Breeze wrote:

hi vincerio

[M.F.'s Easy]

1. 00:31:114 (1) - sepreat end to start more obvious so that we can know which side to go
2. 01:43:114 (1,2,3) - wrong spacing, and 2 grid up

WyndII wrote:

[illuminist's Difficult]
00:12:25 (8) - new combo I put the combos in 8 beats (8 white ticks) like the next one and the before.
00:13:97 (1) - finish
00:17:39 (1) - ^
00:37:32 (9) - clap again
00:40:75 (10) - ^
00:41:39 (13) - finish
01:01:756 start clapping here u!
<3 this diff

WyndII wrote:

[DJPop's Technika]
01:13:64 (1,17) - erase this notes then new combo, do you need to start 1/4 if it sounds better to star in a white tick >.<
Nah, that's original DJMAX style.
While playing this map, some parts are just noise >.<
:<

orioncomet wrote:

[DJPop's Technika]
00:34:114(4) - spacing
NP.

MoonFragrance wrote:

Fixed

Sorry to late for uploading D:
I was TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO busy to visit osu because of school fest.

WyndII wrote:

Mod:

[M.F.'s Easy]
00:31:11 (1) - where to start this? actually some people will drag it to the left instead to the right cause they think that the slider was made that way but no, which means the slide is confusing o.o

[Normal]
00:14:39 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - flip this vertical, the slider is behind a slider, >.>
^ No
00:25:32 (2) - not straight
00:10:97 (1) - ^


[Hard]
00:21:25 (1) - This note is not centered
00:24:25 (9) - finish
00:58:00 (4,5,6) - copy the previous triplets : 00:57:47 (1,2,3) - and paste it here 00:57:899 , then try to ds them by holding the first note =)
^ No
01:04:75 (7,9) - remove clap

[illuminist's Difficult]
00:12:25 (8) - new combo
00:13:97 (1) - finish
00:17:39 (1) - ^
00:37:32 (9) - clap again
00:40:75 (10) - ^
00:41:39 (13) - finish
01:01:756 start clapping here u!
<3 this diff
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the following are purely suggestions
01:02:39 (5,1) - clap
01:03:89 (6) - end of slider clap
01:04:97 (11) - add a note and clap
01:05:82 (3) - clap
01:05:39 (1,3,5) - finish
01:07:54 (2,6) - clap
01:08:18 (5) - ^
01:08:82 (8) - finish
01:10:11 (1) - clap
01:10:97 (3) - ^
01:11:61 (3,4) - clap
01:39:04 (8) - clap

[DJPop's Technika]
01:13:64 (1,17) - erase this notes then new combo, do you need to start 1/4 if it sounds better to star in a white tick >.<
While playing this map, some parts are just noise >.<

[orion's solo]
00:12:68 (6,7,8) - try to put whistle hitsound here =)
00:24:25 (12) - finish
00:28:32 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is so confusing, can't you stick with < > < > < > and not < > < > > < > , lighting makes it really confusing, really.
00:52:54 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this part is confusing when kiai ^
00:55:64 (4,5,6) - ^
I enjoyed playing this map =3

gdeath wrote:

nice~nice map and skin.
starry*\(^o^)/

GolGate wrote:

For great justice.

Also, this needs BATs already!

Symbolic wrote:

[DJPop's Technika]

00:39:89 (5) - New combo here.
00:40:32 (1) - Remove new combo here.
Fixed.
00:49:11 (1) - ^
00:50:18 (1) - ^
00:51:47 (1) - ^
00:52:11 (1) - ^
00:52:54 (1) - ^
00:53:61 (1) - ^
00:54:04 (1) - ^
00:54:25 (1) - ^
00:54:47 (1) - ^
00:55:54 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:55:97 (1) - ^
00:57:04 (1) - ^
00:57:47 (1) - ^
00:58:11 (1) - ^
00:58:32 (1) - ^
00:58:97 (1) - ^
00:59:39 (1) - ^
01:00:68 (1) - ^
01:00:89 (1) - ^
01:01:43 (1) - ^
01:01:64 (1) - ^
01:01:86 (1) - ^
I want to remove following points in that part.
01:24:04 (9) - Whistle.
01:25:75 (9) - ^
01:27:47 (9) - ^
01:29:18 (9) - ^
Added.

Symbolic wrote:

[M.F.'s Easy]

00:21:25 (1,2,3,4) - Put these 1 level 3 grid to the left.
00:58:54 (1) - Let the start- and endpoint overlap less.
01:43:54 (2,3) - Space these notes with d-snap.


[Normal]

00:15:25 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:11 (1) - ^
00:57:47 (3) - Space this with d-snap so that the spacing of (2,3) is consistent to the spacing of (3,4,5,6).
00:58:54 (1) - Bad spacing, change the pattern of 00:57:47 (3,4,5,6) to fix the spacing.
01:28:11 (1) - Clap on endpoint.


[Hard]

00:37:11 (1,2,3) - Move these down 1 level 3 grid.
00:48:04 (TIMING SECTION) - Put Kiai Time on here.
01:15:47 (TIMING SECTION) - Kiai Time doesn't fit here, turn it off.
01:32:61 (10,1) - Put these 1 level 3 grid to the left for better pattern.


[illuminist's Difficulty]

Put Circle Size 1 larger please.

01:12:47 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:13:32 (1) - ^
01:15:04 (1) - ^


[orion's Solo]

00:20:18 (8) - New combo.
01:16:54 (1,2,3) - Ridiculous jump, it's unintuitive and too big imo, remove it.
01:23:39 (3,4,5) - ^


Very fun map,
Starred *

osuplayer111 wrote:

[M.F. Easy]

00:04:97 (1) - Spinner too short for an easy.
00:19:54 (1) - ^

[Normal]

00:34:11 (8) - Finish on slider end.

[Hard]

00:49:32 (1) - Remove new combo.

[illuminist's difficulty]

01:22:54 (1) - Finish.

[DJPop's Technika]

Fine.

[orion's Solo]

Fine.

Tapdancingmetroid wrote:

Illuminist's difficult:

Use Kiai in only one chorus, not both (since there's only about 10 seconds between the two).
Actually, this applies to all of the difficulties that use kiai at every chorus.

Orion's Solo:

The combo at 00:24:685 could probably be split into two combos.
Also, turning off and on kiai within a few seconds (the first chorus) is typically considered bad.

On a completely different note, M.F.'s Easy doesn't have all of the custom skinned stuff.

Anyway, this seems like a good map otherwise, so I'll star it for now.

1. I don't like how the backgrounds aren't the same for all difficulties...

1. Hmmhm, pretty cool, I say. The only thing that bothered me out is the lightning.png, especially with Kiai. Look at this: "300.png + Stack leniency low + lightning.png + Kiai = a complete mess. I noticed this while playing [orion's Solo]... Be careful.

1. To be honest, this looks more like a normal. Also, maybe put MoonFragance instead of M.F.'s? It'd be better.

1. This is a bit harder than normal for me, but not much.

1. Now, now... This is easier than what a hard should be! For me anyways.

Gens wrote:

[Overall]

1. I don't like how the backgrounds aren't the same for all difficulties...

[Skin]

1. Hmmhm, pretty cool, I say. The only thing that bothered me out is the lightning.png, especially with Kiai. Look at this: "300.png + Stack leniency low + lightning.png + Kiai = a complete mess. I noticed this while playing [orion's Solo]... Be careful.

[M.F.'s Easy]

1. To be honest, this looks more like a normal. Also, maybe put MoonFragance instead of M.F.'s? It'd be better.

[Normal]

1. This is a bit harder than normal for me, but not much.

[Hard]

1. Now, now... This is easier than what a hard should be! For me anyways.

[orion's Solo]
Yes~

[illuminist's Difficult]
Awesome~

[DJPop's Technika]
It's-a DJPop~

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Cool beatmap. :3