1. 01:41:118 - consider a better transition effect? maybe a pulse?

1. 00:13:644 (8,1) - perhaps do not stack them but move (1) to 323:358? also 00:14:276 (2) - to 505:323
2. 00:23:276 (3,4,5,6) - here the beat is heard weird a bit due to the triplet on white tick has no good support. oppositely, the piano is more palpable. So i'd like to suggest combine 00:23:276 (3,4,5) - to a single slider
3. 00:44:750 (1,2) - the reason of black notes here is ? and also 00:49:802 (1,2) - , i suppose white is better
4. 02:04:013 (1) - here...i suggest you to re-arrange your combo colour. i thought you chose different colour for different patterns, so perhaps, black -> reduced speed slider, white-> special triplets, red&pink -> normal combos

Scorpiour wrote:

some minor suggestions

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[Storyboard]

1. 01:41:118 - consider a better transition effect? maybe a pulse?

[Skystar]

1. 00:13:644 (8,1) - perhaps do not stack them but move (1) to 323:358? also 00:14:276 (2) - to 505:323
2. 00:23:276 (3,4,5,6) - here the beat is heard weird a bit due to the triplet on white tick has no good support. oppositely, the piano is more palpable. So i'd like to suggest combine 00:23:276 (3,4,5) - to a single slider
3. 00:44:750 (1,2) - the reason of black notes here is ? and also 00:49:802 (1,2) - , i suppose white is better
4. 02:04:013 (1) - here...i suggest you to re-arrange your combo colour. i thought you chose different colour for different patterns, so perhaps, black -> reduced speed slider, white-> special triplets, red&pink -> normal combos

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

第一條fix
第二條跟的是那條音軌 既然跟了總不能這裡不跟吧
第三四條NC問題我覺得沒法動了...

-Umi- wrote:

and it seems it will be ranked soon