Frostmourne wrote:

This map has a potential for ranking. Talked over IRC about hitsound

Feel free to ask for rechecking once you are done with them carefully.

[Navy] wrote:

모딩 확인 늦어서 미안 ㅠㅠ

Frostmourne wrote:

so emm.. here I'm back

Navy's Hard
00:12:856 (7) - nazi, move up 1 grid so it won't look like too much overlapped like this. Sure!
00:22:380 (4) - hope you understand this picture I understanded nice pattern!
ctrl+g 00:21:903 (3) - first and do follow this screenshot.

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00:23:808 (3) - move tail to x:436 y:252. You are using 1.1x spacing and now it's 0.96 which is wrong. Sure!
00:29:523 (3) - again. I give you 2 pictures so it could be easier to understand Thank you for very nice pattern!

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Frostmourne wrote:

7omoa's Insane
00:29:761 (3) - better use this rhythm. The current one (00:30:237) doesn't fit music at this point.

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Call me back.

Frostmourne wrote:

bubbled

Sorry for taking so long due to my owc matches and stuffs irl.

TKSalt wrote:

bubbled!? so nice
gogo!

1. 00:24:761 (1) - The spacing is a bit inconsistent of the others, not a big deal, but that's just better if it's having the same exact spacing with the others.
2. 00:28:094 (3) - Same as the previous point.

1. 01:07:380 (3) - It would be nice if this slider is in the middle of your previous slider, it would look somehow better.
   
   Example

   
2. 01:08:332 (1,2,3) - Those objects are making a very bad flow compared to 01:07:380 (3,4,1) - . The reason is simple, since the circle if blanketing with your previous slider, it makes a very bad cursor move by trying to click on the next slider. Moving those objects like that, would improve the flow a lot.

1. 00:08:570 (3,4,5,6) - It would be nice if those objects were aligned within each others. If you look patiently, the space between (3,5) is not the same as for (4,6) and that's what I want you to improve. Move your circle (6) to x:220 y:156, you might see the difference.
2. 01:17:142 (3,4,5,6,7) - tried to do a star form, right uh? highlight them, you can see that it isn't pretty good. Move the circle (3) to x:428 y:96 ; the circle (6) to x:332 y:112 and the circle (7) to x:392 y:252. It's going to be way better like this (:

1. 00:53:570 - This part sound very empty since you did a short break here. Actually, you should add a circle here, anywhere, but you should add it since your previous circle starts on a red line so, to keep the polarity of your objects, it's better to add one here.
2. 01:45:475 (4,5,6,9) - Maybe you could try to make those circles aligned with your previous circle (2) just to do like (1,2)?

Gabe wrote:

7omoa's Insane
01:48:570 - To keep the consistency with the other difficulty, I really suggest you to add a Kiai time here.

1. 00:53:570 - This part sound very empty since you did a short break here. Actually, you should add a circle here, anywhere, but you should add it since your previous circle starts on a red line so, to keep the polarity of your objects, it's better to add one here.
2. 01:45:475 (4,5,6,9) - Maybe you could try to make those circles aligned with your previous circle (2) just to do like (1,2)?

Call me back when it's done! (:

Gabe wrote:

Normal
Why there's no Kiai time at 01:48:570 - ? I don't see why you should skip it since all the other diff, except 7omoa's Insane, are having it. It would be better to keep that consistency if you add it.Fixed

1. 00:24:761 (1) - The spacing is a bit inconsistent of the others, not a big deal, but that's just better if it's having the same exact spacing with the others.Fixed
2. 00:28:094 (3) - Same as the previous point. Fixed

Insane

1. 00:08:570 (3,4,5,6) - It would be nice if those objects were aligned within each others. If you look patiently, the space between (3,5) is not the same as for (4,6) and that's what I want you to improve. Move your circle (6) to x:220 y:156, you might see the difference.Fixed
2. 01:17:142 (3,4,5,6,7) - tried to do a star form, right uh? highlight them, you can see that it isn't pretty good. Move the circle (3) to x:428 y:96 ; the circle (6) to x:332 y:112 and the circle (7) to x:392 y:252. It's going to be way better like this (: Fixed

This one is pretty good!

Call me back when it's done! (:

1. 01:07:380 (3) - It would be nice if this slider is in the middle of your previous slider, it would look somehow better. OK
   
   Example

   
2. 01:08:332 (1,2,3) - Those objects are making a very bad flow compared to 01:07:380 (3,4,1) - . The reason is simple, since the circle if blanketing with your previous slider, it makes a very bad cursor move by trying to click on the next slider. Moving those objects like that, would improve the flow a lot.NICE!

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Gratzz!! Startrick, Navy, and 7omoa!!^^ for Azmato, Gratzz for first Ranked Maps!!^^


Sorry for my diff, I so busy, sorry