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EnakoRin
[General]
  1. combo color肯定得改,配上这个BG看着花眼
[Normal]
  1. 01:07:534 - 冗余的绿线
  2. 01:19:534 - 冗余的绿线
[Hard]
  1. Hard明显太难,需要降低难度,否则和Normal跨度太大
  2. 00:00:867 (1,2,3) - 间距没对
  3. 00:10:534 (4,1) - 调整一下,把这两个的开头重叠在一起
  4. 01:05:534 - 加一个Circle
  5. 01:17:867 (1,1) - 时间间隔短,不容易接上,建议删掉后者
  6. 01:37:868 (4,7) - 叠好
[Insane]
  1. 前一段打着感觉就是没什么节奏感 段和段之前空得有点多,建议插入一些note
  2. 叠好
  3. 00:20:701 (6,1) - 叠好
  4. 00:36:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这一截完全可以跳
这图处于一个不上不下的位置 你说rank,标准都符合,但是打着没啥感觉,最后评分肯定不高。多学学别人的图,把排列啊slider花式啊啥的学点过来
还有就是slider的细节,有些没有flow好,这个只有慢慢来了
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EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren
- TiRaFiouS -
直接來騙KD了~V~

[Normal]
01:17:534 (1) - DS 0.63[/list]
00:01:534 (2) - 縮短到00:02:034 -
00:02:20 - 加circle[/list]
00:20:701 (1) - 這個轉盤好像有點短
00:03:534 (2) - 加長到00:04:534 -
00:13:367 (4) - change to slider or 00:13:867 - add a note
00:33:201 (2,4) - can remove
01:55:534 (1,2,3) - 這是跟音樂的OAO?

先這麼多=3=
Topic Starter
smallboat

Piyoko_9796 wrote:

直接來騙KD了~V~

[Normal]
01:17:534 (1) - DS 0.63[/list] 一律調成0.8x了
00:01:534 (2) - 縮短到00:02:034 - fixed
00:02:20 - 加circle[/list] 這邊沒音
00:20:701 (1) - 這個轉盤好像有點短 fixed
00:03:534 (2) - 加長到00:04:534 - 恩..先在201看看吧
00:13:367 (4) - change to slider or 00:13:867 - add a note fixed
00:33:201 (2,4) - can remove fixed
01:55:534 (1,2,3) - 這是跟音樂的OAO? 恩阿

先這麼多=3=

謝謝嚕!
Topic Starter
smallboat

Weiren wrote:

[General]
  1. combo color肯定得改,配上这个BG看着花眼
OK 我再想想哪些顏色比較適合

[Normal]
  1. 01:07:534 - 冗余的绿线 fixed
  2. 01:19:534 - 冗余的绿线fixed


[Hard]
  1. Hard明显太难,需要降低难度,否则和Normal跨度太大 fixed
  2. 00:00:867 (1,2,3) - 间距没对 fixed
  3. 00:10:534 (4,1) - 调整一下,把这两个的开头重叠在一起 fixed
  4. 01:05:534 - 加一个Circle fixed 加了長條
  5. 01:17:867 (1,1) - 时间间隔短,不容易接上,建议删掉后者 fixed已刪
  6. 01:37:868 (4,7) - 叠好
fixed

[Insane]
  1. 前一段打着感觉就是没什么节奏感 段和段之前空得有点多,建议插入一些note 是 會加多一點
  2. 叠好 fixed
  3. 00:20:701 (6,1) - 叠好 fixed
  4. 00:36:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这一截完全可以跳

這邊可以跳? 昨天看了看 還不知怎放..今晚再來請教姥爷 甘溫

这图处于一个不上不下的位置 你说rank,标准都符合,但是打着没啥感觉,最后评分肯定不高。多学学别人的图,把排列啊slider花式啊啥的学点过来 OK, 最近都看satellite 和 長喜.泡泡的map 神麻婆就是不一樣..
还有就是slider的细节,有些没有flow好,这个只有慢慢来了
----------flow..我這也蠻苦手..會努力的..已不知被多少人教 :o
EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren
謝謝Weiren 希望你那首中文歌都9.5以上星星評價喔! :)

下午左右再up.. :idea:
Awaken
Mod from your request
怒用繁體輸入法


  • [General]
  1. Tag里去掉IOSYS和shining
  2. 滑條聲音好難聽 建議刪掉

    [Normal]
  3. 00:00:867 建議紅線和這裡的綠線音量改成5% 然後在00:05:867這裡插一根綠線音量調高
  4. 01:26:201 (5,7) - 對稱
  5. 01:32:867 (3) - 這裡最好順著滑條的軌跡走
  6. 01:38:201 (3,5) - 這點nazi要控制好 stack throughly

    感覺這個diff美觀性不夠

    [Hard]
  7. AR+1
  8. 00:04:367 (6,7,8,3,4,5) - 我覺得這三個單點都最好不要stack :P opinion
  9. 00:11:534 (1) - stack with 00:10:534 (4)的尾巴 不要在意中英結合這些細節
  10. 00:26:201 (4,5,6) - stack nazi
  11. 00:36:867 (3,4,5,6,7) - 五角星沒擺好 建議ctrl+shift+D來畫
  12. 01:08:867 (3,4,1) - 這個最好還是不要這麼擺 不美觀 兩個circle換成slider也好啊
  13. 01:37:868 (4,7) - stack nazi
  14. 01:42:534 (2,4) - ^
  15. 01:49:367 (5,6,7,8,9) - 建議擺幾何圖形
  16. 01:51:534 (1,3) - stack nazi

    節奏太寬鬆了些?

    [Insane]
    瑪德我趕著去晚修啊
  17. AR+1
  18. 00:06:867 (3,4,5,6) - 一看就沒blanket好
  19. 00:12:201 (1,2,3,4) - 間距不等你在逗我?
  20. 00:24:367 (3,1) - stack nazi
  21. 00:28:201 (1,1,1) - NC莫名 後面也是
  22. 00:32:117 連打應該連到這裡才對阿
  23. 01:30:784 ^
  24. 01:41:451 ^
  25. 01:11:534 (2,3) - stack nazi
  26. 01:12:534 (5,6) - ^
  27. 01:18:867 (3,5,8) - 這幾個滑條其實可以搞個SV漸變
  28. 01:22:534 (5,2) - stack nazi
感覺跟vocal太多了點 insane的話大部份應該跟鼓點讓節奏滿滿的才好

Good Luck
Topic Starter
smallboat

Awaken wrote:

Mod from your request
怒用繁體輸入法 這是好現象!


  • [General]
  1. Tag里去掉IOSYS和shining fixed
  2. 滑條聲音好難聽 建議刪掉 是說音效嗎? 那我考慮一下..

    [Normal]
  3. 00:00:867 建議紅線和這裡的綠線音量改成5% 然後在00:05:867這裡插一根綠線音量調高 fixed
  4. 01:26:201 (5,7) - 對稱 fixed 應該是這樣?
  5. 01:32:867 (3) - 這裡最好順著滑條的軌跡走 fixed
  6. 01:38:201 (3,5) - 這點nazi要控制好 stack throughly fixed

    感覺這個diff美觀性不夠 我也覺得 我會多看別人NM圖的..

    [Hard]
  7. AR+1
  8. 00:04:367 (6,7,8,3,4,5) - 我覺得這三個單點都最好不要stack :P opinion fixed
  9. 00:11:534 (1) - stack with 00:10:534 (4)的尾巴 不要在意中英結合這些細節 fixed
  10. 00:26:201 (4,5,6) - stack nazi fixed
  11. 00:36:867 (3,4,5,6,7) - 五角星沒擺好 建議ctrl+shift+D來畫 這個不會..教一下
  12. 01:08:867 (3,4,1) - 這個最好還是不要這麼擺 不美觀 兩個circle換成slider也好啊 fixed
  13. 01:37:868 (4,7) - stack nazi fixed
  14. 01:42:534 (2,4) - ^ fixed
  15. 01:49:367 (5,6,7,8,9) - 建議擺幾何圖形 考慮
  16. 01:51:534 (1,3) - stack nazi fixed

    節奏太寬鬆了些? 已新增一些了

    [Insane]
    瑪德我趕著去晚修啊 讀書最重要
  17. AR+1 fixed
  18. 00:06:867 (3,4,5,6) - 一看就沒blanket好 fixed
  19. 00:12:201 (1,2,3,4) - 間距不等你在逗我?fixed 沒看到
  20. 00:24:367 (3,1) - stack nazi fixed
  21. 00:28:201 (1,1,1) - NC莫名 後面也是 fixed 啥時有那麼多雜色(??
  22. 00:32:117 連打應該連到這裡才對阿 fixed
  23. 01:30:784 ^ fixed
  24. 01:41:451 ^ fixed
  25. 01:11:534 (2,3) - stack nazi fixed
  26. 01:12:534 (5,6) - ^ fixed
  27. 01:18:867 (3,5,8) - 這幾個滑條其實可以搞個SV漸變 好的 我試試
  28. 01:22:534 (5,2) - stack nazi fixed


感覺跟vocal太多了點 insane的話大部份應該跟鼓點讓節奏滿滿的才好 OK 我會想辦法

Good Luck
感謝MOD :idea:
Koiyuki
As your request

[General]
Shining Grace;
音效没弄么?那我也就不弄音效了(其实我也不擅长弄音效);
00:38:201 - 第一段kiai这里结束吧;
如果弄喷泉效果的话,00:38:534 - 00:38:617 - 类似这种地方加一个短kiai就可以;
01:45:201 - 后面这段kiai建议取消掉,改成↑那样比较好;
[Normal]
hp-1;
开始的一段红线起红线结束的滑条听上去节奏很奇怪啊,我觉得没必要跟vocal,改拉到白线还是拉到白线的好;
00:43:867 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看;
00:46:534 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 太重复了……如果是这一段就算了,后面的梗也是重复的,这样让人打起来很无聊,虽然只是normal对吧但也不能过于忽视啊._.你说猴不猴啊?;
01:26:201 (5) - NC?;
01:28:867 (9) - ^;
01:30:201 (1) - remove NC;
01:45:201 (1,2,3) - 这里也是和前面一样,梗重复,而且都是横平竖直;
01:55:534 (1,2,3) - 这里这么摆节奏挺怪的容易miss,这样如何?
[Hard]
sv有点快,改到1.2;
感觉你hard里面跳放得有点多,虽然是小跳来着……;
00:46:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一样是重复梗,既然都是摆满1/2了,尝试点新的花样呢?;
01:00:534 (5,6,7,8) - 间距;
01:40:201 (2,3) - 不在一条直线上;
别的看上去还好,排版有点生硬,就是感觉几个几何形状摆的也不是很规则,仔细找找吧._.;
[Insane]
ar+1;
看你note的密度比较稀,hp-1;
不知道这么多×1.1sv有什么用啊……;
00:07:367 (6) - 没包好;
00:11:534 (7) - NC;
00:17:201 (3,4,5,6,7) - 排列不好看;
00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 改成,至于怎么摆,我下面的随手摆的,不一定要采用:

00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 总感觉有点偷懒;
00:38:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 这一段还是摆的挺好的._.;
00:46:201 - ~ 00:56:534 - 舒缓段落note摆近点比较好,不要节奏舒缓的地方都在跳>.<;
01:24:868 (1,2,1,2,1) - 以及后面一大段 NC变化太快了,然后再往后NC变化又慢了,考虑改改吧;
01:38:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 这一段的排列也要改改~;
01:41:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 跟着节奏不适合这么摆;
01:57:034 (3) - 这个还是改了吧,后面的白线也有鼓点的。

总的来说呢,就是排列很生硬,直拉的很多,梗的单调性也会降低map的游戏性=v=
好好加油哦~
如果以后有需要的话还可以找我remod一下
还有的话QQ上说了,这里就不再赘述了
good luck >.<
Azails
Mod from your request

[General]
音效略單調;
建議去滑條聲,不好聽


[Normal]


  1. 整體spacing略擠了點;w;
  2. 00:02:701 (1) - spacing有誤,建議將他排出來吧
  3. 00:32:867 (1,2,3,4) - kiai段落感覺不必要空拍
  4. 這diff看著開頭挺flow,進了kiai後給人一種僵直單調的感覺,slider下點功夫的話會改善很多 :3
[Hard]


  1. 00:36:034 (5) - 加note,節奏上空拍太過突兀
  2. 00:36:701 (3) - ^
  3. 00:38:701 (2) - ^
  4. 00:39:367 (3) - ^
  5. hard好些了,可以再稍微大膽些的作梗,過多重覆的排列多少有點乏味

[Insane]


  1. 00:11:534 (7) - NC
  2. 00:46:534 (1) ~ 00:56:534 (1) - 這一段的擺放可以再好好考慮一下
  3. 01:16:201 (1) - remove NC
  4. 01:19:534 (5) - 變速NC
  5. 01:20:367 (8) - ^
  6. 01:24:867 (1) - remove NC,下的太雜了
  7. 01:25:534 (1) - ^
  8. 01:26:867 (1) - ^
  9. 01:27:534 (1) - ^ , 後面類似節拍我就省略了
暫時先這樣吧 見諒我彈性看圖;w;
有其他的問題可以再PM我
Good Luck
Xinchii
拖了拖的mod

[Normal]
  1. 00:19:534(5) - 這邊slider的方向可以往右一點,看起來有點擠
[Hard]
  1. 00:08:067(3) - slider從這邊開始感覺和一些
  2. 00:49:367 - 覺得這邊作一個slider到00:49:367-會好一點,那邊的人聲不跟感覺怪怪
[Insane]
  1. 這Diff的排列感覺有點硬硬的,建議多參考些排列梗搭配一些Jump會好一些
  2. 00:03:201(2,3,4) - 排出弧度會好看一點
  3. 00:16:867(2) - 這邊建議作一個1/1 slider到00:17:201-會比較和歌聲
  4. 00:32:534(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 作點造型會比較好玩,連續7個anti-jump有點無趣030
  5. 00:44:867(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 建議這段連打排出一點造型,像是作一點弧度或是其他什麼的
  6. 01:23:534 - 01:28:534 - 嗯.....我直接標這一整區是想說,這一區有些地方可以作點jump之類的會比重疊或是1.0x間距好玩一點,呃,也不是不行,只是感覺不像Insane了:O
我真心不會作mod orz

我只會玩.....

說起來你刪掉那個難度感覺比較有趣,加點修改應該會不錯:O
怎麼不要了QAQ
Topic Starter
smallboat

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

As your request

SPOILER
[General]
Shining Grace; fixed
音效没弄么?那我也就不弄音效了(其实我也不擅长弄音效);
00:38:201 - 第一段kiai这里结束吧;fixed
如果弄喷泉效果的话,00:38:534 - 00:38:617 - 类似这种地方加一个短kiai就可以 fixed
01:45:201 - 后面这段kiai建议取消掉,改成↑那样比较好 fixed
[Normal]
hp-1 fixed
开始的一段红线起红线结束的滑条听上去节奏很奇怪啊,我觉得没必要跟vocal,改拉到白线还是拉到白线的好fixed
00:43:867 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看fixed
00:46:534 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 太重复了……如果是这一段就算了,后面的梗也是重复的,这样让人打起来很无聊,虽然只是normal对吧但也不能过于忽视啊._.你说猴不猴啊?fixed
01:26:201 (5) - NC?fixed
01:28:867 (9) - ^fixed
01:30:201 (1) - remove NCfixed
01:45:201 (1,2,3) - 这里也是和前面一样,梗重复,而且都是横平竖直fixed
01:55:534 (1,2,3) - 这里这么摆节奏挺怪的容易miss,这样如何?
fixed
[Hard]
sv有点快,改到1.2不了
感觉你hard里面跳放得有点多,虽然是小跳来着……;fixed 修復一些
00:46:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一样是重复梗,既然都是摆满1/2了,尝试点新的花样呢?fixed 沒有像之前一樣了
01:00:534 (5,6,7,8) - 间距fixed
01:40:201 (2,3) - 不在一条直线上fixed
别的看上去还好,排版有点生硬,就是感觉几个几何形状摆的也不是很规则,仔细找找吧._.fixed
[Insane]
ar+1fixed
看你note的密度比较稀,hp-1fixed
不知道这么多×1.1sv有什么用啊……偶爾來點變速?
00:07:367 (6) - 没包好fixed
00:11:534 (7) - NCfixed
00:17:201 (3,4,5,6,7) - 排列不好看fixed
00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 改成fixed,至于怎么摆,我下面的随手摆的,不一定要采用:

00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 总感觉有点偷懒fixed
00:38:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 这一段还是摆的挺好的._.謝謝 不過還是有fixed一些
00:46:201 - ~ 00:56:534 - 舒缓段落note摆近点比较好,不要节奏舒缓的地方都在跳>.<fixed
01:24:868 (1,2,1,2,1) - 以及后面一大段 NC变化太快了,然后再往后NC变化又慢了,考虑改改吧fixed
01:38:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 这一段的排列也要改改~fixed
01:41:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 跟着节奏不适合这么摆fixed
01:57:034 (3) - 这个还是改了吧,后面的白线也有鼓点的。fixed

总的来说呢,就是排列很生硬,直拉的很多,梗的单调性也会降低map的游戏性=v= Ok 那我會多看圖的
好好加油哦~謝謝 我會努力
如果以后有需要的话还可以找我remod一下 Ok 會不時找你請教
还有的话QQ上说了,这里就不再赘述了
good luck >.<祝你也是GL!

Azathozkula wrote:

Mod from your request

SPOILER
[General]
音效略單調; 音效還在選 不好意思 找不到合適音效
建議去滑條聲,不好聽 fixed 都5%了


[Normal]


  1. 整體spacing略擠了點;w; fixed
  2. 00:02:701 (1) - spacing有誤,建議將他排出來吧 fixed
  3. 00:32:867 (1,2,3,4) - kiai段落感覺不必要空拍 fixed
  4. 這diff看著開頭挺flow,進了kiai後給人一種僵直單調的感覺,slider下點功夫的話會改善很多 :3fixed了一些
[Hard]


  1. 00:36:034 (5) - 加note,節奏上空拍太過突兀 fixed
  2. 00:36:701 (3) - ^ fixed
  3. 00:38:701 (2) - ^ fixed
  4. 00:39:367 (3) - ^ fixed
  5. hard好些了,可以再稍微大膽些的作梗,過多重覆的排列多少有點乏味 fixed了一些

[Insane]


  1. 00:11:534 (7) - NC fixed
  2. 00:46:534 (1) ~ 00:56:534 (1) - 這一段的擺放可以再好好考慮一下fixed一些
  3. 01:16:201 (1) - remove NC fixed
  4. 01:19:534 (5) - 變速NC fixed
  5. 01:20:367 (8) - ^ fixed
  6. 01:24:867 (1) - remove NC,下的太雜了 fixed
  7. 01:25:534 (1) - ^fixed
  8. 01:26:867 (1) - ^fixed
  9. 01:27:534 (1) - ^ , 後面類似節拍我就省略了fixed
暫時先這樣吧 見諒我彈性看圖;w; 沒關係 有空會找你試圖~
有其他的問題可以再PM我
Good Luck3Q

leon1341414 wrote:

拖了拖的mod

SPOILER
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:534(5) - 這邊slider的方向可以往右一點,看起來有點擠fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:08:067(3) - slider從這邊開始感覺和一些 字打一半..?
  2. 00:49:367 - 覺得這邊作一個slider到00:49:367-會好一點,那邊的人聲不跟感覺怪怪fixed
[Insane]
  1. 這Diff的排列感覺有點硬硬的,建議多參考些排列梗搭配一些Jump會好一些 fixed
  2. 00:03:201(2,3,4) - 排出弧度會好看一點 fixed
  3. 00:16:867(2) - 這邊建議作一個1/1 slider到00:17:201-會比較和歌聲 fixed
  4. 00:32:534(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 作點造型會比較好玩,連續7個anti-jump有點無趣030 fixed
  5. 00:44:867(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 建議這段連打排出一點造型,像是作一點弧度或是其他什麼的 fixed
  6. 01:23:534 - 01:28:534 - 嗯.....我直接標這一整區是想說,這一區有些地方可以作點jump之類的會比重疊或是1.0x間距好玩一點,呃,也不是不行,只是感覺不像Insane了:Ofixed了一些
我真心不會作mod orz 沒關係 +1SP也好?

我只會玩.....

說起來你刪掉那個難度感覺比較有趣,加點修改應該會不錯:O
怎麼不要了QAQ感覺Ano是進階的人在做的所以就刪了..Insane沒什麼大問題再說吧..
謝謝 Minakami Yuki . Azathozkula . leon1341414的修改 :)
Angelina_Rocca
骗个KD越来越难了啊喂!
Yuki
打不过去,摸不了
Insane
很艰难的pass了,感觉也摸不了
前面看你的音量用的5%, 10%,15%
跨度太小了,听不出来分别。
推荐10% 25% 40%
01:08:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 没看明白到底跟的vocal还是鼓点啊。。
00:13:367 (1,2) - 还是觉得一开始声音轻柔的时候排列“温柔”一些比较好。这个还是有点突然了吧
00:57:367 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不好看。。。

Hard
音量同in
00:44:867 (1,2) - 这俩,为什么不一样啊
0 0说好的亲兄弟呢QAQ
Topic Starter
smallboat

Angelina_Rocca wrote:

骗个KD越来越难了啊喂!
Yuki
打不过去,摸不了
Insane
很艰难的pass了,感觉也摸不了
前面看你的音量用的5%, 10%,15%
跨度太小了,听不出来分别。
推荐10% 25% 40% fixed
01:08:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 没看明白到底跟的vocal还是鼓点啊。。都有耶 想了下 還是不變好了
00:13:367 (1,2) - 还是觉得一开始声音轻柔的时候排列“温柔”一些比较好。这个还是有点突然了吧 ^ 要突然才叫Insane?
00:57:367 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不好看。。。 fixed

Hard
音量同in fixed
00:44:867 (1,2) - 这俩,为什么不一样啊 fixed 也是 弄個對稱了
0 0说好的亲兄弟呢QAQ
謝謝Rocca :)
ts8zs
最近水平下降……随便摸两句._.
为什么感觉BG被纵向压过
[Insane]
00:02:701 (6,7) - 时间互换
00:10:867 (5) - ctrl+G
00:29:201 (7) - 像这种直接从上面拷贝过来然后翻转比较好,后面类似的也是._.
00:56:867 - 声太小了 还有最后那个5% 别的diff也注意下
01:36:868 (1,2) - 顺着6的话 → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018687
01:48:867 (8) - 顺下去
总体来看还有粗糙的感觉,修一下
[Yuki]
00:50:200 (1) -Ctrl+G
01:15:533 (1,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018697
01:23:533 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:30:866 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:57:366 (1) - NC 还有就是建议这里移开点._.
Koiyuki

ts8zs wrote:

[Yuki]
00:50:200 (1) -Ctrl+G ok
01:15:533 (1,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018697 no
01:23:533 (1) - Ctrl+G ok
01:30:866 (3) - Ctrl+G 我故意的
01:57:366 (1) - NC 还有就是建议这里移开点._. 移开了 不过不NC
Thanks for modding
Kayano
  1. Red - Unrankable
  2. Purple - Highly recommended
  3. Black - You'd better fixed
  4. Gray - Just suggestion
  • General
  1. Normal的kiai end没有压到白线上 请往后拉2ms
  2. 所有难度:00:05:867 - 从这里开始Volume可以放大一点到15左右

    Normal
  3. 00:11:534 - 这里就更应该放大了 放大到30左右吧
  4. 01:28:201 - clap?
  5. 01:41:868 (3) - missing clap
  6. 01:42:201 (1,2) - 开头clap或者连01:43:535 (3) - 一起改成结尾clap

    Hard
  7. 00:38:867 (1) - NC move to 00:39:534 (3) - ?
  8. 00:39:367 - add a note

    Insane
  9. 00:32:867 - 从这里开始到下一条绿线的Volume过小 提高到55/60
  10. 01:36:701 (6,1) - flow太差
  11. 01:40:701 - Volume请提高到至少40最好60

    Yuki
  12. 00:09:701 (5,6,7) - 这里不妨也手动堆叠?
  13. 00:23:534 (1) - whistle
  14. 00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这样的连打很糟糕 换成普通的那种

    音效做的不错了 所以我没摸出什么出来
    Nice map :) Good luck~
Hollow Wings
as ur req
[Yuki]
七十多个unsnap。。。打开aimod瞬间我就惊呆了,后来发现居然是因为bpm不一样,这图bpm居然是180.003,搞毛。。。改完以后全部物件都snap一下=。=|||,似乎song setup里很多都没统一比如letterbox和tag什么的,一点点都和别的diff弄一样。。。

  1. 00:39:367 (5) - nc?
  2. 00:40:784 (5) - 这个note删掉,打起来感觉更好,删的话建议00:40:867 (6) - 加nc
  3. 01:58:032 个人建议这里还是放一个note比较好,转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍
挺不错的diff啊,我蛮喜欢的
[Insane]
kiai unsnap是闹哪样。。。调整一下绿线的位置。还有一个obj也没snap,fix一下。以后最好上传前自己先打开aimod看一下warning,一般硬伤的话modder会给你指出,不过能自己先搞定的还是先搞定吧 :3
  1. 00:03:534 (9,1) - nc移动一下
  2. 00:05:867 (1,2) - 这里我也建议把nc移动一下
  3. 00:09:367 (4,5,1,2,3) - 可以做个圆弧轨迹
  4. 00:21:701 (1) - 这里的音其实是1/6,改成1/6折返吧,然后最好stack在之前滑条的尾下
  5. 00:30:784 (3) - 前后ds差的太多太明显了,微调一下
  6. 00:31:534 (8) - nc
  7. 00:37:367 (7) - ^
  8. 00:39:534 (8) - ^
  9. 00:43:534 (7,1) - nc 移动一下
  10. 00:48:867 (8) - nc
  11. 01:02:867 (4,5) - 这ds跟之前的滑条比起来感觉太小了,把5再放远一点
  12. 01:09:201 (5) - 略高,看看能不能放下来一点
  13. 01:10:201 (9) - 中间红线那拍建议还是map一下,这个长滑条可以改成3单点,单点+滑条或者折返都行
  14. 01:17:367 这里可以放个连打
  15. 01:22:367 (4,5) - 这个ds还是大一点比较好,把5放远
  16. 01:28:201 (3,1) - 以及 01:30:701 (4,1) - 的变ds其实不太推荐,要么stack在尾巴上要么放远,或者处理成00:45:867 (13,1) - 的样子感觉也不错
  17. 01:36:034 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我建议这五个的位置不变,顺序改成34562
  18. 01:40:867 (8) - nc
  19. 01:46:200 (7) - nc?似乎你是因为梗的原因不nc,这个你自己看吧,后同
  20. 01:55:201 (13,1,2) - 13全部换成连打,12的鼓点不变滑条跟着电子音走比较好。。。那串连打太长了,在01:54:868 (9) - 的地方nc吧,其实形状也可以搞个曲线什么的
nc的话一般放在大段小节的重音开头,或者分割梗,虽然提前放也可以不过一般来说常规的放比较好,而且大多数情况下数字在10以内比较靠谱(除非长连打或者特殊梗的需要)
排版方面因为我有强迫症所以我觉得有些地方还可以加强一点比如00:28:701 (4,5,6) - 这种可以搞成圆弧什么的233
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:867 (4,1) - 我有强迫症所以blanket this perfect pls orz
  2. 00:45:534 (1,1) - 这个ds必须搞大点。。。你在重音后变小可以,但是这里强烈建议还是和之前一样
  3. 01:41:534 (3,1) - 这里果然还是stack搞搞好,不然看上去有点乱
  4. 01:43:201 (3,4,1) - 4的前后ds我强烈建议统一,跳的太大player不好掌握空一拍的节奏
  5. 01:57:867 (2,1) - 转盘头改成个note,转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍
其实滑条那么多,blanket啊symm啊可以多弄一点的说
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:534 (2,3,1) - 这三个完全可以互相blanket的说,2和1stack,3弄成圆弧吧?多个control point感觉没意义啊orz
  2. 00:13:367 (2,1) - 这里也是可以blanket,后面我就不说了,只是为了好看而已不是什么大问题
  3. 01:58:034 (1) - 和hard里的处理方式一样
嗯,kiai也没snap,fix一下

我还是第一次看见bpm都不一样的233,传图过程中出什么问题了么,gd的运输安全要注意啊噗。。。

good luck
ts8zs
我居然忘了开not_ai_mod……一定是win8的错._.
Koiyuki

Hollow Wings wrote:

as ur req
[Yuki]
七十多个unsnap。。。打开aimod瞬间我就惊呆了,后来发现居然是因为bpm不一样,这图bpm居然是180.003,搞毛。。。改完以后全部物件都snap一下=。=|||,似乎song setup里很多都没统一比如letterbox和tag什么的,一点点都和别的diff弄一样。。。
我也不知道怎么回事噗噗噗噗噗,已经改了
  1. 00:39:367 (5) - nc? ok
  2. 00:40:784 (5) - 这个note删掉,打起来感觉更好,删的话建议00:40:867 (6) - 加nc ok
  3. 01:58:032 个人建议这里还是放一个note比较好,转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍 ok
挺不错的diff啊,我蛮喜欢的 thanks~

我还是第一次看见bpm都不一样的233,传图过程中出什么问题了么,gd的运输安全要注意啊噗。。。噗噗噗噗 摆乌龙了哈哈哈
Topic Starter
smallboat
ts8zs

ts8zs wrote:

最近水平下降……随便摸两句._. 謝謝來摸
为什么感觉BG被纵向压过 我圖片壓縮不太拿手 所以就這樣了._. 後面再想辦法..
[Insane]
00:02:701 (6,7) - 时间互换 fixed
00:10:867 (5) - ctrl+G fixed
00:29:201 (7) - 像这种直接从上面拷贝过来然后翻转比较好,后面类似的也是._. fixed
00:56:867 - 声太小了 还有最后那个5% 别的diff也注意下 fixed
01:36:868 (1,2) - 顺着6的话 → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018687 fixed
01:48:867 (8) - 顺下去 fixed
总体来看还有粗糙的感觉,修一下 Ok,這個難度錯的蠻大我會設法改改(找神modder改改?)
謝謝包子神的mod。 :)

ts8zs wrote:

我居然忘了开not_ai_mod……一定是win8的错._.
win8沒用過呢..感覺不怎好用..介面太複雜..


OniJAM

OniJAM wrote:

  1. Red - Unrankable
  2. Purple - Highly recommended
  3. Black - You'd better fixed
  4. Gray - Just suggestion
  • General
  1. Normal的kiai end没有压到白线上 请往后拉2ms fixed
  2. 所有难度:00:05:867 - 从这里开始Volume可以放大一点到15左右 fixed

    Normal
  3. 00:11:534 - 这里就更应该放大了 放大到30左右吧 fixed
  4. 01:28:201 - clap? fixed
  5. 01:41:868 (3) - missing clap fixed
  6. 01:42:201 (1,2) - 开头clap或者连01:43:535 (3) - 一起改成结尾clap 改成3個結尾

    Hard
  7. 00:38:867 (1) - NC move to 00:39:534 (3) - ? fixed
  8. 00:39:367 - add a note fixed

    Insane
  9. 00:32:867 - 从这里开始到下一条绿线的Volume过小 提高到55/60 fixed
  10. 01:36:701 (6,1) - flow太差 又改了些
  11. 01:40:701 - Volume请提高到至少40最好60 fixed


    音效做的不错了 所以我没摸出什么出来 謝謝啦 但有些還沒放完全 8-)
    Nice map :) Good luck~ 謝,第一次有這樣說 :(

Hollow Wings

Hollow Wings wrote:

as ur req
[Yuki]
七十多个unsnap。。。打开aimod瞬间我就惊呆了,后来发现居然是因为bpm不一样,这图bpm居然是180.003,搞毛。。。改完以后全部物件都snap一下=。=|||,似乎song setup里很多都没统一比如letterbox和tag什么的,一点点都和别的diff弄一样。。。

  1. 00:39:367 (5) - nc?
  2. 00:40:784 (5) - 这个note删掉,打起来感觉更好,删的话建议00:40:867 (6) - 加nc
  3. 01:58:032 个人建议这里还是放一个note比较好,转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍
挺不错的diff啊,我蛮喜欢的
[Insane]
kiai unsnap是闹哪样。。。调整一下绿线的位置。还有一个obj也没snap,fix一下。以后最好上传前自己先打开aimod看一下warning,一般硬伤的话modder会给你指出,不过能自己先搞定的还是先搞定吧 :3 OK :)
  1. 00:03:534 (9,1) - nc移动一下 fixed
  2. 00:05:867 (1,2) - 这里我也建议把nc移动一下 fixed
  3. 00:09:367 (4,5,1,2,3) - 可以做个圆弧轨迹 fixed
  4. 00:21:701 (1) - 这里的音其实是1/6,改成1/6折返吧,然后最好stack在之前滑条的尾下 fixed
  5. 00:30:784 (3) - 前后ds差的太多太明显了,微调一下 fixed
  6. 00:31:534 (8) - nc fixed
  7. 00:37:367 (7) - ^ fixed
  8. 00:39:534 (8) - ^ fixed
  9. 00:43:534 (7,1) - nc 移动一下 fixed
  10. 00:48:867 (8) - nc fixed
  11. 01:02:867 (4,5) - 这ds跟之前的滑条比起来感觉太小了,把5再放远一点 fixed
  12. 01:09:201 (5) - 略高,看看能不能放下来一点 fixed
  13. 01:10:201 (9) - 中间红线那拍建议还是map一下,这个长滑条可以改成3单点,单点+滑条或者折返都行 fixed 改成3單點
  14. 01:17:367 这里可以放个连打 fixed
  15. 01:22:367 (4,5) - 这个ds还是大一点比较好,把5放远 fixed
  16. 01:28:201 (3,1) - 以及 01:30:701 (4,1) - 的变ds其实不太推荐,要么stack在尾巴上要么放远,或者处理成00:45:867 (13,1) - 的样子感觉也不错 fixed 都放在尾巴堆疊了
  17. 01:36:034 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我建议这五个的位置不变,顺序改成34562 看不太懂..不過我有改了些
  18. 01:40:867 (8) - nc fixed
  19. 01:46:200 (7) - nc?似乎你是因为梗的原因不nc,这个你自己看吧,后同 fixed 後面也改了
  20. 01:55:201 (13,1,2) - 13全部换成连打,12的鼓点不变滑条跟着电子音走比较好。。。那串连打太长了,在01:54:868 (9) - 的地方nc吧,其实形状也可以搞个曲线什么的 12那句我看不懂等下問你..其餘fixed 曲線等會修

nc的话一般放在大段小节的重音开头,或者分割梗,虽然提前放也可以不过一般来说常规的放比较好,而且大多数情况下数字在10以内比较靠谱(除非长连打或者特殊梗的需要) Ok..好..重音..瞭解 我試試 :)
排版方面因为我有强迫症所以我觉得有些地方还可以加强一点比如00:28:701 (4,5,6) - 这种可以搞成圆弧什么的233 我也覺得不太美觀 謝謝你的指點
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:867 (4,1) - 我有强迫症所以blanket this perfect pls orz fixed
  2. 00:45:534 (1,1) - 这个ds必须搞大点。。。你在重音后变小可以,但是这里强烈建议还是和之前一样 fixed
  3. 01:41:534 (3,1) - 这里果然还是stack搞搞好,不然看上去有点乱 fixed
  4. 01:43:201 (3,4,1) - 4的前后ds我强烈建议统一,跳的太大player不好掌握空一拍的节奏 fixed
  5. 01:57:867 (2,1) - 转盘头改成个note,转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍 fixed
其实滑条那么多,blanket啊symm啊可以多弄一点的说symm不太懂 其餘fixed了
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:534 (2,3,1) - 这三个完全可以互相blanket的说,2和1stack,3弄成圆弧吧?多个control point感觉没意义啊orz fixed
  2. 00:13:367 (2,1) - 这里也是可以blanket,后面我就不说了,只是为了好看而已不是什么大问题 fixed
  3. 01:58:034 (1) - 和hard里的处理方式一样fixed
嗯,kiai也没snap,fix一下fixed

我还是第一次看见bpm都不一样的233,传图过程中出什么问题了么,gd的运输安全要注意啊噗。。。 哈哈 會注意的(尷尬

good luck
Flower
m4m

General


  1. 这是180?你们能不能不要做得跟160一样

  2. Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.
    请修改所有5%的部分

  3. 这bg太花了 note颜色又跟bg一样简直第一pc就想给1分
  4. 我还是先删了bg再mod

Insane


  1. 00:21:701 (1) - 这里背景是1/4,考虑一下
  2. 00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 或许可以考虑改成soft+whistle
  3. 00:43:534 (7,1) - 交换NC
  4. 01:09:201 (5) - 部分被血条挡住 请考虑
  5. 01:12:201 (4,7) - stack?
  6. 01:31:367 - 01:31:451 - 或许可以加note
  7. 01:52:867 (1) - 建议要么stack或者放的更近,要么改成一个跳

Yuki


  1. 01:07:201 (1) - 这里有个音 考虑下要不要改成串
  2. 01:13:201 - 建议加note然后改成跳
  3. 01:27:868 (2) - 不舒服 不如改成1/2然后01:28:117 - 加note
  4. 没啥问题

Hard


  1. 00:42:867 (3,4) - 跳得不好 不如不跳 4可以放到x:272 y:63
  2. 00:44:867 (1,1) - 可以左右完全对称 然后00:45:534 (1) - 去NC
  3. 00:51:534 (8,1) - 交换NC
  4. 01:06:867 (6,7,8,9,1) - AR7下这个五角星跳基本是吃食 请考虑修改
  5. 01:20:867 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 离转盘太近了感觉不是很好 其实可以像Normal一样留一个break
  6. 01:33:201 (4,5,6) - 跳的莫名 也是AR7下往往会看成摆的不好的1/1 不如不跳
  7. 01:46:200 (4) - NC
  8. 01:49:867 (2) - 这不合曲,建议改成1/2+note

Normal


  1. 没啥问题


Good luck~
- Jelly -
Hi~

Yuki
HP-1或者OD+1
00:45:201 (5,1) - 这里太容易误读..
00:58:534 (3,4) - 改成滑条
01:03:368 (4) - 和01:03:534 (1) - 对称一下。移动到451 238
01:05:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个梗打起来不舒服。。
01:06:868 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - 5连应该从01:07:034开始
01:18:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 音效做个渐变

Insane
00:12:367 (3,4) - 换一下位置
01:28:868 (1,2,3,4) - 做二分音,
01:41:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这六边形可以用Alt+S摆。更好看。。
01:52:867 (1) - 和2stuck
怎么感觉这才是最高难度 ._.

Hard
00:27:534 (1) - DS感觉没必要变化。。
01:28:201 (7) - 这里可做三连。做滑条感觉漏音。

Normal
00:44:867 (3) - 再做一次折返?

感觉简直是瞎mod QAQ (捂脸,
小船神麻婆不要介意 |||||
Koiyuki

Flower wrote:

Yuki


  1. 01:07:201 (1) - 这里有个音 考虑下要不要改成串 结合下面的modder说的 改了
  2. 01:13:201 - 建议加note然后改成跳 我考虑下
  3. 01:27:868 (2) - 不舒服 不如改成1/2然后01:28:117 - 加note ok
  4. 没啥问题 花花这么说我很高兴0.0
另外花花你的那个160的消除能玩?

- Jelly - wrote:

Yuki
HP-1或者OD+1 nope
00:45:201 (5,1) - 这里太容易误读.. 多花1pc就可以读懂 不改
00:58:534 (3,4) - 改成滑条 nope
01:03:368 (4) - 和01:03:534 (1) - 对称一下。移动到451 238 fixed
01:05:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个梗打起来不舒服。。 hehe
01:06:868 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - 5连应该从01:07:034开始 改了
01:18:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 音效做个渐变

OniJAM wrote:

Yuki
00:09:701 (5,6,7) - 这里不妨也手动堆叠?
00:23:534 (1) - whistle
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这样的连打很糟糕 换成普通的那种 不好,我就想坑人家acc一把
EmingK
小船早._.
来得有点晚QAQ

. 一开始听这曲子我以为耳机坏了..

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.
Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore
[General]
Tags里单写一个Project干啥,在source里提到就不用写了。倒是可以写这个:
プロジェクト ウタヒメ
作曲/编曲:ARM,作词:夕野ヨシミ,Vocal:miko,可以加进tags中。(来源:http://www.giza10.com/soft/utahime/#3 )
Tags中的[Minakami Yuki]应改为[Minakami_Yuki],所有的username中间不要有空格,需要用下划线代替。
似乎ranking criteria不让用与BG颜色相近的combo color?谁写的这么条规则这么蠢,我就提这么一句QAQ
怎么感觉BG被纵向压过呢。。如果你有原图的话,建议用Photoshop的裁剪工具剪成相应像素大小,不要直接缩放。网上找的图全是这个比例。。

[Normal]
00:04:701 (3,1) - 没包好
00:12:201 (1) - 遮挡起来不好看,建议顺时针转120度
00:30:534 (1,2) - 没包好,关了grid把(1)的中间控制点往左移
00:42:535 (3) - 尾部控制点移到x258 y208

[Hard]
00:17:867 (5) - 认真一点遮好?
01:02:867 (3) - ^
01:52:201 (4) - ^
01:35:534 (3,4,5,1) - 叠歪了
01:49:867 (2) - ;w;在直线上加红点是要闹哪样

[Insane]
00:06:201 (2,6) - 叠歪了
00:10:867 (5,1,3) - ^
00:50:201 (4,1) - ^
00:58:867 (7,1) - ^
01:10:201 (9,10,11,1) - ^
00:26:034 (4,1) - 没包好
01:20:534 (2) - 还是做成直线好看
01:54:034 (6) - 换个地方摆吧,和(1)的间距有点坑

[Yuki]
00:35:034 (3,4) - 没叠好?
01:11:368 (2,4) - ^
01:10:534 - 加个circle?
01:47:201 (3,4) - 哦草 这个坑死了 后面那个也是

Good luck!
Koiyuki

EmingK wrote:

[Yuki]
00:35:034 (3,4) - 没叠好? 你看错了
01:11:368 (2,4) - ^ 这个你没看错 fixed
01:10:534 - 加个circle?
01:47:201 (3,4) - 哦草 这个坑死了 后面那个也是 蛤蛤蛤蛤[/notice]

Good luck!
改的地方
打开osu文件吧hitobjects后面的全部复制成下面的就可以了
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349,335,2701,6,0,P|321:347|291:351,1,60.0000025123357,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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211,127,4534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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237,346,15868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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163,248,17534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
163,248,17701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,197,17868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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436,280,18868,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,276,19201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,272,19534,2,0,B|500:204|488:120|488:120|408:149,1,240.000010049343,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,79,20368,2,0,L|327:99,1,60.0000025123357
256,192,20701,12,0,21868,0:0:0:0:
80,108,22201,5,2,0:0:0:0:
157,88,22368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,81,22534,2,0,L|234:68,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,88,22868,5,2,0:0:0:0:
233,67,23034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
391,71,23201,2,0,L|312:81,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,145,23534,5,2,0:0:0:0:
294,168,23618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,175,23701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,171,23784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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449,161,23951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
483,182,24034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
505,214,24118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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150,247,25534,2,0,P|128:206|92:184,1,80.000000298023
21,199,25868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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313,72,27868,2,0,P|273:74|235:64,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
smallboat
Flower

Flower wrote:

m4m

General


  1. 这是180?你们能不能不要做得跟160一样 沒辦法因為是渣圖 :o 剛才又改了些

  2. Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.
    请修改所有5%的部分 修了最低到15%

  3. 这bg太花了 note颜色又跟bg一样简直第一pc就想给1分 :o 抱歉 我想想要設什麼顏色..別給一分呀;w;
  4. 我还是先删了bg再mod抱歉 我combo顏色會改 謝謝mod

Insane


  1. 00:21:701 (1) - 这里背景是1/4,考虑一下 fixed
  2. 00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 或许可以考虑改成soft+whistle fixed
  3. 00:43:534 (7,1) - 交换NC fixed
  4. 01:09:201 (5) - 部分被血条挡住 请考虑 fixed
  5. 01:12:201 (4,7) - stack? fixed
  6. 01:31:367 - 01:31:451 - 或许可以加note fixed
  7. 01:52:867 (1) - 建议要么stack或者放的更近,要么改成一个跳 fixed

Yuki


  1. 01:07:201 (1) - 这里有个音 考虑下要不要改成串
  2. 01:13:201 - 建议加note然后改成跳
  3. 01:27:868 (2) - 不舒服 不如改成1/2然后01:28:117 - 加note
  4. 没啥问题

Hard


  1. 00:42:867 (3,4) - 跳得不好 不如不跳 4可以放到x:272 y:63 fixed
  2. 00:44:867 (1,1) - 可以左右完全对称 然后00:45:534 (1) - 去NC fixed
  3. 00:51:534 (8,1) - 交换NC fixed
  4. 01:06:867 (6,7,8,9,1) - AR7下这个五角星跳基本是吃食 请考虑修改 fixed 已改成連續note
  5. 01:20:867 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 离转盘太近了感觉不是很好 其实可以像Normal一样留一个break fixed 已設成break
  6. 01:33:201 (4,5,6) - 跳的莫名 也是AR7下往往会看成摆的不好的1/1 不如不跳 fixed 也是設成連續note
  7. 01:46:200 (4) - NC fixed
  8. 01:49:867 (2) - 这不合曲,建议改成1/2+note fixed 設成前面一長條+圈

Normal


  1. 没啥问题 3Q


Good luck~謝謝花花神麻婆 :)


- Jelly -

- Jelly - wrote:

Hi~

[Yuki]
HP-1或者OD+1
00:45:201 (5,1) - 这里太容易误读..
00:58:534 (3,4) - 改成滑条
01:03:368 (4) - 和01:03:534 (1) - 对称一下。移动到451 238
01:05:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个梗打起来不舒服。。
01:06:868 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - 5连应该从01:07:034开始
01:18:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 音效做个渐变

[Insane]
00:12:367 (3,4) - 换一下位置 fixed
01:28:868 (1,2,3,4) - 做二分音, fixed
01:41:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这六边形可以用Alt+S摆。更好看。。 fixed 等下up
01:52:867 (1) - 和2stuck fixed 是stack吧..
怎么感觉这才是最高难度 ._. 哈哈..

[Hard]
00:27:534 (1) - DS感觉没必要变化。。 fixed
01:28:201 (7) - 这里可做三连。做滑条感觉漏音。 fixed

[Normal]
00:44:867 (3) - 再做一次折返? fixed

感觉简直是瞎mod QAQ (捂脸, 還沒Ranked一張不神啦.. :roll:
小船神麻婆不要介意 ||||| 不會

謝謝傑利神觸的mod :)


EmingK

EmingK wrote:

小船早._.
来得有点晚QAQ 沒關係@_@

. 一开始听这曲子我以为耳机坏了.. 這首歌蠻特殊..

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.
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[General]
Tags里单写一个Project干啥,在source里提到就不用写了。倒是可以写这个:
プロジェクト ウタヒメ fixed
作曲/编曲:ARM,作词:夕野ヨシミ,Vocal:miko,可以加进tags中。(来源:http://www.giza10.com/soft/utahime/#3 ) fixed
Tags中的[Minakami Yuki]应改为[Minakami_Yuki],所有的username中间不要有空格,需要用下划线代替。 fixed
似乎ranking criteria不让用与BG颜色相近的combo color?谁写的这么条规则这么蠢,我就提这么一句QAQ 花花說顏色相近不太好耶.. :o
怎么感觉BG被纵向压过呢。。如果你有原图的话,建议用Photoshop的裁剪工具剪成相应像素大小,不要直接缩放。网上找的图全是这个比例。。 還好吧這兩張..

[Normal]
00:04:701 (3,1) - 没包好 fixed
00:12:201 (1) - 遮挡起来不好看,建议顺时针转120度 fixed
00:30:534 (1,2) - 没包好,关了grid把(1)的中间控制点往左移 fixed
00:42:535 (3) - 尾部控制点移到x258 y208 fixed

[Hard]
00:17:867 (5) - 认真一点遮好? fixed
01:02:867 (3) - ^ fixed
01:52:201 (4) - ^ fixed
01:35:534 (3,4,5,1) - 叠歪了 fixed_
01:49:867 (2) - ;w;在直线上加红点是要闹哪样 咦 沒紅點呀 :?:

[Insane]
00:06:201 (2,6) - 叠歪了 fixed
00:10:867 (5,1,3) - ^ fixed
00:50:201 (4,1) - ^ fixed
00:58:867 (7,1) - ^ fixed
01:10:201 (9,10,11,1) - ^ fixed
00:26:034 (4,1) - 没包好 fixed
01:20:534 (2) - 还是做成直线好看
01:54:034 (6) - 换个地方摆吧,和(1)的间距有点坑

[Yuki]
00:35:034 (3,4) - 没叠好?
01:11:368 (2,4) - ^
01:10:534 - 加个circle?
01:47:201 (3,4) - 哦草 这个坑死了 后面那个也是

Good luck!謝謝E小K :)

Melt

Melt wrote:

Hi

[General]
  1. combo colour应该是从背景取色?那combo colour3那个绿色是怎么回事orz,试试这个:(196,136,255)
神麻婆果然很會選顏色

[Normal]
  1. 为什么要用tick2呢orz 想讓分數多點..不過改1了
  2. 00:12:201 (1) - 个人觉得这样放要好些 fixed
  3. 00:15:367 (2) - 往左移一点for blanket? fixed
  4. 00:34:201 (3) - 既然2copy1那3也copy1好了 fixed
  5. 01:17:867 (1) - 感觉还是结束于01:20:867比较好 fixed
[Hard]
  1. 感觉最开始的这一段sv稍微大了点 fixed 改0.75 修了好久這邊.... :o
  2. 00:12:201 (2,3) - 没叠好(逃 fixed (抓
  3. 00:15:867 (4) - 试试往下做弧呢 fixed
  4. 00:16:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 其实感觉很多小地方都可以调整一下让这个diff更整洁,比如这里 fixed
  5. 00:49:201 (3,1) - 因为这里不是高潮所以就harddiff来说感觉合成一个sldier fixed
  6. 01:02:867 (3) - 这种要遮就遮好0.0 fixed
  7. 01:10:201 (8,1) - swap nc fixed
  8. 01:35:534 (3,4,5) - 没叠好 fixed
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:701 (5) - 个人感觉往下放点比较好 fixed
  2. 00:15:034 (1,2,3,4) - 同样是细节上改动一下 fixed
  3. 00:24:867 (1) - 1这个角度实在是orz fixed 我剛剛還以為這是原圖想說沒啥奇怪..結果回到自己的..咦 :o?
  4. 00:44:534 (5,6) - 这个音乐的话5,6的ds再大点会更好 fixed
  5. 01:31:451 (2) - 感觉这个有点多余o.o fixed 已刪
  6. 01:56:867 (3) - 感觉应该叠在2下面 fixed


[Yuki]
  1. 00:10:534 (8) - nc for consistence
  2. 00:16:868 (1) - 可以复制00:16:201(4)
  3. 00:20:701 (1) - 这里可以上一个note然后让spin从00:20:784开始
  4. 00:35:034 (3,4) - 稍微一动一下让3,4叠在00:33:201(2)上,移动前面的也行
  5. 01:07:118 (9) - 听了很多遍都觉得这个note删掉比较好orz
  6. 01:30:868 (3) - 感觉有点鬼畜,试试3ctrl+g?
  7. 01:40:868 (1,2) - 没叠好
:3 謝謝妹兒特的mod
Melt
Hi

[General]
  1. combo colour应该是从背景取色?那combo colour3那个绿色是怎么回事orz,试试这个:(196,136,255)
[Normal]
  1. 为什么要用tick2呢orz
  2. 00:12:201 (1) - 个人觉得这样放要好些
  3. 00:15:367 (2) - 往左移一点for blanket?
  4. 00:34:201 (3) - 既然2copy1那3也copy1好了
  5. 01:17:867 (1) - 感觉还是结束于01:20:867比较好
[Hard]
  1. 感觉最开始的这一段sv稍微大了点
  2. 00:12:201 (2,3) - 没叠好(逃
  3. 00:15:867 (4) - 试试往下做弧呢
  4. 00:16:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 其实感觉很多小地方都可以调整一下让这个diff更整洁,比如这里
  5. 00:49:201 (3,1) - 因为这里不是高潮所以就harddiff来说感觉合成一个sldier
  6. 01:02:867 (3) - 这种要遮就遮好0.0
  7. 01:10:201 (8,1) - swap nc
  8. 01:35:534 (3,4,5) - 没叠好
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:701 (5) - 个人感觉往下放点比较好
  2. 00:15:034 (1,2,3,4) - 同样是细节上改动一下
  3. 00:24:867 (1) - 1这个角度实在是orz
  4. 00:44:534 (5,6) - 这个音乐的话5,6的ds再大点会更好
  5. 01:31:451 (2) - 感觉这个有点多余o.o
  6. 01:56:867 (3) - 感觉应该叠在2下面
[Yuki]
  1. 00:10:534 (8) - nc for consistence
  2. 00:16:868 (1) - 可以复制00:16:201(4)
  3. 00:20:701 (1) - 这里可以上一个note然后让spin从00:20:784开始
  4. 00:35:034 (3,4) - 稍微一动一下让3,4叠在00:33:201(2)上,移动前面的也行
  5. 01:07:118 (9) - 听了很多遍都觉得这个note删掉比较好orz
  6. 01:30:868 (3) - 感觉有点鬼畜,试试3ctrl+g?
  7. 01:40:868 (1,2) - 没叠好
:3
Koiyuki

Melt wrote:

[Yuki]
  1. 00:10:534 (8) - nc for consistence
  2. 00:16:868 (1) - 可以复制00:16:201(4) 本来就是复制的不过ctrl+G了一下
  3. 00:20:701 (1) - 这里可以上一个note然后让spin从00:20:784开始
  4. 00:35:034 (3,4) - 稍微一动一下让3,4叠在00:33:201(2)上,移动前面的也行
  5. 01:07:118 (9) - 听了很多遍都觉得这个note删掉比较好orz nope,听了很多遍确定有鼓点
  6. 01:30:868 (3) - 感觉有点鬼畜,试试3ctrl+g? 我打起来毫无压力,nope
  7. 01:40:868 (1,2) - 没叠好 fixed
至于combo color,如果小船你要改的话,就顺便帮我一起改了吧
sheela
[General]
In the tags of the difficulty [Yuki], it need the same tags as the others difficulty which it has to be is:
プロジェクト プロジェクト ウタヒメ [Minakami_Yuki] Vocal miko
The combo colors in [Yuki] are inconsistent (not the same) as the others which it has to be is:
Combo1 : 192,192,192 
Combo2 : 128,255,255
Combo3 : 18,124,255
Combo4 : 128,204,51

[Normal]
00:05:867 (1) - Remove the new combo and add it to 00:06:201 (2) . It'll sound better.
00:10:534 (1) - Same as 00:05:867 (1) . Remove the new combo and add it to 00:11:534 (2) .
00:18:867 (1) - Maybe you can end the spinner at 00:21:534 so the players might have time to click 00:22:201 (1) .
00:32:534 (3) - Move the circle to x:332 y:188 for a perfect blanket.
00:52:201 (5) - Maybe a new combo here and remove the new combo to 00:53:201 (1) and a new combo to 00:53:534 (2) .
01:26:201 (1) - Move the little square on the slider's body to x:233 y:251, and the last little square on the tail (the end of the slider) to x:152 y:213 so 01:27:534 (3) could fit to the curve.
01:39:534 (5) - Add a new combo and remove the new combo to 01:40:534 (1) .
01:49:201 (3) - Move the second (2nd) little square to x:314 y:255.

[Hard]
00:29:534 (3) - Stack the head of the slider with 00:28:534 (4) .
00:46:867 (3) - Move the slider to one grid to the left.
01:24:201 (3) - Move the last little square on the tail of the slider to x:188 y:144.

[Yuki]
00:05:868 (1) - Remove the new combo and add the new combo to 00:06:201 (2) .
00:59:201 (7) - Try to make the blanket perfect.
01:13:034 (2) - This anti-jump isn't best for the map. Move the circle somewhere at x:272 y:240.

If you have any question on my mod, you can PM me. Good Luck.
Koiyuki

sheela901 wrote:

[General]
In the tags of the difficulty [Yuki], it need the same tags as the others difficulty which it has to be is:
プロジェクト プロジェクト ウタヒメ [Minakami_Yuki] Vocal miko
fixed

[Yuki]
00:05:868 (1) - Remove the new combo and add the new combo to 00:06:201 (2) . Sound Channel changed here, so I use NC, no change
00:59:201 (7) - Try to make the blanket perfect. fixed, because the slider is copyed from 00:56:867 (1) - , make a little change to the two sliders
01:13:034 (2) - This anti-jump isn't best for the map. Move the circle somewhere at x:272 y:240. move to x:276, y:225 instead
thanks!
Loneight
早灣 >w<
M4M.



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是建議改掉
    紅色 是unrankable

[general]

  1. 對00:22:201 - 這個點的kiai time來說.. 能不能告訴我他的作用在哪裡... 我聽到一些點跟這裡音相同可是卻沒kiai time, 那不如把他移到00:24:867 - 副歌開始更合適...不是嘛?

[Normal]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    綠線
    00:38:201 -
    00:38:534 -
    00:38:701 -
    00:41:367 -
    00:43:867 -
    00:44:034 -
    01:31:534 -
    01:34:201 -
    01:42:201 -
    01:45:367 -
    01:47:867 -
    01:48:034 -
    01:50:534 -
    01:50:701 -
    01:53:201 -
    01:53:367 -
  2. 00:19:534 (1,1) - 對於一首高bpm的歌... spinner隔了一次1/1就出現了note, 對newbie來講困難些(以Normal來說)

    試試看這樣的節奏吧, 可以讓這邊簡單些, 不必在Normal裡把節奏擺得這麼緊密, 如果general沒改請看這句劃線的-->但如果你改了這個... 這裡的kiai time就要砍掉了
  3. 00:26:534 (4) - 雖然不知道你是不是故意的... 在這slider的開頭和結尾加個clap. 因為後面也找到一些..類似的, 把他們總歸類在這
    關於一些可以加clap的slider
    00:30:534 (1) -
    00:44:201 (2,3) -
    01:46:535 (3) -
    01:48:201 (2,3) -
    01:51:868 (3) -
    01:54:535 (3) -
  4. 00:32:867 (1,2,3) - ...這邊打起來沒有feel, 平平淡淡的.. 在這三個slider的開頭都加finish, 比較不乏味
  5. 00:41:201 - ~ 00:45:867 - 這裡跟前面相同的節奏or音...為甚麼音量比前面低了20%... 如果要改回60%直接刪掉就好, 要不然會變成多餘的綠線
  6. 00:46:201 - 試試30%的音量吧... 這裡到下一個綠線地方以前有些吵... 這裡聽起來就是要平緩點的..為甚麼音量比前面副歌還高..lol
  7. 00:46:201 - ~ 01:07:367 - ...我還是吐槽一下NC有點亂, 倘若要改就全改噢.. 別只改一個~ 於是開始:
    00:49:201 (6,1) - , 00:51:867 (4,1) - , 00:58:867 (1,2) - , 01:00:867 (1,3) - , 交換NC ; 00:54:534 (3) - NC ; 01:02:867 (1) - re NC
  8. 01:28:534 (4) - 加個clap, 聽起來比現在沒音效還適合
  9. 01:39:534 (5,1) - 交換NC ... 這邊怎麼不是跟01:28:867 (1,2,1,2) - 這裡一樣
  10. 01:55:534 - 你為甚麼要放棄治療...哎 不對! 你為甚麼要放棄音量... 這邊改成N:C1然後音量調成30%都比現在這個靜音好太多了.. 改了之後 記得在01:56:367 (2,4) - (2)的開頭跟(4)加上clap
...要記得你copy的難度的綠線設置,改的時候沒有用的就刪掉, 還有NC規律要注意一些~ Normal節奏可以再放鬆點 :3

[Hard]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    綠線
    00:38:701 -
    00:41:367 -
    00:43:867 -
    01:34:201 -
    01:40:701 -
    01:42:201 -
    01:48:034 -
    01:50:534 -
    01:50:701 -
    01:53:201 -
    01:53:367 -
  2. 00:10:867 (5) - 不覺得這slider怪怪的嘛... 結尾不是該在00:11:201 - ?
  3. 00:35:867 (4,1) - 交換NC, 這裡是一個音的定點...所以我想應該NC在這, 然後00:36:867 (3) - NC, 比較好讀圖
  4. 00:43:534 (5,1) - 交換NC, 不覺得音樂是在00:43:534 - 切換的嘛~. 01:04:534 (1,2) - , 01:05:534 (1,4) - 也是
  5. 01:55:534 - 同Normal
排列可以在美觀點...不知為甚麼我看出你這Hard是在趕完成度的狀態下做出來的...沒梗的話就休息, 不需像個無頭的猛放拍子..

[Insane]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    綠線
    00:41:201 -
    00:41:367 -
    00:43:867 -
    00:44:034 -
    01:31:534 -
    01:34:201 -
    01:42:201 -
    01:45:367 -
    01:47:867 -
    01:48:034 -
    01:50:534 -
    01:50:701 -
    01:53:201 -
    01:53:367 -
  2. 00:12:367 (3) - NC, 比較容易讀出他的位置, 因為被00:11:534 (1) - 遮擋了
  3. 00:56:534 (1) - ...我大概知道你NC的意義.. 但總覺得很多餘, re NC吧
  4. 00:58:867 (7) - , 01:01:534 (7) - , 01:04:201 (3) - WTF! 開頭的finish你聽起來不感覺很奇怪?! 刪掉改成whistle...如果不想改, 請降低音量... 這麼大聲會起爭議的...
  5. 01:10:201 (9) - NC please..., 你這個anti-jump沒有任何提醒就出現了... 起碼NC來提醒player
  6. 01:20:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得改成這樣,簡單又順手...flow不會出現問題.... 01:21:867 (1,2,3,4) - 也是
  7. 01:55:534 - 同Normal
大致上的問題是...flow跟排列美觀度, flow就是你的流暢感覺, 通常我都會試打, 看哪裡手移動時卡卡的, 那我會認定為flow有問題

[Yuki]

  1. Unsnapped green line
    green line
    00:22:228 -
    01:59:199 -
    01:59:532 -
  2. 00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我不建議連打這樣堆疊...明明要有種緩緩前行的感覺,可是這邊卻被限制住了,然後後面00:35:534 (9,1,2,3,4) - 突然要來個大移動, 打起來不太舒服, 就像沒有做暖身運動就直接下場運動的結果..
  3. 01:47:201 (3) - ..這是個坑阿!NC 比較好讀圖. 01:49:868 (3) - 也是
整體來說還不錯!
大致上就這些~
給小船:
對一個剛開始做譜的來說! 算不錯了~ 別看我這樣講而難過 ;w;
支持一個star!
Topic Starter
smallboat
sheela901

sheela901 wrote:

[General]
In the tags of the difficulty [Yuki], it need the same tags as the others difficulty which it has to be is:
プロジェクト プロジェクト ウタヒメ [Minakami_Yuki] Vocal miko
fixed
The combo colors in [Yuki] are inconsistent (not the same) as the others which it has to be is:
Combo1 : 192,192,192 
Combo2 : 128,255,255
Combo3 : 18,124,255
Combo4 : 128,204,51
fixed

[Normal]
00:05:867 (1) - Remove the new combo and add it to 00:06:201 (2) . It'll sound better. fixed
00:10:534 (1) - Same as 00:05:867 (1) . Remove the new combo and add it to 00:11:534 (2) . fixed
00:18:867 (1) - Maybe you can end the spinner at 00:21:534 so the players might have time to click 00:22:201 (1) . fixed
00:32:534 (3) - Move the circle to x:332 y:188 for a perfect blanket. fixed
00:52:201 (5) - Maybe a new combo here and remove the new combo to 00:53:201 (1) and a new combo to 00:53:534 (2) . fixed
01:26:201 (1) - Move the little square on the slider's body to x:233 y:251, and the last little square on the tail (the end of the slider) to x:152 y:213 so 01:27:534 (3) could fit to the curve. fixed
01:39:534 (5) - Add a new combo and remove the new combo to 01:40:534 (1) . fixed
01:49:201 (3) - Move the second (2nd) little square to x:314 y:255. fixed

[Hard]
00:29:534 (3) - Stack the head of the slider with 00:28:534 (4) . fixed
00:46:867 (3) - Move the slider to one grid to the left. fixed
01:24:201 (3) - Move the last little square on the tail of the slider to x:188 y:144. fixed

[Yuki]
00:05:868 (1) - Remove the new combo and add the new combo to 00:06:201 (2) .
00:59:201 (7) - Try to make the blanket perfect.
01:13:034 (2) - This anti-jump isn't best for the map. Move the circle somewhere at x:272 y:240.

If you have any question on my mod, you can PM me. okGood Luck.fixed Thanks sheela901 :)
Koiyuki

Loneight wrote:

[Yuki]

  1. Unsnapped green line
    green line
    00:22:228 - 这个不改了 这里的绿线就是停掉kiai喷泉效果的作用
    01:59:199 - fixed
    01:59:532 - fixed
  2. 00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我不建議連打這樣堆疊...明明要有種緩緩前行的感覺,可是這邊卻被限制住了,然後後面00:35:534 (9,1,2,3,4) - 突然要來個大移動, 打起來不太舒服, 就像沒有做暖身運動就直接下場運動的結果.. 我打起来觉得没有不舒服0 0 ,不改惹
  3. 01:47:201 (3) - ..這是個坑阿!NC 比較好讀圖. 01:49:868 (3) - 也是 有人说过,有NC就能读,不NC不能读,只能说明这个player还不够pro =。=所以这个地方我是不会改的~
整體來說還不錯![/notice]
Thanks for modding~
Topic Starter
smallboat

Loneight wrote:

早灣 >w< 早喔:)
M4M.



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是建議改掉
    紅色 是unrankable

[general]

  1. 對00:22:201 - 這個點的kiai time來說.. 能不能告訴我他的作用在哪裡... 我聽到一些點跟這裡音相同可是卻沒kiai time, 那不如把他移到00:24:867 - 副歌開始更合適...不是嘛?
  作用嘛。。凸顯效果?。。也不太對。。不過我已經取消了。但副歌就沒+了

[Normal]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    綠線
    00:38:201 -
    00:38:534 -
    00:38:701 -
    00:41:367 -
    00:43:867 -
    00:44:034 -
    01:31:534 -
    01:34:201 -
    01:42:201 -
    01:45:367 -
    01:47:867 -
    01:48:034 -
    01:50:534 -
    01:50:701 -
    01:53:201 -
    01:53:367 -
    fixed
  2. 00:19:534 (1,1) - 對於一首高bpm的歌... spinner隔了一次1/1就出現了note, 對newbie來講困難些(以Normal來說)

    試試看這樣的節奏吧, 可以讓這邊簡單些, 不必在Normal裡把節奏擺得這麼緊密, 如果general沒改請看這句劃線的-->但如果你改了這個... 這裡的kiai time就要砍掉了
    fixed
  3. 00:26:534 (4) - 雖然不知道你是不是故意的... 在這slider的開頭和結尾加個clap. 因為後面也找到一些..類似的, 把他們總歸類在這
    關於一些可以加clap的slider
    00:30:534 (1) -
    00:44:201 (2,3) -
    01:46:535 (3) -
    01:48:201 (2,3) -
    01:51:868 (3) -
    01:54:535 (3) -
    fixed
  4. 00:32:867 (1,2,3) - ...這邊打起來沒有feel, 平平淡淡的.. 在這三個slider的開頭都加finish, 比較不乏味 fixed已加
  5. 00:41:201 - ~ 00:45:867 - 這裡跟前面相同的節奏or音...為甚麼音量比前面低了20%... 如果要改回60%直接刪掉就好, 要不然會變成多餘的綠線 fixed 阿 沒注意到.. :o
  6. 00:46:201 - 試試30%的音量吧... 這裡到下一個綠線地方以前有些吵... 這裡聽起來就是要平緩點的..為甚麼音量比前面副歌還高..lol fixed
  7. 00:46:201 - ~ 01:07:367 - ...我還是吐槽一下NC有點亂, 倘若要改就全改噢.. 別只改一個~ 於是開始:
    00:49:201 (6,1) - , 00:51:867 (4,1) - , 00:58:867 (1,2) - , 01:00:867 (1,3) - , 交換NC ; 00:54:534 (3) - NC ; 01:02:867 (1) - re NCfixed
  8. 01:28:534 (4) - 加個clap, 聽起來比現在沒音效還適合 fixed
  9. 01:39:534 (5,1) - 交換NC ... 這邊怎麼不是跟01:28:867 (1,2,1,2) - 這裡一樣 fixed
  10. 01:55:534 - 你為甚麼要放棄治療...哎 不對! 你為甚麼要放棄音量... 這邊改成N:C1然後音量調成30%都比現在這個靜音好太多了.. 改了之後 記得在01:56:367 (2,4) - (2)的開頭跟(4)加上clap
fixed
...要記得你copy的難度的綠線設置,改的時候沒有用的就刪掉, 還有NC規律要注意一些~ Normal節奏可以再放鬆點 :3 ok 我會再鬆一點 :)

[Hard]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    綠線
    00:38:701 -
    00:41:367 -
    00:43:867 -
    01:34:201 -
    01:40:701 -
    01:42:201 -
    01:48:034 -
    01:50:534 -
    01:50:701 -
    01:53:201 -
    01:53:367 -
    fixed
  2. 00:10:867 (5) - 不覺得這slider怪怪的嘛... 結尾不是該在00:11:201 - ? fixed..咦?怎麼在藍線上.. :o
  3. 00:35:867 (4,1) - 交換NC, 這裡是一個音的定點...所以我想應該NC在這, 然後00:36:867 (3) - NC, 比較好讀圖 fixed
  4. 00:43:534 (5,1) - 交換NC, 不覺得音樂是在00:43:534 - 切換的嘛~. 01:04:534 (1,2) - , 01:05:534 (1,4) - 也是 fixed
  5. 01:55:534 - 同Normal
fixed
排列可以在美觀點...不知為甚麼我看出你這Hard是在趕完成度的狀態下做出來的...沒梗的話就休息, 不需像個無頭的猛放拍子..
Ok,唔..也沒用趕的..有一邊想 一邊做圖 但做起來不知道為啥就怪怪得然後不符合人家的想法被噴一堆orz

[Insane]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    綠線
    00:41:201 -
    00:41:367 -
    00:43:867 -
    00:44:034 -
    01:31:534 -
    01:34:201 -
    01:42:201 -
    01:45:367 -
    01:47:867 -
    01:48:034 -
    01:50:534 -
    01:50:701 -
    01:53:201 -
    01:53:367 -
    fixed 順便說一句:感謝清理 :cry:
  2. 00:12:367 (3) - NC, 比較容易讀出他的位置, 因為被00:11:534 (1) - 遮擋了 fixed
  3. 00:56:534 (1) - ...我大概知道你NC的意義.. 但總覺得很多餘, re NC吧 fixed
  4. 00:58:867 (7) - , 01:01:534 (7) - , 01:04:201 (3) - WTF! 開頭的finish你聽起來不感覺很奇怪?! 刪掉改成whistle...如果不想改, 請降低音量... 這麼大聲會起爭議的... fixed..的確蠻奇怪的..我竟然沒注意到這邊..orz (尷尬 改成whistle了
  5. 01:10:201 (9) - NC please..., 你這個anti-jump沒有任何提醒就出現了... 起碼NC來提醒player fixed 改成重疊
  6. 01:20:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得改成這樣,簡單又順手...flow不會出現問題.... 01:21:867 (1,2,3,4) - 也是 fixed 咦? 剛試滑一下 真的還蠻順 原來也可以這樣擺我怎沒想到orz
  7. 01:55:534 - 同Normal
fixed
大致上的問題是...flow跟排列美觀度, flow就是你的流暢感覺, 通常我都會試打, 看哪裡手移動時卡卡的, 那我會認定為flow有問題
Ok , 那我做一段會稍微test一下。

[Yuki]

  1. Unsnapped green line
    green line
    00:22:228 -
    01:59:199 -
    01:59:532 -
  2. 00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我不建議連打這樣堆疊...明明要有種緩緩前行的感覺,可是這邊卻被限制住了,然後後面00:35:534 (9,1,2,3,4) - 突然要來個大移動, 打起來不太舒服, 就像沒有做暖身運動就直接下場運動的結果..
  3. 01:47:201 (3) - ..這是個坑阿!NC 比較好讀圖. 01:49:868 (3) - 也是
整體來說還不錯!
大致上就這些~
給小船:
對一個剛開始做譜的來說! 算不錯了~ 別看我這樣講而難過 ;w; 恩,謝謝飛翔 :( 會盡所能的努力 :o
支持一個star!謝謝QQ"
Pandiar
Hi~ from my queue XD
I am japanese, Poor English sorry too, lol

[General]
OK

[Yuki]
00:02:701 (1) - i think hard to get the rhythm.how about this?
00:10:034 (7) - add whistle start point
00:13:368 (1) - same as 00:02:701 (1)
00:30:201 (1) - add finish start point
00:39:201 (5) - how about this?
01:16:534 (3) - reverse slider?
01:17:534 (3) - how about rhythm?
01:20:201 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern?
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:34:534 (2) - move x:252y:272 i think it'slooks more beautiful
01:42:034 (4) - add to note here :for instance
01:43:701 - i think add to note here.it is better flow
for instance stack 01:42:534 (2) start point
01:49:701 (2) - maybe mistake.how about this?
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:701 (6) - ^
01:58:034 (7) - add finish


[Insane]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:27:201 (4,5) - move x:340y:200?
00:27:534 (1) - add finish start point
00:30:201 (1) - ^
00:31:201 (5) - move x:376y:232?
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (5) - add finish start point
01:23:534 (1) - ^
01:28:701 - 01:29:867 i think more note and slider :for instance
01:30:534 (3) - how about this?
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:39:367 - 01:40:534 same as 01:28:701
01:45:201 - add finish and i think up the volume suddenly. how about 70%?
01:47:867 (1) - add finish
01:50:535 (5) - ^ start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (5) - add finish end point


[Hard]
00:00:868 (1) - 00:10:867 (5) how about insert to whistle same as insane?
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:41:201 - vol40%→50%?
01:23:534 (1) - add finish
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:33:867 (7) - remove finish
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish
01:56:701 (4) - ^ start point
01:58:034 (3) - add finish

[Normal]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish start point
00:29:867 (5) - ^ end point
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (1) - ^
00:43:867 (1) - ^
01:23:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:45:201 (1) - add finish
01:47:867 (1) - ^
01:50:534 (1) - ^
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (2) - add finish end point
01:58:034 (5) - add finish

nice Normal!

poor mod sorry :(
I hope that you will help
good luck!
Koiyuki

Pandiar wrote:

[Yuki]
00:02:701 (1) - i think hard to get the rhythm.how about this? I think that's not hard ;w;
00:10:034 (7) - add whistle start point ok
00:13:368 (1) - same as 00:02:701 (1) same
00:30:201 (1) - add finish start point ehhh. nope
00:39:201 (5) - how about this? sry
01:16:534 (3) - reverse slider? ok
01:17:534 (3) - how about rhythm? sure
01:20:201 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern? it's square ><
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point ok
01:34:201 (1) - ^ ok
01:34:534 (2) - move x:252y:272 i think it'slooks more beautiful good
01:42:034 (4) - add to note here :for instance enn.nope
01:43:701 - i think add to note here.it is better flow
for instance stack 01:42:534 (2) start point good idea
01:49:701 (2) - maybe mistake.how about this? that's not mistake :>
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:701 (6) - ^
01:58:034 (7) - add finish ok
thanks for modding
RandF
From my queue~
thank you for M4M!

[General]
  1. Title: "shining grace"
  2. tags: Why do you include "プロジェクト" ×2 ?
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:534 (2) - I prefer to end at 00:04:201
  2. 00:15:367 (2) - end at 00:16:201
  3. 00:18:867~00:19:201- it is better to add slider or notes
  4. 00:22:534 (1,2) - it is better to add some hit-sound
  5. 00:29:867 (5,1) - avoid overlap
  6. 00:33:534 (2) - it is better to change the symmetric slider about 00:32:867 (1) -
  7. 01:17:534- add a note?
  8. 01:27:534 (3,1,1) - I suggest to remap in such a way as not to overlap
  9. 01:57:701 (4,5) - how about changing a reverse slider?
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:868 (1) - I prefer to end at 00:01:201
  2. 00:36:701- add a note
  3. 01:07:367 (4,1) - uniform DS (1.1x) (hexagon-patternis OK, isn't it?)
[Insane]
  1. 01:17:867 (4) - it is better to end at 01:18:201
  2. 01:45:201~01:54:201- it is better to reduce hit-sound's volume
[Yuki]
  1. 01:42:034- add a note
  2. 01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete
~Good Luck~
quantum-rose
PM
搜狗輸入法自動生成繁體
[Normal]
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 可以搶救一下
00:44:867 (3) - 兩次折返會讓新手摸不著頭腦
01:54:535 (3) - 這滑條長得意義不明
[Hard]
kiai time節奏反而變稀疏了,感覺有點奇怪
不過我也沒什麽好的意見了TuT
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 這個三連感覺意義不明,沒啥必要吧
[Insane]
00:20:701 (3) - 不減下速嗎
00:28:201 (3) - 1和3連著兩個同樣的滑條我是覺得有點彆扭啦,要不要試試這樣?http://puu.sh/4NY6S.jpg
00:47:201 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 一大串單點不是很舒服啦,感覺可以參考下Yuki
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得分散開會更好看
01:41:201 (2) - 6分拍的目的是什麽._.
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 以及01:41:534 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 突然變緩打圖的時候有種強烈的違和感
[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致
其餘完美
Koiyuki

RandomEffect wrote:

[General]
  1. Title: "shining grace" https://osu.ppy.sh/s/66372 This map is ranked, so no need to change the title.

    [Yuki]
    1. 01:42:034- add a note nope, there is no sound
    2. 01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete I hear there is no sound, so deleted

quantum-rose wrote:

[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致 ok我改了
其餘完美
thanks for moddddddddddddddddddddddddddddding
ZZHBOY
[general]
没啥大问题你个神马坡
[insane]
连打ds好像不一样啊
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议换成三连加drum音效
01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:35:867 (1) - finish
00:46:201 - finish
[yuki]
01:04:868 (1,2,3) - 建议移开
01:20:701 (4) - finish
01:12:034 - slidertick可以加上音效
00:45:534 (2) - finish

*01:34:201 - 其他难度也可以在这里加个喷泉

[hard]
01:20:701 - finish
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 违和不过没啥问题
[normal]
00:03:534 - 跟vocal的话00:21:867 - finish
00:29:867 (5,1) - 建议移开


就是这样 加油 :) :)
Spencers
As your pm request :)

Black - Advice and you'd better fix.
Red - Maybe unrankable,you should fix.


[General]
Normal的kiai's end isn't snapped.请查看AIMOD。
Normal的AR,HP,OD其实可以全减一。

[Insane]
00:12:367 (1) - 00:11:534 (1) - 这两个应该是不能完全重叠的,建议移动一下NOTE的位置。
00:18:034 (7) - 还是三点拉就好,而且这四点也没很好看。
00:26:034 (4,1) - 包好
00:28:201 (3,4) - 这两个可以包好
00:38:701 (2) - 要么加NC要么DELETE前面的NC00:36:034 (1) -
00:43:534 (1,2) - 弧度一样吧。
00:45:867 (13) - 第二个点的位置还是往里拉点吧不然很奇怪 到(-24,228) 顺便可以NC。
00:59:534 (1) - 不要重叠啊,不开HD都会读错。
01:01:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:02:867 (4,5) - 弧度一样吧。01:03:201 (5) -
01:06:867 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:07:534 (1,2,3) - 还是摆成三角形吧。
01:08:867 (3,4) - 没包好。
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么像01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么后面改吧
01:23:201 (2) - 可以移到 408 112
01:28:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:36:701 (6,2) - 叠好
01:53:034 (2,4) - 弧度一样
[Yuki]
00:17:534 (2,3) - 那么小的渐变还不如重叠(强迫症在此lol
00:17:868 (4,5) - 你这两个是真没重叠..、
00:20:701 (5) - Finish
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好蛋疼的连打。。还是重叠或分开吧 :?
01:08:201 (7) - 这个滑条可以弄成像01:08:868 (1) - 一样的弧度与形状,不然好违和啊..
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - ……怎么突然就变大间距了01:30:868 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:35:201 (4) - 还是重叠好
01:39:534 (1,2) - 弧度其实可以一样
01:54:451 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这地方连打弄圆滑一些
好多遮挡的难度,我喜欢 :)

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That's all.
不好意思迟到了那么久 :(  太忙了orz
只MOD了两难度..而且都是些无关紧要的建议.. :o 原谅我不太会MOD音效。
:arrow: 不管怎么样,图不错。
Hope this helps :)
祝Rank~!
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