IOSYS - shining grace [Osu|Taiko] · forum

smallboat

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smallboat 2013-09-06T13:32:13+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年12月16日 at 上午 12:40:14

Artist: IOSYS
Title: shining grace
Source: Project U-Ta-Hi-Me
Tags: プロジェクトウタヒメ [Minakami Yuki] Vocal miko OniJAM
BPM: 180
Filesize: 5290kb
Play Time: 02:00
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.93 stars, 305 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 423 notes)
Normal (3.23 stars, 143 notes)
OniJAM's Muzukashii (4.67 stars, 428 notes)
OniJAM's Oni (4.83 stars, 626 notes)
Yuki's Insane (5 stars, 432 notes)

Download: IOSYS - shining grace
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first ranked map,enjoy it. ~~Insane DT play so fun ?~~

Normal by me
Hard by me
Insane by me
Yuki's Insane by [Minakami Yuki]
OniJAM's Muzukashii
OniJAM's Oni by OniJAM

Thanks Taiko Mod

Dainesl
MidSoul
JUDYDANNY
toara_fict
mingmichael
_Gezo_
gokugohan12468

Thanks Alumni

James2250
Lizbeth
blissfulyoshi
Colin Hou

Thanks BAT

Charles445
Nymph
Frostmourne
Kytoxid
Tasha (Bubbled)
YGOkid8
jonathanlfj (Standard icon)
OnosakiHito Thanks your check !
spboxer3 (Ranked)

Thanks testplay (some forgot..sorry)

Rucker
winber1
GGBY
Satellite
Garven
Andrea
Uan
UnitedWeSin
Scorpiour
alacat
Bless
lkx_Shore

Last edited by smallboat 2013-12-16T02:30:52+00:00, edited 263 times in total.

Evil_Twilight

587 posts

Joined July 2010

Evil_Twilight 2013-09-14T08:22:29+00:00

看起來間距的部份還沒能掌握的很好

[Another]
00:05:034 (4,5) - 這個我會擺在離00:04:701 (3) - 遠一點的地方或著重疊。你這樣擺可能會坑到第一次玩的人，反正不建議這樣放o3o
00:09:701 (4) - 建議加NC，因為你的節奏變了
00:24:034 (3,4) - 4沒疊好
00:25:367 (2) - ^
00:29:034 (1) - 拿掉NC
00:30:201 (1) - 或00:30:534 (1) - 選一個加NC就好
00:31:534 (6) - 我習慣在這裡加NC
00:56:867 (1,2,3) - 這裡間距小一點，突然有1/4會讓人反應不過來
01:06:756 (12,1) - 建議放近一點
01:26:534 (4,7,10,13) - 你前面在這些地方有加NC，盡量保持一致

Evil_Twilight

587 posts

Joined July 2010

Evil_Twilight 2013-09-19T01:09:56+00:00

no kd

00:12:701 (5) - 我會改成note
00:26:201 (4) - 擺得太外面
01:06:867 (1,2,3,4,1) - 把他弄成美麗的星
01:57:867 (x) - 加個note

然後要出門惹

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-09-19T01:12:15+00:00

Evil_Twilight wrote:
看起來間距的部份還沒能掌握的很好 恩現在還是不太能掌握麻煩教學一下了

[Another]
00:05:034 (4,5) - 這個我會擺在離00:04:701 (3) - 遠一點的地方或著重疊。你這樣擺可能會坑到第一次玩的人，反正不建議這樣放o3o fixed
00:09:701 (4) - 建議加NC，因為你的節奏變了 fixed
00:24:034 (3,4) - 4沒疊好 fixed
00:25:367 (2) - ^ fixed
00:29:034 (1) - 拿掉NC fixed
00:30:201 (1) - 或00:30:534 (1) - 選一個加NC就好 fixed
00:31:534 (6) - 我習慣在這裡加NC fixed
00:56:867 (1,2,3) - 這裡間距小一點，突然有1/4會讓人反應不過來 fixed
01:06:756 (12,1) - 建議放近一點 fixed
01:26:534 (4,7,10,13) - 你前面在這些地方有加NC，盡量保持一致 fixed

這幾天在搞Hard
Another剛才看了 ok 全fixed !
謝謝Evil

smallboat

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smallboat 2013-09-19T02:11:21+00:00

Evil_Twilight wrote:
no kd

00:12:701 (5) - 我會改成note fixed
00:26:201 (4) - 擺得太外面 fixed
01:06:867 (1,2,3,4,1) - 把他弄成美麗的星 fixed
01:57:867 (x) - 加個note fixed

然後要出門惹

^_^ 謝謝一路順風喔

好..接著要改Insane.. 我先自摸索下..

~~話說你的簽名圖有點扁~~

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2013-09-19T16:21:15+00:00

star~

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-09-20T04:59:52+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
star~

謝昨天也射一顆 for you.

EnakoRin

EnakoRin 2013-09-23T04:20:08+00:00

[General]

combo color肯定得改，配上这个BG看着花眼

[Normal]

01:07:534 - 冗余的绿线
01:19:534 - 冗余的绿线

[Hard]

Hard明显太难，需要降低难度，否则和Normal跨度太大
00:00:867 (1,2,3) - 间距没对
00:10:534 (4,1) - 调整一下，把这两个的开头重叠在一起
01:05:534 - 加一个Circle
01:17:867 (1,1) - 时间间隔短，不容易接上，建议删掉后者
01:37:868 (4,7) - 叠好

[Insane]

前一段打着感觉就是没什么节奏感段和段之前空得有点多，建议插入一些note
叠好
00:20:701 (6,1) - 叠好
00:36:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这一截完全可以跳

这图处于一个不上不下的位置你说rank，标准都符合，但是打着没啥感觉，最后评分肯定不高。多学学别人的图，把排列啊slider花式啊啥的学点过来
还有就是slider的细节，有些没有flow好，这个只有慢慢来了
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EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren

- TiRaFiouS -

128 posts

Joined November 2012

- TiRaFiouS - 2013-09-23T08:58:57+00:00

直接來騙KD了~V~

[Normal]
01:17:534 (1) - DS 0.63[/list]
00:01:534 (2) - 縮短到00:02:034 -
00:02:20 - 加circle[/list]
00:20:701 (1) - 這個轉盤好像有點短
00:03:534 (2) - 加長到00:04:534 -
00:13:367 (4) - change to slider or 00:13:867 - add a note
00:33:201 (2,4) - can remove
01:55:534 (1,2,3) - 這是跟音樂的OAO?

先這麼多=3=

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-09-23T17:10:41+00:00

Piyoko_9796 wrote:
直接來騙KD了~V~

[Normal]
01:17:534 (1) - DS 0.63[/list] 一律調成0.8x了
00:01:534 (2) - 縮短到00:02:034 - fixed
00:02:20 - 加circle[/list] 這邊沒音
00:20:701 (1) - 這個轉盤好像有點短 fixed
00:03:534 (2) - 加長到00:04:534 - 恩..先在201看看吧
00:13:367 (4) - change to slider or 00:13:867 - add a note fixed
00:33:201 (2,4) - can remove fixed
01:55:534 (1,2,3) - 這是跟音樂的OAO? 恩阿

先這麼多=3=

謝謝嚕!

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-09-24T00:35:34+00:00

Weiren wrote:
[General]
combo color肯定得改，配上这个BG看着花眼
OK 我再想想哪些顏色比較適合

[Normal]
01:07:534 - 冗余的绿线 fixed
01:19:534 - 冗余的绿线fixed

[Hard]
Hard明显太难，需要降低难度，否则和Normal跨度太大 fixed
00:00:867 (1,2,3) - 间距没对 fixed
00:10:534 (4,1) - 调整一下，把这两个的开头重叠在一起 fixed
01:05:534 - 加一个Circle fixed 加了長條
01:17:867 (1,1) - 时间间隔短，不容易接上，建议删掉后者 fixed已刪
01:37:868 (4,7) - 叠好
fixed

[Insane]
前一段打着感觉就是没什么节奏感段和段之前空得有点多，建议插入一些note 是會加多一點
叠好 fixed
00:20:701 (6,1) - 叠好 fixed
00:36:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这一截完全可以跳

這邊可以跳? 昨天看了看還不知怎放..今晚再來請教姥爷甘溫

这图处于一个不上不下的位置你说rank，标准都符合，但是打着没啥感觉，最后评分肯定不高。多学学别人的图，把排列啊slider花式啊啥的学点过来 OK, 最近都看satellite 和長喜.泡泡的map 神麻婆就是不一樣..
还有就是slider的细节，有些没有flow好，这个只有慢慢来了
----------flow..我這也蠻苦手..會努力的..已不知被多少人教
EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren

謝謝Weiren 希望你那首中文歌都9.5以上星星評價喔!

下午左右再up..

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-09-25T11:06:28+00:00

Mod from your request
怒用繁體輸入法

[General]

Tag里去掉IOSYS和shining
滑條聲音好難聽建議刪掉

[Normal]
00:00:867 建議紅線和這裡的綠線音量改成5% 然後在00:05:867這裡插一根綠線音量調高
01:26:201 (5,7) - 對稱
01:32:867 (3) - 這裡最好順著滑條的軌跡走
01:38:201 (3,5) - 這點nazi要控制好 stack throughly

感覺這個diff美觀性不夠

[Hard]
AR+1
00:04:367 (6,7,8,3,4,5) - 我覺得這三個單點都最好不要stack opinion
00:11:534 (1) - stack with 00:10:534 (4)的尾巴不要在意中英結合這些細節
00:26:201 (4,5,6) - stack nazi
00:36:867 (3,4,5,6,7) - 五角星沒擺好建議ctrl+shift+D來畫
01:08:867 (3,4,1) - 這個最好還是不要這麼擺不美觀兩個circle換成slider也好啊
01:37:868 (4,7) - stack nazi
01:42:534 (2,4) - ^
01:49:367 (5,6,7,8,9) - 建議擺幾何圖形
01:51:534 (1,3) - stack nazi

節奏太寬鬆了些？

[Insane]
瑪德我趕著去晚修啊
AR+1
00:06:867 (3,4,5,6) - 一看就沒blanket好
00:12:201 (1,2,3,4) - 間距不等你在逗我？
00:24:367 (3,1) - stack nazi
00:28:201 (1,1,1) - NC莫名後面也是
00:32:117 連打應該連到這裡才對阿
01:30:784 ^
01:41:451 ^
01:11:534 (2,3) - stack nazi
01:12:534 (5,6) - ^
01:18:867 (3,5,8) - 這幾個滑條其實可以搞個SV漸變
01:22:534 (5,2) - stack nazi

感覺跟vocal太多了點 insane的話大部份應該跟鼓點讓節奏滿滿的才好

Good Luck

smallboat

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Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-09-26T05:03:14+00:00

Awaken wrote:
Mod from your request
怒用繁體輸入法 ~~這是好現象!~~

[General]
Tag里去掉IOSYS和shining fixed
滑條聲音好難聽建議刪掉是說音效嗎? 那我考慮一下..

[Normal]
00:00:867 建議紅線和這裡的綠線音量改成5% 然後在00:05:867這裡插一根綠線音量調高 fixed
01:26:201 (5,7) - 對稱 fixed 應該是這樣?
01:32:867 (3) - 這裡最好順著滑條的軌跡走 fixed
01:38:201 (3,5) - 這點nazi要控制好 stack throughly fixed

感覺這個diff美觀性不夠我也覺得我會多看別人NM圖的..

[Hard]
AR+1
00:04:367 (6,7,8,3,4,5) - 我覺得這三個單點都最好不要stack opinion fixed
00:11:534 (1) - stack with 00:10:534 (4)的尾巴不要在意中英結合這些細節 fixed
00:26:201 (4,5,6) - stack nazi fixed
00:36:867 (3,4,5,6,7) - 五角星沒擺好建議ctrl+shift+D來畫這個不會..教一下
01:08:867 (3,4,1) - 這個最好還是不要這麼擺不美觀兩個circle換成slider也好啊 fixed
01:37:868 (4,7) - stack nazi fixed
01:42:534 (2,4) - ^ fixed
01:49:367 (5,6,7,8,9) - 建議擺幾何圖形考慮
01:51:534 (1,3) - stack nazi fixed

節奏太寬鬆了些？已新增一些了

[Insane]
瑪德我趕著去晚修啊讀書最重要
AR+1 fixed
00:06:867 (3,4,5,6) - 一看就沒blanket好 fixed
00:12:201 (1,2,3,4) - 間距不等你在逗我？fixed 沒看到
00:24:367 (3,1) - stack nazi fixed
00:28:201 (1,1,1) - NC莫名後面也是 fixed 啥時有那麼多雜色(??
00:32:117 連打應該連到這裡才對阿 fixed
01:30:784 ^ fixed
01:41:451 ^ fixed
01:11:534 (2,3) - stack nazi fixed
01:12:534 (5,6) - ^ fixed
01:18:867 (3,5,8) - 這幾個滑條其實可以搞個SV漸變好的我試試
01:22:534 (5,2) - stack nazi fixed

感覺跟vocal太多了點 insane的話大部份應該跟鼓點讓節奏滿滿的才好 OK 我會想辦法

Good Luck

感謝MOD

Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-09-26T16:06:36+00:00

As your request

[General]

Shining Grace；
音效没弄么？那我也就不弄音效了（其实我也不擅长弄音效）；
00:38:201 - 第一段kiai这里结束吧；
如果弄喷泉效果的话，00:38:534 - 00:38:617 - 类似这种地方加一个短kiai就可以；
01:45:201 - 后面这段kiai建议取消掉，改成↑那样比较好；

[Normal]

hp-1；
开始的一段红线起红线结束的滑条听上去节奏很奇怪啊，我觉得没必要跟vocal，改拉到白线还是拉到白线的好；
00:43:867 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看；
00:46:534 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 太重复了……如果是这一段就算了，后面的梗也是重复的，这样让人打起来很无聊，虽然只是normal对吧但也不能过于忽视啊._.你说猴不猴啊？；
01:26:201 (5) - NC？；
01:28:867 (9) - ^；
01:30:201 (1) - remove NC；
01:45:201 (1,2,3) - 这里也是和前面一样，梗重复，而且都是横平竖直；
01:55:534 (1,2,3) - 这里这么摆节奏挺怪的容易miss，这样如何？

[Hard]

sv有点快，改到1.2；
感觉你hard里面跳放得有点多，虽然是小跳来着……；
00:46:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一样是重复梗，既然都是摆满1/2了，尝试点新的花样呢？；
01:00:534 (5,6,7,8) - 间距；
01:40:201 (2,3) - 不在一条直线上；
别的看上去还好，排版有点生硬，就是感觉几个几何形状摆的也不是很规则，仔细找找吧._.；

[Insane]

ar+1；
看你note的密度比较稀，hp-1；
不知道这么多×1.1sv有什么用啊……；
00:07:367 (6) - 没包好；
00:11:534 (7) - NC；
00:17:201 (3,4,5,6,7) - 排列不好看；
00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 改成

，至于怎么摆，我下面的随手摆的，不一定要采用：

，

；
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 总感觉有点偷懒；
00:38:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 这一段还是摆的挺好的._.；
00:46:201 - ~ 00:56:534 - 舒缓段落note摆近点比较好，不要节奏舒缓的地方都在跳>.<；
01:24:868 (1,2,1,2,1) - 以及后面一大段 NC变化太快了，然后再往后NC变化又慢了，考虑改改吧；
01:38:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 这一段的排列也要改改~；
01:41:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 跟着节奏不适合这么摆；
01:57:034 (3) - 这个还是改了吧，后面的白线也有鼓点的。

总的来说呢，就是排列很生硬，直拉的很多，梗的单调性也会降低map的游戏性=v=
好好加油哦~
如果以后有需要的话还可以找我remod一下
还有的话QQ上说了，这里就不再赘述了
good luck >.<

Azails

84 posts

Joined October 2012

Azails 2013-09-28T14:34:56+00:00

Mod from your request

[General]
音效略單調;
建議去滑條聲,不好聽

[Normal]

整體spacing略擠了點;w;
00:02:701 (1) - spacing有誤,建議將他排出來吧
00:32:867 (1,2,3,4) - kiai段落感覺不必要空拍
這diff看著開頭挺flow,進了kiai後給人一種僵直單調的感覺,slider下點功夫的話會改善很多 :3

[Hard]

00:36:034 (5) - 加note,節奏上空拍太過突兀
00:36:701 (3) - ^
00:38:701 (2) - ^
00:39:367 (3) - ^
hard好些了,可以再稍微大膽些的作梗,過多重覆的排列多少有點乏味

[Insane]

00:11:534 (7) - NC
00:46:534 (1) ~ 00:56:534 (1) - 這一段的擺放可以再好好考慮一下
01:16:201 (1) - remove NC
01:19:534 (5) - 變速NC
01:20:367 (8) - ^
01:24:867 (1) - remove NC,下的太雜了
01:25:534 (1) - ^
01:26:867 (1) - ^
01:27:534 (1) - ^ , 後面類似節拍我就省略了

暫時先這樣吧見諒我彈性看圖;w;
有其他的問題可以再PM我
Good Luck

Xinchii

1,240 posts

Joined January 2011

Xinchii 2013-09-29T16:16:35+00:00

拖了拖的mod

[Normal]

00:19:534(5) - 這邊slider的方向可以往右一點,看起來有點擠

[Hard]

00:08:067(3) - slider從這邊開始感覺和一些
00:49:367 - 覺得這邊作一個slider到00:49:367-會好一點,那邊的人聲不跟感覺怪怪

[Insane]

這Diff的排列感覺有點硬硬的,建議多參考些排列梗搭配一些Jump會好一些
00:03:201(2,3,4) - 排出弧度會好看一點
00:16:867(2) - 這邊建議作一個1/1 slider到00:17:201-會比較和歌聲
00:32:534(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 作點造型會比較好玩,連續7個anti-jump有點無趣030
00:44:867(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 建議這段連打排出一點造型,像是作一點弧度或是其他什麼的
01:23:534 - 01:28:534 - 嗯.....我直接標這一整區是想說,這一區有些地方可以作點jump之類的會比重疊或是1.0x間距好玩一點,呃,也不是不行,只是感覺不像Insane了:O

我真心不會作mod orz

我只會玩.....

說起來你刪掉那個難度感覺比較有趣,加點修改應該會不錯:O
怎麼不要了QAQ

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-02T00:35:50+00:00

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
As your request

SPOILER
[General]
Shining Grace； fixed
音效没弄么？那我也就不弄音效了（其实我也不擅长弄音效）；
00:38:201 - 第一段kiai这里结束吧；fixed
如果弄喷泉效果的话，00:38:534 - 00:38:617 - 类似这种地方加一个短kiai就可以 fixed；
01:45:201 - 后面这段kiai建议取消掉，改成↑那样比较好 fixed；
[Normal]
hp-1 fixed；
开始的一段红线起红线结束的滑条听上去节奏很奇怪啊，我觉得没必要跟vocal，改拉到白线还是拉到白线的好fixed；
00:43:867 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看fixed；
00:46:534 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 太重复了……如果是这一段就算了，后面的梗也是重复的，这样让人打起来很无聊，虽然只是normal对吧但也不能过于忽视啊._.你说猴不猴啊？fixed；
01:26:201 (5) - NC？fixed；
01:28:867 (9) - ^fixed；
01:30:201 (1) - remove NCfixed；
01:45:201 (1,2,3) - 这里也是和前面一样，梗重复，而且都是横平竖直fixed；
01:55:534 (1,2,3) - 这里这么摆节奏挺怪的容易miss，这样如何？
fixed
[Hard]
sv有点快，改到1.2不了；
感觉你hard里面跳放得有点多，虽然是小跳来着……；fixed 修復一些
00:46:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一样是重复梗，既然都是摆满1/2了，尝试点新的花样呢？fixed 沒有像之前一樣了；
01:00:534 (5,6,7,8) - 间距fixed；
01:40:201 (2,3) - 不在一条直线上fixed；
别的看上去还好，排版有点生硬，就是感觉几个几何形状摆的也不是很规则，仔细找找吧._.fixed；
[Insane]
ar+1fixed；
看你note的密度比较稀，hp-1fixed；
不知道这么多×1.1sv有什么用啊……偶爾來點變速?；
00:07:367 (6) - 没包好fixed；
00:11:534 (7) - NCfixed；
00:17:201 (3,4,5,6,7) - 排列不好看fixed；
00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 改成fixed，至于怎么摆，我下面的随手摆的，不一定要采用：
，，
；
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 总感觉有点偷懒fixed；
00:38:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 这一段还是摆的挺好的._.謝謝不過還是有fixed一些；
00:46:201 - ~ 00:56:534 - 舒缓段落note摆近点比较好，不要节奏舒缓的地方都在跳>.<fixed；
01:24:868 (1,2,1,2,1) - 以及后面一大段 NC变化太快了，然后再往后NC变化又慢了，考虑改改吧fixed；
01:38:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 这一段的排列也要改改~fixed；
01:41:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 跟着节奏不适合这么摆fixed；
01:57:034 (3) - 这个还是改了吧，后面的白线也有鼓点的。fixed

总的来说呢，就是排列很生硬，直拉的很多，梗的单调性也会降低map的游戏性=v= Ok 那我會多看圖的
好好加油哦~謝謝我會努力
如果以后有需要的话还可以找我remod一下 Ok 會不時找你請教
还有的话QQ上说了，这里就不再赘述了
good luck >.<祝你也是GL!

Azathozkula wrote:
Mod from your request

SPOILER
[General]
音效略單調; 音效還在選不好意思找不到合適音效
建議去滑條聲,不好聽 fixed 都5%了

[Normal]

整體spacing略擠了點;w; fixed
00:02:701 (1) - spacing有誤,建議將他排出來吧 fixed
00:32:867 (1,2,3,4) - kiai段落感覺不必要空拍 fixed
這diff看著開頭挺flow,進了kiai後給人一種僵直單調的感覺,slider下點功夫的話會改善很多 :3fixed了一些
[Hard]

00:36:034 (5) - 加note,節奏上空拍太過突兀 fixed
00:36:701 (3) - ^ fixed
00:38:701 (2) - ^ fixed
00:39:367 (3) - ^ fixed
hard好些了,可以再稍微大膽些的作梗,過多重覆的排列多少有點乏味 fixed了一些

[Insane]

00:11:534 (7) - NC fixed
00:46:534 (1) ~ 00:56:534 (1) - 這一段的擺放可以再好好考慮一下fixed一些
01:16:201 (1) - remove NC fixed
01:19:534 (5) - 變速NC fixed
01:20:367 (8) - ^ fixed
01:24:867 (1) - remove NC,下的太雜了 fixed
01:25:534 (1) - ^fixed
01:26:867 (1) - ^fixed
01:27:534 (1) - ^ , 後面類似節拍我就省略了fixed
暫時先這樣吧見諒我彈性看圖;w; 沒關係有空會找你試圖~
有其他的問題可以再PM我是
Good Luck3Q

leon1341414 wrote:
拖了拖的mod

SPOILER
[Normal]
00:19:534(5) - 這邊slider的方向可以往右一點,看起來有點擠fixed
[Hard]
00:08:067(3) - slider從這邊開始感覺和一些字打一半..?
00:49:367 - 覺得這邊作一個slider到00:49:367-會好一點,那邊的人聲不跟感覺怪怪fixed
[Insane]
這Diff的排列感覺有點硬硬的,建議多參考些排列梗搭配一些Jump會好一些 fixed
00:03:201(2,3,4) - 排出弧度會好看一點 fixed
00:16:867(2) - 這邊建議作一個1/1 slider到00:17:201-會比較和歌聲 fixed
00:32:534(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 作點造型會比較好玩,連續7個anti-jump有點無趣030 fixed
00:44:867(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 建議這段連打排出一點造型,像是作一點弧度或是其他什麼的 fixed
01:23:534 - 01:28:534 - 嗯.....我直接標這一整區是想說,這一區有些地方可以作點jump之類的會比重疊或是1.0x間距好玩一點,呃,也不是不行,只是感覺不像Insane了:Ofixed了一些
我真心不會作mod orz 沒關係 ~~+1SP也好?~~

我只會玩.....

說起來你刪掉那個難度感覺比較有趣,加點修改應該會不錯:O
怎麼不要了QAQ感覺Ano是進階的人在做的所以就刪了..Insane沒什麼大問題再說吧..
謝謝 Minakami Yuki . Azathozkula . leon1341414的修改

Angelina_Rocca

33 posts

Joined February 2013

Angelina_Rocca 2013-10-03T13:39:55+00:00

~~骗个KD越来越难了啊喂！~~
Yuki
~~打不过去，摸不了~~
Insane
~~很艰难的pass了，感觉也摸不了~~
前面看你的音量用的5%， 10%，15%
跨度太小了，听不出来分别。
推荐10% 25% 40%
01:08:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 没看明白到底跟的vocal还是鼓点啊。。
00:13:367 (1,2) - 还是觉得一开始声音轻柔的时候排列“温柔”一些比较好。这个还是有点突然了吧
00:57:367 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不好看。。。

Hard
音量同in
00:44:867 (1,2) - 这俩，为什么不一样啊
~~0 0说好的亲兄弟呢QAQ~~

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-04T17:00:29+00:00

Angelina_Rocca wrote:
~~骗个KD越来越难了啊喂！~~
Yuki
~~打不过去，摸不了~~
Insane
~~很艰难的pass了，感觉也摸不了~~
前面看你的音量用的5%， 10%，15%
跨度太小了，听不出来分别。
推荐10% 25% 40% fixed
01:08:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 没看明白到底跟的vocal还是鼓点啊。。都有耶想了下還是不變好了
00:13:367 (1,2) - 还是觉得一开始声音轻柔的时候排列“温柔”一些比较好。这个还是有点突然了吧 ^ ~~要突然才叫Insane~~?
00:57:367 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不好看。。。 fixed

Hard
音量同in fixed
00:44:867 (1,2) - 这俩，为什么不一样啊 fixed 也是弄個對稱了
~~0 0说好的亲兄弟呢QAQ~~

謝謝Rocca

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-10-05T02:28:42+00:00

最近水平下降……随便摸两句._.
为什么感觉BG被纵向压过
[Insane]
00:02:701 (6,7) - 时间互换
00:10:867 (5) - ctrl+G
00:29:201 (7) - 像这种直接从上面拷贝过来然后翻转比较好，后面类似的也是._.
00:56:867 - 声太小了还有最后那个5% 别的diff也注意下
01:36:868 (1,2) - 顺着6的话 → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018687
01:48:867 (8) - 顺下去
总体来看还有粗糙的感觉，修一下
[Yuki]
00:50:200 (1) -Ctrl+G
01:15:533 (1,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018697
01:23:533 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:30:866 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:57:366 (1) - NC 还有就是建议这里移开点._.

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-05T02:59:22+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
[Yuki]
00:50:200 (1) -Ctrl+G ok
01:15:533 (1,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018697 no
01:23:533 (1) - Ctrl+G ok
01:30:866 (3) - Ctrl+G 我故意的
01:57:366 (1) - NC 还有就是建议这里移开点._. 移开了不过不NC

Thanks for modding

Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2013-10-05T10:12:22+00:00

Red - Unrankable
Purple - Highly recommended
Black - You'd better fixed
Gray - Just suggestion

General

Normal的kiai end没有压到白线上请往后拉2ms
所有难度：00:05:867 - 从这里开始Volume可以放大一点到15左右

Normal
00:11:534 - 这里就更应该放大了放大到30左右吧
01:28:201 - clap?
01:41:868 (3) - missing clap
01:42:201 (1,2) - 开头clap或者连01:43:535 (3) - 一起改成结尾clap

Hard
00:38:867 (1) - NC move to 00:39:534 (3) - ?
00:39:367 - add a note

Insane
00:32:867 - 从这里开始到下一条绿线的Volume过小提高到55/60
01:36:701 (6,1) - flow太差
01:40:701 - Volume请提高到至少40最好60

Yuki
00:09:701 (5,6,7) - 这里不妨也手动堆叠？
00:23:534 (1) - whistle
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这样的连打很糟糕换成普通的那种

音效做的不错了所以我没摸出什么出来
Nice map Good luck~

Last edited by Kayano 2013-10-06T02:17:40+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2013-10-05T11:03:18+00:00

as ur req

[Yuki]
七十多个unsnap。。。打开aimod瞬间我就惊呆了，后来发现居然是因为bpm不一样，这图bpm居然是180.003，搞毛。。。改完以后全部物件都snap一下=。=|||，似乎song setup里很多都没统一比如letterbox和tag什么的，一点点都和别的diff弄一样。。。

00:39:367 (5) - nc？
00:40:784 (5) - 这个note删掉，打起来感觉更好，删的话建议00:40:867 (6) - 加nc
01:58:032 个人建议这里还是放一个note比较好，转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍

挺不错的diff啊，我蛮喜欢的

[Insane]
kiai unsnap是闹哪样。。。调整一下绿线的位置。还有一个obj也没snap，fix一下。以后最好上传前自己先打开aimod看一下warning，一般硬伤的话modder会给你指出，不过能自己先搞定的还是先搞定吧 :3

00:03:534 (9,1) - nc移动一下
00:05:867 (1,2) - 这里我也建议把nc移动一下
00:09:367 (4,5,1,2,3) - 可以做个圆弧轨迹
00:21:701 (1) - 这里的音其实是1/6，改成1/6折返吧，然后最好stack在之前滑条的尾下
00:30:784 (3) - 前后ds差的太多太明显了，微调一下
00:31:534 (8) - nc
00:37:367 (7) - ^
00:39:534 (8) - ^
00:43:534 (7,1) - nc 移动一下
00:48:867 (8) - nc
01:02:867 (4,5) - 这ds跟之前的滑条比起来感觉太小了，把5再放远一点
01:09:201 (5) - 略高，看看能不能放下来一点
01:10:201 (9) - 中间红线那拍建议还是map一下，这个长滑条可以改成3单点，单点+滑条或者折返都行
01:17:367 这里可以放个连打
01:22:367 (4,5) - 这个ds还是大一点比较好，把5放远
01:28:201 (3,1) - 以及 01:30:701 (4,1) - 的变ds其实不太推荐，要么stack在尾巴上要么放远，或者处理成00:45:867 (13,1) - 的样子感觉也不错
01:36:034 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我建议这五个的位置不变，顺序改成34562
01:40:867 (8) - nc
01:46:200 (7) - nc？似乎你是因为梗的原因不nc，这个你自己看吧，后同
01:55:201 (13,1,2) - 13全部换成连打，12的鼓点不变滑条跟着电子音走比较好。。。那串连打太长了，在01:54:868 (9) - 的地方nc吧，其实形状也可以搞个曲线什么的

nc的话一般放在大段小节的重音开头，或者分割梗，虽然提前放也可以不过一般来说常规的放比较好，而且大多数情况下数字在10以内比较靠谱（除非长连打或者特殊梗的需要）
排版方面因为我有强迫症所以我觉得有些地方还可以加强一点比如00:28:701 (4,5,6) - 这种可以搞成圆弧什么的233

[Hard]

00:41:867 (4,1) - 我有强迫症所以blanket this perfect pls orz
00:45:534 (1,1) - 这个ds必须搞大点。。。你在重音后变小可以，但是这里强烈建议还是和之前一样
01:41:534 (3,1) - 这里果然还是stack搞搞好，不然看上去有点乱
01:43:201 (3,4,1) - 4的前后ds我强烈建议统一，跳的太大player不好掌握空一拍的节奏
01:57:867 (2,1) - 转盘头改成个note，转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍

其实滑条那么多，blanket啊symm啊可以多弄一点的说

[Normal]

00:03:534 (2,3,1) - 这三个完全可以互相blanket的说，2和1stack，3弄成圆弧吧？多个control point感觉没意义啊orz
00:13:367 (2,1) - 这里也是可以blanket，后面我就不说了，只是为了好看而已不是什么大问题
01:58:034 (1) - 和hard里的处理方式一样

嗯，kiai也没snap，fix一下

我还是第一次看见bpm都不一样的233，传图过程中出什么问题了么，gd的运输安全要注意啊噗。。。

good luck

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-10-05T11:13:35+00:00

我居然忘了开not_ai_mod……一定是win8的错._.

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-05T11:21:22+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
as ur req
[Yuki]
七十多个unsnap。。。打开aimod瞬间我就惊呆了，后来发现居然是因为bpm不一样，这图bpm居然是180.003，搞毛。。。改完以后全部物件都snap一下=。=|||，似乎song setup里很多都没统一比如letterbox和tag什么的，一点点都和别的diff弄一样。。。
我也不知道怎么回事噗噗噗噗噗，已经改了
00:39:367 (5) - nc？ ok
00:40:784 (5) - 这个note删掉，打起来感觉更好，删的话建议00:40:867 (6) - 加nc ok
01:58:032 个人建议这里还是放一个note比较好，转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍 ok
挺不错的diff啊，我蛮喜欢的 thanks~

我还是第一次看见bpm都不一样的233，传图过程中出什么问题了么，gd的运输安全要注意啊噗。。。噗噗噗噗摆乌龙了哈哈哈

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-06T13:45:37+00:00

ts8zs

ts8zs wrote:
最近水平下降……随便摸两句._. 謝謝來摸
为什么感觉BG被纵向压过 我圖片壓縮不太拿手所以就這樣了._. 後面再想辦法..
[Insane]
00:02:701 (6,7) - 时间互换 fixed
00:10:867 (5) - ctrl+G fixed
00:29:201 (7) - 像这种直接从上面拷贝过来然后翻转比较好，后面类似的也是._. fixed
00:56:867 - 声太小了还有最后那个5% 别的diff也注意下 fixed
01:36:868 (1,2) - 顺着6的话 → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018687 fixed
01:48:867 (8) - 顺下去 fixed
总体来看还有粗糙的感觉，修一下 Ok，這個難度錯的蠻大我會設法改改~~(找神modder改改?)~~

謝謝包子神的mod。

ts8zs wrote:
我居然忘了开not_ai_mod……一定是win8的错._.

win8沒用過呢..感覺不怎好用..介面太複雜..

OniJAM

OniJAM wrote:
Red - Unrankable
Purple - Highly recommended
Black - You'd better fixed
Gray - Just suggestion
General
Normal的kiai end没有压到白线上请往后拉2ms fixed
所有难度：00:05:867 - 从这里开始Volume可以放大一点到15左右 fixed

Normal
00:11:534 - 这里就更应该放大了放大到30左右吧 fixed
01:28:201 - clap? fixed
01:41:868 (3) - missing clap fixed
01:42:201 (1,2) - 开头clap或者连01:43:535 (3) - 一起改成结尾clap 改成3個結尾

Hard
00:38:867 (1) - NC move to 00:39:534 (3) - ? fixed
00:39:367 - add a note fixed

Insane
00:32:867 - 从这里开始到下一条绿线的Volume过小提高到55/60 fixed
01:36:701 (6,1) - flow太差又改了些
01:40:701 - Volume请提高到至少40最好60 fixed

音效做的不错了所以我没摸出什么出来謝謝啦但有些還沒放完全
Nice map Good luck~ 謝，第一次有這樣說

Hollow Wings

Hollow Wings wrote:
as ur req
[Yuki]
七十多个unsnap。。。打开aimod瞬间我就惊呆了，后来发现居然是因为bpm不一样，这图bpm居然是180.003，搞毛。。。改完以后全部物件都snap一下=。=|||，似乎song setup里很多都没统一比如letterbox和tag什么的，一点点都和别的diff弄一样。。。

00:39:367 (5) - nc？
00:40:784 (5) - 这个note删掉，打起来感觉更好，删的话建议00:40:867 (6) - 加nc
01:58:032 个人建议这里还是放一个note比较好，转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍
挺不错的diff啊，我蛮喜欢的
[Insane]
kiai unsnap是闹哪样。。。调整一下绿线的位置。还有一个obj也没snap，fix一下。以后最好上传前自己先打开aimod看一下warning，一般硬伤的话modder会给你指出，不过能自己先搞定的还是先搞定吧 :3 OK
00:03:534 (9,1) - nc移动一下 fixed
00:05:867 (1,2) - 这里我也建议把nc移动一下 fixed
00:09:367 (4,5,1,2,3) - 可以做个圆弧轨迹 fixed
00:21:701 (1) - 这里的音其实是1/6，改成1/6折返吧，然后最好stack在之前滑条的尾下 fixed
00:30:784 (3) - 前后ds差的太多太明显了，微调一下 fixed
00:31:534 (8) - nc fixed
00:37:367 (7) - ^ fixed
00:39:534 (8) - ^ fixed
00:43:534 (7,1) - nc 移动一下 fixed
00:48:867 (8) - nc fixed
01:02:867 (4,5) - 这ds跟之前的滑条比起来感觉太小了，把5再放远一点 fixed
01:09:201 (5) - 略高，看看能不能放下来一点 fixed
01:10:201 (9) - 中间红线那拍建议还是map一下，这个长滑条可以改成3单点，单点+滑条或者折返都行 fixed 改成3單點
01:17:367 这里可以放个连打 fixed
01:22:367 (4,5) - 这个ds还是大一点比较好，把5放远 fixed
01:28:201 (3,1) - 以及 01:30:701 (4,1) - 的变ds其实不太推荐，要么stack在尾巴上要么放远，或者处理成00:45:867 (13,1) - 的样子感觉也不错 fixed 都放在尾巴堆疊了
01:36:034 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我建议这五个的位置不变，顺序改成34562 看不太懂..不過我有改了些
01:40:867 (8) - nc fixed
01:46:200 (7) - nc？似乎你是因为梗的原因不nc，这个你自己看吧，后同 fixed 後面也改了
01:55:201 (13,1,2) - 13全部换成连打，12的鼓点不变滑条跟着电子音走比较好。。。那串连打太长了，在01:54:868 (9) - 的地方nc吧，其实形状也可以搞个曲线什么的 12那句我看不懂等下問你..其餘fixed 曲線等會修

nc的话一般放在大段小节的重音开头，或者分割梗，虽然提前放也可以不过一般来说常规的放比较好，而且大多数情况下数字在10以内比较靠谱（除非长连打或者特殊梗的需要） Ok..好..重音..瞭解我試試
排版方面因为我有强迫症所以我觉得有些地方还可以加强一点比如00:28:701 (4,5,6) - 这种可以搞成圆弧什么的233 我也覺得不太美觀謝謝你的指點
[Hard]
00:41:867 (4,1) - 我有强迫症所以blanket this perfect pls orz fixed
00:45:534 (1,1) - 这个ds必须搞大点。。。你在重音后变小可以，但是这里强烈建议还是和之前一样 fixed
01:41:534 (3,1) - 这里果然还是stack搞搞好，不然看上去有点乱 fixed
01:43:201 (3,4,1) - 4的前后ds我强烈建议统一，跳的太大player不好掌握空一拍的节奏 fixed
01:57:867 (2,1) - 转盘头改成个note，转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍 fixed
其实滑条那么多，blanket啊symm啊可以多弄一点的说symm不太懂其餘fixed了
[Normal]
00:03:534 (2,3,1) - 这三个完全可以互相blanket的说，2和1stack，3弄成圆弧吧？多个control point感觉没意义啊orz fixed
00:13:367 (2,1) - 这里也是可以blanket，后面我就不说了，只是为了好看而已不是什么大问题 fixed
01:58:034 (1) - 和hard里的处理方式一样fixed
嗯，kiai也没snap，fix一下fixed

我还是第一次看见bpm都不一样的233，传图过程中出什么问题了么，gd的运输安全要注意啊噗。。。哈哈會注意的(尷尬

good luck

Last edited by smallboat 2013-10-07T05:55:27+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Flower

1,723 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2013-10-06T18:30:45+00:00

m4m

General

这是180？你们能不能不要做得跟160一样
Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.
请修改所有5%的部分
这bg太花了 note颜色又跟bg一样简直第一pc就想给1分
我还是先删了bg再mod

Insane

00:21:701 (1) - 这里背景是1/4，考虑一下
00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 或许可以考虑改成soft+whistle
00:43:534 (7,1) - 交换NC
01:09:201 (5) - 部分被血条挡住请考虑
01:12:201 (4,7) - stack？
01:31:367 - 01:31:451 - 或许可以加note
01:52:867 (1) - 建议要么stack或者放的更近，要么改成一个跳

Yuki

01:07:201 (1) - 这里有个音考虑下要不要改成串
01:13:201 - 建议加note然后改成跳
01:27:868 (2) - 不舒服不如改成1/2然后01:28:117 - 加note
没啥问题

Hard

00:42:867 (3,4) - 跳得不好不如不跳 4可以放到x:272 y:63
00:44:867 (1,1) - 可以左右完全对称然后00:45:534 (1) - 去NC
00:51:534 (8,1) - 交换NC
01:06:867 (6,7,8,9,1) - AR7下这个五角星跳基本是吃食请考虑修改
01:20:867 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 离转盘太近了感觉不是很好其实可以像Normal一样留一个break
01:33:201 (4,5,6) - 跳的莫名也是AR7下往往会看成摆的不好的1/1 不如不跳
01:46:200 (4) - NC
01:49:867 (2) - 这不合曲，建议改成1/2+note

Normal

没啥问题

Good luck~

- Jelly -

30 posts

Joined April 2013

- Jelly - 2013-10-06T18:38:37+00:00

Hi~

Yuki

HP-1或者OD+1
00:45:201 (5,1) - 这里太容易误读..
00:58:534 (3,4) - 改成滑条
01:03:368 (4) - 和01:03:534 (1) - 对称一下。移动到451 238
01:05:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个梗打起来不舒服。。
01:06:868 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - 5连应该从01:07:034开始
01:18:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 音效做个渐变

Insane

00:12:367 (3,4) - 换一下位置
01:28:868 (1,2,3,4) - 做二分音，
01:41:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这六边形可以用Alt+S摆。更好看。。
01:52:867 (1) - 和2stuck
怎么感觉这才是最高难度 ._.

Hard

00:27:534 (1) - DS感觉没必要变化。。
01:28:201 (7) - 这里可做三连。做滑条感觉漏音。

Normal

00:44:867 (3) - 再做一次折返？

感觉简直是瞎mod QAQ (捂脸，
小船神麻婆不要介意 |||||

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-07T03:40:04+00:00

Flower wrote:
Yuki

01:07:201 (1) - 这里有个音考虑下要不要改成串结合下面的modder说的改了
01:13:201 - 建议加note然后改成跳我考虑下
01:27:868 (2) - 不舒服不如改成1/2然后01:28:117 - 加note ok
没啥问题花花这么说我很高兴0.0
另外花花你的那个160的消除能玩？

- Jelly - wrote:
Yuki
HP-1或者OD+1 nope
00:45:201 (5,1) - 这里太容易误读.. 多花1pc就可以读懂不改
00:58:534 (3,4) - 改成滑条 nope
01:03:368 (4) - 和01:03:534 (1) - 对称一下。移动到451 238 fixed
01:05:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个梗打起来不舒服。。 hehe
01:06:868 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - 5连应该从01:07:034开始改了
01:18:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 音效做个渐变好

OniJAM wrote:
Yuki
00:09:701 (5,6,7) - 这里不妨也手动堆叠？好
00:23:534 (1) - whistle 好
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这样的连打很糟糕换成普通的那种不好，我就想坑人家acc一把

EmingK

341 posts

Joined October 2012

EmingK 2013-10-07T12:26:12+00:00

小船早._.
来得有点晚QAQ

. 一开始听这曲子我以为耳机坏了..

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.

Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore

[General]
Tags里单写一个Project干啥，在source里提到就不用写了。倒是可以写这个：
プロジェクトウタヒメ
~~作曲/编曲：ARM，作词：夕野ヨシミ，~~Vocal：miko，可以加进tags中。（来源：http://www.giza10.com/soft/utahime/#3 ）
Tags中的[Minakami Yuki]应改为[Minakami_Yuki]，所有的username中间不要有空格，需要用下划线代替。
似乎ranking criteria不让用与BG颜色相近的combo color？谁写的这么条规则这么蠢，我就提这么一句QAQ
~~怎么感觉BG被纵向压过呢。。如果你有原图的话，建议用Photoshop的裁剪工具剪成相应像素大小，不要直接缩放。~~网上找的图全是这个比例。。

[Normal]
00:04:701 (3,1) - 没包好
00:12:201 (1) - 遮挡起来不好看，建议顺时针转120度
00:30:534 (1,2) - 没包好，关了grid把(1)的中间控制点往左移
00:42:535 (3) - 尾部控制点移到x258 y208

[Hard]
00:17:867 (5) - 认真一点遮好？
01:02:867 (3) - ^
01:52:201 (4) - ^
01:35:534 (3,4,5,1) - 叠歪了
01:49:867 (2) - ;w;在直线上加红点是要闹哪样

[Insane]
00:06:201 (2,6) - 叠歪了
00:10:867 (5,1,3) - ^
00:50:201 (4,1) - ^
00:58:867 (7,1) - ^
01:10:201 (9,10,11,1) - ^
00:26:034 (4,1) - 没包好
01:20:534 (2) - 还是做成直线好看
01:54:034 (6) - 换个地方摆吧，和(1)的间距有点坑

[Yuki]
00:35:034 (3,4) - 没叠好？
01:11:368 (2,4) - ^
01:10:534 - 加个circle?
01:47:201 (3,4) - 哦草这个坑死了后面那个也是

Good luck!

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-07T13:54:28+00:00

EmingK wrote:
[Yuki]
00:35:034 (3,4) - 没叠好？你看错了
01:11:368 (2,4) - ^ 这个你没看错 fixed
01:10:534 - 加个circle? 好
01:47:201 (3,4) - 哦草这个坑死了后面那个也是蛤蛤蛤蛤[/notice]

Good luck!

改的地方

打开osu文件吧hitobjects后面的全部复制成下面的就可以了

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236,212,1534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,192,1701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,188,1868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,195,2034,2,0,P|422:213|463:270,1,120.000005024671,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,335,2701,6,0,P|321:347|291:351,1,60.0000025123357,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,352,3034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,344,3201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,326,3368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,371,3534,2,0,P|219:307|200:222,1,180.000007537007,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,127,4368,5,0,0:0:0:0:
211,127,4534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,127,4701,2,0,P|152:135|112:178,2,120.000005024671
95,274,5868,5,0,0:0:0:0:
95,274,6201,2,0,P|45:253|15:193,1,120.000005024671,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,101,6868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,80,7034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,74,7201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,84,7368,2,0,P|217:99|277:93,1,120.000005024671,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,78,7868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,48,8201,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,52,8534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,56,8868,2,0,P|420:108|380:160,1,120.000005024671,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,9368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,220,9701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,224,9867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,228,10034,2,0,P|456:279|441:344,1,120.000005024671
377,296,10534,2,0,L|321:316,1,60.0000025123357
274,329,10868,2,0,L|215:305,1,60.0000025123357
178,368,11201,2,0,L|167:308,1,60.0000025123357
113,56,11534,6,0,L|81:171,1,120.000005024671,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,350,12201,1,2,0:0:0:0:
81,301,12368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,274,12534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,257,12701,2,0,P|241:227|274:169,1,120.000005024671
286,55,13368,6,0,P|336:50|360:57,1,60.0000025123357
404,65,13701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,99,13868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
473,154,14034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,200,14201,2,0,P|412:267|444:375,1,180.000007537007,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
505,306,15034,6,0,L|438:286,1,60.0000025123357
388,279,15368,2,0,P|335:275|267:303,1,120.000005024671
237,346,15868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,354,16201,2,0,P|343:287|302:242,1,120.000005024671
163,248,16868,6,0,P|126:295|117:353,1,120.000005024671,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,248,17534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
163,248,17701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,197,17868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,196,18034,2,0,P|139:144|228:167,1,180.000007537007
436,280,18868,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,276,19201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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387,79,20368,2,0,L|327:99,1,60.0000025123357
256,192,20701,12,0,21868,0:0:0:0:
80,108,22201,5,2,0:0:0:0:
157,88,22368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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157,88,22868,5,2,0:0:0:0:
233,67,23034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
391,71,23201,2,0,L|312:81,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,145,23534,5,2,0:0:0:0:
294,168,23618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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373,171,23784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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449,161,23951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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505,214,24118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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494,333,24534,2,0,P|465:369|427:374,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,294,24868,6,0,P|391:272|351:269,1,80.000000298023,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,306,25201,2,0,P|244:316|284:312,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,247,25534,2,0,P|128:206|92:184,1,80.000000298023
21,199,25868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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363,71,110118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,67,110201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,69,110284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,81,110368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,103,110451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,129,110534,6,0,P|193:150|154:159,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,157,110868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,159,111034,2,0,P|181:184|194:237,1,80.000000298023,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,321,111368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,309,111534,6,0,P|332:299|368:306,1,80.000000298023,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,365,111868,2,0,P|456:329|458:290,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,267,112201,2,0,P|325:258|286:266,1,80.000000298023
200,310,112534,2,0,P|190:252|197:228,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,170,112868,5,0,0:0:0:0:
359,205,113034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,110,113201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
435,144,113368,5,0,0:0:0:0:
283,265,113534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,75,113701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,24,113868,6,0,P|158:60|165:110,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,190,114201,1,4,0:0:0:0:
206,219,114284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,251,114368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,280,114451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,302,114534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,315,114618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,315,114701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,302,114784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
65,280,114868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
53,251,114951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,219,115034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,190,115118,2,0,L|113:190,3,40.0000001490115,0|8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,188,115534,6,0,P|228:166|266:156,1,80.000000298023
266,156,115784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,156,115868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,232,116034,2,0,P|361:167|338:93,1,160.000000596046
250,52,116534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,10,116701,2,0,P|384:18|407:46,1,80.000000298023
445,126,117034,5,0,0:0:0:0:
445,126,117118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
445,126,117201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
437,221,117368,2,0,P|422:259|393:288,1,80.000000298023
304,318,117701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,305,117868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
145,232,118034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,118201,12,4,120201,0:0:0:0:

smallboat

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smallboat 2013-10-08T07:39:59+00:00

Flower

Flower wrote:
m4m

General

这是180？你们能不能不要做得跟160一样沒辦法因為是渣圖剛才又改了些

Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.
请修改所有5%的部分修了最低到15%

这bg太花了 note颜色又跟bg一样简直第一pc就想给1分抱歉我想想要設什麼顏色..別給一分呀;w;
我还是先删了bg再mod抱歉我combo顏色會改謝謝mod

Insane

00:21:701 (1) - 这里背景是1/4，考虑一下 fixed
00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 或许可以考虑改成soft+whistle fixed
00:43:534 (7,1) - 交换NC fixed
01:09:201 (5) - 部分被血条挡住请考虑 fixed
01:12:201 (4,7) - stack？ fixed
01:31:367 - 01:31:451 - 或许可以加note fixed
01:52:867 (1) - 建议要么stack或者放的更近，要么改成一个跳 fixed

Yuki

01:07:201 (1) - 这里有个音考虑下要不要改成串
01:13:201 - 建议加note然后改成跳
01:27:868 (2) - 不舒服不如改成1/2然后01:28:117 - 加note
没啥问题

Hard

00:42:867 (3,4) - 跳得不好不如不跳 4可以放到x:272 y:63 fixed
00:44:867 (1,1) - 可以左右完全对称然后00:45:534 (1) - 去NC fixed
00:51:534 (8,1) - 交换NC fixed
01:06:867 (6,7,8,9,1) - AR7下这个五角星跳基本是吃食请考虑修改 fixed 已改成連續note
01:20:867 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 离转盘太近了感觉不是很好其实可以像Normal一样留一个break fixed 已設成break
01:33:201 (4,5,6) - 跳的莫名也是AR7下往往会看成摆的不好的1/1 不如不跳 fixed 也是設成連續note
01:46:200 (4) - NC fixed
01:49:867 (2) - 这不合曲，建议改成1/2+note fixed 設成前面一長條+圈

Normal

没啥问题 3Q

Good luck~謝謝花花神麻婆

- Jelly -

- Jelly - wrote:
Hi~

[Yuki]
HP-1或者OD+1
00:45:201 (5,1) - 这里太容易误读..
00:58:534 (3,4) - 改成滑条
01:03:368 (4) - 和01:03:534 (1) - 对称一下。移动到451 238
01:05:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个梗打起来不舒服。。
01:06:868 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - 5连应该从01:07:034开始
01:18:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 音效做个渐变

[Insane]
00:12:367 (3,4) - 换一下位置 fixed
01:28:868 (1,2,3,4) - 做二分音， fixed
01:41:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这六边形可以用Alt+S摆。更好看。。 fixed 等下up
01:52:867 (1) - 和2stuck fixed 是stack吧..
怎么感觉这才是最高难度 ._. 哈哈..

[Hard]
00:27:534 (1) - DS感觉没必要变化。。 fixed
01:28:201 (7) - 这里可做三连。做滑条感觉漏音。 fixed

[Normal]
00:44:867 (3) - 再做一次折返？ fixed

感觉简直是瞎mod QAQ (捂脸，還沒Ranked一張不神啦..
小船神麻婆不要介意 ||||| 不會

謝謝傑利神觸的mod

EmingK

EmingK wrote:
小船早._. 早
来得有点晚QAQ 沒關係@_@

. 一开始听这曲子我以为耳机坏了.. 這首歌蠻特殊..

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.
Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
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[General]
Tags里单写一个Project干啥，在source里提到就不用写了。倒是可以写这个：
プロジェクトウタヒメ fixed
~~作曲/编曲：ARM，作词：夕野ヨシミ，~~Vocal：miko，可以加进tags中。（来源：http://www.giza10.com/soft/utahime/#3 ） fixed
Tags中的[Minakami Yuki]应改为[Minakami_Yuki]，所有的username中间不要有空格，需要用下划线代替。 fixed
似乎ranking criteria不让用与BG颜色相近的combo color？谁写的这么条规则这么蠢，我就提这么一句QAQ 花花說顏色相近不太好耶..
~~怎么感觉BG被纵向压过呢。。如果你有原图的话，建议用Photoshop的裁剪工具剪成相应像素大小，不要直接缩放。~~网上找的图全是这个比例。。還好吧這兩張..

[Normal]
00:04:701 (3,1) - 没包好 fixed
00:12:201 (1) - 遮挡起来不好看，建议顺时针转120度 fixed
00:30:534 (1,2) - 没包好，关了grid把(1)的中间控制点往左移 fixed
00:42:535 (3) - 尾部控制点移到x258 y208 fixed

[Hard]
00:17:867 (5) - 认真一点遮好？ fixed
01:02:867 (3) - ^ fixed
01:52:201 (4) - ^ fixed
01:35:534 (3,4,5,1) - 叠歪了 fixed＿
01:49:867 (2) - ;w;在直线上加红点是要闹哪样咦沒紅點呀

[Insane]
00:06:201 (2,6) - 叠歪了 fixed
00:10:867 (5,1,3) - ^ fixed
00:50:201 (4,1) - ^ fixed
00:58:867 (7,1) - ^ fixed
01:10:201 (9,10,11,1) - ^ fixed
00:26:034 (4,1) - 没包好 fixed
01:20:534 (2) - 还是做成直线好看
01:54:034 (6) - 换个地方摆吧，和(1)的间距有点坑

[Yuki]
00:35:034 (3,4) - 没叠好？
01:11:368 (2,4) - ^
01:10:534 - 加个circle?
01:47:201 (3,4) - 哦草这个坑死了后面那个也是

Good luck!謝謝E小K

Melt

Melt wrote:
Hi 嗨

[General]
combo colour应该是从背景取色?那combo colour3那个绿色是怎么回事orz，试试这个：(196,136,255)
神麻婆果然很會選顏色

[Normal]
为什么要用tick2呢orz 想讓分數多點..不過改1了
00:12:201 (1) - 个人觉得这样放要好些 fixed
00:15:367 (2) - 往左移一点for blanket? fixed
00:34:201 (3) - 既然2copy1那3也copy1好了 fixed
01:17:867 (1) - 感觉还是结束于01:20:867比较好 fixed
[Hard]
感觉最开始的这一段sv稍微大了点 fixed 改0.75 修了好久這邊....
00:12:201 (2,3) - 没叠好（逃 fixed (抓
00:15:867 (4) - 试试往下做弧呢 fixed
00:16:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 其实感觉很多小地方都可以调整一下让这个diff更整洁，比如这里 fixed
00:49:201 (3,1) - 因为这里不是高潮所以就harddiff来说感觉合成一个sldier fixed
01:02:867 (3) - 这种要遮就遮好0.0 fixed
01:10:201 (8,1) - swap nc fixed
01:35:534 (3,4,5) - 没叠好 fixed
[Insane]
00:12:701 (5) - 个人感觉往下放点比较好 fixed
00:15:034 (1,2,3,4) - 同样是细节上改动一下 fixed
00:24:867 (1) - 1这个角度实在是orz fixed 我剛剛還以為這是原圖想說沒啥奇怪..結果回到自己的..咦 ?
00:44:534 (5,6) - 这个音乐的话5,6的ds再大点会更好 fixed
01:31:451 (2) - 感觉这个有点多余o.o fixed 已刪
01:56:867 (3) - 感觉应该叠在2下面 fixed

[Yuki]
00:10:534 (8) - nc for consistence
00:16:868 (1) - 可以复制00:16:201(4)
00:20:701 (1) - 这里可以上一个note然后让spin从00:20:784开始
00:35:034 (3,4) - 稍微一动一下让3,4叠在00:33:201(2)上，移动前面的也行
01:07:118 (9) - 听了很多遍都觉得这个note删掉比较好orz
01:30:868 (3) - 感觉有点鬼畜，试试3ctrl+g？
01:40:868 (1,2) - 没叠好
:3 謝謝妹兒特的mod

Last edited by smallboat 2013-10-09T16:23:31+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2013-10-08T13:02:48+00:00

Hi

[General]

combo colour应该是从背景取色?那combo colour3那个绿色是怎么回事orz，试试这个：(196,136,255)

[Normal]

为什么要用tick2呢orz
00:12:201 (1) - 个人觉得这样放要好些
SPOILER
00:15:367 (2) - 往左移一点for blanket?
00:34:201 (3) - 既然2copy1那3也copy1好了
01:17:867 (1) - 感觉还是结束于01:20:867比较好

[Hard]

感觉最开始的这一段sv稍微大了点
00:12:201 (2,3) - 没叠好（逃
00:15:867 (4) - 试试往下做弧呢
SPOILER
00:16:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 其实感觉很多小地方都可以调整一下让这个diff更整洁，比如这里
SPOILER
00:49:201 (3,1) - 因为这里不是高潮所以就harddiff来说感觉合成一个sldier
01:02:867 (3) - 这种要遮就遮好0.0
SPOILER
01:10:201 (8,1) - swap nc
01:35:534 (3,4,5) - 没叠好

[Insane]

00:12:701 (5) - 个人感觉往下放点比较好
SPOILER
00:15:034 (1,2,3,4) - 同样是细节上改动一下
SPOILER
00:24:867 (1) - 1这个角度实在是orz
SPOILER
00:44:534 (5,6) - 这个音乐的话5,6的ds再大点会更好
01:31:451 (2) - 感觉这个有点多余o.o
01:56:867 (3) - 感觉应该叠在2下面

[Yuki]

00:10:534 (8) - nc for consistence
00:16:868 (1) - 可以复制00:16:201(4)
00:20:701 (1) - 这里可以上一个note然后让spin从00:20:784开始
00:35:034 (3,4) - 稍微一动一下让3,4叠在00:33:201(2)上，移动前面的也行
01:07:118 (9) - 听了很多遍都觉得这个note删掉比较好orz
01:30:868 (3) - 感觉有点鬼畜，试试3ctrl+g？
01:40:868 (1,2) - 没叠好

:3

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-08T14:25:03+00:00

Melt wrote:
[Yuki]
00:10:534 (8) - nc for consistence
00:16:868 (1) - 可以复制00:16:201(4) 本来就是复制的不过ctrl+G了一下
00:20:701 (1) - 这里可以上一个note然后让spin从00:20:784开始好
00:35:034 (3,4) - 稍微一动一下让3,4叠在00:33:201(2)上，移动前面的也行好
01:07:118 (9) - 听了很多遍都觉得这个note删掉比较好orz nope，听了很多遍确定有鼓点
01:30:868 (3) - 感觉有点鬼畜，试试3ctrl+g？我打起来毫无压力，nope
01:40:868 (1,2) - 没叠好 fixed
至于combo color，如果小船你要改的话，就顺便帮我一起改了吧

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