This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 23 november 2013 at 00:05:21

Artist: School Food Punishment
Title: in bloom
Tags: sfp Liiraye reyshel Prog-Roid
BPM: 165
Filesize: 5412kb
Play Time: 03:14
Difficulties Available:

1. Collab Normal (3,31 stars, 221 notes)
2. Hard (4,95 stars, 486 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 684 notes)
4. ReySHeL's Muzu (4,71 stars, 768 notes)
5. ReySHeL's Oni (4,83 stars, 1022 notes)

Download: School Food Punishment - in bloom
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal is collab with Liiraye

hi~
offset 300 is better >w<
good luck!

ReySHeL wrote:

hi~
offset 300 is better >w<
good luck!

Thanks

1. disable countdown
2. 02:19:940 (1) -
fix that to 1/3 snap
adjust slider length

listless wrote:

1. disable countdown
2. 02:19:940 (1) -
fix that to 1/3 snap
adjust slider length

fixed

Hallo!

Here is my mod

General : Nothing

Insane

00:29:350 (1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/4eETt.jpg - just rotate 90° clockwise twice and reverse the section after that place it on the beginning of 00:28:623
00:30:078 (3,4) - Try this ? http://puu.sh/4eF1X.jpg
00:35:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sounds better if you could add claps on the white and red lines
00:37:532 (3) - put this note at x444 y96
00:37:714 (4) - put this x360 y320 and the tail at x264 y348 as same form
00:42:078 (5,1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/4eELw.jpg sounds alot better then having constant 1/4
00:54:078 (1) - pull the red box alitle upwards ? http://puu.sh/4eFAG.jpg

01:11:576 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - these parts feels alitle akward. try giving them more jump feeling by just give them more distance to eachother ex: http://puu.sh/4f5Y6.jpg

01:12:077 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - i really liked the streams but i wasn't a big fan at the last note. try this ? http://puu.sh/4eGlr.jpg
01:31:940 (1,2,3) - Finish on the beginning ( feels more dynamic )
01:40:987 (3,4) - same as with ( 00:42:078 (5,1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/4eELw.jpg sounds alot better then having constant 1/4 )
01:43:576 (1) - midle at x224 y288. End tail at x176 y304
01:51:940 (5,1,2) - you should copy the sliders at 00:53:758 (5,1) -
02:02:304 (1,2) - add a note betwen those two ?
02:13:394 (4,5) - add finish on both ( you can hear the cymbal sound on that part )
02:24:304 - lower the volume to 20% ?
02:30:122 (1) - volume at 30%
02:30:849 (1) - volume at 35%
02:31:576 (1) - volume at 45%
02:32:304 (1) - volume at 55%
02:33:031 (1) - volume at 70%
03:14:485 - volume at 5%

hmm I noticed that you don't have clap sounds added on most of you streams. I suggest you do add some clap sounds to them, and if you do, add them on white and reds ( or you could ignore it all most of these are sugestions anyways )

Hard

00:04:576 (1) - step i down to the white line.
00:25:394 (5,6) - the second slider looks weird. try this ? http://puu.sh/4f7ho.jpg
00:26:485 (8) - make this one more rounder ?
00:33:576 - put a circle here. And push the spinner 1 notch
00:35:213 - volume 5%
01:14:849 (6) - i don't think it sounds good there. try to put circle there insted http://puu.sh/4f7Fn.jpg
02:18:485 (5) - make it like this ? http://puu.sh/4f7Qe.jpg
02:42:485 (3) - make it like this ? http://puu.sh/4f7WV.jpg
02:43:394 (6) - copy paste (3) and reverse section

Hope it helped!

Good luck with your map~

I think i've done a ton of misspellings.. w/e

Gyuunyu wrote:

Hallo!

Here is my mod

General : Nothing

Insane

00:29:350 (1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/4eETt.jpg - just rotate 90° clockwise twice and reverse the section after that place it on the beginning of 00:28:623 nah
00:30:078 (3,4) - Try this ? http://puu.sh/4eF1X.jpg no
00:35:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sounds better if you could add claps on the white and red lines added claps on (1,2,3,4) instead.
00:37:532 (3) - put this note at x444 y96 okay
00:37:714 (4) - put this x360 y320 and the tail at x264 y348 as same form no
00:42:078 (5,1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/4eELw.jpg sounds alot better then having constant 1/4 no
00:54:078 (1) - pull the red box alitle upwards ? http://puu.sh/4eFAG.jpg okay

01:11:576 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - these parts feels alitle akward. try giving them more jump feeling by just give them more distance to eachother ex: http://puu.sh/4f5Y6.jpg I slowed down the velocity causing them to be closer together. I really think this part is better without jumps.

01:12:077 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - i really liked the streams but i wasn't a big fan at the last note. try this ? http://puu.sh/4eGlr.jpg no
01:31:940 (1,2,3) - Finish on the beginning ( feels more dynamic ) They already have finishes. (2) doesn't need one because I'm following what the drummer did.
01:40:987 (3,4) - same as with ( 00:42:078 (5,1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/4eELw.jpg sounds alot better then having constant 1/4 ) no
01:43:576 (1) - midle at x224 y288. End tail at x176 y304 okay
01:51:940 (5,1,2) - you should copy the sliders at 00:53:758 (5,1) - I'm going for a different rythm on this part. Repeating it would be boring.
02:02:304 (1,2) - add a note betwen those two ? no
02:13:394 (4,5) - add finish on both ( you can hear the cymbal sound on that part ) No, only (3) has the proper cymbal. (4 and 5) are being covered by that.
02:24:304 - lower the volume to 20% ? okay
02:30:122 (1) - volume at 30% okay
02:30:849 (1) - volume at 35% okay
02:31:576 (1) - volume at 45% okay
02:32:304 (1) - volume at 55% okay
02:33:031 (1) - volume at 70% okay
03:14:485 - volume at 5% no

hmm I noticed that you don't have clap sounds added on most of you streams. I suggest you do add some clap sounds to them, and if you do, add them on white and reds ( or you could ignore it all most of these are sugestions anyways ) I'll do what I can.

Hard

00:04:576 (1) - step i down to the white line. okay
00:25:394 (5,6) - the second slider looks weird. try this ? http://puu.sh/4f7ho.jpg okay
00:26:485 (8) - make this one more rounder ? okay
00:33:576 - put a circle here. And push the spinner 1 notch okay
00:35:213 - volume 5% no
01:14:849 (6) - i don't think it sounds good there. try to put circle there insted http://puu.sh/4f7Fn.jpg okay
02:18:485 (5) - make it like this ? http://puu.sh/4f7Qe.jpg okay
02:42:485 (3) - make it like this ? http://puu.sh/4f7WV.jpg okay
02:43:394 (6) - copy paste (3) and reverse section okay

Hope it helped!

Good luck with your map~

I think i've done a ton of misspellings.. w/e

thanks!

hello, heres my modding

General:
Sound Quality sounds quite off, perhaps 128 kb? could you get one with better quality?

Hard:

01:16:849 (6) - confusing part not sure what can be done
01:21:031 (5) - please extend slider doesn't match
01:31:213 (1) - doesn't match sound, should be back n forth slider instead
01:37:031 (8) - extend for greater rythm in song i guess

01:53:576 (5,6) - feels quite empty here, maybe you should put something inbetween to keep rythm?
01:56:667 (4) - move back 1/4 to match ZJUUUUUUUN sound sond makes.
02:30:122 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - add a stream please, this looks dull and very confusing with hidden or just on nervous run.

Narunya wrote:

hello, heres my modding

General:
Sound Quality sounds quite off, perhaps 128 kb? could you get one with better quality?

Hard:

01:16:849 (6) - confusing part not sure what can be done okay
01:21:031 (5) - please extend slider doesn't match okay
01:31:213 (1) - doesn't match sound, should be back n forth slider instead I think it's good the way it is
01:37:031 (8) - extend for greater rythm in song i guess no

01:53:576 (5,6) - feels quite empty here, maybe you should put something inbetween to keep rythm? no
01:56:667 (4) - move back 1/4 to match ZJUUUUUUUN sound sond makes. okay
02:30:122 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - add a stream please, this looks dull and very confusing with hidden or just on nervous run.no

thanks!

Collab Normal:
02:19:883 (1) - I would remove the second spinner and extend the first one to where the second one ended. Personally I think there should be only one spinner because having two back to back has always aggravated me.

Other than that good map! I enjoyed it overall

[General]
The offset is off by about 35ms. Change offset to 264. Change it before using this mod since the time links are based of offset 264.

[Collab Normal]

00:47:576 (3,1,2,3,4) - This part feels a little bit awkward. I thought something like this felt better.



01:35:900 (3) - I really don't think you should have sliders like these that start on red lines in normals. It would feel and play much better if you placed a note where the slider starts, and then shortened down the slider to the next white downbeat after instead.



01:58:264 (1) - You should extend this spinner to here 02:00:991


[Hard]

00:08:809 - Add a note?
00:15:173 (4) - I'd suggest using 1.4x spacing on this one and then turning it about 5 degrees to make it look more pretty.
00:33:536 (3) - Maybe move this one to around x:428 y:348
00:35:718 - Maybe add a note here? Since she starts singing before the drum roll, it might confuse the player.
00:48:809 (2,3) - I'd either increase the spacing a little bit, or move them around to keep the previous slider from overlapping these two.
00:56:627 (4,1,2) - These three does not have the same spacing between each other.
01:33:536 - The stream - or I guess return sliders in this case - should start here.
01:39:900 (4,5) - I'd turn these around about -15 degrees and then move number 5 a little bit to align number 5 with the first note of the triangle that comes after.
01:43:536 (1) - Again, I'd turn this one as well to align it with the next note.
01:48:991 (4) - This one looks a bit weird. Maybe copy the slider before it and have that go down instead?
01:52:991 (3) - I'd turn this -5 degrees to align it more to number 4.
01:58:082 (2) - I think you should decrease spacing to 1.0x on this one.
02:26:082 (1) - -5 degrees again to align with next note?
02:40:991 (5) - Turn ths one about -15 degrees to make this pattern more circle like?

I don't know if the diff is done, but if it is, you should map it all the way until the end like the insane. :>

[Insane]

00:00:264 - 50% audio?
00:11:900 - 65% audio?
00:26:445 (1) - Finish?
00:38:082 (1) - Finish?
00:49:718 (1) - Finish?
01:25:718 (6) - Finish?
01:36:264 (1) - Finish?
01:47:900 (1) - Finish?
I'll admit I might enjoy finish too much for my own good. My suggestions will probably make it sound too much.

00:35:718 - Same as Hard.
00:38:627 (4) - When mapping sliders to the beat of the song (as in, not to the lyrics or any other funny or weird noises), they usually feel and play much better if they start on white lines. If you change one you should probably change all the other ones as well.
01:25:718 (6) - I'd suggest shortening down this slider and adding a note on the white downbeat. When I tried this map I had the urge to click something there. If you change one you should probably change all the other ones as well.

I don't know, there wasn't much I could say about the insane. It's very well spread out and looks nice.

There you have your mod, woohoo! \:>/

theregkid wrote:

Collab Normal:
02:19:883 (1) - I would remove the second spinner and extend the first one to where the second one ended. Personally I think there should be only one spinner because having two back to back has always aggravated me.

Other than that good map! I enjoyed it overall

I think it's fine the way it is.

Thanks

Xytox wrote:

[General]
The offset is off by about 35ms. Change offset to 264. Change it before using this mod since the time links are based of offset 264. that's the old mp3

[Collab Normal]

00:47:576 (3,1,2,3,4) - This part feels a little bit awkward. I thought something like this felt better. okay



01:35:900 (3) - I really don't think you should have sliders like these that start on red lines in normals. It would feel and play much better if you placed a note where the slider starts, and then shortened down the slider to the next white downbeat after instead. nah



01:58:264 (1) - You should extend this spinner to here 02:00:991 okay


[Hard]

00:08:809 - Add a note? no
00:15:173 (4) - I'd suggest using 1.4x spacing on this one and then turning it about 5 degrees to make it look more pretty. okay
00:33:536 (3) - Maybe move this one to around x:428 y:348 okay
00:35:718 - Maybe add a note here? Since she starts singing before the drum roll, it might confuse the player. no
00:48:809 (2,3) - I'd either increase the spacing a little bit, or move them around to keep the previous slider from overlapping these two. okay
00:56:627 (4,1,2) - These three does not have the same spacing between each other. okay
01:33:536 - The stream - or I guess return sliders in this case - should start here. You are correct but this is not an insane so I'd rather not have that many reverse sliders
01:39:900 (4,5) - I'd turn these around about -15 degrees and then move number 5 a little bit to align number 5 with the first note of the triangle that comes after. okay

SPOILER

01:43:536 (1) - Again, I'd turn this one as well to align it with the next note. okay
01:48:991 (4) - This one looks a bit weird. Maybe copy the slider before it and have that go down instead? okay

SPOILER

01:52:991 (3) - I'd turn this -5 degrees to align it more to number 4. okay
01:58:082 (2) - I think you should decrease spacing to 1.0x on this one. okay
02:26:082 (1) - -5 degrees again to align with next note? okay
02:40:991 (5) - Turn ths one about -15 degrees to make this pattern more circle like? okay

I don't know if the diff is done, but if it is, you should map it all the way until the end like the insane. :>

[Insane]

00:00:264 - 50% audio?no
00:11:900 - 65% audio? no
00:26:445 (1) - Finish? no
00:38:082 (1) - Finish? no
00:49:718 (1) - Finish? no
01:25:718 (6) - Finish?no
01:36:264 (1) - Finish?no
01:47:900 (1) - Finish?no
I'll admit I might enjoy finish too much for my own good. My suggestions will probably make it sound too much.

00:35:718 - Same as Hard. no
00:38:627 (4) - When mapping sliders to the beat of the song (as in, not to the lyrics or any other funny or weird noises), they usually feel and play much better if they start on white lines. If you change one you should probably change all the other ones as well. no
01:25:718 (6) - I'd suggest shortening down this slider and adding a note on the white downbeat. When I tried this map I had the urge to click something there. If you change one you should probably change all the other ones as well. no

I don't know, there wasn't much I could say about the insane. It's very well spread out and looks nice.

There you have your mod, woohoo! \:>/

thanks for the mod!!

From queue

[General]
Breaktime should be same in same mapper's diffs. Hard and Insane has different breaktime at02:24:304 - .
Also, lengths need to be same in all diffs.

[Normal]
00:43:213 (2,3,4) - feel a little strange. maybe shorten 00:43:213 (2) - to 00:43:576 - and move 00:43:940 (3) - to00:43:758 - ?
00:56:849 (1) - start at the white line is better

01:11:576 (1,3) - sliders stacking looks bad
01:23:394 (1) - spinner should have nc
01:39:576 (3) - spacing. I suggest moving 01:37:758 (1,2) -

02:19:940 (1,1) - I'm not sure if it is ok in normal
02:24:304 (1) - from here to kiai, use soft hitsound is better

[Hard]
HP+1

00:19:940 (5,7) - looks strange
00:23:576 (7) - nc here?
00:32:304 (1) - reverse 1 time is enough, also, add a note at 00:33:213 -

01:19:940 (1,2,3,4) - don't stack them, and add a note at01:20:576 -
01:51:213 (2,3) - move 3 to x278 y291
02:27:213 (1,2) - move the 2nd grid to x158 y99
02:30:122 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - noisy...

[Insane]
00:21:576 (5,6) - ctrl+g
00:30:485 (4) - move 2nd grid to x312 y234
00:32:485 (2) - stack to 3 may be better
00:58:485 (1,2) - ctrl+g
01:33:849 (4) - delete this note and move01:33:576 (1,2,3) - away
01:41:394 (4,5) - ctrl+g

Insane is pretty good. Good luck.

Eggache0 wrote:

From queue

[General]
Breaktime should be same in same mapper's diffs. Hard and Insane has different breaktime at02:24:304 - .
Also, lengths need to be same in all diffs. Fixed

[Normal]
00:43:213 (2,3,4) - feel a little strange. maybe shorten 00:43:213 (2) - to 00:43:576 - and move 00:43:940 (3) - to00:43:758 - ? ok
00:56:849 (1) - start at the white line is better ok

01:11:576 (1,3) - sliders stacking looks bad fixed
01:23:394 (1) - spinner should have nc why?
01:39:576 (3) - spacing. I suggest moving 01:37:758 (1,2) - ok

02:19:940 (1,1) - I'm not sure if it is ok in normal I think it's ok for for normal
02:24:304 (1) - from here to kiai, use soft hitsound is better I used soft until 02:30:485 (1) - instead

[Hard]
HP+1 ok

00:19:940 (5,7) - looks strange fixed
00:23:576 (7) - nc here? ok
00:32:304 (1) - reverse 1 time is enough, also, add a note at 00:33:213 - no

01:19:940 (1,2,3,4) - don't stack them, and add a note at01:20:576 - Fixed
01:51:213 (2,3) - move 3 to x278 y291 okay
02:27:213 (1,2) - move the 2nd grid to x158 y99 no
02:30:122 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - noisy... fixed

[Insane]
00:21:576 (5,6) - ctrl+g Sure
00:30:485 (4) - move 2nd grid to x312 y234 no
00:32:485 (2) - stack to 3 may be better no
00:58:485 (1,2) - ctrl+g no
01:33:849 (4) - delete this note and move01:33:576 (1,2,3) - away Sorry, this is a long stream
01:41:394 (4,5) - ctrl+g okay

Insane is pretty good. Good luck.

thanks for the mod!!

All the mods are based on my pure feelings if they aren't bolded, so feel free to ignore them all
[General]
kk nice mapset

[normal]
00:42:485 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/4pdwY.jpg
00:48:304 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/4pdzl.jpg
00:52:667 (3,4,1,2) - the shape isnt quite pretty i think, especially how (3) (the L slider) and 2 (big circle slider) overlaps



[hard]
00:11:940 (1) - ~ 00:16:394 (1) - http://puu.sh/4pdjL.jpg matches much better to the music
00:38:122 (1) - delete next circle and extend this to 1/1 (or just repeat the first one)
00:49:758 (1,2) - ^ same rhythm. even if you don't decide to fix this at least add clap on begining of 00:50:122 (2) -
00:45:940 (1) - spinner felt kinda random for me.. maybe just map with circle/sliders?

[Insane]
01:12:121 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I suggest to put sliders on end of stream or begining of stream on these patterns.. this kinda feels random for me


good luck~

haha5957 wrote:

All the mods are based on my pure feelings if they aren't bolded, so feel free to ignore them all
[General]
kk nice mapset

[normal]
00:42:485 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/4pdwY.jpg okay
00:48:304 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/4pdzl.jpg okay
00:52:667 (3,4,1,2) - the shape isnt quite pretty i think, especially how (3) (the L slider) and 2 (big circle slider) overlaps okay



[hard]
00:11:940 (1) - ~ 00:16:394 (1) - http://puu.sh/4pdjL.jpg matches much better to the music okay
00:38:122 (1) - delete next circle and extend this to 1/1 (or just repeat the first one) okay
00:49:758 (1,2) - ^ same rhythm. even if you don't decide to fix this at least add clap on begining of 00:50:122 (2) - okay
00:45:940 (1) - spinner felt kinda random for me.. maybe just map with circle/sliders? okay

[Insane]
01:12:121 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I suggest to put sliders on end of stream or begining of stream on these patterns.. this kinda feels random for me no


good luck~

thanks for the mod!

Random from #modreqs

[General]

1. I can't mod Taiko, so standard only
2. AiMod: Tags and countdown in Taiko diffs don't match (letterbox is probably fine?)

[Collab Normal]

1. 01:23:394 (1) - AiMod: Spinner needs a NC
2. That OD is pretty low for a normal, +1?
3. 00:44:485 (4,1) - Blanket this better? Doesn't look nice when playing
4. 00:35:940 (1,2) - Confusing timing in the song, maybe make this a slider

[Hard]

1. A bit too much 1/4 rhythm but decent diff
2. 02:25:030 (2) - AiMod: Unsnapped slider end
3. 02:19:940 (1,1) - Confusing, I'd make the slider one repeat longer and remove the circle

[Insane]

1. Not much rhythmical variation in some parts here either .-. Should be fine though
2. 00:03:940 (4) - Why not bend this slider the other way? it'll oppose the previous and next slider better
3. 00:34:485 (3) - Rotate a little for perfect symmetry
4. 02:30:122 (1,1,1,1) - Directions are slightly off .-. Why not just copypaste one slider so they're all identical

Tear wrote:

Random from #modreqs

[General]

1. I can't mod Taiko, so standard only
2. AiMod: Tags and countdown in Taiko diffs don't match (letterbox is probably fine?)

[Collab Normal]

1. 01:23:394 (1) - AiMod: Spinner needs a NC done
2. That OD is pretty low for a normal, +1? done
3. 00:44:485 (4,1) - Blanket this better? Doesn't look nice when playing done
4. 00:35:940 (1,2) - Confusing timing in the song, maybe make this a sliderI dont agree, I think it fits as it is

[Hard]

1. A bit too much 1/4 rhythm but decent diff
2. 02:25:030 (2) - AiMod: Unsnapped slider end fixed
3. 02:19:940 (1,1) - Confusing, I'd make the slider one repeat longer and remove the circle I dont think this part is confusing

[Insane]

1. Not much rhythmical variation in some parts here either .-. Should be fine though
2. 00:03:940 (4) - Why not bend this slider the other way? it'll oppose the previous and next slider better no
3. 00:34:485 (3) - Rotate a little for perfect symmetry done
4. 02:30:122 (1,1,1,1) - Directions are slightly off .-. Why not just copypaste one slider so they're all identical done

thanks for the mod

Hi Shilkey.

Yay you win in this round, and for my rules i'll mod only 2 difficulties. :3

Insane

00:00:667 (2) - Whistle start slider.(Use these whistles to fit piano rhythm.)
00:01:213 (4) - Whistle.
00:01:758 (1) - Whistle start slider.
00:02:122 (2) - Whistle end slider.
00:02:849 (5) - Whistle.
00:03:031 (6) - Remove whistle.
00:03:213 (1) - Whistle end slider.
00:03:940 (4) - Whistle start slider.
00:04:304 (5) - Whistle end slider.
00:04:667 (1) - ^
00:05:394 (3) - ^
00:05:758 (4) - Remove whistle.
00:06:485 (2) - Whistle.
00:07:030 (4) - ^
00:07:576 (1) - Whistle start slider.
00:07:940 (2) - Whistle end slider.
00:08:304 (3) - ^
00:08:849 (4) - Remove whistle.
00:09:031 (1) - Whistle end slider.
00:09:758 (3) - Whistle.
00:10:304 (6) - ^
00:11:940 (1) - Whistle end slider.
00:12:667 (3) - ^
00:13:394 (1) - Whistle start slider and remove whistle end slider.
00:13:940 (3) - Whistle start slider.
00:14:485 (4) - Whistle.
00:14:667 (5) - Remove whistle.
00:14:849 (1) - Whistle end slider.
00:15:576 (3) - Whistle.
00:15:940 (5) - Whistle end slider.
00:16:485 (2) - Remove whistle.
00:16:667 (3) - Whistle start slider.
00:17:031 (4) - Whistle end slider.
00:17:394 (5) - Remove whistle.
00:18:122 (3) - Whistle.
00:18:485 (5) - Whistle end slider.
00:19:213 (1) - Whistle.
00:19:576 (3) - Whistle repeat slider.
00:20:304 (5) - Whistle start slider and remove whistle end slider.
00:20:849 (2) - Whistle.
00:21:394 (4) - ^
00:39:213 (5,2) - move this note to cover 00:38:304 (2) I think it's look better.
00:59:576 (6) - Move to x:420, y:332 to make more triangle symmetrical shape :3
01:43:031 (4,5,6) - Switch note like this? (4) instead (6), (5) instead (4) and (6) instead (5) to make a bit jump x3
01:49:031 (5) - It can cover with 01:47:576 (5)

Hard

*you can make like Insane diff suggestion about piano rhythm other than i think fine.
00:54:122 (1) - Move (1) to cover 00:55:213 (4) repeat slider.
02:24:304 (4) - Whistle.
02:25:758 (4) - Whistle.
02:27:213 (1) - Whistle start slider.
02:28:667 (5) - Whistle.

Good Luck :3

backstep wrote:

Hi Shilkey.

Yay you win in this round, and for my rules i'll mod only 2 difficulties. :3

Insane

00:00:667 (2) - Whistle start slider.(Use these whistles to fit piano rhythm.)　I am using whistles to follow the open hi-hat sounds
00:01:213 (4) - Whistle.
00:01:758 (1) - Whistle start slider.
00:02:122 (2) - Whistle end slider.
00:02:849 (5) - Whistle.
00:03:031 (6) - Remove whistle.
00:03:213 (1) - Whistle end slider.
00:03:940 (4) - Whistle start slider.
00:04:304 (5) - Whistle end slider.
00:04:667 (1) - ^
00:05:394 (3) - ^
00:05:758 (4) - Remove whistle.
00:06:485 (2) - Whistle.
00:07:030 (4) - ^
00:07:576 (1) - Whistle start slider.
00:07:940 (2) - Whistle end slider.
00:08:304 (3) - ^
00:08:849 (4) - Remove whistle.
00:09:031 (1) - Whistle end slider.
00:09:758 (3) - Whistle.
00:10:304 (6) - ^
00:11:940 (1) - Whistle end slider.
00:12:667 (3) - ^
00:13:394 (1) - Whistle start slider and remove whistle end slider.
00:13:940 (3) - Whistle start slider.
00:14:485 (4) - Whistle.
00:14:667 (5) - Remove whistle.
00:14:849 (1) - Whistle end slider.
00:15:576 (3) - Whistle.
00:15:940 (5) - Whistle end slider.
00:16:485 (2) - Remove whistle.
00:16:667 (3) - Whistle start slider.
00:17:031 (4) - Whistle end slider.
00:17:394 (5) - Remove whistle.
00:18:122 (3) - Whistle.
00:18:485 (5) - Whistle end slider.
00:19:213 (1) - Whistle.
00:19:576 (3) - Whistle repeat slider.
00:20:304 (5) - Whistle start slider and remove whistle end slider.
00:20:849 (2) - Whistle.
00:21:394 (4) - ^
00:39:213 (5,2) - move this note to cover 00:38:304 (2) I think it's look better. okay
00:59:576 (6) - Move to x:420, y:332 to make more triangle symmetrical shape :3 okay
01:43:031 (4,5,6) - Switch note like this? (4) instead (6), (5) instead (4) and (6) instead (5) to make a bit jump x3 no

SPOILER

01:49:031 (5) - It can cover with 01:47:576 (5) doesn't necessarily need it, the gap is too far away for players to notice this.

Hard

*you can make like Insane diff suggestion about piano rhythm other than i think fine. okay
00:54:122 (1) - Move (1) to cover 00:55:213 (4) repeat slider. no
02:24:304 (4) - Whistle.okay
02:25:758 (4) - Whistle.okay
02:27:213 (1) - Whistle start slider.okay
02:28:667 (5) - Whistle.okay

Good Luck :3

thanks!

Hello, modding for Lions' modding queue here.

[General]
*Insane's countdown is enabled while every other difficulty isn't. Please standardize the countdown.
The Taiko difficulties have letterboxing disabled while Standard difficulties have them enabled. I'm not sure if they need to be standardized, but if they do, then please do so too.

[Normal]
00:42:485 (1) - This ends really weirdly, since there's no audible beat on 00:43:031 and you completely skip the voice in 00:42:849. I think you should just shorten this to 00:42:849. It sounds pretty good imo, transferring from (1,2) to (3,4).
01:39:213 - I think you should add a note here to keep the beat steady. The other 2 kiais also have this part of the tune mapped (e.g. 00:41:031 - 00:52:667 - 01:50:849 - 01:50:849 - ), so standardizing it for the player would be better.
01:52:304 - Same reasoning as above. There's also a pretty audible sound here.
02:41:758 - Same reasoning as above.

[Hard]
Personally, I think AR7 would fit better so the increase is more linear [5>7>9]. 8 feels a little too fast for a Hard.
02:25:030 (2) - Object's end is unsnapped.

[Insane]
I don't see anything obviously off here, pretty nice job.

Hi~ Sorry for the late.. ;w;
Mod request from Gamu & iyasine's queue [General/Mod/M4M/Guest] ✌('ω')✌


[General]

●Source: Remove "Prog-roid"
Prog-roid is the album name. Therefore, It is not possible to add to the source. Anime and game name...etc can be added to the source.
You can add Tags to instead of the source :3 please add! ah, Prog-roid ⇒ Prog-Roid This is correct.

●Add soft-sliderslide and normal-sliderslide of silence.
It is using the sound of silence in most maps. Don't you try to add? :p If you want to use, then click on this

●"Enable countdown" different. Should unify.
In this mapset, don't work. Therefore, please turn off~

[Collab Normal]

●AR-1. Since there is no Easy diff in this mapset, reduce for a beginner? Instead of reducing the AR, increase HP+1. By this, balance of HP3, CS3, AR4, OD4 will be very well.
●00:00:304 ~ 00:23:576 - hitsound (whistle) is few, so very lonely..;w; The suggestions to give a good atmosphere.
*00:00:304 (1) - Add whistle (start). have put out a very good sound.
*00:01:758 (3) - ^
*00:03:213 (1) - ^
*00:04:667 (2) - ^
*00:04:667 (2) - Remove whistle (end). I think don't need.
*00:06:122 (1) - Add whistle (start). The reason is the same as 00:00:304 (1)
*00:07:576 (3) - ^
*00:09:031 (1) - ^
*00:13:031 (2) - Remove whistle (end). The reason is the same as 00:04:667 (2)
*00:13:394 (3) - Add whistle (start). The reason is the same as 00:00:304 (1)
*00:14:849 (1) - ^
*00:16:304 (3) - ^
*00:17:758 (1) - ^
*00:19:213 (3) - ^
*00:20:667 (1) - ^
●00:30:485 (2) - Must be spacing about 0.80x. Unifying the spacing is important in the Easy diff and Normal diff. There are exceptions, but this is not the case.
●00:31:576 (1) - ^
●00:33:940 (6) - Add new combo. keep the consistency of the new combo.
●00:35:940 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
●00:36:667 (3) - Add new combo. kiai time the start. And, keep the consistency of the new combo.
●00:37:394 (1) - Remove new combo. It applies when you added the new combo above.
●00:39:213 (1) - ^
●00:39:576 (2) - Add new combo. ^
●00:41:031 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
●00:47:213 (3) - Stack with the end of 00:45:394 (1). Appearance will be clean :3
●00:51:213 (1) - Add clap (end). I think you are forget.
●00:51:940 (2) - ^
●01:11:576~01:21:758 - hitsound is nothing.. Please add the hitsound something. Players will get bored..orz
For example:
*01:12:667 (2) - Add clap.
*01:14:122 (4) - ^
*01:15:940 (2) - ^ (end).
*01:17:394 (1) - ^ (end).
*01:19:213 (3) - ^ (start and end).
●01:30:485 (3) - Add clap (middle). I think you are forget.
●01:31:576 (4) - Must be spacing about 0.80x. The reasons is the same as 00:30:485 (2)
●01:33:758 (2) - ^
●01:37:758 (1) - Add clap (end). I think you are forget.
●01:38:485 (2) - ^
●01:39:576 (3) - ^
●01:52:667 (1) - Must be spacing about 0.80x. The reasons is the same as 00:30:485 (2)
●02:18:485 (1) - ^
●02:24:304~02:30:485 - hitsound is nothing.. Please add the hitsound something. Players will get bored..orz
For example:
*02:24:304 (1) - Add whistle.
*02:25:758 (1) - ^
*02:27:213 (3) - ^ (start).
*02:28:667 (1) - ^ (start).
●02:25:758 (1) - Remove new combo. keep the consistency of the new combo.
●02:27:213 (3) - Add new combo. ^
●02:28:667 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
●02:36:304 (2) - Must be spacing about 0.80x. The reasons is the same as 00:30:485 (2)
●02:51:940 (1) - ^
●02:57:031 (4) - ^
●02:57:758 (1) - ^
●02:56:304 (3,4) - I don't really like the repeat slider like this in Normal diff / Easy diff. It appeared suddenly, beginners will confuse. It is fit for song, but the Suggestion of rhythm. I think this is good.


●I think no problem of rhythm. But, there are some problems in hitsound and placement. By modifying the Mod above, will improve


[Hard]

●AR-1. It's the same as Jinxy. In a 3diff configuration of osu!, AR8 too early (Hard diff). I think so.
●02:25:211 - Object's end is not snapped!
●00:43:213 (3) - Ctrl+G. And, 00:43:940 (1) - Ctrl+G. good flow :3
●01:11:576~01:21:758 - hitsound is nothing.. Please add the hitsound something. Players will get bored..orz
●01:25:394 (3) - Ctrl+G. And, 01:26:122 (1) - Ctrl+G. good flow :3

[Insane]

●good :3 will be no problem, maybe.


good luck~

[Insane]
Very nice diff. Maybe I'm just bad at standard modding, but this looks solid.

[Hard]
00:16:394 (1) - I don't see what this spinner's mapped to. It can stay, but I think it should be mapped.
- Speaking of spinners, 00:33:758 (1) isn't all close like the first one. Though I think this spinner belongs a tick later.

I don't see much else off.
[Normal]
This looks fine to me. Seems it was completely cleaned by gamu.

[Taiko Oni]
02:30:122 - No roll at the other part was fine, but I was looking forward to it here heh

This mapset is turning out more perfect than I thought.
[Taiko Muzukashii]
01:34:394 - You've made every other drum roll kkkkk, why not this one?

Very good mapset over all!

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Taiko Oni]
02:30:122 - No roll at the other part was fine, but I was looking forward to it here heh

This mapset is turning out more perfect than I thought.
[Taiko Muzukashii]
01:34:394 - You've made every other drum roll kkkkk, why not this one? i folliw the drum roll

Very good mapset over all!

no change.
but thanks for mod Ozzy >w<

Hello there! winner from http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/153775 ~

General

1. Can you make a little sb for names in "Collab Normal"?
2. Metadata:
   Artist: スクール フード パニッシュメント (School Food Punishment)
   Source/Tag idk: プログロイド(Prog-Roid)
3. BG.jpg should be 1366x768, resize it ~ it won't affect in almost nothing in the img.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Everything else looks good.

Insane

1. Hitsounds are kinda weak, I think you can improve them (using the basic manner) adding claps like in 00:00:667 (2,5,2) - (etc etc) it has more sense.
2. 00:13:394 (1) - remove new combo
3. 00:14:849 (4) -^
4. 00:24:304 (3) - stack the tail of the slider with 00:22:849 (4) -
5. 00:39:940 (2) - same as above but stacks it with 00:39:213 (5) -
6. 00:57:031 (1,2) - try this http://i.imgur.com/K02Z7DY.png
7. 01:25:758 (6) - this slider sounds a bit awkward here, try something like this http://i.imgur.com/4z3NYFE.png (don't follow that nc pattern :<)
8. 01:41:758 (6) - stack with the head of 01:39:394 (2) -
9. 01:55:576 (2) - make a perfect curve here
10. 01:59:394 (1) - blanket
11. 02:00:304 (4) - stack with the tail of (2)
12. 02:02:122 (6) - increase the distance, looks a bit weird... move it to x44 y:52 (using 1,4x DS)
13. 02:06:849 (1,2,3) - try this http://i.imgur.com/5Qkp5wY.png Changes: (2) moved to x:160 y:152 | (3) made more curved and stacking the tail with 02:06:485 (6) - ) || when you do that I highly recommend you move 02:08:304 (2) - to another place far from (3) trying to don't touch it.
14. 02:36:304 (3) - more curved please o3o~
15. 03:03:940 (2) - make this slider more kawaii~ like this o3o http://i.imgur.com/vBwG1wW.png
    code

    28,164,184304,2,0,B|44:182|44:182|64:196|64:196|60:228|60:228|80:296|188:316,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

    
    My opinion about this diff: I think you have to improve esthetically your diff, there are some bad blankets but anyway your insane is pretty cool, the rhythm is fine and you made nice patterns.

Hard

1. AR7 looks awful, AR8 makes more readable the notes.
2. HP+1 for consistence of the OD
3. 00:04:576 (1) - the spinner is kinda sudden and also don't fit there.
4. 00:08:304 (5) - bad blanket, make the curve more soft~
5. 00:09:031 (1,2) - do something here like http://i.imgur.com/MvFxRxn.png
6. 00:37:758 (4) - stack it well with 00:36:667 (1) -
7. 00:38:122 (5) - same as above but with 00:36:667 (1) -
8. 00:39:213 (9) - (9) is touching (5) http://i.imgur.com/gGrR0kx.png making it awkward... x.x
9. 00:51:940 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - which form are you trying to make here? I think if you gonna make a circle I suggest you use ctrl+shift+D.
10. 00:54:485 (2,4) - make the curve more soft
11. 01:56:485 (4) - make this slider more beautiful giving it more curve http://i.imgur.com/23YS5sB.png ;w;
12. 02:11:940 (1) - remove nc, nc is just for downbeats.
13. 02:14:485 (1) - don't fit here
14. 02:35:940 (1) - ugly slider
    
    My opinion of this diff is like the same of Insane diff ^^

Normal

1. 00:29:394 (1) - more curve please~
2. 00:36:667 (1,2,3,4) - do something like this http://i.imgur.com/bunA4Zl.png
3. 00:48:304 (1,2,3,4) - same suggestion of above
4. 00:50:485 (1) - nc here
5. 00:51:940 (3) - (3) is touching 00:50:485 (1) - making it ugly xwx
6. 01:11:576 (1) - awful
7. 02:30:485 (1) - One turn is fine but 2 don't sounds good. http://i.imgur.com/IVaHLyf.png
8. 02:35:940 (1,2,3,4) - you know what I will say =w=
9. I don't suggest long spinners in Easy or Normal diffs.

That's all! If you don't understand something feel free to ask me in-game please! good luck on ranking :3~ never give you up!

Please, write the explaination of why you didn't added the point, a simple "no" doesn't help me. :/

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Please, write the explaination of why you didn't added the point, a simple "no" doesn't help me. :/

Most of it is unnessesary. The hitsounds you suggest don't match the song. The patterns just aren't my taste.

From my queue~

[Collab Normal]

1. 01:15:576- add a note
2. 02:28:667 (2) - how about symmetric slider about 02:27:213 (1) -

[Hard]

1. 00:40:304 (3,4) - I prefer to change for 1 slider
2. 00:56:667 (4) - move to x:274 y:149 (stack correctly)
3. 01:14:849 (3,4) - it is better not to stack
4. 01:31:031- add a note
5. 01:37:576- ^
6. 01:38:304 (2) - delete

[Insane]

1. Tags conflict with other-diffs (maybe due to "prog-roid")
2. 00:05:394 (3) - how about curve-slider formed symmetrically about 00:05:758 (4) - ?
3. 00:13:394 (7) - NC
4. 00:14:849 (12) - ^
5. 01:37:758 (1) - I prefer Ctrl+G
6. 01:50:122 (3,4) - I prefer to change for 1 slider
7. 02:39:576 (3) - How about symmetric slider about 02:38:849 (1) - ?

"Nan-zen♪ Nan-man♪"　this phrase is fine!
~Good Luck~

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Collab Normal]

1. 01:15:576- add a note okay
2. 02:28:667 (2) - how about symmetric slider about 02:27:213 (1) - okay

[Hard]

1. 00:40:304 (3,4) - I prefer to change for 1 slider ok
2. 00:56:667 (4) - move to x:274 y:149 (stack correctly) Fixed
3. 01:14:849 (3,4) - it is better not to stack okay
4. 01:31:031- add a note no, it'll make jumps
5. 01:37:576- ^ ^
6. 01:38:304 (2) - delete okay

[Insane]

1. Tags conflict with other-diffs (maybe due to "prog-roid") fixed
2. 00:05:394 (3) - how about curve-slider formed symmetrically about 00:05:758 (4) - ? okay
3. 00:13:394 (7) - NC okay
4. 00:14:849 (12) - ^ okay
5. 01:37:758 (1) - I prefer Ctrl+G okay
6. 01:50:122 (3,4) - I prefer to change for 1 slider I prefer it my way
7. 02:39:576 (3) - How about symmetric slider about 02:38:849 (1) - ? no need

"Nan-zen♪ Nan-man♪"　this phrase is fine!
~Good Luck~

thanks!

Hi From my queue

i can't mod taiko so only standard does modding

[Collab Normal]

1. 02:15:576 ~ 02:19:940 - In Normal dif,i think that you should stop changing the speed of the slider by changing BPM.

The point that you should fix in particular elsewhere was not found.

[Hard]

1. 00:24:122 (2) - move to x:144 y:164

1. 00:27:394 (3,4) - move to x:196 y:288

1. 00:30:122 (3) - symmetrically for 00:29:394 (1)

1. 00:56:849 (1) - move to x:216 y:220

1. 01:54:304 (6) - How about in this way?
   
   this way

   

1. 02:19:940 (1) - How about in this way?
   
   this way

   

1. 02:27:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - How about in this way?
   
   this way

   
   
   

[Insane]

1. 00:55:394 (1) - How about in this way?
   
   this way

   ↓ 00:55:394 (1,2,3,4) - display it at equal distance.
   
   
   
   
   
   ↓ 00:57:394 (2) - stack an initial point on an initial point of 00:55:394 (1) .
   
   
   
   
   
   ↓ 00:56:849 (5,1) - ↓ display them so that 00:57:394 (2) , 00:56:485 (4) , 00:56:849 (5) become the equilateral triangle. then 00:57:031 (1) establish the terminal of the slider.
   
   
   

1. 01:51:213 (2) - 01:51:940 (5) - stack correctly

1. 02:03:576 (5) - 02:04:304 (2) - ^

I pray so that your beatmap does ranked!

EnixYuki wrote:

Hi From my queue

i can't mod taiko so only standard does modding

[Collab Normal]

1. 02:15:576 ~ 02:19:940 - In Normal dif,i think that you should stop changing the speed of the slider by changing BPM.fixed

The point that you should fix in particular elsewhere was not found.

[Hard]

1. 00:24:122 (2) - move to x:144 y:164 okay

1. 00:27:394 (3,4) - move to x:196 y:288 okay

1. 00:30:122 (3) - symmetrically for 00:29:394 (1) okay

1. 00:56:849 (1) - move to x:216 y:220 okay

1. 01:54:304 (6) - How about in this way? okay
   
   this way

   

1. 02:19:940 (1) - How about in this way? okay
   
   this way

   

1. 02:27:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - How about in this way? It makes too big of a jump imo
   
   this way

   
   
   

[Insane]

1. 00:55:394 (1) - How about in this way?
   
   this way

   ↓ 00:55:394 (1,2,3,4) - display it at equal distance. I dont really like it, sorry.
   
   
   
   
   
   ↓ 00:57:394 (2) - stack an initial point on an initial point of 00:55:394 (1) . It isn't really nessesary
   
   
   
   
   
   ↓ 00:56:849 (5,1) - ↓ display them so that 00:57:394 (2) , 00:56:485 (4) , 00:56:849 (5) become the equilateral triangle. then 00:57:031 (1) establish the terminal of the slider. Sorry but I'm gonna stick with my pattern
   
   
   

1. 01:51:213 (2) - 01:51:940 (5) - stack correctly Okay

1. 02:03:576 (5) - 02:04:304 (2) - ^fixed

I pray so that your beatmap does ranked!

thanks!