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LKs

Joined August 2009

LKs 2013-09-17T13:17:23+00:00

hi

[general]

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Insane] : UnitedWesin UWS punk
- [Normal] : UnitedWesin UWS punk
- [UWS's Hard] : UnitedWesin

offest +2~+4

[Insane]

00:08:758 (3) - 我会在这里用直slider
00:26:692 (2) - 这样flow不太舒服还是ctrl+g
00:29:301 (2) - 这overlap感觉有点微妙不如http://puu.sh/4tyts.jpg
00:30:932 (7) - 建议做成直的感觉弯的太多了
00:32:888 (5) - http://puu.sh/4tyEB.jpg 其实不是要换但我觉得5那个弧度和8blanket好
00:38:105 (4,5,6) - 弯的太多我简直开始怀疑你的取♂向
01:11:855 (3,4) - 感觉你需要再考虑一下这个slider的位置
01:30:116 (4,5,6,7) -

感觉没太多可提的就是几个细节梗还需要推敲一下音效ok 以及直和弯的比例

[UWS' hard]

diff is fine, nothing to pick up, gl

[Normal]

00:55:062 (1) - blanket得不太好
01:00:932 (2) - 以及这种弧度

感觉你被我坑了这种图实在没啥好mod的大提升不太可能有只能多修细节吧 nor里的多注意03:01:420 (1) - 这种slider的形状

Zero__wind

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Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2013-09-19T04:34:59+00:00

LKs wrote:
hi

[general]

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Insane] : UnitedWesin UWS punk
- [Normal] : UnitedWesin UWS punk
- [UWS's Hard] : UnitedWesin
fixed
offest +2~+4

[Insane]

00:08:758 (3) - 我会在这里用直slider 嗯重新整理了一下短slider的形状
00:26:692 (2) - 这样flow不太舒服还是ctrl+g 这个我觉得很好反过来的话到3不太顺
00:29:301 (2) - 这overlap感觉有点微妙不如http://puu.sh/4tyts.jpg fixed
00:30:932 (7) - 建议做成直的感觉弯的太多了
00:32:888 (5) - http://puu.sh/4tyEB.jpg 其实不是要换但我觉得5那个弧度和8blanket好嗯好
00:38:105 (4,5,6) - 弯的太多我简直开始怀疑你的取♂向
01:11:855 (3,4) - 感觉你需要再考虑一下这个slider的位置再想想
01:30:116 (4,5,6,7) -

感觉没太多可提的就是几个细节梗还需要推敲一下音效ok 以及直和弯的比例

[UWS' hard]

diff is fine, nothing to pick up, gl

[Normal]

00:55:062 (1) - blanket得不太好美死早
01:00:932 (2) - 以及这种弧度修了下

感觉你被我坑了这种图实在没啥好mod的大提升不太可能有只能多修细节吧 nor里的多注意03:01:420 (1) - 这种slider的形状

着实被坑了啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
thx for your mod

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2013-09-19T12:10:55+00:00

M4M request from your queue

My map: AZU feat. SEAMO - Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size)

[General]
Nicely mapped!
Just some small mods

02:41:203 - Continue starts here
02:42:182 - Feels Preview point suits here cuz it's like more KIAI!

02:52:616 - KIAI off postpone to here 02:53:268 -
03:04:029 - Make something like that here too

[Normal]
00:05:497 (1,2) - Make them to slider like 01:18:540 (1) -
02:31:584 - Can try 0.9x SV if you want to

[UWS's Hard]
00:44:627 (1,2,3,4,1) - Move this to a little right

[Insane]
AR: -1 太快不好看，而且这个图不是很rock
Avril Lavinge的歌都属于中等，R&B那一种的
00:48:703 - Add whistle
00:49:029 (3) - ^
01:03:051 (2) - Notes like this and 01:03:377 (4) - can add whistle for better gameplay cuz it's extra beat
01:04:355 (2) - This and 01:04:682 - ^

Try to add some more whistle because there are some whistles inside already

UnitedWeSin

889 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2013-09-20T11:30:05+00:00

Thanks LKs ^_^

@Rakuen
Alright I'll reduce the spacing a bit.

Thanks for modding!
http://puu.sh/4vKsM.osu

Scorpiour

2,633 posts

Joined May 2011

Scorpiour 2013-09-25T14:04:11+00:00

irc modded with mapper, fix some patterns in Insane.

Bubbled~~!!

mod log

01:03 *Zero__wind pokes Sco
01:03 *Zero__wind is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/297853 Avril Lavigne - Rock N Roll]
01:03 Zero__wind: 已归宅
01:03 Scorpiour: 等我10分钟
01:03 Zero__wind: 嗯
01:15 Scorpiour: 搞定了
01:16 Scorpiour: 那么我们开始吧
01:16 Zero__wind: 嗯
01:16 Zero__wind: ok
01:17 Scorpiour: 从Insane开始
01:18 Scorpiour: 00:19:192 (3) - 这东西Ctrl+r一下感觉如何？
01:18 Zero__wind: en
01:18 Scorpiour: 说错了，Ctrl+g
01:18 Scorpiour: 首尾颠倒，不是ctrl+r。。
01:18 Zero__wind: =。=
01:18 Scorpiour: 习惯性的按了ctrl+r
01:19 Zero__wind: 感觉不太舒服
01:19 Scorpiour: 前面那个弯的方向
01:19 Scorpiour: 上去之后感觉应该是从左面下来而不是右面
01:19 Zero__wind: 因为如果倒过来的话 3 到3 到6感觉有点奇怪
01:19 Zero__wind: 3到4 *
01:20 Scorpiour: 4和5放到7的那里？
01:21 Zero__wind: =。= 感觉不太必要折腾如果真觉得是因为00:18:866 (2) - 的话我可以直接改这个
01:21 Zero__wind: 不过我觉得完全没关系的
01:21 Scorpiour: 是因为这个
01:21 Zero__wind: 这种短滑条
01:22 Scorpiour: 看前面7->1的话，我会倾向于把2改成向右侧
01:22 Scorpiour: 就是做成直线的
01:22 Scorpiour: 这样看起来至少舒服多了
01:22 Zero__wind: 嗯行
01:22 Zero__wind: 就是让2指着1呗
01:22 Scorpiour: 恩
01:23 Scorpiour: 把flow绕起来
01:23 Scorpiour: 00:36:801 (1) - 这里有没有可能做成2个note？首位的强度相当感觉note会打击感更好
01:24 Zero__wind: 这里放slider主要是想从前面的对跳里面出来
01:24 Zero__wind: 改成2 circle的话就必须很大间距不然误导性很强
01:24 Zero__wind: 但是大间距就不好放
01:25 Scorpiour: 我有个方案
01:25 Zero__wind: 嗯
01:26 Scorpiour: http://puu.sh/4zQvB.jpg
01:26 Scorpiour: 把3拉直也可以
01:27 Zero__wind: 我感受一下
01:28 Scorpiour: 恩
01:30 Zero__wind: 改成了和前一半的一样的 2个1/4 slider
01:31 Scorpiour: 似乎也可以
01:31 Zero__wind: flow和你那个截图差不多
01:31 Scorpiour: 恩
01:31 Zero__wind: 2在左下那个空的部分
01:31 Scorpiour: 恩
01:33 Scorpiour: 02:12:671 (5) - 弧度有些大了不太好看
01:34 Zero__wind: ok
01:35 Scorpiour: 02:25:062 (6) - 为啥突然变向了呢？
01:35 Scorpiour: 很误导啊……
01:36 Zero__wind: 这个真的有这么怪么……怎么感觉有一半儿的modder都让我反过来=。=
01:36 Zero__wind: 可是我做的时候就是顺着摆的啊……
01:36 Scorpiour: 可是这个真的很难受
01:36 Scorpiour: 你想象一下啊
01:36 Scorpiour: 你左右左右摇摆的时候，突然让你变成左右左左
01:36 Scorpiour: 你不难受吗
01:36 Zero__wind: 突然变得不跳了的关系？
01:36 Scorpiour: 恩
01:36 Scorpiour: 距离和方向都变了
01:37 Zero__wind: 那我把6顺着方向往左上挪一些可以么
01:37 Zero__wind: 我不想把它调过来
01:38 Scorpiour: 方向还是不对
01:38 Scorpiour: 就像我说的……突然变顺拐了……
01:39 Zero__wind: 我后面的都是按照这个方向摆的=。=6如果反向的话……我觉得到7很不爽
01:40 Scorpiour: 为什么呢？
01:40 Scorpiour: 十字跳也很常见啊…………
01:40 Zero__wind: 是么=。=
01:40 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/4zQUg.jpg
01:41 Zero__wind: 这样不行么
01:41 Zero__wind: 我觉得打起来和把6转向没什么区别
01:41 Scorpiour: 我只能告诉你这样真的很不舒服，但是怎么决定是你自己的事
01:42 Zero__wind: 哦哦我也只是问问我这个修改方案好不好……
01:43 Scorpiour: 03:19:682 (1) - 弧度歪了
01:43 Scorpiour: 你的这个修改方案比之前稍微好一点，但是依然不好
01:43 Scorpiour: 因为没有解决掉根本的问题
01:44 Zero__wind: 其实根本问题是什么……
01:45 Scorpiour: 我前面说的，顺拐
01:45 Scorpiour: 左右左右对跳变成左右右左
01:45 Zero__wind: 哦那无所谓我就按我刚才截图的那么改了
01:46 Zero__wind: 说实话我对那种一直来回来去的东西不感冒
01:46 Scorpiour: 然后最后一个，slider歪了
01:46 Zero__wind: 03:19:682 (1) - 这个是么
01:46 Scorpiour: 反正是你的图，被黑也是你自己的事
01:46 Zero__wind: 我改了
01:46 Scorpiour: 对
01:46 Scorpiour: Hard是gd啊
01:46 Zero__wind: 嗯
01:46 Scorpiour: 先看normal好了
01:47 Zero__wind: 行
01:49 Scorpiour: 00:12:997 (3) - 有个节奏错位
01:50 Scorpiour: 后面还有不过normal里就随意了
01:50 Zero__wind: 我也觉得这个关系不太大……
01:50 Zero__wind: 你是指重音在滑条尾的意思吧
01:50 Scorpiour: 对
01:51 Scorpiour: 特别是非折返的滑条尾
01:51 Zero__wind: 嘛我只是出于增加一些节奏组合的考虑
01:51 Scorpiour: 所以我说随意了
01:52 Zero__wind: 嗯
01:57 Scorpiour: 更新去吧

Oyatsu

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Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-09-25T14:24:45+00:00

3 bubbled map!! @@

dkun

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dkun 2013-10-02T21:47:11+00:00

let's do this.

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-10-02T21:52:16+00:00

Congrats~
dkun is gonna be on fire again someone stop him xD

2211178

2211178 2013-10-02T23:43:56+00:00

前排撒花~

UnitedWeSin

889 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2013-10-03T00:39:48+00:00

Nice

Gratz!

mancuso_JM_

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mancuso_JM_ 2013-10-03T00:46:48+00:00

English songs!

Grats!

Kinomi

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Kinomi 2013-10-03T01:21:17+00:00

零风哥哥又rank

Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2013-10-03T01:42:00+00:00

Gratz!!!~

Mei

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Mei 2013-10-03T03:28:21+00:00

wow congratz (｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ

pw384

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Joined January 2012

pw384 2013-10-03T04:01:36+00:00

凌风教我怎么rank啊

P A N

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Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-10-03T04:49:08+00:00

congratz

Tony

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Tony 2013-10-03T08:31:35+00:00

congrats! ^^

lkx_Shore

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lkx_Shore 2013-10-03T10:17:09+00:00

384059043 wrote:
凌风教我怎么rank啊

Aldwych

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Joined February 2012

Aldwych 2013-10-03T11:36:32+00:00

Yes! Yes! Yes!

Hell yeah!! <3

Rakuen

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Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2013-10-03T19:45:16+00:00

祝贺

mathi747

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Joined September 2010

mathi747 2013-10-04T01:37:48+00:00

Gratz

Ultimate

382 posts

Joined December 2008

Ultimate 2013-10-04T16:06:59+00:00

If the Insane diff would have AR8, it would be a much better map.
AR9 totally kills the map and the stream doesn't fit too imo. Still 9/10 score.

Gratz on the rank

Zero__wind

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Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2013-10-05T11:06:54+00:00

late thx for everyone here
was out for a few days
hope you guys do like this

@Ultimate : hmm it used to be AR8, when I mapped it,
but was somehow suggested to use AR9 for many times so it's like this
and yes the streams, haha I'm so lazy to do something else
considering to add rhythm variety to the diff, it's fine as I suppose

TicClick

Global Moderator

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TicClick 2013-10-05T13:13:21+00:00

Hell yes.

Makou

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Joined June 2011

Makou 2013-10-05T16:10:48+00:00

you need to change the bpm :/

Ultimate

382 posts

Joined December 2008

Ultimate 2013-10-05T17:27:51+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
@Ultimate : hmm it used to be AR8, when I mapped it,
but was somehow suggested to use AR9 for many times so it's like this
and yes the streams, haha I'm so lazy to do something else
considering to add rhythm variety to the diff, it's fine as I suppose

I'm glad to see you started off with AR8 : ).
Allot of ppl nowadays request AR9 because they get used to high AR.
Which usually is a big map killer if it doesn't really fit.
You're a good mapper. And it's good to listen to your fellow players.
But you don't always have to agree with the biggest vote.
After all, it's your map.

Sonnyc

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Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2013-11-05T14:21:18+00:00

Map was fun! Though I can't FC lol

neurosis

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Joined March 2012

neurosis 2013-11-18T00:45:03+00:00

amazing flow

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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