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　General

1. ファイルのチェックをしようと思いながら、色んな事情でAIBATは起動不能となりました
2. 一応手動で行いましたが、あらゆる設定が現時点では一致されてない様子なので、どうか譜面が出来上がった時にご自分でフルチェックを！
3. イージーとノーマルは特に指摘するとこは見つけていませんので、今回のModdingはInsaneのみとなります

　Insane

• 00:01:480 (6,1) - Swap these combos 理由は‥、重ねてるから？ノートの繰り返しは(3,4,5)だけなので、プレイヤーにパターンをより読みやすくなれるためです
  00:04:578 (6,1) - Spacing error, please increase the spacing between these notes 一見1/4と思う方が私だけではないと思いますｗ
  00:14:523 (4) - Minor rhythm suggestion 少々スペーシングの調整は必要とされますが、ドラムにピッタリ！（？）
  
  
  なぞのパターンサジェッション

  
  
  00:48:436 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ここのパターンがなんかおかしい！悪いかったと言ってはいませんが、プレイ的に。なんせ00:49:252 (1) - こっからはいきなりフローが破られ連打に直入しました‥そういう訳でなぞのサジェッション２：
  
  なぞのパターンサジェッション２

  スターパターンを上に、順番はちょっとこういう風に
  
  なぞのパターンサジェッション２．５

  連打は00:48:436 (1) - を下から
  

  236,112,48436,5,0,0:0:0:0:
  75,204,48599,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  151,35,48762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  189,216,48925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  52,92,49088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  236,112,49252,5,0,0:0:0:0:
  276,116,49333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  308,140,49415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  312,180,49496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  300,220,49578,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  280,256,49659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  272,296,49741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  296,328,49822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  332,344,49904,6,0,P|380:344|422:298,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

  
  01:10:121 - This break is removable　一秒くらいのbreakは要らないではないのかな

1. 00:01:643 (2,3,4) - i feel the flow is bad, i think this make it better
   
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2. 00:03:925 (4,5,6) - the curve here is too sharp i think, maybe you can do better curve here
3. 00:05:474 (8,1) - after the stream, its look like the slider is a bit off, this will make the flow better (change the following note too)
   
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4. 00:07:838 (1,2,3,4) - make this stream more straight
5. 00:08:817 (7) - ctrl G for better flow
6. 00:15:665 (7,1) - make the spacing here more consistent on 00:15:012 (5,6) -
7. 00:18:599 (1) - uguuu~ bad curve
8. 00:40:121 (4) - seems the red anchor is not equal, i think this will make it better
   
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9. 00:43:219 (5,6,7) - the flow here is a bit... weird, i think you can do better than this
10. 00:47:947 (3,1) - nazi stuff... blanket
11. 00:51:045 (4,5) - ^
12. 01:10:121 (4) - after this part feels empty, maybe you can put some note, or spinner instead
13. 01:12:078 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+g this two 01:12:078 (1,3) - , then ctrl+g this two too 01:12:241 (2,4) - ,so it has better approach before the stream
    
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14. 01:13:137 (6,7,8) - dunno if you intentionally make stream part a bit straight, better to curve the stream here
    Need more work, i guess

1. 00:15:991 (1) - this is a bit out of range, and it will touch the HP bar too, put it lower
2. 00:24:958 (4) - ^
3. 00:32:621 (4,5) - the rhythm is quite weird, i think this is better
   
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4. 00:51:860 (7,8) - the jump here is too far, i guess, because looks like a 1/1 jump when you compare it to 00:52:023 (8,1,2) -
5. 01:31:643 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - the 0.5 SV here really doesnt fit here, maybe you can use 0.75 SV, i think its much better
   
   Good diff *o*

1. There is inconsistencies in audio-lead in, others have 500 except alacat's Normal, make sure to fix that.
2. Clean.

1. 00:04:578 (6) - Consider moving this further away from 00:04:252 (5) - because you had jumps 00:03:925 (4,5) - here so I expect that 6 will have a larger spacing too, this isn't the case here. Although it played well, it could play better by this.
   
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2. 00:05:556 (1,2,3,4,5) - The whole pattern could be arranged better, now the flow is really broken here, here's 2 pictures how it could be better with a nice flow.
   
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3. 00:07:838 (1,2,3,4) - Make this into a curved stream instead? It'd play better and it would be consistent with 00:04:904 (1) - this stream
4. 00:09:795 (1) - I'd move this note to somewhere around x:385 y:231, because the cursor movement gets more natural this way.
5. 00:10:773 (1) - Your slider could be more better looking shape-wise, try this one, it'd make a nicer curve and more symmetrical:
   
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6. 00:12:404 (6) - Why the random spacing + broken flow here? You could move the slider somewhere to x:162 y:260 to make the jump a bit more random and fix the flow.
7. 00:13:382 (1,2,3) - I have a suggestion for this pattern, since your flow between 1-2 isn't the best, how about doing it more like this?
   
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   This way it plays better, flow is way better. Make sure to fix the blanket between 2-3 if you apply this one.
8. 00:21:860 (3) - If you move the end point of the slider more downright, the flow will be waay better and the slider doesn't look so bad then. If you don't get what I mean by this, see the picture below.
   
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9. 00:25:447 (7,8) - See the picture below again, rearranging them like that would look way cleaner than your current one.
   
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10. 00:34:904 (3,1) - Please care about blankets, make this one perfect. It'd make your map more clean.
11. 00:38:002 (5) - Could you like, reverse the blanket section in that slider? Like this:
    
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    (and rearrange the 00:38:817 (6,7) - like that because it flows better)
12. 00:42:404 (3) - Why the random spacing again? There's no need for that, also it plays rather bad.
13. 00:43:545 (6,7) - And suddenly you used jumps, you decide to use normal spacing, why? You need to be consistent and this just plays weird.
14. 00:51:045 (4) - Could you consider rearranging your slider like this, your current one is fine, it doesn't flow that well though.
    
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    And to fix the flow with the next objects, place 00:51:860 (5) - somewhere to x:195 y:100. It'd look nice because then you would have blankets and such. >:D
15. 00:54:306 (8) - Slider could be done better, a bit similar suggestion that I gave you above somewhere. Try to do it like this: more symmetrical that way and would fit way better:
    
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16. 01:04:088 (1) - Could you rotate the slider a bit that the flow would be nicer here? Like this:
    
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17. 01:13:056 (5,6,7,8) - The curve of this stream gets really bad from here, you had a perfect curve 01:12:730 (1,2,3,4) - here but you kind of ruined it, try this?
    
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18. 01:21:208 (1,2,3,4) - Could flow better, well, your placement is fine but this is just a quick suggestion to make it ''better'' I guess. See if you like my example.
    
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19. Your Insane difficulty needs more work, sorry. Rhythm-wise it was fine, flow-wise, not so. Sorry. :s

1. I don't see the point of HP7, it makes the difficulty spread rather bad and Insane already has HP7, HP6 would make the spread way better.
2. 00:16:969 (4) - Try ctrl + G, it plays nicely ^^
3. 00:32:947 - There's actually no beat here that's mappable, it sounds a bit bad anyway with that note there. Could you consider removing it?
4. 00:46:480 (5) - If you would move your sliders redpoint a bit more to the middle, it would look more symmetrical, which in this case is better than your current one.
   
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5. I guess this diff is almost ready to go, nice job~

1. +1 HP for a better difficulty spread?
2. 00:04:252 (3,5) - I like your idea here but guess what makes it look inperfect? The blanket isn't perfect, could you fix that?
3. 01:00:991 (2) - I'd move this slider a bit down so the movement from 01:00:338 (1) - gets perfect.
4. 01:12:730 (4) - Usually wavesliders that are made by redpoints have that weird bump, which you have, try to remake your slider like this: It'd give the slider a bit smoother waves I would say:
   
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5. 01:34:333 (1) - To be consistent, could you move this spinner 1/4 further? In Insane and Hard the spinner started in the blue tick, not in the big white tick.
6. Yeah nice work!

1. -1 AR +1 OD would make the diff spread more equal. :3
2. 00:04:904 (1) - The NC on this seems to be a bit weird, I'd remove it from here and add the NC on 00:05:882 (2) - instead, would seem more logical imo
3. 00:26:099 (1) - Could cover a bit better 00:25:447 (5) - end of the slider, I mean like this:
   
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4. 01:15:991 (2,3) - This would fit a bit better I guess if 01:16:643 (3) - was blanketed with 2's end, like this (i just made the blanket quickly, make perfect one yourself if you apply this one):
   
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5. 01:34:252 (1) - To be consistent with the Insane & Hard, you should move this spinner to the blue tick.
6. Cool diff, liked your patterns.