1. Frey's Insane (4.75 stars, 372 notes)
2. Hard (3.02 stars, 215 notes)
3. Insane (4.33 stars, 322 notes)
4. Normal (1.88 stars, 130 notes)

vahn10 wrote:

BPM:165
Offset:201

sjoy wrote:

From M4M
你要明白一定随着难度提升 4围越来越大顶多是一样 。不可能出现越来越低的情况
KIAI 部分高难度建议跟着VOCAL 红线起没问题 打起来也顺畅
Easy:
这个E有点厉害阿E的4围有点高啊 当N都可以了第一次搞没调准
强烈建议CS2 HP3 OD2~3 AR3~4 SV1.0 DS1.0 好
EN难度变速真是作死全部改成1.0 <fix
打开AIMOD把上面提示过远过近的都改了
00:20:564 (1,2,3) - 不需要叠<fix
00:22:382 (4,5) - ^ <fix
00:24:564 (2) - 最后不要放在 00:22:746 (5) - 位置上<fix
00:24:928 (3,4) - 不需要叠<fix
00:32:201 这段太空了 建议添加物件<fix
00:38:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 单点过多建议一些合并成滑条<fix
KIAI开头节奏有点错误 应该是红线起的节奏<fix
Normal:
CS居然比E低？？？还是难度弄反了？
还是一样 不需要叠 就不重复了 折返滑条建议最多2次
00:14:382 (4) - N难度不建议用4分拍滑条 其他就不指出了用来代替连打的，我不是太会做EN。。
00:44:215 太空建议补上物件<fix
00:53:291 (3,4) - 造成视觉错误<大失误=A=fix
Hard:
CS 建议4 OD建议6好
00:31:473 (6) - 太多折返了建议分2次<fix
00:34:382 (5) - 建议用2分拍<fix
00:59:655 (1,1,1) - 没必要用8分拍其实这个地方不太会做啦，不过还是做了点修改
01:22:746 (7) - NC<fix
01:23:791 (10) - 怀疑摆错位置 有么。。
Insane:
00:01:655 (4) - 感觉滑条节奏有问题 建议改成个2个2分拍滑条节奏是对了但感觉不太好打了，还是fix了。。
00:08:201 (3) - 折返太长跟着BGM来的
00:19:837 (6) - ^^
00:44:019这段太空了 不适合高难度 建议BREAK掉break掉、、我觉得这样也行，不过还是再看看
01:09:110 (7) - 折返太长虽然说不上理由但是感觉也只能这么做。。再看看
01:11:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 不适合连打还好吧。。

总的来说问题有点多._.希望有待加强吧

mintong89 wrote:

你好Hi~~

黑: 普通的建议
红: 不符合规则 / 需要考虑下

[General]
在Song Setup -> Design 去掉 "Enable Countdown", "Widescreen Support" 和 "Letterbox during breaks". 这些对这图都没用的好的
Offset 太快了, 建议 -10好

[Insane]

00:00:201 (1) - 弯曲的slider怎么样, 感觉一开始就僵硬的slider不好fix
00:04:382 - & 00:04:473 - 有音吧 可以放note啊 怎么你忽略了fix
00:06:019 (1,2) - 没包好没想包来着，还是fix
00:06:564 (2,3,4) - 这三个的间隔不同...一定要相同的fix
00:07:746 - 有音居然没发现
00:15:837 (1,1,1) - 这个不用NC吧...跟着背景的3，2，1来的，不过竟然这么说了那就fix吧
00:25:837 (1) - ^这里是个跳欸，我听人说有跳的话还是nc，暂时先保留啦我不是很懂再问问
00:48:746 (1) - 我觉得这spinner太短 建议换成slider我个人蛮喜欢这个的，和背景有个电子音也比较合拍，滑调的话拉不出好看的._.先这样吧
00:56:564 (5) - 不美就算你这么说我也不会啊;w;

[Hard]

00:00:928 (2,4) - 没包好没发现这里再包=A=fix
00:10:746 (1,2) - 没叠好啊
00:24:019 (2,3) - 这个太靠近了吧...按照ds1.2排了下（其实没多少变化啦:P)
00:27:473 (2) - CTRL+G? 这样比较好flow虽然不知道什么是flow，但是fix
00:44:564 (1,1,1) - 感觉不好fix
00:54:746 (3,1,2,3) - 没叠好...叠好的吧。。。

N E 还好其实我是想叫人帮我看看NE比较多啦因为不会做;w;
感觉NC用太乱 不均匀...放得不好我也不知道怎么放。。。
排发还行 就是有些僵硬...

BakaHuang wrote:

General

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/57754# 你可以从那里拿个clap的音效 我觉得应该不错..
这歌比较带感 用原始音效就比较平淡好我先问下别人

Timing

怪不得我打起来那么奇怪 原来timing没对准 所有难度的offest调整成228 然后记得resnap all notes 在timing里
我也不会测所以别人mod时候说是多少我就改多少啦;w;
Easy

00:00:191(1,2)-(1)的开头加个finish 尾上加clap
00:01:645(1,2)-时间轴上位置换一下 然后(1)-add nc 排版也调整一下 音效加法和上面一样
00:20:554(1)-add finish
00:27:100(2)-把(2)放到(1)的上面去 因为之前的蓝slider有点遮挡
00:27:827(3,4,5,6)-不要放在同一个位置下note 摆开 然后不要被之前或之后的note遮挡住
00:35:463(1)-add finish
remap
不行了..在timing不准的情况下无法mod 你调整好timing后我来recheck 然后easy很多节奏都下的不好 多跟着歌词走 需要remap一下

楼上居然还让你offest-10 是根本不懂怎么测把

mintong89 wrote:

我错了 是+10 打错字对不起 ;w;没事，我在改就好了(｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ

1. Kiai-Time start at 00:49:682- ?

1. 00:30:773 (3,4) - How about this rhythm?
   
2. 00:44:228 (1) - start at 00:43:864
3. 00:49:318 (1,2) - it is better not to stack
4. 00:50:773 (3,4) - ^
5. 00:58:409 (6) - delete. instead the following
6. 00:58:773 (1) - 00:58:409~01:00:955

1. 01:08:228 (5) - end at 01:08:773
2. 01:11:318- add a note (become difficult?)
3. 01:12:591 (5) - move to 01:12:409

1. 00:46:046 (3) - NC
2. 00:47:500 (5) - NC
3. 00:48:773 (4) - move to x:214 y:139
4. 00:49:137- add a note
5. 00:49:318~ SV is too high, for hard-diff
6. 00:52:409- add a note
7. 00:53:137 (1,2,3) - uniform angle
8. 00:54:409 (1,2,3) - finsh don't suit
9. 00:56:046 (4,5,6,1) - how about this?
   
10. 01:06:046 (4,5) - finsh don't suit
11. 01:08:773- add a note
12. 01:16:409 (1,2,3,4,5) - it is better to fix awkward position. for example the following
    
    SPOILER

    

    200,239,76409,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    352,191,76773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    200,137,77137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    352,89,77500,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    200,35,77864,1,0,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:16:591 (7) - NC
2. 00:34:591 (2) - move to 00:34:682
3. 00:54:773 (5) - NC
4. 00:55:500 (13) - NC. Instead, remove NC of 00:56:046 (1) -
5. 01:24:591 (15) - NC

BakaHuang wrote:

General

突然发现文件夹里有个320k的mp3 删了留下了作案痕迹，失误=A=

Easy

00:08:955(break)-拖到这边开始break 鼠标移到break上会有拉伸箭头太感谢了啊我就是想做这个但是不会
00:31:046(3)-折返时间缩短到蓝线上fix
00:31:864(4,5)-remove notes, add slider from 00:31:682(4)- to 00:32:228(4)-fix
00:44:228(1)-the spinner starts from 00:43:864-fix
00:49:137(1)-~00:54:409(8)-节奏差不多按下面这样下

01:10:409(1)-~01:18:228(x)-这里的节奏下法


01:18:7739(1,1,1,1,2)-在easy里不要随意改变间距 最后整张图的间距都相等
File里有个open aimod 间距问题他会调出来告诉你的
^全fix

Normal

normal也是 打开aimod 看下间距问题 normal也差不多需要等距
00:34:409(5)-去掉个折返fix
00:37:318(6)-^fix
00:58:773(2)-这个slider应该拉到00:59:864- 这是跟着bg下的不是vocal，感觉暂时还是按照原样
01:00:955(1)-应该挪到前面的红线上 这边到01:05:500(5)-的节奏下法

01:08:228(5)-这里加个note 把slider移到后面的红线上
01:10:409(1)-~01:15:864(1)-节奏下法

后面一段空白的地方和easy一样下法 跟着鼓点走就行 note or slider both ok
re..remap
Hard

00:14:591(3,1)-这边间距太近 不如后面的slider(1,2,3,4)-的始端行成个正方形的样子
00:35:500(1)-这里不要放在前面4notes下面 有点遮挡
00:37:864(8)-这里加个note,slider往后移到红线上
00:39:318(4)-add note
00:49:137(1)-add note
00:50:409(5)-移到后面的红线上
全部remap过了._.好累
跟着vocal走比较好

还有一个间距问题比较严重 刚开始的话还是开着DS作图比较好 就相等间隔的note最好放的距离也相等 这个是针对包括hard和以下的难度我以后注意;w;

稍微说了点节奏的问题 改好后我再教你排版

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
Thank you for M4M req

[General]

1. Kiai-Time start at 00:49:682- ? yep, i think there is a problem with kiai time。but not in 00:49:682- , but 00:49:137

[Easy]

1. 00:30:773 (3,4) - How about this rhythm?ur right._.
   
2. 00:44:228 (1) - start at 00:43:864fix
3. 00:49:318 (1,2) - it is better not to stacksorry i did a remap for this part, so it's completely different now. but i think ur right
4. 00:50:773 (3,4) - ^^
5. 00:58:409 (6) - delete. instead the followingfix
6. 00:58:773 (1) - 00:58:409~01:00:955

fix

[Normal]

1. 01:08:228 (5) - end at 01:08:773ye, did some fix now
2. 01:11:318- add a note (become difficult?)added now(｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ
3. 01:12:591 (5) - move to 01:12:409sorry i've did some remap there, so it's different now

[Hard]

1. 00:46:046 (3) - NCfix
2. 00:47:500 (5) - NCfix
3. 00:48:773 (4) - move to x:214 y:139fix
4. 00:49:137- add a notefix
5. 00:49:318~ SV is too high, for hard-diffeeeeeee，lot of work to do......try to fi it QAQ
6. 00:52:409- add a note FIX
7. 00:53:137 (1,2,3) - uniform angle
8. 00:54:409 (1,2,3) - finsh don't suitok removed
9. 00:56:046 (4,5,6,1) - how about this?saiyo
   
10. 01:06:046 (4,5) - finsh don't suitsorry i am poor at hitsounding
11. 01:08:773- add a notedone
12. 01:16:409 (1,2,3,4,5) - it is better to fix awkward position. for example the following
    
    SPOILER

    

    200,239,76409,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    352,191,76773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    200,137,77137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    352,89,77500,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    200,35,77864,1,0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]

1. 00:16:591 (7) - NCok
2. 00:34:591 (2) - move to 00:34:682why.( ˘•ω•˘ )
3. 00:54:773 (5) - NCok
4. 00:55:500 (13) - NC. Instead, remove NC of 00:56:046 (1) - ok
5. 01:24:591 (15) - NCfinished yey. it take me whole afternoon to fix ;w;

I think that short reverse sliders are too many
~Good Luck~

1. you used 1366x768 BG. so check 'Widescreen support' in song setup,Design.

1. 00:03:137 (1) - Finish
2. 00:27:137 (2) - try this
   

   128,168,27137,2,0,B|240:128|240:192|368:152,1,240

   SPOILER

   
3. 00:30:773 (3) - NC
4. 00:31:682 (4) - finish on end of slider.
5. 00:45:682 (1) - start on 00:45:318.(end time is not change)
6. 00:52:046 (5) - NC?
7. 01:09:137 (1,1) - so close for Newbie player.
8. 01:12:954 (5) - NC
9. 01:24:773 (1) - start on 01:26:046

1. 00:00:955 (2) - clap,finish on first of slider.
2. 00:03:864 (2) - finish on first of slider
3. 00:23:864 (1,2) - perfectly overlap on 00:22:773 (5). (256,248)
4. 00:47:500 (1) - finish
5. 00:56:591 (3) - it's maybe hard for normal player. and NC
6. 01:01:500 (1) - remove NC
7. 01:02:228 (2) - NC

1. 00:38:228 (9) - NC
2. 00:43:137 (5) - ^

TaMul wrote:

m4m.sorry for late mod

[General]

1. you used 1366x768 BG. so check 'Widescreen support' in song setup,Design.done

[Easy]
i can see overlaped note in Easy Diff. It's not good for Easy Player. don't use overlap.try to fix this ;w;

1. 00:03:137 (1) - Finishfix
2. 00:27:137 (2) - try this
   

   128,168,27137,2,0,B|240:128|240:192|368:152,1,240

   SPOILER

   
3. 00:30:773 (3) - NCfix
4. 00:31:682 (4) - finish on end of slider.ok
5. 00:45:682 (1) - start on 00:45:318.(end time is not change)ok
6. 00:52:046 (5) - NC?umm...maybe yes
7. 01:09:137 (1,1) - so close for Newbie player.really (;w;)just make the spinner longer
8. 01:12:954 (5) - NCfix
9. 01:24:773 (1) - start on 01:26:046ummm,keep

[Normal]

1. 00:00:955 (2) - clap,finish on first of slider. ok
2. 00:03:864 (2) - finish on first of sliderdone
3. 00:23:864 (1,2) - perfectly overlap on 00:22:773 (5). (256,248)fix
4. 00:47:500 (1) - finishfix
5. 00:56:591 (3) - it's maybe hard for normal player. and NCummm...i have no idea about how normal player think;w;but NC
6. 01:01:500 (1) - remove NCfix
7. 01:02:228 (2) - NCfix

[Hard]

1. 00:38:228 (9) - NCfix
2. 00:43:137 (5) - ^fix

ok that's all...

-Gamu- wrote:

Hi~ Sorry for the late ;w;

General request from http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/149494

[Artist]

●黒崎 真音⇛ 黒崎真音
Don't create a space. This is correct for most sites.

[Title]

●UNDER/SHAFT (TV size) ⇛ UNDER/SHAFT (TV Size)
Please to capitalize the "s" of "size". Most maps are this.

[Source]

●Jormungand -Perfect Order- ⇛ Jormungand PERFECT ORDER
This is correct in the wiki.


[Tags]

●Add "ヨルムンガンド"
It is possible to add to the tags. I recommend that you add. Recently, many maps would have been added (Various anime).

●Add "opening"
Because it is the opening song.


good luck~ xD

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hi o3o Random mod!really thx to your modﾟ(ﾟノω ；`）ﾟ

[Easy]
00:00:228 - Try this rhythm?ok

00:30:773 (1) - Flip it like this:
I don't like how it's reverse is being overlapped by the previous slider's tail sorry i am confused about how a such ez diff to fit a song..so this is a bad work;w;
01:13:500 (2,3,4,5) - Hmm this might be a little to hard for new beginners to handle how it can be... ok fix
01:19:500 (1) - Remove NCfix
01:20:955 (1) - ^fix

[Normal]

1. Sliders look pretty fast, I'd suggest trying to lower the slider velocity to 1.20, but this is imo.hmm not change cuz it will be a big work...i think 1.4 is ok(maybe
2. AR - 1

fix
00:44:955 (2) - Add clap to the head.fix
00:46:409 (2) - ^^
01:04:773 (5) - NC^
01:10:773 (2,3) - Stack?no cuz i think it's ez for read(if it's in a harder diff,but for normal i an not quite sure

Looks nice

[Hard]
00:14:773 (1) - Add finish
00:20:228 (3) - This might be tricky, but try dding a finish to the tail of this slider at 00:20:591.
00:33:682 (4) - Add clap to the tail.
00:34:773 (7) - ^
00:35:500 (1) - ^ On the head.
00:36:228 (3) - ^
00:38:228 (1) - ^ On the tail.
00:38:773 (3) - ^ On the tail.
00:44:591 (1) - Add finish
00:44:954 (2) - Use clap.
00:46:409 (2) - ^
00:47:864 (2) - ^
00:48:592 (3) - ^
00:57:318 (7) - NCfix
01:21:682 (5) - Add clap to the tail.
01:22:773 (1) - ^ On the head.
01:23:500 (3) - ^ On the head.
about hitsound problem all fix
[Insane]
...Sorry I can't mod this ;_;

Overall, I'd say this maps looking pretty good! Few more mods and it'll probably be bubbled!
Hope this helps~!

Kenterz9 wrote:

From your request ~

[General]
00:49:137 - Kiai time should start at 00:49:682hold this comment

[Easy]
A little bit messy =/really Q_Q
HP Drain Rate => 2ok
00:43:864 (1,1,1) - Whynot do just one slider which ends at 00:48:228 ?just follow vocal
01:10:409 (1,2) - Delete them for do a mini "break time" after the spinnernice idea
01:18:228 (5,1) - Distance Snapfix

[Normal]
HP Drain Rate => 3ok
00:09:318 (2,3) - Distance snapfix
00:14:409 (4,1) - ^hard for make a shape, so no
00:22:046 (3,4,5) - Hard jumps x/add NC to remind players, no change on placemnet
00:26:046 (5,1) - Distance snapfix
00:31:046 - Add something here, to be logical with the music (and delete / move the sldier)will think about it. in fact it's the best way i can do for there now
00:32:228 (1) - The 1/4 isn't neededmaybe u r right...change to 1/2
00:43:137 (4,1) - Distance Snaplong break there, so i think it's unnecessary
01:06:409 (4,1,2) - Distance Snapfix

[Hard]
00:06:137 (1) - This spiner should start at 00:06:228k
00:30:773 (1) - This slider must ends at 00:31:046not necessary but also ok, so fix
00:35:500 (1,2) - Distance Snapdo some fi there
00:41:500 (2,1) - ^made some change as well
00:42:773 (3,4,1) - It must be at the same place than (1,2)this is also something confused me. in the editor it is stacked, but in game it's not.the way how i pace it now can make a compeletly stack in game....idk why and how to fix this, just left it there
00:43:682 (2) - It must be placed at x:240 y:272ummm...no
01:26:046 (1,2,3) - Maybe a Slider ?come on the notes fit the rhythum

[Insane]
00:07:682 (1,2) - High jump =/forgot the DS just try it and you will find it's a nice flow
00:15:864 (4,5,6) - Distance Snap (5)fix
00:22:773 (7,8,9) - ^ (8)fix

The rest is quite good...
Anyway, Good Luck *u*

Senbon wrote:

Hey, welcome my average mod!

General

SPOILER

Check up with AImod, there are audio lead in and break letterbox problems between all but insane.there's no any problem showed in my computer;w;

Easy

SPOILER

00:57:318 (4) - clap
01:07:500 (2,3) - whistles don't fit
01:08:228 (3) - remove one repeat
01:23:864 (2) - ^ especially since previous slider is only two repeatsfix all

Normal

SPOILER

00:03:864 (2) - this is funny XD;w;
00:34:409 (5) - grid rightok
00:53:682 (4) - bleh, make slider same as 00:54:409 (5)fix
01:07:500 (2,3,4,5,6) - doesn't flow well with rest, change slider to circle for tripletfix

Hard

SPOILER

00:03:137 (3,4) - delete (3) and pull slider to where it was, circle at 00:03:682ok
00:20:228 (3) - a little too over the top 0.0i think it's ok
00:38:228 (1) - end clap?cause i did some change on patterns but forgot to add hitsounds
00:39:864 (6) - beginning clap? ^ i find it weird to stray from the hit sound pattern since it will already change at (7)
00:42:046 (1,2,3,4,1) - stack them a little better)this is also something confused me. in the editor it is stacked, but in game it's not.the way how i pace it now can make a compeletly stack in game....idk why and how to fix this, just left it there
00:57:864 (3) - breaks flow, shorten to white tick and circle at 00:58:228ok
01:08:773 (8) - grid rightfix

Insane

SPOILER

00:37:682 (5) - whistle startfix
00:48:591 (4,5,6) - these jumps are a little ugly, make (5) the same as the others and leave the jump for (6)ur right
00:53:318 (4) - rotate anticlockwise from selection centre by 4ummm...ok
00:55:500 (1) - clockwise, playfield 3 degreesok
01:09:137 (7) - I think these should be used sparingly... i would kick this one since it doesn't fit wellyes many people mentioned this, so i will think of it
01:24:046 (9) - NC?fix
01:25:591 (2) - deletefix

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

你好
看了一下，结果如下：

全局：
opening不用写进tag吧，将artist复制到tag吧，容易找别人说的所以就加了，artist不用加应该也能搜到吧我猜的_(:зゝ∠)_

难度：Easy
先将aimod的问题修复（勾上“chenk distance snap”）一直没勾怪不得什么问题都没有0 0
00:22:955 (4) - 试一下跟 00:21:318 (2) 重叠好
00:45:318 (1) - 在 00:46:409 结束我是跟vocal来的这有点不对
00:47:137 (1) - 提前到 00:46:773 ，然后再00:47:318结束不不不不太好和上面的一起用了也不太好的感觉;w;
00:58:409 (1) - 在 00:59:864 结束，然后在 01:00:773 加一个note其实我自己原来就觉得怪，不过这样该也不太好。。。总之我不会ez啊啊啊啊
01:11:137 (1) - 意义不明不小心删了几个note，fix了
01:18:228 (5,1) - 既然是Easy了，就避免一下半拍吧读作ez写作nm;w;，其实这也只是为了合拍
所以说我不会做这难度啊;w;

难度：Normal
先将aimod的问题修复（勾上“chenk distance snap”）很多我都是按照DS来的，建议让ai mod 吃电视
00:03:864 (2) - 提前到 00:03:994这个地方跟的是鼓哦建议仔细听下
00:48:228 (1) - 在 00:49:137 结束，然后在 00:49:500 加一个note嗯做了些调整

难度：Hard
没有发现

难度：Insane
00:44:591 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 可以的话，做的像正六边形一点没注意是六边形的说，改了


加油，祝早日rank

1. 00:01:682 (3,4) - add Clap

1. 01:06:046 (6,1,2,3) - use distance snap

1. 01:11:137 (3,4) - use distance snap or overlap

1. You should use Distance Snap all in Normal.
   I think that you should clear all it because there are a lot of points where distance is far

1. I suggest that you change Grid Level from 3 to 4.

1. 00:42:228 (2,3,4,1) - overlap

1. 00:43:137 (1,2) - do it symmetrically

this way

overlap terminal and 00:44:591 (1) -

1. 01:06:773 (1) - I suggest that change it in this way

this way

change 01:07:682 (4)
↓↓↓　01:08:228 (7) Ctrl ＋g and overlap initial point and 01:08:046 (5,6)↓↓↓

1. 01:10:773 (2,3) - use Distance Snap

1. I suggest that you change Grid Level from 3 to 4 too.

1. 00:04:409 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - display these carefully using Distance Snap

1. 00:44:591 (7) - change new combo

1. 01:05:318 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -display these carefully using Distance Snap

1. 01:08:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

1. 01:11:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^

1. 01:24:591 (7,1) - do it symmetrically

EnixYuki wrote:

Hi! from my queue

i like ヨルムンガンド so I look forward to doing modding

[Easy]

1. 00:01:682 (3,4) - add Clapsorry i don't think clap make sense

1. 01:06:046 (6,1,2,3) - use distance snapok

1. 01:11:137 (3,4) - use distance snap or overlapi used,but ai mod warn me but yes you are right , change to DS set

[Normal]

1. You should use Distance Snap all in Normal.
   I think that you should clear all it because there are a lot of points where distance is farΣ( ° △ °|||)︴umm...Σ(｀д′*ノ)ノnoooooo....( >﹏<。)ok will remap this

[Hard]

1. I suggest that you change Grid Level from 3 to 4.ok

1. 00:42:228 (2,3,4,1) - overlapthis is also something confused me. in the editor it is stacked, but in game it's not.the way how i pace it now can make a compeletly stack in game....idk why and how to fix this,just left it therewill ask others about this

1. 00:43:137 (1,2) - do it symmetrically

yes nice idea

this way

overlap terminal and 00:44:591 (1) -

1. 01:06:773 (1) - I suggest that change it in this way

changed(｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ

this way

change 01:07:682 (4)
↓↓↓　01:08:228 (7) Ctrl ＋g and overlap initial point and 01:08:046 (5,6)↓↓↓

1. 01:10:773 (2,3) - use Distance Snapi used QAQ

[Insane]

1. I suggest that you change Grid Level from 3 to 4 too.

1. 00:04:409 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - display these carefully using Distance Snapdont mind this >.>

1. 00:44:591 (7) - change new combook

1. 01:05:318 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -display these carefully using Distance Snap=A=

1. 01:08:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^too lazy to move _(:зゝ∠)_

1. 01:11:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^面倒_(:зゝ∠)_

1. 01:24:591 (7,1) - do it symmetricallyfix

End modding in this.
Let's do our best to do ranked each other! yeh lets fight

Eggache0 wrote:

From queue

[General]
有些间隔不久的滑条的弯曲度不要差太多，比如00:20:955 (1,2) - 两个滑条弯的程度不一样看着就有点丑 多用ctrl+CVRGHJ
有时候小弧度的slider把中间点成红点效果会好一点
最后的spinner建议加条绿线把尾巴静音掉好

[Easy]

00:00:228 (1,2,3,4) - clap蛋疼 如果要保留的话把4的clap去掉我也觉的蛋疼啊但是mod说要改，找到理由改回去啦(｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ
00:21:318 (2) - 这在easy里有点难了
00:24:591 (2,4) - 有重叠 不好看
00:50:591 (3,1) - ^
01:02:773 (4,2) - ^
01:17:136 (3,5) - ^
01:23:137 (1,2) - ^
00:52:046 (1,2) - blanket没做好
00:25:682 (4,1) - 建议4和1做blanket 当然需要微调4和前面的note的位置
00:43:864 (1,1,1) - 这仨应该等长啊 奇怪之前听不懂，今天听出来了把节奏改了
00:58:409 (1) - 在01:00:409 - 结束如何hao
01:17:136 (3,4,5,1) - 4和1叠好 5和1ds不对 总之建议把这里重做重做了;w;以上没备注的也都改了

[Normal]
因为nm remap过了所以建议就调着看了
00:15:137 (1,2,3,4) - 做个方形怎么样

SPOILER

336,248,15137,5,8,0:0:0:0:
248,40,15864,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,144,16591,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,344,17318,1,8,0:0:0:0:

00:52:591 (2) - 不要用reverse感觉空了。。。。不是很会下简单的节奏
00:58:228 - 差个音fix
01:02:955 (2,3,4,1) - 这里音乐是这样的吧就算你这么说我也不知道是什么样啊0 0
01:07:864 (5,6,7,8) - 感觉不是很好嗯找时间改下
01:11:318 (3) - ds
01:22:409 (6,7) - 叠好

[Hard]

00:15:137 (1,2,3,4) - 234都叠上了1却没有 统一一下
00:27:864 (3) - crtl+g这是ds的选择
00:57:500 (2) - 1grid leftk
01:04:409 (2,3) - ……3居然不是红线起remap
01:04:955 (3,4,5) - 叠好fix
01:12:046 (6,7) - ^好
01:18:228 (1,2,3,4) - 可能会花点工夫 但还是^。。。。我已经尽力了
01:12:955 (1,2,1) - 难读这是按照ds来的。。。一般这种情况应该怎么搞说是话我也不太会，先暂时这样吧

[Insane]

00:01:500 (3,5) - 叠好对
00:09:500 (3,2) - ^叠
00:18:046 (2,3) - 可以多一个reverse这个地方严格来说我是更了背景音了不过节奏下的太蠢可能remap掉
00:26:773 (1,2,3) - 从右上方开始是不是好一点 比如交换一下1和3的位置队
00:32:955 (2,3) - 有点空 后面都塞满了啊跟的是vocal。。。感觉还是不乱下其实是没梗
00:42:591 (1,2,3,4,5) - flow有点怪之前有人说漏音了，改了下改蠢了，现在改成方形
00:47:864 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 难读麻吉。。。这我要好好想想
00:49:318 - 为啥这里总是slider尾 不舒服
00:49:500 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 感觉和音乐有点错位 不过梗本身好评我试过和音乐合拍，那时候的感觉是还没这个好打
00:51:864 (2) - 00:52:046 - 有个音 fix
01:03:318 (4,5,6) - 调整一下5的位置吧好
01:11:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这也太随便了吧……都怪串难摆_(:зゝ∠)_有空改了这不改问题不大吧
01:15:318 (6,7,8) - 感觉五连比较好保留
01:15:318 (6,2) - 叠好fix

有的地方很不错 主要还是新人感有点强 注意一下美观（比如没叠好）和flow 加油

Sieg wrote:

Hello

General:
Easy have different combo colors is there any real reason for this?
Guides you should read:
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Music_Theory
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy
sorry as for i am a brginner of mapping, i have no idea about these

Easy:
SV is too high for easy
15 sec break after 5 sec play on start is frustrating, consider to map something here
00:22:955 (4) - if you map with snapping to lyrics map with snapping to lyrics, end this on 00:23:500 (5) -
00:49:137 (1,2,3) - clean this pattern (remove overlaps) http://puu.sh/4xwS5.jpg
01:15:864 (1,3) - ^
01:18:228 (5,1) - ^
01:23:137 (1,2) - ^
01:11:864 (3,1) - try to make blanket from this
I don't like this easy, SV is too high, rhythm is not that simple, some patterns looks messy.
k, i will remap the whole staff later

Normal:
00:48:228 (1,1) - http://puu.sh/4xxCZ.jpg this rhythm will be better to play and more naturalfix
00:58:773 (5,6,7) - fix blanket heredone
This diff is alright.

Hard:
00:56:773 (6,2) - unstuck thisok remapped there
01:13:500 (1,1,1,1) - remove nc spamfix
Some patterns are way to clunky but rhythm is good. And this diff also plays good.

Insane:
Nothing really wrong, plays well

That's all. Good Luck.

wonders wrote:

hi
比我一开始看到的好多了~
[insane]
00:01:682 http://puu.sh/4FDnK.jpg试试这个怎么样好
00:07:173 http://puu.sh/4FDq9.jpg~对
00:14:773 flow 不好这个我看行
00:22:409 往下面来点这是为了blanket，不过拉远了
00:23:318 delete为了和后面一致
00:26:955 flow不好 1-3-2这样好一点这个梗是抄的，我觉得不错
00:38:955 这个位置对准中间那个4比较好
00:40:046 避免无意义的四方形，不好看打起来还ok，没什么问题感觉
00:42:737 这个逆手跳再考虑一下我在想下
后面间距稍微有点大，不过问题不大，你可以看一下flashback和shotgun senorita这两张图来学习下大间距跳
[hard]
节奏没啥问题，只是note与note之间比较散乱，但是note又在一个1/4版面扎堆出现，DS在摆比较规整的版面的时候很有用，可以试着用DS辅助排hard对，之后注意这问题
http://puu.sh/4FIjk.jpg
[normal]
00:11:137 与前面的3靠太近
normal摆的“正”一点反而比较好~ 比如00:29:682这个四方就歪掉了，其他地方你自查吧，多摆一点正三角什么的就行了
[easy]
fine~