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Topic Starter
indyinyou
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 23 พฤศจิกายน 2556 at 22:38:55

Artist: yuikonnu
Title: Souzou Forest
Tags: Imagination Nico Nico Douga vocaloid3 IA vocaloid jin
BPM: 180
Filesize: 23226kb
Play Time: 03:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Amateur Drum - 7Key (3.06 stars, 1299 notes)
  2. Basic Drum - 7Key (1.79 stars, 760 notes)
  3. Pro Drum - 7Key (4.25 stars, 1806 notes)
Download: yuikonnu - Souzou Forest
Download: yuikonnu - Souzou Forest (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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MP3 BG Video from this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48368
Drummania mapset
Basic Drum (Easy)
Amateur Drum (Normal)
Pro Drum (Hard)
Topic Starter
indyinyou
Pending for now 23/9/2013

yuikonnu - Souzou Forest
[Shi-Ra]
Hi there.
Random mania-mod :3

Shi-ra's Patterns Review:


Amateur Drum
Inside :3
According to drums I suggest to separate bass drum to individual "bass drum column". It'll be more comfortable to learn those patterns and choruses will be more peculiar.
According to this I suggest:
01:05:590 (65590|6) - move to 5th column - it'll start bass-drum column and follow bass on this column before 01:08:256
01:06:923 (66923|0) - move to 1st column
01:08:590 (68590|4) - move to 1st column and follow bass-drum again before 01:10:923
01:09:590 (69590|6) - move to 5th column
01:48:090 (108090|6) - move to 4th column, it will be good ending
02:21:590 (141590|3) - move go 1st column and follow bass-drum before 02:24:256
Finally add notes to 2nd and 4th columns here 03:58:923

Pro Drum
Inside :3
Аs well as in the previous diff.
01:05:590 (65590|6) - move to 5th column and follow bass drum again
01:16:256 (76256|6) - ^
01:08:256 (68256|3) - move to 1st column and follow
01:18:923 (78923|3) - ^

Kiai
For choruses I suggest to set kiai time this way:
1st chorus - 01:05:604 => 01:26:923
2nd chorus - 02:10:923 => 02:32:277
3rd chorus - 03:16:254 => 03:37:590

Hope it will be useful.
This song is really AWESOME and mapset is awesome too \:3/
Good luck :3/
Topic Starter
indyinyou

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi there.
Random mania-mod :3

Shi-ra's Patterns Review:


Amateur Drum
Inside :3
According to drums I suggest to separate bass drum to individual "bass drum column". It'll be more comfortable to learn those patterns and choruses will be more peculiar.
According to this I suggest:
01:05:590 (65590|6) - move to 5th column - it'll start bass-drum column and follow bass on this column before 01:08:256
01:06:923 (66923|0) - move to 1st column
01:08:590 (68590|4) - move to 1st column and follow bass-drum again before 01:10:923
01:09:590 (69590|6) - move to 5th column
01:48:090 (108090|6) - move to 4th column, it will be good ending
02:21:590 (141590|3) - move go 1st column and follow bass-drum before 02:24:256
Finally add notes to 2nd and 4th columns here 03:58:923

Pro Drum
Inside :3
Аs well as in the previous diff.
01:05:590 (65590|6) - move to 5th column and follow bass drum again
01:16:256 (76256|6) - ^
01:08:256 (68256|3) - move to 1st column and follow
01:18:923 (78923|3) - ^

Kiai
For choruses I suggest to set kiai time this way:
1st chorus - 01:05:604 => 01:26:923
2nd chorus - 02:10:923 => 02:32:277
3rd chorus - 03:16:254 => 03:37:590

Hope it will be useful.
This song is really AWESOME and mapset is awesome too \:3/
Good luck :3/
fix only Kiai thx for mod :)
17VA
hmm.. okay added my modding slot..
c36098651
[Pro Drum]


00:53:173 add note(s)
00:54:006^
01:04:006 01:04:173 ^
01:57:840 01:58:006 01:58:506^
01:59:340 ^
02:09:340 02:09:506 ^
02:32:256 ~ 02:53:590 if you don't want to make it too hard you can ignore my mod here.
02:33:340 ^
02:34:673 ^
02:35:090 02:35:340 02:35:506 02:35:840 ^
02:36:506 02:36:840 02:37:006 02:37:173 ^
02:38:006 ^
02:38:340 ^
02:39:173 02:39:506 02:39:673 02:39:756 02:40:006 02:40:173 ^
02:40:340 02:40:423 ^
02:40:673 02:40:840 02:41:006 02:41:173 02:41:340^
02:41:756 ~ 02:43:256 each 1/4 can have the note
02:43:423 ~ 02:43:756 ^
02:43:923 ~ 02:44:256 ^
02:44:423 ~ 02:45:756 ^
02:45:923 ~ 02:46:590 ^
02:47:173 add
02:47:423 02:47:506 02:47:840 02:48:090 add
02:48:673 02:49:006 add
02:49:256 ~ 02:49:923 each 1/4 can have the note
02:50:090 add
02:50:590 ~ 02:50:923
02:51:090 ~ 02:51:256
02:51:423 ~ 02:51:923
02:52:173 02:52:506
02:52:756 ~ 02:53:590
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------

03:45:340 03:45:423 add
03:56:006 03:56:090 add
Sorarei
Hi there

[General]
tags -> Imagination Forest

[Basic Drum]
00:43:090 (43090|0,43256|2,43423|6,43590|4,43756|1) - Stream this ?
01:48:423 (108423|0,108590|2,108756|6,108923|4,109090|1,109256|5) - same like above but need flip Ctrl + H
01:03:090 (63090|3) - move
03:57:923 - try this pattern http://puu.sh/4CSh8.jpg

[Amateur Drum]
00:43:840 (43840|4) - move to 5
00:43:923 (43923|2) - move to 4
00:44:840 (44840|5,44923|4) - move to left by one column
03:10:590 (190590|1) - move to center
03:11:923 (191923|5) - ^

I like these 1/1 note and nice hitsound , i hope this can help you
Topic Starter
indyinyou

Reikosaka wrote:

Hi there

[General]
tags -> Imagination Forest <<< fix

[Basic Drum]
00:43:090 (43090|0,43256|2,43423|6,43590|4,43756|1) - Stream this ? <<< don t know how to change
01:48:423 (108423|0,108590|2,108756|6,108923|4,109090|1,109256|5) - same like above but need flip Ctrl + H <<<< don t know how to change
01:03:090 (63090|3) - move <<< move to ????
03:57:923 - try this pattern http://puu.sh/4CSh8.jpg <<<< change to another way

[Amateur Drum]
00:43:840 (43840|4) - move to 5 <<< fix
00:43:923 (43923|2) - move to 4 <<< fix
00:44:840 (44840|5,44923|4) - move to left by one column <<< fix
03:10:590 (190590|1) - move to center <<< fix
03:11:923 (191923|5) - ^ <<< fix

I like these 1/1 note and nice hitsound , i hope this can help you
thx for mod :D but i m not good at pattern :o
Topic Starter
indyinyou

c36098651 wrote:

[Pro Drum]


00:53:173 add note(s)
00:54:006^
01:04:006 01:04:173 ^
01:57:840 01:58:006 01:58:506^
01:59:340 ^
02:09:340 02:09:506 ^
02:32:256 ~ 02:53:590 if you don't want to make it too hard you can ignore my mod here.
02:33:340 ^
02:34:673 ^
02:35:090 02:35:340 02:35:506 02:35:840 ^
02:36:506 02:36:840 02:37:006 02:37:173 ^
02:38:006 ^
02:38:340 ^
02:39:173 02:39:506 02:39:673 02:39:756 02:40:006 02:40:173 ^
02:40:340 02:40:423 ^
02:40:673 02:40:840 02:41:006 02:41:173 02:41:340^
02:41:756 ~ 02:43:256 each 1/4 can have the note
02:43:423 ~ 02:43:756 ^
02:43:923 ~ 02:44:256 ^
02:44:423 ~ 02:45:756 ^
02:45:923 ~ 02:46:590 ^
02:47:173 add
02:47:423 02:47:506 02:47:840 02:48:090 add
02:48:673 02:49:006 add
02:49:256 ~ 02:49:923 each 1/4 can have the note
02:50:090 add
02:50:590 ~ 02:50:923
02:51:090 ~ 02:51:256
02:51:423 ~ 02:51:923
02:52:173 02:52:506
02:52:756 ~ 02:53:590
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------

03:45:340 03:45:423 add
03:56:006 03:56:090 add
sry i think about your mod not fit my mapping style i map follow drum sound only but thx you try to help me make map better xD
17VA
[Global]

Add Long notes at Long-drums... it might be fun

(And it needs o2jam-style GD??!?!? like extra diff)

[Pro Drum]

00:33:090 (33090|0,33173|1,33256|0,33340|1,33423|2) -

re arrange other ways. uncomfortable to play

00:46:756 (46756|3) - move 6

01:05:590 - ~ 01:24:923 -

needs more harder? use little overmapping(drum) (little monotonous...)

01:40:423 (100423|6,100590|5,100590|2,100756|6) - ctrl+h (take a balance of two hands)

01:43:090 (103090|0,103256|1,103256|4,103423|0) - ^

02:10:423 (130423|1,130506|3,130589|4) - tones are... ? http://puu.sh/4D9KT.png

02:20:590 - http://puu.sh/4D9Qb.png

03:16:256 - ends - it's a last kiai part but I think so monotonous. make more harder

mod not finished
17VA
GD : http://puu.sh/4Hq3M.zip (hmm.. contains a lot of LNs)

[Global]

(note's patterns like IIDX style? haha)

All diff's tags are must be same

[Amateur Drum]

00:23:256 (23256|1) - ~00:33:256 (33256|4) -
01:28:590 (88590|2) - ~ 01:35:923 (95923|6) -

this patterns are little awkward.

http://puu.sh/4Hqef.png

03:37:590 (217590|3) - 03:42:590 (222590|4) -

03:48:256 (228256|3) - ~ 03:55:923 (235923|4) -

make notes are spread evenly.

[Basic Drum]

hmm.. perfect?
Topic Starter
indyinyou
thx for mod

fix some

and add your diff

thx 17VA ;)
Bruce
Mod by request :D

column:1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Basic Drum
00:45:090 (45090|0) - Move to 4
01:23:923 (83923|0) - Move to 3
01:27:756 - Add a Note
01:51:756 (111756|5) - Move to 1 or 3
02:45:256 (165256|2) - Move to 6
03:58:756 (238756|5) - Move to 4

Amateur Drum
00:24:256 (24256|1) - Move to 6
00:25:590 (25590|5) - Move to 2
00:26:923 (26923|1) - Move to 6
00:28:256 (28256|5) - Move to 1
00:29:590 (29590|0) - Move to 7
00:30:923 (30923|6) - Move to 3
00:32:256 (32256|2) - Move to 5
00:43:840 (43840|5) - Move to 5
00:43:923 (43923|3) - Move to 3
01:29:590 (89590|2) - Move to 5
01:30:923 (90923|4) - Move to 2
01:32:256 (92256|1) - Move to 6
01:33:590 (93590|5) - Move to 1
01:34:923 (94923|0) - Move to 7
01:36:256 (96256|6) - Move to 4
02:31:256 (151256|6,151256|0) - Move to 2 and 6
02:42:256 (162256|5,162256|1) - Move to 1 and 7

Pro Drum
00:35:923 (35923|3) - Move to 5
00:38:590 (38590|3) - Move to 3
00:46:756 (46756|5) - Move to 7
01:35:673 (95673|1) - Move to 3
01:35:840 (95840|1) - Move to 3
01:35:923 (95923|2) - Move to 7
02:59:756 (179756|6) - Move to 5
03:58:590 (238590|3) - Move to 3

17VA's Lv.34
OD8
It's too hard, beyond my ability, sorry :(

Like this song, Good luck :oops:
17VA
hmm.. it's o2jam style mapping, contain a lot of LNs.

ranking criteria recommends od7 if it contains a lot of (complex) LNs
Topic Starter
indyinyou

Simple_Star wrote:

Mod by request :D

column:1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Basic Drum
00:45:090 (45090|0) - Move to 4
01:23:923 (83923|0) - Move to 3
01:27:756 - Add a Note <<< not add
01:51:756 (111756|5) - Move to 1 or 3
02:45:256 (165256|2) - Move to 6
03:58:756 (238756|5) - Move to 4

Amateur Drum
00:24:256 (24256|1) - Move to 6
00:25:590 (25590|5) - Move to 2
00:26:923 (26923|1) - Move to 6
00:28:256 (28256|5) - Move to 1
00:29:590 (29590|0) - Move to 7
00:30:923 (30923|6) - Move to 3
00:32:256 (32256|2) - Move to 5
00:43:840 (43840|5) - Move to 5
00:43:923 (43923|3) - Move to 3
01:29:590 (89590|2) - Move to 5
01:30:923 (90923|4) - Move to 2
01:32:256 (92256|1) - Move to 6
01:33:590 (93590|5) - Move to 1
01:34:923 (94923|0) - Move to 7
01:36:256 (96256|6) - Move to 4
02:31:256 (151256|6,151256|0) - Move to 2 and 6
02:42:256 (162256|5,162256|1) - Move to 1 and 7

Pro Drum
00:35:923 (35923|3) - Move to 5
00:38:590 (38590|3) - Move to 3
00:46:756 (46756|5) - Move to 7
01:35:673 (95673|1) - Move to 3
01:35:840 (95840|1) - Move to 3
01:35:923 (95923|2) - Move to 7
02:59:756 (179756|6) - Move to 5
03:58:590 (238590|3) - Move to 3

17VA's Lv.34
OD8
It's too hard, beyond my ability, sorry :(

Like this song, Good luck :oops:
all fix i don t fix about add note thx for mod ;)
Remillion Cross
Hi indyinyou o/ sorry i'm busy before with my mapset
here's my mod, you can ignore or accept these mods XD

Basic Drum

* 00:40:923 (40923|0) - move to 2nd column
* Just advice :
- 01:17:923 (77923|2) - move to 5th column
- 01:18:256 (78256|4) - move to 3rd column
- 01:18:590 (78590|2) - move to 5th column
- 01:20:590 (80590|5) - move to 2nd column
- 01:20:923 (80923|1) - move to 6th column
- 01:21:256 (81256|5) - move to 2nd column
* 01:51:923 (111923|3) - move to 4th column
* 01:53:256 (113256|4) - move to 4th column
* 02:15:923 (135923|4) - move to 5th column
* 02:18:590 (138590|2) - move to 2nd column

Amateur Drum

* 00:43:423 (43423|1) - move to 3rd column
* 00:43:590 (43590|4) - move to 6th column
* 02:55:256 (175256|2,175256|4) - move to 2nd column and 6th column
* 02:55:590 (175590|1,175590|5) - move to 3rd column and 5th column
* 02:55:923 (175923|2,175923|4) - move to 2nd column and 6th column
* 03:58:423 (238423|5) - move to 5th column
* 03:58:506 (238506|3) - move to 3rd column
* 03:58:590 (238590|1) - move to 1st column

Pro Drum

* 01:05:256 (65256|4) - move to 6th column
* 02:02:256 (122256|5) - move to 4th column
* 03:58:173 (238173|5) - move to 4th column
* 03:58:256 (238256|2) - move to 6th column

17VA's Lv.34

* 00:30:923 (30923|5) - move to 4th column
* 01:02:590 (62590) - add circle in 3rd column or 5th column
* 01:02:756 (62756) - add circle in 5th column or 3rd column
* 01:28:090 (88090|4) - add circle here
* 03:11:923 (191923|1) - move to 3rd column
* 03:12:090 (192090|2) - move to 4th column
(i don't want to mod about LN's in this diff, because it's perfect )

if you don't understand about these mod, you can ask me :D
Topic Starter
indyinyou

Remillion Cross wrote:

Hi indyinyou o/ sorry i'm busy before with my mapset
here's my mod, you can ignore or accept these mods XD

Basic Drum

* 00:40:923 (40923|0) - move to 2nd column
* Just advice :
- 01:17:923 (77923|2) - move to 5th column
- 01:18:256 (78256|4) - move to 3rd column
- 01:18:590 (78590|2) - move to 5th column
- 01:20:590 (80590|5) - move to 2nd column
- 01:20:923 (80923|1) - move to 6th column
- 01:21:256 (81256|5) - move to 2nd column
* 01:51:923 (111923|3) - move to 4th column
* 01:53:256 (113256|4) - move to 4th column
* 02:15:923 (135923|4) - move to 5th column
* 02:18:590 (138590|2) - move to 2nd column

Amateur Drum

* 00:43:423 (43423|1) - move to 3rd column
* 00:43:590 (43590|4) - move to 6th column
* 02:55:256 (175256|2,175256|4) - move to 2nd column and 6th column
* 02:55:590 (175590|1,175590|5) - move to 3rd column and 5th column
* 02:55:923 (175923|2,175923|4) - move to 2nd column and 6th column
* 03:58:423 (238423|5) - move to 5th column
* 03:58:506 (238506|3) - move to 3rd column
* 03:58:590 (238590|1) - move to 1st column

Pro Drum

* 01:05:256 (65256|4) - move to 6th column
* 02:02:256 (122256|5) - move to 4th column
* 03:58:173 (238173|5) - move to 4th column
* 03:58:256 (238256|2) - move to 6th column

if you don't understand about these mod, you can ask me :D
All fix for my diff thx :D
Remillion Cross

indyinyou wrote:

Remillion Cross wrote:

Hi indyinyou o/ sorry i'm busy before with my mapset
here's my mod, you can ignore or accept these mods XD

Basic Drum

* 00:40:923 (40923|0) - move to 2nd column
* Just advice :
- 01:17:923 (77923|2) - move to 5th column
- 01:18:256 (78256|4) - move to 3rd column
- 01:18:590 (78590|2) - move to 5th column
- 01:20:590 (80590|5) - move to 2nd column
- 01:20:923 (80923|1) - move to 6th column
- 01:21:256 (81256|5) - move to 2nd column
* 01:51:923 (111923|3) - move to 4th column
* 01:53:256 (113256|4) - move to 4th column
* 02:15:923 (135923|4) - move to 5th column
* 02:18:590 (138590|2) - move to 2nd column

Amateur Drum

* 00:43:423 (43423|1) - move to 3rd column
* 00:43:590 (43590|4) - move to 6th column
* 02:55:256 (175256|2,175256|4) - move to 2nd column and 6th column
* 02:55:590 (175590|1,175590|5) - move to 3rd column and 5th column
* 02:55:923 (175923|2,175923|4) - move to 2nd column and 6th column
* 03:58:423 (238423|5) - move to 5th column
* 03:58:506 (238506|3) - move to 3rd column
* 03:58:590 (238590|1) - move to 1st column

Pro Drum

* 01:05:256 (65256|4) - move to 6th column
* 02:02:256 (122256|5) - move to 4th column
* 03:58:173 (238173|5) - move to 4th column
* 03:58:256 (238256|2) - move to 6th column

if you don't understand about these mod, you can ask me :D
All fix for my diff thx :D
Since you giving me 2 kudosu, i will shoot your map \o/
( How to giving 2 kudosu o.o ? )
Topic Starter
indyinyou
if map not have a mod 15+ days i think it give people 2kd who mod it

but i not sure lol
Sorarei
tags : nico nico douga , vocaloid3
asd123iii
I'll mod later :D

[General]
Source:Nico Nico Douga

[17VA's Lv.34]
add a tag:17VA
add kiai time like other 3 diff
hitsound volume should be at least 30%


Good luck :)
Topic Starter
indyinyou
fix add tag
Roxas
Mod as requested

[General]
Inconsistency in Kiai time - check them, they should be the same for all diffs (Pro Drum Kiai #2 finishes later than the other diff, and about the GD, that Kiai can be different).
Why in some beats you use the sample import and in others you use whistle/clap/finish..? It's a bit strange but I think it's permitted. xD

[Basic Drum]
01:38:590 (98590|3) - Move in 7 (for a better pattern)
02:25:590 (145590|2) - Move right
02:25:923 (145923|6,146256|0,146590|6) - ctrl+h
02:43:590 (163590|1) - Move left
02:46:256 (166256|5,166590|4) - Move left
02:47:590 (167590|5) - Move right

[Amateur Drum]
01:04:090 (64090|2,64256|4) - Move right
01:49:256 (109256|4) - Move left

[Pro Drum]
00:33:256 (33256|0,33340|1,33423|2) - Maybe ctrl+h?
01:35:756 (95756|0) - Move in 5 and 01:35:840 (95840|1) - Move in 7?
02:32:277 - As I said in general, snap correctly this green line

[17VA's Lv.34]
Hey 17VA, wanna put kiai as in other diff? I think they would fit!
So hard diff, but patterns are okay imo. Nothing to say, maybe HP Drain -1.ù

Good luck!
17VA

Remillion Cross wrote:

Hi indyinyou o/ sorry i'm busy before with my mapset
17VA's Lv.34

* 00:30:923 (30923|5) - move to 4th column - fixed other way
* 01:02:590 (62590) - add circle in 3rd column or 5th column - fixed
* 01:02:756 (62756) - add circle in 5th column or 3rd column - X
* 01:28:090 (88090|4) - add circle here -fixed
* 03:11:923 (191923|1) - move to 3rd column -fixed
* 03:12:090 (192090|2) - move to 4th column -fixed

Roxas wrote:

[17VA's Lv.34]
Hey 17VA, wanna put kiai as in other diff? I think they would fit!

Good luck!
here

http://puu.sh/4UE41.osu
Topic Starter
indyinyou

Roxas wrote:

Mod as requested

[General]
Inconsistency in Kiai time - check them, they should be the same for all diffs (Pro Drum Kiai #2 finishes later than the other diff, and about the GD, that Kiai can be different).
Why in some beats you use the sample import and in others you use whistle/clap/finish..? It's a bit strange but I think it's permitted. xD

[Basic Drum]
01:38:590 (98590|3) - Move in 7 (for a better pattern)
02:25:590 (145590|2) - Move right
02:25:923 (145923|6,146256|0,146590|6) - ctrl+h
02:43:590 (163590|1) - Move left
02:46:256 (166256|5,166590|4) - Move left
02:47:590 (167590|5) - Move right

[Amateur Drum]
01:04:090 (64090|2,64256|4) - Move right
01:49:256 (109256|4) - Move left

[Pro Drum]
00:33:256 (33256|0,33340|1,33423|2) - Maybe ctrl+h?
01:35:756 (95756|0) - Move in 5 and 01:35:840 (95840|1) - Move in 7?
02:32:277 - As I said in general, snap correctly this green line
ALL fix for my diff thx

and about hitsounds one note can have only one sound on note / i use green line on Basic,Amateur Drum because i want note have 2 hitsound like clap/finish same as Pro Drum diff but i can`t add it if i use L+click to add simple hitsound :o that way can add only one sound

but all note on my map have drum sound xD

update 17AV diff
Roxas

indyinyou wrote:

and about hitsounds one note can have only one sound on note / i use green line on Basic,Amateur Drum because i want note have 2 hitsound like clap/finish same as Pro Drum diff but i can`t add it if i use L+click to add simple hitsound :o that way can add only one sound
Oh right, it's fair this, I didnt' think about this :P
[Emiria]
1234567
basic drum
00:22:590 - add a note
01:48:090 (108090|4,108090|2) - maybe del one note?
01:50:590 - add a note
01:50:756 (110756|6,110756|4) - maybe del one


that's fine~
amateur drum
00:35:923 (35923|5) - move to 7
00:36:173 - add a note at 5
00:42:756 (42756|5,42756|6) - maybe one note is better
01:03:256 - add a note
01:03:590 - ^
01:04:256 - add a note at 2
01:04:590 - add one or two notes ?
01:05:611 - add a note
01:15:256 - ^
01:38:923 - ^
02:09:923 - ^
pro durm
maybe it is nice. ;)

17VA's diff is so difficult ..i can't mod it

star~
sorry for so late :( :( :( :( :( :(
PROGUY
Hi there! As requested, here's my mod. :)

[Basic Drum]
OD -1
00:43:090 (43090|0,43423|6) Remove these notes.
01:03:090 (63090|3) Move to 5th column.
01:03:423 (63423|3) Move to 3rd column.
01:07:256 (67256|3) Move to 3rd column.
01:38:590 (98590|6) Move to 4th column.
01:48:423 (108423|0,108756|6) Remove these notes.
03:15:923 Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061457
03:58:090 (238090|2) Remove this note.

[Amateur Drum]
00:50:256 (50256|5,50423|5) Move to 4th column.
03:13:256 (193256|1,193256|5) Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061466
03:14:756 (194756|5,194756|1) ^
03:15:923 (195923|5,195923|1) ^

So far, I will admit that I am very impressed and pleased with these first two maps so far because of how well it matches the instruments and the balance it has maintained for both hands. Basic Drum had some issues with some difficulty spikes, but those are easily removable if you follow my suggestions. Aside from that, great job so far! Keep it up! :D

I'll come back sometime later to mod the other two difficulties. ;)
Topic Starter
indyinyou

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there! As requested, here's my mod. :)

[Basic Drum]
OD -1
00:43:090 (43090|0,43423|6) Remove these notes.
01:03:090 (63090|3) Move to 5th column.
01:03:423 (63423|3) Move to 3rd column.
01:07:256 (67256|3) Move to 3rd column.
01:38:590 (98590|6) Move to 4th column.
01:48:423 (108423|0,108756|6) Remove these notes.
03:15:923 Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061457
03:58:090 (238090|2) Remove this note.

[Amateur Drum]
00:50:256 (50256|5,50423|5) Move to 4th column.
03:13:256 (193256|1,193256|5) Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061466
03:14:756 (194756|5,194756|1) ^
03:15:923 (195923|5,195923|1) ^
ok ALL fix for basic and amateur drum / w8 for another diff xD
Topic Starter
indyinyou

victorica_db wrote:

1234567
basic drum
00:22:590 - add a note
01:48:090 (108090|4,108090|2) - maybe del one note?
01:50:590 - add a note
01:50:756 (110756|6,110756|4) - maybe del one

i think basic it not add more note because it easy diff

that's fine~
amateur drum
00:35:923 (35923|5) - move to 7 <<< fix
00:36:173 - add a note at 5
00:42:756 (42756|5,42756|6) - maybe one note is better
01:03:256 - add a note
01:03:590 - ^
01:04:256 - add a note at 2 <<< fix
01:04:590 - add one or two notes ?
01:05:611 - add a note
01:15:256 - ^
01:38:923 - ^
02:09:923 - ^

fix some
thx for mod
PROGUY
Alright, I'm back! Now to mod the last two charts. :)

[Pro Drum]
00:33:173 (33173|2,33256|4,33340|5,33423|4) Try something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1066755
00:33:923 (33923|1,34256|1) Move to 3rd column.
00:35:256 (35256|1,35590|1) ^
00:36:590 (36590|5,36923|5) Move to 5th column.
00:37:923 (37923|5,38256|5) ^
00:44:840 (44840|1) Move to 3rd column.
00:46:173 (46173|4) Move to 4th column.
00:47:506 (47506|2) ^
01:38:423 Try something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1066758
01:39:256 (99256|5,99590|5) Move to 5th column.
01:41:923 (101923|1,102256|1) Move to 3rd column.
01:43:590 (103590|1) Move to 5th column.
02:10:506 (130506|2) Move to 4th column.
03:03:506 (183506|1) Move to 3rd column.
03:36:423 (216423|5) Move to 3rd or 4th column.
03:58:756 (238756|1) Move to 1st column.

[17VA's Lv.34]
OD +1
00:52:423 Do this to sync with the song better (the last note can be a long note): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1066768
01:05:590 ...Dude, were you high when you made this? From this point onwards, it does not match the song at all (and it definitely ain't Xepher Lv148). You better do a proper remap on this if you want it ranked.
- Looks like the rest of it also needs a remap. This isn't an unofficial O2Jam server that includes Lv100+ charts. In fact, this isn't even O2Jam at all. This is literally unrankable because it doesn't fit the song and probably a huge majority of the players will get As and Bs on this. Sorry, but either you delete this crap or you remap it to a proper Insane.


Hopes this helps! Good luck! :)
(No need to give kudosu for rechecks)
Topic Starter
indyinyou

PROGUY wrote:

Alright, I'm back! Now to mod the last two charts. :)

[Pro Drum]
00:33:173 (33173|2,33256|4,33340|5,33423|4) Try something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1066755
00:33:923 (33923|1,34256|1) Move to 3rd column.
00:35:256 (35256|1,35590|1) ^
00:36:590 (36590|5,36923|5) Move to 5th column.
00:37:923 (37923|5,38256|5) ^
00:44:840 (44840|1) Move to 3rd column.
00:46:173 (46173|4) Move to 4th column.
00:47:506 (47506|2) ^
01:38:423 Try something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1066758
01:39:256 (99256|5,99590|5) Move to 5th column.
01:41:923 (101923|1,102256|1) Move to 3rd column.
01:43:590 (103590|1) Move to 5th column.
02:10:506 (130506|2) Move to 4th column.
03:03:506 (183506|1) Move to 3rd column.
03:36:423 (216423|5) Move to 3rd or 4th column.
03:58:756 (238756|1) Move to 1st column.

Hopes this helps! Good luck! :)
(No need to give kudosu for rechecks)
thx all fix for my diff ;)
17VA
http://puu.sh/53UsL.osu

updated

well... unrankable?

those parts contains Vocal + pretty much Guitar sound it's not a overmapping imo..
Topic Starter
indyinyou
update ~*
Evening
DO NOTE THAT THIS MOD IS GOING TO CONFLICT WITH A LOT OF MODS!

- Do not follow this mod entirely without thinking carefully!


Pattern Mod

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | Column Count

[General]

Perfect Timing - No problems

[Pro Drum]

- Try to keep the same Sampled notes in their respective bars in every 2 semibreves ( 8 White bars ) if you are going for realistic patterns
- What you did from 00:22:423 to 00:33:590 is an example of what I just said
- On average, most people have their stronger fingers on Columns 2, 3, 4, 5, 6
-- Try to map fast beats towards those Columns if you are going for the 'Fun' attribute
- You can trigger a fountain by quickly re triggering the Kiai Time at a very fast pace
-- I suggest doing it at 01:16:256 - 02:21:590 - 03:26:923 and other places you feel that it is appropriate to trigger it
-- OsuMania Kiai Time is barely noticeable, only the start of the Kiai Time (Fountain) can be clearly seen.
- Avoid using too many repeating patterns, maximum you should only repeat the pattern twice in 2 semibreves, then either reverse the pattern or create a new one, this will avoid it being too monotonous
- Trigger Column 4 only at very strong beats or bass
-- Almost everyone uses Spacebar, and it is in my opinion for the loudest sounds.

00:22:423 to 00:33:590 - 1st Pattern Section No problem
- Analysis not needed

00:33:590 to 00:42:923 - 2nd Pattern Section
- normal-hitfinish3.wav Columns are conflicting with normal-hitwhistle.wav
-- Separate those 2 samples into different columns
--- normal-hitwhistle.wav should take up Columns 2, 4 and 6 since the bass kick is strong, so therefore it should go with the strong fingers
---- normal-hitfinish3.wav occupied 2 and 6 at some sections, but normal-hitfinish3.wav should have the priority since there are common 3 1/4 beats in there and hitting Column 1, 2, 3 in a succession is easier.
--- Column 4 should always be triggered every semibreve - It makes the impact of starting a new/repetition semibreve pattern.

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Recommended:
From 00:33:590 to 00:36:256
Columns
1 normal-hitfinish3.wav
2 normal-hitfinish3.wav
3 normal-hitfinish3.wav
4 normal-hitwhistle.wav
5 normal-hitclap.wav
6 normal-hitwhistle.wav
7 normal-hitclap.wav

From 00:36:256 to 00:38:923
Reverse of ( 00:33:590 to 00:36:256 )

From 00:38:923 to 00:41:590
Columns
1 normal-hitfinish3.wav
2 normal-hitfinish3.wav
3 normal-hitfinish3.wav
4 normal-hitwhistle.wav
5 normal-hitwhistle.wav
6 normal-hitclap.wav
7 normal-hitclap.wav

From 00:41:590 to 00:42:923
It perfect except, 00:42:590 (42590|0,42590|2) - Swap them, their samples are switched

[ Amateur Drum ]

Same Pattern problem as Pro Drum

[ Basic Drum ]

Ditto

[17VA's Lv.34]

If I can't pass it, I won't be able to mod well, so this is excluded in the mod, besides, I'm not good at modding ET maps
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I guess you know what I meant by specific column samples?
You can continue editing the rest of the mapset
I'm quite busy this week so, I can't mod too much

If not, just reply and I'll edit more mods in - No need for extra kudosu
ExPew
mod by req...sry for late

Lines |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Basic Drum]

00:45:923 (45923|3,46256|6,46423|5,46590|4,46756|1,46756|3) - do same note with previous measure line and mirror it
00:56:923 (56923|3,57090|6,57256|5) - move left
00:58:423 (58423|1,58590|2) - move right
00:59:256 (59256|1) - move 4
00:59:756 (59756|3) - move 2
00:59:173 (59173|3) - should add a note? ( N-hitwhistle or D-hitfinish2 )
01:38:590 (98590|3) - move 5
01:46:923 (106923|3) - move 7
01:49:256 (109256|5) - move 5
01:56:590 (116590|3) - move 3
01:57:256 (117256|6,117590|4,117923|2) - move left
02:01:923 (121923|6,122256|5,122423|4,122590|2,122756|1,122756|5) - do same with previous measure line and mirror it
02:15:590 (135590|1) - move 1
02:19:923 (139923|5) - move 5
02:33:923 (153923|5) - move left
02:34:256 (154256|1) - move right
02:34:590 (154590|4) - move 7
02:38:923 (158923|3) - move 6
02:39:256 (159256|2,159590|4) - move left
02:40:256 (160256|1) - move 4
03:02:256 (182256|2,182590|4) - move right
03:06:256 (186256|2) - ^
03:06:590 (186590|4,186923|3) - move left
03:08:256 (188256|2) or 03:09:256 (189256|3) - move right
03:14:256 (194256|3) - ^
03:22:923 (202923|2) - move on 5
03:25:923 (205923|1) - move right
03:28:256 (208256|3) - move on 7
03:34:590 (214590|4) - move right
03:36:590 (216590|1,216590|5) - move 1 and 7 ( make it same with previous note drum)
03:36:923 - should here add custom hitsounds on 4 related with drumkit? (suggest add n-hitshistle, if feel better)
03:49:590 (229590|2) - move right

[Amateur Drum]
00:36:173 (36173|2) - move 6
00:36:256 (36256|3) - move 2
00:38:506 - add normal hitclap?
00:42:756 (42756|3) - move 5
00:43:256 (43256|4) - move left
00:44:506 (44506|1) - this kick shud be here? 00:44:423 -
00:49:090 (49090|5,49173|4) - move right
00:52:840 (52840|4) - move 4
00:57:256 (57256|2,57340|3,57423|4,57506|5) - flip horizontal
01:27:756 (87756|4,87840|2,87923|4,88006|1,88090|3,88173|5,88256|0,88256|6) - ^ flip
01:47:923 (107923|1,107923|5,108423|1) - move left
02:21:590 (141590|3) - move right
02:33:756 (153756|1,153923|5,154090|3,154256|2) - do same with this note 02:32:423 (152423|1,152590|4,152756|1,152923|4) - and mirror it
02:34:506 (154506|4,154590|6) - ^ same with 02:33:090 (153090|1,153173|2) -
03:26:923 (206923|3) - move left

[Pro Drum]

-this diff almost same with amateur, try make little harder? (drum mania can make self drum rhythm? )

00:37:090 (37090|6) - move 6
00:37:256 (37256|5) - move 4
00:37:423 (37423|4) - move 6
00:49:090 (49090|1) - move 1
00:53:423 (53423|1) - move 3
00:55:923 (55923|2) - move 2
02:21:506 (141506|5) - move 4
02:21:590 (141590|3) - move 6
02:42:923 (162923|3) - move 5
02:49:923 (169923|4) - move 3
02:53:090 (173090|1) - move 1

[17VA's Lv.34]

with honestly i say

- i check the unrank thing first

Purple : Highly Recommend to fix that

-volume minimum 30% ( below 30% will consider rankable if music tooo light and not so noisy )

00:18:840 - should be have a note here..

01:05:590 to 01:26:923 - nonsense,LN overnote/overmap.the rhythm not following well (actually its fun) but this cannot be ranked for official. try to remap it again use normal note for beat note ( use hold when it needed, drum hold are not recomend )
02:10:923 to 02:29:590 - ^ same too
02:44:256 - missing beat note..try to rebalance with other measure too
02:53:590 to 03:12:256 - boring pattern, (not actually fun tho) remap this, get more better quality notes
03:16:256 to 03:37:590 - another LN overmap too...

i will recheck this

@17VA try contact woc2006 this note possible/comfirm to rankable....i mod just look on quality type
Topic Starter
indyinyou

ExPew wrote:

mod by req...sry for late

Lines |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Basic Drum]

00:45:923 (45923|3,46256|6,46423|5,46590|4,46756|1,46756|3) - do same note with previous measure line and mirror it
00:56:923 (56923|3,57090|6,57256|5) - move left
00:58:423 (58423|1,58590|2) - move right
00:59:256 (59256|1) - move 4
00:59:756 (59756|3) - move 2
00:59:173 (59173|3) - should add a note? ( N-hitwhistle or D-hitfinish2 )
01:38:590 (98590|3) - move 5
01:46:923 (106923|3) - move 7
01:49:256 (109256|5) - move 5
01:56:590 (116590|3) - move 3
01:57:256 (117256|6,117590|4,117923|2) - move left
02:01:923 (121923|6,122256|5,122423|4,122590|2,122756|1,122756|5) - do same with previous measure line and mirror it
02:15:590 (135590|1) - move 1
02:19:923 (139923|5) - move 5
02:33:923 (153923|5) - move left
02:34:256 (154256|1) - move right
02:34:590 (154590|4) - move 7
02:38:923 (158923|3) - move 6
02:39:256 (159256|2,159590|4) - move left
02:40:256 (160256|1) - move 4
03:02:256 (182256|2,182590|4) - move right
03:06:256 (186256|2) - ^
03:06:590 (186590|4,186923|3) - move left
03:08:256 (188256|2) or 03:09:256 (189256|3) - move right
03:14:256 (194256|3) - ^
03:22:923 (202923|2) - move on 5
03:25:923 (205923|1) - move right
03:28:256 (208256|3) - move on 7
03:34:590 (214590|4) - move right
03:36:590 (216590|1,216590|5) - move 1 and 7 ( make it same with previous note drum)
03:36:923 - should here add custom hitsounds on 4 related with drumkit? (suggest add n-hitshistle, if feel better)
03:49:590 (229590|2) - move right

[Amateur Drum]
00:36:173 (36173|2) - move 6
00:36:256 (36256|3) - move 2
00:38:506 - add normal hitclap?
00:42:756 (42756|3) - move 5
00:43:256 (43256|4) - move left
00:44:506 (44506|1) - this kick shud be here? 00:44:423 -
00:49:090 (49090|5,49173|4) - move right
00:52:840 (52840|4) - move 4
00:57:256 (57256|2,57340|3,57423|4,57506|5) - flip horizontal
01:27:756 (87756|4,87840|2,87923|4,88006|1,88090|3,88173|5,88256|0,88256|6) - ^ flip
01:47:923 (107923|1,107923|5,108423|1) - move left
02:21:590 (141590|3) - move right
02:33:756 (153756|1,153923|5,154090|3,154256|2) - do same with this note 02:32:423 (152423|1,152590|4,152756|1,152923|4) - and mirror it
02:34:506 (154506|4,154590|6) - ^ same with 02:33:090 (153090|1,153173|2) -
03:26:923 (206923|3) - move left

[Pro Drum]

-this diff almost same with amateur, try make little harder? (drum mania can make self drum rhythm? )

00:37:090 (37090|6) - move 6
00:37:256 (37256|5) - move 4
00:37:423 (37423|4) - move 6
00:49:090 (49090|1) - move 1
00:53:423 (53423|1) - move 3
00:55:923 (55923|2) - move 2
02:21:506 (141506|5) - move 4
02:21:590 (141590|3) - move 6
02:42:923 (162923|3) - move 5
02:49:923 (169923|4) - move 3
02:53:090 (173090|1) - move 1
only [Amateur Drum] 00:38:506 i not add note / other are all fix ;) thx for mod
Topic Starter
indyinyou
remove GD by req form 17VA

back up http://puu.sh/5lMO4.osu
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