thanks for mod~O k a y u wrote:
Easy和Normal我改不出個什麼...我是從4星半開始玩的所以OrzHard00:01:627 (1) - 沒包好 fix
00:03:145 (1) - ^ fix
00:03:905 (2) - ^ 柑橘没什么问题..不要见blanket就书没包好啊喂OAO
00:06:183 (1) - ^ ^
00:08:842 (4) - 和3對稱 no
00:15:297 (3) - 沒包好 柑橘没什么问题
00:18:335 (6) - 和7對稱 fix
00:19:095 (8) - 改成3個1/2? fix
00:19:854 (2) - 沒包好 很难完全包的好/w\..
00:20:234 (3) - ^ 柑橘没什么问题
00:21:753 (8) - ^ fix
00:22:702 (1,2) - 合成一個滑條? fix
00:23:652 (5) - 沒包好..? fix, 包好后好像没有弧度惹orz
00:24:032 (6,7) - 我是覺得不要重疊比較好... ds..
00:25:171 (9,1) - ^ 不重叠就出界惹
00:31:247 (8) - 分成2個滑條...另外不要疊到7比較好? fix, 但是ds..QAQ
00:32:196 (1) - 和8分開一點 fix?
00:33:145 (4) - 沒包好 包的很好惹(
00:47:386 (2,3,4,5) - 沒包好 其实这个不是blanket..真的..
00:48:715 (5,6) - 我是覺得不要重疊比較好...Orz fix
00:50:994 (5) - 沒包好 fix? 这个要包好有难orz
00:52:513 (8) - 20|164? fix
00:54:981 (2,3) - 重疊起來? fix
00:55:551 (4,5) - 和2分開一點吧...另外2沒包到5 移了一下4, blanket柑橘没有什么问题
00:56:690 (2,3) - 和1的距離不一樣 fix
01:00:867 (7,9) - 不要重疊? fix
01:06:183 (4) - 沒包好 柑橘没什么问题._.
01:06:753 (5) - 160|180? fix
01:06:943 (6) - 沒包好 柑橘没什么问题
01:07:987 (8) - 移到前面藍線...和9分開 fix
01:13:778 (5) - 沒包好 fix? 这个好难包好a
01:14:538 (1,3) - 不要重疊吧 fix
01:19:095 (4) - 沒包好 柑橘没什么问题
01:20:424 (6,1) - 不要重疊? fix
01:22:892 (7) - 貌似沒包好...?我看不太出來Orz 应该没什么问题?
01:26:690 (2,3) - 有點怪...可我也改不出個什麼;w; fix
01:29:918 (2) - 380|132 fix
01:30:867 (5) - 沒包好 柑橘没什么问题
01:32:576 (4) - 468|184 fix
有些是建議啦...看你要不要採用Orz說實話我第一次MOD...Insane00:03:145 (1) - 沒包好 fix
00:06:943 (2) - 和1再分開一點? fix
00:09:221 (1) - 和5再分開一點? fix
00:13:399 (5,6,1) - 我是覺得不要重疊比較好啦Orz no
00:26:690 (3) - 沒包好 柑橘没什么问题..况且这个只要看起来差不多应该也没问题了._.
00:28:209 (4) - ^? 柑橘没什么问题
00:34:664 (4) - 包1? 有点难度..我还是把滑条弄成直的算惹
00:48:335 (5) - 沒包好 没什么问题吧..
00:51:753 (7) - 包後面的1? fix
01:00:108 (3) - 沒包好 没什么严重的问题所以我就懒弄惹..
01:05:424 (7) - ^ 柑橘没什么问题
01:11:121 (5,6,1) - 不要重疊? no
01:12:259 (3) - 沒包好 柑橘没什么问题
01:14:158 (8) - 240|176? fix
01:17:861 (4) - 包5? no
01:18:335 (5) - 包後面的1?(把1移過去;w; fix
01:20:044 (7) - 248|288? wpcap这跳也太大了吧..
01:22:513 (3) - 沒包好 柑橘没什么问题 话说我才注意到这里有blanket((
01:25:930 (4) - ^ 这个不是blanket啦..
01:25:930 (4,5) - 不要重疊吧... fix
01:26:975 (2) - 沒包好 应该没什么问题
01:30:108 (4) - 包3? fix
我是覺得滑條可以再整齊一點啦...;w;Okayu's Insanehttp://www.mediafire.com/download/82avcm4wg12rksy/Natsume%2520Chiaki%2520-%2520Hihana%2520Ochiba%2520%2528Short%2520Ver.%2529%2520%2528rinsukir%2529%2520%255BOkayu%2527s%2520Insane%255D.rar
我不知道為什麼網址這麼長orz...
另外祝Rank ;w;
thanks for mod, i will mod your map.sheela901 wrote:
M4M request
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General
The offset looks really late. 1520 should be it. Move all your timing points by -104ms, and so are your notes. i changed mp3 file....
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Easy
00:57:829 (2) - Move the second little square to x:208 y:229. no
01:02:386 (1) - Move it to one grip upper. fix
01:06:183 (2) - Do Ctrl+H, and Ctrl+J, and move it to x:232 y:328 for a kind of a flow. fix
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Normal
00:01:627 (1) - Do Ctrl+H, and move it to x:192 y:28. fix
00:03:145 (1) - Move the last little square to x:440 y:280. no
01:04:285 (3) - Move the red little square to x:389 y:334. fix
01:12:259 (2) - I like it more when it's move to x:167 y:194. fix
01:13:778 (4) - Move it to x:368 y:145, rotate by... with the selection centre by -36° no
-------------------
PM if you want to ask me a question about my suggestions or else, and if you want a recheck.
Good Luck.
now my trunNekoMod wrote:
General and Metadata
Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Easy] : megpoid gumi niconico douga niconicovideo vocaloid vocaloid2 o_k_a_y_u
- [Hard] : megpoid gumi niconico douga niconicovideo vocaloid vocaloid2 o_k_a_y_u
- [Insane] : megpoid gumi niconico douga niconicovideo vocaloid vocaloid2 o_k_a_y_u
- [Normal] : megpoid gumi niconico douga niconicovideo vocaloid vocaloid2 o_k_a_y_u
- [Okayu's Insane] : megpoid gumi niconico douga niconicovideo vocaloid vocaloid2
Tags
- Consider adding "Okayu" to all of your tags
15:50 OniJAM: 能irc么
15:50 OniJAM: 懒的写mod post了
15:50 *OniJAM is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/295048 Natsume Chiaki - Hihana Ochiba (Short Ver.) [Insane]]
15:51 rinsukir: 好..
15:51 OniJAM: 懒的写mod post是因为irc更容易说清楚
15:52 rinsukir: 嗯;w;
15:52 OniJAM: 问题嘛 不算多也不算少
15:54 OniJAM: 00:23:177 (4) - 我个人比较讨厌这种又不好看打着也不爽的滑条
15:55 OniJAM: 00:25:930 (1) - 这种中间一顿的滑条好像不能拉了
15:55 OniJAM: 我去查一下
15:55 OniJAM: 不过歌曲这里也没顿也不建议用
15:55 rinsukir: 00:23:177 (4) - 这个把第二个描点往下拉如何..
15:56 OniJAM: 你先改
15:56 OniJAM: 没图我也看不见
15:56 rinsukir: 00:25:930 (1) - fixed
15:56 OniJAM: 还有这个00:37:323 (2,3) -
15:56 OniJAM: 你如果把3的弯曲方向反一下倒也还算能flow
15:57 OniJAM: 现在这样什么都不好 形状也罢flow也罢
15:57 OniJAM: 毕竟在转盘之前也好改
15:57 OniJAM: 还是强烈建议改掉
15:57 rinsukir: 好 换成别的样式惹
15:58 OniJAM: 00:47:956 (4) - CTRL+G
15:58 OniJAM: flow不好
15:58 rinsukir: fixed
15:58 rinsukir: 00:23:177 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1136282 改成这样惹
15:58 OniJAM: 00:57:829 (6) - 首先这里可以NC
15:59 OniJAM: 然后 回转次数太多
15:59 OniJAM: 好难读
15:59 OniJAM: 可以拆成两个带两次回转的比较好
15:59 rinsukir: nc然后分开两个热
15:59 rinsukir: 惹*
16:00 OniJAM: 00:59:253 (8,1) - 这种也是容易断
16:00 OniJAM: 刚刚那个连打也是弯曲程度过大
16:00 OniJAM: 再这么一反向实在是不好打
16:00 OniJAM: flow有欠缺
16:00 rinsukir: 好..我重新摆一下
16:01 OniJAM: 01:13:778 (6,7,8) -
16:02 OniJAM: 这个我觉得我可能10次有9次会按687的顺序打
16:02 OniJAM: 甚至68了直接打到1去了
16:02 OniJAM: 还是flow问题
16:03 rinsukir: 如果把6和7调换一下呢0.0
16:03 OniJAM: 好一点
16:04 OniJAM: 就是坑HD
16:04 OniJAM: 还有就是读图的时候会以为是1/4间距就那么戳过去了
16:04 OniJAM: 01:20:899 (4) - 这个一转回来flow又不对了
16:04 OniJAM: 等于硬生生的被你停了下来
16:05 rinsukir: 好 改成弧形滑条惹
16:05 OniJAM: 01:21:373 (5,6,7,8) - 这个跳的也是不太舒服
16:05 OniJAM: 随机跳建议多看看Fycho的图
16:05 OniJAM: 当然也有其它跳的好的麻婆 也可以多看看
16:06 OniJAM: 这里01:21:563 (6,7) - 互换后面01:21:943 (8,1) - flow又太差
16:06 OniJAM: 建议重摆
16:06 rinsukir: 好..
16:07 OniJAM: 01:28:399 - 01:28:683 - 建议在01:28:494 (6,7) - 上分别叠一个note
16:07 OniJAM: 本来kiai还是节奏很快的 这里突然慢一下有点不舒服
16:08 OniJAM: 01:30:487 (5) - NC 标记减速
16:08 OniJAM: 00:25:171 (3,4,5,6) - 这也得一个滑条一个NC
16:09 OniJAM: 00:26:310 (2) - NC
16:09 rinsukir: 好 fixed
16:09 OniJAM: 01:22:892 (1,2,3,4) - NC*4
16:10 rinsukir: fixed
16:10 OniJAM: 01:30:487 (5,6) - NC*2
16:10 OniJAM: 我是觉得干脆不要减速
16:10 OniJAM: 本身意义就不是很大
16:11 OniJAM: 这样的拉音直接一个弯一点的滑条就可以表现了
16:11 rinsukir: 因为这里声音拖长了所以就..
16:11 OniJAM: 01:34:190 (4) - NC
16:11 OniJAM: 我明白你的想法
16:11 OniJAM: 00:36:468 (4) - ^
16:12 OniJAM: 声音拖长也有很多种表现方法
16:12 OniJAM: 比如减速 也不是不可以
16:12 rinsukir: 嗯..那个变速取消了..
16:13 OniJAM: 嗯
16:14 OniJAM: 01:35:044 (2,3) - 和前面一样
16:15 OniJAM: 不过不得不说节奏和音效做的不错
16:15 OniJAM: 可能缺的就是排版这一块
16:16 OniJAM: 不推荐使用奇形怪状的滑条
16:16 OniJAM: 除非是0108那种打得爽的
16:16 OniJAM: 毕竟人家也是高水平玩家 知道怎样做的爽
16:16 OniJAM: 然后就是flow
16:17 OniJAM: 太绕手的话容易出事
16:17 OniJAM: ranked难啊 1分多啊
16:18 OniJAM: Insane改好了来Hard
16:18 rinsukir: in改完了:3
16:18 *OniJAM is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/296274 Natsume Chiaki - Hihana Ochiba (Short Ver.) [Hard]]
16:19 OniJAM: 00:05:614 (3) - delete
16:19 rinsukir: fixed
16:19 OniJAM: 太难 而且背景没音
16:19 OniJAM: 00:11:880 (1) - NC move to 00:10:740 (6) -
16:19 OniJAM: 00:12:259 (3) - NC
16:20 OniJAM: 00:14:158 (2) - NC 因为变速了
16:20 rinsukir: 速度和前一个一样也要NC吗0.0
16:20 OniJAM: 1 2速度一样啊
16:20 OniJAM: 那不用
16:21 OniJAM: 我以为2降下来了
16:21 OniJAM: 3也不用NC
16:21 OniJAM: 因为只是circle
16:21 rinsukir: 嗯..
16:22 OniJAM: 00:25:551 (1) - NC move to 00:25:930 (2) -
16:23 rinsukir: fixed
16:23 OniJAM: 00:53:462 (2,3) - 又是一个不舒服的折返
16:23 OniJAM: 又是在五边形中
16:23 OniJAM: 凑合着先这样吧
16:24 OniJAM: 00:57:070 (4) - 最好拆开？
16:24 rinsukir: 那这个要改吗0.0
16:25 OniJAM: 前面一个算了
16:25 OniJAM: 后面一个自己看着办吧
16:25 OniJAM: 突然一个长滑条挺怪的
16:26 rinsukir: 后面的改完了
16:26 OniJAM: 明明可以放挺多东西的
16:26 OniJAM: 就这样
16:26 OniJAM: kiai还可以
16:26 OniJAM: Normal
16:26 OniJAM: HP OD+1
16:26 rinsukir: fixed
16:26 OniJAM: Hard还得等等
16:27 rinsukir: 啊..?
16:27 OniJAM: 重线了
16:27 OniJAM: 00:13:778 -
16:27 OniJAM: 00:13:779 -
16:27 OniJAM: 有两根绿线
16:27 OniJAM: 删掉后面那根
16:27 rinsukir: fixed..改kiai的时候忘记删了orz
16:28 OniJAM: 00:14:158 - 这根也多余
16:28 OniJAM: 明明没有改SV
16:28 OniJAM: 所以我刚刚以为你变速了
16:28 OniJAM: 00:26:310 - 同理这根也多余
16:28 rinsukir: fixed
16:29 OniJAM: kiai还有两根
16:29 OniJAM: 也是多余的
16:29 rinsukir: 删了
16:29 OniJAM: 01:35:804 - 同样多余
16:30 rinsukir: fixed
16:30 rinsukir: 我先去吃点东西哦..
16:35 rinsukir: 我回来惹 继续吧;w;
16:36 OniJAM: 00:57:164 - Normal 多余的线
16:36 *OniJAM is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/295852 Natsume Chiaki - Hihana Ochiba (Short Ver.) [Normal]]
16:39 OniJAM: 其它不打算说
16:39 OniJAM: Easy
16:39 OniJAM: 00:38:082 -
16:40 rinsukir: 诶?
16:40 OniJAM: 那个1毫秒闪光本身就不好
16:40 OniJAM: 更何况现在是转盘
16:40 OniJAM: Insane你用了毕竟是个note我就不说什么了
16:40 OniJAM: easy还是希望删掉
16:40 rinsukir: 嗯 ez和nm都删了
16:41 OniJAM: 嗯没了
16:41 OniJAM: ez nm多注意下排版还是比较重要
16:42 OniJAM: 不过没什么太不舒服的地方就算了
16:42 rinsukir: 嗯..
16:42 OniJAM: ez nm做好也难
16:42 OniJAM: 我反正也做不好
16:42 OniJAM: 大概就这样
16:42 OniJAM: hard insane need more work
16:42 OniJAM: 我po到论坛去
thanks for mod!Awaken wrote:
Sorry for late.
[General]Good Luck
- Insane没有勾宽屏 fix
- 我初看还以为没有音效...这音效也太小声了吧 很大声惹orz..
[Easy]- 00:11:500 (2) - 我比较倾向把这个滑条删掉 然后00:11:500 00:12:259加note fix
[Normal]- 01:13:019 (3,4) - 有点丑 fix
- 01:17:196 (1) - 可以删掉 还不如把2删掉
[Hard]- 00:29:728 (3,4) - 挨到 fix
- 01:05:044 (1,2) - ^ fix
- 其实吧 这hard的下节奏方式我不怎么喜欢 时紧时松的感觉
[Insane]- 00:02:766 (5) - 这样的滑条不好看啊.. fix
- 注意下排列 好 打算remap(
我是不是书过要做个GD 队 还要做的话enh任选
osu file format v12我終於會用了qwq
[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 71042
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1
[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
[Metadata]
Title:Hihana Ochiba (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:飛花落葉 (Short Ver.)
Artist:Natsume Chiaki
ArtistUnicode:なつめ千秋
Creator:rinsukir
Version:Okayu's Insane
Source:
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[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:7
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340,288,93905,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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Sharlo wrote:
yooooo 我来啦>3<[General]不好意思, 出于各种原因我拒绝做SB, 对不起 ;w; 唉
所有难度的Tags要统一
[Hard]
00:13:778 (1) - 没有加速的必要 fix
00:54:981 (2,3) - 唔...个人不喜欢Hard放2连, 只是个人.. fix
01:13:019 (5) - 如果前面那个slider要加速那这个也一起加速吧(我认为在这里加速用x1.25就够了没必要x1.5) 取消了全部加速
[Insane]
我觉得整个图对DS的把握都不太好... 我zz实在是不会作图orz
00:05:234 (3) - 一样的节奏上一个note是跳这一跳不跳, 感觉不好读, 不如 no
00:12:829 (3) - DS太近 加了nc 应该好读一点
00:10:740 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 我觉得这么摆似乎太鬼畜...这歌应该不至于这么鬼畜... fix
00:35:044 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 既然是两个不同人做的Insane难度那在stream上区分一下排列比较好 fix, 我不会摆stream所以才抄的a
最后祝早日rank>w<
leon1341414 wrote:
Hihi~ from pm req ~
不好意思拖了有點久[Insane][Hard]
- 00:12:829(1) - 設個NC幫助讀圖? fix
- 00:13:399(1) - ^ fix
- 00:27:449(3,4) - Slider可以包好一些 fix
- 00:31:911 - 也不跟歌詞做3連打嗎:O? 懒改((
- 01:01:627 - 建議複製01:00:867(3) - 這個Slider再翻轉180度設在這個位置 , 會對稱得比較整齊 fix
- 01:10:551(1) - 設個NC幫助讀圖? fix
- 01:11:120(1) - ^ fix
- 01:16:057(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這段的跳在(2)-(3)這段是比較大的 , 讓後面的跳感覺會有點縮起來的感覺 , 通常漸層性的加大或縮小跳的間距會比較有理 fix
嗯.....
類似這樣:collapsed text
做個參考
- 00:06:943(2,3,4,5,1) - 這段五角型好像可以調得標準些 fix
一些建議供參考 , 希望能夠幫上你
Good luck ~ !
Mei wrote:
噗我居然忘了，现在才想起来骚瑞ヾ(´･ω･｀)ﾉ
as your pm request
and mod are all suggestions , if you find something you think not stand for you just ignore
[Okayu's Insane]
uccu 写英文怀疑会被无视(([Insane]
* 00:23:177 (4,2) - 不要这个clap，你这个滑条在跟人声但2，4clap是更节奏的你这样下我有点混乱。后面也是不多说了 fix
* 00:56:975 (3) - 这个whistle也不要 fix
* 00:58:589 (1) - 这个finish不对但是后面倒是缺一个finish‘ 后面白线? 加了
* 01:05:234 (1) - nc fix
* 01:21:373 (5) - 这里也finish fix
* 01:22:892 (1) - 这里也finish，后面长滑条的finish我觉得可以删掉 fix, 好多finish lol
* 01:34:854 (1,2,3) - 这里所有的音效都删掉 fix
[hard]
* 00:09:221 (1,2) - 虽然你是更节奏来的而且ds也没问题，但我觉得·还是换下nc fix
* 00:16:627 (1,2) - 换nc fix
* 00:17:576 (4) - nc，其实这里可以做个跳或者折返 fix
* 00:18:335 (6) - 这里也是可以跳一下 fix
* 00:19:759 可以加个note hard不打算放连打
* 00:20:614 (4) - 这里的话我建议是吧后面的5删掉从这里直接一个长滑条过去 换成长滑条不好放a
* 00:30:487 (5,6) - 这里建议用滑条 fix
这么多mod低难度就不看了（懒_(:зゝ∠)_
总体来说的话，这图我感觉可以做成https://osu.ppy.sh/s/54289 ar9加小跳加中等距离ds的连打会比较爽
hard的话太严格按照ds做了，缺乏变化，我感觉是不太好，根据歌曲做出点跳啊会更好 唉 关了ds就不会作图惹
很用心的图｡･ω･ノ☆加油顺便求mucry你没mu我
mei快点mu我啦thanks for mod and star~kanon_sayuri wrote:
[Insane]
00:31:911 - 加个note不知道往哪放
00:32:671 - ^ ^
00:34:570 (3,4) - 建议合并成一个长滑条，毕竟这里有个长音 4那里有个重音哦..
01:09:791 - 和01:09:886 - 加note，转盘一结束加这个短滑条不太好接，加个三连比较舒服，顺便还有音 不是很想加((
01:30:392 - 加note不知道往哪放
[Hard]
00:15:108 (2) - 改成短滑条吧 不是很想放太多1/4
00:14:728 - 和00:16:247 - 这两个音是一样的，要么都加note，要么都去掉 fix
00:23:177 (2) - 改成短滑条00:23:082 - 开始 00:23:177 - 结束（很多类似的节奏都可以这么改，单纯的一个note不好点而且节奏会漏拍） fix
00:26:880 - 和00:28:399 - 同步 fix
00:28:968 (1) - 这个滑条下面压的音和00:29:728 (3,4) - 这两个滑条转接的时候的音是一样的，还是尽量保持同步，不然感觉会很突兀。可以考虑00:30:013 (4) - 这个滑条起始点放到00:30:108 - 在00:30:297 - 处结束 no
00:54:981 (2) - 去掉 fix
00:57:070 (4) - 起始点拉到00:56:975 - 要是改就不知道该往哪放惹orz
[Normal]
没发现问题
[Easy]
没发现问题
[General]
主要问题感觉还是Hard难度的节奏问题，前后经常不统一，同样类型的音，时而紧时而缓，感觉有点不太顺手。唉
insane的跳打起来稍微有点无力，可能是跳的距离和本身的滑条速度不太适合吧，感觉滑条速度快一点会更好（当然我只是说说= =，大概也是我个人的错觉啦。。不喜欢高sv(( 柑橘低sv大ds(?)也不错
顺便求个mu =w=已mu
thanks for mod and star~ZZHBOY wrote:
都38cp了啊....感觉跟我第一张图有点像... 哭哭哦[General][Okayu's Insane]
Normal ar4 Hard ar6的话spread好一点 因为I是ar8 normal改了 hard不是很想改成ar6..
[Easy]
easy我不会看所以随便扯两句
00:50:234 (1) - 没blanket好，调整一下 fix
00:53:272 - whistle可以去掉 两个声音一起违和 fix
01:08:462 (1,1) - 可以考虑blanket 懒包 就调了下位置
01:11:500 (1,2) - ^ fix?
01:35:804 (1) - 考虑尾消音 其他难度也是 fix
好多扭来扭去的滑条啊可能会被其他modder喷但我觉得还可以o.o 唉 扭来扭去的滑条早就被喷很多次惹 zzh泥真好(
[Normal]
00:06:183 (1) - 弧度小一点 没blanket好 fix
00:10:740 (1) - ^ 柑橘不是很严重 懒改( 顺便我包的时候都有对过啊qaq
你自己拿缩圈对一下其他的blanket适当改一下
00:35:044 (1) - 真的不好看 拉开点吧 重新拉成别的形状惹
01:32:766 (1) - ^ ^
00:54:791 (3,4) - 不好看flow也不好建议note顺着滑条的方向 改了滑条的方向
01:28:209 (4,5) - overlap 移开 fix
[Hard]
00:13:399 (3) - 弧度小一点 fix
01:05:424 (2) - ^后面不提了 fix
01:12:829 (2) - 放后面蓝线或者蓝线加note 不然跟的太奇怪 换成了短滑条
00:16:627 (2) - 另外前面这个也是 ^
01:24:981 (2) - ^ ^
[Insane]
00:24:411 - 多余绿线 fix
00:25:171 (1,1,1,1) - 四分之一的短滑条个人认为变ds完全没必要 懒改
01:29:538 (1) - 像这种连打中nv的可以考虑适当变一下ds fix 你看看你又说钱语
感觉有想法然而总感觉打起来不太舒服但我不会moorz
对于这个难度建议单独找几个有经验的mapper交流一下还有很大的提升空间 找谁好呢QAQ
ocao okayu你去哪了啊orz 不管了先改两个小问题
01:35:804 - 多余绿线 fix
00:08:652 (2) - 没stack好 fix
说实话我觉得rank难 特别是I还需要改 然后就是可以考虑让图更清爽一点（？
那就这样 加油._.
老前辈神麻婆wantuole wrote:
rinsukir神麻婆
wantuole wrote:
[easy]
00:03:145 (2,3) - 2后半弧度和3的前半弧度保持一个形状建议3copy2形状上下对称 fix
00:13:778 (1,3) - 开头扭下头不错 所以3也扭下 fix
00:20:614 (2) -fix,
不过锐角转折真的没问题吗
00:27:449 (3,1) - 相同弧度 复制粘贴 然后ctrl h j fix
00:57:829 (2) - 扭曲了点 弄其他造型 比如一个w 一个n形状 或者你把s形状弄圆润点 弄成w惹
01:08:462 (1) - ^弄圆润点 弄成弧形惹
01:17:576 (1,2) - 做一个对称更好 只复制1 ctrl+j惹o.o
[nor]
ok 感动
[hard]
00:06:943 (2) - 建议删了这个note 做一个压红梗 fix
01:05:044 (1,2,3) - 类似这些地方细节处理下 不是很圆润 具体自己弄太多 懒找修了一些自己觉得难看的话说圆润是啥啊
01:32:766 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 不错的梗
[in]
00:01:627 (1,2,3) -00:03:145 (1) - 用这个节奏才对 思考 你开25%听听..
00:14:538 (4,5,6,1) - 不好看 不好读的堆叠 建议6 1换个角度 弄个四方形 或者和00:16:057 (6,7,8,1) - 这里一样 完全堆叠狂抄karenbubf改成了完全堆叠
00:19:475 (7,8,1,2) - 一直线就好 3是nc fix
00:31:247 (5,1,2,3,4) - 缩手缩脚的来回跳 建议不要用 fix
00:51:373 (6,7,8,9,1) - 这串的弹性排列不错 可以多用 感动
00:57:829 (1,2,3) - 建议用两个1/4 3次回撞的slider fix
01:23:652 (1) - 第一个红点前的弧度不是很圆润 fix
no kd 差点手滑
615915887 wrote:
From my queue突然发现你的图有5个难度，违反了rules，sad
不过神麻婆的图摸不动，所以就看看前三个难度吧。 okayu神麻婆
[General]
加一个滑调静音进去不然怪难听的fix
[Easy]
00:12:259 (1,2) - 做成一个reverse？懒
00:54:032 (1) - 没blanket好 fix
01:08:462 (1) - 就不能扭得对称点crycry换成弧形惹
[normal]
00:10:740 (1) - 有点不好看，特别是00:10:361 (4) 还有一个note不觉得难看
00:12:259 (1,2,3) - 间距一样 fix
00:32:006 (1) - 这里怎么间距突然变成1.0了 fix, 失误
00:44:158 (1,1) - 太近惹 挺好啦(不
00:52:892 (3,1) - 个人觉得先note再滑调好一点 1和3对称嘛
01:06:943 (3) - 可以和1blanket一下有点难包 懒
[Hard]
00:03:145 (1) - 稍微包好一点 好像没什么问题
00:04:664 (1) - ^ fix
00:09:221 (5) - NC fix
00:09:601 (1) - 这个就不要惹 fix
00:16:437 (1) - 柑橘不stack好一些 fix
00:25:930 (1) - blanket fix
01:00:772 note hard别这么难吧..
01:01:532 note hard别这么难吧..
01:02:956 note重叠在01:03:335 (3) 上 fix 不过叠在4上惹
01:23:272 (9,1) - 间距小一点，因为相同间距都是1/2,而这里是1/4 fix
加油吧
[Insane]
基础间距有些小了，不过因为还有一个i，这个善良点问题不大。
00:04:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 可以拉开一点 还是算惹
00:14:918 (6) - 弄到左上角？ 啥?改成完全堆叠后忘记原来怎样的惹
00:19:475 (7,8,1,2) - 弄成一个combo不然不好看fix
00:25:930 (1) - 这个就不用提速了吧懒改啦
加油！
osu file format v12抱歉吶之前要模擬考所以消失了一陣子;w;
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Momochikun wrote:
Hey there ~ anyways.. really sorry for late
Here comes mod as requested on IMT
Pls keep in mind that i started this mod a few days ago.. my apologize if some issue
was doubledNever mind :3
[General]
- It would be nice if you can add silent sliderslide, since some sound on the
slowpart of this music seems too noisy for me.- Consider adding "Okayu" into your tags, since it make people easier
to search for the GD's name. I doubt if someone want to typing o_k_a_y_u into the
search bar, they will probably typing it okayu instead.- Ai Bat said there're Incosistent in Kiai times on your diffs. It's
probably fine if GD'ers have different Kiai times. But according to the ranking
criteria, All diffs that you owned on the mapset should have consistent kiai times.
Take a look at this :[Insane]
- 00:02:006 (3,4) - This 3/4 rhytm spacing quite uncommon and it
may cause a confuse to some players if you use it right om the first part of the song.
For this stuff, i'd really recommend you to use circle instead at 00:02:006 - and use
a 3/4 repeat slider or 3/4 slider + 1/2 slider from 00:02:196 - . I also got some
ideas of pattern that you can use, see if you like itthis is my style- 00:03:905 (2,3) - I'd suggest you to not skipping the instrument
here, this can be arranged better to follow the pitch at 00:04:000 - . Try to changing
00:03:905 (2) - into a note then start a 1/2 slider from 00:04:000 - should be a nicer
way to emphasizing it.- 00:04:285 (4) - Quite ugly shape for my taste, you can bend this slider's middle
point slightly a bit down to create better transition to the next note. Since this form
seems too curve that didn't make a steady flow- 00:11:500 (3) - This slider seems odd for me, the jump pattern suddenly comes to
awkward because the transition from (2) to (4) was broken of this weird's slider shape.
Shouldn't it be arranged on the opposite way ? Try bend the slider downwards that
pointing to the next slider like this to create neater pattern :- 00:12:449 (2,1) - Any reason for this anti-jump ? this can be weird to play since
the spacing between them isn't the same with 00:13:019 (2,1) - which clearly have same
pitch between them. Try to Ctrl + G 00:12:829 (1,2) - so the stop wouldn't be odd to
play. The pattern would be more comfortable imo- 00:15:677 (5) - Another harsh pattern here, this slider's end was shaped downward
when the next note was on the upside of them. This kind of pattern would ruins the flow
and quite uncomfortable to play. I'd suggest you to bend this slider like (4) but on
the mirrored way to create steadier transition. Like this- 00:19:664 (1,3) - Eh.. isn't the NC should be switched here ? the (3) were stanza
and this pattern wasn't triplet. Any other reason behind this ?- 00:19:854 (3) - Sounds boring for a clear 1/1 slider in a fun complex song like
this, how about replace this with a 1/2 slider with a triplet on the end to create it
more challanging ? with this rhytm you can also emphasize the vocal at 00:20:044 - and
00:20:139 - which might make more sense- 00:22:892 (3) - The guitar pitch seems started here, It would really fit if you can
add finish on the head of this slider. This can accompany the increase of the rhytm
imo. Try to add and listen it- 00:25:076 - Seems there're a vocal here, you can try to add circle here that stacked
with 00:25:171 (1) - 's sliders start to give more impact to the next slider stream
jump. As it's look boring if a stream jump doesn't started with a triplet or duplet.
Try it, the pattern would be more fun to play imo- 00:29:253 (4,5) - I'm not a fan on this kind of bear anti jump on Insane diff to be
honest. This spacing near the same with the 1/3 rhytm before when this was spaced 1/2.
It would be nice if you can do a proper anti jump or use a correct DS instead of this
pattern, the smooth movement would be ruin here and i don't think that's comfortable to
play- 00:35:424 (1,1) - The drum 1/4 rhytm on the music were still continued here, you can
add a whistle too to emphasize it. Since there'nt just clap that can be heared on the
music atm- 00:50:899 - There're high beat vocal here, so Consider adding circle here to keep
consistency with the vocal emphasize that you had done until now. Also you can make
slider note slider pattern like you used before, see what's my suggestion about pattern
:
- 00:51:563 (8) - Hm.. why there's a clap here ? i can't hear any double drum attached
on the music. Is this unecessary clap placed as for intentional reason ? if you just
missclicked it then pls remove it- 00:51:753 (9,1) - It would be more tidy if you can blanket them.. since current
pattern seems a bit messy for me due to the awkward jump from (8)- 00:52:987 (4,5,6) - Nah.. you missed a clap on them didn't you ? the music were
providing such a clearly similiar sound with the drum that you emphasized with clap
before. Consider adding it instead- 01:01:627 (3) - This would follow the vocal better if you shorten this into 3/4 and
add note at 01:02:006 - . Since this part wasn't exactly same at 01:00:867 (3) - when
the vocal was only landed on the high beat. So make it on the same rhytm either
symmetry would be a bit weird imo since the music was differentthis is my style- 01:02:956 (3) - Just some natural thing here, but you can put this a bit far from
the next object since the next beat is high vocal, it sounds weird to play if you give
a jump at (2) but you didn't do that here- 01:11:880 (3) - Again.. this kind of shape would suddenly ruins the flow because it
didn't good any transition that connected from the slight shape slider before and (4).
I'd really recommend you to bend the slider symmetry with (1) here to create neater
pattern. Current seems really odd to play.- 01:17:386 (1,3) - Same as 00:19:664 (1,3) -
- 01:23:652 (1) - Hm.. the first shape on this slider seems too edgy at the left side
that make bad form of this slider. Try arranging this slider a bit by moving the 2nd
anchor 1 - 2 grid to right, this can make it looks even prettier, look what i've do :3[Hard]
- 00:01:627 (1,2,3) - Same as insane before, you should know that
this rhytm will be so hard to read especially for novice players. But if you want to
keep it, it's clearly fine though i won't mention this anymore :3this is my style- 00:05:519 (2,3) - Pls consider again why do you want to stack this, 3/4 spacing with
the note stacked seems a bit hard to read imothis is my style- 00:07:038 - You should add circle here to keep consistency with the rhytm that you
use, since you always emphasizing the instrument on blue tick, it would ruin the
pattern if you skip this.- 00:10:740 (1) - Try CTRL G this slider, the transition would be a lot better imo.
Since i can see that the slider's shape was well designed for CTRL G, the current
pattern has weird flow to follow during gameplay.- 00:19:664 (1,2,1,3) - I didn't understand with your NC pattern here, why did you use
NC every one beat before downbeat ? is this intentional for a reset behind the downbeat
? this will keep confusing me since you can give more impact to the instrument if you
give the NC instead on the downbeat. i advise you to fix the combos intro into the
downbeat.- 00:25:551 (9,1) - The way yo arranged this pattern seems ugly for my taste. It'd
would be better if you can blanket it instead or using a normal DS.- 01:02:196 - Try adding a circle here ? it would keep the smooth play and keeping the
steady flow that you have during gameplay- 01:04:095 (6) - Changing this into 2 circle instead of kick would give smoother
transition and following the music better instead. Because the blue tick on the repeat
slider was landed on nothing that maybe can be weird to follow during gameplay.- 01:08:462 (6) - Consider not to stack with (4). It would be difficult for players to
read a stack between kickslider imo. I suggest you to moving somewhere else, create
triangle with (4) and (5) by moving it to similiar place with 196 220 would work nice
imo- 01:26:690 (3,4) - This rhytm can be arranged better to following the vocal, i
suggest you to moving (4) 1/4 beat early and shorten it into 3/4 slider. then you can
add note at 01:27:449 - to keep following the drum. Then it would look like this :[Normal]
- 00:01:627 (1,1) - It would be neater if you can copy one of them and make
these sliders on the same shape with horizontal flip.- 00:05:804 (2,1) - Intentional things.. but it would be a lot neater if you can
blanketing this instead.. current seems bear pattern to follow imo- 00:08:842 (2) - This pattern can be a lot improved imo, if you change this into a
note and then start a 1/1 slider to follow that hold instrument from 00:09:221 - would
look more sense. Since using repeat point for downbeat seems a bit weird to play imo- 00:16:437 - This part looks empty with the drum skipped, you can add circle here to
keep the steady flow and smooth transition between them- 00:37:323 (2) - A stack on end would be greatly frustating and hard to read
especially on normal diff. This note has been appeared when you still following the
path on slider (1). I suggest you to use normal spacing instead- 01:22:892 (4,1) - A 1/1 slider would be better instead to replace these note, since
you can keep emphasizing the vocal that make consistency with the previous 1/1 slider
that you used- 01:26:690 (1,2,3) - This whole part plays awkwardly especially the end of slider's
(2) that you used to start a vocal hold that must be better to be the start of slider,
try replacing this with 2 1/1 slider instead to follow the vocal properly.[Easy]
- 00:06:183 (4) - The slider's body is out of screen, and yeah
it's unrankable. you could move the middle point a bit up to avoid this.- 00:13:778 (1,3) - I would not recommend you to using this kind of slider on easier diff, since the red point may affect the slider's ball movement a bit that can cause newbies to confused. Better use a normal shaped slider instead
- 01:08:462 (1,1) - This flowing really weird during gameplay.. how about changing the 2nd (1) to a simple straight slider instead to create smoother transition to follow ?
- 01:11:120 (2,1) - I'd be better if you unstack them, sometimes stack with different combo colour could be unreadable for newbies.
Well, mainly i just tell you the major issues on Hard Normal and Easy, yep i didn't say anything minor except in Insane. i think you can clearly understand what did i mean to create nice rhytm and flow by looking at my mod on Insane. I'd hope you can do better work on your next maps, but it's not too bad for the beginning map.
Good Luck on the way ~
updated :3O k a y u wrote:
抱歉吶之前要模擬考所以消失了一陣子;w;
sure, if your map has good quality :3Kioshinxs wrote:
I can make a 2 diff in taiko? thanxs
thanks for mod!S o a p wrote:
[General]
clap我觉得不合曲。还有我看了一下你音量几乎都100%，是因为clap声太小了？干脆换掉
clap之前也找过 除了这个没有合适的qwq 其实我整体音效声音都太小( 求送个合适的clap阿
[Okayu's Insane]
00:07:702 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - 这边可以插绿线使声音从小变大 fix
[Insane]
00:07:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 插绿线声音从小变大 fix
00:20:614 (5) - 重音，这里跳比后面那个6跳好 fix
[Hard]
nothing to say
[Normal]
00:29:728 (2) - x:108 y:232 fix
00:44:158 (1) - 这里00:46:627 - 或者00:46:437 -结束 选择惹后者
01:08:462 (1) - 在上一个红线结束，或者去掉转盘改成滑条 改成滑条惹
[Easy]
nothing to say
然后美丽
grumd wrote:
If the official song title doesn't have "(Short Ver.)" in it, then you should not add it. Find a source that says that you need to use "Short Ver." or remove it.
thanks for mod, star and mutual~Oracle wrote:
Hi~
M4M From my queue
我不想把自己想法覆盖上去,都是suggestion,觉得不想用的可以全部ignore。但是红色字体是很严重的问题,建议改。
General
Song name"Hihana Ochiba (Short Ver.)"
不能出现short ver.这种括号备注。除非你找到了写有short ver.的曲源(专辑列表etc.) 感动 终于有人提出来惹 fixgrumd wrote:
If the official song title doesn't have "(Short Ver.)" in it, then you should not add it. Find a source that says that you need to use "Short Ver." or remove it.
音效,除了那个打拍子的鼓声以外其他custom音效我都没感觉出来。还以为没下...这曲用点soft whistle感觉很不错啊,现在的音效真的听不出。突然发现默认音效打击感真是感人
Easy
00:16:816 (1,2) - 这两个在一起实在是不好看.. 复制个对称的如何.. fix
00:33:525 (2,3) - Flow不好. 2把鼠标引向左边,然而3却在正下方,而且还是从右边滑入的。建议逆时针旋转一下3,并且把2尾巴稍微往下转一点。fix
00:37:323 (4) - empty 啥?
00:54:032 (1,2) - 做个blanket吧 咦 做惹阿
01:22:892 (4) - 不太好看..this is my zz style
好多扭曲的slider,虽然不是unrankable,但是美观上。。建议还是拉规则点,00:13:778 (1) - 这种就不要出现了 en就是要把滑条拉成各种造型嘛(喂 至于那个扭头的silder开头扭一下也不错嘛ww
Normal
00:03:145 (3) - NC,后面同样的节奏都NC了唉 我的失误
00:10:361 (5,1) - Blanket 好像包好惹..
00:12:259 (1,2,3) - 对Normal来说太难读了 间隔3/2。Distance上根本看不出。建议弄成slider 改成一个滑条一个单点
00:27:829 (4,5) - Flow难受,把5的reverse arrow往下转点fix
00:32:006 (1,2,3,4) - Normal下变spacing? 感觉没必要。变的值太小了,看起来像是放错spacing. 你书的对 我放错惹
00:35:044 (1) - 这个弧度做圆一点 你说哪个弧阿qwq
00:44:158 (1) - 在这里停00:46:816 - ,现在的地方4分音奏到一半，有点突兀。fix离后面的note这么近没问题妈
01:11:500 (1,3) - 头弄好看点 唉 我不会扭
01:23:652 (1,1) - ^而且为啥这里有NC了 上面没有，请统一 唉 我的失误
Hard
SV有点低 我zz按某教程帖标配来的
00:07:038 - 前面这个音都有下节奏,这里却空拍了,而且突然跟了另一个音.. 压红梗
00:19:664 (1) - 放在00:18:715 (2) - 这个滑条的尾部不好么 好好好
00:33:145 (4,5) - spacing不对, 1.4突然变成1.3了 fix
00:34:285 (2) - Ctrl+J再放回去. flows better fix
00:38:082 - 不在beat snap上的绿线,没记错的话是不允许的. 最少提前1/16 fix
00:48:715 (5,6) - 没叠好 6移到280,263 fix
00:59:918 (5,6) - spacing 我已经放弃全程ds惹..
有不少spacing不整齐的,不一一挑了
01:09:981 (1,2) - 弄到两个slider的头尾,4个圆都在同一直线上 啥?
01:16:816 (2,3,4,5) - flow 换成从2开始逆时针 小的不会
01:21:373 (5,6,7) - 这个好,点赞 thx :3
间距混乱._. 我已经放弃全程ds惹.-.
Insane
00:06:848 - 00:07:038 - 这两个拍都是有音的,要塞成stream.不然off 我跟的不是音乐a
00:03:905 (2,3,4) - 我建议你统一间距啊,突然1.6,有点莫名 这个跳是不是大了点
00:08:462 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - flow不好,两个选择。一个是00:08:842 (6,7) - Ctrl+G,另一个是00:09:221 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+J再放下来,并且稍微顺时针转一下。三角打死不改 后者有blanket懒转
00:09:981 (4,5,6,7,1) - 一样的问题,67对调 ^
00:12:829 (1,2) - Ctrl+G 感动 终于有人支持我原来的摆法
00:28:873 (2) - 往上移一点 no
后面大部分都是同类问题。基本上就是要多注意美观和flow。
另外,01:22:892 (1,1,1,1) - 多尴尬,你为何不用4个combo color呢? fix, 我色盲不会选颜色(
Okayu's Insane
改成Okayu's Extra吧,两个Insane的难度差太多。fix
这是最难的diff,但是OD是7,相对简单的Insane却是8。对调如何。还有这Insane的跳密度,可以考虑上AR9了。唉 有个人叫我改的ar8
这个难度相对来说是整个mapset里最美观整齐的。但是
整张图的思路就是每句歌词的后半段放跳。Insane难度，有跳当然爽。但是这里很多的跳都是没踩到音乐的点的,打起来没有实感,也没有hitsound的支持。爽不起来。而且大跳小跳好像完全看心情..感觉为放跳而放跳。我下音效很死板的阿 待我去改改音效
因为整张图好像都差不多..没啥可以说的
btw,
00:40:171 (2,1) - 这个spacing太..完全破坏slider跳的节奏 唉 我先帮改一下好了 把后面两组短滑条1和2都在时间轴上调换了位置
多注意flow,I难度后半部分如果还要提这类建议可以in-game找.. 歌很带感,感觉像同时在听railgun+future gazer.加油 (唉 我等了这么久终于有人说像railgun惹)
Star~Good luck!SPOILER_(:з」∠)_再也不写这么长的了,时间美丽
thanks for mod and star~Pandiar wrote:
Hi~ from my Q XD
sorry to late
[General]
uncheck widescreensup fix
[Normal]
00:23:652 (4) - may better flow fix
00:32:766 (2) - ^ fix
01:14:538 (1) - NC? fix
01:31:247 (3) - same as 00:23:652 (4) fix
[Hard]
00:44:158 ~ 00:46:437 - where is spinner? fix in another way
[Insane]
00:07:038 - add note? no
00:08:652 (5) - more jump? about x336 y240 no
00:44:158~00:46:816 - spinner time? fix
but NC is too random in Insane and Extra
maybe it is pointed out when BAT checked so take care
i think NC is fit in the white line or turn of the melody
but nice map ! shot star
good luck!
重复梗什么的你书的是哪个难度QwQNymph wrote:
基本上可以了 说一些可以提高的地方:
排列上的话 有不少细节可以提高 比方说一部分flow 还有一部分摆法可以更美观一些 顺便有一些梗略重复 基本是一眼就能看出来这个东西在来回用了好几次 虽然不是什么问题 但是有很多方法可以让类似的梗用起来不会给人一模一样的感觉
hitsound其实我个人不是特别喜欢这种爆发感不够的finish 因为不是很容易听出来...不过也不是啥问题
因为没有啥个别的问题 所以我就讲了点概念 如果能启发你一下的话你可以试着改改 如果你觉得不需要修改了的时候就告诉我一下