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HelloSCV
as M4M sorry for delay

Replay

00:17:254 (2) - how about reverse this? better for palying o.o
01:07:254 (1) - remove this whistle? since there is no special sound here
02:02:709 (7) - it will be beter if you reverse this slider
02:59:618 (5) - ^
03:00:709 (9,10) - i think a note after 1/2 slider is better so try reversing this rhythm
03:01:799 (3,4,5) - well this stack feels little bit boring for me, making a triangle or something else?

good luck~
Topic Starter
sjoy

HelloSCV wrote:

as M4M sorry for delay

Replay

00:17:254 (2) - how about reverse this? better for palying o.o done!
01:07:254 (1) - remove this whistle? since there is no special sound here done!
02:02:709 (7) - it will be beter if you reverse this slider done!
02:59:618 (5) - ^ done!
03:00:709 (9,10) - i think a note after 1/2 slider is better so try reversing this rhythm done!
03:01:799 (3,4,5) - well this stack feels little bit boring for me, making a triangle or something else? done!

good luck~
thanks for modding :)
smallboat
嗨 久等的MOD~ 抱歉這麼久


第一次看app lol

[General]

Nothing.

[Replay]


前3分
00:35:981 (2) - 滑條缺口對準 00:35:799 (1)
00:48:345 (4) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:49:072 (3) - 缺口對準 00:48:890 (2)
00:49:799 (6) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:52:709 (7) - 缺口對準 00:52:345 (6)
00:51:254 (5) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:53:436 (2) - 重疊在1的滑條頭?
00:54:163 (5) - 前方whistle
00:57:072 (5) - ^
00:59:981 (5) - ^
01:04:345 (5) - 缺口對準4
01:11:618 (4) - + w or f
01:12:890 (4) - 尾端 + w 感覺不錯?
01:14:527 (6) - + w
01:15:981 (7) - 前端 +w
01:11:981 (1) - 缺口對準5 記得01:12:345 (2) 跟 01:11:981 (1) 等距
01:17:436 (3) - 前端w
01:18:890 (5) - ^
01:20:345 (5) - ^
01:21:799 (6) - ^
01:23:254 (4) - ^
01:24:345 (3) - 尾端w
01:26:163 (5) - 前端w
01:27:618 (5) - ^
01:56:890 (6) - 感覺應該是跟前面連在一起 沒有間距 (還是我水平太低 接不太到..)
01:57:072 (1) - 前端應該能+f?
02:02:709 (7) - 如同 01:56:890 (6)
02:02:890 (1) - ^
02:04:890 (3,5) - 加大一點聲音 讓whistle聲音表現出來
02:06:345 (3,7) - ^
02:08:709 (1) - 前端f?
02:10:345 (2,3,4) - 聲音大些
02:11:799 (2,3,4) - ^
02:14:527 (1) - ^
02:15:981 (1,2) - w聲再大一點
02:17:436 (1,2) -
02:59:254 (4,5) - 感覺4到5有點扭 ctrl+g?
後3分
03:09:799 (1) - 前端f?
03:24:163 (7) - 跟後面的1再近一點?
03:27:254 (1) - 前端f
03:34:709 (2,4) - 聲音大點
03:50:527 (1) - 前端f?
04:07:799 (4) - +w
04:09:072 (4) - 前端w
04:11:981 (4) - ^
04:42:890 (6) - +f
04:48:709 (1) - +w
04:54:527 (1) - ^
04:59:436 (3) - 到螢幕外了?
05:00:345 (1) - 前端w
05:01:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -都+w 1+尾端 ?
05:06:163 (1) - 稍微彎點?
05:09:618 (3,4) - 3尾端 4前端 +clap
05:14:890 (1) - 前端+f
05:15:527 (4) - +w
05:15:618 (5) - 前端+clap
05:16:709 (2) - 跟前端的1有點扭 ctrl+g?
然後05:17:072 (3) - 疊在(2)?
05:19:072 (1) - 前端f
05:26:527 (1) - 前端f
05:28:163 (2,6) - +w 還不錯
05:38:163 (1) - 前端f
05:40:799 (7) - +clap
05:42:345 (8) - 前端clap
05:51:254 (1) - 前端f
05:51:981 (5) - +f
05:52:709 (1) - 前端f
05:58:163 (6) - 滑條缺口對準(5) 較美觀?
06:01:436 (1) - 前端f
06:13:799 (5) - 前端clap

呼~完成! 希望有些MOD能幫的到你 Good map . 祝Rank。 話說能mu ? 以後想跟你指點
Topic Starter
sjoy

smallboat wrote:

嗨 久等的MOD~ 抱歉這麼久


第一次看app lol

[General]

Nothing.

[Replay]


前3分
00:35:981 (2) - 滑條缺口對準 00:35:799 (1)
00:48:345 (4) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:49:072 (3) - 缺口對準 00:48:890 (2)
00:49:799 (6) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:52:709 (7) - 缺口對準 00:52:345 (6)
00:51:254 (5) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:53:436 (2) - 重疊在1的滑條頭?
00:54:163 (5) - 前方whistle
00:57:072 (5) - ^
00:59:981 (5) - ^
01:04:345 (5) - 缺口對準4
01:11:618 (4) - + w or f
01:12:890 (4) - 尾端 + w 感覺不錯?
01:14:527 (6) - + w
01:15:981 (7) - 前端 +w
01:11:981 (1) - 缺口對準5 記得01:12:345 (2) 跟 01:11:981 (1) 等距
01:17:436 (3) - 前端w
01:18:890 (5) - ^
01:20:345 (5) - ^
01:21:799 (6) - ^
01:23:254 (4) - ^
01:24:345 (3) - 尾端w
01:26:163 (5) - 前端w
01:27:618 (5) - ^
01:56:890 (6) - 感覺應該是跟前面連在一起 沒有間距 (還是我水平太低 接不太到..)
01:57:072 (1) - 前端應該能+f?
02:02:709 (7) - 如同 01:56:890 (6)
02:02:890 (1) - ^
02:04:890 (3,5) - 加大一點聲音 讓whistle聲音表現出來
02:06:345 (3,7) - ^
02:08:709 (1) - 前端f?
02:10:345 (2,3,4) - 聲音大些
02:11:799 (2,3,4) - ^
02:14:527 (1) - ^
02:15:981 (1,2) - w聲再大一點
02:17:436 (1,2) -
02:59:254 (4,5) - 感覺4到5有點扭 ctrl+g?
後3分
03:09:799 (1) - 前端f?
03:24:163 (7) - 跟後面的1再近一點?
03:27:254 (1) - 前端f
03:34:709 (2,4) - 聲音大點
03:50:527 (1) - 前端f?
04:07:799 (4) - +w
04:09:072 (4) - 前端w
04:11:981 (4) - ^
04:42:890 (6) - +f
04:48:709 (1) - +w
04:54:527 (1) - ^
04:59:436 (3) - 到螢幕外了?
05:00:345 (1) - 前端w
05:01:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -都+w 1+尾端 ?
05:06:163 (1) - 稍微彎點?
05:09:618 (3,4) - 3尾端 4前端 +clap
05:14:890 (1) - 前端+f
05:15:527 (4) - +w
05:15:618 (5) - 前端+clap
05:16:709 (2) - 跟前端的1有點扭 ctrl+g?
然後05:17:072 (3) - 疊在(2)?
05:19:072 (1) - 前端f
05:26:527 (1) - 前端f
05:28:163 (2,6) - +w 還不錯
05:38:163 (1) - 前端f
05:40:799 (7) - +clap
05:42:345 (8) - 前端clap
05:51:254 (1) - 前端f
05:51:981 (5) - +f
05:52:709 (1) - 前端f
05:58:163 (6) - 滑條缺口對準(5) 較美觀?
06:01:436 (1) - 前端f
06:13:799 (5) - 前端clap

呼~完成! 希望能幫的到你 Good map . 祝Rank。 話說能mu ? 以後想跟你指點
感谢你那么细心的MOD :)
关于音效 WIS那一段我是故意之下2节奏的 ;) 4不下
关于BLANKET 并不是越多越好 :P 有时候要看FLOW的
修复了一些
smallboat

sjoy wrote:

smallboat wrote:

嗨 久等的MOD~ 抱歉這麼久


第一次看app lol

[General]

Nothing.

[Replay]


前3分
00:35:981 (2) - 滑條缺口對準 00:35:799 (1)
00:48:345 (4) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:49:072 (3) - 缺口對準 00:48:890 (2)
00:49:799 (6) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:52:709 (7) - 缺口對準 00:52:345 (6)
00:51:254 (5) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:53:436 (2) - 重疊在1的滑條頭?
00:54:163 (5) - 前方whistle
00:57:072 (5) - ^
00:59:981 (5) - ^
01:04:345 (5) - 缺口對準4
01:11:618 (4) - + w or f
01:12:890 (4) - 尾端 + w 感覺不錯?
01:14:527 (6) - + w
01:15:981 (7) - 前端 +w
01:11:981 (1) - 缺口對準5 記得01:12:345 (2) 跟 01:11:981 (1) 等距
01:17:436 (3) - 前端w
01:18:890 (5) - ^
01:20:345 (5) - ^
01:21:799 (6) - ^
01:23:254 (4) - ^
01:24:345 (3) - 尾端w
01:26:163 (5) - 前端w
01:27:618 (5) - ^
01:56:890 (6) - 感覺應該是跟前面連在一起 沒有間距 (還是我水平太低 接不太到..)
01:57:072 (1) - 前端應該能+f?
02:02:709 (7) - 如同 01:56:890 (6)
02:02:890 (1) - ^
02:04:890 (3,5) - 加大一點聲音 讓whistle聲音表現出來
02:06:345 (3,7) - ^
02:08:709 (1) - 前端f?
02:10:345 (2,3,4) - 聲音大些
02:11:799 (2,3,4) - ^
02:14:527 (1) - ^
02:15:981 (1,2) - w聲再大一點
02:17:436 (1,2) -
02:59:254 (4,5) - 感覺4到5有點扭 ctrl+g?
後3分
03:09:799 (1) - 前端f?
03:24:163 (7) - 跟後面的1再近一點?
03:27:254 (1) - 前端f
03:34:709 (2,4) - 聲音大點
03:50:527 (1) - 前端f?
04:07:799 (4) - +w
04:09:072 (4) - 前端w
04:11:981 (4) - ^
04:42:890 (6) - +f
04:48:709 (1) - +w
04:54:527 (1) - ^
04:59:436 (3) - 到螢幕外了?
05:00:345 (1) - 前端w
05:01:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -都+w 1+尾端 ?
05:06:163 (1) - 稍微彎點?
05:09:618 (3,4) - 3尾端 4前端 +clap
05:14:890 (1) - 前端+f
05:15:527 (4) - +w
05:15:618 (5) - 前端+clap
05:16:709 (2) - 跟前端的1有點扭 ctrl+g?
然後05:17:072 (3) - 疊在(2)?
05:19:072 (1) - 前端f
05:26:527 (1) - 前端f
05:28:163 (2,6) - +w 還不錯
05:38:163 (1) - 前端f
05:40:799 (7) - +clap
05:42:345 (8) - 前端clap
05:51:254 (1) - 前端f
05:51:981 (5) - +f
05:52:709 (1) - 前端f
05:58:163 (6) - 滑條缺口對準(5) 較美觀?
06:01:436 (1) - 前端f
06:13:799 (5) - 前端clap

呼~完成! 希望能幫的到你 Good map . 祝Rank。 話說能mu ? 以後想跟你指點
感谢你那么细心的MOD :)
关于音效 WIS那一段我是故意之下2节奏的 ;) 4不下
关于BLANKET 并不是越多越好 :P 有时候要看FLOW的
修复了一些
不知道為什麼就很專心的看 呵呵 看你做得很好 所以就慢慢看下去了
目前自己做的insane都好poor 不知該怎辦 QQ群也努力跟人請教中 希望你有空也能指點我一下 :o
Garven
Did some quick IRC modding. I'll check up on the lyrics later if I get some time.

KSHR has graciously stepped up to help verify the lyrics are correct, so we'll wait on his ok.
Topic Starter
sjoy

Garven wrote:

Did some quick IRC modding. I'll check up on the lyrics later if I get some time.

KSHR has graciously stepped up to help verify the lyrics are correct, so we'll wait on his ok.
thank you very much :)
KSHR
gogo~ :D
Xinely
from m4m in my queue

Feel free to no kd my mod, this map already good and just opinion in here


  • General
    well because this is collab, make name mapper for collab in SB pls.. helpful to modder write who's part in their mod


  • Replay
    00:01:436 (3,4) - try use this rhythm http://puu.sh/4xkMG.jpg ? follow music properly imo
    00:06:527 (1) - 372,276? better for see based visual imo
    00:08:163 (1,2,3,4) - try make them like http://puu.sh/4xkWd.jpg ? placement better imo
    00:11:072 (4) - NC for consistency
    00:15:981 (2,3) - try this overlap http://puu.sh/4y9Af.jpg ?
    00:32:162 (5) - this placement make confuse imo, how about 152|248?
    00:35:254 (6) - NC because SV change
    00:44:344 (5) - add whistle in here because the music
    00:51:254 (5) - ctrl+G for better flow to play?
    01:25:254 (2) - better visual and more neat if you stacked with 01:24:163 (2) - ?
    01:45:072 (5) - try ctrl+G this?
    02:34:527 (7) - NC due SV change
    02:46:163 (7) - extend until 02:46:436 - ? sound better to me :3
    03:58:890 - add note for follow vocal?
    04:19:254 (4) - ctrl+G for make jumpy and fun to play?
    04:33:436 (4) - NC for anti jump

Touhou :3
Good Luck ~
Topic Starter
sjoy

Xinely wrote:

from m4m in my queue
Feel free to no kd my mod, this map already good and just opinion in here

  • General
    well because this is collab, make name mapper for collab in SB pls.. helpful to modder write who's part in their mod umm.We are the same group.We all decide not to do it ;)


  • Replay
    00:01:436 (3,4) - try use this rhythm http://puu.sh/4xkMG.jpg ? follow music properly imo done
    00:06:527 (1) - 372,276? better for see based visual imo done
    00:08:163 (1,2,3,4) - try make them like http://puu.sh/4xkWd.jpg ? placement better imo done
    00:11:072 (4) - NC for consistency done
    00:15:981 (2,3) - try this overlap http://puu.sh/4y9Af.jpg ? done
    00:32:162 (5) - this placement make confuse imo, how about 152|248? keep
    00:35:254 (6) - NC because SV change keep
    00:44:344 (5) - add whistle in here because the music done
    00:51:254 (5) - ctrl+G for better flow to play? done
    01:25:254 (2) - better visual and more neat if you stacked with 01:24:163 (2) - ? done
    01:45:072 (5) - try ctrl+G this? done
    02:34:527 (7) - NC due SV change keep
    02:46:163 (7) - extend until 02:46:436 - ? sound better to me :3 keep
    03:58:890 - add note for follow vocal? I'll think about it
    04:19:254 (4) - ctrl+G for make jumpy and fun to play?keep
    04:33:436 (4) - NC for anti jump

Touhou :3
Good Luck ~
thanks for modding :)
Garven
Bubble #1!
Topic Starter
sjoy

Garven wrote:

Bubble #1!
thanks :)
Scorpiour
just a warning:

different from hitsounds / mp3, You must get the permission from the skin-element maker BEFORE you use them in your mapset.
Oyatsu
PRo!! Just 1 ranked and 1 approved now? :o
Topic Starter
sjoy

Scorpiour wrote:

just a warning:

different from hitsounds / mp3, You must get the permission from the skin-element maker BEFORE you use them in your mapset.
thanks for warning.
I'll contact the skin-element maker .
S o a p
授权♥←这样可以了吧……
Koiyuki
gogogo~
gratz for bubbled!
NatsumeRin
Bubble #2
Satellite

KSHR wrote:

gogo~ :D

Chata! Nayuta! <3
Topic Starter
sjoy

NatsumeRin wrote:

Bubble #2
thanks :)
Scorpiour
a recheck & some more suggestions before it goes

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[Storyboard]
  1. I wondered if it is possible to add name labels for each part?
  2. 02:22:890 - move this pulse to 02:23:254 - ?
[Replay]
  1. 00:08:890 (5) - i'd like to split it into two notes due to the two group of guitar on 00:08:709 - & 00:09:072 -
  2. 00:28:981 (4) - the whistle here is heard weird a bit so suggest to remove it
  3. 00:44:344 (5) - add a clap to emphasize the drum?
  4. 01:02:163 (3,4,5) - tbh the flow here is odd...make it horizontal maybe better
  5. 01:07:618 (5) - +clap?
  6. 01:45:072 (5) - maybe..ctrl+g?
  7. 01:46:890 (1,2,3) - the reason of triplet here is?
  8. 01:48:345 (1,2,3) - ^
  9. 03:01:254 (1) - the spacing here is tricky a bit due to a similar placement at 02:51:527 (7) - where is 1/4
  10. 03:10:618 (4,5) - claps heard weird
  11. 03:16:345 (4,5,6) - still ... triplets start from white tick and also heard weird due to claps, and many similar following
That's all
Topic Starter
sjoy

Scorpiour wrote:

a recheck & some more suggestions before it goes

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[Storyboard]
  1. I wondered if it is possible to add name labels for each part? Is it necessary to add the name?Because it's an unanimous decision for us
  2. 02:22:890 - move this pulse to 02:23:254 - ? add a pattern on 02:22:890
[Replay]
  1. 00:08:890 (5) - i'd like to split it into two notes due to the two group of guitar on 00:08:709 - & 00:09:072 - fixed
  2. 00:28:981 (4) - the whistle here is heard weird a bit so suggest to remove it fixed
  3. 00:44:344 (5) - add a clap to emphasize the drum? fixed
  4. 01:02:163 (3,4,5) - tbh the flow here is odd...make it horizontal maybe better fixed
  5. 01:07:618 (5) - +clap? fixed
  6. 01:45:072 (5) - maybe..ctrl+g? fixed
  7. 01:46:890 (1,2,3) - the reasons of triplet here is?Because you mentioned it last time .I thinked about for a long time .In fact I really listen it as a triplet .Besides,in kiai time I think it needs a strong beat.So I choose the triplet .I'm sorry :( Forgive my caprice
  8. 01:48:345 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
  9. 03:01:254 (1) - the spacing here is tricky a bit due to a similar placement at 02:51:527 (7) - where is 1/4 fix
  10. 03:10:618 (4,5) - claps heard weird removed
  11. 03:16:345 (4,5,6) - still ... triplets start from white tick and also heard weird due to claps, and many similar followingchanged something
That's all
thanks for rechecking :) updated
Scorpiour
rechecked with mapper on irc, everything looks fine now

Approved~~!!
Koiyuki
gratz~
Topic Starter
sjoy
I'll remember what you said :idea:
Azure
Grats~~!!! 8-)
Oyatsu
Pro!!! Congratz!! :D
mintong89
好評恭喜~~
Lari
Congrats >w<
lkx_Shore
:o 你们都rank
RandF
Gratz!!!

Nice APP-map, SB, Skinning~ ;)
Satellite
Congratz!
-Neipezi
gratz approverd!!
gxytcgxytc
恭喜!
Fushimi Rio
太炫酷
jonathanlfj
gg
Natsu
congratz o3o/
pieguyn
gz :D
Kyouren
Gratz! for your first Approved!
pw384
sco和ntr的认证 不愧是神麻婆
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