T.M.Revolution x Mizuki Nana - Preserved Roses -Anime Versio · forum

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,790 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2014-05-27T17:25:39+00:00

[Hard]

00:31:146 (1,2,3) - What would you think about making a jump here or at least making the spacing higher? I can see here how the singer's chords are more strong here, so emphatizing them with a gradual spacing change would totally fit well and also make a pretty good pattern to play! If you do this, remember that the same applies for 00:36:894 (1,2,3) - !
00:53:062 (2) - Seeing where the other 2 sliders are heading on, I would totally make this slider go upwards instead of downwards, maybe by also placing it at places like x:256 y:252, as it makes a really fun jump to play that really flows well with these other 2 sliders, so even if it isn't such a great thing I would recommend you to do it :3 Here's an example of what I mean: http://puu.sh/8ZmLF.jpg
00:56:295 (4) - x:204 y:228? Using a linear pattern with these sliders doesen't work that well, and I would prefer a triangular pattern to follow the sliders' oval flow there :p
00:57:912 (6) - A New Combo should be added here, considering that you have previously used it, and also it fits pretty good since it follows well the synth there
01:08:331 (4) - , 01:14:080 (4) - and 01:19:828 (4) - should probably have New Combos too, seeing that only the 3/4 slider should be in the combo and the next slider instead should be in a new Combo pattern

[Insane]

00:11:026 (2) - At the current place this slider really doesen't work that well, it feels too much for this calm part and also it doesen't really follow right any of the instruments being played there. I would totally suggest you to just replace this 1/4 slider with a note, since I believe a simple note would do the job better at the moment!
00:23:242 (4) - What about stacking this on the top of 00:22:703 (2) - ? It feels ok at the moment but it is a bit strange to play, considering that you mostly aren't doing these kind of overlapped notes, at least in this map!
00:56:834 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - While I'm okay with 00:57:733 (1,1) - I don't think the New Combo spam works properly here... I really can't hear any instrument which truly resembles this New Combo usage and they really do feel overused, so I'd suggest you to at least remove part of them
01:02:134 (1,2) - and 01:07:882 (1,2) -'s jumps are REALLY exhagerated seeing how you've mapped the map for now (they are even bigger than the Extra's one!) and really break the flow because of that incredibly big spacing. I would really suggest you to somewhat reduce these jumps there, because at the moment they are really big and don't fit well there :\

[Regou's Extra]

00:03:122 (2,3) - What would you think about making the spacing higher here, comparted to the 1/8 pattern? It isn't a big thing, but distinguishing the 1/4 pattern from the 1/8 one can work really good as the SV is quite higher than the spacing and it isn't all really easily recognizable, it would also make the pattern a bit more clear, like here :p
00:51:894 (3) - In this case instead I would see better to just remove this note, as I can't really hear anything that needs to be emphatized here, and it would make the 1/8 pattern quite better to play with just a 1/2 gap :p
01:01:864 (3,1,2,1) - Here I would use instead a pattern a bit reversed seeing 01:01:146 (1,2) - 's flow with 01:01:864 (3) - reversed and the same goes for the next slider. It isn't a really big thing, though I believe it would use a really great oval flow there to play which would make the pattern really smooth and nice! Here's what I have done: see if you like it!
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[Skystar's Extra]

00:17:224 (1) - This is one of the cases where I believe that even if this note doesen't follow anything it works really good to start the pattern in another pace. I like it!
01:19:828 (1) - Just a little thing there, but what would you think about using a 1/2 slider there instead of a simple note? It is ok at the moment, but using just a note after all your patterns feels really almost as a break rhythm-wise, therefore I would see pretty good a 1/2 slider there instead

ù

Call me back when you're done and sorry for the delay!

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,460 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

Flask 2014-05-28T11:59:35+00:00

again kevin

-kevincela- wrote:
[Hard]

00:31:146 (1,2,3) - What would you think about making a jump here or at least making the spacing higher? I can see here how the singer's chords are more strong here, so emphatizing them with a gradual spacing change would totally fit well and also make a pretty good pattern to play! If you do this, remember that the same applies for 00:36:894 (1,2,3) - ! Seriously I don't think I'll do this because...eh, it feels so weird if you played something same but the spacing of that doesn't supposed be same. At least to me, so I'd refuse this ;_;
00:53:062 (2) - Seeing where the other 2 sliders are heading on, I would totally make this slider go upwards instead of downwards, maybe by also placing it at places like x:256 y:252, as it makes a really fun jump to play that really flows well with these other 2 sliders, so even if it isn't such a great thing I would recommend you to do it :3 Here's an example of what I mean: http://puu.sh/8ZmLF.jpg nice!
00:56:295 (4) - x:204 y:228? Using a linear pattern with these sliders doesen't work that well, and I would prefer a triangular pattern to follow the sliders' oval flow there :p okay, but I'd do it by spacing you know (x:204, y:228 doesn't follow that)
00:57:912 (6) - A New Combo should be added here, considering that you have previously used it, and also it fits pretty good since it follows well the synth there Absolutely right!
01:08:331 (4) - , 01:14:080 (4) - and 01:19:828 (4) - should probably have New Combos too, seeing that only the 3/4 slider should be in the combo and the next slider instead should be in a new Combo pattern k
[Insane]

00:11:026 (2) - At the current place this slider really doesen't work that well, it feels too much for this calm part and also it doesen't really follow right any of the instruments being played there. I would totally suggest you to just replace this 1/4 slider with a note, since I believe a simple note would do the job better at the moment! okay o3oo
00:23:242 (4) - What about stacking this on the top of 00:22:703 (2) - ? It feels ok at the moment but it is a bit strange to play, considering that you mostly aren't doing these kind of overlapped notes, at least in this map! 00:10:667 (1,2) - :p. Well I'd keep this.
00:56:834 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - While I'm okay with 00:57:733 (1,1) - I don't think the New Combo spam works properly here... I really can't hear any instrument which truly resembles this New Combo usage and they really do feel overused, so I'd suggest you to at least remove part of them I separate the note that was added whistle and the note wasn't, will that work to you?
01:02:134 (1,2) - and 01:07:882 (1,2) -'s jumps are REALLY exhagerated seeing how you've mapped the map for now (they are even bigger than the Extra's one!) and really break the flow because of that incredibly big spacing. I would really suggest you to somewhat reduce these jumps there, because at the moment they are really big and don't fit well there :\ k

now waiting for the guest~
I feel sorry about clicking "give a kd" on your second post ;_;

Regou

1,916 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2014-05-28T13:28:33+00:00

-kevincela- wrote:
[Regou's Extra]
00:03:122 (2,3) - What would you think about making the spacing higher here, comparted to the 1/8 pattern? It isn't a big thing, but distinguishing the 1/4 pattern from the 1/8 one can work really good as the SV is quite higher than the spacing and it isn't all really easily recognizable, it would also make the pattern a bit more clear, like here :p okay~
00:51:894 (3) - In this case instead I would see better to just remove this note, as I can't really hear anything that needs to be emphatized here, and it would make the 1/8 pattern quite better to play with just a 1/2 gap :p ssure~
01:01:864 (3,1,2,1) - Here I would use instead a pattern a bit reversed seeing 01:01:146 (1,2) - 's flow with 01:01:864 (3) - reversed and the same goes for the next slider. It isn't a really big thing, though I believe it would use a really great oval flow there to play which would make the pattern really smooth and nice! Here's what I have done: see if you like it! ohhhh thats good
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Call me back when you're done and sorry for the delay!

Thanks!
puush sucks I'd put my update here

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Skystar

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Skystar 2014-05-28T14:13:17+00:00

-kevincela- wrote:
[Skystar's Extra]

00:17:224 (1) - This is one of the cases where I believe that even if this note doesen't follow anything it works really good to start the pattern in another pace. I like it! Thanks! This was literally something how the song told me to do when I first time listened to the song. At the time, I've been already cognizant of that making a pattern like that is exactly what I should have to do by my feelings towards the song. Kind of glad that you liked this, it really encourages me!
01:19:828 (1) - Just a little thing there, but what would you think about using a 1/2 slider there instead of a simple note? It is ok at the moment, but using just a note after all your patterns feels really almost as a break rhythm-wise, therefore I would see pretty good a 1/2 slider there instead Well, pretty much as you said, this was actually supposed to be a break. I dunno but I did this intuitively, I talked with Flask about this just now and he also agreed with me on that (since I'd like to know if it's only me or not) x.x sorry for rejecting this xD

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

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-kevincela- 2014-05-31T16:03:08+00:00

I am having some troubles with redownloading the map (it imports as a corrupt beatmap)... orz
Try to reupload and call me again, everything else should be okay :3

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

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Topic Starter

Flask 2014-06-01T10:29:34+00:00

~~I've submitted like 19859058902 times and seems it's still not getting work. I'll try it tomorrow when I went to somewhere else ;_;.~~DONE.

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

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-kevincela- 2014-06-05T17:51:24+00:00

Just a couple of things in the normal diff:

00:56:834 (1,2) - this is a bit too much for a normal... it will be quite difficult for a newbie to recognize that stack >_< you should at least space them a bit out to make them play intuitively
01:03:840 (4) - you missed a finish at the beginning of this slider which you have also used on the other sliders, so remember to add it there as well!

also remember to add a whistle to 00:04:739 (1) - in the hard diff

Call me back after these fixes and I'll rank (finally

)

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

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Topic Starter

Flask 2014-06-06T11:05:14+00:00

Okay, all fixed!

Skystar

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