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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年7月13日 at 12:22:43

Artist: xi
Title: Halcyon
Source: BMS
Tags: cytus bof2010
BPM: 191
Filesize: 3995kb
Play Time: 02:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (5.26 stars, 664 notes)
  2. Beginner (1.42 stars, 94 notes)
  3. Hyper (3.51 stars, 354 notes)
  4. Standard (2.25 stars, 202 notes)
Download: xi - Halcyon
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翡翠鸟
need mod
Jycool
翡翠鸟啊
lkx_Shore
ircmod
21:19 judgment light: 哦对了拉克修有没有时间试试我做的翡翠鸟
21:19 lkx_Shore: you
21:19 judgment light: 稍等
21:19 judgment light: 我扔puush先
21:19 lkx_Shore: 好
21:21 judgment light: 我感觉这是我到目前为止做得最好的图
21:21 judgment light: http://puu.sh/5caOq.osz
21:21 judgment light: 你看看怎么样
21:21 lkx_Shore: en
21:21 lkx_Shore: 等我下载
21:23 lkx_Shore: 下好了
21:25 judgment light: 好
21:25 judgment light: 卧槽一上来就HR
21:28 judgment light: 哇随手S
21:28 lkx_Shore: 0.0
21:28 lkx_Shore: 00:33:635 (2) -
21:28 lkx_Shore: 这个位置有点微妙
21:28 judgment light: 为何叫微妙
21:28 lkx_Shore: 因为甩过来的趋势的话
21:28 lkx_Shore: 你的位置摆抬下
21:29 lkx_Shore: 接到这个note再飞到左边的连打
21:29 lkx_Shore: 就不是一个完整的甩动作了
21:29 lkx_Shore: 我觉得x256 y256比较好
21:29 judgment light: 好
21:30 lkx_Shore: 00:35:834 (3,4,5,6) - 这种梗
21:30 lkx_Shore: 00:36:148 (4) - note一般是放在x388 y240的,你现在这种放下是往上甩,然后就直接往下拉了
21:31 judgment light: 00:36:620 (6,7) -
21:31 judgment light: 这两个要不要改位置
21:31 lkx_Shore: 最好改一改
21:32 lkx_Shore: 我试了试
21:32 lkx_Shore: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1087108
21:32 lkx_Shore: 如果按照你那种摆法
21:32 lkx_Shore: 滑条得弄完,这样打起来才不奇怪
21:32 lkx_Shore: 弯
21:33 judgment light: 可是改弯滑条感觉不好看
21:33 judgment light: 我还是改改circle的位置吧
21:33 lkx_Shore: en
21:34 lkx_Shore: 吐槽一下
21:34 lkx_Shore: 00:41:960 (3,4,5,6) -
21:34 lkx_Shore: 别人都是往里面收的> >
21:35 judgment light: 233我感觉这一段是越来越激情我就越来越靠外了呀
21:35 lkx_Shore: 0.0
21:35 lkx_Shore: 稍等我一下,我给个图别人
21:36 judgment light: 00:36:620 (6,7) - 你看看6在x308 y132 7在x451 y201好不好
21:37 lkx_Shore: dengd
21:37 judgment light: 好
21:41 lkx_Shore: 我们继续
21:42 lkx_Shore: 也可以
21:42 judgment light: 你看我摆那个位置行不行
21:42 judgment light: 好
21:43 lkx_Shore: 01:04:578 (5) - 这个跳对下面的链接不太好
21:44 judgment light: 那要怎么摆比较好
21:45 lkx_Shore: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1087142?
21:47 judgment light: 5不会跟下面的连打靠的太近吗
21:47 lkx_Shore: 就是重叠梗而已啊.....或者你把这个矩阵缩小点把连打拉开也行
21:50 lkx_Shore: 01:10:939 - 补个note?这也有音
21:56 lkx_Shore: 你好啊
21:56 judgment light: 服务器抽风啊似乎是
21:56 lkx_Shore: 刚才服务器boooooooooooom
21:57 lkx_Shore: 我最后发的是什么
21:57 judgment light: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1087142?
21:57 lkx_Shore: 就是重叠梗而已啊.....或者你把这个矩阵缩小点把连打拉开也行
21:58 judgment light: 感觉重叠没有连续跳跃的感觉
21:59 lkx_Shore: 那你缩小一下矩形然后把连打拉开
21:59 judgment light: 我把矩形改成折返跳了..
21:59 lkx_Shore: en
22:01 lkx_Shore: 01:10:939 - 补note?
22:02 lkx_Shore: 我是不是又没发出去
22:02 judgment light: 发了..
22:02 lkx_Shore: a...
22:03 judgment light: 感觉不用补note
22:03 lkx_Shore: 这里有个很响的音啊..
22:04 judgment light: 01:20:520 (4,1,2,3,4,5) -
22:04 judgment light: 这一段跟那一段类似..
22:05 lkx_Shore: .
22:05 lkx_Shore: 那就算了,我继续看
22:05 judgment light: 干脆直接五连吧
22:05 lkx_Shore: 也行
22:06 lkx_Shore: 01:30:808 (1) - 叠在01:30:494 (9) - 下面?
22:08 judgment light: 我故意放中心的..
22:08 lkx_Shore: 打起来感觉不是很好
22:08 judgment light: 会吗 那我还是改好了0 0
22:10 lkx_Shore: 02:20:599 (1,2,3,4,5) - 压错音差评
22:10 judgment light: 可是你开25%听一下
22:11 judgment light: 每条红线都有很响的钢琴音
22:11 lkx_Shore: 跟钢琴音就不要下连打
22:11 judgment light: 唔..
22:11 judgment light: 那我去改改
22:11 lkx_Shore: 弄清楚到底跟的是什么轨0.9
22:11 lkx_Shore: ..
22:11 lkx_Shore: 0.0
22:11 lkx_Shore: 嗯,手滑
22:11 judgment light: 我比较笨嘛
22:12 judgment light: 听到有钢琴砸下去就把重音也砸下去了
22:13 lkx_Shore: 02:30:494 (1) - 放左下角吧?
22:15 judgment light: 我感觉这样甩炫酷一点..
22:16 lkx_Shore: 你放右下角我倒是觉得如果想爽快的打好就要破坏flow
22:16 judgment light: 02:20:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这一段的whistle放红线还是放白线好
22:17 lkx_Shore: 白红都放
22:18 judgment light: 好
22:19 judgment light: 我感觉02:30:494 (1) - 这个在甩完大滑条之后划着圆圈甩过去比较爽喔..
22:19 lkx_Shore: 角度太过了
22:19 lkx_Shore: 要么左下要么下面
22:20 lkx_Shore: 甩是要朝着滑条尾巴结束的趋势去的
22:20 lkx_Shore: 你那个已经....
22:20 judgment light: x354 y313你看好不好
22:20 lkx_Shore: bu hao
22:21 judgment light: ...
22:21 judgment light: 我想甩右边
22:21 judgment light: 你看哪里比较好
22:21 lkx_Shore: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1087238?
22:22 judgment light: 吉安帕
22:24 judgment light: 贴聊天记录去拿kd呗
Jycool
SPOILER
21:15 judgment light: hi~
21:16 jyc-Binggan: h
21:17 jyc-Binggan: hi
21:17 judgment light: 饼干啊有空接Mod吗
21:17 jyc-Binggan: 什么图
21:17 judgment light: 我的翡翠鸟
21:17 jyc-Binggan: 可以
21:17 jyc-Binggan: link一下啊
21:18 jyc-Binggan: 我记得我有
21:18 judgment light: OK 稍等
21:18 judgment light: 我传度盘吧
21:18 jyc-Binggan: ?
21:18 judgment light: 诶你又啊
21:18 jyc-Binggan: 为何传度盘
21:18 judgment light: 我做完全难度了
21:18 jyc-Binggan: 你不是找我试过吗
21:18 judgment light: 你重新下一下
21:18 jyc-Binggan: link我啊
21:19 *judgment light is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/235470 RYO - Shuffle Heaven [eXtra]] |Autoplay|
21:19 judgment light: 卧槽发错了
21:19 *judgment light is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/346062 xi - Halcyon]
21:20 judgment light: 帮我看一下现在会不会做的太鬼畜了..
21:21 jyc-Binggan: 其实我原来也想做这个曲子来着
21:22 judgment light: 233
21:22 jyc-Binggan: 还是比较懒
21:22 judgment light: 其实我也挺懒的..
21:23 judgment light: 话说老板官网又抽了..
21:23 judgment light: 下得了吗..
21:23 jyc-Binggan: 我下完了啊
21:23 judgment light: 哦..
21:24 judgment light: 哦草提示我没图围观不了怎么可能
21:25 jyc-Binggan: 可能是需要更新
21:27 jyc-Binggan: 不对啊
21:27 jyc-Binggan: 不用更新
21:27 judgment light: 哦草你再打一遍...
21:27 judgment light: 我看看哪些地方比较坑
21:28 jyc-Binggan: 我觉得比较简单
21:28 judgment light: 应该是刚刚皮皮服务器炸了
21:28 judgment light: 不是吧
21:28 judgment light: 求再打一遍..
21:28 judgment light: 我觉得我做的比较难
21:28 jyc-Binggan: 我断了好几个啊
21:28 jyc-Binggan: 但还是觉得简单
21:29 jyc-Binggan: 等一下啊
21:29 judgment light: ...
21:29 judgment light: 我看看断的哪里 我想修的顺手一点
21:31 jyc-Binggan: 真的简单
21:32 judgment light: 是吗...
21:32 jyc-Binggan: 因为太顺手了
21:32 jyc-Binggan: 一直转圈
21:32 jyc-Binggan: 比较没意思
21:32 jyc-Binggan: 不是说这图不好啊
21:32 judgment light: .............其实是我不会其他的梗啦
21:32 jyc-Binggan: 就是比较单调
21:32 judgment light: 唔..
21:33 *jyc-Binggan is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/200989 xi - Halcyon]
21:33 jyc-Binggan: 这个你有没有啊
21:33 judgment light: 转圈圈什么的我下次改进一下
21:33 jyc-Binggan: 盒饭的
21:33 judgment light: 盒饭的有啊
21:33 jyc-Binggan: 我玩玩
21:36 jyc-Binggan: 我觉的盒饭的比较好玩
21:36 judgment light: 他的比我的有创意多了..
21:36 jyc-Binggan: 不光是创意啊
21:37 jyc-Binggan: 还有节奏
21:37 jyc-Binggan: 你的kial段打起来差不多
21:37 judgment light: 的确
21:38 judgment light: 我做图太考虑按在音上
21:38 jyc-Binggan: 感觉就是重新摆了一下
21:38 jyc-Binggan: 按在音上没错啊
21:38 judgment light: 其实的确是..
21:38 jyc-Binggan: 同样的节奏也可以有不同的下法啊
21:38 judgment light: 我不太知道怎么下..
21:40 jyc-Binggan: 我看看啊
21:41 jyc-Binggan: 你做研究研究节奏啊
21:41 judgment light: 啥
21:41 jyc-Binggan: 音游曲想做好比较难
21:41 jyc-Binggan: 你多研究节奏啊
21:42 judgment light: 我就是kiai段比较没想法
21:42 judgment light: 其他的段落我感觉我都有一点自己的想法放了进去
21:43 jyc-Binggan: 我直接就在这给你点建议当mod了吧
21:43 jyc-Binggan: 如何
21:43 jyc-Binggan: 写mod太麻烦
21:43 judgment light: 可以啊为啥不行
21:44 jyc-Binggan: 好
21:44 judgment light: 到时候把聊天记录贴过去拿kd
21:44 jyc-Binggan: 你想加sp吗?
21:44 jyc-Binggan: 我对kds也是无所谓啊
21:44 judgment light: 无所谓啦 就是感觉帮了忙拿个kd比较好而已
21:45 jyc-Binggan: ok
21:45 jyc-Binggan: 那就开始
21:45 jyc-Binggan: 00:27:353 -
21:45 judgment light: 嗯
21:45 jyc-Binggan: 这里有个音
21:45 jyc-Binggan: 没有利用到
21:46 judgment light: 对哦
21:46 jyc-Binggan: 要是我就在这加一个快速滑调
21:46 jyc-Binggan: 然后00:27:667 (1) - 这个放到滑调尾巴
21:47 judgment light: 咦这不是盒饭的摆法吗..
21:47 jyc-Binggan: 啊,是吗
21:47 jyc-Binggan: 可能想法都差不多
21:48 judgment light: 是啊..
21:48 jyc-Binggan: 你换一个也可以
21:48 judgment light: 嗯
21:48 judgment light: 不过我觉得用慢速滑条比较好
21:48 jyc-Binggan: 随你啊
21:48 jyc-Binggan: 00:28:452 -
21:48 jyc-Binggan: 这里有音
21:49 jyc-Binggan: 但是你用滑调尾巴盖住了
21:49 judgment light: 对哦..
21:50 judgment light: 啊我妈叫我去洗澡...
21:50 jyc-Binggan: 你把这个和后面的全变成一样的了
21:50 judgment light: 等十几分钟行否
21:50 judgment light: 嗯
21:50 judgment light: 我也发现了
21:50 jyc-Binggan: 10分钟后我要去跑步啊
21:50 judgment light: ....
21:50 jyc-Binggan: 你让你妈等等
21:50 judgment light: 好吧
21:50 judgment light: 继续
21:51 jyc-Binggan: 我就先把想说的说了啊
21:51 judgment light: OK
21:52 jyc-Binggan: 00:46:829 -
21:53 jyc-Binggan: 这个地方应该是1/8
21:53 judgment light: 是哦
21:54 jyc-Binggan: 00:53:976 -
21:54 jyc-Binggan: 这里有音
21:54 jyc-Binggan: 你也是用尾巴盖住了
21:55 jyc-Binggan: 错了啊
21:55 jyc-Binggan: 是00:53:897 -
21:55 judgment light: 00:46:829 (8) -
21:55 judgment light: 这里
21:55 jyc-Binggan: ?
21:55 judgment light: 我用一个1/8滑条一直到00:47:104然后马上接连打会不会有点怪
21:56 jyc-Binggan: 要是我00:46:201 (5) - 这个都换成连打
21:56 jyc-Binggan: 后面都换成短连打
21:56 judgment light: 这个我不太想换
21:56 jyc-Binggan: 然后直接接1/8滑调
21:56 judgment light: 短连打是啥
21:57 jyc-Binggan: 3连
21:57 jyc-Binggan: 之类的
21:57 judgment light: 哦..
21:57 judgment light: 咦这好像也是盒饭的想法..
21:57 jyc-Binggan: 主要是这几个00:46:044 (4,5,6) -
21:57 jyc-Binggan: 你和前面的节奏下的一模一样
21:57 jyc-Binggan: 就是没加哨音
21:58 jyc-Binggan: 或者你换成单点
21:58 jyc-Binggan: 也可以
21:59 judgment light: 就是四个单点接1/8滑条?
21:59 jyc-Binggan: 可以啊
21:59 jyc-Binggan: 只要和前面不一样
22:00 jyc-Binggan: 01:04:735 (1) -
22:00 jyc-Binggan: 这个和前一个note太近了
22:00 jyc-Binggan: 放开点
22:00 judgment light: 00:46:515 (7,8) - 这两个重叠放会不会好一点还是一直跳
22:02 jyc-Binggan: 我建议一直跳
22:02 judgment light: OK
22:03 jyc-Binggan: 01:06:934 (6) -
22:03 jyc-Binggan: 这个滑调有四个音
22:03 jyc-Binggan: 全放了
22:04 jyc-Binggan: 01:06:463 - 这里也有音
22:04 jyc-Binggan: 01:15:415 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -
22:05 jyc-Binggan: 这些和前面的也不是一个感觉
22:05 judgment light: 我还在纠结前面那一个跳的摆法..
22:05 jyc-Binggan: 建议间距变大
22:05 jyc-Binggan: 我先继续啊
22:05 jyc-Binggan: 你慢慢看
22:05 judgment light: OK
22:06 jyc-Binggan: 01:16:201 -
22:06 jyc-Binggan: 这里有音啊,而且这里的滑调太长
22:07 jyc-Binggan: 01:16:672 (3) - 这个建议换成两个单点
22:09 jyc-Binggan: 从01:28:295 - 这里到01:35:363 -
22:09 jyc-Binggan: 这一段的节奏感觉不是很好,建议看盒饭的这段,跟后面的类似中提琴之类的音更有带入感
22:10 judgment light: 这一段啊
22:10 judgment light: 我其实是想搞搞创新.........
22:10 judgment light: 效果不好吗
22:10 jyc-Binggan: 感觉不知道在打什么。。
22:11 judgment light: 后面的咚咚咚的鼓声呀..
22:11 jyc-Binggan: 我知道啊
22:11 jyc-Binggan: 但是几乎听不到
22:12 judgment light: 那我要不要整段替换比较好
22:13 jyc-Binggan: 我觉得你需要大部分remap
22:14 judgment light: 你指整张图?
22:14 jyc-Binggan: 对啊
22:14 judgment light: 还是那一段
22:15 jyc-Binggan: 那一段肯定是啊
22:15 jyc-Binggan: 后面的kial和前面几乎差不多啊
22:15 judgment light: 整张图remap啊
22:15 jyc-Binggan: 你前面都可以留着啊
22:15 jyc-Binggan: 就改部分的节奏
22:16 judgment light: 你说后面的KIAI那里啊
22:16 jyc-Binggan: 对啊
22:16 judgment light: 然后后面的kiai和那一段八音盒什么的全部remap吗
22:16 jyc-Binggan: 而且摆的太顺手了
22:16 judgment light: 我就是想摆的顺手啊...............不太会摆的跳
22:17 jyc-Binggan: 不是,你已经很跳了啊
22:18 judgment light: a
22:18 jyc-Binggan: 但是有许多该跳的地方没跳
22:18 judgment light: 是吗
22:18 judgment light: 求解一下比如哪里
22:19 jyc-Binggan: 00:37:719 (10,1) -
22:19 jyc-Binggan: 比如这两个
22:20 jyc-Binggan: 1就可以摆的更远
22:21 judgment light: 这个为什么要换单点呢 感觉滑条好点
22:21 jyc-Binggan: 哪个?
22:22 judgment light: 01:16:672 (4) -
22:23 jyc-Binggan: 因为你中间那几个是补得鼓点啊
22:23 jyc-Binggan: 因为没钢琴音可以跟
22:24 jyc-Binggan: 所以我建议你音效加个clap
22:24 judgment light: 自定义一个clap?
22:24 judgment light: 什么clap比较好
22:24 jyc-Binggan: 就找音乐里的啊
22:25 judgment light: 啥
22:25 jyc-Binggan: 音乐里的clap
22:25 judgment light: 默认?
22:26 jyc-Binggan: 01:16:358 -
22:26 jyc-Binggan: 就这里的音啊
22:26 jyc-Binggan: 音乐里的
22:26 jyc-Binggan: 或者默认也ok
22:26 judgment light: 默认的感觉不太衬
22:27 jyc-Binggan: 那你就找一个
22:27 judgment light: 不对啊 我就是想找那个音乐里面类似这种音效的clap可是找不到...
22:28 jyc-Binggan: 可以找个类似的啊
22:28 judgment light: 你看看我那个nc2的clap像不像
22:29 jyc-Binggan: 可以啊
22:29 jyc-Binggan: 就这个
22:29 judgment light: 咦这个衬吗
22:29 jyc-Binggan: 我试试啊
22:30 judgment light: 那这个clap用在什么地方比较好
22:31 judgment light: 感觉如何
22:32 jyc-Binggan: 感觉不是很好用啊
22:32 jyc-Binggan: 主要是你这个节奏几乎都跟钢琴
22:33 jyc-Binggan: 如果加一两个地方比较突兀
22:33 judgment light: 嗯
22:33 judgment light: 所以我就是纠结
22:34 judgment light: 不过加这个clap主要用在什么地方
22:35 jyc-Binggan: 这个clap
22:35 jyc-Binggan: 还是换一个吧
22:35 jyc-Binggan: 根本听不出来
22:35 judgment light: 果然..
22:35 judgment light: 其实我也想换了
22:35 judgment light: 只是苦于找不到啊
22:35 judgment light: 我是音效痴..
22:36 jyc-Binggan: 找一个比较音色比较亮的clap
22:36 jyc-Binggan: 比如默认那种
22:36 jyc-Binggan: 要不就不加clap了
22:37 judgment light: 好吧
22:38 jyc-Binggan: 我知道了
22:38 jyc-Binggan: 可以加在kial段
22:38 judgment light: 用来2 4clap?
22:39 jyc-Binggan: 可以啊
22:39 jyc-Binggan: 2.4比较简单
22:39 judgment light: 不行感觉这歌在kiai24 clap就毁了
22:39 judgment light: 我反正很讨厌gowww那个another
22:39 jyc-Binggan: 我也感觉不好
22:39 judgment light: 净是2 4 clap
22:39 jyc-Binggan: gowww那个24做的太垃圾啊
22:40 jyc-Binggan: 吵死了
22:40 judgment light: 是啊
22:41 jyc-Binggan: 比如02:25:939 -
22:41 jyc-Binggan: 这里开始你跟的不就是鼓点吗
22:41 judgment light: 嗯
22:41 judgment light: 哒 哒哒的那些声音
22:41 jyc-Binggan: 对啊
22:41 jyc-Binggan: 加clap就比较合适
22:41 judgment light: 那些放clap吗
22:42 jyc-Binggan: 对啊
22:42 judgment light: 取消掉whistle?
22:42 jyc-Binggan: 不用啊
22:42 jyc-Binggan: whistle听着不维和
22:42 judgment light: 不行我得换一个clap 这个几乎完全没感觉
22:42 jyc-Binggan: 对,加了像没加
22:43 judgment light: 可是...默认好像又不太衬啊
22:43 judgment light: 饼干你有没有什么好的建议
22:43 jyc-Binggan: clap吗
22:43 jyc-Binggan: 我要找的话也是要试试才知道
22:43 judgment light: 嗯
22:44 jyc-Binggan: 这个不着急啊
22:45 judgment light: 你最近有空吗
22:45 judgment light: 能不能帮我找一下..
22:45 jyc-Binggan: 最近有空啊
22:45 jyc-Binggan: 可以
22:45 judgment light: 找个合适的clap然后加在那些鼓点上吗
22:45 judgment light: 还是怎么用比较好
22:46 judgment light: 其实我对音效一直有个疑问 到底音效是用来陪衬比较好还是制造节奏比较好
22:46 jyc-Binggan: 你说道重点
22:46 jyc-Binggan: 我觉得是制造节奏比较好
22:47 jyc-Binggan: 我也是一直这么做啊
22:47 judgment light: 饼干你怎么看
22:47 judgment light: 想想的确也是这样
22:47 jyc-Binggan: 毕竟是节奏游戏
22:47 jyc-Binggan: 我觉得左手比较重要
22:47 judgment light: 照这样说的话 那就不应该找那些跟原曲音效比较像的音效来模仿咯?
22:48 jyc-Binggan: 不是这样啊
22:49 jyc-Binggan: 找和原曲比较像的音效,可以自创啊
22:49 judgment light: 自创节奏?
22:49 jyc-Binggan: 对啊
22:49 jyc-Binggan: 自创好了的话根本听不出来
22:50 jyc-Binggan: 比如al
22:50 judgment light: 这还真是诶
22:50 jyc-Binggan: 还有一种
22:50 jyc-Binggan: 就是找原曲中根本没有的音效
22:50 jyc-Binggan: 来自创节奏
22:51 jyc-Binggan: 比如basara啊
22:51 judgment light: 嗯
22:51 judgment light: 对哦
22:51 jyc-Binggan: 或者lks的死天使啊
22:51 jyc-Binggan: 不过这种音效一是比较难找
22:51 jyc-Binggan: 二是比较难用好
22:51 judgment light: lks那死天使自创节奏真的很屌
22:51 judgment light: 所以用得好基本都神图
22:53 jyc-Binggan: 对啊
22:53 judgment light: 先不说这个音效问题
22:53 jyc-Binggan: 好
22:53 judgment light: 还有什么要修改的地方吗
22:54 jyc-Binggan: 我整理一下啊
22:54 jyc-Binggan: 就是摆放方面可以更有意思一点
22:55 jyc-Binggan: 比如说nc
22:55 jyc-Binggan: 跳
22:55 judgment light: nc是啥
22:55 judgment light: 不对
22:55 judgment light: nc有什么可以玩的地方
22:56 jyc-Binggan: new combo 加跳啊
22:56 judgment light: 哦..
22:58 jyc-Binggan: 比如00:47:143 (1) -
22:58 jyc-Binggan: 这里这种
22:58 jyc-Binggan: 不要摆这么顺手
22:58 jyc-Binggan: 不一定顺手就好玩
22:58 judgment light: 这一串还是什么
22:58 judgment light: 你说连打太顺手不好玩还是啥
22:59 judgment light: 不对啊这连打还有别的摆法么.
23:00 jyc-Binggan: 我是说00:47:143 (1) - 和00:46:829 (8) -
23:00 jyc-Binggan: 的间距太小
23:00 jyc-Binggan: 太顺手
23:00 judgment light: 哦..
23:00 judgment light: 这段我已经改成那个1/8滑条接连打了啊..
23:01 jyc-Binggan: 啊对
23:01 jyc-Binggan: 忘了
23:02 judgment light: ..
23:02 jyc-Binggan: 还有00:52:798 (1) -
23:02 jyc-Binggan: 这里也是啊
23:02 judgment light: 总之大概就是要重做后半段吧
23:02 jyc-Binggan: 同样的我不找了
23:02 jyc-Binggan: 对
23:02 jyc-Binggan: 后半段你可以试试跟一些鼓点进去
23:02 judgment light: 我最不会跟的就是跟鼓点.
23:03 judgment light: 00:52:798 (1) - 你说这个接上面的太近?
23:03 jyc-Binggan: 对啊
23:03 jyc-Binggan: 和前面的感觉不一样啊
23:03 judgment light: 拉远一点么
23:03 jyc-Binggan: 对啊
23:03 jyc-Binggan: 但是你别转圈了
23:04 judgment light: 你是说我重做时别转圈吗..
23:04 jyc-Binggan: 不是别转圈啊
23:04 jyc-Binggan: 别一直转
23:05 judgment light: 是不是要折返跳之类的么
23:05 judgment light: 时不时
23:05 jyc-Binggan: 看感觉啊
23:05 jyc-Binggan: 多加一些感觉进去
23:05 judgment light: 哦..
23:05 judgment light: 嗯
23:05 judgment light: 不过最近作图没梗..
23:05 jyc-Binggan: 看盒饭的那个就加了很多不同的感觉
23:06 judgment light: 嗯
23:06 judgment light: 感觉的出来
23:06 judgment light: 他那个比我的感觉好玩多了..
23:07 jyc-Binggan: 是啊
23:07 jyc-Binggan: 我感觉你做这类曲子还不是很擅长
23:07 judgment light: 只是那kiai段比较难想
23:07 judgment light: 嗯
23:07 judgment light: 这图算是我比较早之前的作品吧
23:08 judgment light: 最近想把它做好点
23:08 judgment light: 因为实在受不了gowww那个图
23:09 judgment light: kiai段感觉滑条没法用折返跳只能转圈啊
23:09 judgment light: 01:37:405 (1) - 到01:48:714 (9) - 应该做得还可以不用重做吧
23:09 jyc-Binggan: 这图你可以先放放啊
23:10 jyc-Binggan: 多做点别的图积累经验
23:10 jyc-Binggan: 你那个miku就做的挺好
23:10 judgment light: 我一朋友说我那图的滑条速度不搭我那个跳的间距
23:10 judgment light: 说滑条太慢..
23:11 jyc-Binggan: 我觉得可以啊
23:12 judgment light: 233
23:12 judgment light: 其实相对而言我更想把halcyon这图rank
23:12 jyc-Binggan: 音乐曲子没那么好做啊
23:12 judgment light: miku那图我算是做着玩的吧
23:12 jyc-Binggan: 你这个现在就可以rank
23:12 judgment light: 想学学happy30的风格
23:13 judgment light: 是吗..
23:13 *judgment light is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/185974 Demetori - Love-colored Master Spark ~ Final Sorcery [Lunatic]]
23:13 judgment light: 比如happy30这图我感觉也挺转圈不过他这个转起来很好玩啊
23:13 jyc-Binggan: 等下啊
23:16 jyc-Binggan: 我先传个图
23:16 judgment light: 你觉得happy30这图怎么样
23:16 *judgment light is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/185974 Demetori - Love-colored Master Spark ~ Final Sorcery [Lunatic]]
23:19 judgment light: 哦草我要下了
23:19 judgment light: 你明天有空否
23:19 jyc-Binggan: 明天ok
23:19 jyc-Binggan: 明天继续
23:19 judgment light: 对了你先把聊天记录贴去拿kd啊
23:20 jyc-Binggan: 我先存个记录啊
Fycho
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2014-01-16 12:26 Fycho: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/350018 xi - Halcyon [Another]]
2014-01-16 12:30 Fycho: 没SB把所有难度widescreen去掉
2014-01-16 12:30 judgment light: 啥
2014-01-16 12:31 judgment light: song setup那里啊
2014-01-16 12:31 Fycho: 对
2014-01-16 12:31 judgment light: OK
2014-01-16 12:31 judgment light: 好嘞
2014-01-16 12:32 Fycho: 00:31:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 为什么要跟音乐。。
2014-01-16 12:32 Fycho: 这里跟跟鼓点和伴奏啊
2014-01-16 12:32 Fycho: 这种全1/2在这类曲子里都是特别显眼和别扭的。。。
2014-01-16 12:33 Fycho: 00:32:693 - 比如这可以下1/4
2014-01-16 12:33 Fycho: 00:31:279 (1) - 或者这可以变成3/4滑条
2014-01-16 12:33 Fycho: 丰富这一块的节奏
2014-01-16 12:33 Fycho: 当然只是建议
2014-01-16 12:36 Fycho: 00:36:934 (6) - 这我觉得大概这个位置和样子比较顺flow
2014-01-16 12:36 Fycho: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254474
2014-01-16 12:37 judgment light: fycho你刚才掉了啊..
2014-01-16 12:37 Fycho: 似乎掉了 刚才说的什么
2014-01-16 12:37 Fycho: 最后一句
2014-01-16 12:37 judgment light: 这种全1/2在这类曲子特别显眼和别扭
2014-01-16 12:38 Fycho: 00:32:693 - 比如这可以下1/4
2014-01-16 12:38 judgment light: 可我觉得这曲子如果在这几个段落如果跟鼓点会打的很奇怪
2014-01-16 12:38 Fycho: 00:31:279 (1) - 或者这可以变成3/4滑条
2014-01-16 12:38 Fycho: 丰富这一块的节奏
2014-01-16 12:38 Fycho: 当然只是建议
2014-01-16 12:38 Fycho: 00:36:934 (6) - 这我觉得大概这个位置和样子比较顺flow,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254474
2014-01-16 12:39 judgment light: 我看看
2014-01-16 12:40 Fycho: 00:35:834 (1,2,3,4) - 这里你都是每两个转一下flow,然后你到6却突然顺flow了
2014-01-16 12:40 Fycho: 你可以放到下面打着试试再看
2014-01-16 12:40 judgment light: 我去试试
2014-01-16 12:42 judgment light: 好 改了
2014-01-16 12:42 Fycho: 00:41:960 (3) - 跟着音高往上扬?
2014-01-16 12:43 Fycho: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254480
2014-01-16 12:44 judgment light: 感觉改了这一个后面三个都要改一下不然好像不太整齐
2014-01-16 12:44 Fycho: 那就把后面的一并改了也行
2014-01-16 12:45 Fycho: 我倒不觉得原来你往下就怎么整齐,原来的flow方向也是有点乱
2014-01-16 12:45 Fycho: 原来,1,2,3是顺flow
2014-01-16 12:45 Fycho: 然后3,4,5都是尼flow
2014-01-16 12:45 Fycho: 除非全部直滑条,否则每个滑条的凹凸方向有规律的
2014-01-16 12:46 judgment light: 我想问一下 是一个段落用同一种flow还是各种flow掺杂比较好
2014-01-16 12:46 Fycho: 根据音乐
2014-01-16 12:46 Fycho: 还有感觉
2014-01-16 12:47 Fycho: 就是乐感吗,但是很多情况下重音都是逆flow
2014-01-16 12:47 Fycho: 这样有打击感
2014-01-16 12:47 judgment light: 嗯
2014-01-16 12:47 judgment light: 懂了
2014-01-16 12:47 judgment light: 00:41:646 (2,3) - 这两个如果按你那样摆算是逆flow了吧
2014-01-16 12:48 Fycho: 00:41:332 (1,2) - 这两个你是顺flow的
2014-01-16 12:48 Fycho: 00:41:175 (5,1) - 5到1你也是逆flow摆的,但是如果你是直滑条向右下的话就是顺flow
2014-01-16 12:49 Fycho: 额。。虽然张口闭口flow也不是什么好建议
2014-01-16 12:49 judgment light: 哦..明白了
2014-01-16 12:49 judgment light: 00:42:274 (4,5,6) - 这三个感觉上是用顺flow比较好对吧
2014-01-16 12:50 Fycho: 00:46:201 (5,6) - 这两个ctrl+g试试?
2014-01-16 12:52 judgment light: ctrl+G感觉有一点不爽
2014-01-16 12:52 Fycho: 后面的circle位置改一下就行
2014-01-16 12:52 Fycho: 00:44:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里也是顺的
2014-01-16 12:52 Fycho: 00:45:415 (1,2,3) -
2014-01-16 12:53 Fycho: 00:45:730 (3,4,5) - 所以这几个也顺时针?
2014-01-16 12:53 Fycho: 当然这关系不大
2014-01-16 12:53 Fycho: 随你
2014-01-16 12:54 judgment light: 这里如果ctrl+G之后突然有一跳又没有什么明显的重音打起来略怪
2014-01-16 12:54 Fycho: 啥没重音
2014-01-16 12:54 Fycho: 哪
2014-01-16 12:55 judgment light: 00:46:672 (8,1) -
2014-01-16 12:55 judgment light: 这两个跳的突然
2014-01-16 12:55 Fycho: 我又没说到那
2014-01-16 12:55 Fycho: 你原来不就那么摆的吗
2014-01-16 12:56 judgment light: 也对哦..
2014-01-16 12:56 judgment light: 那00:46:201 (5,6) - 这里ctrl+G了后面是不是跟着顺时针比较好
2014-01-16 12:57 Fycho: 怎么改看你咯。。
2014-01-16 12:57 Fycho: 我只是建议5和6换
2014-01-16 12:57 Fycho: 因为有和前一句统一而已
2014-01-16 12:57 Fycho: 况且只是建议
2014-01-16 12:57 judgment light: 哦...
2014-01-16 12:57 Fycho: 你接受的话后面相对随便调整下就是
2014-01-16 12:58 judgment light: 我还是保留自己的做法吧
2014-01-16 12:58 Fycho: 00:48:086 (1) - 重音别放滑条尾
2014-01-16 12:59 Fycho: 你可以换成3/4然后接一个3/4滑条
2014-01-16 13:00 judgment light: 我换成了一个3/4滑条+一个Note
2014-01-16 13:00 judgment light: 如果这样子的话
2014-01-16 13:00 Fycho: 01:17:457 - 加circle
2014-01-16 13:00 judgment light: 后面还有几个类似的我一并改了吧
2014-01-16 13:01 Fycho: 01:22:012 (9,1) - 间距略小
2014-01-16 13:01 Fycho: 01:21:070 (5,6) - 倒和你这的1/4差不多了
2014-01-16 13:01 judgment light: 对哦
2014-01-16 13:01 judgment light: 我去改改
2014-01-16 13:01 Fycho: 我是建议01:22:169 (1) -
2014-01-16 13:02 Fycho: 01:22:169 -
2014-01-16 13:02 Fycho: 滑条在这起。。。
2014-01-16 13:02 Fycho: 因为鼓点在这 这个红线音比后面大白线要抢
2014-01-16 13:02 Fycho: 强*
2014-01-16 13:02 judgment light: 就我感觉看来我这段跟音乐比较多
2014-01-16 13:02 Fycho: no
2014-01-16 13:03 Fycho: 这个强烈建议改
2014-01-16 13:03 Fycho: 否则很难受。。。
2014-01-16 13:03 judgment light: 这样啊
2014-01-16 13:03 judgment light: 我试试看先
2014-01-16 13:03 Fycho: 你要执意跟钢琴那就算了
2014-01-16 13:03 Fycho: 钢琴是即兴钢琴 ,玩起来没什么节奏感的。。
2014-01-16 13:03 Fycho: 基础是鼓点
2014-01-16 13:04 Fycho: 你放弃鼓点就放弃吧。。当没说
2014-01-16 13:04 Fycho: 继续下一个
2014-01-16 13:04 Fycho: 01:28:295 (1) - 重音滑条尾
2014-01-16 13:05 judgment light: 改了 连带着后面那些我也一并改了
2014-01-16 13:06 judgment light: 不过02:29:866 (1) - 这个我不想改
2014-01-16 13:07 Fycho: 01:28:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这全是1/2有点无聊,我建议可以这样的节奏
2014-01-16 13:07 Fycho: 只是建议,改不改随你
2014-01-16 13:07 Fycho: http://puu.sh/6mBxj.jpg
2014-01-16 13:07 judgment light: 咦图捏
2014-01-16 13:07 Fycho: http://puu.sh/6mBxV.jpg
2014-01-16 13:07 Fycho: 你新建个diff摆了试试
2014-01-16 13:07 judgment light: OK我现在试试看
2014-01-16 13:08 Fycho: 继续了 以后再试试
2014-01-16 13:08 Fycho: 01:33:007 (1) - 下点1/4啊
2014-01-16 13:09 judgment light: 2连?
2014-01-16 13:09 Fycho: 02:09:761 (1,1) - 可以分开放
2014-01-16 13:09 Fycho: 来个跳
2014-01-16 13:10 judgment light: 02:09:761 (1,1) - 这两个跳?
2014-01-16 13:10 Fycho: 之前那个下点1/4节奏,如果接受的话,怎么下随你,如果不接受就不该
2014-01-16 13:10 Fycho: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254502
2014-01-16 13:10 Fycho: 我的意思是这两个分开
2014-01-16 13:10 Fycho: 来个滑条跳。。
2014-01-16 13:10 judgment light: 哦.......
2014-01-16 13:11 judgment light: OK
2014-01-16 13:11 Fycho: 02:20:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种打起来不是很好
2014-01-16 13:12 judgment light: 全改连打么
2014-01-16 13:13 judgment light: 还是怎么摆比较好
2014-01-16 13:13 Fycho: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254506
2014-01-16 13:13 Fycho: 三连也行
2014-01-16 13:13 Fycho: 随你
2014-01-16 13:14 judgment light: 那我还是改三连吧
2014-01-16 13:14 Fycho: 别的没什么了
2014-01-16 13:15 judgment light: 好
2014-01-16 13:15 judgment light: 谢谢fycho啦~
fanzhen0019
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13:46 judgment light: Hi 反震~你最近有空接mod吗?
13:46 fanzhen0019: hai hao
13:46 judgment light: 求个Mod可否
13:46 *judgment light is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/355936 xi - Halcyon]
13:46 fanzhen0019: wa 翡翠鸟
13:47 judgment light: 233
13:47 judgment light: 有空就mod个吧 谢啦~
13:48 fanzhen0019: 好的
14:22 fanzhen0019: 打好像打不了
14:22 *fanzhen0019 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/355936 xi - Halcyon]
14:22 judgment light: 咦怎么打不了
14:26 judgment light: 233太鬼畜了么
14:27 fanzhen0019: 有的3/4有点奇怪
14:30 fanzhen0019: 手痛惹
14:30 fanzhen0019: hyper挺好
14:30 judgment light: ....辛苦惹
14:30 judgment light: 好
14:30 fanzhen0019: cant defeat big spacing
14:30 judgment light: 233
14:31 fanzhen0019: 00:52:484 (7) -
14:31 fanzhen0019: 放在这不太好看
14:31 judgment light: 放哪里好还是换个样式?
14:32 fanzhen0019: http://puu.sh/6oUYU.jpg
14:33 judgment light: 好嘞
14:33 fanzhen0019: 01:07:876 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个用旋转90度摆吧 现在看着不工整
14:34 judgment light: 好
14:34 fanzhen0019: 01:14:316 (4,5) -
14:34 fanzhen0019: 我觉得这个3/4挺莫名的
14:35 judgment light: 你觉得怎么样比较好点
14:35 fanzhen0019: 等等 offset是不是不对
14:35 judgment light: 不是吧
14:36 judgment light: 好像还真的后了一点点
14:36 fanzhen0019: 27025还行
14:37 judgment light: 绿线的offset是+还是-
14:37 judgment light: 也是-吗
14:37 fanzhen0019: 对
14:38 judgment light: 弄好了
14:38 judgment light: 其他难度我等会儿去弄
14:38 fanzhen0019: 好
14:39 fanzhen0019: 满屏飞的排版我确实不知道怎么摸..
14:39 judgment light: .....................
14:40 fanzhen0019: 01:42:417 (1,2) - 不对称
14:40 fanzhen0019: 我也只能看这样的小地方了..
14:40 judgment light: 好 改了
14:40 judgment light: 没事能帮忙Mod就行啊
14:44 fanzhen0019: ez好多break啊
14:44 judgment light: ez不想做的太满嘛
14:46 fanzhen0019: 别的都没啥..加油
14:46 judgment light: 好谢谢反震啊
Pretty Rhythm
Hi

[General]
Add bof2010 to tag

[Beginer]
00:46:829 (6) - Remove note(hard pattern for easy diff)
01:16:986 (6) - NC
01:47:457 (1) - Remove NC
01:52:484 (3) - set Distance x1.00

[Standard]
AR - 1
00:29:080 (3,4,5,6,7) - Not good for normal diff, I sugguest you change this to slider
00:31:593 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:39:133 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:41:646 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:50:442 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:17:614 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:53:269 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:00:808 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:03:321 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:55:939 (6) - NC
00:47:143 (1) - Remove NC
01:12:117 (5,6,7) - try to make curve :|
01:40:546 (6,1) - hard to read

[Another]
00:27:824 (2) - NC
01:27:667 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Little noisy
01:36:777 (4,5,6,7) - make same DS
01:39:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - hard to read

Nice hitsound work :D
GL!
Topic Starter
G S X

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

Hi

[General]
Add bof2010 to tag done

[Beginer]
00:46:829 (6) - Remove note(hard pattern for easy diff) I move forward 1/1
01:16:986 (6) - NC done
01:47:457 (1) - Remove NC done
01:52:484 (3) - set Distance x1.00 done

[Standard]
AR - 1 done
00:29:080 (3,4,5,6,7) - Not good for normal diff, I sugguest you change this to slider if anyone else think these are bad, I will change them
00:31:593 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:39:133 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:41:646 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:50:442 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:17:614 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:53:269 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:00:808 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:03:321 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:55:939 (6) - NC done
00:47:143 (1) - Remove NC no
01:12:117 (5,6,7) - try to make curve :| done
01:40:546 (6,1) - hard to read changed

[Another]
00:27:824 (2) - NC done
01:27:667 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Little noisy fixed
01:36:777 (4,5,6,7) - make same DS no. I do it on purpose
01:39:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - hard to read yes :3

Nice hitsound work :D :)
GL!
Thank you!
Raging Bull
Hi. Mods are suggestion, if you disagree with any, please explain why instead of just "no"

General:


Easy:
00:47:143 (7) - NC since change in melody? (keyboard I think?)
00:58:452 - Why break? I think it's best to map it, seems pretty mappable imo.
01:07:248 (1) - Perhaps NC here? Change in melody and it fits nicely as it transitions with the (piano?) playing next.
01:09:761 (3) - Perhaps move somewhere else? I think it looks weird to be half stack under (1)
01:14:787 (5) - Hmm change the pattern here a bit? I think it sounds awkardly mapped right now. Currently, when the slider ends, there is a really prominent sound in music that is really good for a slider, but you leave it alone. Then at 01:17:300, there is another good start for a slider, but you end a slider and made hold note next beat which imo sounds really late. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/6pcBv.png (5) starts at 01:14:787. You can change it a bit imo, but I think the screenshot would follow music much better since it incorporates the whistle sound in the music better.
Seems like okay diff, I like how you added lots of red tick note which I think is good so beginners get some challenge and not just 1/1.

Normal:
AR +1? I think the balance will fit better so Easy AR4 Normal AR6 Hard AR8.
00:40:389 (7) - Hmm, maybe move this somewhere else? Might be confusing for beginner.
01:37:405 (3,1) - overlap doesn't look nice imo.
01:38:662 (1) - Spacing also looks little off.
01:41:489 (7) - NC?
01:39:290 (2,3,4,5) - imo might be confusing. You stack 1/2 and then you also unstack 1/2 close together. I think beginners would click too fast or too slow. Maybe either make them all stack or make them all unstack.
01:41:803 (8,9,10,11) - ^? unstack all 1/2 or stack all 1/2?
01:44:316 (2,3,4,5,2,3) - ^?
01:52:169 (1,2) - imo I think http://puu.sh/6pdue.png would follow much better since the speed up sound starts at 01:52:484.
02:23:583 (9,1) - Swap NC? I feel like if you NC at (1), it might make beginners think "wtf is happening here! why is this different?!!?!" "Why is color different?"
Seems very high note density, perhaps removing some notes and adding more sliders might help?

Hard:
Tick rate 2? Idk why different tick rate.
00:51:227 (4,7) - Not a very nice looking overlap.
01:09:761 (1,1,1) - Remove NC? Idk why you added them, it feels natural with 01:09:290 (1,2,3) - combo.
01:11:018 (2) - Add nc instead?
01:12:274 (1) - Remove NC? It would look like this which still seems very natural NCing http://puu.sh/6pdUD.png
01:19:813 (1,1,1) - Remove NC like earlier?
01:21:070 (7) - Add NC?
01:22:955 (1) - Remove NC
01:23:583 (4) - Add NC
01:24:840 (1) - Remove NC? it will look like this http://puu.sh/6pe3f.png. It will make this NCing look natural and consistent with earlier
02:20:442 (4) - I think NC here will be nice since it follows new part of melody.
02:23:583 (1,2) - Swap NC? (1) is still mapped to the same melody as 02:22:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

Insane:
OD+1? I think streamy maps should usually be more accurate.
00:44:459 (3,5) - Overlap doesn't look too nice, it doesn't seem like 00:44:302 (2,4) is following the same pattern, so I think the pattern doesn't match. Maybe remove overlap?
00:50:114 (7,8) - remove overlap?
01:04:721 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why NC 2 times 01:07:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and then only NC 1 time? I suggest remove NCs at 01:05:035 (1,1) unless there is a good reason to keep nc
01:15:716 (1) - I suggest remove NC. I do not believe you need NC here. The more you NC the higher the drain. (A map with HP5 and 100 NC drains faster than HP5 with 40 NC for example)
01:27:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - lol 1/8 sliders so cruel. kinda like gypsy tronic.
02:00:009 (9) - NC here fits more since it starts whole new stanza.
02:00:480 (1) - Remove NC if you follow ^
02:09:119 (1,1) - Remove NC?
02:20:428 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Hmm, NC is okay but maybe I would prefer NC at 02:20:428 (1) - 02:21:370 (1) - 02:21:998 (1) 02:29:223 (1,1) - Remove NC?
Sometimes your stream NC isn't really consistent so idk what is your reasoning for putting NC in stream sometimes and then not putting NC in stream sometimes.
Topic Starter
G S X

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi. Mods are suggestion, if you disagree with any, please explain why instead of just "no"

General:


Easy:
00:47:143 (7) - NC since change in melody? (keyboard I think?) done
00:58:452 - Why break? I think it's best to map it, seems pretty mappable imo. But I want to make it easier.
01:07:248 (1) - Perhaps NC here? Change in melody and it fits nicely as it transitions with the (piano?) playing next. no.this slider doesn't in the new part.
01:09:761 (3) - Perhaps move somewhere else? I think it looks weird to be half stack under (1) I make it entirely stack under (1)
01:14:787 (5) - Hmm change the pattern here a bit? I think it sounds awkardly mapped right now. Currently, when the slider ends, there is a really prominent sound in music that is really good for a slider, but you leave it alone. Then at 01:17:300, there is another good start for a slider, but you end a slider and made hold note next beat which imo sounds really late. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/6pcBv.png (5) starts at 01:14:787. You can change it a bit imo, but I think the screenshot would follow music much better since it incorporates the whistle sound in the music better. I just follow the piano instead of music.
Seems like okay diff, I like how you added lots of red tick note which I think is good so beginners get some challenge and not just 1/1.
lol I don't like simple rhythm :D
Normal:
AR +1? I think the balance will fit better so Easy AR4 Normal AR6 Hard AR8. AR5 is fit.
00:40:389 (7) - Hmm, maybe move this somewhere else? Might be confusing for beginner.
01:37:405 (3,1) - overlap doesn't look nice imo. it doesn't matter
01:38:662 (1) - Spacing also looks little off. fixed
01:41:489 (7) - NC? done
01:39:290 (2,3,4,5) - imo might be confusing. You stack 1/2 and then you also unstack 1/2 close together. I think beginners would click too fast or too slow. Maybe either make them all stack or make them all unstack. I make them all stack.
01:41:803 (8,9,10,11) - ^? unstack all 1/2 or stack all 1/2? ^
01:44:316 (2,3,4,5,2,3) - ^? ^
01:52:169 (1,2) - imo I think http://puu.sh/6pdue.png would follow much better since the speed up sound starts at 01:52:484. fixed
02:23:583 (9,1) - Swap NC? I feel like if you NC at (1), it might make beginners think "wtf is happening here! why is this different?!!?!" "Why is color different?" no.I think it will make beginners think"wtf it is so cool!"
Seems very high note density, perhaps removing some notes and adding more sliders might help? I will change most of the circles to sliders

Hard:
Tick rate 2? Idk why different tick rate. I don't like tr2
00:51:227 (4,7) - Not a very nice looking overlap. fixed
01:09:761 (1,1,1) - Remove NC? Idk why you added them, it feels natural with 01:09:290 (1,2,3) - combo. no.The rhythm is changed and I want to remind player.
01:11:018 (2) - Add nc instead?
01:12:274 (1) - Remove NC? It would look like this which still seems very natural NCing http://puu.sh/6pdUD.png no.The music is changed at here.
01:19:813 (1,1,1) - Remove NC like earlier? ^
01:21:070 (7) - Add NC?
01:22:955 (1) - Remove NC
01:23:583 (4) - Add NC
01:24:840 (1) - Remove NC? it will look like this http://puu.sh/6pe3f.png. It will make this NCing look natural and consistent with earlier I add some and remove some NC.
02:20:442 (4) - I think NC here will be nice since it follows new part of melody. done
02:23:583 (1,2) - Swap NC? (1) is still mapped to the same melody as 02:22:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no.(1) end is in a new part.

Insane:
OD+1? I think streamy maps should usually be more accurate.
00:44:459 (3,5) - Overlap doesn't look too nice, it doesn't seem like 00:44:302 (2,4) is following the same pattern, so I think the pattern doesn't match. Maybe remove overlap? fixed
00:50:114 (7,8) - remove overlap? no.It is fit.
01:04:721 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why NC 2 times 01:07:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and then only NC 1 time? I suggest remove NCs at 01:05:035 (1,1) unless there is a good reason to keep nc fixed
01:15:716 (1) - I suggest remove NC. I do not believe you need NC here. The more you NC the higher the drain. (A map with HP5 and 100 NC drains faster than HP5 with 40 NC for example) no.the stream distance increase and I use NC to remind player.
01:27:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - lol 1/8 sliders so cruel. kinda like gypsy tronic. lol
02:00:009 (9) - NC here fits more since it starts whole new stanza. no.NC is the same as the other parts.
02:00:480 (1) - Remove NC if you follow ^
02:09:119 (1,1) - Remove NC? no
02:20:428 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Hmm, NC is okay but maybe I would prefer NC at 02:20:428 (1) - 02:21:370 (1) - 02:21:998 (1) 02:29:223 (1,1) - Remove NC? I like NC every part.
Sometimes your stream NC isn't really consistent so idk what is your reasoning for putting NC in stream sometimes and then not putting NC in stream sometimes.
Thank you! :)
When I posted last time, network was lag and my explain was all lost so I explain again... :?
Raging Bull
Why tick rate 2 for normal/easy then?
Topic Starter
G S X

Raging Bull wrote:

Why tick rate 2 for normal/easy then?
I want to make them a bit harder.
Mei
from pm request
因为是设备过去所以就仔细了摸了一下
结果发现自己果然蒟蒻,暂时只摸了another,以后慢慢补上.-.
顺便说下我不太擅长挑错,基本上都是从我的叫幅度上去看这张图如何能变得更好,如果与你的思路有冲突是很正常的并不一定要按照我的思路来(不过我的思路都会给上一定的跌势啦

[Another]


  • 00:27:339 (1) - 两次ctrl+< 对于我来说比较顺(也有可能是我异于常人的flow在作怪。。

    00:29:381 (3,4,5,6) - 我的感觉是,做的时候这种地方应该有意识的做成一组,前面的1,2是一组这样。嘛具体来就是滑条2,3之间应该是个大跳,3·4·5·6应该是同样形状并且之间是小间距这种感觉。全部是大跳我感觉会很生硬,大小跳结合会更加舒服(当然也有可能是我打不了这个这bpm的心理在作怪。。。

    00:31:894 (3,4,5,6) - ^,后面还有kiai部分都有类似的问题可以注意一下

    00:33:150 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个地方的节奏换成(长滑条可以减速
    这个节奏可能会漏音但是00:33:621 这个音我觉得并不明显,而借着减速滑条可以更加完美的表现音乐

    00:35:820 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方的排版建议

    00:36:606 (4,5,6) - 建议等间距

    00:43:674 (4,5) - note和滑条头上加whistle

    00:44:773 (4,5) - ^

    00:44:145 (1,2,3) - 这里应该小间距,类似这样

    00:45:401 (1,2,3) - ^

    00:47:129 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个串感觉没做出来啊。。。我打的时候以为是等ds的,应该把ds变化改的明显一点,比如从0.7~0.2

    00:58:438 (3,1) - note移到x3400 y136,然后把滑条ctrl+>两次之后叠在note上

    01:04:093 (2,3,4,5) - 走2,3,5,4或者2,4,3,5会比较好

    01:05:977 (3) - 刚好用01:06:292 (4) - 的形状做个对称啊

    01:07:862 (1,2,3,4) - 用这个梗比较合适

    01:08:490 (1) - 感觉这个滑条应该加速

    01:16:501 (3,4) - ctrl+g

    01:17:915 (1,2,1,2,1) - 慢放听我感觉这里应该是串

    01:22:312 (1,2) - 不好打,用这个

    01:24:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我的建议是用和01:23:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 一样的节奏,但是第二段用比第一段大的ds,第三段用比第二段大的ds

    01:28:595 从这一段开始应该不要放跳了,建议把滑条和note弄得紧密一点,也会给人紧张的气氛(呃就像暴风雨前的宁静这样>.>

    01:36:134 (1,2,3) - 虽然没有特别好的原因,我感觉这里是1/3比较好

    01:38:648 (1,2,3,4) - 建议走2,1,3,4

    01:48:700 加个到 01:49:485 的转盘

    01:52:312 (2) - 复制1并且ctrl;+>2次,移到x424 y228

    01:51:684 (8) - ctrl+g

    01:54:826 (1,3) - 换一下nc

    02:00:323 (11) - whistle

    02:02:836 (7) - ^

    02:05:349 (4,5) - note和滑条头whistle

    02:06:449 (4,5) - ^

    02:07:862 (5,7,8) - ^

    02:08:805 (1) - 去掉whitle或者找个别的音效

    02:13:360 (2) - 用1的形状旋转180度后滑条尾叠在02:12:888 (4) - 上,顺便3的尾巴叠在2的头上

    02:17:915 (2,3) - 2,3叠起来再放在1的左下方一些

    02:19:171 (7,1) - 换成慢速的长滑条

    02:23:726 (1,2,3,4) - 4个滑条逐渐降低速度

    02:28:281 (6,7) - 6去掉whistle7加上

    02:28:909 (1) - 去掉whistle或者换音效

    02:29:852 (1,1) - 这个滑条我建议你换成3/4长的并且在最后加个note,让02:30:480 (1) - 和那个note重叠,大概是这样

    02:28:909 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个串的减速不太明显,也是建议换成0.8~0.2这种变化大一点的
等我摸完在射你<.<
加油~
Topic Starter
G S X

Mei wrote:

from pm request
因为是设备过去所以就仔细了摸了一下
结果发现自己果然蒟蒻,暂时只摸了another,以后慢慢补上.-.
顺便说下我不太擅长挑错,基本上都是从我的叫幅度上去看这张图如何能变得更好,如果与你的思路有冲突是很正常的并不一定要按照我的思路来(不过我的思路都会给上一定的跌势啦

[Another]


  • 00:27:339 (1) - 两次ctrl+< 对于我来说比较顺(也有可能是我异于常人的flow在作怪。。 233这里我还是觉得保持原样比较好

    00:29:381 (3,4,5,6) - 我的感觉是,做的时候这种地方应该有意识的做成一组,前面的1,2是一组这样。嘛具体来就是滑条2,3之间应该是个大跳,3·4·5·6应该是同样形状并且之间是小间距这种感觉。全部是大跳我感觉会很生硬,大小跳结合会更加舒服(当然也有可能是我打不了这个这bpm的心理在作怪。。。 在我自己感觉看来这一段都是大跳比较好 因为音高都差不多 而且吧我不太喜欢一大段重复

    00:31:894 (3,4,5,6) - ^,后面还有kiai部分都有类似的问题可以注意一下

    00:33:150 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个地方的节奏换成(长滑条可以减速
    这个节奏可能会漏音但是00:33:621 这个音我觉得并不明显,而借着减速滑条可以更加完美的表现音乐 相反 我觉得那个音很明显 而且两个短滑条我感觉太overmap了

    00:35:820 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方的排版建议
    这里保持原样 因为那梗我其他地方用过了..

    00:36:606 (4,5,6) - 建议等间距 感觉这种打起来顺一点

    00:43:674 (4,5) - note和滑条头上加whistle 这里的Whistle跟的是音乐不是鼓点 而且我打算只跟音乐不跟鼓点了

    00:44:773 (4,5) - ^

    00:44:145 (1,2,3) - 这里应该小间距,类似这样
    弄成长滑条了

    00:45:401 (1,2,3) - ^

    00:47:129 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个串感觉没做出来啊。。。我打的时候以为是等ds的,应该把ds变化改的明显一点,比如从0.7~0.2 试了一下 这样子感觉打起来怪怪的

    00:58:438 (3,1) - note移到x3400 y136,然后把滑条ctrl+>两次之后叠在note上 改了感觉不好

    01:04:093 (2,3,4,5) - 走2,3,5,4或者2,4,3,5会比较好 走了2 4 3 5

    01:05:977 (3) - 刚好用01:06:292 (4) - 的形状做个对称啊 我用01:06:606 (6) - 做的对称..

    01:07:862 (1,2,3,4) - 用这个梗比较合适
    no 我觉得我这个梗更能表现出那种感觉

    01:08:490 (1) - 感觉这个滑条应该加速 感觉不用加速

    01:16:501 (3,4) - ctrl+g done

    01:17:915 (1,2,1,2,1) - 慢放听我感觉这里应该是串 没有 我跟的钢琴

    01:22:312 (1,2) - 不好打,用这个
    也不好打啊...

    01:24:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我的建议是用和01:23:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 一样的节奏,但是第二段用比第一段大的ds,第三段用比第二段大的ds 感觉我这种打的比较爽啊

    01:28:595 从这一段开始应该不要放跳了,建议把滑条和note弄得紧密一点,也会给人紧张的气氛(呃就像暴风雨前的宁静这样>.> 这里我的感觉是如果弄得太紧密反而会变得过于简单 慢速滑条+跳更能给人一种紧张的气氛

    01:36:134 (1,2,3) - 虽然没有特别好的原因,我感觉这里是1/3比较好 1/3感觉很怪

    01:38:648 (1,2,3,4) - 建议走2,1,3,4 喜欢原来这种

    01:48:700 加个到 01:49:485 的转盘 喜欢原来那种停一下突然加速的感觉

    01:52:312 (2) - 复制1并且ctrl;+>2次,移到x424 y228 不好 这样太跳了 音乐还没那么激动

    01:51:684 (8) - ctrl+g 这样flow不好

    01:54:826 (1,3) - 换一下nc 不 之前那里也没换

    02:00:323 (11) - whistle 不 这里相对来说音高并没有前两个高

    02:02:836 (7) - ^ ^

    02:05:349 (4,5) - note和滑条头whistle 弄成了各种长滑条

    02:06:449 (4,5) - ^ ^

    02:07:862 (5,7,8) - ^ ^

    02:08:805 (1) - 去掉whitle或者找个别的音效 done

    02:13:360 (2) - 用1的形状旋转180度后滑条尾叠在02:12:888 (4) - 上,顺便3的尾巴叠在2的头上

    02:17:915 (2,3) - 2,3叠起来再放在1的左下方一些 这样太难读了啊...

    02:19:171 (7,1) - 换成慢速的长滑条 还是感觉不太好

    02:23:726 (1,2,3,4) - 4个滑条逐渐降低速度 我本来还打算加速的..减速体现不了那种感觉啊

    02:28:281 (6,7) - 6去掉whistle7加上 原来的节奏好点

    02:28:909 (1) - 去掉whistle或者换音效 都去掉了

    02:29:852 (1,1) - 这个滑条我建议你换成3/4长的并且在最后加个note,让02:30:480 (1) - 和那个note重叠,大概是这样
    我觉得这个滑条的尾巴并不算是重音 而且我喜欢这种甩的感觉

    02:28:909 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个串的减速不太明显,也是建议换成0.8~0.2这种变化大一点的 还是同上 变化太大了感觉比较怪也比较难读
等我摸完在射你<.<
加油~
谢mod!虽说似乎没怎么改动但还是谢谢你这么认真的给我mod啊OvO
Hollow Wings
as ur req
no kd
General
个人觉得combo color蓝色和绿色很刺眼,换成褐色之类的和bg相称的感觉更好些
Another:
先说nc:你有些长连打十几个都不nc一下,有些连打四个就nc,我还是建议你全图都统一nc方式比较好
整张图看了下我觉得吧就我的水平还真摸不出什么,虽然有点违和感不过我想应该够rank了
Hyper:
感觉还不错的说
01:04:250 (2,6) - stack
Standard:
00:54:040 (3,4) - 低难度里我不推荐放这种直角排版
01:53:569 (4,5) - 相互blanket,之类的还很多
其他都好
Beginner:
fine
居然是翡翠鸟,gowww灵压还不够么
good luck
Kinomi
Beginner
低难度NC两个长白线一次比较好
00:46:501 (6) - 这种时间间隔不明节奏不明确的单点超坑爹,最好用滑条换,还有很多红白的地方其实可以滑条一下带过去,这样节奏和排版就不会空了
01:00:607 莫名break
01:04:721 (2,3) - 低难度这样摆不好,最好还是顺flow,或者填圆弧滑条开口
01:12:260 (1) - 没包好
01:17:600 (2) - 有点难看,包好点
02:13:045 (4) - 和02:10:532 (2) - 靠太近,AR低同时出现的瞬间很难看
02:20:428 (1) - 转盘有点莫名,这里无视杂乱的音还是之前那样下节奏就好

Standard
01:16:344 这边要填note吧,节奏有点乱了
01:22:312 (5) - 出现的瞬间被前面的01:21:056 (3) - 压到,比较难看
02:08:805 (1) - 避免这种排列。。有点乱,特别是滑条尾遮了一下。。

Hyper
高难度一条长白线一次NC比较普遍=。=
00:43:831 (4) - 弧度不太好不是很好看
00:44:459 (6,7) - 这种的。。复制粘贴形状弄成一样比较好
01:08:805 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - NC比较莫名,然后后面两个滑条用3/4比较奇怪,一般3/4不单独用的。。,最好还是拉到红线和白线上
01:27:653 (1) - 没必要NC。。
01:45:559 (4) - 没包好
01:47:129 感觉应该填上

Another
NC最好重新排一下
00:30:951 (5,6,1) - 比如这个,5、6和1不是同一种颜色让这个来回遮挡变难读了
01:36:763 (4,5,6,7,1) - 摆歪了
02:20:428 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 还不如用1/4滑条放三连最后一个。。前面类似的也可以这样=。=
02:29:223 (1) - 其实没啥必要4个NC一下。。

挺好的,没啥好说的
大概是我比较懒:3
Topic Starter
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tsukuyomi

Tsukuyomi wrote:

Beginner
低难度NC两个长白线一次比较好
00:46:501 (6) - 这种时间间隔不明节奏不明确的单点超坑爹,最好用滑条换,还有很多红白的地方其实可以滑条一下带过去,这样节奏和排版就不会空了 换成一条滑条
01:00:607 莫名break 感觉低难度还是多一点break比较好
01:04:721 (2,3) - 低难度这样摆不好,最好还是顺flow,或者填圆弧滑条开口 还是不太懂怎么改 把直滑条改了个方向
01:12:260 (1) - 没包好 fixed
01:17:600 (2) - 有点难看,包好点 仔细包了一下 虽然好像还是有点难看
02:13:045 (4) - 和02:10:532 (2) - 靠太近,AR低同时出现的瞬间很难看 拉开了
02:20:428 (1) - 转盘有点莫名,这里无视杂乱的音还是之前那样下节奏就好 个人感觉不算太莫名 这里用转盘对新手而言比较能体现出那种杂乱的感觉

Standard
01:16:344 这边要填note吧,节奏有点乱了 done
01:22:312 (5) - 出现的瞬间被前面的01:21:056 (3) - 压到,比较难看 改了
02:08:805 (1) - 避免这种排列。。有点乱,特别是滑条尾遮了一下。。想拉个转盘但是怕时间太短啊...想不到怎么改

Hyper
高难度一条长白线一次NC比较普遍=。=
00:43:831 (4) - 弧度不太好不是很好看 小改了一下 最不会拉滑条了..
00:44:459 (6,7) - 这种的。。复制粘贴形状弄成一样比较好
01:08:805 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - NC比较莫名,然后后面两个滑条用3/4比较奇怪,一般3/4不单独用的。。,最好还是拉到红线和白线上 想不到更好的做法 NC是为了提醒节奏的变化 拉到红线和白线上节奏不对啊
01:27:653 (1) - 没必要NC。。 因为我感觉这个跟前后的节奏都不同所以我加了NC
01:45:559 (4) - 没包好 fixed
01:47:129 感觉应该填上 done

Another
NC最好重新排一下
00:30:951 (5,6,1) - 比如这个,5、6和1不是同一种颜色让这个来回遮挡变难读了 好吧 重排了一下NC
01:36:763 (4,5,6,7,1) - 摆歪了 其实我一开始是故意的 但你们人人都吐槽这个我就改了吧
02:20:428 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 还不如用1/4滑条放三连最后一个。。前面类似的也可以这样=。= 不太喜欢这样..
02:29:223 (1) - 其实没啥必要4个NC一下。。 个人爱好啦

挺好的,没啥好说的
大概是我比较懒:3 不要这么懒呀

HW''

Hollow Wings wrote:

as ur req
no kd 手滑看到mod第一反应给kd 按下去之后才看到你这句..
General
个人觉得combo color蓝色和绿色很刺眼,换成褐色之类的和bg相称的感觉更好些 那些蓝色和绿色的其实是视频里面的颜色 我还没加视频而已
Another:
先说nc:你有些长连打十几个都不nc一下,有些连打四个就nc,我还是建议你全图都统一nc方式比较好 没有啊 十几个不NC那些节奏没太大变化 四个就NC的间距会变小
整张图看了下我觉得吧就我的水平还真摸不出什么,虽然有点违和感不过我想应该够rank了 违和感么..
Hyper:
感觉还不错的说
01:04:250 (2,6) - stack done
Standard:
00:54:040 (3,4) - 低难度里我不推荐放这种直角排版 想不到其他排版 其实就是懒得改
01:53:569 (4,5) - 相互blanket,之类的还很多 改了
其他都好
Beginner:
fine
居然是翡翠鸟,gowww灵压还不够么 就是觉得gowww的翡翠鸟太屎了我才决定自己做一张的
good luck
谢谢mod!
Fushimi Rio
卧槽啊 过年突然想起差个mod没做 太对不起了 赶快补上 希望赶得上春晚
图的版本有点旧 更新不太能 见谅

From queue

[General]

[Easy]
不同难度建议break相同

00:27:667 (1) - 以前有个bat建议我在这里不要把大白线大重音搞成slider尾 我也建议这么搞 至于那个bat是谁 呃
00:37:719 (1) - ^
01:59:395 (1) - ^
00:31:279 (2,3) - 3放这边有点蠢 另外 easy既然放不出东西 是不是slider搞点变化比较好 像00:37:719 (1,2,1,2) - 这样的对称梗就不错
00:43:374 (3) - nc
00:57:196 (4,4) - 分别上移/下移1格

总而言之可能是我看的beginner少 虽然大部分部分也不错 但我感觉和其他难度差的有点多

[Normal]

00:36:763 (3) - 我觉得应该从这里开始 加个折返
01:58:438 (3) - ^
02:22:470 (6) - nc

[Hard]
略难

01:11:018 (2) - 和后面做个blaket,不要做这种一半是的
01:41:175 (1) - x388 y122


[Insane]
绿化先锋你好

00:37:705 (9) - 放在左边 打的时候再往左折一下是不是更好一些
00:40:532 (1) - ctrl+g? 好像绕一个圈
00:46:344 (6,7) - ctrl+g ^
00:48:072 (1) - 因为缩了1/4这个slider显得不够长 去掉note拉长它?
02:24:354 (3) - 改成向上弯?这看起来怪丑 而且也不算好玩

我从easy开始看的 感觉越看越觉得好 总的来说高难度很不错 低难度的话可能是经验不足 还需要加强一下 加油!新年快乐!
Topic Starter
G S X

Eggache0 wrote:

卧槽啊 过年突然想起差个mod没做 太对不起了 赶快补上 希望赶得上春晚
图的版本有点旧 更新不太能 见谅

From queue

[General]

[Easy]
不同难度建议break相同 只是不想把easy做得太难所以才多弄了一个break啦..

00:27:667 (1) - 以前有个bat建议我在这里不要把大白线大重音搞成slider尾 我也建议这么搞 至于那个bat是谁 呃 这我也明白 只是这个滑条是为了表现出音乐里面的节奏 下面的也一样
00:37:719 (1) - ^
01:59:395 (1) - ^
00:31:279 (2,3) - 3放这边有点蠢 另外 easy既然放不出东西 是不是slider搞点变化比较好 像00:37:719 (1,2,1,2) - 这样的对称梗就不错 好 这里也搞了一个对称梗
00:43:374 (3) - nc 好 另外nc的方式也改了
00:57:196 (4,4) - 分别上移/下移1格

总而言之可能是我看的beginner少 虽然大部分部分也不错 但我感觉和其他难度差的有点多 不会做easy啊 :?

[Normal]

00:36:763 (3) - 我觉得应该从这里开始 加个折返
01:58:438 (3) - ^ ^
02:22:470 (6) - nc

[Hard]
略难 我柑橘我做得挺善良的啊这个hard..

01:11:018 (2) - 和后面做个blaket,不要做这种一半是的 本意是想做blanket的不过手滑了..
01:41:175 (1) - x388 y122


[Insane]
绿化先锋你好

00:37:705 (9) - 放在左边 打的时候再往左折一下是不是更好一些 那样感觉跳的太大了
00:40:532 (1) - ctrl+g? 好像绕一个圈
00:46:344 (6,7) - ctrl+g ^ 这里应该是你还没更新的缘故 这几段类似的都大改了一下
00:48:072 (1) - 因为缩了1/4这个slider显得不够长 去掉note拉长它? 这个note是重音 对我来说感觉这个note不能去掉 所以没改这里
02:24:354 (3) - 改成向上弯?这看起来怪丑 而且也不算好玩 ctrl+j然后位移了一下

我从easy开始看的 感觉越看越觉得好 总的来说高难度很不错 低难度的话可能是经验不足 还需要加强一下 加油!新年快乐!
谢mod!新年快乐! :)
ZZHBOY
来看看o.o

General
最好把standard难度降降至少让官网的icon变成N 不然可能会美丽

Beginner
00:46:187 (4) - 这个可以弄点弧度感觉好看点orz
01:24:511 - 感觉可以在这里放1拍的滑条代替圈啊o.o
02:00:480 (2,4) - 好像遮了点o.o 移开一点点吧
01:04:721 (2,4) - ^ 而且01:06:606 (3) - 的前后ds差的有点多尽可能弄一致吧
没啥o.o

Standard
00:33:621 - 感觉这个音可以不漏啊放个半拍滑条然后滑条头加finish?
01:22:312 (5) - nc?
01:39:747 (4,5) - 我建议这个难度里最好别这么放不然可能美丽 后面类似的也是
02:23:569 (4,1) - 我觉得还是尽量多用滑条代替这种orz

Hyper
01:01:108 (3,4,5) - 感觉这里flow不太舒服 建议把两个圈往两边移o.o
01:09:747 (1,1) - 建议不要乱nc 类似的地方也是
01:49:642 (1) - 不用个滑条代替吗o.o
01:59:381 (1,3) - 交换nc
02:10:061 - 感觉这里可以弄个喷泉之类的啊o.o

Another
00:35:506 (11,12,1) - 感觉这里flow也不是很好你看看能不能改改?
00:36:606 (4,5,6) - ^
01:08:019 (2) - 太远了 嗯
01:18:150 (1) - 这里音乐没音而01:18:072 - 这里有音 感觉有点overmap
01:27:024 (1,2,3,4) - 我觉得这个应该是ex难度里出现的梗不太适合这个难度用了感觉可能会美丽
KIAI部分的节奏还是感觉有点死板orz
还可以吧
嘻嘻
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