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Kurokotei

_Gezo_ wrote:

[Oni]

wtf en testplay j'ai lag comme pas possible, et avec 80 miss j'étais limite niveau soul. avec près de 3000 notes dans la map c'est juste cruel de laisser HP6, surtout pour un truc qui change de BPM tout le temps. J'te demande de baisser le HP à 5 voire carrément à 4 (je crois que t'es dans le rouge vers 120 miss à HP4), histoire qu'il y ait un bon compromis.. si le BPM allait pas n'importe comment j'aurais pas demandé ça :D'ok je mets HP4
fucking bpm changes all the way

dialgadu77
SPOILER
00:21:469 (34) - T'avais mis un big là où y'a un accord avant, mais y'en a pas ici.ok changed
00:29:353 (57) - J'pense pas que la big aille bien ici owo' changé
01:11:343 (19,20,21,22,23) - Ici les notes montent en hauteur, essaie de retranscrire ça ? (ddkkk, dddkk ou ddddk car ça change très peu)j'ai mis dddkk
01:34:801 (173) - Petit truc sans importance mais cette note commence 1/12 après :D... lol nazi, changed
02:24:544 - Ajoute un d ici ? Y'a une note piano bien audible et je pense que ça ne ferait pas de mal ok, ajouté
02:37:884 - Tous les bigs commençant un stream 1/2 : Dans la logique 1/2 ça va mais considère aussi que c'est 138 1/4, et que pas tout le monde pourra les taper correctement ! T'es pas obligé de les retirer toutes ou retirer la note après, c'est juste un conseil. j'préfère ne pas les retirer, ça dénature la map si je les retire
03:11:567 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - A la place de ton pattern courant, je te propose d ddk k dk k. Ca retranscrira un peu mieux le piano sur ce petit bout de mélodie. ouais, changé
03:20:448 (109) - Unsnapped oups, fixed
C'est à peu près tout ce que j'ai trouvé pour ta part, tu retranscris bien le piano (comme s'il y avait un autre truc à mapper...) mais y'a quelques petits trucs qui font que c'est pas non plus parfait. Mais dans l'ensemble c'est très bien fait.
Merry Christmas to you guys. Have fun !
Merci pour le mod et joyeux noël a toi aussi! :)
mingmichael
basicly i almost chaged everything that you mentioned, thanks a lot btw :3

http://puu.sh/5Xcew.osu
Coro
hi dialga~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Oni]
00:21:094 (33,34) - switch d and k, since pitch goes down
02:09:648 (18) - use k? the pitch is still relatively high
03:40:029 (23) - change to k? I think it fits the pattern better

very unique map~
good luck for rank~
Topic Starter
Kurokotei

CoroQuetz wrote:

hi dialga~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Oni]
00:21:094 (33,34) - switch d and k, since pitch goes down changed
02:09:648 (18) - use k? the pitch is still relatively high changed
03:40:029 (23) - change to k? I think it fits the pattern better changed

very unique map~
good luck for rank~
Thanks for the mod!
Topic Starter
Kurokotei
I will revive this I swear
Topic Starter
Kurokotei
Back to business I suppose?
wasonz
;)
Yuii-

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

;)
Oh, so YOU are Immortals... hello.
wasonz

Yuii- wrote:

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

;)
Oh, so YOU are Immortals... hello.
OH ! IT'S YOU ! OK COME FIGHT ME :x

also hi
wasonz
mod

01:50:218 - add d here and then 01:49:843 - kdkdk cuz kdkdkd ftw

01:51:718 - add k if you agree above ^
01:53:218 - add k
01:52:843 - kdkkd

02:07:878 - Finish before long break feel good

02:20:711 - change snap divisor to 1/6 then move it too 02:20:667 - (2/6)

02:41:036 (25,31) - swap color cuz D K D K D look better imo and in color stream fit with piano pitch

02:44:623 - ddk...

03:17:421 - not a mod ok d k k k d k k k d k k k okay ... okay .... okay

03:36:769 - i think piano sound on here not so loud and d work better with sound like this

04:43:986 - k fit with pitch

05:48:715 - not a mod omg red line, i appreciate your timing skill

06:15:301 - k

06:35:924 - d "pitch"

06:41:537 - move to -> 06:41:605 - (2/3) gotta go hard

06:46:789 - K sound good to me

07:13:119 -

08:07:616 - kdd it's feel calm here
08:09:195 - fak ^
08:11:037 - D: ^
08:12:353 - ^

08:54:310 - add k cuz player need more note I think it's better to cover every note in the end of song
08:55:102 - ^
Topic Starter
Kurokotei

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

mod

01:50:218 - add d here and then 01:49:843 - kdkdk cuz kdkdkd ftw hmmm I prefer to not add a note there because the part is kinda calm, also please no kdkdk

01:51:718 - add k if you agree above ^ ^
01:53:218 - add k ^
01:52:843 - kdkkd kkkkd seems fine imo

02:07:878 - Finish before long break feel good hmm, I might consider this one, but leaving as it is for now

02:20:711 - change snap divisor to 1/6 then move it too 02:20:667 - (2/6) oh yeah, moved

02:41:036 (25,31) - swap color cuz D K D K D look better imo and in color stream fit with piano pitch 02:41:144 (25) - changed this one to k but I prefer to keep K at 02:41:797 -

02:44:623 - ddk... changed

03:17:421 - not a mod ok d k k k d k k k d k k k okay ... okay .... okay lol

03:36:769 - i think piano sound on here not so loud and d work better with sound like this yeah but pitch D:
Thanks for the mod!
snz
From My Queue

Oni
00:23:347 (40,41) - kk
00:31:222 (63,64,65,66,67) - kkkdk
01:10:593 (14,15,16,17,18) - ^
01:36:843 (183,184,185,186,187) - dkkdd
01:44:593 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - kkkkddkkd
01:48:843 (55,56,57,58,59) - ddddk
02:01:022 (128,129,130) - Ctrl+G
02:53:536 (113,114,115) - kkd
03:13:526 (74,75,76,77) - Ctrl+G
03:26:334 (140) - Change This To K
04:06:440 (215) - Change This To k
04:21:616 (32) - Change This To k
05:03:083 (125) - Add Finish
05:26:369 (146,147,148,149,150) - kkkkd
05:50:508 (2) - Change This To k
06:46:789 (89) - Change This To K
07:23:587 (16) - Change This To d
07:27:471 (44,45) - Ctrl+G
08:30:248 (294) - Change This To d

Good Luck With Rank :D
Topic Starter
Kurokotei

Ppus wrote:

From My Queue

Oni
00:23:347 (40,41) - kk keeping dk to emphasize dk (pitch)
00:31:222 (63,64,65,66,67) - kkkdk kdddk follows the piano's pitch better imo
01:10:593 (14,15,16,17,18) - ^ kkddk flows better with the song
01:36:843 (183,184,185,186,187) - dkkdd dkkkd is better because it emphasize the melody at 187
01:44:593 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - kkkkddkkd basically the same reason as above
01:48:843 (55,56,57,58,59) - ddddk ^
02:01:022 (128,129,130) - Ctrl+G ddddkdk fits the piano's pitch better
02:53:536 (113,114,115) - kkd Kdd is here to emphasize the chord
03:13:526 (74,75,76,77) - Ctrl+G hmm, idk, both seems to fit, but I'll keep my pattern for now
03:26:334 (140) - Change This To K wow no K feels weird with all those d before
04:06:440 (215) - Change This To k d seems to follow the piano's pitch better
04:21:616 (32) - Change This To k d seems fine imo

Good Luck With Rank :D
Changed nothing, but thanks for the mod anyway!
Topic Starter
Kurokotei
Taking care of mingmichael's parts as of now

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

04:43:986 - k fit with pitch pitch goes up on 15 so no

05:48:715 - not a mod omg red line, i appreciate your timing skill lol thanks

06:15:301 - k changed

06:35:924 - d "pitch" k seems fine imo

06:41:537 - move to -> 06:41:605 - (2/3) gotta go hard nice one, moved

06:46:789 - K sound good to me D also sounds good imo

07:13:119 - I like the k spam LOL

08:07:616 - kdd it's feel calm here changed to kkd instead
08:09:195 - fak ^ ^
08:11:037 - D: ^ kkk seems fine pitch-wise imo
08:12:353 - ^ changed

08:54:310 - add k cuz player need more note I think it's better to cover every note in the end of song added
08:55:102 - ^ added

Ppus wrote:

05:03:083 (125) - Add Finish no, chords begin at 126
05:26:369 (146,147,148,149,150) - kkkkd keeping ddddk for consistency
05:50:508 (2) - Change This To k ddkkd sounds better pitch-wise
06:46:789 (89) - Change This To K D seems fine
07:23:587 (16) - Change This To d k is better pitch-wise
07:27:471 (44,45) - Ctrl+G kkddk follows the pitch well imo
08:30:248 (294) - Change This To d k is better to emphasize pitch change on 295

Good Luck With Rank :D
Thanks for the mods (again)!
Yuzeyun
j'suis ok pour 99% de la map, y'a quelques petits détails quand même
- y'a des petis overlaps mais je pense que tu vas osef vu que c'est lisible
- 08:18:522 (253) - c'est du 1/8
- OD6 c'est un peu chaud pour un timing erratique, baisse à 5 ptêt



au passage mon speedrun a foiré RT
Topic Starter
Kurokotei

_Gezo_ wrote:

j'suis ok pour 99% de la map, y'a quelques petits détails quand même
- y'a des petis overlaps mais je pense que tu vas osef vu que c'est lisible oui wala
- 08:18:522 (253) - c'est du 1/8 déplacé
- OD6 c'est un peu chaud pour un timing erratique, baisse à 5 ptêt ok



au passage mon speedrun a foiré RT
Merci pour les suggestions!
OzzyOzrock
[Oni]
  1. Try 0,80 for the background?
  2. AiMod... オ、スナッピ!

  3. First line seems noticeably late in the editor. 80 sounds at least better
  4. 00:28:027 (55) - and this is hella off, seems to work better on the 1/8 before.
  5. 00:37:843 (77,78,79,80,81) - ok let me guess this song is 14500% untimeable with barlines and 1/8 usage is frowned upon so this is pointless to fix ok nvm me then

  6. 01:34:093 (169) - d, since these patterns seem to highlight the high piano notes, while this note kinda interferes with it.
  7. 02:31:165 (82) - k? regardless of what source of piano you're following it's more recognizable for this to be k
  8. 03:25:465 (132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140) - ok mr. downer I think there's a bit more color here than you mapped
  9. 03:36:769 (1) - d? The next k notes are much more noticeable than this one
  10. 03:39:594 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - kdkkdkdk ok ozzy maybe don't influence him to make this have any difficulty
  11. 03:59:703 (158,162) - Swap? I think emphasizing the trill then leading into the other thing fits nicer.
  12. 06:18:247 (251,252,253,254,255,256,257) - Maybe instead of a stream, some big notes could emphasize the big piano hits being played.
  13. 07:26:879 (38) - Delete? Since the last 3 have been, maybe you can wait until the next verse/whatever it's called musically to start throwing in the double 1/4 combos. Maybe simplify the whole pattern for the same reason.
  14. 07:47:276 - what the fuck
IT'S CUTE
Topic Starter
Kurokotei

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Oni]
  1. Try 0,80 for the background? yeah looks better, changed
  2. AiMod... オ、スナッピ!ooooooh unsnapped notes, fixed them (also no I won't change SV)

  3. First line seems noticeably late in the editor. 80 sounds at least better changed + moved some timing points
  4. 00:28:027 (55) - and this is hella off, seems to work better on the 1/8 before. you're right, moved
  5. 00:37:843 (77,78,79,80,81) - ok let me guess this song is 14500% untimeable with barlines and 1/8 usage is frowned upon so this is pointless to fix ok nvm me then lol

  6. 01:34:093 (169) - d, since these patterns seem to highlight the high piano notes, while this note kinda interferes with it. changed
  7. 02:31:165 (82) - k? regardless of what source of piano you're following it's more recognizable for this to be k changed
  8. 03:25:465 (132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140) - ok mr. downer I think there's a bit more color here than you mapped I want to emphasize 132
  9. 03:36:769 (1) - d? The next k notes are much more noticeable than this one changed
  10. 03:39:594 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - kdkkdkdk ok ozzy maybe don't influence him to make this have any difficulty please
  11. 03:59:703 (158,162) - Swap? I think emphasizing the trill then leading into the other thing fits nicer. hmm yeah changed
  12. 06:18:247 (251,252,253,254,255,256,257) - Maybe instead of a stream, some big notes could emphasize the big piano hits being played. yeah but big notes are on chords so no
  13. 07:26:879 (38) - Delete? Since the last 3 have been, maybe you can wait until the next verse/whatever it's called musically to start throwing in the double 1/4 combos. Maybe simplify the whole pattern for the same reason. deleted
  14. 07:47:276 - what the fuck blame ming
IT'S CUTE
Thanks for the mod!
Yuzeyun
im ok with this

OzzyOzrock wrote:

スナッピ
are you serious it's スナップ you buttcheeky UNDESSERTFUL spider-loving skeletal NYEH
Topic Starter
Kurokotei

_Gezo_ wrote:

im ok with this

OzzyOzrock wrote:

スナッピ
are you serious it's スナップ you buttcheeky UNDESSERTFUL spider-loving skeletal NYEH
yay thanks Gezo :D
also I didn't even notice Ozzy's error gg
Jonah
00:16.7
I recommend to put one more Don between two notes
00:17.828
Add two Don to make "Don Don Kat" pattern
00:54.890
Add spin
00:57.180
Add spin
00.59.341
Add spin
3:26.00~3:36.00
I won't put spin on that side. Try to fill with don&kat
4:54.00~5:03.169
Connect all notes

I hope my recommendation helps!
This is my first modding. So, don't get angry with my suggestion :(
Topic Starter
Kurokotei

Jonah wrote:

00:16.7
I recommend to put one more Don between two notes I think the note isn't significant enough to put a not there
00:17.828
Add two Don to make "Don Don Kat" pattern no note there so no
00:54.890
Add spin nah, it would feel too overmapped
00:57.180
Add spin ^
00.59.341
Add spin ^
3:26.00~3:36.00
I won't put spin on that side. Try to fill with don&kat how am I supposed to map this with notes? lol, also I feel like a spinner is okay
4:54.00~5:03.169
Connect all notes I think it's okay, it helps to distinguish measures so it makes the part more tidy

I hope my recommendation helps!
This is my first modding. So, don't get angry with my suggestion :(
No changes, but thanks for your suggestions anyway!
wasonz
00:00:080 - ~ 08:55:102 - nerf
PatZar
gg
Topic Starter
Kurokotei
zzz
Vulkin
holy old map o.o
Asagi Mutsuki
wow
JessiChan
Note: My english is very bad, but i try. ;)

Hello Sayaka! Hmm well, this is a opinion right? Not is obligatory. This song is a "Vals" the Vals ever is ternary temp, that means your indicator figure (in the music) that is, this: https://puu.sh/rEHPj/51796b56a6.png must be 3/4. In your map it is set as 4/4. The bpm would be more accurate if you put in 3/4. Of course, this is only an opinion, not necessarily have to do, but anyway you is like learning. I am a student of classical music and I like to teach others what I have learned over the years. Well, good luck with your map, I like your maps, really. :D
Topic Starter
Kurokotei

JessiChan wrote:

Note: My english is very bad, but i try. ;)

Hello Sayaka! Hmm well, this is a opinion right? Not is obligatory. This song is a "Vals" the Vals ever is ternary temp, that means your indicator figure (in the music) that is, this: https://puu.sh/rEHPj/51796b56a6.png must be 3/4. In your map it is set as 4/4. The bpm would be more accurate if you put in 3/4. Of course, this is only an opinion, not necessarily have to do, but anyway you is like learning. I am a student of classical music and I like to teach others what I have learned over the years. Well, good luck with your map, I like your maps, really. :D
You know, I studied music for more than 8 years and I make music so I know how it works lol
The thing is that I used 6/8 (and not really 4/4) to put more emphasize on fast parts, which are timed in 3/4. This is a very personal choice but I believe it's not wrong so I'm gonna keep it like this
JessiChan

Sayaka- wrote:

JessiChan wrote:

Note: My english is very bad, but i try. ;)

Hello Sayaka! Hmm well, this is a opinion right? Not is obligatory. This song is a "Vals" the Vals ever is ternary temp, that means your indicator figure (in the music) that is, this: https://puu.sh/rEHPj/51796b56a6.png must be 3/4. In your map it is set as 4/4. The bpm would be more accurate if you put in 3/4. Of course, this is only an opinion, not necessarily have to do, but anyway you is like learning. I am a student of classical music and I like to teach others what I have learned over the years. Well, good luck with your map, I like your maps, really. :D
You know, I studied music for more than 8 years and I make music so I know how it works lol
The thing is that I used 6/8 (and not really 4/4) to put more emphasize on fast parts, which are timed in 3/4. This is a very personal choice but I believe it's not wrong so I'm gonna keep it like this
Oh, ok. No problem hahaha. Sorry. :oops:
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