Asphyxia wrote:

o/

hi

Try to leave at least a 1/2 beat between a note and a spinner.

Dainesl wrote:

Taiko mod.

General

I think the diff settings are too high, but if you really want to keep them quite high, then do put the HP Drain on the Oni down to 6, at least.

Turn letterbox off on the Oni.

Muzukashii

00:49:625 (130) - Maybe remove this?
Hmm, why not, sounds better

01:46:110 (304) - This object's end isn't snapped, fix this.
See note at the end

02:04:625 (352) - Maybe remove this?
yup same

02:40:485 (458) - Again, this object's end isn't snapped.
See note at the end

Other than those slider end things, really nice muzu

Oni

Okay, there are six instances of two notes on the exact same moment, or dualclicking. These are: 00:49:742 (194,193) - 00:51:617 (203,202) - 01:55:367 (279,280) - 02:02:867 (315,314) - 02:04:742 (323,324) - and 02:06:617 (333,332) - , all of which are unrankable. Fix these ASAP because this will hurt your chances of ranking later on.
Dohoho, my apologies, these are supposed to be 1/6, looks like someone resnapped stuff without alerting me :3 Happens, no worries, Priti

01:00:992 (258,1) - The Taiko Ranking Criteria guidelines say this:

Try to leave at least a 1/2 beat between a note and a spinner.

Remove 258 to fix this.
I was wondering if it wasn't the other way but owell. fixed.


02:15:992 (391,1) - ^

02:40:485 (122) - Object's end isn't snapped, fix this.
See note at the end

02:53:492 (27,1) - see second suggestion.
See note at the end

Apologies for short mod, couldn't really find much to say.

1. 00:03:688 (1) - red tick 1/2 sliders suck balls. They emphasize the weak red tick and weaken the strong white tick. You're working against the music here.
2. 00:04:274 (2) - same thing for blue tick 1/4 sliders
3. 00:05:328 - why do you keep stuff like this unmapped. Add notes when there are notable beats in the music
4. 00:07:438 (5) - redtick1/2slider
5. 00:13:063 (6,2) - ugly overlap, keep your map clean and organized unless you really know what you're doing, which is not the case yet. Kyshiro can use overlaps well. Try checking some of his maps
6. 00:25:836 (2,2) - If stuff looks bad in the editor, chances are it#s shit when playing as well
7. 00:28:063 (6,1) - Zz
8. 00:34:625 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - don't put 1/4s here, wait until they're audible enough to be justified, especially with your stupid spacing. In fact don't use 1/4 before 00:36:735 -
9. But after saying the above thing. That's the part where your map becomes extreeemely inconsistent. Did you even know yourself what you mapped when you were working on this? Sometimes you map vocals, sometimes that synth thing. And you ignore the drums completely
10. 00:59:235 (1) - 1/8 sliders pls
11. 01:03:219 (3) - just fix all the redtick sliders, would you?
12. 01:08:610 (5,6) - No. This is much harder to anticipate than you'd think because it's so rarely done in mapping. Your map isn't gimmicky or anything and you don't need to put such weird stacks after streams
13. 01:10:016 (6,1) - compare this spacing to 01:10:953 (5,1) - this spacing. This is partly reason for this map being bad. Make your map consistent ffs
14. 01:26:891 (3,4) - ugly
15. 01:29:703 (2,3) - Yeah this is TOTALLY NOT WEIRD TO PLAY. Jeez. Ending a slider on a blue tick is okay, but thenyou should put something on the white tick after it. Add a note 01:30:172 - here. I'd also reccomend to delete the current (3) and to add a note on the red tick on 01:30:406 - This plays much more smoothly. The vocals are off anyway, trying too hard to follow them is rarely wise
16. 01:39:078 - also stuff like this. MAP THIS.
17. 01:54:547 (3,5) - ugly overlap
18. 02:04:156 (4) - more redtick sliders pls
19. 02:06:031 (4) - thanks
20. 02:06:969 (1,2) - Zzz
21. 02:47:985 (1) - why is this a spinner and not objects?
22. 02:51:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - wow. just make every slider of the same length, so the player can realize what he's doing
23. 03:01:695 (8) - bluetick bad slider
24. 03:13:649 (7) - ^

Zarerion wrote:

assuming you did "apply" my mod, you're a hopeless case

Lissette wrote:

[Seikatu's Medium]
I just have 2 complains in this one:
1- Combos are too short, you can perfectly merge two combos to make it longer, for example make a single combo these ones: (NOTE: The kiai-sections I find it perfectly find how combos are set, because it fits the music very well)
00:02:985 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -
00:06:735 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
00:10:485 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
00:13:297 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
So you can have an idea if what I mean fixd
2- If you distribute break-times better, you wont need 3, with 2 is more than enough for this difficulty, just like BounceBabe's Beginner diff nope :w
Apart from that this difficulty its pretty good, I liked how you mapped the kiai sections.

Lissette wrote:

Hi~ from #modreqs people respond from there? omg

[Mayhem]
00:16:461 (3,4,5,6,1) - inconsistent spacing That's because I take the slider ball hitbox into account, but fixed.
00:31:110 (1) - The next note after the spinner comes to soon, and due to the spinner lacking sound, its hard to hit the next note properly. Try finishing the spinner at 00:32:281 - plays better and sounds the same this way okie
00:37:203 (1,2,3,4,5) - make the spacing consistent between the notes in this combo it is, maybe the fact that it's rotated confused you?
00:38:610 (6) - Either stack this on prev note, or place it farther, because this sudden change of spacing after the previous notes that has larger spacing compared to the rest of the map, feels really awkward put a circle between them so it's even
01:09:195 (1,2) - According to your combo pattern in this section, you need to remove new combo on 1 and add it on 2 oh woops
01:27:594 (4,5,6) - Stack properly or space even, because if this is meant to be an anti-jump, doesn't really fits and looks more like a mistake okie
01:35:797 (5) - Remove the reverse, and add notes at these points: 01:36:149 - 01:36:266 - 01:36:500 - , sounds better yis
01:46:110 (1) - Same as 00:31:110 (1) - fix'd
02:03:219 (1,2,3) - Wrong spacing meh.
02:05:094 (1,2,3) - Same meh.
02:08:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Space even oki
02:53:668 (1) - Reverse arrow is hiding, and it looks more like a single note, make it more visible using "reverse selection" maybe, and stacking again rotated by 180
02:55:016 (1) - This 1/8 jump is wrong for me you call that a jump? ._.
I didn't understand your combo pattern at some parts, was going to point them because I thought I got it, but at the end I didn't, so decided not to point any combo suggestion, but a general suggestion: Try to make your combos even along the difficulty, if you are following the vocals or the music be consistent with it
Overall I feel like this diff is a bit messy, not sure if this is just style.

[Advanced]
First thing I noticed, too many break-times for one of the harder difficulties... Actually, I would say are too many even if it were the Easier one, but anyways feels kinda lazy, I don't think a map needs that many time of breaks. I think is enough with with these two: 01:17:985 - and 02:32:985 - okie~
00:24:078 (5) - remove this note, since you are following the vocals in this part, sounds kinda weird she doesn't say "by", she says "by a" and then the slider afterwards is for the "single word"
00:39:547 (3,4) - wrong spacing between these two, if its meant to be a jump, it's not readable fixed
01:07:438 (1) - add a repeat oki
01:08:610 (5) - longer 1/4 beat, I actually think that the slider doesn't fit that part nah
03:02:047 (1,1,1,1,1) - why? you didn't do this in the rest of the map for this part or in Mayhem so I don't get why you did it here you mean the spaced streams? they are even more spaced in Mayhem, but the NC spam is to make it more drain friendly.
Needs to improve a bit more, specially because needs those breaks to be mapped >.>

1. AR4 and OD/HP3? Shouldn't a beginner level be at least 1-2 lower on each category? Also, maybe you might want to make the CS Smaller so the 1/1s don't overlap each other in strange ways. The small gap would be much more readable instead of having the ends touch like they currently do.
2. 00:19:383 (2) - maybe make this slider start at 00:19:852 - ? the per in whisper sounds more powerful, than where it is.
3. 00:21:258 (3) - You could easily get away with deleting this note. Why? It seems like a forced clap effort when in this part of the song, you don't actually try to aim for them yourself. Not to mention you have plenty of 1/1s before this part already. So some more 2/1 spacing wouldn't hurt.
4. 00:40:477 (1) - This note in the corner definitely could be moved. Try moving it up a bit and adjust 00:41:414 (2,3,4) - | http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1122218 | This is where it is currently.
5. 00:59:227 (1,1) - For a beginner difficulty, It's probably better to avoid using corner notes like this, especially if its only 2/1 until the next note. Try sticking a circle in the center where the spinner ends, and use the distance snap for an idea of how far you would want to go from the middle. Check out your other spinners in the song and see if you can make them easier when they finish as well. | After testing though, Its honestly better to just delete these notes and start fresh at 01:02:977 (1) - The silent vocal notes are actually quite difficult to hit and time right which makes them odd to play.
6. 01:44:461 (1) - Also start this spinner 1/2 later. This will give newer players more time to react to it.
7. 02:27:352 (2) - Try giving this slider a curve. It gives a better directional flow to the upcoming note, and can be used well with the previous slider. Try also placing the (3) on the tail end of the (1) slider? Should be more than enough time for any hit effects to fall off. | http://puu.sh/5r8jg.jpg
8. 03:01:570 (2,3) - I think a pattern like 02:56:414 (1,2) - would be better. Have the slider start at 03:02:039 - and reverse 1/1 later
9. 03:07:664 (1,1,2,3) - This spot feels kind of jammed with all the notes tucked in on the right side. It also looks strange seeing reverses happening on the center of the map, while the play is on the outside. Just my opinion though. It'd help with (1) and (3) being placed in the same spot somewhat close together.

1. 00:12:117 (5) - Delete this? I was trying to listen to the rhythm of the music, and this really doesn't fit.
2. 00:16:102 (5,6,7) - Instead of hiding the (7) under the tail end of a slider, how about swapping the (5) and (6) so it goes Slider Circle Circle, and have the circles stacked. It's much more readable and actually plays pretty well, as Sliders are easier to hit on the start or middle of measures, rather than the clap notes.
3. 00:26:414 (1,2) - Delete the two, and turn the (1) into 3 1/2 circles or a slider with a 1/2 reverse | Even if you are trying to follow the vocals: 00:27:117 - is a really uncomfortable note to hit, and it probably would be better skipped.
4. 00:32:977 - to 00:47:977 - Do you have plans on mapping this section? It feels strange having this as the only diff (besides the end of Advanced) to have a big break here.
5. 01:11:180 (2,3) - try nudging this over to the right a few spots, or maybe try a different approach to these sliders. They.. just bug me..
6. 01:18:680 (2) - Since the notes begin so close to the start of the slider, how about deleting this note?
7. 01:31:102 (3,4,5) - Select all three, and move it to x252 y132. Move (6) to x428, y288
8. 01:38:133 (2,3) - Try moving the (2) to x428 y336, and place the (3) where the previous (8) was. Adjust all other notes to fit. Also try bending the (1) slider a bit more. http://puu.sh/5rh7K.jpg
   
   rest of the map is fine. good luck

1. Bump up the OD to 6? It fits much better with the difficulty perceived on this map.
2. 00:12:820 (6,2) - Can you adjust the (6) so it doesn't hide half the (2)? Blanket it around the (5) maybe? | http://puu.sh/5rhtG.jpg
3. 00:18:914 (1) - x361 y194 or something close. The distance seems a bit too far and it doesn't really call for a jump.
4. 00:19:383 (3) - Try this: http://puu.sh/5rhHB.jpg
5. 00:33:680 (3,4) - Try making a 3/4 reverse here. Start at 00:33:680 - | Reverse at 00:34:031 - | It should end at 00:34:383 - | If you are following the vocals, this is the best option.
6. 00:35:320 (2,3,4) - do the above here as well. | http://puu.sh/5rhYu.jpg (2 is where the 2 originally was)
7. 00:42:820 (2,3,4) - ^ works here too
8. 00:44:930 (2) - delete maybe? If you plan on following the vocals, this might be a strange note to hit.
9. 01:15:633 (7,9) - blanket the (9) around the Tail of the (7)?
10. 01:34:383 (5,6) - This could be blanketed better as well, it just looks ugly.
11. 01:35:320 (7,1,2,3) - Move the (1,2,3) so that the tail end of the (3) ends up where the head of (7) is | http://puu.sh/5riQl.jpg | try altering the slider shapes and such though it make a little more beautiful than what I was showing.
12. 01:42:117 (4,1) - Firstly, try to blanket the (4) a bit nicer around the (3) | and then it would probably be better to move the (1) further away as this anti jump might easily be mistaken for a 1/2.
13. 01:47:977 - to 02:10:477 - Try the ideas I had at 00:33:680 on this mod to follow the vocals better. You could make combinations of a 3/4 slider + circle, or even 3 circles.. If you do do this, be sure to put them at distance snap or further, or they'll be misread.
14. 02:27:586 (8,9) - Combine these into a reverse slider or a triplet? This is the only spot that uses a Circle/Slider to make the 1/4s so it kind of sticks out.
    
    Overall this map seems a bit hard for a hard. Some of your notes could use a bit of cleaning up and rearranging, but for the most part, its pretty nice.

1. 00:18:914 (6,7) - swap the location of these two? and also move the now (6) just a bit down so it can be seen ahead of time.
2. 00:22:664 (6,1) - 00:26:883 (1,2) - these jumps are a bit scary, people wouldn't really expect this when playing because the red tick used before the start of a measure has a 'break' kind of feeling to it so people would think its a 1/1 space. Vocals can be hard to create jumps for unless its used for consistent notes, or like an epic breakdown part.
3. 00:33:914 (4,5) - For stuff like this, you could probably just delete the (4) as it serves no purpose. Move the 00:34:031 (5) - further away, and turn it into two circles instead of a long slider. This will get people adjusted to the 3/4 gaps you could be using.
4. 00:35:789 (5) - start this slider 1/4 later and make it 1/4 shorter.
5. 00:46:102 (1,2,3) - How about something like this? perfect spot to create a vocal jump. | http://puu.sh/5rkeX.jpg
6. 00:48:680 (3,4,5,3,4,5) - Try making 3/4 gaps here as well instead of all 1/2. Especially on this vocal heavy part.
7. 00:55:945 (1) - move the (1) to the head of the (2) like what you did at 00:57:820 (1,2) -
8. Skipping kiai sections.
9. 01:20:789 (6,3) - how about stacking these?
10. 01:48:914 (2) - Again, you can delete this
11. 01:50:789 (4,5) - Delete, and then add a note between them
12. 02:09:539 (3,4,5) - move these closer together.
13. 02:53:133 (1) - end this 1/8 earlier
14. 02:53:660 (1) - You'd definitely want to end this at the same length as the others. Just add a new one at 02:54:070 -

Lanturn wrote:

Mod Request from my Queue!

[General]
Somehow I still had your map data from when you were Creamlegit.. you Kyshiro pic thief aHUEHUEHUEHUEHUE

Speaking of that, you could probably add your old username (if you want) to the Tags. This is optional since you don't have any ranked maps yet. Nah, keeping that name in my past ^^

Calvin Harris ft. Florence Welch - Sweet Nothing (Priti).osb - You can delete this, since you don't have a Storyboard. k

AIBat

Sushi's Muzukashii:
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:55:477, ends on 03:23:602. The Oni ends on 03:24:070 - as does all of the other difficulties. With this being the only one. I would suggest changing this. changed (amg priti bad mapper touching other people's diffs)

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Snapping Mayhem
01:05:789 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). I was changing the SV of that whole kiai and forgot to change these two sliders, hurr
01:06:023 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). ^

I looked over these, and can safely say they aren't even snapped to 1/6 or anything.. Not sure what your plan was for with them, but they probably need fixing.

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:32:985 - snap to 00:32:977 - woops

Might as well fix this as well.

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Snapping Sushi's Muzukashii
01:46:102 (303) - Unsnapped slider (end). He already explained in Dainesl's Mod.
02:40:477 (456) - Unsnapped slider (end). ^

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Snapping Sushi's Oni
02:40:477 (122) - Unsnapped slider (end). ^

That should be it. There isn't any issues in your map data and general info.

[BounceBabe's Beginner]

1. AR4 and OD/HP3? Shouldn't a beginner level be at least 1-2 lower on each category? Also, maybe you might want to make the CS Smaller so the 1/1s don't overlap each other in strange ways. The small gap would be much more readable instead of having the ends touch like they currently do.
2. 00:19:383 (2) - maybe make this slider start at 00:19:852 - ? the per in whisper sounds more powerful, than where it is.
3. 00:21:258 (3) - You could easily get away with deleting this note. Why? It seems like a forced clap effort when in this part of the song, you don't actually try to aim for them yourself. Not to mention you have plenty of 1/1s before this part already. So some more 2/1 spacing wouldn't hurt.
4. 00:40:477 (1) - This note in the corner definitely could be moved. Try moving it up a bit and adjust 00:41:414 (2,3,4) - | http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1122218 | This is where it is currently.
5. 00:59:227 (1,1) - For a beginner difficulty, It's probably better to avoid using corner notes like this, especially if its only 2/1 until the next note. Try sticking a circle in the center where the spinner ends, and use the distance snap for an idea of how far you would want to go from the middle. Check out your other spinners in the song and see if you can make them easier when they finish as well. | After testing though, Its honestly better to just delete these notes and start fresh at 01:02:977 (1) - The silent vocal notes are actually quite difficult to hit and time right which makes them odd to play.
6. 01:44:461 (1) - Also start this spinner 1/2 later. This will give newer players more time to react to it.
7. 02:27:352 (2) - Try giving this slider a curve. It gives a better directional flow to the upcoming note, and can be used well with the previous slider. Try also placing the (3) on the tail end of the (1) slider? Should be more than enough time for any hit effects to fall off. | http://puu.sh/5r8jg.jpg
8. 03:01:570 (2,3) - I think a pattern like 02:56:414 (1,2) - would be better. Have the slider start at 03:02:039 - and reverse 1/1 later
9. 03:07:664 (1,1,2,3) - This spot feels kind of jammed with all the notes tucked in on the right side. It also looks strange seeing reverses happening on the center of the map, while the play is on the outside. Just my opinion though. It'd help with (1) and (3) being placed in the same spot somewhat close together.

Most of this is minor nazi stuff, but some of it should help.

[Seikatu's Medium]
Is there a difference between Standard and Medium? Seikatu's Standard would fit nicely in touch with BounceBabe's Beginner.

The structure of this map is.. somewhat odd, but I'll try to work with it as much as I can. Seems almost random of how you were placing the 1/2s in some spots. I test played this, and it felt really repetitive. I was playing with the delusion that everything was 2 Circles and a Slider or a Slider and 2 Circles.

1. 00:12:117 (5) - Delete this? I was trying to listen to the rhythm of the music, and this really doesn't fit.
2. 00:16:102 (5,6,7) - Instead of hiding the (7) under the tail end of a slider, how about swapping the (5) and (6) so it goes Slider Circle Circle, and have the circles stacked. It's much more readable and actually plays pretty well, as Sliders are easier to hit on the start or middle of measures, rather than the clap notes.
3. 00:26:414 (1,2) - Delete the two, and turn the (1) into 3 1/2 circles or a slider with a 1/2 reverse | Even if you are trying to follow the vocals: 00:27:117 - is a really uncomfortable note to hit, and it probably would be better skipped.
4. 00:32:977 - to 00:47:977 - Do you have plans on mapping this section? It feels strange having this as the only diff (besides the end of Advanced) to have a big break here.
5. 01:11:180 (2,3) - try nudging this over to the right a few spots, or maybe try a different approach to these sliders. They.. just bug me..
6. 01:18:680 (2) - Since the notes begin so close to the start of the slider, how about deleting this note?
7. 01:31:102 (3,4,5) - Select all three, and move it to x252 y132. Move (6) to x428, y288
8. 01:38:133 (2,3) - Try moving the (2) to x428 y336, and place the (3) where the previous (8) was. Adjust all other notes to fit. Also try bending the (1) slider a bit more. http://puu.sh/5rh7K.jpg
   
   rest of the map is fine. good luck

[Advanced]
That Kiai.. might actually be a bit too hard for a 'hard' difficulty, and it really surprised me heh.

1. Bump up the OD to 6? It fits much better with the difficulty perceived on this map. oki
2. 00:12:820 (6,2) - Can you adjust the (6) so it doesn't hide half the (2)? Blanket it around the (5) maybe? | http://puu.sh/5rhtG.jpg ok
3. 00:18:914 (1) - x361 y194 or something close. The distance seems a bit too far and it doesn't really call for a jump. changed
4. 00:19:383 (3) - Try this: http://puu.sh/5rhHB.jpg From here I started forgetting what I changed ;-;
5. 00:33:680 (3,4) - Try making a 3/4 reverse here. Start at 00:33:680 - | Reverse at 00:34:031 - | It should end at 00:34:383 - | If you are following the vocals, this is the best option.
6. 00:35:320 (2,3,4) - do the above here as well. | http://puu.sh/5rhYu.jpg (2 is where the 2 originally was)
7. 00:42:820 (2,3,4) - ^ works here too
8. 00:44:930 (2) - delete maybe? If you plan on following the vocals, this might be a strange note to hit.
9. 01:15:633 (7,9) - blanket the (9) around the Tail of the (7)?
10. 01:34:383 (5,6) - This could be blanketed better as well, it just looks ugly.
11. 01:35:320 (7,1,2,3) - Move the (1,2,3) so that the tail end of the (3) ends up where the head of (7) is | http://puu.sh/5riQl.jpg | try altering the slider shapes and such though it make a little more beautiful than what I was showing.
12. 01:42:117 (4,1) - Firstly, try to blanket the (4) a bit nicer around the (3) | and then it would probably be better to move the (1) further away as this anti jump might easily be mistaken for a 1/2.
13. 01:47:977 - to 02:10:477 - Try the ideas I had at 00:33:680 on this mod to follow the vocals better. You could make combinations of a 3/4 slider + circle, or even 3 circles.. If you do do this, be sure to put them at distance snap or further, or they'll be misread.
14. 02:27:586 (8,9) - Combine these into a reverse slider or a triplet? This is the only spot that uses a Circle/Slider to make the 1/4s so it kind of sticks out.
    
    Overall this map seems a bit hard for a hard. Some of your notes could use a bit of cleaning up and rearranging, but for the most part, its pretty nice.

[Mayhem]

1. 00:18:914 (6,7) - swap the location of these two? and also move the now (6) just a bit down so it can be seen ahead of time. okie
2. 00:22:664 (6,1) - 00:26:883 (1,2) - these jumps are a bit scary, people wouldn't really expect this when playing because the red tick used before the start of a measure has a 'break' kind of feeling to it so people would think its a 1/1 space. Vocals can be hard to create jumps for unless its used for consistent notes, or like an epic breakdown part. kk
3. 00:33:914 (4,5) - For stuff like this, you could probably just delete the (4) as it serves no purpose. Move the 00:34:031 (5) - further away, and turn it into two circles instead of a long slider. This will get people adjusted to the 3/4 gaps you could be using. you are negating everything Charles helped me with, nty
4. 00:35:789 (5) - start this slider 1/4 later and make it 1/4 shorter. you are negating everything Charles helped me with, nty
5. 00:46:102 (1,2,3) - How about something like this? perfect spot to create a vocal jump. | http://puu.sh/5rkeX.jpg changed
6. 00:48:680 (3,4,5,3,4,5) - Try making 3/4 gaps here as well instead of all 1/2. Especially on this vocal heavy part. you are negating everything Charles helped me with, nty
7. 00:55:945 (1) - move the (1) to the head of the (2) like what you did at 00:57:820 (1,2) -
8. Skipping kiai sections. y
9. 01:20:789 (6,3) - how about stacking these? aight mr. nazipants o3o
10. 01:48:914 (2) - Again, you can delete this
11. 01:50:789 (4,5) - Delete, and then add a note between them no
12. 02:09:539 (3,4,5) - move these closer together. kk
13. 02:53:133 (1) - end this 1/8 earlier why? ._.
14. 02:53:660 (1) - You'd definitely want to end this at the same length as the others. Just add a new one at 02:54:070 - Not really..

Good luck. Let me know what you changed or didn't change. The main issue is that you should use 3/4 during some parts.

Also, those Taiko diffs are nice. Sorry I'm not able to get to them

1. 00:12:115 (5) - This sounds really awkward, I'd suggest deleting it.
2. 00:33:000 - to 00:47:000 - Probably should map this section. It's kind of a weird time for a break. However the second break works, because it's the same in all other difficulties, and a break in the exact middle of the song is more fitting.
3. 01:05:789 - to 01:06:492 (5,6,7) - I think you should add an (8) here, this part of the chorus feels kind of incomplete without a note there.
4. 01:09:539 - to 01:10:242 (5,6,7) - ^^^^^^^
5. 01:13:306 - to 01:13:992 (5,6,7) - ^^^^^^^
6. 02:20:789 - to 02:21:492 (5,6,7) - ^^^^^^^
7. 02:24:539 - to 02:25:242 (5,6,7) - ^^^^^^^
8. 02:28:310 - to 02:28:992 (5,6,7) - ^^^^^^^ I think you get the idea
   
   
   
   best of luck