[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

[7omoa's Insane]
( My mod usually recommended )
( Sorry for my bad english )

AR -1? x AR 7 is too low :3

00:32:975 (2) - no sounds in here. and 00:33:213 (3) - here. Remove these notes, and add note 00:33:094 - here and 00:33:332 - here. o

00:52:142 (1) - Remove NC ? o
00:54:284 (1) - ^ o
00:59:999 (1) - ^ o

01:00:951 (1) - Add NC? o
01:01:903 (1) - Remove NC? o
01:08:332 (1) - ^ o

01:10:237 (1) - and 01:12:142 (1) - Remove spin and How about add a notes?
Like This x

01:31:903 (2) - i think this shape is better.
Like This o

01:32:499 (2) - here and 01:32:737 (4) - here has no sounds. Remove Notes :3 o

That's all :3
좋은 맵이네요.
GL!

Autumn wrote:

[7omoa's Insane]
Exchange 00:26:427 (6) - and 00:26:665 (1) - to get a crossing flow, to be cinsistent with 00:27:380 (3,4,5,6,7) - o

00:32:380 (1,2) - According to music, the rhythm should be this:
http://puu.sh/4O6gh.jpg
and I recommend adding a note at 00:33:094 - and stack it with 00:33:213 (3) - o

01:08:332 (1,2,3) - Try Ctrl+G on each slider, to make some difference o Good suggestion >w<b

01:25:237 (7) - Stack: X=117 Y=72 o

bbj0920 wrote:

DAFUQ IS WRONG WITH THIS BEATMAP?

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CloudSplash16 wrote:

[7omoa's Insane]
01:13:808 - This inheriting section doesn't seem to change anything. Remove it?
01:56:189 - ^
Why different combo colors?
00:06:427 (3,1) - I would prefer more distance between these, or a stack.
00:47:975 (2) - I don't hear anything in the music to suggest this. I suggest you remove it. Same at 01:03:213 (2) - and 01:48:927 (2) -
For the end, I feel that the spacing between notes should increase, but you made a pentagon with smaller distance at the end. Maybe turn it into a star pattern, or increase spacing?

BounceBabe wrote:

Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue!

General

- Make the combo colours consistant through the set.O

Normal

Can't find anything here, nice done! Thanks!

Insane

00:15:713 (2,3) - This spacing is way too wrong. The normal spacing is almost at the corner of the playfield. Why dont you change your placement a little and stack the 3 onto the 2 circles and make a triangle pattern with 3,4 and 5. Like this. It would fit your spacing and it is the same, almost how you had it. http://puu.sh/52K2p.jpg O
00:25:594 (1) - You change your combo pattern here for a moment, remove NC to fix it.O
00:32:380 (1,2,3) - Move this lower so it doesnt go too high to the HP bar.O
00:44:761 - , 01:13:332 - Tbh, the tripples dont fit good here. A double rythm fits better. Something like this. http://puu.sh/52JVW.jpgO
00:50:951 (6,7,1) - Make the spacing consistant since its the same 1/2 rythm.O
01:39:761 (2,1) - Spacing is very similar to 01:39:284 (1,2) - . You should move the 1 a litte more away so it doesnt feel like its also a 1/1 rythm.O

A few random jumps which a senseless but overall nice difficultie.

Overall nice set!

Frostmourne wrote:

This map has a potential for ranking. Talked over IRC about hitsound

Feel free to ask for rechecking once you are done with them carefully.

[Navy] wrote:

모딩 확인 늦어서 미안 ㅠㅠ

Frostmourne wrote:

so emm.. here I'm back

Navy's Hard
00:12:856 (7) - nazi, move up 1 grid so it won't look like too much overlapped like this. Sure!
00:22:380 (4) - hope you understand this picture I understanded nice pattern!
ctrl+g 00:21:903 (3) - first and do follow this screenshot.

SPOILER

00:23:808 (3) - move tail to x:436 y:252. You are using 1.1x spacing and now it's 0.96 which is wrong. Sure!
00:29:523 (3) - again. I give you 2 pictures so it could be easier to understand Thank you for very nice pattern!

SPOILER

SPOILER

Frostmourne wrote:

7omoa's Insane
00:29:761 (3) - better use this rhythm. The current one (00:30:237) doesn't fit music at this point.

SPOILER

Call me back.

Frostmourne wrote:

bubbled

Sorry for taking so long due to my owc matches and stuffs irl.

TKSalt wrote:

bubbled!? so nice
gogo!

1. 00:24:761 (1) - The spacing is a bit inconsistent of the others, not a big deal, but that's just better if it's having the same exact spacing with the others.
2. 00:28:094 (3) - Same as the previous point.

1. 01:07:380 (3) - It would be nice if this slider is in the middle of your previous slider, it would look somehow better.
   
   Example

   
2. 01:08:332 (1,2,3) - Those objects are making a very bad flow compared to 01:07:380 (3,4,1) - . The reason is simple, since the circle if blanketing with your previous slider, it makes a very bad cursor move by trying to click on the next slider. Moving those objects like that, would improve the flow a lot.

1. 00:08:570 (3,4,5,6) - It would be nice if those objects were aligned within each others. If you look patiently, the space between (3,5) is not the same as for (4,6) and that's what I want you to improve. Move your circle (6) to x:220 y:156, you might see the difference.
2. 01:17:142 (3,4,5,6,7) - tried to do a star form, right uh? highlight them, you can see that it isn't pretty good. Move the circle (3) to x:428 y:96 ; the circle (6) to x:332 y:112 and the circle (7) to x:392 y:252. It's going to be way better like this (:

1. 00:53:570 - This part sound very empty since you did a short break here. Actually, you should add a circle here, anywhere, but you should add it since your previous circle starts on a red line so, to keep the polarity of your objects, it's better to add one here.
2. 01:45:475 (4,5,6,9) - Maybe you could try to make those circles aligned with your previous circle (2) just to do like (1,2)?

Gabe wrote:

7omoa's Insane
01:48:570 - To keep the consistency with the other difficulty, I really suggest you to add a Kiai time here.

1. 00:53:570 - This part sound very empty since you did a short break here. Actually, you should add a circle here, anywhere, but you should add it since your previous circle starts on a red line so, to keep the polarity of your objects, it's better to add one here.
2. 01:45:475 (4,5,6,9) - Maybe you could try to make those circles aligned with your previous circle (2) just to do like (1,2)?

Call me back when it's done! (:

Gabe wrote:

Normal
Why there's no Kiai time at 01:48:570 - ? I don't see why you should skip it since all the other diff, except 7omoa's Insane, are having it. It would be better to keep that consistency if you add it.Fixed

1. 00:24:761 (1) - The spacing is a bit inconsistent of the others, not a big deal, but that's just better if it's having the same exact spacing with the others.Fixed
2. 00:28:094 (3) - Same as the previous point. Fixed

Insane

1. 00:08:570 (3,4,5,6) - It would be nice if those objects were aligned within each others. If you look patiently, the space between (3,5) is not the same as for (4,6) and that's what I want you to improve. Move your circle (6) to x:220 y:156, you might see the difference.Fixed
2. 01:17:142 (3,4,5,6,7) - tried to do a star form, right uh? highlight them, you can see that it isn't pretty good. Move the circle (3) to x:428 y:96 ; the circle (6) to x:332 y:112 and the circle (7) to x:392 y:252. It's going to be way better like this (: Fixed

This one is pretty good!

Call me back when it's done! (:

1. 01:07:380 (3) - It would be nice if this slider is in the middle of your previous slider, it would look somehow better. OK
   
   Example

   
2. 01:08:332 (1,2,3) - Those objects are making a very bad flow compared to 01:07:380 (3,4,1) - . The reason is simple, since the circle if blanketing with your previous slider, it makes a very bad cursor move by trying to click on the next slider. Moving those objects like that, would improve the flow a lot.NICE!