Natsu wrote:

HI~ Kyshiro

General:

1. Inconsistency in Countdown Fine and Superior dont have it but the others 2 diffs yes Fixed
2. Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks same here ^ ^

Epic:

1. 00:11:669 (2,3,4,5,6) - uh I dont really like how it flow play kinda forced imo maybe somethink symilar to this can play better: I really like how this plays >:
   
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2. 00:20:240 maybe up the volume to 50 or 55%? fit better the crash in the song there imo also reduce maybe to 20 or 25% here 00:20:412 (If you apply this do in the others diffs too) Sounds good
3. 00:21:269 (4) - just curious why you dont follow the stream? since will ffeel betterif you do imo Would have to redo the whole part then, + I think it's fine as this sound is repeating many times in the song and I've done the same thing there
4. 00:24:526 Im not a big fan of almost hide objects under sliders but maybe just me also maybe you can 00:25:040 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - rearrange this pattern and make it alittle more symetrical? for example: The pattern is symmetric, made a triangle which i rotated by 60 degrees, the pattern is just a bit rotated to the right
   
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5. 00:30:954 I agree with this clap cuz follow the music nicely but what about to remove it from 00:30:869 since it dont follow a sound in music imo Okay
6. 00:34:983 (3) - kinda nazi try to move this to x:120 y:144 it will form a nice triangle with previous beats also will improve the flow and map design imo Okay
7. 00:54:697 (5) - maybe do you want to move this some grids down? almost touch the hp bar It's not touching the HP bar + it wouldn't matter that much if it did
8. 01:01:383 (5) - missing clap Fixed
9. 01:01:726 (7) - the clap sound pretty inconsistent here also you dint add it on the others diffs better remove it? Fixed
10. 01:25:383 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I really dont like how it play also dont look good I understand u are doing symetry with the sliders but what abbout to move the streams to other place or try to stack (2) with some beat in the stream maybe like: This is probably my favourite part in the diff >:
    
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11. 01:55:726 (2) - hue maybe you want to kill me but stack this 01:55:726 (2) - with 01:56:583 (1) - perfect lol fixed

Exquisite:

1. OD -1 feel better spread with the normal diff also feel better for a hard diff imo okay
2. 00:01:726 (1,2) - kinda weird since in the insane diff u started the diff with a slider and here on the hard you start it with 2 beats in my opinion is better to keep consistent and start this diff with a slider too since is more easy to adapt to the rhythm starting with a slider thought fixed
3. 00:13:040 (3,4,5) - It feel like you are following the vocals and feel really nice to clickk that beats but maybe its just me but I listen some vocals in I don't get it
4. 00:13:640 maybe do you want to map it feel nice imo I'd rather not overmap that
5. 00:25:726 (4,1) - I know the distance but since if you look at 00:26:240 (1,2,3) - the distance between then its not the same making it not confortable to play what about to move 00:26:240 (1) - x:176 y:140 to avoid it? By the time the slider appears, the other notes are already gone so it wouldn't be a problem
6. 00:40:812 (4) - move some grids up to avoid it touch 00:40:126 (2) - okay
7. 00:42:526 (5) - a little jump will feel pretty cool here thought nice
8. 00:57:269 (4) - man u will hate me stack this 00:57:269 (4) - with 00:58:640 (3) - perfect fixed
9. 01:09:269 (3) - maybe make this one a little curve so the flow to 4 feel better? like: seems nice, added
   
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10. 02:32:240 (6) - yeah a little jump here will fit pretty cool added

Superior:

1. 00:03:440 (4) - remove whistle in the tail and add it on the head sound better also is consistent with the others diffs Sounds a bit weird
2. 00:08:240 (1,2,3,1) - I like your diff but this part really is painful or play I mean all the overlaps and stuff there maybe you want to rearrange the pattern and make it look more clean? There's not really a way to make this a better pattern without ruining the spacing + I think it's fine
3. 00:15:440 (1) - really nazi but i feel better it on x:62 y:260 since make a better flow with the next slider not much change, but okay
4. 00:16:297 (3,4) - you can improve a little this blanket also impreve the triangle pattern with 00:16:297 (3,4,5) - Okay
5. 02:11:669 (3) - move the last slider point to x:164 y:99 it will look alot better like: Fixed
   
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Fine:

1. 02:19:897 (2,3) - just maybe you want to make 1 single slider here will follow the rhythm better since in your actually way 02:20:669 02:20:754 feel kinda weird that part i dont know how to explain but a single long slider will follow all the sounds there like you did on 02:14:412 (2) - It would feel strange to have the slider extended till after the tripple notes in the music

Pretty cool mapset GL

dkun wrote:

[Exquisite]
00:41:839 (3) - Object end shows unsnap here via AIM.

This set is pretty damn nice. Please poke me for a recheck.

dkun wrote:

Elite Mapper title well deserved.

Irreversible wrote:

gz man

how could this snaperror happen

Ultimate wrote:

Pure Fcking Sex! <3
10/10

Stefan wrote:

cool bump.

Stefan wrote:

cool bump.