有些影响读图)
14:10 yf_bmp: http://puu.sh/4NZ8b.jpg 我改成这样了,具体还是看乃了
14:11 yf_bmp: 01:23:507 (2,5) - 对于hard稍难可以再近点
14:13 yf_bmp: 01:16:875 (4) - http://puu.sh/4NZdw.jpg 可以考虑下这样
14:13 yf_bmp: 01:20:140 (4) - ^
14:14 yf_bmp: 01:27:283 (6) - 去掉折返结束就可以了
14:14 AliomLoung: 好!!
14:15 yf_bmp: Normal
14:15 yf_bmp: 00:16:466 (3,4) - 4可以复制3下然后对称下美观些
14:16 yf_bmp: 00:58:915 (3,4) - 没平行
14:16 yf_bmp: 01:00:548 (1,2) - 还是对称下?
14:17 AliomLoung: 好
14:17 AliomLoung: 看來我眼睛不好
14:17 AliomLoung: 有時候都會認為成對稱xd
14:17 yf_bmp: XD
14:18 yf_bmp: 01:08:711 (1,3) - 叠在一起不好看
14:18 yf_bmp: http://puu.sh/4NZlp.jpg 参考这样还可以做得更好
14:20 AliomLoung: 感覺這邊到還好!!
14:20 AliomLoung: 2個疊在易起返回的剛好包
14:20 AliomLoung: 那個01:00:548 (1) -
14:20 AliomLoung: 啊複製錯
14:20 AliomLoung: 01:09:936 (2) -
14:20 yf_bmp: 看乃了如果自己觉得更好的话w
14:21 AliomLoung: 摁^^
14:21 yf_bmp: easy
14:21 AliomLoung: 我以為nomal會有比較多問題xd
14:22 yf_bmp: 01:25:446 (1) - 到蓝线就行了
14:22 yf_bmp: [普通问题不多
14:22 yf_bmp: 但是三个难度都要注意的是blanket
14:22 yf_bmp: note和滑条之间的关系处理好可以更加舒服
14:23 yf_bmp: 暂时这些了
14:23 AliomLoung: 摁
14:23 yf_bmp: insane我会贴到帖子里
14:23 AliomLoung: 好的
14:23 AliomLoung: 感謝 ^^
14:24 yf_bmp: 不用^^
14:24 AliomLoung: OFF不知道是用1800好還是1773..
14:25 yf_bmp: 我这里觉得是1788
14:26 yf_bmp: 打错..
14:26 yf_bmp: 1798
14:27 AliomLoung: 摁!
14:28 AliomLoung: 01:25:446 (1) - 這顆到藍線是?
14:29 AliomLoung: 01:25:446 (1) - 到01:25:344 (1) -
14:29 AliomLoung: 還是
14:29 AliomLoung: ...
14:29 yf_bmp: 01:27:392
14:29 AliomLoung: 1.25.344 到 1.27.484
14:29 yf_bmp: 01:27:392
14:30 AliomLoung: 好了^^

Mod for Insane

Red: Be unrankable
Blue: Be important
Black: Suggestions

[Insane]
00:03:430 (6) - note触碰血条是禁止的
01:24:042 (2) - note触碰血条是禁止的
00:12:818 (6,3) - stack
00:33:634 (8) - NC
00:33:634 (8) - 建议成弧度目前这样略难看
00:58:532 (5,6) - 建议稍微离得近些不然很影响读图
01:08:532 (5) - 上去一格

GOOD LUCK~

ZX123456

57 posts

Joined September 2010

ZX123456 2013-10-12T09:30:52+00:00

[Insane]
00:03:430 (6) - note触碰血条是禁止的

已修改
01:24:042 (2) - note触碰血条是禁止的

已修改
00:12:818 (6,3) - stack

已修改
00:33:634 (8) - NC

已修改
00:33:634 (8) - 建议成弧度目前这样略难看

這.. 改成這樣不知道好不好

00:58:532 (5,6) - 建议稍微离得近些不然很影响读图

已修改
01:08:532 (5) - 上去一格[/box]

沒發現那裡沒對好.. 已修改

GOOD LUCK~[/quote]

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2013-10-13T11:31:46+00:00

[General]
在图的信息界面说清楚gd都是谁做的，并把他们的id加进tag里

[ZX's Rori]
00:03:420 (6) - 不适合的间距，容易读图失误,链接到7的时候容易miss
00:46:277 (1) - 这么放不是很好，间距得控制好，虽然读图来说不难读，但打起来会有些不爽
01:12:604 (4) - 间距太大了,后面几个梗都是间距太大了

排版比较简洁，但flow不合格，死板的地方是走向方面，都是横竖走向这样打起来太没意思了点...

[Hard]
00:02:793 漏了个这么重的音...打击感会下降很多的
00:18:201 (1) - 移动到前面的大白线开始

[Normal]
00:30:752 (1,2,4,5) - 换成1/2的滑条？
01:26:670 (3) - 滑条头加Finish?

[Easy]
00:31:160 (1,3) - 感觉不太好看

[Other]
没了,goodluck

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2013-10-13T13:31:28+00:00

lkx_Shore wrote:
[General]
在图的信息界面说清楚gd都是谁做的，并把他们的id加进tag里以補上^^

[Hard]
00:02:793 漏了个这么重的音...打击感会下降很多的 fixed
00:18:201 (1) - 移动到前面的大白线开始 fixed

[Normal]
00:30:752 (1,2,4,5) - 换成1/2的滑条？ fixed^^
01:26:670 (3) - 滑条头加Finish? 以加^^

[Easy]
00:31:160 (1,3) - 感觉不太好看 fixed^^

[Other]
没了,goodluck

Thank you ^^

Foreverends

992 posts

Joined July 2011

Foreverends 2013-10-13T14:15:08+00:00

here we go~

Hard
00:02:589 (3) - 我覺得刪掉它然後用1/1slider代替比較配合到vocal

I mean...

00:03:405 (5) - NC一下?
00:06:670 (5) - 這條slider的尾怎麼紅點了,感覺不夠好看請重扭一下><
00:07:283 (6,7) - 因00:07:487 (7) - 這條1/1slider聽上去糊弄不過bgm的三下finish似的重音,建議換一下rhythm

建議rhythm

00:12:793 (5,6,7,8) - 這段我聽得有點不太舒服(可能是三連音的關係..)

建議rhythm

00:27:895 (1) - 放在7的下面吧(x:372 y:392)~
00:33:609 (7) - 折返多一下
00:57:283 (1,2,3) - 刪掉00:57:691 (2) - ,放一條2/1slider在00:57:589 - 試試
01:00:548 (4,5,6,7) - 我建議可以用ds2.0去放,分開一點更好的說

渣mod抱歉><
可整體很不錯~~~
繼續加油啊;D

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-10-13T14:34:06+00:00

offset 147
bpm 147
绿线……反正本来就没对准……
00:01:780 - preview time._. 靠前有各种好处
想做个GD._.

EnakoRin

EnakoRin 2013-10-13T15:50:05+00:00

你好

[General]

瑪德mod到一半當機了……全部得重來

[Easy]

00:11:568 (1) - 沒有完全的blanket好，slider的上端偏右
00:39:324 (3) - 複製00:37:691 (1) - 吧，既然是兩個slider組成一個圓
00:42:589 (2) - 不推薦在最簡單的難度里使用多餘1個的repeat，去掉一個吧
01:16:058 (2) - 需要加音量較小的finish
01:19:324 (2) - 需要加音量較小的finish
01:27:487 - 標識kiai起始和結束的時間線必須放在note上，所以移動到01:27:385 - 吧

[Normal]

00:35:242 (2,3) - 沒有垂直對齊
01:10:344 (3) - 移動到(93,262)
01:27:487 - 標識kiai起始和結束的時間線必須放在note上，所以移動到01:27:385 - 吧

[Hard]

00:26:875 (5,1) - 沒有重疊好
00:54:834 (4,1) - 沒有重疊好
01:27:487 - 標識kiai起始和結束的時間線必須放在note上，所以移動到01:27:385 - 吧

[ZX's Rori]

offset和其他難度不一樣，修改后記得移動Kiai線
標題應該是Loli？
01:01:481 (4,1) - 這裡最好不要有重疊
01:27:474 - 標識kiai起始和結束的時間線必須放在note上，所以移動到01:27:385 - 吧
這個難度的部份左右跳有點過大，比如01:03:828 (5,6) - 這裡……這樣會導致這個難度和上一個難度間的跨度加大

不錯的圖，射個星星，祝早日rank
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EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren

Spring Roll

230 posts

Joined April 2013

Spring Roll 2013-10-14T08:14:23+00:00

Hello,mod from game PM

[Easy]
00:41:772 (1) - ._.感觉有点畸形
00:58:507 - clap
00:45:242 (1) - 感觉这个转盘好像没什么必要而且对于easy来说有点快了。00:44:221 (3) - 这个多折返一次然后后面加个滑条什么的（另外我自己是很不喜欢折返两次的滑条的，只有在高难度里放在连打之间用来休息什么的才会用）
00:56:875 (2,3) - 可以包的更好一点（/.\不要说我挑刺）
01:15:242 - 我感觉kiai在这里就可以结束了（或者在这里放个很短的新的kiai用来喷烟花ww）

[Normal]
00:09:528 (2,3) - 平行
00:58:303 (2) - 其实这边跟歌词也不是这样的，第一个音是在00:58:201 - 这里的..可以考虑改一下节奏，现在的比较别扭
01:08:711 (1,3) - 这两个滑条最好别重叠，1转一下
kiai的建议同上，后面不重复了

[Hard]
00:14:221 (8) - 折返
00:49:936 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:30:344 (6) - Ctrl+G
00:33:609 (7) - 漏音了，还是多折返一次，然后把滑条尾放到00:34:426 (1) - 头部附近这样比较好

[ZX's Rori]
就如上面所说offset不一样
00:18:114 (1) - 转盘在这里结束试试00:19:747 -
00:34:339 (8,1) - 间距
01:25:053 (1) - 转盘在这里结束试试01:26:685 -
00:44:236 - 排列改一改会更顺手

我是图

恩就这么多了，加油~

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2013-10-14T16:23:31+00:00

Foreverends wrote:
here we go~

Hard
00:02:589 (3) - 我覺得刪掉它然後用1/1slider代替比較配合到vocal
I mean...
fixed
00:03:405 (5) - NC一下? fixed
00:06:670 (5) - 這條slider的尾怎麼紅點了,感覺不夠好看請重扭一下>< fixed
00:07:283 (6,7) - 因00:07:487 (7) - 這條1/1slider聽上去糊弄不過bgm的三下finish似的重音,建議換一下rhythm
建議rhythm
fixed
00:12:793 (5,6,7,8) - 這段我聽得有點不太舒服(可能是三連音的關係..)
建議rhythm
這個地方還再考慮><
00:27:895 (1) - 放在7的下面吧(x:372 y:392)~ fixed
00:33:609 (7) - 折返多一下 fixed
00:57:283 (1,2,3) - 刪掉00:57:691 (2) - ,放一條2/1slider在00:57:589 - 試試 fixed
01:00:548 (4,5,6,7) - 我建議可以用ds2.0去放,分開一點更好的說
fixed

渣mod抱歉><
可整體很不錯~~~
繼續加油啊;D

Thank you ^^

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2013-10-14T16:25:56+00:00

EnakoRin wrote:
你好
[General]
瑪德mod到一半當機了……全部得重來
QQ

[Easy]
00:11:568 (1) - 沒有完全的blanket好，slider的上端偏右 fixed
00:39:324 (3) - 複製00:37:691 (1) - 吧，既然是兩個slider組成一個圓 fixed
00:42:589 (2) - 不推薦在最簡單的難度里使用多餘1個的repeat，去掉一個吧 fixed
01:16:058 (2) - 需要加音量較小的finish fixed
01:19:324 (2) - 需要加音量較小的finish fixed
01:27:487 - 標識kiai起始和結束的時間線必須放在note上，所以移動到01:27:385 - 吧
fixed

[Normal]
00:35:242 (2,3) - 沒有垂直對齊 fixed
01:10:344 (3) - 移動到(93,262) fixed
01:27:487 - 標識kiai起始和結束的時間線必須放在note上，所以移動到01:27:385 - 吧
fixed

[Hard]
00:26:875 (5,1) - 沒有重疊好 fixed
00:54:834 (4,1) - 沒有重疊好 fixed
01:27:487 - 標識kiai起始和結束的時間線必須放在note上，所以移動到01:27:385 - 吧
fixed

不錯的圖，射個星星，祝早日rank
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EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren

Thank you ^^

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2013-10-14T16:29:42+00:00

Spring Roll wrote:
Hello,mod from game PM

[Easy]
00:41:772 (1) - ._.感觉有点畸形 fixed
00:58:507 - clap fixed
00:45:242 (1) - 感觉这个转盘好像没什么必要而且对于easy来说有点快了。00:44:221 (3) - 这个多折返一次然后后面加个滑条什么的（另外我自己是很不喜欢折返两次的滑条的，只有在高难度里放在连打之间用来休息什么的才会用） fixed
00:56:875 (2,3) - 可以包的更好一点（/.\不要说我挑刺） fixed
01:15:242 - 我感觉kiai在这里就可以结束了（或者在这里放个很短的新的kiai用来喷烟花ww）其實這邊不太會用所以就讓他在01:15:242 - 結束!!

[Normal]
00:09:528 (2,3) - 平行 fixed
00:58:303 (2) - 其实这边跟歌词也不是这样的，第一个音是在00:58:201 - 这里的..可以考虑改一下节奏，现在的比较别扭這邊我怎麼聽都絕得是從00:58:303 (2) - 開始!!所以不改><
01:08:711 (1,3) - 这两个滑条最好别重叠，1转一下 fixed
kiai的建议同上，后面不重复了 fixed

[Hard]
00:14:221 (8) - 折返 fixed
00:49:936 (1) - Ctrl+G fixed
00:30:344 (6) - Ctrl+G fixed
00:33:609 (7) - 漏音了，还是多折返一次，然后把滑条尾放到00:34:426 (1) - 头部附近这样比较好 fixed

恩就这么多了，加油~

Thank you ^^

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,723 posts

Joined July 2010

fanzhen0019 2013-10-15T15:44:01+00:00

irc mod OvO
star!

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-16T02:45:24+00:00

From your request

[General]

哎哟我勒个去GD的offset和你的不一样啊？ offset建议用1773，也就是GD的offset，那个更准一点。
blanket请包好一点至少……mod里面只挑了一点，还有点懒得一一指出了

[Easy]

00:18:524 (1) - spin结尾不变，从00:18:218 - 开始
00:47:504 (2,3,2,3,2,3) - 这里节奏放缓一点啊别搞得和个normal一样
01:05:055 (4,1) - 没包好

[Normal]

00:40:973 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看
01:14:034 (3) - 没包好

[Hard]

00:23:218 (6,7) - 不好看也没包好
00:27:912 (1) - 咦没看出来这里为啥这么摆的滑条也不合flow
00:46:687 (1,2) - 没包好，后面还有很多啊

[ZX's Rori]

吐槽下应该是Loli么。。。
00:54:017 (3,5) - 对称放吧
对称流摸不出啥太多的东西，不过对称排的太死板而且间距设置不是特别合理

Hope Helps.

sjoy

1,023 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2013-10-16T06:37:41+00:00

[Hard]
可以加点WIS在重音的地方比如
00:02:606 (3) - 头
00:04:238 (2) - 头
01:03:830 (5) - ctrl+g?
01:15:667 (2) - ^
01:23:524 (2,5) - 不建议OVERMAP
[Rori]
00:07:487 (4) - 注意DS 试试20，248
00:34:426 (1) - 摆近点 268 28？
其实摸不出什么没什么问题
感觉就是跳跃太直线化建议多点椭圆跳跃会更加平滑
音效多用点WHIS 可以更加饱满

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2013-10-16T08:04:38+00:00

Minakami Yuki mod

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From your request

[General]
哎哟我勒个去GD的offset和你的不一样啊？ offset建议用1773，也就是GD的offset，那个更准一点。
blanket请包好一点至少……mod里面只挑了一点，还有点懒得一一指出了

[Easy]
00:18:524 (1) - spin结尾不变，从00:18:218 - 开始 fixed
00:47:504 (2,3,2,3,2,3) - 这里节奏放缓一点啊别搞得和个normal一样不絕得會很快>< 所以不改
01:05:055 (4,1) - 没包好fixed

[Normal]
00:40:973 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看 fixed
01:14:034 (3) - 没包好fixed

[Hard]
00:23:218 (6,7) - 不好看也没包好 fixed
00:27:912 (1) - 咦没看出来这里为啥这么摆的滑条也不合flow fixed
00:46:687 (1,2) - 没包好，后面还有很多啊 fixed後面有些沒包好的都有改過了^^

Hope Helps.
Thank you ^^

sjoy mod

[quote="sjoy"][Hard]
可以加点WIS在重音的地方比如
00:02:606 (3) - 头以加
00:04:238 (2) - 头以加
01:03:830 (5) - ctrl+g? ok
01:15:667 (2) - ^ 不改><
01:23:524 (2,5) - 不建议OVERMAP QQ
Thank you ^^

Azails

84 posts

Joined October 2012

Azails 2013-10-16T08:44:38+00:00

Hi :3 mod from your PM

[General]

combo colours略花了點，可以考慮用4色或3色
善用approachcircle可以把blanket做得更好
修改Letterbox during breaks
offset不一致

[Easy]

00:16:483 (3) - blanket不完整，後面是spin你可以放心圍的更美觀
01:15:259 (1,2,3) - 雖說是easy diff，但用同樣的排法還是會給人感覺有些馬虎，建議可以放對稱之類的

[Normal]

00:06:687 (3) - 這是要對稱嗎? 稍微偏了些
00:09:545 (2) - spacing有誤差
00:45:259 (1) - normal來說的話這spin略短了點，可以考慮map它

[Hard]

01:02:198 (1) - slider尾巴遮擋，建議排出來
01:03:830 (1) - blanket不完整
許多在slider尾巴後重疊的note有偏差，雖然不是很重要，但想要更精確美觀的話還是建議校正它

[ZX's Rori]

00:01:733 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 實在過於凌亂了，對稱美學沒在這用上;w;?
00:35:242 (3) - 建議排出來，殘影把它整個遮擋了
01:04:119 (6) - 為何突然出現這麼奇葩的spacing，十分嚇人
01:12:283 (3) - ^
這diff給人感覺僵硬了些，過多的直線跳點，slider再下點功夫會改善很多的

大致這些 good luck,有什麼問題在pm我

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2013-10-16T09:46:15+00:00

Hi，麻波魚，In-game mod req。

拉的人還蠻多的，你應該是交際花?

[General]

Easy跟Normal的kiai time怎不一樣?

怎麼GD的offset也其他不一致?

覺得還可以弄1~2個自定義音效。

[Easy] OD+1

建議搬動一些finish的聲音個人不喜歡太多的f
聽得很刺耳 f都是用在重音跟高潮時用，注意鼓聲都被蓋掉。

00:14:851 (1) - 丟到X:192 Y:84呈弧形
00:21:381 (1,3) - 像這兩個我會把前面都換whistle，很多動漫歌都以whistle做節拍音效可試試
00:24:647 (1,2) - ^
00:23:014 (3) - 不好看可以跟4呈弧形
00:27:912 (1) - 為何靠在前面00:26:279 (2)的頭? 可以放在2的尾端呈弧形，現在這樣不美觀。(自參考這也可以不用)

[Normal]

00:09:545 (2) - 沒包好，因為尾端特別開。你可以關掉間距自己放。
00:29:341 (3,4) - whistle
00:35:871 (3,4) - ^
00:37:708 (2) - 包好
01:05:463 (1,2,3) - 內部圈可呈三角左上歪掉
01:13:218 (2) - 包好
01:14:034 (3) - 包好這個滑條不是很美觀第一個瞄點移到x:464 y:268 調整弧度

[Hard] 有一些還是沒包好我只提出一些。

SPOILER

00:01:790 (1) - 跟Normal差不多的位置最好換一下?
00:06:687 (3) - 滑條頭沒對前面的滑條缺口，這個很難看。
00:06:687 (3) - 可以拉到白線就像這個00:04:238 (2) 後面沒音不也拉到白線?
00:12:606 (4) - 不呈三角?
00:12:810 (5,7) - 建議是改短滑條
00:15:667 (2) - x:292 y:344 better flow
00:18:116 (9) - 疊到8的長條頭上
00:21:381 (1) - 沒包好
00:23:830 (7) - ^
00:27:708 (7) - ^
00:29:341 (3) - ^
00:29:749 (4) - x:104 y:84 幫你這3個調一下
00:30:157 (5) - x:224 y:16
00:30:361 (6) - x:292 y:52 後面就自己調了
00:31:177 (1,3) - 不要靠一起這邊能等距三角
00:32:606 (4) - 沒包
00:35:463 (4) - 等距三角
00:38:320 (3,4) - 互換
00:55:667 (1) - 沒stack好
00:58:932 (1) - 可以拉遠點做個小跳 x:312 y:144
01:01:483 (7) - 縮到跟前面一樣等長
01:05:871 (2,3) - 1到2還可以 2到3就不太好看..
01:07:096 (4) - 滑條頭做等距三角
01:09:341 (2) - bad stack
01:10:973 (6) - 換到這邊突然歪了顯然沒包好
01:11:994 (2) - 等距三角
01:25:667 (2) - 很歪
01:26:789 (5,6,7) - 可隨間距慢慢變大做個"小"跳

[ZX'Roli] 只說前30秒。可用Ctrl+D來擺多邊形做個梗。00:46:670 (2,3,4,5,6) 和00:48:303 (2,3,4,5,6)這個就很難看。

SPOILER

00:01:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 難以解釋，建議看nymph跟泡泡的圖是怎跳的。
00:04:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
00:08:303 (1,2) - 很扭
00:11:364 (1,2,3) - 連打間距太大會誤判
00:13:507 (2,3,4,5,6) - 沒有規律
00:14:834 (1,2,3,4) - 可以擺平行不要不同角度
00:20:752 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 1.4間距太大難的1.0就可以了
00:21:772 (2) - 可大跳我是會想放在 x:476 y:280 左右位置
00:22:793 (4) - 重音別放滑條尾。 5.6也是。
00:29:324 (4) - ^
00:30:140 (7) - ^

[Other]

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/71426 這是薯片(spboxer3)的文章，有關於做圖快捷鍵，給你參閱。

1.如果有任何修改上的問題，可以 PM 或 In-game 詢問。
2.Good Luck,還有進步空間.
3.~~被搶先..接著我要摸你的圖了~~......Azails

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2013-10-16T12:35:41+00:00

Azails wrote:
Hi :3 mod from your PM

[General]
combo colours略花了點，可以考慮用4色或3色我會考慮看看的
善用approachcircle可以把blanket做得更好好!
修改Letterbox during breaks
offset不一致

[Easy]

00:16:483 (3) - blanket不完整，後面是spin你可以放心圍的更美觀 fixed
01:15:259 (1,2,3) - 雖說是easy diff，但用同樣的排法還是會給人感覺有些馬虎，建議可以放對稱之類的fixed
[Normal]
00:06:687 (3) - 這是要對稱嗎? 稍微偏了些 fixed
00:09:545 (2) - spacing有誤差 fixed
00:45:259 (1) - normal來說的話這spin略短了點，可以考慮map它這邊倒是還好所以不改><
[Hard]
01:02:198 (1) - slider尾巴遮擋，建議排出來 fixed
01:03:830 (1) - blanket不完整 fixed
許多在slider尾巴後重疊的note有偏差，雖然不是很重要，但想要更精確美觀的話還是建議校正它好的^^
大致這些 good luck,有什麼問題在pm我

Thank you ^^

ZX123456

57 posts

Joined September 2010

ZX123456 2013-10-16T13:21:00+00:00

lkx_Shore wrote:
[ZX's Rori]
00:03:420 (6) - 不适合的间距，容易读图失误,链接到7的时候容易miss 不知道這樣算不算改了...
00:46:277 (1) - 这么放不是很好，间距得控制好，虽然读图来说不难读，但打起来会有些不爽是這樣嗎..? 打起來不爽究竟是
01:12:604 (4) - 间距太大了,后面几个梗都是间距太大了修改了...吧

排版比较简洁，但flow不合格，死板的地方是走向方面，都是横竖走向这样打起来太没意思了点...也許是因為我CTB打久了... 水果只有分左右和從上掉落下來

[Other]
没了,goodluck

EnakoRin wrote:
你好
[General]
瑪德mod到一半當機了……全部得重來
[ZX's Rori]
offset和其他難度不一樣，修改后記得移動Kiai線已修改
標題應該是Loli？本來也是在想是Loli還是Rori 然後看到蘿球社的羅馬拼音寫RO-KYU-BU! 所以才用Rori... 已修改
01:01:481 (4,1) - 這裡最好不要有重疊已修改
01:27:474 - 標識kiai起始和結束的時間線必須放在note上，所以移動到01:27:385 - 吧已修改
這個難度的部份左右跳有點過大，比如01:03:828 (5,6) - 這裡……這樣會導致這個難度和上一個難度間的跨度加大
已修改.. 應該算修改了吧

不錯的圖，射個星星，祝早日rank
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EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren

Spring Roll wrote:
Hello,mod from game PM

[ZX's Rori]
就如上面所说offset不一样就如上面所說已修改
00:18:114 (1) - 转盘在这里结束试试00:19:747 - 放到那裡的話.. 轉完後到下個物件之間的時間好短啊
00:34:339 (8,1) - 间距已修改
01:25:053 (1) - 转盘在这里结束试试01:26:685 - 同上方轉盤
00:44:236 - 排列改一改会更顺手已修改
我是图

恩就这么多了，加油~

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From your request

[ZX's Rori]
吐槽下应该是Loli么。。。關於這個吐嘈的解釋請看上方。。。
00:54:017 (3,5) - 对称放吧對稱放了沒放錯的話應該對稱了
对称流摸不出啥太多的东西，不过对称排的太死板而且间距设置不是特别合理間距已修改至於太死板我也沒辦法.. 只能說個性導致嗎

Azails wrote:
Hi :3 mod from your PM

[ZX's Rori]
00:01:733 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 實在過於凌亂了，對稱美學沒在這用上;w;? 話說這行不知為何沒辦法弄成紅色..
00:35:242 (3) - 建議排出來，殘影把它整個遮擋了已修改
01:04:119 (6) - 為何突然出現這麼奇葩的spacing，十分嚇人已修改
01:12:283 (3) - ^ ^
這diff給人感覺僵硬了些，過多的直線跳點，slider再下點功夫會改善很多的
再看到樓下的mod之前有些我想用的快捷鍵我都不知道啊.. 所以slider對稱很難做

大致這些 good luck,有什麼問題在pm我
Hope Helps.

smallboat wrote:
Hi，麻波魚，In-game mod req。

[ZX'Roli] 只說前30秒。可用Ctrl+D來擺多邊形做個梗。00:46:670 (2,3,4,5,6) 和00:48:303 (2,3,4,5,6)這個就很難看。你想說的是Ctrl+Shift+D的功能嗎它的Distance snap不夠我放大.. 求解

SPOILER
00:01:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 難以解釋，建議看nymph跟泡泡的圖是怎跳的。難以解釋嗎.. 我找時間會去看看的
00:04:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ ^
00:08:303 (1,2) - 很扭已修改.. 是這樣嗎
00:11:364 (1,2,3) - 連打間距太大會誤判已修改
00:13:507 (2,3,4,5,6) - 沒有規律因為我沒梗了不過還是改了一下
00:14:834 (1,2,3,4) - 可以擺平行不要不同角度既然能平行我也不要不同角度已修改
00:20:752 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 1.4間距太大難的1.0就可以了已修改
00:21:772 (2) - 可大跳我是會想放在 x:476 y:280 左右位置這邊就不修改了..
00:22:793 (4) - 重音別放滑條尾。 5.6也是。這個也暫時不改.. 重音放滑條尾會有什麼問題嗎求解
00:29:324 (4) - ^ ^
00:30:140 (7) - ^ ^

[Other]

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/71426 這是薯片(spboxer3)的文章，有關於做圖快捷鍵，給你參閱。沒想到有這種好網頁知識已長

1.如果有任何修改上的問題，可以 PM 或 In-game 詢問。
2.Good Luck,還有進步空間.
3.~~被搶先..接著我要摸你的圖了~~......Azails

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2013-10-17T10:47:20+00:00

IRC MOD for Fycho's Insane

SPOILER

18:23 *yf_bmp is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/314149 RO-KYU-BU! - Get goal! (TV Size) [Fycho's Insane]]
18:23 yf_bmp: 现在有空吗?
18:23 Fycho: 有空.
18:23 Fycho: IRC？
18:24 yf_bmp: 嗯
18:25 yf_bmp: 有些blanket是故意的还是没包好
18:25 Fycho: 可以不过尽快
18:25 yf_bmp: 00:58:201 (1,2) - 例如这种之类的
18:26 Fycho: 对了重下
18:26 Fycho: 加了音效
18:26 yf_bmp: 重下过了
18:27 yf_bmp: 00:19:749 (7,1) - ....
18:27 Fycho: 0.0
18:27 Fycho: 这忘记了
18:27 Fycho: 原来00:19:851 (1) - 是1/3 sanp
18:27 Fycho: snap
18:27 Fycho: 所以没来的及改
18:27 yf_bmp: ok
18:28 yf_bmp: 00:34:443 (1) - x:284 y:224?
18:29 yf_bmp: 因为距离突然比较开了虽然sv变了
18:29 yf_bmp: 00:36:075 (1,3) - 有点不好看包好觉得更好
18:30 yf_bmp: 00:45:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 没有overmap?
18:31 yf_bmp: 01:08:728 (1,3) - blanket
18:31 Fycho: 适当的overmap是可以的 It is one of my alternative choice, and I choosed current one
18:32 Fycho: 之前那个284 224
18:32 Fycho: 开玩笑吧那么远
18:32 yf_bmp: 184
18:32 yf_bmp: 打错了...
18:33 Fycho: 突然发现漏音效。
18:34 yf_bmp: 01:27:300 - 加个note?切指最后感觉不错
18:34 Fycho: 什么意思
18:34 Fycho: 强双的？
18:35 yf_bmp: 总的说就是更符合i的难度吧
18:35 Fycho: 00:19:851 (1) -
18:35 Fycho: 和这里一样
18:35 Fycho: 不太想用复杂的节奏
18:36 Fycho: 这个insane是报着十分善良的心做的
18:36 yf_bmp: 那样难是不难的个人感觉打起来更有感觉 0.0
18:37 yf_bmp: 不对这么说乃以前都是没报良心做的I 233
18:38 Fycho: 我没这么说
18:38 yf_bmp: 00:58:932 (1,2) - 1.15x
18:39 Fycho: 好
18:40 yf_bmp: 差不多就这些;w; 还有些blanket不知道乃的想法乃自己看吧
18:40 Fycho: 哪些啊
18:41 Fycho: 例如呢
18:41 yf_bmp: 00:10:769 (2,3) -
18:41 Fycho: 这些根本不是blanket啊
18:41 yf_bmp: 00:27:912 (1,2) -
18:41 Fycho: blanket 这种滑条+note边的
18:41 Fycho: 根本不算
18:41 Fycho: 这些也不是
18:41 yf_bmp: 这种通常我会弄一下因为觉得更好看
18:42 Fycho: 都是无心随意摆的2
18:42 Fycho: 233
18:42 Fycho: 好了
18:42 Fycho: 没了的话就没事了
18:42 yf_bmp: ok

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2013-10-17T15:17:40+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Hi，麻波魚，In-game mod req。

拉的人還蠻多的，你應該是交際花?
安安呀小船^^ 交際花? 當然不是><

[General]

Easy跟Normal的kiai time怎不一樣? 以改^^

怎麼GD的offset也其他不一致?

覺得還可以弄1~2個自定義音效。好的^^

[Easy] OD+1 fixed

建議搬動一些finish的聲音個人不喜歡太多的f
聽得很刺耳 f都是用在重音跟高潮時用，注意鼓聲都被蓋掉。好的我會試看看的^^

00:14:851 (1) - 丟到X:192 Y:84呈弧形 fixed
00:21:381 (1,3) - 像這兩個我會把前面都換whistle，很多動漫歌都以whistle做節拍音效可試試好但是我覺得這邊用finish會比較好所以不改><
00:24:647 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:23:014 (3) - 不好看可以跟4呈弧形覺得還好所以不改
00:27:912 (1) - 為何靠在前面00:26:279 (2)的頭? 可以放在2的尾端呈弧形，現在這樣不美觀。(自參考這也可以不用) 不改

[Normal]

00:09:545 (2) - 沒包好，因為尾端特別開。你可以關掉間距自己放。fixed
00:29:341 (3,4) - whistle fixed
00:35:871 (3,4) - ^ fixed
00:37:708 (2) - 包好 fixed
01:05:463 (1,2,3) - 內部圈可呈三角左上歪掉 fixed
01:13:218 (2) - 包好 fixed
01:14:034 (3) - 包好這個滑條不是很美觀第一個瞄點移到x:464 y:268 調整弧度 fixed

[Hard] 有一些還是沒包好我只提出一些。

SPOILER
00:01:790 (1) - 跟Normal差不多的位置最好換一下? 沒什麼差別OAO 所以不改
00:06:687 (3) - 滑條頭沒對前面的滑條缺口，這個很難看。 fixed
00:06:687 (3) - 可以拉到白線就像這個00:04:238 (2) 後面沒音不也拉到白線? fixed
00:12:606 (4) - 不呈三角? fixed
00:12:810 (5,7) - 建議是改短滑條
00:15:667 (2) - x:292 y:344 better flow 不改
00:18:116 (9) - 疊到8的長條頭上我讓他們成一個三角形
00:21:381 (1) - 沒包好 fixed
00:23:830 (7) - ^ fixed
00:27:708 (7) - ^ fixed
00:29:341 (3) - ^ fixed
00:29:749 (4) - x:104 y:84 幫你這3個調一下 fixed
00:30:157 (5) - x:224 y:16 fixed
00:30:361 (6) - x:292 y:52 後面就自己調了 fixed 好的^^
00:31:177 (1,3) - 不要靠一起這邊能等距三角 fixed
00:32:606 (4) - 沒包 fixed
00:35:463 (4) - 等距三角 fixed
00:38:320 (3,4) - 互換 fixed
00:55:667 (1) - 沒stack好 fixed
00:58:932 (1) - 可以拉遠點做個小跳 x:312 y:144
01:01:483 (7) - 縮到跟前面一樣等長 fixed
01:05:871 (2,3) - 1到2還可以 2到3就不太好看.. fixed
01:07:096 (4) - 滑條頭做等距三角 fixed
01:09:341 (2) - bad stack fixed
01:10:973 (6) - 換到這邊突然歪了顯然沒包好 fixed
01:11:994 (2) - 等距三角 fixed
01:25:667 (2) - 很歪 fixed
01:26:789 (5,6,7) - 可隨間距慢慢變大做個"小"跳好的^^

[Other]

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/71426 這是薯片(spboxer3)的文章，有關於做圖快捷鍵，給你參閱。

1.如果有任何修改上的問題，可以 PM 或 In-game 詢問。
2.Good Luck,還有進步空間.
3.~~被搶先..接著我要摸你的圖了~~......Azails

Thank you ^^

Spring Roll

230 posts

Joined April 2013

Spring Roll 2013-10-18T10:36:01+00:00

来看下fycho的GD。。

00:39:341 (1,2) - 感觉不是很好看
00:27:504 (4,5) - 这俩ctrl+g了坑人效果更佳
00:48:320 (3,4) - 不是很顺手，可以把4放在3左上角然后ctrl+g

我是图

01:10:361 (1,2) - 这算overlap么？

美丽
Fycho神麻婆

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2013-10-18T10:46:20+00:00

from ur req

General

总体音效感觉偏轻，主要是finish都完全被音乐盖过，在低难度显得尤为明显，似乎对打图的节奏把握稍有影响

Fycho's Insane

tag有乱码处理一下
由于从头到尾都是random ds所以我就随便挑几个

00:30:769 (5,6) - 换一下顺手
01:22:606 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这片感觉有点怪，56换一下再重新摆一下感觉好一点

你还是人吗233

Hard

00:57:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这串搞个其他形状吧，直接用矩形感觉很突兀
01:00:565 (4) - nc

像01:13:218 (5,6) - 还有01:15:667 (2,3) - 这种其实感觉都可以blanket，也不知道你想不想改，虽然不是什么大问题。如果想改的话建议从头到尾都看一遍，很多。
挺好的

Normal

01:20:157 (5) - ctrl+g？

blanket的问题和hard类似，还有00:41:789 (2,3) - 这种被强迫症看到就。。。
还有00:29:341 (3,4) - 的红线note在normal里虽然不是不可以，个人推荐是并成滑条，不过不改也无大碍
其他没啥

Easy

实在摸不出什么。。。

你们都做tv size。。。

good luck

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2013-10-18T11:47:48+00:00

[General]
hi

[Fycho's Insane]

00:12:810 (4) - 往右上移几格然后调整00:13:014 (5) - ，打起来会好点
00:14:443 (4) - Remove然后把00:14:034 (3) - 改折返，这样打起来好多了
00:18:320 (2) - 换成两个单点吧，红线滑条感觉比较勉强
00:19:647 (6) - 没音就别下note了，这样改吧http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1044285
00:40:361 (4) - clap?
01:05:259 (6,1) - 我觉得从6跳到1破坏了这一段整体的感觉...
01:23:218 (6,1) - 这跳太勉强了点

[Other]
ZX那diff...比起被删我还是希望看到他短期质量飞跃...虽然这太难了

Jycool

397 posts

Joined April 2012

Jycool 2013-10-18T12:15:45+00:00

[Hard]
00:03:218 (4) - 去掉note
[Insane]
00:14:443 (4) - 换成两个note
00:19:851 (1) - 最好放个跳
00:33:677 - 加note
00:57:300 (1) - 换成两个note

thats all

Azails

84 posts

Joined October 2012

Azails 2013-10-18T15:43:35+00:00

收到req
mod for fycho gd

[Insane]

00:36:075 (1) - 圍著3會好看點
00:38:524 (3) - 加大點弧度?
00:45:055 (1,2,3,4) - 和 00:44:443 (2) 呈正五角?
01:07:096 (1,2) - overlap?

flow整體挺美觀的,沒什麼大問題

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2013-10-18T15:51:52+00:00

[Fycho]
00:19:341 (5) - http://puu.sh/4T8bT.jpg
00:22:606 (5) - ctrl+g
00:45:871 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/4T85K.jpg
01:23:014 (5) - 268 100
01:26:687 - 為何這裡突然變小聲:3

[Hard]
00:16:892 - 00:17:708 - clap?
00:27:912 (1,2) - 能的話做個對稱?
00:33:626 (7) - 整個加whistle 然後調小聲
01:01:177 (6,7) - 6跟7的位置掉換?
01:13:626 (6) - 包好5
01:16:075 (3) - 包好1
01:19:341 (3) - 我認為這5連出現在這裡有點不適合
01:21:585 - +note
01:24:647 - clap
01:26:279 - ^

[Normal]
00:13:218 (3) - 可以包一包2
00:40:565 - clap,這裡應該沒finish音
01:25:463 - tick
01:27:096 - ^
01:26:279 (2) - clap

[Easy]
00:16:483 (3) - tick
00:18:218 (1) - 在00:18:320 - 開始

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2013-10-19T09:05:45+00:00

Hollow Wings Mod

Hollow Wings wrote:
from ur req
General
总体音效感觉偏轻，主要是finish都完全被音乐盖过，在低难度显得尤为明显，似乎对打图的节奏把握稍有影响

Hard
00:57:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这串搞个其他形状吧，直接用矩形感觉很突兀 fixed
01:00:565 (4) - nc fixed

像01:13:218 (5,6) - 还有01:15:667 (2,3) - 这种其实感觉都可以blanket，也不知道你想不想改，虽然不是什么大问题。如果想改的话建议从头到尾都看一遍，很多。 fixed 好的!
挺好的
Normal
01:20:157 (5) - ctrl+g？fixed

blanket的问题和hard类似，还有00:41:789 (2,3) - 这种被强迫症看到就。。。 fixed
还有00:29:341 (3,4) - 的红线note在normal里虽然不是不可以，个人推荐是并成滑条，不过不改也无大碍
其他没啥
Easy
实在摸不出什么。。。
你们都做tv size。。。
good luck

Thank you ^^

jyc-Binggan Mod

jyc-Binggan wrote:
[Hard]
00:03:218 (4) - 去掉note 去掉的話感覺怪怪的所以不改><

thats all

Thank you ^^

Kawaiwkyik Mod

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[Hard]
00:16:892 - 00:17:708 - clap? fixed
00:27:912 (1,2) - 能的話做個對稱? fixed
00:33:626 (7) - 整個加whistle 然後調小聲 fixed
01:01:177 (6,7) - 6跟7的位置掉換? fixed
01:13:626 (6) - 包好5 fixed
01:16:075 (3) - 包好1 fixed
01:19:341 (3) - 我認為這5連出現在這裡有點不適合以改^^
01:21:585 - +note 以加
01:24:647 - clap fixed
01:26:279 - ^ fixed

[Normal]
00:13:218 (3) - 可以包一包2 fixed
00:40:565 - clap,這裡應該沒finish音 fixed
01:25:463 - tick fixed
01:27:096 - ^ fixed
01:26:279 (2) - clap fixed

[Easy]
00:16:483 (3) - tick fixed
00:18:218 (1) - 在00:18:320 - 開始 fixed

Thank you ^^

ZX123456

57 posts

Joined September 2010

ZX123456 2013-10-19T09:07:50+00:00

lkx_Shore wrote:
[General]
hi

[Other]
ZX那diff...比起被删我还是希望看到他短期质量飞跃...虽然这太难了

被刪了也不能怪我啊... 雖然想短期質量飛躍本身也很難做到

Kinomi

1,220 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2013-10-19T16:48:17+00:00

As your req

头像大图是啥，kantoku这张图好似没见过，还是截了以后我认不出来了

音效懒看了

Fycho's Insane
蓝线的单点太多了，请你吃屎屎，eatv
像刚开始，BGM有你跟的那个重的鼓声，还有个很有节奏的轻的鼓声，你可以考虑两个同时压
00:19:647 (6) - 鉴于后面有个叮的声音你可以改成一个1/4滑条
00:27:300这不对啊这里不该空，做一个三连或者炫酷一点1/4slider 跳note

SPOILER

00:33:218 (2) - 我跟你书，类似这种梗，这个note改成1/4滑条打起来超爽
00:33:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这什么东西

SPOILER

00:45:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这串形状怎么前后两样，要么前面四个也排排直，要么后面四个弄参差
01:08:728 (1,2,3,4) - 这边的滑条尾压重音不太好，考虑改一下
01:14:749 漏音这边的节奏我建议你重新组织一下，这个二连音可以有不错的梗
01:18:116 (5) - 个人不太喜欢滑条后面接一个1/4stack
01:26:687 (1,2,3,4) - 有些可以这么处理，2和3，3和4 之间间距适当大一点，你感受一下
其他地方也可以这么改

SPOILER

01:26:585然后你这边漏了
我举得这图做的不太好
感觉fycho酱做的时候不太用心啊

Hard
首先说一下，这歌基本vocal是重音，白线也是重音，vocal在白线，是和重音重合的，所以你滑条尾压重音还是vocal的结尾单词完全不舒服
节奏不是塞满就好，要仔细考虑怎么跟才能兼顾到多个音轨
一开始这段你几个重音，有一个被滑条身体压了，有一个被滑条尾压了，不好，建议重新组织一下节奏
00:02:606 (3,4) - 这没包好，做blanket的时候关掉grid snap修
00:04:238 (2,4) - 这两个是可以blanket的，做blanket的时候不能只考虑相邻时间点的物件，前后的几个都要看看
00:12:606 (4) - 这个你注意一下，不仅spacing破坏了，还离前面那滑条很近，很难看
00:14:238 (8) - 这不对，这有个二连
00:16:279这边漏音后面三连白线起也很蛋疼，白线起没有三连音，不要白线起三连，尽量红线起，有三连音，也要慎用
00:22:198 (3) - 你仔细放慢歌听，这个滑条，可以拆一个单点出来的，因为vocal 有yi zu两个音，什么日语是这么念的么。。
00:26:892 (5,6) - 毫无道理，而且后面那个尾巴还压了重音
00:41:789 (3,4,5) - 这三个尾部贴那么紧不好看
00:59:545 (2) - 感觉错位了？后面明显还有叽咕叽咕的声音
01:02:198 (1,2,3) - 这么长的横平竖直。。尽量避免
节奏问题挺大，blanket也基本没修好

Normal
00:31:177 (2,3) - 没包好
大致扫了一遍感觉没什么大问题

Easy
这diff物件之间的间距有点小，打图的时候不好看
我也是因为这个之前被说了
考虑增大一点
00:47:504 (2,3) - easy不要叠
01:03:830 (3,1) - 这两个碰边了，这种无意义的遮挡，要避免
也没什么大问题，就是可能要重新排一下，增大一点间距。

hard问题比较大，要好好弄
就那么多了
good luck

Tsumetaku

732 posts

Joined May 2012

Tsumetaku 2013-10-19T18:09:55+00:00

yo 來騙KD啦啦啦啦

20:13 AliomLoung: 安安!!
20:23 Tsumetaku: HIHI~~
20:23 Tsumetaku: 剛剛才回來w
20:23 AliomLoung: 摁!!
20:23 AliomLoung: 那個我想請你幫我MOD圖><
20:23 AliomLoung: 不知道方不方便!!
20:23 Tsumetaku: =3= 有點想睡不過好吧
20:23 Tsumetaku: np一下
20:24 AliomLoung: THX^^
20:24 *AliomLoung is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/298524 RO-KYU-BU! - Get goal! (TV Size)]
20:24 Tsumetaku: 網速再次悲劇-x-
20:25 AliomLoung: QQ
20:27 Tsumetaku: 耶好了
20:28 AliomLoung: ^^
20:28 Tsumetaku: wa有Fycho神的I
20:28 Tsumetaku: (怒不看
20:28 Tsumetaku: xDD
20:28 AliomLoung: 不要啦
20:28 AliomLoung: XD
20:28 Tsumetaku: 好吧=3=
20:29 Tsumetaku: 看一下General
20:29 Tsumetaku: 對了IRC ok吧
20:29 AliomLoung: 可以
20:30 Tsumetaku: 豪窩
20:30 *Tsumetaku is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/298524 RO-KYU-BU! - Get goal! (TV Size) [Easy]]
20:31 Tsumetaku: 00:23:014 (3) - 這邊的Finish應該不需要
20:31 Tsumetaku: 沒有背景陰
20:31 Tsumetaku: *音
20:31 AliomLoung: 那如果交WHIS呢
20:32 AliomLoung: 加
20:32 Tsumetaku: ok阿有規則到
20:32 AliomLoung: 摁!!
20:33 AliomLoung: 00:29:545 - 那這邊!!?
20:33 Tsumetaku:

忘了講一樣加W吧
20:34 Tsumetaku: 後面的Finish也都換W吧
20:34 AliomLoung:

20:34 Tsumetaku: 不對是說第二個
20:34 Tsumetaku: Kiai的到是沒什麼關係就別減了
20:35 AliomLoung: 什麼第2個OAO
20:35 AliomLoung: 00:36:075 (3) - ?
20:35 Tsumetaku: 就像你會在Finish後面加第二個
20:35 Tsumetaku: 摁摁
20:35 AliomLoung: 其實都在大白縣+FIN說:D
20:35 AliomLoung: 線*
20:36 Tsumetaku: Finish不能overuse owo
20:36 AliomLoung: 摁QQ
20:36 Tsumetaku: 00:57:300 (3) - Ctrl+G?
20:37 AliomLoung: 好
20:38 Tsumetaku: 01:10:361 (3) - 這以後都選起來往上移兩格?ww (nazi
20:39 AliomLoung: 01:11:585 (4) - 要對齊的話這個也要了!!
20:40 Tsumetaku: 摁摁w
20:40 AliomLoung: 都好了
20:40 Tsumetaku: 01:11:994 (1) - 然後這個雖然是沒什麼關係不過2個Reverse有些人會挑
20:41 AliomLoung: 倒是!!QQ
20:41 AliomLoung: 不懂為何這個....這樣不能..
20:41 Tsumetaku: xD 新手會不知道要轉幾次
20:41 Tsumetaku: 倪可以DT看看
20:42 AliomLoung: 事實上..
20:42 AliomLoung: 我最多也只能打這個難度..
20:42 Tsumetaku: ........
20:42 Tsumetaku: 對不起'' (?
20:43 AliomLoung: 真的不會打OSUQQ
20:43 Tsumetaku: 難怪你水果這麼強;w;(偷看
20:43 AliomLoung:

20:44 AliomLoung: 這邊的話我再考慮一下
20:44 Tsumetaku: 摁摁
20:44 AliomLoung: 抱歉我上個廁所
20:44 Tsumetaku: 豪
20:45 AliomLoung: 好了
20:45 Tsumetaku: =ˇ=
20:45 Tsumetaku: 還有一個倪在Song Setup裡面的Design Letterbox可以取消
20:46 Tsumetaku: 有SB才要用的
20:46 AliomLoung: 好
20:46 Tsumetaku: 倪要順便跟Fycho講一下喔
20:47 AliomLoung: 幫他改一下上傳就好了OAO?
20:47 Tsumetaku: .c.這樣也可以
20:48 AliomLoung: normal的竟然多一個勾..
20:48 AliomLoung: support...
20:48 Tsumetaku: ...
20:48 Tsumetaku: 真的
20:48 *Tsumetaku is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/298525 RO-KYU-BU! - Get goal! (TV Size) [Normal]]
20:48 Tsumetaku: 好吧來講Normal
20:49 AliomLoung: easy好了?
20:49 Tsumetaku: 摁摁沒什麼問題了
20:49 Tsumetaku: flow都很正常(?
20:49 AliomLoung: ^^
20:49 AliomLoung: FLOW?
20:49 AliomLoung: 排列嗎
20:49 Tsumetaku: 摁摁就像是鼠標移動的流暢度
20:50 AliomLoung: 正常
20:50 Tsumetaku: xD
20:50 Tsumetaku: 00:09:953 (3) - Ctrl+G..?
20:51 AliomLoung: 好
20:51 Tsumetaku: 00:11:585 (1) - 這個可以複製00:13:218 (3) - 轉一轉貼過來
20:52 Tsumetaku: 在泡一泡會比較好吃(大誤
20:52 AliomLoung: 哈哈
20:53 AliomLoung: 好了
20:54 Tsumetaku: 01:19:749 (4) - 往上一格? (世界Nazi
20:54 Tsumetaku: 01:20:973 (6) - 一起移吧
20:54 AliomLoung: 好
20:55 Tsumetaku: 01:20:157 (5,6) - 我覺得這兩個尾巴好像有點掉音... 詭異
20:55 AliomLoung: 咦 ~有嗎...
20:56 Tsumetaku: 音好像是這樣子的..
20:56 Tsumetaku: http://puu.sh/4TSJX.jpg
20:57 AliomLoung: 01:20:769 - 露這地方?
20:57 Tsumetaku: 音好像在藍線上面
20:59 AliomLoung: 摁
20:59 Tsumetaku: 不過好像沒關係反正不是跟背景音...XDD
20:59 AliomLoung: XD
21:00 Tsumetaku: 好了N就醬子
21:00 *Tsumetaku is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/299338 RO-KYU-BU! - Get goal! (TV Size) [Hard]]
21:00 AliomLoung: 對惹
21:00 Tsumetaku: ??
21:00 AliomLoung: 那2個勾要拿掉嗎
21:00 Tsumetaku: 拿吧w
21:01 AliomLoung: 好
21:01 Tsumetaku: 00:01:790 (1) - CtrlG
21:02 AliomLoung: 好
21:02 Tsumetaku: 等等窩打一次看看
21:03 AliomLoung: 摁
21:03 AliomLoung: 其實我一直在要跟音效聲還是人聲...
21:03 AliomLoung: 在想*
21:03 AliomLoung: 我問過幾個打OSU朋友意見
21:03 AliomLoung: 他們說他們打圖幾乎都跟音效聲比較多
21:04 Tsumetaku: 不錯玩:3
21:04 AliomLoung: ^^
21:04 AliomLoung: 感謝試玩
21:04 Tsumetaku: 摁摁是跟音效比較多w
21:04 Tsumetaku: www 感覺可以DT的樣子(???
21:05 Tsumetaku: Vocal如果有12345的音基本上可以只取135
21:05 AliomLoung: 摁[
21:06 Tsumetaku: 00:16:483 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這兩串有點不太對...
21:06 Tsumetaku: 你擺了3連結果沒跟到藍線的Vocal跟鼓聲..
21:06 AliomLoung: 怎麼個不太對OAO
21:06 Tsumetaku: 而且3連聽前輩說大部分都從紅線開始ww
21:06 Tsumetaku: 為了強調白線的音
21:07 AliomLoung: 摁QQ
21:08 Tsumetaku: 00:24:647 (1,4) - 這兩個F也不用~
21:09 Tsumetaku: 然後剛剛聽到那個F感覺Offset有點晚...要不要-10看看?
21:09 AliomLoung: 好
21:09 AliomLoung: OFF不是我測的說!
21:09 AliomLoung: 試FYCHO幫我測的
21:09 Tsumetaku: 哪倪!!!
21:09 Tsumetaku: 那還是-10 -3-
21:09 AliomLoung: XD
21:09 Tsumetaku: 反正他視神麻婆不視神Timing(?
21:10 AliomLoung:

21:10 Tsumetaku: :3
21:10 Tsumetaku: 00:27:912 (1) - 這邊+Finish
21:11 AliomLoung: 诶這邊竟然忘了加
21:11 AliomLoung: 之前改了形狀忘了+..
21:11 AliomLoung: 補上了^^
21:11 Tsumetaku: 030
21:11 Tsumetaku: 00:33:626 (7) -
21:11 Tsumetaku: 這個可以分2個
21:11 Tsumetaku: http://puu.sh/4TTeN.jpg
21:13 AliomLoung: 摁!
21:13 AliomLoung: 對了
21:13 Tsumetaku: ??
21:13 AliomLoung: 那個距離怎麼可以分的這麼開QQ
21:13 AliomLoung: 線與線之間的距離
21:13 AliomLoung: 我的都超近...每次看眼睛都快托窗...
21:13 Tsumetaku: 在時間表旁邊有一個+跟- www
21:13 Tsumetaku: 左邊
21:14 AliomLoung: 找到了謝謝你^^
21:14 Tsumetaku: (´･ω･`)
21:15 AliomLoung:

21:16 Tsumetaku: 00:35:667 (1) - NC~~
21:16 Tsumetaku: 我不喜歡看到10的Comboˊˇˋ
21:17 AliomLoung: 摁
21:20 Tsumetaku: 01:17:708 (5) - 感覺可以這樣 http://puu.sh/4TTxC.jpg
21:22 Tsumetaku: 01:20:973 (7) - 這邊也是~
21:22 AliomLoung: 我試試看
21:26 AliomLoung: 覺得滑條比較好><
21:27 Tsumetaku: 豪窩也可以
21:27 AliomLoung: ^^
21:28 Tsumetaku: 01:19:341 (3,4,5) - 這個5連可以改成3+1+1~ http://puu.sh/4TTHP.jpg
21:28 Tsumetaku: 會比較順手
21:31 AliomLoung: 摁
21:31 AliomLoung: 的確!!
21:31 Tsumetaku: >C<
21:33 AliomLoung: ^^
21:33 Tsumetaku: 01:23:014 (2) - 把這個往前到紅線在本來的紅線上+一個圈圈~
21:35 AliomLoung: 移到紅線聽起來怪怪低
21:35 Tsumetaku: 那就用普通的Slider代替吧w
21:36 AliomLoung: 摁
21:37 Tsumetaku: 01:23:422 (4) - 這邊跟前面一樣..
21:37 Tsumetaku: 不過可以直接跟Vocal http://puu.sh/4TU4U.jpg
21:37 AliomLoung: 好
21:37 Tsumetaku: 01:26:789 (5) - 這邊NC
21:38 AliomLoung: 好
21:38 Tsumetaku: 大概就這樣wwwwww
21:38 AliomLoung: 謝謝你><
21:39 Tsumetaku: 豪窩我會去要KD的(?
21:39 AliomLoung: 摁XD
21:40 Tsumetaku: 晚安(?
21:40 AliomLoung: 晚安XD

~~凌晨PO比較潮~~
II:~~沒想到yomi桑也很潮~~

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2013-10-20T05:03:46+00:00

fix a lot ,thanks for mod;w;
sorry so lazy to reply

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EmingK

341 posts

Joined October 2012

EmingK 2013-10-20T06:14:16+00:00

Hi ._.
~~看到Fycho我就滚进来了~~
as requested

第一张图就做成这样真心不错

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.

Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore

[Fycho]
00:08:932 - note?
00:12:402 (3,1) - 没叠好
00:27:912 (1) - x316 y208 可能会顺一些
00:36:075 (1,3) - 需要好好包一下么XD
00:52:402 (1) - 向左弯吧
00:11:177 (3) - whistle? 这一段怎么只有第一小节有诶

[Hard]
很多地方有blanket的小问题，具体看一下下面这张图，自己检查改一下\w/（其他难度也是就不说了）

SPOILER

用以判断是否包好，除了用收缩圈之外，还有滑条的follow circle等

其实hard的间距可以稍微变一些的，一成不变的话不是很好玩。
00:23:014 (5,6,7) - 这里打起来不顺，如图这种排列则会顺一些（只是大概摆一下实际还要对前后物件进行各种调整或者摆成你自己觉得顺畅的排列也可

SPOILER

00:33:626 (7,1) - 这里间距有点大
00:41:789 (3,4) - （细节）直线上放这么锚点干嘛（虽然不影响什么
00:44:443 (7) - （细节）看一下右上间距(prev:1.20x next:1.18x)说明差一点（平时作图把网格关掉也没什么XD
01:03:830 (5) - Ctrl+g 打起来更顺畅
01:00:565 (1,2) - y坐标不一样诶
00:26:892 (5,6) - 这两个拉条头尾各加个whistle听听

[Normal]
个人不喜欢tick clap
00:01:790 (1,3) - 往右移点能好看一些（注意间距）
01:10:361 (3) - Ctrl+G?
00:46:687 (1) - 距离转盘尾较近的物件接近中心一些比较好

[Easy]
01:16:892 (3) - 这个弯得有点过了
01:20:157 (3) - ^

good luck !

CET 6

365 posts

Joined August 2012

CET 6 2013-10-21T10:55:21+00:00

Hi~ 不怎么会mod图，如有冒犯请见谅

Easy

没什么大问题，但是发现有一些地方刻意的包和重叠显得拥挤像00:26:279 (2,1,2,3,4) - 这里，可以试试不要把他们都刻意绕着00:29:136 (2) -

Normal

00:01:790 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 都挤在左边了- -
00:42:606 (3,4,5) - 这个挺好看的
00:54:851 (3,1,2) - 我个人觉得这3个合在一起看有点丑哈哈哈

Hard

00:11:585 (1,2,3,4) - 直觉觉得这里有点丑- -
00:29:749 (4,5,6) - 我个人觉得这种梗会看起来不美但发现很多人爱用
00:40:973 (2,3,4) - 同上
01:05:259 (1,2,3) - 这个梗不错，但是用在这里我觉得好像不合拍

00:47:504 (3,4,1,2,3) - 像这里这种排列的slider尾+note+slider梗感觉用得太多了，看看能不能想想别的排列，移动下note的位置

Fycho‘s insane

00:27:096 (3,4,5,6) - 这里莫名戳中笑点哈哈哈
00:33:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里好像有点不齐
00:53:524 (5,6) - 这个是想要前后和对称嘛？但是我个人感觉00:53:524 (5) - 有点多余

01:08:014 (4) - 和01:08:320 (6) - 或许可以加whistle试试
感觉可以在kiai部分的蓝线上多加些音效

大概就这样了~

加油！

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2013-10-21T13:26:34+00:00

EmingK wrote:
[notice][Fycho]
00:08:932 - note?不惹
00:12:402 (3,1) - 没叠好这个影响不大懒叠了
00:27:912 (1) - x316 y208 可能会顺一些柑橘不顺
00:36:075 (1,3) - 需要好好包一下么XD这个还要怎么包啊包的啊，我看的觉得已经够美观了
00:52:402 (1) - 向左弯吧现在就是向左弯的吧
00:11:177 (3) - whistle? 这一段怎么只有第一小节有诶加了whistle并加了更多的whistle

good luck !

CET 6 wrote:
Fycho‘s insane

00:27:096 (3,4,5,6) - 这里莫名戳中笑点哈哈哈哈哈哈哈
00:33:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里好像有点不齐改了一点
00:53:524 (5,6) - 这个是想要前后和对称嘛？但是我个人感觉00:53:524 (5) - 有点多余把排列修了，节奏没动

01:08:014 (4) - 和01:08:320 (6) - 或许可以加whistle试试恩没我加了一些whistle

感觉可以在kiai部分的蓝线上多加些音效恩没我加了一些whistle

加油！

SPOILER

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Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2013-10-21T13:29:18+00:00

Tsukuyomi

Tsukuyomi wrote:
As your req

头像大图是啥，kantoku这张图好似没见过，还是截了以后我认不出来了需要PO原圖嗎?><

音效懒看了

Hard
首先说一下，这歌基本vocal是重音，白线也是重音，vocal在白线，是和重音重合的，所以你滑条尾压重音还是vocal的结尾单词完全不舒服
节奏不是塞满就好，要仔细考虑怎么跟才能兼顾到多个音轨
一开始这段你几个重音，有一个被滑条身体压了，有一个被滑条尾压了，不好，建议重新组织一下节奏
00:02:606 (3,4) - 这没包好，做blanket的时候关掉grid snap修
00:04:238 (2,4) - 这两个是可以blanket的，做blanket的时候不能只考虑相邻时间点的物件，前后的几个都要看看
00:12:606 (4) - 这个你注意一下，不仅spacing破坏了，还离前面那滑条很近，很难看
00:14:238 (8) - 这不对，这有个二连
00:16:279这边漏音后面三连白线起也很蛋疼，白线起没有三连音，不要白线起三连，尽量红线起，有三连音，也要慎用
00:22:198 (3) - 你仔细放慢歌听，这个滑条，可以拆一个单点出来的，因为vocal 有yi zu两个音，什么日语是这么念的么。。
00:26:892 (5,6) - 毫无道理，而且后面那个尾巴还压了重音
00:41:789 (3,4,5) - 这三个尾部贴那么紧不好看
00:59:545 (2) - 感觉错位了？后面明显还有叽咕叽咕的声音
01:02:198 (1,2,3) - 这么长的横平竖直。。尽量避免
节奏问题挺大，blanket也基本没修好
Hard部分已經大改了><

Normal
00:31:177 (2,3) - 没包好 fixed
大致扫了一遍感觉没什么大问题

Easy
这diff物件之间的间距有点小，打图的时候不好看
我也是因为这个之前被说了
考虑增大一点好的
00:47:504 (2,3) - easy不要叠 fixed
01:03:830 (3,1) - 这两个碰边了，这种无意义的遮挡，要避免 fixed
也没什么大问题，就是可能要重新排一下，增大一点间距。

hard问题比较大，要好好弄
就那么多了
good luck

Thank you ^^

EmingK

EmingK wrote:
Hi ._. 安安^^
~~看到Fycho我就滚进来了~~
as requested

第一张图就做成这样真心不错 Thank ^^

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[Hard]
很多地方有blanket的小问题，具体看一下下面这张图，自己检查改一下\w/（其他难度也是就不说了）
SPOILER
用以判断是否包好，除了用收缩圈之外，还有滑条的follow circle等
其实hard的间距可以稍微变一些的，一成不变的话不是很好玩。
00:23:014 (5,6,7) - 这里打起来不顺，如图这种排列则会顺一些（只是大概摆一下实际还要对前后物件进行各种调整或者摆成你自己觉得顺畅的排列也可
SPOILER
00:33:626 (7,1) - 这里间距有点大
00:41:789 (3,4) - （细节）直线上放这么锚点干嘛（虽然不影响什么
00:44:443 (7) - （细节）看一下右上间距(prev:1.20x next:1.18x)说明差一点（平时作图把网格关掉也没什么XD
01:03:830 (5) - Ctrl+g 打起来更顺畅
01:00:565 (1,2) - y坐标不一样诶
00:26:892 (5,6) - 这两个拉条头尾各加个whistle听听
Hard已經大改了><
[Normal]
个人不喜欢tick clap
00:01:790 (1,3) - 往右移点能好看一些（注意间距）覺得沒什麼差OAO不改><
01:10:361 (3) - Ctrl+G? fixed
00:46:687 (1) - 距离转盘尾较近的物件接近中心一些比较好好

[Easy]
01:16:892 (3) - 这个弯得有点过了 fixed
01:20:157 (3) - ^[/notice] fixed

good luck !

Thank you ^^

Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2013-10-22T14:28:59+00:00

PM mod request and checked in-game
Give some hitsound suggestions and talk about some rthyme problems

ircmod

21:05 AliomLoung: 你好!
21:14 OniJAM: 你好
21:15 AliomLoung: 想請你幫我mod圖><!!不知道方不方便!!
21:15 OniJAM: 稍等一下可以么
21:15 AliomLoung: 好!!
21:28 OniJAM: Fycho的GD我等等写post
21:29 *OniJAM is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/299338 RO-KYU-BU! - Get goal! (TV Size) [Hard]]
21:29 AliomLoung: 好
21:31 OniJAM: 开头的Volume会不会偏低了
21:31 OniJAM: 如果是我我可能会用80-90
21:31 OniJAM: 1790,408.163265306122,4,2,1,90,1,0
21:31 AliomLoung: 摁!!
21:32 AliomLoung: 這是?
21:32 OniJAM: code 反正一个意思
21:32 OniJAM: 就是开头的Volume加大点
21:32 AliomLoung: 摁!!
21:32 OniJAM: 00:12:402 - 00:14:034 - 试试+whistle
21:33 OniJAM: 这样子音效更有整体性
21:33 OniJAM: 00:14:443 - whistle改成clap
21:33 AliomLoung: 摁!!
21:33 AliomLoung: 以改!!
21:33 OniJAM: 00:15:259 (2) - 开头建议换成clap
21:34 OniJAM: 00:16:075 (4) - 同上
21:34 AliomLoung: 00:14:851 (1) - 那這個地方呢
21:34 AliomLoung: 沒事
21:34 AliomLoung: 看錯!!
21:35 OniJAM: 00:34:443 - 这里之后音效也放大一点但是比开头和kiai稍微低点
21:35 AliomLoung: 好
21:36 OniJAM: 建议开头~00:20:463 - 用90以上（90或100）
21:36 OniJAM: 00:20:463 - 到00:34:443 - 70
21:36 AliomLoung: 摁!!
21:36 OniJAM: 00:34:443 - 00:57:300 - 80
21:37 OniJAM: 00:57:300 ~ 01:02:198 - 慢慢放大
21:37 OniJAM: 01:02:198 - to kiai end 和开头一样
21:38 AliomLoung: OK!
21:38 OniJAM: 00:40:565 (1) - NC移到00:40:973 (2) -
21:39 AliomLoung: 好!
21:39 OniJAM: 00:41:789 (4,1,3) - 这三个滑条的开头试试+whistle
21:40 AliomLoung: 這樣改聽起來蠻不錯的!!
21:40 OniJAM: 00:44:443 (2) - delete whistle
21:41 OniJAM: 00:47:504 - finish
21:42 AliomLoung: 00:49:136 - 那這邊也要加FIN!0.0
21:42 AliomLoung: finish
21:42 OniJAM: 00:52:708 - 00:53:218 - 试试+clap
21:43 OniJAM: 那里可以不加finish
21:43 AliomLoung: 怎麼說呢
21:43 OniJAM: 00:49:136 - whistle更好
21:43 OniJAM: 00:50:769 - 这里再finish
21:43 OniJAM: 00:52:402 - 这里whistle
21:44 AliomLoung: 摁!
21:44 OniJAM: 00:54:034 (2) - 换成finish
21:44 OniJAM: 00:53:626 (1) - NC移到00:54:034 (2) -
21:45 AliomLoung: ok!
21:46 OniJAM: 00:55:667 - 到00:57:096 -
21:46 OniJAM: 如果你follow vocal的话
21:46 AliomLoung: 摁?
21:47 OniJAM: 不妨改成这样（图上传中）
21:47 OniJAM: http://puu.sh/4WuZF.jpg
21:48 OniJAM: 00:57:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - 对Hard来说有点难可能会被喷
21:48 OniJAM: 00:59:545 (2) - 回转太多没有太大意义
21:49 OniJAM: 换成这样吧 http://puu.sh/4Wv38.jpg
21:50 AliomLoung: 抱歉電腦有點盪
21:51 AliomLoung: 這樣改的話聽起來有點怪怪的
21:53 OniJAM: 你说的是哪个地方
21:53 AliomLoung: 00:59:545 (2) -
21:55 AliomLoung: 等下其實也還好!
21:55 OniJAM: 我还是觉得最好不要太多回转
21:55 AliomLoung: 摁!!
21:56 OniJAM: 01:03:830 (5,6) - 像这样的地方如果没有slidertick来放音效的话
21:56 OniJAM: 我会在01:04:136 - 01:04:647 - 01:05:055 - 加clap
21:58 AliomLoung: 01:05:259 - 在想這邊也要不要順便+clap
22:03 OniJAM: 个人感觉不用
22:03 AliomLoung: 摁
22:03 OniJAM: sorry刚刚移动硬盘碰掉了
22:03 OniJAM: chat记录保存了没事
22:03 AliomLoung: 摁^^
22:04 OniJAM: 01:10:361 (5,6,7) - 一样
22:04 OniJAM: 01:03:014 - delete whistle 不记得我写没写过了
22:04 AliomLoung: 沒有
22:06 OniJAM: 01:12:810 (4,8) - 开头可以试试whistle？
22:06 OniJAM: 01:15:259 - finish
22:06 OniJAM: 01:16:075 (3,5) - whistle
22:07 OniJAM: 后面类似的改法就不赘述了
22:08 AliomLoung: 好
22:08 OniJAM: 改好了和我说一声开始normal
22:11 AliomLoung: 好了
22:13 *OniJAM is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/298525 RO-KYU-BU! - Get goal! (TV Size) [Normal]]
22:13 OniJAM: Volume问题一样
22:14 AliomLoung: 好
22:15 OniJAM: 00:25:463 - add note
22:15 OniJAM: 00:28:728 (2,3,4,5) - 这里跟vocal跟的有点突然
22:16 OniJAM: 感觉接着跟鼓点会比较好
22:16 OniJAM: 00:35:259 (2,3,4,5) - ^
22:16 AliomLoung: 這邊有note
22:16 AliomLoung: 00:25:463 -
22:17 OniJAM: 00:41:789 (2,3,4,5) - 和hard的mod一样开头加whistle
22:17 OniJAM: 好吧那里是有note
22:18 OniJAM: 01:20:565 - missing clap
22:19 AliomLoung: 補上!
22:20 *OniJAM is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/298524 RO-KYU-BU! - Get goal! (TV Size) [Easy]]
22:20 OniJAM: 00:24:647 (1,2) - 建议和00:31:177 (1,2,3) - 一样
22:20 AliomLoung: volume一樣:D
22:21 OniJAM: volume一样
22:21 OniJAM: 上面那个mod指的是绿线音效和中间那个note都一样的设置
22:22 AliomLoung: 摁
22:22 AliomLoung: 如果要一樣的話就是.
22:22 OniJAM: 00:57:912 - finish
22:22 AliomLoung: 00:25:871 -+NOTE+CLAP
22:23 OniJAM: yes
22:24 AliomLoung: 2個都OK了!
22:24 OniJAM: others looks fine
22:24 OniJAM: 没有什么大问题了
22:24 AliomLoung: THX><!!
22:24 OniJAM: okay 准备post

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Maboyu 2013-10-22T14:58:23+00:00

CET 6 wrote:
Hi~ 不怎么会mod图，如有冒犯请见谅

Easy

没什么大问题，但是发现有一些地方刻意的包和重叠显得拥挤像00:26:279 (2,1,2,3,4) - 这里，可以试试不要把他们都刻意绕着00:29:136 (2) - 覺得還好不改><

Normal

00:01:790 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 都挤在左边了- - OAO
00:42:606 (3,4,5) - 这个挺好看的 Thank
00:54:851 (3,1,2) - 我个人觉得这3个合在一起看有点丑哈哈哈 QQ

Hard

00:11:585 (1,2,3,4) - 直觉觉得这里有点丑- -會嗎?QQ
00:29:749 (4,5,6) - 我个人觉得这种梗会看起来不美但发现很多人爱用 fixed
00:40:973 (2,3,4) - 同上 fixed
01:05:259 (1,2,3) - 这个梗不错，但是用在这里我觉得好像不合拍 0.0

00:47:504 (3,4,1,2,3) - 像这里这种排列的slider尾+note+slider梗感觉用得太多了，看看能不能想想别的排列，移动下note的位置
不改><
大概就这样了~
加油！

Thank you ^^

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-10-23T07:36:01+00:00

你第二页好像漏了一个kd
[Easy]
00:09:953 (3) - 尾部稍微左歪
00:16:483 (3) - 加个点包好看点._.
00:21:381 (1) - whistle
00:37:708 (1,2,3) - 包好看点._.
00:44:238 (4) - 多包就好了._.
00:57:300 (3) - 服
01:07:096 (2) - ._.
01:11:994 (1) - 去一次往返加个note
01:14:851 (3,1) - 滑条
01:23:422 (3) - 歪了……虽说正正方形也不好看,之前那几个加上5度左右的旋转吧._.b
[Normal]
00:01:790 (1) - 这种太挤的滑条我不喜欢也不推荐
00:13:218 (3) - 包好一点._.
哨子放得太有创意以至于我接受不能._.b
一股新手味……嗯怎么解释呢……就是摆的太规矩了……
[Hard]
哨子依旧很随意= =b
大概是因为放得不仅没有规律而且还很稀疏= =b
00:57:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这就是上面说的新手味= =
我觉得你应该同zx一起进步而不是直接拉上一个好diff,会压力的 /.\
[F's Insane]
有点慢
00:25:871 (4) - 前移1/4._.
>00:26:075 - note
00:48:320 (3,4,1,2) - 有点不太对劲…… 00:48:728 (4) - Ctrl+H?
01:00:871 (2) - 移到3上？
01:21:381 (5) - 尾部clap？

Last edited by ts8zs 2013-10-24T11:54:49+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Princess God

135 posts

Joined June 2010

Princess God 2013-10-23T14:59:31+00:00

嗯，说好的mod
~~小学生赛高~daze！！！！~~
我认为必要改的地方会用*标注出来
General
Easy,Normal还有Hard的难度梯度太小了……尤其是Normal和Hard

Fycho`s Insane
总体：不愧是Fycho大神啊……但是这图总觉得很多地方没被利用起来，
像是00:48:218和00:49:851等类似的地方，间奏中这种蓝线可以多试试加个note，配合得好的话，似乎能做出比较飘逸的感觉
00:20:769 (3) - 可以考虑nc
00:21:381 (1) - reverse selection
00:22:198 (4) - reverse selection
00:25:871 (4) - 这里的音效貌似有些问题，也许可能是我的耳机不好的原因
00:33:932 (4,6) - nc，节奏上适合
00:46:279 (5) - nc,配合你的排列我觉得适合加个nc
01:00:565 (1,2,3,4) - 似乎不大适合这种闭合图形呢？伸展开似乎能好很多
01:26:585 (1) - 移动到01:26:520，而且单独一个dash slider足矣，个人感觉不适合和前面的接在一起

Hard
01:00:565 (1,2,3,4) -

试试这种排列？

01:18:524 (1) - 延长一个四分拍
吐槽：你确定你做的不是Normal？

Normal
00:23:014 (3) - 去掉finishi音效
00:36:483 (5) - 去掉clap音效
00:56:687 加一个note
总的来说，safe……

Easy
00:40:565 (4) - nc
总的来说，safe……

Over……
PS：我也做了个这个图，目前只有个比你的Insane更难的难度，如果你有兴趣当成GD我就不开坑了
Uploading。。。

GD

osu file format v12

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StackLeniency: 0.7
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