Jinxy wrote:

Hello, modding for Lions' modding queue here.

[General]
*Insane's countdown is enabled while every other difficulty isn't. Please standardize the countdown.
The Taiko difficulties have letterboxing disabled while Standard difficulties have them enabled. I'm not sure if they need to be standardized, but if they do, then please do so too.　fixed

[Normal]
00:42:485 (1) - This ends really weirdly, since there's no audible beat on 00:43:031 and you completely skip the voice in 00:42:849. I think you should just shorten this to 00:42:849. It sounds pretty good imo, transferring from (1,2) to (3,4). fixed
01:39:213 - I think you should add a note here to keep the beat steady. The other 2 kiais also have this part of the tune mapped (e.g. 00:41:031 - 00:52:667 - 01:50:849 - 01:50:849 - ), so standardizing it for the player would be better. okay
01:52:304 - Same reasoning as above. There's also a pretty audible sound here. okay
02:41:758 - Same reasoning as above. okay

[Hard]
Personally, I think AR7 would fit better so the increase is more linear [5>7>9]. 8 feels a little too fast for a Hard. okay
02:25:030 (2) - Object's end is unsnapped. should be fixed now

[Insane]
I don't see anything obviously off here, pretty nice job.

-Gamu- wrote:

Hi~ Sorry for the late.. ;w;
Mod request from Gamu & iyasine's queue [General/Mod/M4M/Guest] ✌('ω')✌

Red: Unrankable / You should fix absolutely.
Orange: Strong Suggestion / I think you should fix it.
Black: Suggestion
Blue: message

[General]

●Source: Remove "Prog-roid"
Prog-roid is the album name. Therefore, It is not possible to add to the source. Anime and game name...etc can be added to the source.
You can add Tags to instead of the source :3 please add! ah, Prog-roid ⇒ Prog-Roid This is correct. fixed

●Add soft-sliderslide and normal-sliderslide of silence.
It is using the sound of silence in most maps. Don't you try to add? :p If you want to use, then click on this decided not to, thanks anyway

●"Enable countdown" different. Should unify.
In this mapset, don't work. Therefore, please turn off~ fixed

[Collab Normal]

●AR-1. Since there is no Easy diff in this mapset, reduce for a beginner? Instead of reducing the AR, increase HP+1. By this, balance of HP3, CS3, AR4, OD4 will be very well. sure
●00:00:304 ~ 00:23:576 - hitsound (whistle) is few, so very lonely..;w; The suggestions to give a good atmosphere. I used all of your hit sound and combo suggestions
*00:00:304 (1) - Add whistle (start). have put out a very good sound.
*00:01:758 (3) - ^
*00:03:213 (1) - ^
*00:04:667 (2) - ^
*00:04:667 (2) - Remove whistle (end). I think don't need.
*00:06:122 (1) - Add whistle (start). The reason is the same as 00:00:304 (1)
*00:07:576 (3) - ^
*00:09:031 (1) - ^
*00:13:031 (2) - Remove whistle (end). The reason is the same as 00:04:667 (2)
*00:13:394 (3) - Add whistle (start). The reason is the same as 00:00:304 (1)
*00:14:849 (1) - ^
*00:16:304 (3) - ^
*00:17:758 (1) - ^
*00:19:213 (3) - ^
*00:20:667 (1) - ^[/color]
●00:30:485 (2) - Must be spacing about 0.80x. Unifying the spacing is important in the Easy diff and Normal diff. There are exceptions, but this is not the case. fixed
●00:31:576 (1) - ^ fixed
●00:33:940 (6) - Add new combo. keep the consistency of the new combo.
●00:35:940 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
●00:36:667 (3) - Add new combo. kiai time the start. And, keep the consistency of the new combo.
●00:37:394 (1) - Remove new combo. It applies when you added the new combo above.
●00:39:213 (1) - ^
●00:39:576 (2) - Add new combo. ^
●00:41:031 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
●00:47:213 (3) - Stack with the end of 00:45:394 (1). Appearance will be clean :3
●00:51:213 (1) - Add clap (end). I think you are forget.
●00:51:940 (2) - ^
●01:11:576~01:21:758 - hitsound is nothing.. Please add the hitsound something. Players will get bored..orz
For example:
*01:12:667 (2) - Add clap.
*01:14:122 (4) - ^
*01:15:940 (2) - ^ (end).
*01:17:394 (1) - ^ (end).
*01:19:213 (3) - ^ (start and end).
●01:30:485 (3) - Add clap (middle). I think you are forget.
●01:31:576 (4) - Must be spacing about 0.80x. The reasons is the same as 00:30:485 (2) fixed
●01:33:758 (2) - ^ fixed
●01:37:758 (1) - Add clap (end). I think you are forget.
●01:38:485 (2) - ^
●01:39:576 (3) - ^
●01:52:667 (1) - Must be spacing about 0.80x. The reasons is the same as 00:30:485 (2) fixed
●02:18:485 (1) - ^ fixed
●02:24:304~02:30:485 - hitsound is nothing.. Please add the hitsound something. Players will get bored..orz
For example:
*02:24:304 (1) - Add whistle.
*02:25:758 (1) - ^
*02:27:213 (3) - ^ (start).
*02:28:667 (1) - ^ (start).
●02:25:758 (1) - Remove new combo. keep the consistency of the new combo.
●02:27:213 (3) - Add new combo. ^
●02:28:667 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
●02:36:304 (2) - Must be spacing about 0.80x. The reasons is the same as 00:30:485 (2)fixed
●02:51:940 (1) - ^ fixed
●02:57:031 (4) - ^ fixed
●02:57:758 (1) - ^ fixed
●02:56:304 (3,4) - I don't really like the repeat slider like this in Normal diff / Easy diff. It appeared suddenly, beginners will confuse. It is fit for song, but the Suggestion of rhythm. I think this is good. fixed


●I think no problem of rhythm. But, there are some problems in hitsound and placement. By modifying the Mod above, will improve


[Hard]

●AR-1. It's the same as Jinxy. In a 3diff configuration of osu!, AR8 too early (Hard diff). I think so. fixed
●02:25:211 - Object's end is not snapped! fixed
●00:43:213 (3) - Ctrl+G. And, 00:43:940 (1) - Ctrl+G. good flow :3 Only the first one
●01:11:576~01:21:758 - hitsound is nothing.. Please add the hitsound something. Players will get bored..orz I think it's fine without
●01:25:394 (3) - Ctrl+G. And, 01:26:122 (1) - Ctrl+G. good flow :3 Only the first one

[Insane]

●good :3 will be no problem, maybe.


good luck~

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Insane]
Very nice diff. Maybe I'm just bad at standard modding, but this looks solid.

[Hard]
00:16:394 (1) - I don't see what this spinner's mapped to. It can stay, but I think it should be mapped. going to keep it as it is
- Speaking of spinners, 00:33:758 (1) isn't all close like the first one. Though I think this spinner belongs a tick later. nothing wrong with this one

I don't see much else off.
[Normal]
This looks fine to me. Seems it was completely cleaned by gamu.

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Hello there! winner from http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/153775 ~

General

1. Can you make a little sb for names in "Collab Normal"?
2. Metadata:
   Artist: スクール フード パニッシュメント (School Food Punishment)
   Source/Tag idk: プログロイド(Prog-Roid)
3. BG.jpg should be 1366x768, resize it ~ it won't affect in almost nothing in the img.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Everything else looks good.

Insane

1. Hitsounds are kinda weak, I think you can improve them (using the basic manner) adding claps like in 00:00:667 (2,5,2) - (etc etc) it has more sense.
2. 00:13:394 (1) - remove new combo no
3. 00:14:849 (4) -^ no
4. 00:24:304 (3) - stack the tail of the slider with 00:22:849 (4) - no
5. 00:39:940 (2) - same as above but stacks it with 00:39:213 (5) - no
6. 00:57:031 (1,2) - try this http://i.imgur.com/K02Z7DY.pngno
7. 01:25:758 (6) - this slider sounds a bit awkward here, try something like this http://i.imgur.com/4z3NYFE.png (don't follow that nc pattern :<) no
8. 01:41:758 (6) - stack with the head of 01:39:394 (2) - no
9. 01:55:576 (2) - make a perfect curve here no
10. 01:59:394 (1) - blanket okay
11. 02:00:304 (4) - stack with the tail of (2) no
12. 02:02:122 (6) - increase the distance, looks a bit weird... move it to x44 y:52 (using 1,4x DS) no
13. 02:06:849 (1,2,3) - try this http://i.imgur.com/5Qkp5wY.png Changes: (2) moved to x:160 y:152 | (3) made more curved and stacking the tail with 02:06:485 (6) - ) || when you do that I highly recommend you move 02:08:304 (2) - to another place far from (3) trying to don't touch it. no
14. 02:36:304 (3) - more curved please o3o~ no
15. 03:03:940 (2) - make this slider more kawaii~ like this o3o http://i.imgur.com/vBwG1wW.png okay
    
    My opinion about this diff: I think you have to improve esthetically your diff, there are some bad blankets but anyway your insane is pretty cool, the rhythm is fine and you made nice patterns.

Hard

1. AR7 looks awful, AR8 makes more readable the notes. no
2. HP+1 for consistence of the OD no
3. 00:04:576 (1) - the spinner is kinda sudden and also don't fit there. I think this fits
4. 00:08:304 (5) - bad blanket, make the curve more soft~ ok
5. 00:09:031 (1,2) - do something here like http://i.imgur.com/MvFxRxn.png ok
6. 00:37:758 (4) - stack it well with 00:36:667 (1) - ok
7. 00:38:122 (5) - same as above but with 00:36:667 (1) - ok
8. 00:39:213 (9) - (9) is touching (5) http://i.imgur.com/gGrR0kx.png making it awkward... x.x no
9. 00:51:940 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - which form are you trying to make here? I think if you gonna make a circle I suggest you use ctrl+shift+D. ok
10. 00:54:485 (2,4) - make the curve more soft ok
11. 01:56:485 (4) - make this slider more beautiful giving it more curve http://i.imgur.com/23YS5sB.png ;w;ok
12. 02:11:940 (1) - remove nc, nc is just for downbeats. no
13. 02:14:485 (1) - don't fit here fixed
14. 02:35:940 (1) - ugly slider fixed
    
    My opinion of this diff is like the same of Insane diff ^^

Normal

1. 00:29:394 (1) - more curve please~ ok
2. 00:36:667 (1,2,3,4) - do something like this http://i.imgur.com/bunA4Zl.png no
3. 00:48:304 (1,2,3,4) - same suggestion of above no
4. 00:50:485 (1) - nc here no
5. 00:51:940 (3) - (3) is touching 00:50:485 (1) - making it ugly xwx no
6. 01:11:576 (1) - awful fixed
7. 02:30:485 (1) - One turn is fine but 2 don't sounds good. http://i.imgur.com/IVaHLyf.png I think it sounds fine
8. 02:35:940 (1,2,3,4) - you know what I will say =w= ok
9. I don't suggest long spinners in Easy or Normal diffs.

That's all! If you don't understand something feel free to ask me in-game please! good luck on ranking :3~ never give you up!

Silynn wrote:

[Collab Normal]

01:29:031 (1,2,3) - for this part I like a pattern like this more http://puu.sh/58TS2.jpg Okay

[Hard]

sorry for late aaaa

it's a lot of changes, and most of them are nazi changes, so here is a .osu with all of my changes applied (can look at it and copy/paste if you like my changes, or whatever, you don't have to use this but I recommend you do because there's a lot of things changed that aren't mentioned here): http://puu.sh/5hvIc.zip

make sure to also look at the notes immediately after all of the major changes I mentioned, some of the have things slightly adjusted for flow or something

00:02:849 (4) - you could do blanketing on this a bit better (and adjust the note after) -- http://puu.sh/5g4XX.jpg Okay
00:04:576 (1) - I hate this spinner, it feels really disconnected from the music. just map to the vocals Okay
00:06:849 (4,5) - curve these sliders in a way that they blanket better -- http://puu.sh/5g51e.jpg Okay
00:12:667 (4,5,6,7) - made a suggestion for this, see attached .osu (the parts directly after are also slightly adjusted) it makes too big of a jump imo. I'm gonna keep it like it is
00:16:394 (1) - same as the other spinner, I don't really like it okay
00:20:667 (1) - might look nicer if it matched the previous slider - http://puu.sh/5g5gx.jpg okay
00:21:940 (1) - flip this around, remove NC -- http://puu.sh/5g5j7.jpg okay
00:22:304 (2) - NC okay
00:23:213 (6) - blanket this around 4 better okay
00:23:576 (1) - this could look prettier -- http://puu.sh/5g5oC.jpg okay
00:25:031 (5) - looks strange with the previous slider okay
00:25:394 (6,7) - better blanketing okay
00:29:394 (1,2,3) - I think these might flow nicer if they were inverse of each other -- http://puu.sh/5g5vn.jpg okay
00:33:576 (2) - move this down beneath the slider as a jump http://puu.sh/5g5J4.jpg no
00:35:940 (1) - stream pls okay
00:37:394 (3,4,5) - could make a nicer pattern - http://puu.sh/5g5PY.jpg okay
00:38:667 (6) - NC okay
00:41:031 (1) - should be concave up instead of down okay
00:42:849 (2) - NC okay
00:42:849 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this whole thing could use some better blanketing, just to look nicer~ made some adjustments so check them out and see how you like them okay
00:45:758 (3,4,5) - doesn't roll off the slider nicely -- http://puu.sh/5g5XC.jpg okay
00:47:213 (7) - NC okay
00:47:576 (1) - remove okay
00:47:576 (2) - stream pls >w< okay
00:49:031 (3) - curve other way 00:49:031 (3) -
00:50:122 (2) - make this a reverse slider and delete 3 -- http://puu.sh/5g62v.jpg no
00:52:485 (4) - delete note (and the pattern after it should be adjusted) okay
00:54:122 (1) - might be nice to stack this under the previous slider okay
00:54:485 (2) - NC okay
00:54:485 (1,3) - could use cuter curves -- http://puu.sh/5g68j.png okay
00:57:394 (3) - copy/paste 2 and ctrl+G ctrl+J to look nice~ and make 4 have a little better positioning okay

~break~

01:11:576 (1) - concave down? no
01:14:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - adjust spacing to be more even okay
01:22:667 (3,4,5) - ^ okay
01:23:213 (1) - this slider could be cuter, and maybe blanket 2 nicely okay
01:24:667 (1) - remove NC okay
01:25:031 (2) - NC okay
01:27:213 (6,1,2,3) - cuter spacing okay
01:33:213 (1) - remove NC okay
01:33:758 (2) - NC okay
01:33:758 (1,2) - make these a stream! ~if you do this, you'll probably need to rearrange your patterns a bit, I gave an example of how I would do it but how you decide to do it is up to you hmm ~if you don't add the stream, then it's fine as is, although I did make some NC changes so look at those and see if you want to apply them Going to keep it as it is
01:53:576 (5) - not cute positioning okay
02:09:031 (1) - you know how I feel about this slider but hey no
02:17:576 (2,3,4,5,1) - position better okay
02:35:213 (3) - stream ;w; okay
02:54:122 (4) - concave up okay



[Insane]

AR-1 I asked a lot of people and most said that ar 9 fits better. I personally think that ar 9 fits the jumps a lot better than ar 8

I hate kick sliders into streams ;_;

Kenterz9 wrote:

Hi, from my Modding Queue ~

[Normal Collab]
Nothing to say =3

[Hard]
00:19:940 (5,6,1,2) - You can try that : Did something else

SPOILER

00:29:394 (1,2) - Maybe you can place them at the same place as the previous 7Did something else
00:35:758 - Add a circle ? no
00:33:576 (2) - This circle is better at x : 416 and y : 172 okay
00:59:213 (1,2) - The distance snap is too short here okay
01:20:576 - Add a cirlce here and... no
01:20:940 (4) - ... Delete this circle no
01:41:758 (4) - Add Clap okay
02:18:485 (1) - Add a Finish on the reverse (It'll be easy to forget the clap at 02:19:213 when we play) no

[Insane]
00:19:031 (7) - Whistle ? (I think) okay
00:35:758 - Circle here ? no
01:20:576 - ^no

Thanks ~

CXu wrote:

Yo. Was a request from my queue from a century ago, and then milk poked me. Hi.
I'll just leave this here for now, since it seems like p3n already began on a mod.

[General]

1. Inconsistency in Kiai time. End the 2nd kiai in Hard at 01:58:122. okay

[Insane]

1. 00:00:304 - I understand the logic behind your whistles, but the whole part sounds really bland with almost no hitsounds. You followed the piano with whistles in Normal, and I think it'd fit here as well, so consider adding the whistles on the downbeats. I really think it sounds better the way it is
2. 00:34:122 (2) - Well, the extended slider does kinda follow the vocals, but since 00:32:304 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - nor 00:34:485 (3) - follows the vocal, you should shorten this to 00:34:304 - What p3n said
3. 00:34:485 (3) - Try using drumwhistles on all 3 beats of this slider, and drum claps on repeat and end. okay
4. 02:02:849 (2) - This reaaally should be a triple to follow that guitar.okay

Overall, the map lacks a bit of structure. The spacing is a bit all over the place at some points. Well, there's no problem actually playing the map or anything, and it's probably too tedious to fix anything regarding this (and it is understandable for a new mapper). Thought I'd still point it out though, for future reference. Just as an example, take 00:41:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - . There is a slight difference in spacing at 00:40:667 (4,1,2) - , but it's so small it doesn't really contribute to any "feeling" of different spacing, and it just makes the pattern look untidy. Then you have a jump from (2,3), but no jumps from (3,4) or (4,5), although the vocals are all mostly the same intensity. Of course, it also comes down to preference, and how you interpret the song, but it's just an example of what I mean by structure and the spacing.
The rhythm is cool though, and it is a good map overall, just maybe a bit "rough" at the edges, if you can say that
Anyhow, good job on your first(?) map!

[Hard]

1. 00:00:304 - Same as Insane. same as insane
2. 00:35:940 (1) - Add a new combo on this. okay
3. 00:39:031 (3,4) - That overlap with 00:38:122 (5) - fixed
4. 01:58:213 (1) - End at 02:01:031 - to follow vocals. okay
5. 02:11:940 (1) - Remove NC, add NC at 02:13:758 (3) - , and remove from 02:14:485 (1) - okay
6. 03:03:213 (1) - Add a new combo on this. okay[/list
   
   [Collab Normal]
   
   1. OD -1? Your OD is one less than your AR in both Hard and Insane. okay
   2. 00:45:394 (1,2,3) - That (2) is pretty hard to hit correctly. It's hard for new players to read the different spacing correctly, especially when the difference isn't huge. A possibility is to convert it to a repeatslider, like this: http://puu.sh/5q6Yf.jpg, or whatever else you can come up with. okay
   3. 01:23:394 (1) and 01:27:031 (1) - Ehh, These spinners feel kinda lazy, as if you placed them there just for the sake of it. I can't really see what they're supposed to follow in the song. Consider removing both of them and just map this part. The second spinner is also pretty short for a Normal, considering there being a spinner just before it, and 1/2 after a slider. okay
   4. 01:34:485 (4) - Can you avoid the overlap with (1)? It just slightly bothers me. Something like this will do https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1119535 okay
   5. 01:52:304 (1) - Finish. okay
   6. 02:08:394 - Why the delayed break? It doesn't really do anything, so remove it. okay
   7. 02:18:485 (1) - Remove repeat and add a note at 02:19:394 - okay
   8. 02:19:940 (1,1) - Two spinners after each other in the easiest diff is generally a bad idea. Consider removing the last spinner, and add a note at 02:22:849 - with soft whistle. okay
   9. 02:24:304 (1) - Add a NC on this note. okay
   10. 02:48:304 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The difficulty here is too high. Even though it is a Normal, remember that it's also the easiest difficulty in your mapset. For most of the map, you only use 1/2 a few times, so having a bunch of them right after each other in one part of the song is inconsistent as well.okay

Popping for now, mostly due to that 1/2 part in Normal, and the spinners that well, just felt lazy. Call me back when you're done.
Edit: I forgot to actually pop.

p3n wrote:

CXu already mentioned most of what I had prepared. A few additions in general and for your beginner's map:


[General]
Unicode Artist: スクール フード パニッシュメント okay



[Collab Normal]
Since there is no sub-3-star map in this set you will have to make some minor changes for me to accept this as your Beginner's Diff. PERSONALLY I have no problem with parts like this: 02:48:304 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - in a 3+ star map and it could be rankable if you can get rid of...

00:35:940 (2,3,1) - stacks. They are one of things beginners tend to have a very hard time with (reading ACs). They still have to learn the concept of time -> distance and stacking notes doesn't really help here. I always highly recommend to NOT use stacked notes in the easiest difficulty of a mapset. You can just move the notes with appropriate spacing to get rid of the stack: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1119613 okay
01:31:576 (4,1) - another stack, can be easily fixed by rotating the previous slider and re-arranging the circles slightly: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1119335 okay
01:46:122 (6,1) - another stack no
01:54:849 (5,1) - another stackno
02:08:394 - why the break screenfade on a blue tick here? Either remove it or if you really want to you could set it to the downbeat... fixed
02:42:122 (2,3) - another stack no



[Insane]
CXu already covered the 1 point I had for this map but I have to disagree on another thing here:

00:34:122 (2) - this slider actually follows the drums in the the song. You don't have to change it. ok

Otherwise, the jump patterns here are well crafted and most are fun to play BUT you need to learn WHEN to place them correctly to match the song. Some of them seem to be placed randomly or just because the pattern looks nice. Every jump should reflect a part of the song that matches "increased epicness" of vocals, melody, rhythm or otherwise a change of pitch, new phrase or chord or similar things. You will eventually get a feeling for this. For now I think this is "okay" and not an unrankable issue for a first ranked mapping attempt.