AW-sama wrote:

A Nehézzel nincs semmi gond?

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hello! ^^ véletlen mod!

[Easy]
00:17:872 (4,5) - Switch them, sounds better imo. On 00:17:872 you hear vocals say 'so', then 'all alone' on 00:18:215. Okay
00:27:131 (1) - And finish on the head.. Okay
00:30:217 - Add note for consistency? Added
00:36:732 (3) - Finish on tail. Okay

01:02:794 (1) - Finish on the head. Okay
01:13:082 (5) - ^Okay
01:17:882 (1) - Finish on the tail. Okay
01:23:369 (3) - ^Okay
01:46:687 (1) - Finish on the head. Okay
02:10:006 (2) - ^ Okay
02:20:293 (3) -Finish on the tail. Okay
02:31:952 (1) - Finish on the head. Okay
02:42:925 (1) - ^ Okay
02:47:040 (3) - Finish on the tail Okay

needs some mroe hitsounds, that's all

[Medium]

1. HP drain rate -1?

00:38:104 (1) - Finish on the head
01:02:794 (1) - ^
01:13:767 (1) - ^
01:19:254 (1) - ^
01:46:687 (1) - ^
02:20:979 (1) - ^
02:31:952 (1) - ^
02:48:412 (1) - ^

Completed.

[Heavy]
00:29:188 (7) - NC (New combo)
00:40:162 (5) - ^
01:46:687 (5) - ^
01:49:431 - ^
01:54:917 (8) - ^
02:12:063 (7) - ^ okay

Nice map Good luck!

Hope this helps! ^^

Mastercraft2012 wrote:

Appalling

00:27:817 (6) - new combo
00:29:188 (9) - new combo
00:30:560 (14) - new combo
00:33:303 (6) - new combo
00:34:675 (9) - new combo
00:37:418 (9) - new combo
00:41:533 (7) - new combo
00:44:277 (6) - new combo
00:53:192 (6) - new combo
00:55:936 (7) - new combo
00:58:679 (6) - new combo
01:00:051 (12) - new combo
01:04:166 (6) - new combo
01:16:511 (9) - new combo
01:06:909 (4) - new combo
01:09:652 (6) - new combo
01:12:396 (5) - new combo
01:15:139 (5) - new combo
01:39:829 (5) - new combo
01:42:572 (4) - new combo
01:43:944 (7) - new combo
01:48:059 (6) - new combo
01:50:802 (5) - new combo
01:53:546 (7) - new combo
02:02:461 (4) - new combo
02:05:205 (4) - new combo
02:06:576 (9) - new combo
02:07:091 (1) - remove new combo
02:09:491 (6) - new combo
02:13:435 (6) - new combo
02:16:178 (5) - new combo
02:17:550 (9) - new combo
02:22:351 (5) - new combo
02:25:094 (4) - new combo
02:27:837 (5) - new combo
02:33:324 (5) - new combo
02:36:067 (7) - new combo
02:38:810 (6) - new combo
02:44:297 (7) - new combo
02:47:040 (6) - new combo
02:49:784 (7) - new combo

Tidek wrote:

From my mod queue.

Appaling

1. 00:14:786 - 00:25:759 - hmm, that part in some cases looks placed a bit randomly (i mean rhythm), try to focus on beat in music and put notes on them (for example u missing triplet here 00:24:902 or that strong music accent here 00:25:759 Fix'd
2. 00:37:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - that stream is longer, end it with repeat slider or circles .... no
3. 00:39:990 - add circle, it feels empty added
4. 01:13:082 (4,5) - here is 5 circle stream, these 2 triplets are unrhytmic fix'd
5. 01:54:231 (3,4,5,6) - watch ds yes
6. 02:10:006 - 02:19:436 - just suggestion, as u can hear, beats are showing up in music, u can try to accent them instead of vocal vocal and vocal... fix'd
7. 02:19:436 - stack it or 1,0x DS, it looks ugly now DS = 1,0x : 4 circle + repeat slider + 4 circle + repeat slider
8. Overall - i see a lot of long streams, but i dont see any triplet with circles, hmm? change atleast half of triple 1/4 repeater to circles.

Heavy

1. 00:37:418 (6,7) - 1/2 sliders instead of circles? ok
2. 00:48:563 - add circle added
3. 00:51:821 - 01:02:794 - damn... map it please ;_; okay, okay. :'D
4. 01:07:766 (6) - 3 circles instead of that sliders, fits to music a lot better ok
5. 01:13:082 (5,6) - again, 2 sliders 1/2 instead of circles ok
6. 01:18:397 (5,6,7) - make this rhythm, fits better (these stacks are ugly btw). ok
   
   
7. 02:36:582 (1,2,3) - ^
8. 02:42:068 (9,10,11) - ^
9. 02:47:555 (6,7,8) - ^ ok
10. 02:53:213 (4,5) - 2 sliders instead of circles

ok

Normal

1. 00:49:077 (9) - move to x136 y296 oks
2. 01:36:743 (3,4,5) - fix ds oks
   Well u used simple 1/1 rhythm, so i found nothing : P

Rookie

• 
  Slider tick is too high in my opinion. (reduce it to 1)
  Fix your DS on whole map because its incorrect and its not recommended on easy difficulty, DS is varies too much. Grid level 4 and make it 1,19x-1,21x

Tick rate fixed! Current distance snap 1,0x o_o

GL

higurush wrote:

Hey there, nice maps you got here :3

Here's what I think you should change:

[Appalling]
00:19:587 (6) - replace note to 00:19:415 (6)
00:19:758 (7) - Add note at x:192 y:272
00:19:930 (8) - replace note to x:272 y:256
00:20:101 (9) - replace note to x:224 y:224
00:20:272 (10) - replace note to x:240 y:296
02:19:607 (1) - replace note to x:272 y:296
02:19:950 (5) - replace reverse slider to x:416 y:288
02:20:293 (6) - replace note to x:448 y:216
02:20:378 (7) - replace note to x:448 y:176
02:20:464 (8) - replace note to x:432 y:144
02:20:550 (9) - replace note to x:408 y:120

XinCrin wrote:

OMG I love this <3
STARRED

CreamLegit wrote:

[General]
Put preview at 00:26:445 Okay
The combo numbers are too small, try to increase the size a little in photoshop? (the ones on the notes, not the ones that indicate how much combo you have) Coming soon.
The spinner in the end of each difficulty should be silent, each and every one of them. Okay

[Heavy]
00:56:450 (6) - Replace it with a 1/4 slider that repeats once, would go better with the song
01:01:594 - Need a spinner that starts here and ends at 01:02:451
01:18:568 - Should be a ministream until the slider starts.
02:36:582 - ^
02:42:068 - ^
02:47:555 - ^
Okay!

[Appalling]
Change the diff's name to Crazy/Insane/Whatever, Appalling is just bad.
00:23:359 (7) - New Combo Added!

1. disables the widescreen support is unnecesary, because the SB is 1024 x 768.
2. Add Remix,Dj Techno,Dance,Electro,Radio Edit in the tags, And remove Nightcore is unnecesary imo.
3. I have a suggestion for the SB, I think you could add the effect "fade" on this time 00:01:755 and the picture begins to Appear up to the minute 00:03:812.
   same in this time. 02:53:899 - 02:55:956.

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"background.jpg",320,240
 F,0,-301,1755,0
 S,0,0,176232,0.65
 F,0,1755,3812,0,1
 F,0,3812,173899,1
 F,0,173899,175956,1,0
 F,0,175956,,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"background-light.jpg",320,240
 L,27474,32
  F,1,0,343,1,0
  S,1,0,343,0.65,0.68
  F,0,343,686,0
 L,63137,32
  F,1,0,343,1,0
  S,1,0,343,0.65,0.68
  F,0,343,686,0
 L,152295,32
  F,1,0,343,1,0
  S,1,0,343,0.65,0.68
  F,0,343,686,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

1. 00:16:157 (3,4) - Nazi* in my opinion I think you can do better this blanket something like this:
   
   Nazi

   
   but I think it would be better if you change the pace of the slider, try this: sounds good Imo.
2. 00:21:644 (4,5) - this beat sounds out of place, would be better if you remove the reverse of here 00:21:644 (4) - and add one note here 00:22:673 Therefore it add reverse on this beat 00:23:016 (6) , and place the spinner on the next tick.
   
   Here The Example

   
3. 00:28:160 (2,3) - Nazi* I'm sure you can create better this blanket, Here an example:
   
   Example

   
   
   Here the code:
   

   [HitObjects]
   368,260,28160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   412,188,28502,2,0,P|451:243|433:312,2,140

4. 00:36:390 (2,3) - Same here ^
5. 01:13:082 (5) - remove the clap, sounds bad imo
6. 01:17:539 (6,2) - Nazi* move this slider 01:19:597 (2) - to X:152 Y:284 For a perfect stacking with this circle 01:17:539 (6).
7. Nazi* Move this 01:20:969 (4) - to X:443 Y:336 for a better blanket.
8. 01:56:289 (1) - you forgot to put a finish here
9. 01:59:032 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I think that you should add this part soft whistles to follow the voice, sound great in this part ,you should to try. this for all diff.
10. 02:30:581 - finish in this time.
11. 02:53:899 - add note here with finish and move this spinner to next tick, this in all diff.

1. 00:24:387 (1) - Finish here.
2. 00:27:131 - you are ignoring the kiai start time which is a very important beat, I would recommend you change the rhythm of this part something like this: , if you do the above add finish here 00:27:131.
3. 02:09:320 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:37:075 (4) - Nazi* move this note to X:408 Y:155 for a better stacked.
5. 00:39:819 (3) - ^ X:235 Y:199
6. 00:46:334 (1) - NC
7. 01:07:423 - add note here! sounds good.
8. 01:12:396 (3,1) - Nazi* this looks very bad try to move this 01:13:767 (1) - to X:213 Y:197.
9. 02:09:320 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Same than easy
10. 01:53:546 (4,5) - spacing!
11. 02:37:782 (1) - NC here
12. 02:53:899 (1) - Same than easy.

1. 00:17:529 (1) - NC here
2. 00:22:673 (1) - ^
3. 00:26:445 (1,2) - same on normal
4. 01:07:423 - I think a normal slider is not follow the music, replaces this for three circles in this time 01:07:423 , 01:07:509 , 01:07:595 is more comfortable imo.
5. 01:16:854 (1,2) - you can create a better blanket in this part please.
6. 01:19:254 (1,3) - Nazi* move this circle 01:20:283 (3) - to X:382 Y:251 for a better stacked.
7. 01:36:228 (2) - ^ move this to X:443 Y:45 Same reason.
8. 01:54:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - for give aesthetic to the map and make it more symmetrical, moves all these notes to the coordinates X:160 Y:116
9. 02:10:006 - do not overlook the important beats of the songs add note here with finish.
10. 02:53:899 (1) - same in the other diffs.

disables the widescreen support is unnecesary, because the SB is 1024 x 768.
Add Remix,Dj Techno,Dance,Electro,Radio Edit in the tags, And remove Nightcore is unnecesary imo.
I have a suggestion for the SB, I think you could add the effect "fade" on this time 00:01:755 and the picture begins to Appear up to the minute 00:03:812.
same in this time. 02:53:899 - 02:55:956.
Here the code, if you need this:

00:36:390 (2,3) - Same here ^
01:13:082 (5) - remove the clap, sounds bad imo
01:17:539 (6,2) - Nazi* move this slider 01:19:597 (2) - to X:152 Y:284 For a perfect stacking with this circle 01:17:539 (6).
Nazi* Move this 01:20:969 (4) - to X:443 Y:336 for a better blanket.
01:56:289 (1) - you forgot to put a finish here
02:30:581 - finish in this time.
02:53:899 - add note here with finish and move this spinner to next tick, this in all diff.

do not overlook the important beats of the songs add note here with finish.

1. If you are using a custom hitcircle , you should put a sliderborder in the .osu of all diffs. in (Colours) "SliderBorder : 200,200,200" . Example :
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:47:706 (3) This blanket really doesn't flows very well with previous sliders . Try to make more curvy this slider , something like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:07:252 (2) Move this circle a grid down or simply move it to x:284 y:308 for a better stack with 01:05:194 (4)
3. 01:07:595 (3) A nazi thing ~ Move the sliderpoint fom the beginning to x:356 y:356 for do a perfect blanket with (2)
4. 01:23:369 (3) Remove the clap from the end of this slider , since it's not following your hitsound patterns and sounds a bit bad
5. 02:10:006 (2) The NC from (1) obviusly should be here , since the voice/music change here . Also , will follow much better your NC patterns
6. 02:33:324 (3) Move this slider a bit down , or simply move it to x:272 y:140 , because the tail from (1) is touching the beginning of (3) . Don't forget to fix the spacing with
   the next notes please
7. 02:41:897 (4) This custom clap doesn't sounds very well with the music , try to remove this clap from the middle of the slider
8. 02:53:899 (Inherited point/Green line) Move it to 02:54:070 , since the last Finish it's totally necessary because the music need it

1. 00:17:529 (6) Move this slider , 1 grid up or simply move it to x:56 y:208 for a better blanket with (5)
2. 00:37:933 (x) What about to put a circle here ? It's a normal diff, you can do it . Also , follow very good the music
3. 01:15:139 (3) For a better flow , really . Move the second sliderpoint to x:392 y:192 with (4)
4. 01:23:712 (3) Remove the Finish from this circle , since for consistency you should do it . Also , it doesn't sounds very well .
5. 01:46:516 (x) What about to put a circle here ? It's a normal diff, with a circle here , the flow will be much better . Also , follow very well the voice
6. 02:09:320 (1,2,3,4) Fix the spacing in this notes , since it's totally inconsistent in these notes
7. 02:27:837 (1) Remove the New Combo from this slider , since it's totally unnecessary or do you have any special reason ?
8. 02:42:754 (x) Same as 00:37:933 (x)
9. 02:53:899 (x) You should put a circle with a Finish here , like Easy diff
10. 02:53:899 (Inherited point/Green line) Move it to 02:54:070 , since the last Finish it's totally necessary because the music need it

1. 00:20:101 (5) You're ignoring a note here. You should put a circle here, follows perfectly the music
2. 00:27:131 (3) What about to put a Finish in the beginning of this slider ? , since here start the first kiai time and the music highlights
3. 00:46:163 (9) The NC should be here , because perfectly the voice/music change here . And , then remove the NC from 00:47:020 (1)
4. 00:56:450 (6) This reverse , doesn't looks and flows very well . What about to rotate this slider a bit ? . Something like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:16:511 (8) The combo looks very long . Put a NC in this slider to fix that please
6. 02:10:006 (3,4) The spacing between these two notes is very closed. Try to fix the spacing between these two notes please
7. 02:41:554 (8) Same as 01:16:511 (8)
8. 02:53:899 (x) You should put a circle with a Finish here , like Easy diff
9. 02:53:899 (Inherited point/Green line) Move it to 02:54:070 , since the last Finish it's totally necessary because the music need it

That's all for me too . Good Luck with this project , the map looks very good , but just try to improve with your combos . Anyways , the map it's fine

1. As far as know, maximum size of SB elements is 640x480. (It can be a bit bigger for scrolling images, tho). So, yeah, consult someone about the SB, probably you'll have to fix it.
2. Your colours are cute, but they don't really fit with the BG. Try to use something different and more suitable. For example, try my colours!
   
   Colours

   
   

   Combo1 : 192,71,138
   Combo2 : 147,204,225
   Combo3 : 115,117,202
   SliderBorder : 200,200,200

   [/url]
3. That'd be better to keep kiais consistent. At least between easier diffs. Try to keep kiais the same between Easy and Normal / Hard and Insane. It'll make your mapset more reasonable.
4. This skin is really, really awesome. if it's yours - you're a great skin maker! If it isn't, credit the guy who made it!
5. 01:59:032 - you can try Soft sampleset here. It'll fit better with this part of the song, try it!

1. You have some empty parts before kiais. It's not a big deal for us, but HP Drain 3 makes it really hard for beginners! Think about poor newbies and reduce HP by one tick!
2. 00:23:016 (1,2) - nazi - doesn't looks/flows good here. After 00:20:272 (2) - this slider looks kinda messy and I'd prefer to see something else here. How about making it a little bit more interesting by changing direction of your flow. Example
3. 00:30:560 (1,2) - it happens to a few of your combos, they're much shorter than the rest of combos. It's because you're following vocals, I guess. Try to solve this problem somehow. For example, you can follow both music and vocals in your comboing, it'll make your patterns more understandable and consistent!
4. 01:09:652 (1) - c'mon, it's just 20 seconds of empty space! I'm sure that beginners will be bored here, try to map some more, beginners would be happy to play more of your cute patterns!
5. 01:52:174 (2,3,4) - nazi - well, the placement/shaping here looks a little bit random. It's not bad, but we can improve it! Example
6. 01:59:032 - since this is the slower part of the song you could make it a bit easier. So, beginners would be able to feel some difference between kiai and calm part of the map. Try to use more 2/1 sliders, skip some minor 1/1 beats, make it a bit more 2/1! Let players have some rest on this part!
   
   That's a solid diff. It's a bit boring because of consistent 1/1 rhythm, so fix it and you get a really, really great diff!

1. AR seems to be pretty low, try to use AR5 and OD/HP 4. It'll make the diff more balanced and playable + it's recommended settings, and they're common for maps like this one.
2. Hitsounds there are not as awesome, as they were on the [Easy]. Some important beats are ignored. For example: 00:32:617 - 00:33:989 - and so on.
3. Try to use more 1/2 beats at least for kiai times, this diff's rhyhm sounds too similar with the [Easy] diff. :< Try to add more circles and sliders in parts like 01:18:397 - we can clearly hear a beat here. Or, you can place some circles on beats like 01:40:000 - to follow vocals. We can clearly hear some vocals here! So, go and make it a little bit more enjoyable for average-players, you can do it!
4. 01:14:796 (2,3,4,1) - is it a spacing mistake or.. anyway, I have nothing against bigger DS for kiais, but please, make it readable and try to make it as neat as possible!
   Note: 01:45:659 (3,4,1) - same here. It's a spacing mistake.
   
   It's just your [Easy] with harder settings and minor thythm improvements. Try to make it a little bit more interesting, I know, you can!

1. 01:00:051 (7) - consider adding a new combo there. it feels much longer than your regular combos and it bbreaks your comboing!
2. 01:15:653 (5,6,7) - this pattern doesn't flows good, imp. What if we try to re-arrange it a bit?
   
   Flow/rhythm improvements

   
   
3. 01:18:397 (5,6,7,8) - not on a [Hard] diff, please. Such things are too hard to play. You stack 1/2 and 1/4 beats, it's hard to understand and read such patterns. Please, unstack thm to make this pattern more playable!
   Note: 02:36:582 (1,2,3,4) - 02:42:068 (2,3,4,5) - 02:47:555 (6,7,8,9) - same here. Please apply/reject this suggestion for every similar pattern to make map more consistent.
4. 01:38:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - feels a little bit too long, try to add a new combo on (6) to solve this problem!
5. 02:10:006 (3,4,5) - actually, spacing here is pretty confusing. Try to make it a little bit more consistent, so players will be able to understand your patterns easier.
6. 02:20:979 (6,1) - try to move NC from (1) to (6). It'll fit with the song much better and it'll make your patterns more consistent. Don't forget to put NC on 02:23:722 (9) - as well!
   
   The diff itself is cool, it could have some more jumps to be more interesting and it could be a bit more playable. But after a few more mods you'll get an amazing and enjoyable diff!

1. Ahhh, increase OD by one tick. I'm sure that [Insane] diff should be a little bit more challenging!
2. I'm not a fan of your jumps, they're kinda random here.For example: 00:38:790 (4,5,6) - reflect nothing in music vocals. Try to point out important parts of vocals/music with jumps, don't just place them randomly whenever you feel like placing them! Think about playability of the diff!
3. Alsmost the same with your streams, they should actually FIT with music. If there's no beat, there shouldn't be a circle as well. Now check some of your streams like 00:47:534 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it's overmapped.
   
   Right now there're two important problems. Jumps and streams, try to make them more fitting and playable. Players should feel your jumps, don't place them randomly! I'm begging you, please, work on them more.

Best of luck and happy mapping!

-Bakari- wrote:

1. As far as know, maximum size of SB elements is 640x480. (It can be a bit bigger for scrolling images, tho). So, yeah, consult someone about the SB, probably you'll have to fix it.

[Normal]
AR seems to be pretty low, try to use AR5 and OD/HP 4. It'll make the diff more balanced and playable + it's recommended settings, and they're common for maps like this one.
Hitsounds there are not as awesome, as they were on the [Easy]. Some important beats are ignored. For example: 00:32:617 - 00:33:989 - and so on.
Try to use more 1/2 beats at least for kiai times, this diff's rhyhm sounds too similar with the [Easy] diff. :< Try to add more circles and sliders in parts like 01:18:397 - we can clearly hear a beat here. Or, you can place some circles on beats like 01:40:000 - to follow vocals. We can clearly hear some vocals here! So, go and make it a little bit more enjoyable for average-players, you can do it!
01:14:796 (2,3,4,1) - is it a spacing mistake or.. anyway, I have nothing against bigger DS for kiais, but please, make it readable and try to make it as neat as possible!
Note: 01:45:659 (3,4,1) - same here. It's a spacing mistake.

It's just your [Easy] with harder settings and minor thythm improvements. Try to make it a little bit more interesting, I know, you can!