Konnichiha :3

[General]

it's not full version. right? so how about change title fancy baby doll (Short ver.)?

[Saten's Easy]

only this diff checked widescreen support

1. 00:11:752 (2) - i'm not recommend use short slider in easy diff. so i suggest this slider make to just one note
2. 00:14:360 (3) - ^..and other short slider
3. 00:51:045 (2) - add finish at front. i hear symbol sound at this part
4. 00:53:654 (2) - ^
5. 01:00:338 (1,1) - ^ at reserve

[alacat's Normal]

only this diff have wrong tags

1. 00:42:404 (2,3) - try to make each other stare. now is already fine. but it can be improved.
   
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   184,68,42404,2,0,P|228:43|288:49,1,110
   356,184,43219,2,0,P|272:240|160:208,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Cilvery's Hard]

1. 00:00:339 (1) - add finish at front? now a little empty
2. 00:34:252 (1) - add finish at front. i'm hear symbol sound at this part. and i recommend add finish each symbol sounds place. like 00:38:002
3. 00:45:175 - how about add circle here? this part quite grow strained. so i think more a hard way this part
4. 00:51:860 (7,8) - overlap i think. recommend reduce distance a little
5. 01:04:904 - add circle here? it hears good

[Insane]

1. 00:00:991 (3,4,5,6) - just suggest. how about make same angle like prior two sliders
2. 00:38:980 (7) - how about make this just straight line?
3. 00:51:045 (4,5) - now i feel little awkward. consider make slider turn the other way.
   
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4. 01:18:110 (4) - divide this and make one note for good measure front(like picture).it' s more match the music i think
   
5. 01:26:099 (10) - change angle like...-10 degree. now seems sticking

Best of luck!

added finish hitsounds here and there

but I kept the sliders, since I see no issues having them


http://puu.sh/guFSs/255b5343fe.osu

Thanks. added some notes for difficulty spread by myself.

http://puu.sh/gxkpr/0dc12ad4bb.zip

thanks for mod and star Ranger
changed almost!

[General]
Saten's Easy has corrupted artist: 逕ｰ譚代ｆ縺九ｊ -> 田村ゆかり
alacat's Normal is missing the "a" in "alacat" for tags

[Saten's Easy]
00:23:491 (2) - adjust this slider a bit so it blankets 00:24:469 (3)
00:26:099 (1) - this is almost offscreen, and partially blocked by the hiterror meter. See if you can raise it a bit
00:29:034 (3) - should have NC here
00:46:643 (4) - another one that could be adjusted a bit upwards
01:23:817 (1) - this section has a lot of slider spam, it would be great if you can swap two of the sliders for a repeat slider + circle to have more variety, for example 01:27:730 (3,4) -
[alanyan's Normal]
this would look less clustered with CS3.5, which will also make the spread better
00:40:936 (4) - clap on end
00:42:893 (3) - this pattern plays a little confusing with this slider, i would delete this and add a note at 00:43:056 instead
01:31:643 (1,2) - the timing of the sliders is a little difficult to catch, i would add one more in here:
[Cilvery's Hard]
00:38:002 (5,6) - small spacing inconsistency
00:49:904 (1) - i think finish should be here instead of 00:50:230 (2)

nicely made diff, though i think for spread considerations you should add some triplets in the diff, for example:
00:44:523 (6,1) - can be redesigned to this: 00:51:860 (7,8) - this can be like this:
01:05:067 (5,6) - same change as 00:44:523 (6,1)
01:15:502 (6,7) - same change as 00:51:860 (7,8)
01:31:480 - a triplet can be added here
Its up to you, but I think this will make the transition from Hard to Insane a lot better.


[Insane]
00:11:752 (4) - add clap
00:26:099 (1) - finish intentional? Should be a clap imo
00:43:545 (6) - clap on end
00:44:360 (8,9,10,1,2,3) - clap on 00:44:360 (8), and this doesn't really flow well, try something like this: 00:45:012 (3) - clap start
00:59:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how bout a pattern that decreases spacing to represent the music better? 01:18:599 (1) - finish on start
01:26:099 (10) - clap on start
01:29:034 (2) - clap on end

Thats about all, let me know afterwards

thank you mod jonathan
fixed my diff and General
waiting guest diffs~

Ranger wrote:

[Cilvery's Hard]

1. 00:00:339 (1) - add finish at front? now a little empty added
2. 00:34:252 (1) - add finish at front. i'm hear symbol sound at this part. and i recommend add finish each symbol sounds place. like 00:38:002 added
3. 00:45:175 - how about add circle here? this part quite grow strained. so i think more a hard way this part added
4. 00:51:860 (7,8) - overlap i think. recommend reduce distance a little changed o:
5. 01:04:904 - add circle here? it hears good um.. nope, sorry

thanks for the mod ^ ^

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Cilvery's Hard]
00:38:002 (5,6) - small spacing inconsistency fixed
00:49:904 (1) - i think finish should be here instead of 00:50:230 (2) o.. ya changed lol

nicely made diff, though i think for spread considerations you should add some triplets in the diff, for example:
00:44:523 (6,1) - can be redesigned to this:

SPOILER

00:51:860 (7,8) - this can be like this:

SPOILER

01:05:067 (5,6) - same change as 00:44:523 (6,1)
01:15:502 (6,7) - same change as 00:51:860 (7,8) uhh.. i don't wanna change these parts : (..
01:31:480 - a triplet can be added here added~

thanks for the mod ^ ^

fixed all points, Thanks jonathan :>

http://puu.sh/gE3fW/18797c955e.zip

boop


only thing I kept was the slider section at the end, keeping it like that is variation if you compare it to the rest of the map, no?

http://puu.sh/gEknp/6c15f7ac4b.zip

all diffs update~

[Insane]
some left over missing claps you should fix:
00:34:904 (3) - end
00:50:230 (2) - start
00:50:556 (3) - end
01:18:599 (1) - end

00:59:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for this i meant a gradually decreasing spacing; for example, 00:59:360 (1,2) - can have a 1.5x spacing, and then 00:59:523 (2,3) - can have 1.4x spacing, and decrease it until it hits 01:00:175 (6,1) - which will have 1.0x spacing.

Thats all the rest looks good

all fixed! thank you mod!

Cool good luck!

You should disable widescreen support in Saten's easy, its inconsistent and you have no SB in this map.

ill correct someone pop
thank you Tari

Cilvery's Hard

1. 01:31:398 (8) - remove this note or make like feels better for me

Insane

1. 00:01:969 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - the distance of 2 and 3 is a bit small, and 00:02:295 (3,4,5,6,1) - in a line make it awkward to play. Make a different pattern on 00:02:295 (3,4,5,6) - will solve the problem.
2. 00:28:708 (5,6,7,8) - here shouldnt be a stream imo, no 1/4 sounds and hears a bit weird for me.
3. 00:41:507 (7) - remove this note?
4. 01:06:860 (4,5) - avoid using 3/4 sliders for safe, also 1/2 works better than 3/4 here.
5. 01:18:518 - add a note, stream here quite fits.

and disable widescreen support in Saten's Easy, then call me back.

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