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KUURAhoshi
Where's the video ? Add it ! :)

Btw,, AXION is a board game.. See the BGA on YouTube
Starfy
The world destroyed
But anyway God Map LOL
Chloe
Hello~ check it from my queue!

[General]
  1. Skystar's diff's Artist is different with others, should be "削除"
  2. The spread between checkmate and hw's diff is too... a player's view tho


[Irre's Normal]
  1. 00:52:150 (3) - reduce reverse 1 time and add a note in 00:52:900 -
  2. 01:24:400 (1,1) - it's bad... I suggest to remap this pattern



[fanzhen's Hard]
  1. 00:43:337 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:45:400 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these two parts....... it too weird, one is too much, other one is too less......
  2. 01:12:400 (1,1,2,3,4) - make a polygon?


patterns are nice but this diff has some inconsistent problems.


[Insane]

nice diff, nothing to say.


[LKs' Another]
  1. 00:25:900 (10) - how about put it to x:256 y:352
  2. 00:38:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i suggest to scale the spacing to 0.8-1.2
  3. 00:45:212 (4) - ctrl g
  4. 01:01:712 (11) - looks bad, try to curve it a bit and don't let it stack.
  5. 01:13:900 (1) - x:496 y:47 looks better and
  6. 01:22:056 (1,1) - it confused me for a few times in playing..... plz remove the nc of the second one and reduce the spacing here,also 01:23:556 (1,1) - .


rhythm and hs is quite good but i don't like the placement....


[Checkmate]
  1. 00:50:650 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - i suggest to scale the spacing to 0.8-1.2
  2. 01:11:650 (3,4,5,6) - make some overlap like 01:05:275 (2,3,4,5) -
  3. 01:21:868 (6) - move it to the centre of 01:21:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ? 01:21:775 (5,6) - or these two should be a pattern from music, same to 01:22:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
  4. make both 01:54:400 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:54:775 (5,6,7,8) - as a part, just like your mothership ok?


nice diff but i eggpain


[jibaHW]
  1. 00:05:931 - add, suggest as a player
  2. 00:25:618 (5,1) - plz change the sliders' style to 0108.
  3. 00:28:337 (4) - move to 276 93
  4. 00:29:743 (3,4) - ^
  5. 00:38:650 (5,6,7,8) - you can adjust the sv here
  6. 01:34:525 (3) - nc 01:36:025 (4) - nc 01:37:525 (4) - nc


I think you won't change your style and take any spacing suggestion from normal modders so there's no much, such creative, i quit


[jibaSkystar]
  1. 01:09:025 (1) - nc
  2. 01:34:337 (1) - nc 01:35:837 (4) - nc
  3. 00:10:900 (1,2,3,4) - why it is not a polygon?
  4. 00:27:681 (2,3) - is this a double bpm style? we can see sth like 00:28:525 (6,7) - 、 00:29:181 (2,3) - and 00:29:556 (4,5) - still could be hit with double fingers just like normal 1/4, but this one is just too much, I don't agree with you.
  5. 00:31:900 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - .... i don't think it's nice, neither in playing and placement. 00:37:900 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this one is better in placement but also awkward in playing but hvick like it you know.
  6. 01:02:275 (3,4) - ctrl g, current spacing is too big.


you go die


[AXION REBORN?????? fking who made this one1111111111111111 i wanna killl111111111111 YOU!!!]
  1. 00:14:181 - add an note here, you need it
  2. 00:28:431 (2,3) - .
  3. 01:02:837 (2,3,4,5,6) - ..
  4. 01:16:618 (3,4,5) - ...
  5. 01:20:650 (1,2,3) - kill you
  6. 01:26:650 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - KILLL YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  7. 01:34:337 (1,2,3,4) - first, I would go to buy a bomb.
  8. 01:37:431 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - and I put it behind your dick
  9. 01:54:400 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - fire and booooooooooooooooooooooooooom


anyone is ok, plz nuke it.
Kloyd
should change diffname fanzhen's to macuilxochitl's or something like dat cuz the user changed his username.
pw384
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Kareov
[Irre]
02:53:194 (4) - Remove NC
01:26:650 (1) - 不要叠在这里换个位子 善待新人
01:50:462 (1) - Normal里用1/4slider不太好 很容易误导新人
01:48:025 (3) - 往右边一点 就不会和上一个slider看上去像叠在一起
Topic Starter
Flower
Translation of Kareov's mod:

Kareov wrote:

[Irre]
02:53:194 (4) - Remove NC
01:26:650 (1) - Don't stack here. It's unfriendly to beginners.
01:50:462 (1) - 1/4 slider in Normal may mislead beginners
01:48:025 (3) - move right a bit and it won't be like stacking with previous slider
LKs
- chloe's mod

http://puu.sh/buwUD/917d73bf26.osu

fixed 01:01:712 (11)
redesigned nc sets among 01:21:400 (1) - ~ 01:23:650 (2) -
fixed wrong rhythm on 01:08:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
Hollow Wings

Chloe wrote:

[jibaHW]
  1. 00:05:931 - add, suggest as a player nope for not that necessary
  2. 00:25:618 (5,1) - plz change the sliders' style to 0108. what's 0108 style sliders w
  3. 00:28:337 (4) - move to 276 93 lol??
  4. 00:29:743 (3,4) - ^ ^??
  5. 00:38:650 (5,6,7,8) - you can adjust the sv here i've thought about that but the recently ones r better imo
  6. 01:34:525 (3) - nc 01:36:025 (4) - nc 01:37:525 (4) - nc all fixed


I think you won't change your style and take any spacing suggestion from normal modders so there's no much, such creative, i quit w, what's creative indeed
thx for modding!

osu file format v13

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Tags:cytus C82 LKs Irreversible Amamiya Yuko fanzhen0019 Hollow Wings
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477,271,90493,2,0,L|255:250,1,218.75
234,263,90775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,263,91150,6,0,L|451:282,1,218.75,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
444,310,91431,2,0,P|493:226|406:183,1,218.75,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
389,206,91712,6,0,L|126:221,1,262.500010013581,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
104,261,91993,2,0,P|30:170|128:107,1,262.500010013581,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
167,11,92275,6,0,P|294:90|444:74,1,306.250002920628,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
492,192,92556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,310,92650,2,0,P|294:293|167:372,1,306.250002920628
444,310,93025,21,0,0:0:0:0:
492,192,93165,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,74,93306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,74,93400,6,0,P|363:142|464:94,1,306.25,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,66,94150,5,0,0:0:0:0:
417,123,94337,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,84,94525,5,8,0:0:0:0:
68,176,94618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,72,94806,5,0,0:0:0:0:
80,164,94900,2,0,P|180:209|106:127,1,306.25
63,123,95650,21,0,0:0:0:0:
63,123,95743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,176,95837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,144,96025,5,8,0:0:0:0:
481,235,96118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,132,96306,5,0,0:0:0:0:
508,272,96400,2,0,P|407:317|481:235,1,306.25
454,284,97150,5,0,0:0:0:0:
454,284,97243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
454,284,97337,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,245,97525,21,8,0:0:0:0:
104,308,97618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,233,97806,5,0,0:0:0:0:
47,296,97900,2,0,P|147:341|73:259,1,306.25
104,308,98650,5,0,0:0:0:0:
104,308,98743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,308,98837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,308,98931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,282,99025,6,0,L|160:237,2,29.1666666666667,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,322,99212,21,8,0:0:0:0:
193,322,99306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,322,99400,1,4,0:0:0:0:
162,307,105400,6,0,L|378:302,1,196.875007510186
422,213,105775,2,0,L|454:353,1,131.25000500679,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,175,106150,6,0,L|362:315,1,131.25000500679
240,223,106431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,223,106525,2,0,L|159:218,1,65.6250025033952
97,210,106712,2,0,L|16:205,1,65.6250025033952
330,175,106900,6,0,L|114:170,1,196.875007510186
62,78,107275,2,0,L|30:218,1,131.25000500679,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,339,107650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
13,285,107743,2,0,L|167:289,1,131.25000500679
213,342,108025,2,0,L|409:346,1,196.875007510186
473,293,108400,22,0,B|463:160|463:160|390:267,1,262.500010013581,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,267,108962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,224,109150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
33,49,109337,2,0,L|78:98,1,65.6250025033952
221,69,109525,2,0,L|157:84,1,65.6250025033952
108,223,109712,2,0,L|128:161,1,65.6250025033952
222,69,109900,5,0,0:0:0:0:
391,267,110087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,219,110181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
466,142,110275,1,8,0:0:0:0:
445,68,110368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,88,110462,38,0,L|313:270,1,175,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,367,110837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,241,111025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,361,111118,2,0,L|325:366,1,175
111,97,111400,6,0,B|43:307|43:307|110:254,1,306.25,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,274,112150,2,0,B|223:317|223:317|167:200,1,175,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
415,244,112900,6,0,B|476:283|476:283|377:57,1,306.25,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,292,113650,2,0,B|297:299|297:299|362:175,1,175,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,70,114400,6,0,L|119:76,1,43.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,83,114587,2,0,L|242:89,1,43.75
89,161,114775,6,0,L|149:159,1,43.75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,159,114962,2,0,L|273:157,1,43.75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,249,115150,6,0,L|189:240,1,43.75
253,232,115337,2,0,L|312:223,1,43.75
181,330,115525,6,0,L|239:314,1,43.75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,298,115712,2,0,L|359:282,1,43.75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,64,115900,6,0,L|307:92,1,175
449,171,116181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
363,177,116275,2,0,L|270:163,1,87.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,249,116462,2,0,L|222:235,1,87.5
12,119,116650,6,0,L|184:147,1,175
181,330,116931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,330,117025,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,201,117118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,49,117212,2,0,L|281:142,1,87.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,332,117400,5,4,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Flower

Chloe wrote:

Hello~ check it from my queue!

[General]
  1. Skystar's diff's Artist is different with others, should be "削除"
  2. The spread between checkmate and hw's diff is too... a player's view tho impov skystar is actually easier, so it should be okay



[Checkmate]
  1. 00:50:650 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - i suggest to scale the spacing to 0.8-1.2 don't know how. this pattern is good enough as a transition
  2. 01:11:650 (3,4,5,6) - make some overlap like 01:05:275 (2,3,4,5) - k
  3. 01:21:868 (6) - move it to the centre of 01:21:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ? 01:21:775 (5,6) - or these two should be a pattern from music, same to 01:22:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the shape will be spoiled. also, w/o increasing the spacing, it's the hardest pattern to reach, at least to me.
  4. make both 01:54:400 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:54:775 (5,6,7,8) - as a part, just like your mothership ok? nope


nice diff but i eggpain


[AXION REBORN?????? fking who made this one1111111111111111 i wanna killl111111111111 YOU!!!]
  1. 00:14:181 - add an note here, you need it Nope, this pattern should emphasise the downbeat with the slider
    I ignore the meaningless part


anyone is ok, plz nuke it.

Kloyd wrote:

should change diffname fanzhen's to macuilxochitl's or something like dat cuz the user changed his username. I don't know if fanzhen is making another diff, let's wait until everything is clear. Besides, I think the normal is too hard, so I'm going to make a beginner.
Thanks all! updated.
Kibbleru
oh im kinda scared to mod this buttt

from gu's m4m queue :D

ill go with the 5 easier diffs instead lol ;w;. extras too scary to mod

[Checkmate]
  1. Doesn't it have to be the hardest diff in the set to have a custom diff name? i think you'll have to rename it to just "Extra"
  2. 01:10:431 (6) - this doesn't really land anywhere on the music while 01:10:337 - has a pretty dominant sound. so.. move (6) to there maybe?
  3. 01:13:993 (1) - kinda troll but since this is an extra u can end spinner at 01:14:931 - and add a circle at 01:15:025 - :D
  4. 01:32:650 - maybe add circle? and stack on 01:32:556 (1) -
  5. 01:35:931 (4,5) - this is honestly pretty harsh. especially since it breaks flow as well. maybe ctrl g (4)
  6. 01:48:400 (1) - there isn't really anything on the repeat. the piano is at 01:48:775 - :/

cant mod extras ;w;

[LK's Another]
  1. 00:16:900 (1) - well.. the double repeat stuff. this is the only one you have in the map, might as well get not do a double repeat.
  2. 00:24:400 - maybe try this rhythm, i think it works better
  3. 00:32:462 (4,1) - maybe stack like 00:29:275 (5,1) - ? idk the spacing just looks inconsistent for some reason o-o (u stacked them here as well 00:47:462 (3,4) - )
  4. 01:09:025 (5) - NC to make this more readable?
  5. 01:19:150 - uh, add circle to stack at the end of (5)? just to get the drum
  6. 01:39:400 - highly suggest u map this finish out
  7. 01:57:025 (1) - this NC is questionable
  8. I did notice u have alot of bezier curves, if you have the time you could go through and convert them into the new circular sliders, but it shouldn't be a problem.

[Insane]

  • lol ar 8.8
  1. maybe hp7? hard diff is hp 6 lol.
  2. 00:06:025 - why not map this out?
  3. 00:58:150 - add circle here? 3/4 gap is a bit awkward and i there is no reason why you shouldnt
  4. 01:09:400 (1,2) - this is a better rhythm imo so u can get something clickable onto the white tick
  5. 01:52:900 (3) - NC here as well for consistency? also there's a pretty strong sound there too
    Nice diff, i found this pretty smooth to play and i'm the biggest noob lol

[Fanzhen's Hard]
  1. 00:13:525 (1) - er maybe u can tone down the sv change a bit, i found it quite surprising during first play.
  2. 00:16:337 (2,3,1) - okay honest opinion, when you use 0.4 ds for the streamy parts, i just found it hard to read cuz everything is clustered together. If you would, please increase the DS a bit. or else it becomes too hard to read. especially for things like 00:16:337 (2,3,1) - or 00:30:775 (2,1,2) - and 00:43:618 (5,2,3,4,5,6,1) - etc...
  3. 00:57:775 (2,3) - eh, i highly recommend against this kind of pattern in hard diff
  4. 01:00:775 (2,4) - can u space these out a bit, they overlap and are slightly hard to read
  5. 01:04:900 - map this out? u mapped this one 01:06:400 (1) -
    01:10:900 - ^
  6. 01:32:900 (1,2) - try this rhythm, i think it follows the music a bit better since you can have something clickable on the white tick. also a bit less awkward to play imo
  7. Overall, its a nice diff, i just found that some places were a bit too cluttered.

[Irre's Normal]
  1. hey irre :D
  2. 01:39:423 (1) - apparently an unsnapped slider head according to aibat
  3. 00:18:400 (4) - uhh try dragging this slider back 1/2, it follows the piano better that way, also to be more consistent with 00:15:025 (3,4) -
  4. 00:31:337 (3) - try making this a 1/2 slider, i think it works better cuz u can map out the drum at 00:31:525 -
    00:34:337 (3) - ^
  5. 00:49:900 (1) - why is there nc here? doesn't really follow ur NC pattern
    00:58:900 (1,1) - ^ as with these 2
    01:16:900 (1) - ^ eh i don't really get your NCing, sometimes you do it every 2 downbeats, and sometimes it's every 1 downbeat :/
  6. 00:52:150 (3) - i don't think that extra reverse is necessary, also if you remove it, you could add a circle at 00:52:900 -
  7. 01:15:400 (1) - a little too soon after the spinner.
  8. 01:30:400 (1,1) - try to avoid this, the circle is hidden under the slider making it hard to read for normal.
  9. 01:37:900 (1,1) - lol what is that spinner snapped to. ehh i don't think this matters to much but like.. at least put it to the next blue tick lol??
  10. 01:48:400 (1) - you could make this into a 3/2 reverse instead and put a circle at 01:49:900 - that way u can get the piano at 01:48:962 -
  11. 01:54:400 (1,1) - since spinners have their emphasis on the end rather than the head, it's better to do this instead


this in HW's map
00:25:900 (1,2,3,4) - oh god is this even meant for humans lol?

this mapset will summon cookiezi
Hollow Wings
m4m

Irre's Normal

  1. 00:19:900 (1,2) - blanket perfect, and maybe this? 00:19:900 (1,4) -
  2. 00:39:400 (1,2) - ^, well, lots of those nazi issues that u can ignore as ur will, thou i recommend u fix some to keep the composing better
  3. 00:52:150 (3) - this can be a bit too hard for noobs? change the repeating to once and add a note behind
  4. 01:01:525 (2) - arrange ds here, just 01:00:400 (1,1) - keep these two in symm style
  5. 01:50:462 (1,2,1) - maybe change an easier rhythm style here, this is really hard to catch by noobs lol
  6. yeah maybe this diff is a bit too hard to be in this mapset as the lowest diff imo, maybe u still need an easy diff

fanzhen's Hard

  1. 00:25:525 (3,4) - maybe ctrl+g to low down the difficult here?
  2. 01:24:025 (1) - remove nc
  3. can't say much... baka fanzhen!!!

Insane

  1. 00:18:025 (5) - too curved, maybe smooth a bit?
  2. 01:28:150 (4,5) - perfect this blanket (nazi
  3. 01:37:900 (1,2,3,4) - change the order into 1432?
  4. 01:39:025 (1,1) - too large ds, maybe shorter it
  5. gj

LKs' Another

  1. 00:25:900 (10) - nc? as same as 01:13:900 (1) - ?
  2. 00:30:775 (2,3,4,5,1) - regular pentagon?
  3. 00:51:400 (1) - try ctrl+g? arrange ds then
  4. 00:58:337 (4,1) - a bit offscreen
  5. 01:30:400 (6,1) - swap nc setting here, then players can catch rhythm and read this patten easier
  6. 01:54:400 (1) - any better idea in its shape?
  7. LKs sennsei!!!

Checkmate

  1. 00:07:150 (9) - ctrl+g to keep ds... or set nc here to give notice of ds changing in a sudden (personal suggestion
  2. 00:13:150 (1) - remove nc
  3. 00:23:275 (4,5) - larger ds
  4. 00:28:900 (14,1) - just swap nc setting
  5. 00:57:025 (3,1) - for u have so big 1/4 jump here, it'll be a bit confusing to hit 00:57:775 (2,3) - pattern with 1/2 jump at 00:57:400 (1,2) - , so i recommend u set 00:57:775 (2) - at 146,214 or somewhere can larger that 1/2 jump to distinguish it from this jump clearly
  6. 01:08:650 (5,6,7,8) - change the order into 6785 can be better in playing
  7. 01:33:400 (4) - maybe nc?
  8. 01:50:275 (4,5) - larger this ds, for u already have lots of 1/4 jumps with that similiar ds in the whole map
  9. too hard for me, i can't play this ;w;
7 stars already lol (shot at about 9 month ago imo www

good luck!
LKs
01:09:025 (1) - added nc on this to reinforce visuality
01:57:025 (1) - agree, fixed

01:19:150 - there are no 'clear' percussions on these two notes, hence I didn't really see a need to map on a vague sound
01:39:400 -

- Kibbleru:

omg I can't even believe this diff was this old and done before disappearance of bezier sliders. fortunately most of the sliders look ok to me. is there anything weird to you? it'd be appreciated if you figure out something ugly and I will fix them
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00:25:900 (10) - added nc
00:51:400 (1) - ctrl+g yeee
00:58:337 (4,1) - fixed
01:30:400 (6,1) - it really does, good advice

00:30:775 (2,3,4,5,1) - I want to make a small jump here really bad too, but I bow to the consistency after meditating

01:54:400 (1) - nooo, I suck at sliders :?

http://puu.sh/bCzwX/de782d0002.osu
Skystar
lit120
perfect version to play than rrtyui's ^^ (but rrtyui's map is good enough to play :D. same with this map ^^)
Topic Starter
Flower
Too many mods, fixed some. fanzhen said he may contribute into a new Extra, so I'm planning to remap another Hard.
[Mahua]
反正这图带不了我(
色卡快rank报复社会啊
Kodora
Please add Skystar in tags

no kd

going to full mod & star it when I'll back
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
i made a guest diff, add plz

http://puu.sh/cnnvh/30c9f09c1e.rar

哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈
gokugohan12468
I want make a Easy or Beginner diff? ><
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