- There is inconsistencies in audio-lead in, others have 500 except alacat's Normal, make sure to fix that.
- Clean.
- 00:04:578 (6) - Consider moving this further away from 00:04:252 (5) - because you had jumps 00:03:925 (4,5) - here so I expect that 6 will have a larger spacing too, this isn't the case here. Although it played well, it could play better by this.
- 00:05:556 (1,2,3,4,5) - The whole pattern could be arranged better, now the flow is really broken here, here's 2 pictures how it could be better with a nice flow.
- 00:07:838 (1,2,3,4) - Make this into a curved stream instead? It'd play better and it would be consistent with 00:04:904 (1) - this stream
- 00:09:795 (1) - I'd move this note to somewhere around x:385 y:231, because the cursor movement gets more natural this way.
- 00:10:773 (1) - Your slider could be more better looking shape-wise, try this one, it'd make a nicer curve and more symmetrical:
- 00:12:404 (6) - Why the random spacing + broken flow here? You could move the slider somewhere to x:162 y:260 to make the jump a bit more random and fix the flow.
- 00:13:382 (1,2,3) - I have a suggestion for this pattern, since your flow between 1-2 isn't the best, how about doing it more like this?
This way it plays better, flow is way better. Make sure to fix the blanket between 2-3 if you apply this one. - 00:21:860 (3) - If you move the end point of the slider more downright, the flow will be waay better and the slider doesn't look so bad then. If you don't get what I mean by this, see the picture below.
- 00:25:447 (7,8) - See the picture below again, rearranging them like that would look way cleaner than your current one.
- 00:34:904 (3,1) - Please care about blankets, make this one perfect. It'd make your map more clean.
- 00:38:002 (5) - Could you like, reverse the blanket section in that slider? Like this:
(and rearrange the 00:38:817 (6,7) - like that because it flows better) - 00:42:404 (3) - Why the random spacing again? There's no need for that, also it plays rather bad.
- 00:43:545 (6,7) - And suddenly you used jumps, you decide to use normal spacing, why? You need to be consistent and this just plays weird.
- 00:51:045 (4) - Could you consider rearranging your slider like this, your current one is fine, it doesn't flow that well though.
And to fix the flow with the next objects, place 00:51:860 (5) - somewhere to x:195 y:100. It'd look nice because then you would have blankets and such. >:D - 00:54:306 (8) - Slider could be done better, a bit similar suggestion that I gave you above somewhere. Try to do it like this: more symmetrical that way and would fit way better:
- 01:04:088 (1) - Could you rotate the slider a bit that the flow would be nicer here? Like this:
- 01:13:056 (5,6,7,8) - The curve of this stream gets really bad from here, you had a perfect curve 01:12:730 (1,2,3,4) - here but you kind of ruined it, try this?
- 01:21:208 (1,2,3,4) - Could flow better, well, your placement is fine but this is just a quick suggestion to make it ''better'' I guess. See if you like my example.
- Your Insane difficulty needs more work, sorry. Rhythm-wise it was fine, flow-wise, not so. Sorry. :s
- I don't see the point of HP7, it makes the difficulty spread rather bad and Insane already has HP7, HP6 would make the spread way better.
- 00:16:969 (4) - Try ctrl + G, it plays nicely ^^
- 00:32:947 - There's actually no beat here that's mappable, it sounds a bit bad anyway with that note there. Could you consider removing it?
- 00:46:480 (5) - If you would move your sliders redpoint a bit more to the middle, it would look more symmetrical, which in this case is better than your current one.
- I guess this diff is almost ready to go, nice job~
- +1 HP for a better difficulty spread?
- 00:04:252 (3,5) - I like your idea here but guess what makes it look inperfect?
The blanket isn't perfect, could you fix that? - 01:00:991 (2) - I'd move this slider a bit down so the movement from 01:00:338 (1) - gets perfect.
- 01:12:730 (4) - Usually wavesliders that are made by redpoints have that weird bump, which you have, try to remake your slider like this: It'd give the slider a bit smoother waves I would say:
- 01:34:333 (1) - To be consistent, could you move this spinner 1/4 further? In Insane and Hard the spinner started in the blue tick, not in the big white tick.
- Yeah nice work!
- -1 AR +1 OD would make the diff spread more equal. :3
- 00:04:904 (1) - The NC on this seems to be a bit weird, I'd remove it from here and add the NC on 00:05:882 (2) - instead, would seem more logical imo
- 00:26:099 (1) - Could cover a bit better 00:25:447 (5) - end of the slider, I mean like this:
- 01:15:991 (2,3) - This would fit a bit better I guess if 01:16:643 (3) - was blanketed with 2's end, like this (i just made the blanket quickly, make perfect one yourself if you apply this one):
- 01:34:252 (1) - To be consistent with the Insane & Hard, you should move this spinner to the blue tick.
- Cool diff, liked your patterns.
Yeah, that would be the mod I guess. GL ~
