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Thanks. added some notes for difficulty spread by myself.

http://puu.sh/gxkpr/0dc12ad4bb.zip
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thanks for mod and star Ranger
changed almost!
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[General]
Saten's Easy has corrupted artist: 逕ー譚代f縺九j -> 田村ゆかり
alacat's Normal is missing the "a" in "alacat" for tags

[Saten's Easy]
00:23:491 (2) - adjust this slider a bit so it blankets 00:24:469 (3)
00:26:099 (1) - this is almost offscreen, and partially blocked by the hiterror meter. See if you can raise it a bit
00:29:034 (3) - should have NC here
00:46:643 (4) - another one that could be adjusted a bit upwards
01:23:817 (1) - this section has a lot of slider spam, it would be great if you can swap two of the sliders for a repeat slider + circle to have more variety, for example 01:27:730 (3,4) -


[alanyan's Normal]
this would look less clustered with CS3.5, which will also make the spread better
00:40:936 (4) - clap on end
00:42:893 (3) - this pattern plays a little confusing with this slider, i would delete this and add a note at 00:43:056 instead
01:31:643 (1,2) - the timing of the sliders is a little difficult to catch, i would add one more in here:


[Cilvery's Hard]
00:38:002 (5,6) - small spacing inconsistency
00:49:904 (1) - i think finish should be here instead of 00:50:230 (2)

nicely made diff, though i think for spread considerations you should add some triplets in the diff, for example:
00:44:523 (6,1) - can be redesigned to this:

00:51:860 (7,8) - this can be like this:

01:05:067 (5,6) - same change as 00:44:523 (6,1)
01:15:502 (6,7) - same change as 00:51:860 (7,8)
01:31:480 - a triplet can be added here
Its up to you, but I think this will make the transition from Hard to Insane a lot better.


[Insane]
00:11:752 (4) - add clap
00:26:099 (1) - finish intentional? Should be a clap imo
00:43:545 (6) - clap on end
00:44:360 (8,9,10,1,2,3) - clap on 00:44:360 (8), and this doesn't really flow well, try something like this:

00:45:012 (3) - clap start
00:59:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how bout a pattern that decreases spacing to represent the music better?

01:18:599 (1) - finish on start
01:26:099 (10) - clap on start
01:29:034 (2) - clap on end

Thats about all, let me know afterwards
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thank you mod jonathan
fixed my diff and General
waiting guest diffs~
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Ranger wrote:

[Cilvery's Hard]

  1. 00:00:339 (1) - add finish at front? now a little empty added
  2. 00:34:252 (1) - add finish at front. i'm hear symbol sound at this part. and i recommend add finish each symbol sounds place. like 00:38:002 added
  3. 00:45:175 - how about add circle here? this part quite grow strained. so i think more a hard way this part added
  4. 00:51:860 (7,8) - overlap i think. recommend reduce distance a little changed o:
  5. 01:04:904 - add circle here? it hears good um.. nope, sorry
thanks for the mod ^ ^
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jonathanlfj wrote:

[Cilvery's Hard]
00:38:002 (5,6) - small spacing inconsistency fixed
00:49:904 (1) - i think finish should be here instead of 00:50:230 (2) o.. ya changed lol

nicely made diff, though i think for spread considerations you should add some triplets in the diff, for example:
00:44:523 (6,1) - can be redesigned to this:

00:51:860 (7,8) - this can be like this:

01:05:067 (5,6) - same change as 00:44:523 (6,1)
01:15:502 (6,7) - same change as 00:51:860 (7,8) uhh.. i don't wanna change these parts : (..
01:31:480 - a triplet can be added here added~
thanks for the mod ^ ^
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fixed all points, Thanks jonathan :>

http://puu.sh/gE3fW/18797c955e.zip
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boop


only thing I kept was the slider section at the end, keeping it like that is variation if you compare it to the rest of the map, no?

http://puu.sh/gEknp/6c15f7ac4b.zip
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all diffs update~
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[Insane]
some left over missing claps you should fix:
00:34:904 (3) - end
00:50:230 (2) - start
00:50:556 (3) - end
01:18:599 (1) - end

00:59:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for this i meant a gradually decreasing spacing; for example, 00:59:360 (1,2) - can have a 1.5x spacing, and then 00:59:523 (2,3) - can have 1.4x spacing, and decrease it until it hits 01:00:175 (6,1) - which will have 1.0x spacing.

Thats all the rest looks good
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all fixed! thank you mod!
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Cool good luck!
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You should disable widescreen support in Saten's easy, its inconsistent and you have no SB in this map.
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ill correct someone pop
thank you Tari
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Cilvery's Hard
  1. 01:31:398 (8) - remove this note or make like feels better for me


Insane
  1. 00:01:969 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - the distance of 2 and 3 is a bit small, and 00:02:295 (3,4,5,6,1) - in a line make it awkward to play. Make a different pattern on 00:02:295 (3,4,5,6) - will solve the problem.
  2. 00:28:708 (5,6,7,8) - here shouldnt be a stream imo, no 1/4 sounds and hears a bit weird for me.
  3. 00:41:507 (7) - remove this note?
  4. 01:06:860 (4,5) - avoid using 3/4 sliders for safe, also 1/2 works better than 3/4 here.
  5. 01:18:518 - add a note, stream here quite fits.


and disable widescreen support in Saten's Easy, then call me back.

Edit: Qualified!
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thank you Yuki!
Finally Qualified lol 2years old
and thank you guest mappers
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Congrats!
Great map :D
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Congrats Sorda \owo/
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Gratz owo
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kratz
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