Green Day - Sweet 16 · forum

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2013-09-04T05:17:52+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年1月14日 at 18:37:38

Artist: Green Day
Title: Sweet 16
Tags: uno lally
BPM: 158
Filesize: 4712kb
Play Time: 03:00
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.89 stars, 431 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 576 notes)
Lally's Easy (1.81 stars, 128 notes)
Normal (3.94 stars, 209 notes)

Download: Green Day - Sweet 16
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
It's time to pick Green Day again
Let's always be sweet 16
Lally's Easy by lally
other diffs all finished by myself
thanks to Tsukuyomi for bg

Changelog & thanks

edit: 7th DEC. thanks to FoolB, silverboxer and 615915887
edit: 10th DEC. thanks to Mintong
edit: 13th DEC. thanks to Sagisawa-Yukari
edit: 17th DEC. thanks to Nightcore Princess G
edit: 30th DEC. thanks to jonathanlfj
edit: 9th JAN. 2014! thanks to UnitedWeSin
edit: 14th JAN. blahblahblah#$%^&*~

Last edited by Zero__wind 2014-01-15T16:18:07+00:00, edited 12 times in total.

FoolB

53 posts

Joined June 2011

FoolB 2013-09-20T13:37:16+00:00

~~既然叫我随便写点那我就随便写点了~~
[Insane]
■ 00:23:942 (3,4) - 02:32:486 (1,2) - 感觉距离都有点近了，旋转一下第二个滑条吧
■ 00:28:499 (3) - 这里做一个blanket？
■ 01:03:436 (3) - 这个note我觉得

这么放比较爽

另外，同理02:01:347 (4) - 可以Ctrl+G，如果觉得02:01:727 (1) - 有点奇怪的话可以原地垂直翻转。当然02:01:157 (3) - 也可以往下调整一点

我是这么改的

■ 01:10:271 (4,2) - 这两个Ctrl+G？
■ 02:36:474 (4) - 移到3的下方？当然DS依然保持

其实有不少地方，如果是我的话会修成blanket，但是都专门挑出来又太无聊，所以不管啦 :p
其他diff感觉没有必须得改的问题
写不出什么呢orz，如果觉得没什么用就别给kds啦

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-09-23T13:04:23+00:00

here we go:

Lally's Easy

osu file format v12

[General]
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don't forget to add me to the tags :3

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2013-09-23T14:28:35+00:00

Lally wrote:

here we go:

Lally's Easy

osu file format v12

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180777,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0


[Colours]
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Combo2 : 224,121,140
Combo3 : 122,195,212
Combo4 : 178,64,157
Combo5 : 238,117,110
Combo6 : 118,202,70
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don't forget to add me to the tags :3

yeah here we go~
May I add nyally in to tags~`w`~ haha

Silverboxer

670 posts

Joined December 2012

Silverboxer 2013-11-14T02:51:17+00:00

maybe this background?

I'll get to the mod later!

Silverboxer

670 posts

Joined December 2012

Silverboxer 2013-11-21T02:53:42+00:00

from my modding queue

Lally's Easy

00:29:448 (4,1) - huge spacing problem
00:32:486 (2,3,1,2) - why not make the sliders match the vocals?
01:30:207 (2,3,1,2) - ^
02:27:929 (2,3,1,2) - can match the vocals to fit the music better

Normal
00:06:663 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - you can think of something better than this
00:18:815 (1,2,3) - since these are odd slider shapes, try to blanket them so it looks like they fit in somewhere
00:24:891 (1,2,3) - ^
00:32:296 (3) - I don't like how this is so far in the corner
00:37:803 (2,3,4) - the flow isn't good here and that slider is waaaay in the corner
01:04:385 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - same problem
01:16:537 (1,2,3) - blanket to make the fit together better
01:22:613 (1,2,3) - ^
01:47:676 (2) - very far in the corner
01:50:714 (2) - ^
01:53:752 (2) - ^

You make the best Hard/Insane difficulties ever. Nothing else I want to mention here so have a star ヽ(*・ω・)ﾉ ' `*

When you take it out of the graveyard ;A;

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2013-11-21T09:55:01+00:00

FoolB wrote:
~~既然叫我随便写点那我就随便写点了~~
[Insane]
■ 00:23:942 (3,4) - 02:32:486 (1,2) - 感觉距离都有点近了，旋转一下第二个滑条吧都改了
■ 00:28:499 (3) - 这里做一个blanket？ blanket mod总是让人爱不释手
■ 01:03:436 (3) - 这个note我觉得
这么放比较爽
不太喜欢太刻意了
另外，同理02:01:347 (4) - 可以Ctrl+G，如果觉得02:01:727 (1) - 有点奇怪的话可以原地垂直翻转。当然02:01:157 (3) - 也可以往下调整一点
我是这么改的
这个也没动=。=还是流畅为主
■ 01:10:271 (4,2) - 这两个Ctrl+G？慢速段算了我保持间距
■ 02:36:474 (4) - 移到3的下方？当然DS依然保持这个放在下面的思路不错

其实有不少地方，如果是我的话会修成blanket，但是都专门挑出来又太无聊，所以不管啦 :p
其他diff感觉没有必须得改的问题
写不出什么呢orz，如果觉得没什么用就别给kds啦

silverboxer wrote:
from my modding queue

Normal
00:06:663 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - you can think of something better than this sorry I think they're right in a Normal
00:18:815 (1,2,3) - since these are odd slider shapes, try to blanket them so it looks like they fit in somewhere tried to improve them
00:24:891 (1,2,3) - ^
00:32:296 (3) - I don't like how this is so far in the corner this is fine
00:37:803 (2,3,4) - the flow isn't good here and that slider is waaaay in the corner flow's fine but I moved it a bit to the center
01:04:385 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - same problem
01:16:537 (1,2,3) - blanket to make the fit together better yeah, changed some slider shape
01:22:613 (1,2,3) - ^
01:47:676 (2) - very far in the corner adjusted these three
01:50:714 (2) - ^
01:53:752 (2) - ^
You make the best Hard/Insane difficulties ever. Nothing else I want to mention here so have a star ヽ(*・ω・)ﾉ ' `*
When you take it out of the graveyard ;A;

thx for your mod~ and you forgot my star~ haha

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2013-11-29T14:52:00+00:00

Hi 打死01
From my modding queue

[General]
我能吐槽那么多combo color吗
为何如此带感

[Easy]
Why not use sliderticks to fit the drums.
Something wrong in AImod

00:32:486 (2) - make it parallel with 1
01:30:207 (2) - ^
00:47:676 (1) - no NC
00:49:195 (2) - NC here
01:10:461 (2) - NC
Same problems in the copy period.
Seems NICE

[Normal]
00:24:891 (1,2,3) - 个人感觉包的不是很好，可以修正一下
00:06:663 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ~~懒比简直不能多书~~
00:49:195 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:24:132 (2) - 感觉不是很合
01:48:625 (4,4) - 音效不一样，感觉前面那个漏finish

果然是大神制图简直无错可挑除了一堆复制

[Hard]
00:13:309 (3,3) - 弄对称美观点吧
00:31:727 (3,4) - 有可能误读，建议近一点
01:24:512 (6,7) - 等间距怎么样

感觉和always summer的质量有些差距啊

[Insane]
本来都准备跳了，但是还是得看一下，~~我要认真对待mod~~
00:04:955 (1,2) - 感觉稍稍有些远了
00:39:512 (4) - 为何不和2重叠
00:42:834 (5,6) - 可以改成3个note(因为第一个鼓声在前一个滑调喂，如果弄1/4会显得不像在打鼓，会有点confused)
01:40:556 (5,6) - ^
01:15:967 (2) - 弄个等腰三角形是不是更美观一点（喂

不敢书多了，要被骂
~~如果觉得没用就不给kd了吧~~

Kinomi

1,222 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2013-11-30T11:01:32+00:00

here is BG
https://yande.re/post/show/255265/iroha ... pe-seifuku

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2013-11-30T19:19:44+00:00

615915887 wrote:
Hi 打死01
From my modding queue

[General]
我能吐槽那么多combo color吗这是我打FL的时候用的默认颜色=。=
为何如此带感 ……

[Normal]
00:24:891 (1,2,3) - 个人感觉包的不是很好，可以修正一下嗯修了一下
00:06:663 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ~~懒比简直不能多书~~ 我都空成这样儿了星数还是……这叫难度所迫
00:49:195 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ 这是艺术你懂什么
01:24:132 (2) - 感觉不是很合不能吧……这些地方的音乐都是那样的你说不合vocal的话我根本就没跟vocal啊……
01:48:625 (4,4) - 音效不一样，感觉前面那个漏finish 没有啊你自己听音乐第一遍本来就没finish 第二遍才有的这叫渐强

果然是大神制图简直无错可挑除了一堆复制

[Hard]
00:13:309 (3,3) - 弄对称美观点吧我这两组东西根本就是复制的啊=。=如果你是指后面一组要转个向的话那样flow不好
00:31:727 (3,4) - 有可能误读，建议近一点不会的才差了0.5x，连1.5倍关系都不到的距离那个地方有finish要强调的才放远一些
01:24:512 (6,7) - 等间距怎么样不了我整个diff都是这样的 circle之间是等距的但是circle和slider之间会远一些全都等距的话打起来手腕儿疼

感觉和always summer的质量有些差距啊莫名

[Insane]
本来都准备跳了，但是还是得看一下，~~我要认真对待mod~~
00:04:955 (1,2) - 感觉稍稍有些远了关系不大不会有人点晚的
00:39:512 (4) - 为何不和2重叠因为觉得那样会太难了啊我好多遮挡都是不完全遮挡=。=
00:42:834 (5,6) - 可以改成3个note(因为第一个鼓声在前一个滑调喂，如果弄1/4会显得不像在打鼓，会有点confused) 这个确实有别人也提过但是感觉全换circle基本就必须叠着有点毁掉跳跃性flow的感觉
01:40:556 (5,6) - ^
01:15:967 (2) - 弄个等腰三角形是不是更美观一点（喂这个不是三角形梗啊=。=这是上面3个和下面3个是一样的结构你摆成等腰反而破坏了而且好像打起来也不太舒服

不敢书多了，要被骂骂死你
~~如果觉得没用就不给kd了吧~~

thx for your mod

@烤肉: thx for the bg

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2013-11-30T19:46:28+00:00

Nice song + map! You've improved even more with mapping Zero_Wind

Good luck with this mapset

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-12-08T01:24:41+00:00

你好

[General]

soft-hitwhistle 略小声

[Insane]

00:01:917 (6,7,1) - 我柑橘这不是一条线...或者我觉得这个可以做一条线
00:08:182 (1,2) - Blanket?
00:32:866 (3) - 我觉得可以和 00:33:625 (6) - 同一个slider
00:35:714 (2) - CTRL+G? 柑橘这样带感
00:57:360 (3,4) - Blanket well
01:33:056 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得这个(note & slider-head)可以做成一个星星 :OO
01:49:385 (4) - CTRL+G
02:20:144 (5,6,1) - 我觉得凹进去比较flow 不是向出来

D: 凌风神麻婆可是我感觉可以再整齐点...虽然好玩

[Hard]

01:15:018 (1,2) - 这里很多音啊用两个slider盖过有点不好
01:25:651 (1,2) - 用同样slider?

[Normal]

00:06:663 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 好F Lally 都没这样做你确定么

[Lally's Easy]

00:13:499 (1) - It should not be able have soft-hitwhistle, because the drum-kick is on 00:13:689 -
00:54:891 (4) - Add finish at slider-end? it fit really good!
01:11:980 (2) - Do you miss the finish?

well, good easy, nothing to say.

Good Luck~!

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2013-12-10T08:45:53+00:00

Mintong wrote:
你好

[General]

soft-hitwhistle 略小声个人感觉还可以了很容易听出加没加

[Insane]

00:01:917 (6,7,1) - 我柑橘这不是一条线...或者我觉得这个可以做一条线感觉不太必要=。=一条线反而不太好看
00:08:182 (1,2) - Blanket? k
00:32:866 (3) - 我觉得可以和 00:33:625 (6) - 同一个slider 好的
00:35:714 (2) - CTRL+G? 柑橘这样带感嗯应该可以感觉都还好
00:57:360 (3,4) - Blanket well k
01:33:056 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得这个(note & slider-head)可以做成一个星星 :OO 米桶简直神麻婆
01:49:385 (4) - CTRL+G 和后面衔接不太好不改了
02:20:144 (5,6,1) - 我觉得凹进去比较flow 不是向出来我觉得现在这样比较好

D: 凌风神麻婆可是我感觉可以再整齐点...虽然好玩 >.<

[Hard]

01:15:018 (1,2) - 这里很多音啊用两个slider盖过有点不好嗯好改了前一组也是
01:25:651 (1,2) - 用同样slider? k

[Normal]

00:06:663 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 好F Lally 都没这样做你确定么其他地方有点难了呀=。=没办法的说……就这样吧

Good Luck~!

thx for your mod~

Sagisawa-Yukari

216 posts

Joined March 2009

Sagisawa-Yukari 2013-12-13T08:29:51+00:00

[General]
Red: Must fix
Blue: Suggestion only
多检查下AI MOD，包括全难度的letter box和没对准的物件

[Lally's Easy]
00:34:005 (1) - remove finish
01:26:980 (1) - begin in 01:27:170 - ,follow drum？
01:29:258 (1) - begin in 01:29:068 -
02:01:347 (1) - remove NC
02:26:980 (1) - begin in 02:26:790 -
02:59:069 (1) - remove NC

[Normal]
00:04:955 (1,2,3) - 把00:05:714 (2,3) - 放到00:04:765 - ，然后00:04:955 (1) - 放到00:05:714 - 把尾巴拉长到后面那根白线结束
00:06:663 - 到00:18:246 - 这么多打鼓的地方其实可以做很多文章了
00:58:309 (1) - remove NC
00:58:309 (1) - 同前面
02:02:106 (1) - remove NC
02:58:879 (4) - 我觉得你这个可以不要了转盘直接从这里开始

[Hard]
00:04:955 (1,2) - 把1改成00:05:904 (4) - 这样的滑条，然后2变成circle放在00:05:524 - ，当然你这么做了音效记得改
00:18:436 (4) - 这个不适合跳那么远，反而重叠感觉好
01:14:638 (4) - 往下面去两格左右
01:39:132 (5) - ctrl+h，然后ctrl+g

[Insane]
00:00:208 (1) - 建议换成circle凸出重音
00:18:246 (1) - 滑条头重叠到前面的3那
01:03:625 (4) - 这里倒是要减速了
01:15:018 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - 这里为啥要那么多NC
01:29:068 (2,3,4,5) - 2你可以稍微ctrl+shift+r转下角度，这样后面345可以上调点，3就可以和01:30:018 (1) - 做blanket了不是
02:14:258 (1,3) - 这个blanket没做好吧，3的尾巴应该再右边来点

很多地方节奏再弄弄好，像01:18:625 (2,3) - 这种，ctrl g一下试试？再比如01:22:993 (2,3,4,5) - ，2改成1/2滑条，后面接3个单点？
打完才发现是AR8，不过没差了，我是没那种感觉的

good luck~

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2013-12-13T16:04:52+00:00

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

[General]
Red: Must fix
Blue: Suggestion only
多检查下AI MOD，包括全难度的letter box和没对准的物件嗯我的难度都没问题她那个有俩unsnapped 会叫她自己改的

[Normal]
00:04:955 (1,2,3) - 把00:05:714 (2,3) - 放到00:04:765 - ，然后00:04:955 (1) - 放到00:05:714 - 把尾巴拉长到后面那根白线结束我比较倾向像现在这样跟吉他而不是去补那一个鼓而且改了的话会破坏和后面几个段落的一致性
00:06:663 - 到00:18:246 - 这么多打鼓的地方其实可以做很多文章了其他地方有点难了这两段空着主要是压星数的当然也有懒逼成分
00:58:309 (1) - remove NC 好吧都改了
00:58:309 (1) - 同前面
02:02:106 (1) - remove NC
02:58:879 (4) - 我觉得你这个可以不要了转盘直接从这里开始这个暂定如果BAT说太短的话我估计还好因为也不是最低难度

[Hard]
00:04:955 (1,2) - 把1改成00:05:904 (4) - 这样的滑条，然后2变成circle放在00:05:524 - ，当然你这么做了音效记得改试了一下排版不太好排而且不太想打乱前后的一致性我后面都是这样下的节奏
00:18:436 (4) - 这个不适合跳那么远，反而重叠感觉好感觉还好吧重音我还是倾向于跳出去
01:14:638 (4) - 往下面去两格左右理解了和上下等距
01:39:132 (5) - ctrl+h，然后ctrl+g 没有动会把我的间距都打乱了

[Insane]
00:00:208 (1) - 建议换成circle凸出重音感觉那样的话中间空白太奇怪了
00:18:246 (1) - 滑条头重叠到前面的3那感觉不是很适合叠在前面这里是速度要加快的地方比较倾向跳出去
01:03:625 (4) - 这里倒是要减速了这里好像也没什么问题都是从后面那个finish才减速的
01:15:018 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - 这里为啥要那么多NC 好吧去掉了一个我以为多一点能好读一些
01:29:068 (2,3,4,5) - 2你可以稍微ctrl+shift+r转下角度，这样后面345可以上调点，3就可以和01:30:018 (1) - 做blanket了不是这个提议很好
02:14:258 (1,3) - 这个blanket没做好吧，3的尾巴应该再右边来点好的

很多地方节奏再弄弄好，像01:18:625 (2,3) - 这种，ctrl g一下试试？这个感觉怪怪的
再比如01:22:993 (2,3,4,5) - ，2改成1/2滑条，后面接3个单点？这个把2改成1/2了后面的没改还是一圈一滑条
打完才发现是AR8，不过没差了，我是没那种感觉的
我是觉得8比较合适

good luck~

thx for your mod~

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-12-16T04:08:17+00:00

post here to remind me to send u the update ovo'' ~~will edit later~~

all the replies of mods

615915887 wrote:
[Easy]
Why not use sliderticks to fit the drums. nah
Something wrong in AImod fixed the most

00:32:486 (2) - make it parallel with 1 done
01:30:207 (2) - ^-^
00:47:676 (1) - no NC ok
00:49:195 (2) - NC here ok
01:10:461 (2) - NC ok
Same problems in the copy period.
Seems NICE

Silverboxer wrote:
from my modding queue

Lally's Easy

00:29:448 (4,1) - huge spacing problem actually not look the prev and the next object this is good spacing :V
00:32:486 (2,3,1,2) - why not make the sliders match the vocals? i follow the drums here
01:30:207 (2,3,1,2) - ^ same
02:27:929 (2,3,1,2) - can match the vocals to fit the music better ^ same

Mintong wrote:
[Lally's Easy]

00:13:499 (1) - It should not be able have soft-hitwhistle, because the drum-kick is on 00:13:689 - i did in everypattern like this so, so no
00:54:891 (4) - Add finish at slider-end? it fit really good! ok
01:11:980 (2) - Do you miss the finish? ok

well, good easy, nothing to say.

Good Luck~!

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:
[Lally's Easy]
00:34:005 (1) - remove finish no o3o
01:26:980 (1) - begin in 01:27:170 - ,follow drum？ ok
01:29:258 (1) - begin in 01:29:068 - will think about
02:01:347 (1) - remove NC no o3o
02:26:980 (1) - begin in 02:26:790 - will think about
02:59:069 (1) - remove NC no o3o

Nightcore Princess G wrote:
[/color]Lally`s Easy
well,in some ways we need more normal finish sound effect,I will give you some good(just in my opinion) examples for how to use this special se in this map
00:04:955 (4) - normal finish at the beginning not here o3o
00:46:157 (3) - normal finish at the beginning ^
01:11:980 (2) - normal finish at the beginning soft finish is fine,is not a part wich has strong sounds
01:45:397 (1) - normal finish at the beginning nah
02:41:600 (3) - normal finish at the beginning not a normal one but a soft one

Generally,good map,I`ve learnt a lot from this diff!
sankiu o3o
Over~

update o3o

osu file format v12

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112,280,71980,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,172,72739,2,0,P|284:144|308:64,1,120.000004577637,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,96,73879,2,0,L|424:228,1,120.000004577637,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,296,75018,1,4,0:0:0:0:
164,336,75967,2,0,L|104:328,2,40,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,340,76537,6,0,P|292:304|312:168,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,80,78056,2,0,L|404:52,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,220,79195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,272,79575,6,0,P|332:252|216:288,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,272,80714,2,0,L|76:204,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,132,81474,2,0,P|108:84|220:80,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,116,82613,2,0,P|344:140|436:84,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,320,84512,6,0,P|440:280|332:296,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,340,85651,2,0,L|196:288,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,348,86410,2,0,L|60:296,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87170,12,4,88689,0:0:0:0:
40,320,89258,6,0,L|172:352,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,264,90207,2,0,L|276:292,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,312,90967,2,0,L|388:212,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,204,91726,6,0,L|340:104,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,124,92486,2,0,L|284:24,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,8,93245,2,0,L|120:172,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,320,95144,6,0,P|72:296|196:304,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,336,96283,2,0,P|316:348|360:332,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,316,97043,2,0,P|458:274|466:228,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,97802,12,4,100840,0:0:0:0:
200,240,101600,6,0,P|216:296|320:332,2,160,6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,156,103498,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,80,103878,2,0,P|212:48|108:76,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,120,105017,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,208,105397,6,0,P|100:272|264:272,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,232,106917,2,0,P|428:244|476:312,2,160,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,220,108815,2,0,P|176:200|148:160,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,124,109575,2,0,P|56:76|24:72,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,160,110334,6,0,P|52:260|112:312,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,328,111473,2,0,L|268:336,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,300,112233,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,248,112613,2,0,L|164:240,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,113372,12,0,116790,0:0:0:0:
192,248,117549,6,0,L|88:256,2,80,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,264,118499,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,184,118879,2,0,P|340:136|376:148,2,120,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,256,120398,2,0,L|404:256,2,80,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,224,121347,5,12,0:0:0:0:
472,320,146980,6,0,L|340:352,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,264,147929,2,0,L|236:296,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,312,148689,2,0,L|124:212,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,204,149448,6,0,L|172:104,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,124,150208,2,0,L|228:24,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,8,150967,2,0,L|392:172,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,320,152866,6,0,P|440:296|316:304,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,336,154005,2,0,P|196:348|152:332,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,316,154765,2,0,P|54:274|46:228,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,155524,12,4,158562,0:0:0:0:
312,240,159322,6,0,P|296:296|192:332,2,160,6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,156,161220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,80,161600,2,0,P|300:48|404:76,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,120,162739,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,208,163119,6,0,P|412:272|248:272,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,232,164638,2,0,P|84:244|36:308,2,160,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,220,166537,2,0,P|336:200|364:160,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,124,167296,2,0,P|456:76|488:72,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,160,168056,6,0,P|460:260|400:312,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,328,169195,2,0,L|244:336,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,300,169955,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,248,170334,2,0,L|348:240,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,171094,12,0,174512,0:0:0:0:
192,136,175271,6,0,L|88:128,2,80,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,120,176221,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,200,176601,2,0,P|340:248|376:236,2,120,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,128,178120,2,0,L|404:128,2,80,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,152,179069,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,179258,12,4,180777,0:0:0:0:

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Princess God

135 posts

Joined June 2010

Princess God 2013-12-16T13:26:52+00:00

嗯，说好的mod
如果有我认为一定要改的地方，我会用*标注

Insane
*00:00:587 红线貌似没对齐哦，offset上是588
另：offset是可以选用负值的，若采用负值，建议00:00:493 5%音量，00:00:587 70%音量
00:18:246 (1) - reverse selecion
00:20:904 (3) - 剪短一个四分拍，试验型意见，只是突然觉得这样听着舒服，是否考虑突出以下？01:18:625 (2) - 也是一样
00:37:803 (3,4,5) -

试试这种排列？

00:39:132 (3) - reverse selection试试？
00:40:081 (1) - 果然还是rs比较好，同时00:39:891 (5) - 上移一些
00:42:834 (5,6) - 还是觉得这种地方都用连打比较好，00:54:986 (5,6) - ,02:38:277 (5,6) - 这类地方也是
01:03:056 (2) - reverse selection
01:04:005 (5) - 拆成两个note试试，嘛，虽然风格不是很搭就是了
01:04:765 (2,3) - 似乎处理上和01:07:803 (2,3) - 有些区别呢，是什么技巧么？
01:12:360 (2,3) - 换下位置看看？这里似乎可以考虑造成那种向下砸然后弹上去的意境
01:39:512 (2) - 试试rs？
01:58:119 (3) - 还是觉得rs会比较好
02:00:398 (1) - 吾乃rs狂魔
02:07:803 (4) - 尾部whistle音效
02:06:663 (1) - 这里和这段的排列规则有些不同，是刻意为之么？
02:52:423 (2,3,4) - 分别rs，这样似乎flow能好些？
后面这里倒是做得浑然天成了……

Hard
00:00:208不加个note？
00:12:170 (3,4) - 交换一下位置似乎更能表现节奏
00:17:296 (1,2,3,4) -

试试这种排列?

00:34:005 (1) - 这里似乎换成一个滑条（原长度减少一个四分拍）加一个note（于原结尾处）的组合比较好，
00:46:157 (1) - ，01:31:727 (1) - 还有类似的地方似乎都比较适合
00:48:815 (3) - 果然还是放在第三象限内比较好吧？
01:13:879 (2) - 位置不是很正啊，是刻意为之么？
01:15:398 (2) - rs
01:40:461 (8,9,10,11) - 总觉得构成一个弧度会比较好
02:00:777 (2,3,4,5) -

试试这种节奏?

02:23:372 ~ 02:26:030 加一个spinner
02:38:182 (8,9,10,11) - 果然还是需要弧度！
02:58:879 (3,1) - 似乎往下砸的意境会比较好

Normal
*00:06:663 ~ 00:07:803

试试这种节奏?

后面几个也是建议加上些节奏，不然太空荡了，而且不符合ds规则,后面的01:04:385 (1) - 之类的也是一样
其他地方倒是做得都不错，只是这里也太偷懒了吧！

Lally`s Easy
well,in some ways we need more normal finish sound effect,I will give you some good(just in my opinion) examples for how to use this special se in this map
00:04:955 (4) - normal finish at the beginning
00:46:157 (3) - normal finish at the beginning
01:11:980 (2) - normal finish at the beginning
01:45:397 (1) - normal finish at the beginning
02:41:600 (3) - normal finish at the beginning

Generally,good map,I`ve learnt a lot from this diff!

Over~

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2013-12-17T03:57:04+00:00

Nightcore Princess G wrote:
嗯，说好的mod
如果有我认为一定要改的地方，我会用*标注

Insane
*00:00:587 红线貌似没对齐哦，offset上是588 这个我不确定好像是所谓的红线1ms bug 先不管到时候问BAT
另：offset是可以选用负值的，若采用负值，建议00:00:493 5%音量，00:00:587 70%音量
00:18:246 (1) - reverse selecion
00:20:904 (3) - 剪短一个四分拍，试验型意见，只是突然觉得这样听着舒服，是否考虑突出以下？01:18:625 (2) - 也是一样这个不错我两个都改了
00:37:803 (3,4,5) -
试试这种排列？
不喜欢
00:39:132 (3) - reverse selection试试？不好我这现在挺顺的
00:40:081 (1) - 果然还是rs比较好，同时00:39:891 (5) - 上移一些没必要
00:42:834 (5,6) - 还是觉得这种地方都用连打比较好，00:54:986 (5,6) - ,02:38:277 (5,6) - 这类地方也是有人提到过不过我感觉那样会破坏跳跃的感觉
01:03:056 (2) - reverse selection 其实两者flow都可以但是我不想在这个地方跳
01:04:005 (5) - 拆成两个note试试，嘛，虽然风格不是很搭就是了嗯不太好
01:04:765 (2,3) - 似乎处理上和01:07:803 (2,3) - 有些区别呢，是什么技巧么？双重ds而已
01:12:360 (2,3) - 换下位置看看？这里似乎可以考虑造成那种向下砸然后弹上去的意境这段完全ds摆的不想弄乱了
01:39:512 (2) - 试试rs？不好=。=
01:58:119 (3) - 还是觉得rs会比较好太跳了
02:00:398 (1) - 吾乃rs狂魔这也是太牵强
02:07:803 (4) - 尾部whistle音效没有这里没有鼓
02:06:663 (1) - 这里和这段的排列规则有些不同，是刻意为之么？吉他不同了而已
02:52:423 (2,3,4) - 分别rs，这样似乎flow能好些？不现在是个很好的八字flow
后面这里倒是做得浑然天成了……

Hard
00:00:208不加个note？不了中间留空了太奇怪
00:12:170 (3,4) - 交换一下位置似乎更能表现节奏不保持ds
00:17:296 (1,2,3,4) -
试试这种排列?
衔接前面还可以但是感觉到后面的4不太舒服
00:34:005 (1) - 这里似乎换成一个滑条（原长度减少一个四分拍）加一个note（于原结尾处）的组合比较好，这个diff避免3/4
00:46:157 (1) - ，01:31:727 (1) - 还有类似的地方似乎都比较适合
00:48:815 (3) - 果然还是放在第三象限内比较好吧？那样的话和后面衔接不算很舒服还有就是用缩进的结构来表现重音是比较合适的
01:13:879 (2) - 位置不是很正啊，是刻意为之么？是ds
01:15:398 (2) - rs 衔接后面不舒服
01:40:461 (8,9,10,11) - 总觉得构成一个弧度会比较好直的也没啥有弧度的话和后面的弧度不太好接上
02:00:777 (2,3,4,5) -
试试这种节奏?
节奏太多余了没有表现出长音
02:23:372 ~ 02:26:030 加一个spinner 想了想还是算了保持diff间一致吧让人听一段solo也不错干嘛非要最后转一下
02:38:182 (8,9,10,11) - 果然还是需要弧度！
02:58:879 (3,1) - 似乎往下砸的意境会比较好这不是已经往下砸了么0.0

Normal
*00:06:663 ~ 00:07:803
试试这种节奏?
后面几个也是建议加上些节奏，不然太空荡了，而且不符合ds规则,后面的01:04:385 (1) - 之类的也是一样
其他地方倒是做得都不错，只是这里也太偷懒了吧！炒鸡懒……而且为了保持星数平衡难度

Over~

thx for your mod~

All Diffs Updated!

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-12-23T03:24:09+00:00

m4m~

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
cool

[Lally's Easy]
clean up some green lines if you would, many of them are not in use for the objects you have
00:18:815 - felt like there should be a circle here to catch the downbeat and remain coherent with 00:20:334 (2)
00:46:157 (3) - put the finish here and remove the one at 00:47:676 (5), sounds better imo
01:15:967 (6) - this might pose some problems for newbies since it might be "too fast" for them to properly react to; how bout reduce a repeat on this?
01:45:397 (1) - according to how the music goes this belongs to the previous combo, the NC should be on 01:46:917 (2)
01:49:575 (4,4) - missing a finish on end?
02:02:106 - maybe drag the break to start here
02:43:119 (1) - same as 01:45:397 (1)
02:47:296 (4,4) - same as 01:49:575 (4,4)
02:56:221 (2,3,4) - these 3 objects are unsnapped

[Normal]
00:17:296 (1,1) - hmm these two should be the same combo seeing that you resumed distance snapping here
01:15:018 (1,1) - ^
01:15:968 (1) - unsnapped slider
01:57:360 (3,1) - you should keep stacks the same colour for readability purposes at this kind of difficulty; also applies to 01:58:879 (3,1) (just put NC on the circle instead of the slider)
02:55:081 (3,1) - ^

[Hard]
00:30:208 (3,1) - i find this spacing a bit hard for this level of gameplay, mostly because the repeat on 00:30:208 (3) causes the player to want to move in the opposite direction, which is flow breaking in this case. You can either move it close, or change up the direction a bit so it flows similar to 01:27:929 (3,1)
00:48:436 (1,2,3) - the flow on this pattern is a bit skewed, try a rotation of 20 degrees clockwise and reposition to form a more diamond like flow
00:54:891 (7,8,9,10,1) - i would map this without stacking, 5 note stacks in AR7 looks quite confusing to read imo (applies to later occurrences too if you agree)
01:41:600 (3) - hmm curve this more upwards so the flow from 01:41:410 (2) will feel more natural (maybe a blanket around 01:42:170 (4))
02:28:689 (7,8,9) - the flow here feels a bit weird, if you lowered the end of the slider a bit it feels much better

[Insane]
00:07:233 (2,3) - this caught me off guard on first play through, because of the nature of the jumps in the first section, its really easy to mistake this as 1/2 spacing when it actually is in 1/1; you could stack this or set it up in a way thats more obvious, and then later occurrences will be easier to judge so you can keep them as-is
00:41:410 (1,2) - the way you positioned this is quite anti-flow and really easy to break on, do something like this instead:

SPOILER

01:23:182 (3) - hmm this one should be an extended slider like you did in the first verse on 00:25:461 (3)
01:39:132 (1,2,3) - another rather confusing pattern to read; aside from the stacks, spacing is practically the same for 1/2 and 1/4, which is very confusing even though the musical cues are quite obvious (more problems with flow compared to readability). You might want to rework this pattern a bit
01:49:765 (5,6,1) - give this more distance, from previous patterns its easy to mistaken this as 1/4 spaced from 01:49:385 (4)
02:01:727 (1) - any reasons for this lone NC? if i were you i would use a 0.85x sv section here to aid the transition of the speed change
02:16:347 (2) - finish on start?
02:49:765 (3,4) - hmm you never used this kind of spacing for 1/4 connection with a circle before, was this intentional?
Interesting flow in this diff, i cant say i really liked it but it was quite fun maneuvering my mouse around it

alright let me know when you are done with this

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2013-12-23T07:29:23+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
m4m~

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
cool

[Normal]
00:17:296 (1,1) - hmm these two should be the same combo seeing that you resumed distance snapping here nice idea
01:15:018 (1,1) - ^
01:15:968 (1) - unsnapped slider 0.0 how could it
01:57:360 (3,1) - you should keep stacks the same colour for readability purposes at this kind of difficulty; also applies to 01:58:879 (3,1) (just put NC on the circle instead of the slider) fixed all, also one at the very biginning which you didn't mention >.<
02:55:081 (3,1) - ^

[Hard]
00:30:208 (3,1) - i find this spacing a bit hard for this level of gameplay, mostly because the repeat on 00:30:208 (3) causes the player to want to move in the opposite direction, which is flow breaking in this case. You can either move it close, or change up the direction a bit so it flows similar to 01:27:929 (3,1) ok, changed the former jumping pattern
00:48:436 (1,2,3) - the flow on this pattern is a bit skewed, try a rotation of 20 degrees clockwise and reposition to form a more diamond like flow k I didn't notice the diamond myself =.=
00:54:891 (7,8,9,10,1) - i would map this without stacking, 5 note stacks in AR7 looks quite confusing to read imo (applies to later occurrences too if you agree) done all three
01:41:600 (3) - hmm curve this more upwards so the flow from 01:41:410 (2) will feel more natural (maybe a blanket around 01:42:170 (4)) adjusted a bit, blanket is too much
02:28:689 (7,8,9) - the flow here feels a bit weird, if you lowered the end of the slider a bit it feels much better changed placement for 7 and 8 instead

[Insane]
00:07:233 (2,3) - this caught me off guard on first play through, because of the nature of the jumps in the first section, its really easy to mistake this as 1/2 spacing when it actually is in 1/1; you could stack this or set it up in a way thats more obvious, and then later occurrences will be easier to judge so you can keep them as-is ok ballanced
00:41:410 (1,2) - the way you positioned this is quite anti-flow and really easy to break on, do something like this instead:
SPOILER
fixed, actually I think both ok though...a bit sorry to live without my overlaps >.<
01:23:182 (3) - hmm this one should be an extended slider like you did in the first verse on 00:25:461 (3) no the music is not really the same here, from what I hear, there's an additional sturmming sound of the guitar at 01:23:372 - but not one at 00:25:651 -
01:39:132 (1,2,3) - another rather confusing pattern to read; aside from the stacks, spacing is practically the same for 1/2 and 1/4, which is very confusing even though the musical cues are quite obvious (more problems with flow compared to readability). You might want to rework this pattern a bit distance should be intuitive now
01:49:765 (5,6,1) - give this more distance, from previous patterns its easy to mistaken this as 1/4 spaced from 01:49:385 (4) ok, so hard to fix this without breaking my circulation
02:01:727 (1) - any reasons for this lone NC? if i were you i would use a 0.85x sv section here to aid the transition of the speed change yeah it works better
02:16:347 (2) - finish on start? hmm, a lower volume one
02:49:765 (3,4) - hmm you never used this kind of spacing for 1/4 connection with a circle before, was this intentional? it is intended but well I ballanced a bit
Interesting flow in this diff, i cant say i really liked it but it was quite fun maneuvering my mouse around it

alright let me know when you are done with this

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-12-24T00:15:52+00:00

will check tomorraw i hope if i'll be not busy ;w;*post to remember*

jonathanlfj wrote:
[Lally's Easy]
clean up some green lines if you would, many of them are not in use for the objects you have deleted some o3o
00:18:815 - felt like there should be a circle here to catch the downbeat and remain coherent with 00:20:334 (2) ok done o3o
00:46:157 (3) - put the finish here and remove the one at 00:47:676 (5), sounds better imo ok
01:15:967 (6) - this might pose some problems for newbies since it might be "too fast" for them to properly react to; how bout reduce a repeat on this? i agree sounds good
01:45:397 (1) - according to how the music goes this belongs to the previous combo, the NC should be on 01:46:917 (2) ok
01:49:575 (4,4) - missing a finish on end? ok o3o
02:02:106 - maybe drag the break to start here ok
02:43:119 (1) - same as 01:45:397 (1) ok
02:47:296 (4,4) - same as 01:49:575 (4,4) ok
02:56:221 (2,3,4) - these 3 objects are unsnapped fixed

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Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2013-12-27T13:56:17+00:00

all diffs updated

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-12-29T04:37:08+00:00

rechecking no kd

[Lally's Easy]
00:51:853 (3) - use a finish instead of the whistle on end?
02:02:106 - think you forgot to drag the break here

[Hard]
01:13:879 (2,3) - use a better blanket here?

[Insane]
02:59:068 (4) - use a NC here? you did it in Hard; also maybe whistle + finish here since that sounds better for me and again keeps consistency with Hard

Thats all, let me know

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-12-29T15:00:23+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
rechecking no kd

[Lally's Easy]
00:51:853 (3) - use a finish instead of the whistle on end? k
02:02:106 - think you forgot to drag the break here done

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Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2013-12-30T01:18:50+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
rechecking no kd

[Hard]
01:13:879 (2,3) - use a better blanket here? sorry I'd keep them as current in order to keep the distance consistent

[Insane]
02:59:068 (4) - use a NC here? you did it in Hard; also maybe whistle + finish here since that sounds better for me and again keeps consistency with Hard yeah you're right, done

Thats all, let me know

uploaded all diffs
should be all fine now

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-12-31T09:04:43+00:00

srry for the delay, everything looks good to me, so here you go

Bubbled~

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-12-31T16:12:36+00:00

\o3o/

UnitedWeSin

889 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2014-01-08T00:49:32+00:00

Hello~

[Insane]

01:55:841 (5) - This note has an awkward placement like it's almost stacked under the 3's tail but isn't. Move it out a bit to be more like 02:01:157 (3) and move 01:56:030 (1) closer if you feel the need.

[Hard]

00:15:777 (1,2) - It's best to remove this jump imo since you don't use one at 00:16:347 (2,3).
00:40:651 (2,3) - I feel that you forced the blanket a bit here. It would be nice to have 1.6 spacing between 2 and 3 and then 1.6 to the 4. Also at 00:42:170 (6,7) it feels like you ran out of spacing so you couldn't make 1.6 spacing to the stream. Maybe you can rework the patterns here.

[Normal]

02:36:853 (3) - Whistle on end instead of clap seems more fitting.

[Lyally's Easy]

00:55:651 (1) - I suggest you end the spinner at 00:58:309. It's awkward when there is an important verse change in the middle of the spinner. It's better to end it at 00:58:309 and add a finish to the end.
01:10:081 - I suggest add a note here. It would make the section more intuitive to play because the gap between 01:08:942 (1,2) is confusing because it's so big and the player expects 2 to be before the downbeat because it does not have a NC. Adding a note would fix that.
01:27:170 (1,1) - The 1 is too soon after the spinner for this difficulty you should try to have two or more beats. I suggest that you use a slider instead of the spinner like at 00:29:448 (4) and end it at 01:28:309.
Example
01:53:372 (1) - Same as 00:55:651 (1). End the spinner at 01:56:030 with a finish on it would be best.
01:57:549 (1,2,3,4,1) - This section is very confusing to follow, and I think too difficult because you use a different idea for 01:57:549 (1,2) than you for 01:58:879 (3) even thought the music is the same. I think you should use the same rhythm that you used at 00:00:587 (1,2,3,4,5). But if you want something different, maybe try this:
Example
Don't forget to delay the break again.
02:51:094 (1) - Same as 01:53:372 (1).
02:55:271 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as 01:57:549 (1,2,3,4,1).
02:59:258 (1) - Forgot clap?

Awesome map.

Just minor things. Let me know when you're finished.

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

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Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2014-01-08T10:37:55+00:00

UnitedWeSin wrote:
Hello~

[Insane]
01:55:841 (5) - This note has an awkward placement like it's almost stacked under the 3's tail but isn't. Move it out a bit to be more like 02:01:157 (3) and move 01:56:030 (1) closer if you feel the need. did so, hope it's fine now
[Hard]
00:15:777 (1,2) - It's best to remove this jump imo since you don't use one at 00:16:347 (2,3). still in my system here, 1.6x between two sliders are my preferrence, as hitting sliders and leaving sliders are both easier, and it's consistent to points like 01:11:030 (2) -
00:40:651 (2,3) - I feel that you forced the blanket a bit here. It would be nice to have 1.6 spacing between 2 and 3 and then 1.6 to the 4. Also at 00:42:170 (6,7) it feels like you ran out of spacing so you couldn't make 1.6 spacing to the stream. Maybe you can rework the patterns here. made it 1.6x between 2&1 and 2&3, 2.0x between 3&4 is initially designed, while downbeat lying on 4. also so eay for me to adjust the later distance, done both
[Normal]
02:36:853 (3) - Whistle on end instead of clap seems more fitting. wow, I couldn't believe I misused a hitsound =.=
Awesome map.
Just minor things. Let me know when you're finished.

thx for your mod~

EDIT:
All diffs updated!
and I'll leave the new page to you UWS~

Last edited by Zero__wind 2014-01-09T10:46:07+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2014-01-09T02:06:06+00:00

UnitedWeSin wrote:
Hello~
Hi o3o//////

[Lyally's Easy]
00:55:651 (1) - I suggest you end the spinner at 00:58:309. It's awkward when there is an important verse change in the middle of the spinner. It's better to end it at 00:58:309 and add a finish to the end. no because i follow the vocal and not any sound in the music here
01:10:081 - I suggest add a note here. It would make the section more intuitive to play because the gap between 01:08:942 (1,2) is confusing because it's so big and the player expects 2 to be before the downbeat because it does not have a NC. Adding a note would fix that. added just a NC
01:27:170 (1,1) - The 1 is too soon after the spinner for this difficulty you should try to have two or more beats. I suggest that you use a slider instead of the spinner like at 00:29:448 (4) and end it at 01:28:309. i don't think so,sorry but is not so soon after the spinner i can undrestand if it were at the first white tic ,but is on the red one and ppl have ikr small time more but atleast is an 1/4 more time
Example
01:53:372 (1) - Same as 00:55:651 (1). End the spinner at 01:56:030 with a finish on it would be best. same answer
01:57:549 (1,2,3,4,1) - This section is very confusing to follow, and I think too difficult because you use a different idea for 01:57:549 (1,2) than you for 01:58:879 (3) even thought the music is the same. I think you should use the same rhythm that you used at 00:00:587 (1,2,3,4,5). But if you want something different, maybe try this:
Example
Don't forget to delay the break again. i prefer to use not so much sliders to confuse more the ppl about the timing in this part i prefer to keep mine
02:51:094 (1) - Same as 01:53:372 (1). same answer
02:55:271 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as 01:57:549 (1,2,3,4,1). same answer
02:59:258 (1) - Forgot clap? yap ty

ma fixes o3o

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Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Lan wings 2014-01-09T16:18:37+00:00

要rank的是这个? 怒晒一发ava

UnitedWeSin

889 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2014-01-11T16:16:54+00:00

[Lally's Easy]

01:08:942 (1) - No need for this NC now since you don't add one at 01:15:018 (6). Best to remove.
01:27:170 (1) - I can't agree here sorry. It's confusing because at 01:27:170 (1,1) we have one less beat to hit 01:29:258 (1) than we did at 00:29:448 (4,1) so it feels too soon after the spinner. I think you should replace 01:27:170 (1) with a slider ending at 01:28:309 or shorten 01:27:170 (1) to 01:28:309. A slider is the better option there by far.
01:57:549 (1,2,3) - I'm sorry Lally I can't agree with this rhythm. :\ You confuse players because 01:57:549 (1,2) follows the music differently than 01:58:879 (3). I highly suggest to use the same rhythm as the beginning for consistency and to make it easy on the player.
Example
02:55:271 (1,2,3,4) - ^

If you still don't want to change it then it's fine, I'll just rebubble.

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2014-01-11T16:21:13+00:00

~~lol let me see what's happening here~~

carefully checked all those left to be handled
I must say I agree with UWS on these points, the rhythm in the example pic above is pretty worth considering for simplifying
Fix these plz, nyally chan >.<

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2014-01-11T19:30:09+00:00

will check again ,will be back home in 1 hour

personall opinion (nobody cares about o3o)

UnitedWeSin wrote:
If you still don't want to change it then it's fine, I'll just rebubble.

btw BAT's should help with suggestions and not say MUST this must THESE ,i know what is good for my diffs,i have enought ranked maps to know how mapping works and what is good for a flowly rhythm,attention, this not mean that i'm not going to fix something,but just a personal opinion.

will edit in a bit ma post with a reply to the mod o3o

UnitedWeSin wrote:
[Lally's Easy]
01:08:942 (1) - No need for this NC now since you don't add one at 01:15:018 (6). Best to remove. k
01:27:170 (1) - I can't agree here sorry. It's confusing because at 01:27:170 (1,1) we have one less beat to hit 01:29:258 (1) than we did at 00:29:448 (4,1) so it feels too soon after the spinner. I think you should replace 01:27:170 (1) with a slider ending at 01:28:309 or shorten 01:27:170 (1) to 01:28:309. A slider is the better option there by far. done
01:57:549 (1,2,3) - I'm sorry Lally I can't agree with this rhythm. :\ You confuse players because 01:57:549 (1,2) follows the music differently than 01:58:879 (3). I highly suggest to use the same rhythm as the beginning for consistency and to make it easy on the player.
Example

what about something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1243968 ? changed anyway
02:55:271 (1,2,3,4) - ^ copy pasted
If you still don't want to change it then it's fine, I'll just rebubble.

update

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310,195,178120,2,0,L|398:195,2,80,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,179258,12,12,180777,0:0:0:0:

nao rank pl0x o3o

UnitedWeSin

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UnitedWeSin 2014-01-12T00:48:54+00:00

I'm sorry Lally. I was worried you might be offended by that, I should have reworded it. As a BAT, I'm not willing to rank things that I think are wrong. I mentioned these things because I felt they didn't work well in the diff and needed to be addressed. I didn't want to force any changes on you, that's why I said that I would rebubble even if you didn't change it because another BAT might be willing to rank it.
My appologies. No hard feelings I hope.

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-01-12T01:47:26+00:00

well, didn't sleep well last night=.=
how is it now >.<
let me update it first

Don't worry, UWs and nyally
None of us are new mappers and we knew how the maps get ranked
Take this easy, we're all understanding enough, right?

Uploaded lally's diff
I'm fine with the changes now
Let's see if UWS agrees as well

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