as M4M sorry for delay
good luck~
Replay
00:17:254 (2) - how about reverse this? better for palying o.o
01:07:254 (1) - remove this whistle? since there is no special sound here
02:02:709 (7) - it will be beter if you reverse this slider
02:59:618 (5) - ^
03:00:709 (9,10) - i think a note after 1/2 slider is better so try reversing this rhythm
03:01:799 (3,4,5) - well this stack feels little bit boring for me, making a triangle or something else?
00:17:254 (2) - how about reverse this? better for palying o.o
01:07:254 (1) - remove this whistle? since there is no special sound here
02:02:709 (7) - it will be beter if you reverse this slider
02:59:618 (5) - ^
03:00:709 (9,10) - i think a note after 1/2 slider is better so try reversing this rhythm
03:01:799 (3,4,5) - well this stack feels little bit boring for me, making a triangle or something else?
good luck~