yurunneram wrote:

Hey there! ^^ Thx for mod <3

EASY

00:10:088 (1) - move to x84 y116 for flow?

00:47:165 (2,3) - Change positions (longer slider is played first) it plays better

01:15:736 (4) - Spacing before and after differs. Resnap pls

NORMAL

00:47:356 (3,4) - I don't know what you're following here.. since 1 follows the vocals

not much for this diff

HARD

00:12:949 (2) - I think you better make the distance space consistent here. Only increase to 1.2x at (3)

00:31:070 - Add note?

00:40:117 (2) - End at 00:40:308

Well norm and hard are quite clean, sry ^^")7 Good luck~

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

Rice wrote:

as promised! :3

M4M

General

1. Delete some unnecessary files on the song folder like "rivaille.jpg"
2. You might wanna replace your BG, its kind of has a low quality.

Easy

1. 00:17:808 (3) - This object is touching the next one, consider separating it.
2. 00:25:448 (1) - Move this spinner to 00:25:830 and then add a circle with a finish here.
3. 01:23:736 (1) - I think this slider is too random to be there. Try changing it into a smoothly curved slider.

Normal

1. 01:00:879 (6) - This slider doesn't go well with the beat song, consider turning this into a slider like in 01:01:641
2. 01:14:594 (5,6) - These sliders are sticking too close to each other. Separate these sliders, it'll look good
   
   Couldn't find anything else but in general, you really didn't need to use "Distance Snap" in this diff. Using fixed distances between objects limits your creativity of making a good fluent map.

Hard

1. 00:35:546 (2) - Why not just copy pasta the slider on 00:36:498 here?
2. 01:26:403 (1,2,3) - You can just use one circle with a finish here, it kind of not suits the end of the song.
   
   Same suggestion on Normal Diff about the "Distance Snapping" thing. Harder diffs usually uses less distance snapping or sometimes not at all.
   And also, less on the triplets. I think it's too hard.

Insane

1. Reduce AR to 8. This song is below 180 bpm, so AR9 in this one ain't recommended.
2. 00:13:988 (1) - Remove NC
3. 00:15:134 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This pattern is boring imo. Try spreading them out a bit.
4. 00:25:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Too noisy. Remove all claps. ( ._.)
5. 00:33:927 (4) - This note is on a blue tick. Move it 1 tick backwards then bring the object closer to 00:33:451 's end
6. 00:56:308 (1,2) - ugly sliders imo. try changing it.
7. 01:23:260 (4) - Remove Clap
8. 01:23:356 (5) - Add Clap

I kind of noticed that you mostly limit your objects on the grid of the editor, try spreading them out for a bit.

Still needs a lot of polishing, but this is a good map.

good luck~

1. Umm, do you ever use Rivallie's picture in the map at all? If not, remove it from the map's folder.

1. Just saying: I think you used 1/1 sliders and circles a bit too much. I think you can still simplify them; too much 1/1s aren't going to be too friendly for the Easy players.
2. 00:01:706 (1) - Hmm, NC this to make the combo pattern consistent (like 00:07:882 (1,2,3), where the second note is not NC'd)?
3. 00:04:794 (1,2) - The spacing is inconsistent here.
4. 00:09:206 (3,1) - ^
5. 00:11:853 (3,4) - ^
6. 00:18:190 (1) - Remove the NC here. It's not needed at all, since you are placing NCs every two stanzas.
7. 00:21:246 (1,3) - Uh, swap NC to make the combo pattern consistent (again)?
8. 00:38:022 (3) - Maybe move the node on the slider's head to (392,88) for a better flow? The spacing will be kinda broken if you do this, though, so please fix it if you decided to follow me.
9. 00:42:594 (1) - Umm, not a major problem, but why are you shaping the slider like this...
10. 01:06:975 (3,4) - I really don't recommend stacks in an Easy diff. They're hard to read by the newbie players. Unstack them please.
11. 01:15:736 (4,1) - Inconsistent spacing.
12. 01:24:879 (2,3) - Same problem about stacks.
13. 01:26:213 (1) - Move this to (332,28) so the pattern here will look neater?

1. 00:00:824 (1,2) - I'm afraid 1/3s are hard to read in a Normal diff, especially if the rhythm is like this... I suggest not to map on the 1/3 ticks.
2. 00:01:265 (2) - Same as Easy.
3. 00:03:691 (5) - There isn't any vocal on the red tick; instead, there is one at 00:03:764. I recommend not to map that red tick and just use a circle at 00:03:912.
4. 00:05:088 - I'm sure enough there isn't anything here.
5. 00:07:882 (1) - Same as 00:00:824 (1,2).
6. 00:10:382 - Same as 00:05:088.
7. 00:10:529 (5,1) - Inconsistent spacing.
8. 00:14:370 (2,4) - Why are they touching each other? Looks weird, IMO...
9. 00:18:763 - Hmm, I think it isn't necessary to map this. The instrument is too subtle here.
10. 00:20:482 (3,1,2) - These notes are placed too close to each other. They can be confusing to players, and especially the stack. Just make sure (2)'s tail isn't placed near (3), and maybe unstack (1) from (2)'s head.
11. 00:25:830 (4,1) - Swap NC to follow the stanza?
12. 00:34:594 (3,1) - Umm, the spacing looks a little bit different compared to the others.
13. 00:38:784 (3,1,2) - Inconsistent spacing.
14. 00:47:356 - Hmm, there isn't anything that you can follow here. Start 00:47:356 (3) from 00:47:546 instead?
15. 00:48:689 - Add a whistle here and remove the one at 00:48:689? I think you misplaced the whistle...
16. 00:51:736 (5,1) - Swap NC to follow the beginning of the new stanza?
17. 00:54:784 (1,1) - The overlap here is ugly, if I have to be blunt. This is easily avoidable, you know.
18. 01:13:070 (3) - Also NC this for an obvious reason?

1. 00:01:559 - Definitely badly overmapped. Don't do this please.
2. 00:02:000 - ^
3. 00:04:242 - ^
4. 00:05:088 - ^
5. 00:08:617 - ^
6. 00:09:059 - ^
7. 00:22:010 (1,2,3) - Uhm, why is the spacing inconsistent here? It looks strange, you know.
8. 00:33:451 (1,2) - ^
9. 00:43:546 (3,4) - Ctrl+G for the rhythm, to emphasize the vocal at 00:43:927? (Basically, slider first, then followed by a circle).
10. 00:47:356 (5,6,7) - Uhm, change the rhythm to something like this instead to follow the vocal (since the instrument is too subtle here)?
11. 00:48:498 (1,2,3) - Also Ctrl+G for the rhythm for the same reason as the suggestion above?
12. 00:49:641 (4,5) - ^
13. 01:07:736 (3,1) - Umm, why is (3) partially overlapping (1)... Looks awkward for me.
14. 01:13:070 (1) - Make this a curved slider similar to 01:13:451 (2) so the flow will be better?

1. How about making "hitcircleoverlay.png" same colour as "SliderBorder : 250,215,90" ?

1. 00:25:448 (1) - start at 00:25:830
2. 01:10:022 (1) - end at 01:11:546 and add a slider from 01:12:117 to 01:12:689

1. 00:09:206 (2) - I prefer to curve this slider symmetrically about 00:08:323 (1) -
2. 00:47:356 (3,4) - How about this rhythm?
   
3. 01:25:832 (2) - move to x:146 y:320 (smoother cursor moving)

1. 00:38:022 (1,3) - it is better to parallel
2. 00:46:213 (2,3) - I plefer to change for 1 slider
3. 01:04:498 (2,3) - symmetric pattern is better

1. 00:33:070 (6) - move to x:136 y:204 (blanketed correctly)
2. 01:11:546 (1) - how about change SV more slowly? (I like about 0.5x)
3. 01:15:356 (1,2,3,4) - it is better to uniform DS

1. 00:07:294 (1) - Remove the NC? I mean, what's the reason for this? The NC doesn't fit with how the song works.
2. 00:20:864 (1,4) - Slightly touching each other again.
3. 00:27:165 (1,2) - Umm, swap NC since you usually place an NC on the note after a slider which ends in the beginning of a new stanza?
4. 00:36:117 (2) - Still doesn't blanket pretty well. Just saying; I don't have any good idea about how to fix this too, to be honest...
5. 00:42:594 (1,2,3) - The placement looks messy here. The spacing inconsistency also looks jarring. Mind to make this better?
6. 00:45:546 (15,1) - Why separating the slider from the stream just because it's the beginning of the kiai time? Looks really bad, seriously. Just make the spacing consistent.
7. 00:47:165 (6,1) - Swap NC to follow how the stanza works?
8. 00:57:451 (1) - The NC is unnecessary here. It doesn't serve to emphasize anything in the song, so remove the NC?
9. 01:01:070 (7,1) - Also swap NC here for obvious reasons?
10. 01:09:641 (1) - And remove the NC here?
11. 01:13:070 (1) - ^
12. 01:19:165 (7,1) - Swap NC?

Hinsvar wrote:

Okay, let's mod the Insane diff here!

>Insane

1. 00:07:294 (1) - Remove the NC? I mean, what's the reason for this? The NC doesn't fit with how the song works.
2. 00:20:864 (1,4) - Slightly touching each other again.
3. 00:27:165 (1,2) - Umm, swap NC since you usually place an NC on the note after a slider which ends in the beginning of a new stanza?
4. 00:36:117 (2) - Still doesn't blanket pretty well. Just saying; I don't have any good idea about how to fix this too, to be honest...
5. 00:42:594 (1,2,3) - The placement looks messy here. The spacing inconsistency also looks jarring. Mind to make this better?
6. 00:45:546 (15,1) - Why separating the slider from the stream just because it's the beginning of the kiai time? Looks really bad, seriously. Just make the spacing consistent.
7. 00:47:165 (6,1) - Swap NC to follow how the stanza works?
8. 00:57:451 (1) - The NC is unnecessary here. It doesn't serve to emphasize anything in the song, so remove the NC?
9. 01:01:070 (7,1) - Also swap NC here for obvious reasons?
10. 01:09:641 (1) - And remove the NC here?
11. 01:13:070 (1) - ^
12. 01:19:165 (7,1) - Swap NC?

Not really that much of a problem; mostly about NCs. The design can be neater though, IMO.

Well, that's it. No kudosu here ofc.

Good luck on the way

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
Thanks for M4M request

[General]

1. How about making "hitcircleoverlay.png" same colour as "SliderBorder : 250,215,90" ?

[Easy]

1. 00:25:448 (1) - start at 00:25:830 Changed
2. 01:10:022 (1) - end at 01:11:546 and add a slider from 01:12:117 to 01:12:689

No change because the spinner would be too short for Easy level


[Normal]

1. 00:09:206 (2) - I prefer to curve this slider symmetrically about 00:08:323 (1) -
2. 00:47:356 (3,4) - How about this rhythm?
   
3. 01:25:832 (2) - move to x:146 y:320 (smoother cursor moving)

All normal mods changed, except for 00:47:356


[Hard]

1. 00:38:022 (1,3) - it is better to parallel
2. 00:46:213 (2,3) - I plefer to change for 1 slider
3. 01:04:498 (2,3) - symmetric pattern is better

All hard mods changed

[Insane]

1. 00:33:070 (6) - move to x:136 y:204 (blanketed correctly)
2. 01:11:546 (1) - how about change SV more slowly? (I like about 0.5x)
3. 01:15:356 (1,2,3,4) - it is better to uniform DS

No change to insane, sorry! But I appreciate your efforts to mod it~

if hitsound volume is adjusted more, your map becomes better, imo (sorry but I have no idea )
~Good Luck~

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1. If you're going to include the reversearrow.png like you have, then you have to also include a hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png, and approachcircle.png to complete the skin. You can add the ones you're missing from the templete (default) skin which can be found here:
   t/129191&start=0
   
2. Inconsistency in tags, linked horizon is missing from the Easy diff. Make sure to add it.

1. 00:02:147 (4,1) - Try a nice reflection pattern instead. The bent slider contradicts the curve from 4 imo.
   
   Example

   
   
2. 00:07:294 (1) - No point in having this NC here, I suggest remove it for consistency with 00:03:764 (2).
   
3. 00:11:412 (7) - Feels kind of empty here considering it's the same sound in the music as 00:04:353 (4,5,6). It would be nice if you could rearrange your patterns here to add a note at 00:11:559 and 00:11:706. That or you could have a 1/3 slider with a repeat at 00:11:412 which would play nicely.
   
4. 00:13:607 (1,2,3,4,5) - When you stack them like that, the game will auto stack the circles and it pushes the 1-4 to the right so that the 5 will be in the center. If doesn't look very nice imo, you can make a much nicer stream if you unstack these notes. Here's an example of what I did if you'd like to see it:
   
   Example

   
5. 00:20:482 (3,4,5,6,1) - Same idea as above, when you stack the stream like that it pushes the notes too close to the previous slider, unstacking would be much better imo.
   
6. 00:22:583 (8) - Move this one grid down to make a more consistently spaced pattern with 00:22:201 (6,7).
   
7. 00:11:412 to 00:40:689 why 74% volume? Also all of the green lines in this section aren't changing anything, so it would be best just to delete them, unless you wanted to use them to change the volumes...
   
8. 00:33:451 (3,4,5) - I see that you're trying to follow the vocals by ending the 3 on the blue tick 00:33:736 but it makes for a really confusing rhythm because you weren't following vocals before this. It would be best to delete 00:33:927 (4) and extend the 00:33:451 (3) by 1/4. There are other solutions also, but I suggest that you don't end the slider on the blue tick like that unless you are strictly following vocals through the entire section.
   
9. 00:35:546 (1,2) - Try to craft the blanket better so that the 2 will fit directly in the center of the 1. You can use the approach circle from the 2 to craft it. Curve the 1 more and use 1.0 distance snap:
   
   Example

   
10. 00:38:975 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - The stream looks really messy. Try to place it in a nice even curve and avoid having it come down and overlap 00:38:022 (1). You can create beautiful and even streams with a tool under the "Compose" Tab. It allows you to convert a slider into a stream, try it out.
    
    Example

    
11. 00:41:832 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too boxy if you know what I mean. Try to use some curved sliders to spice it up.
    
12. 00:44:879 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - Same as above, the stream looks quite messy, try using the covert slider function on a straight slider to make a perfect stream here.
    
13. 00:54:022 (3,5,6,7) - That overlap isn't so great imo. The sliders overlap each other in an unappealing way. Instead you can try to make a blanket, here's just an example try it out.
    
    Example

    
14. 00:57:832 (1) - Move down to (256,84) to make more consistent spacing in your stream.
    
15. 01:11:165 (4) - Consider replacing this with a 1/2 slider instead because hitting a circle at 01:11:356 doesn't fit the music very well because there is a pause in the percussion. Try this pattern and see if you like it:
    
    Example

    
16. 01:22:594 (5,1) - 01:23:356 (5,1) - Don't be afraid to make larger jumps here like you did at 01:20:308 (6,1) for example. This is the most intense part of the song and your spacing gets pretty small towards the end here, you can afford to make these patterns more interesting.
    
17. 01:26:784 - Give this spinner a gradual decrease in volume like the other diffs.

1. 00:10:529 (5,6) - Watch your spacing, keep it 1.0. It's noticeable in play.
   
2. 00:11:412 to 00:40:689 - Same as Insane.
   
3. 00:12:949 (2) - This is confusing since the sections is essentially in 1/3. I suggest that you delete this note and make more spacing to 00:13:168 (3). You don't even map this note in the Insane diff.
   
4. 01:05:451 (5) - Place the slider anchor on the slider tick in the center of the slider and match the left half with the01:06:022 (1). Go for a clean placement like this:
   
   Example

   
5. 01:11:165 (3) - Same as Insane, I'd prefer 1/2 slider here.

1. 00:01:265 (1) - No need for NC here, you don't do so in the other diffs.
   
2. 00:15:516 (4,3) - That kind of overlap isn't the greatest tbh. There are hundreds of better places that you could have placed the 3 rather than right on top of the previous 4.

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Testplay and mod on Insane.

[General]

1. If you're going to include the reversearrow.png like you have, then you have to also include a hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png, and approachcircle.png to complete the skin. You can add the ones you're missing from the templete (default) skin which can be found here:
   t/129191&start=0
   
2. Inconsistency in tags, linked horizon is missing from the Easy diff. Make sure to add it.

[Insane]

1. 00:02:147 (4,1) - Try a nice reflection pattern instead. The bent slider contradicts the curve from 4 imo.
   
   Example

   
   
   Ok changed!
   
2. 00:07:294 (1) - No point in having this NC here, I suggest remove it for consistency with 00:03:764 (2). Changed
   
3. 00:11:412 (7) - Feels kind of empty here considering it's the same sound in the music as 00:04:353 (4,5,6). It would be nice if you could rearrange your patterns here to add a note at 00:11:559 and 00:11:706. That or you could have a 1/3 slider with a repeat at 00:11:412 which would play nicely. Well, I did change it, but not in the way you mentioned. I did 3 circles which were all on the 1/3 ticks. You can try checking it again if you feel like it
   
4. 00:13:607 (1,2,3,4,5) - When you stack them like that, the game will auto stack the circles and it pushes the 1-4 to the right so that the 5 will be in the center. If doesn't look very nice imo, you can make a much nicer stream if you unstack these notes. Here's an example of what I did if you'd like to see it:
   
   Example

   
   Ok, i agree
   
5. 00:20:482 (3,4,5,6,1) - Same idea as above, when you stack the stream like that it pushes the notes too close to the previous slider, unstacking would be much better imo.
   
6. 00:22:583 (8) - Move this one grid down to make a more consistently spaced pattern with 00:22:201 (6,7). Fixed
   
7. 00:11:412 to 00:40:689 why 74% volume? Also all of the green lines in this section aren't changing anything, so it would be best just to delete them, unless you wanted to use them to change the volumes... Perhaps, but at this point I think that volume wouldnt be the key issue, more like the placement of notes
   
8. 00:33:451 (3,4,5) - I see that you're trying to follow the vocals by ending the 3 on the blue tick 00:33:736 but it makes for a really confusing rhythm because you weren't following vocals before this. It would be best to delete 00:33:927 (4) and extend the 00:33:451 (3) by 1/4. There are other solutions also, but I suggest that you don't end the slider on the blue tick like that unless you are strictly following vocals through the entire section. Sorry, no change to this. I experimented some alternative ways to map it but I think this will do
   
9. 00:35:546 (1,2) - Try to craft the blanket better so that the 2 will fit directly in the center of the 1. You can use the approach circle from the 2 to craft it. Curve the 1 more and use 1.0 distance snap:
   
   Example

   
   Changed, check to see if its appropriately edited
   
10. 00:38:975 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - The stream looks really messy. Try to place it in a nice even curve and avoid having it come down and overlap 00:38:022 (1). You can create beautiful and even streams with a tool under the "Compose" Tab. It allows you to convert a slider into a stream, try it out.
    
    Example

    
    Alright, fixed
    
11. 00:41:832 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too boxy if you know what I mean. Try to use some curved sliders to spice it up. No change to this, the "boxy" sliders signal the approaching of the chorus
    
12. 00:44:879 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - Same as above, the stream looks quite messy, try using the covert slider function on a straight slider to make a perfect stream here. Fixed it, and yeah I do agree it looks better
    
13. 00:54:022 (3,5,6,7) - That overlap isn't so great imo. The sliders overlap each other in an unappealing way. Instead you can try to make a blanket, here's just an example try it out.
    
    Example

    
    Removed the overlap but I did not follow the pattern on your suggsetion
    
14. 00:57:832 (1) - Move down to (256,84) to make more consistent spacing in your stream. Done
    
15. 01:11:165 (4) - Consider replacing this with a 1/2 slider instead because hitting a circle at 01:11:356 doesn't fit the music very well because there is a pause in the percussion. Try this pattern and see if you like it:
    
    Example

    
    
    Fixed
    
16. 01:22:594 (5,1) - 01:23:356 (5,1) - Don't be afraid to make larger jumps here like you did at 01:20:308 (6,1) for example. This is the most intense part of the song and your spacing gets pretty small towards the end here, you can afford to make these patterns more interesting. Alright, Ive increased the distance spacing (you may want to have a second look after update)
    
17. 01:26:784 - Give this spinner a gradual decrease in volume like the other diffs.

Done

All in all, the map needs more work before it could be considered for ranking. You need to work on note placement. Avoid unnecessary overlapping of notes/streams. Overlap like 01:06:022 (7,1,2,3) looks intentional and plays well. But overlap like 00:38:022 (1,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) looks forced and is not so great imo. Just an example, you can work more on that if you'd like.

I hope that can help you.

Quick look at other diffs:

[Hard]

1. 00:10:529 (5,6) - Watch your spacing, keep it 1.0. It's noticeable in play.
   
2. 00:11:412 to 00:40:689 - Same as Insane.
   
3. 00:12:949 (2) - This is confusing since the sections is essentially in 1/3. I suggest that you delete this note and make more spacing to 00:13:168 (3). You don't even map this note in the Insane diff.
   
4. 01:05:451 (5) - Place the slider anchor on the slider tick in the center of the slider and match the left half with the01:06:022 (1). Go for a clean placement like this:
   
   Example

   
5. 01:11:165 (3) - Same as Insane, I'd prefer 1/2 slider here.

[Normal]

1. 00:01:265 (1) - No need for NC here, you don't do so in the other diffs.
   
2. 00:15:516 (4,3) - That kind of overlap isn't the greatest tbh. There are hundreds of better places that you could have placed the 3 rather than right on top of the previous 4.

Easy is by far the cleanest diff. Anyways all diffs need work in terms of placements/flow/and rhythms, but it's just my opinion.
Keep getting mods and good luck!

All mods for Hard & Normal accepted! Thanks for the mods UWS!

1. you used unneccesory inherited point. like 00:25:830,00:30:213...i know that you have intension change volume 5~10%. but i think that this is unneccesory!

1. 00:02:147 ~00:02:147 - i suggest that volume down to 50%. it's better!
2. 00:02:147 (3) - add Finish on both ways.
3. 00:03:470 (4) - add finish on arrow slider.
4. 00:10:088 (1) - you didn't use NC on 00:06:559 (4). so remove NC
5. 00:11:853 (3) - and NC
6. 00:24:302 (3,1) - remove spin and 1 repeat (3) slider. and put some note on 00:27:356 OR Spin(1) start on 00:25:830.(End time is same)
7. 00:56:308 (1) - Red point move 1 gird right. just shape
8. 01:02:403 (3) - Finish on first of slider
9. 01:10:022 (1) - end here 01:11:546. maybe better
10. 01:22:213 (1) - Finish on first of slider

1. 00:01:265 (2) - NC?
2. 00:05:235 (2) - finish on arrow slider
3. 00:27:356 (1) - red point move to (316,292)
4. 00:30:403 (4) - NC
5. 00:48:689 (6) - NC
6. 00:49:641 (1) - remove NC
7. 01:06:975 (5,6,1) - awkward rhythm..

1. 00:24:684 (4) - try this!
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2. 00:28:498 (3) - clap on first of slider
3. 00:34:594 (3) - clap
4. 00:39:260 (4,5) - perfectly overlap on 00:38:784 (3)
5. 00:44:308 (6) - NC
6. 00:50:213 (1) - clap on end of slider
7. 00:51:356 (4) - clap
8. 00:59:356 (1) - clap on end of sldier

1. 00:05:235 (2) - clap on first of slider
2. 00:26:402 (7) - NC
3. 00:32:213 (4) - ^
4. 01:13:451 (1) - 1/4 slider is more better
5. 01:26:784 (1) - you used volume downing on other diff. like 65 60 50 35 20 5

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From my queue of M4M

[General]

1. Tags in Hard are different with others
2. 00:00:824 - The timing point is useless.

[Easy]

1. 00:00:824 (1) - Add a clap on the start.
2. 00:09:206 (3) - Remove the clap on the start, add a clap on the end.
3. 00:12:730 (4) - Add a clap on the end.

ALL EASY FIXED

[Normal]

1. 00:11:853 (1,2,3,4) - strange distance spacing I dont see anything wrong with it
2. 00:37:641 (4,1) - ^ this one i fix
3. placement is not good imo, you can improve it.

[Hard]

1. 00:06:559 (1,2) - strange
2. 00:18:763 (6,7) - is it a blanket?
3. Harder than common hard diff.

NO CHANGE TO HARD

[Insane]

1. 00:24:493 (2,3,4,5,6) - flow is bad imo. I will not change this, i find flow fine though
2. 00:33:260 (1,2,3,4,5) - hears weird ???
3. 00:46:975 (5,6,1,2) - bad flow jump is fine for me though
4. 01:16:689 (2,3,4) - is much better
5. 01:26:213 (5) - Add a clap on the end.

added

hope helps
good luck

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

uh your mods are not very specific, you dont explain things in great detail. but thanks for your effort anyways

Asgard wrote:

[General]
i download with Novid. but i have moive file... why?? i think you should fix this problem http://puu.sh/50Tf5.png

[Insane]
00:08:323 (1) - rotate - http://puu.sh/50Tns.jpg and placed on 112, 108 this is better then previous
00:19:336 (6,7,8) - i think this is better then now http://puu.sh/50TpI.jpg
00:35:546 (1) - blanket i mean rotate - 10 look at this http://puu.sh/50TqO.jpg
00:44:879 (8) - NC
00:56:117 (10) - i think this place is not good to play
00:56:308 (1,2) - didn't stack end of slider
01:20:117 (4) - 1 grid left
01:25:641 (3,4) - 3 didn't stack on end of slider 4

Changed all for Insane except [color=#FF0000]00:44:879 (8) - NC [/color] 15 combo is alright for insane imo

actually Insane is not enough something.. but i can't explain that


[Hard]
00:04:794 (2) - didn't stack on end of slider 2 fixed
00:15:516 (5,6) - how about this? http://puu.sh/50TBd.jpg fixed
00:19:718 (1,2) - try this rhythm - http://puu.sh/50TCw.jpg no change, i think the original pattern flows better than this
00:39:260 (4,5) - didn't stack on end of slider 3 fixed

not enough something too... what is it? if you want to provide suggestions in your perspective, please be specific

[Normal]
i guess you must use distance spacing 1.1x because there are too many overlap
00:46:784 (2,3) - rhythm is really strange
01:21:070 (5) - NC

Fixed all for Normal, changed DS to 1.1
i recommend to remake this map with distance spacing 1.1X

Asgard wrote:

i download with Novid. but i have moive file... why?? i think you should fix this problem http://puu.sh/50Tf5.png

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jonathanlfj wrote:

so much delay but you get an upgraded BAT mod so i guess it evens out? xD

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
in Hard diff you have the tags "進撃の巨人" and "timing" reversed which is breaking AIMod, please use the same tag order as other diffs
disable your widescreen storyboard support since you are not using a storyboard
the bg looks like its directly taken from the video, hence the artifacts and colour blocks. I would suggest you get a nicer bg, you can try this one:

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All mods for General accepted

[Easy]
00:02:147 (3) - might want a finish on the end, since you have a finish on every long white tick
00:14:752 (2) - fix spacing here
00:25:448 (1) - to follow the emphasis in the music, consider starting this spinner at 00:25:830 instead
00:47:165 (2) - since you followed vocals in the previous verses, might want to do it here as well. shorten it to 00:47:736 if you agree
00:50:213 (2,3) - arrange it like this to avoid the overlap:

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00:55:546 (4) - put the NC here, like at 01:07:736 (1)
01:02:403 (3) - i think you meant to put a finish here instead of the whistle?
01:22:213 (1) - missing a finish
01:23:736 (1) - probably an extra NC considering the previous combo lengths

All mods for Easy accepted except for
00:47:165 (2) - since you followed vocals in the previous verses, might want to do it here as well. shorten it to 00:47:736 if you agree I think its better if I keep the slider extended to the white tick because its easier to catch on to the next note, instead of ending on the red tick


[Normal]
AR+1 please, makes things much easier to read; and OD+1 if you want to have a better spread from Easy
00:03:029 (4) - finish, like Easy
00:11:853 (1) - i think you meant to stack this with 00:10:088 (4), its 2 grids lower atm
00:21:628 (2) - the way this is arranged feels a bit anti flow, moving the end lower would make it flow more nicely
00:31:927 (1,2) - since the pianos feel more dominant here, you can swap this for a repeat slider instead:

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00:33:451 (1) - forgot clap on end
00:46:784 (2,3,4,5) - i can't tell what you are trying to follow here, might want to make the rhythm more approachable for a Normal diff. Here is an alternative rhythm you can use:

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00:48:689 (6) - NC should be here instead of 00:49:641 (1)
00:58:975 (2) - clap start
01:00:879 (6) - NC here instead of 01:01:641 (1)
01:06:975 (5) - NC here instead of 01:07:356 (1)
01:10:022 (1) - the slider here feels a bit skewed to the left, try blanketing the position of 01:07:927 (2) so it forms a nice curved flow with the previous circles
01:13:070 (3) - NC here instead of 01:12:117 (1)
01:23:165 (2) - watch for spacing here

All mods for Normal accepted

[Hard]
00:02:147 (4) - finish on start
00:07:294 - add a note here? the vocals start on this tick
00:16:280 (7) - forgot clap
00:22:010 (1) - drop the NC here, place it at 00:22:965 (2), and drop it on 00:23:538 (1), this keeps ur NC patterns more consistent
00:24:684 (4) - clap start
00:28:498 (3) - ^
00:38:784 (3,4,5) - the triplet pattern on the end is a bit hard to hit on time due to the long slider, based on the music here its more preferable if you arrange it like this (stack on 00:39:546 (1)):

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All mods up to here (00:38:784) changed


00:44:117 (5) - i would delete this note, mostly because the vocals are more dominant here and it ends previously in a halt which connects with 00:44:308 (6) Hmmm, I agree with this mod, but I'm not sure if you'd like it the way I changed it

00:50:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - forgot claps in this combo There were always claps in this area

00:55:546 (5,1,2) - i got a bit confused here (and broke on first try), the way you did the NC and placement kinda implied some more complicated rhythm when the music simply ran in 1/2s. i would reduce a repeat for 00:55:546 (5) and take the NC off 00:55:927 (1) ok fixed
00:57:451 (1) - no need for NC here fixed
00:59:356 (1) - missing clap on end fixed
01:17:641 (6) - NC here fixed
01:21:070 (2) - dont think that finish is really necessary Nah, the 2nd finish is for emphasis of the loudest part of the song
01:24:689 (2) - watch spacing Fixed, but I didnt see what was wrong with the spacing in the first place

[Insane]
00:10:088 (4) - missing NC here fixed
00:26:784 (11,12,13,14) - i would delete these 4 notes and use a 1/2 slider instead; because there are strong instruments running here in 1/2, using a slider could convey the music better and reduce stress from streaming too long no change, because this is insane, the stream of 14 is for a challenge, and I think that it doesnt make much difference after comparing with your mod


00:30:975 (1,2) - i think a triplet here to follow the vocals would be nice:

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ok fixed
00:32:213 (4) - watch for spacing here, and also i would move this further away to make it more obvious that its a 3/4 rhythm Moved further but not sure if its good enough for you

00:33:927 (4,5) - im not sure if this is a good idea since i couldn't distinguish this rhythm that well from the music; might want to use some alternative rhythm here:

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I'll stick to this pattern thanks

00:44:879 (8) - good place to put a NC to avoid long combos fixed
00:53:260 (1) - curve this so it blankets nicely around the start of 00:52:689 (3) Fixed, but unsure if curved enough or at the right place

00:54:784 (7) - NC here
01:15:546 (2) - i would avoid overlaps like this for aesthetic purposes, you can try a setup like this:

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01:22:975 (1) - the jump from the previous slider is too intense imo, try to reduce the spacing here to less than 2.0x
there are some long white ticks without finishes in the kiai, im not sure if thats intentional or not so just telling you in case it wasnt

All mods from 00:54:784 (7) - 01:22:975 (1) fixed

Overall this is a pretty clean set, Normal displays a rather high star rating but it not very hard to play, and Insane looks rather polished and is pretty fun to play as well. Since I just became a BAT, I need kind of a "trial period" before doing bubble/ranks, so try to grab some mods that focuses on NC and hitsounding consistencies, and call me back for a recheck a week later or so.

jonathanlfj wrote:

rechecking no kd

[General]
Disable widescreen storyboard support on all diffs (check in song setup - design - misc. toggles)

[Easy]
00:17:808 (3,4) - fix spacing here
00:50:213 (2,3) - i dont think you fixed this properly, the spacing is also enlarged here; check the puush in my previous mod on how to arrange this

[Normal]
00:21:628 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing here, think it was due to a previous fix but you didnt adjust the second slider down
00:25:830 (4) - have the NC here instead of 00:26:211 (1) makes more sense musically
01:06:975 (1,2,3) - this is one of the triples i find rather unfitting in the kiai here, because the vocals are dominant and on a hold where you chose to map 1/2 rhythm through it. I would just change this into a 1/1 repeat slider instead:

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[Hard]
00:30:403 (4,5) - use a slider first and then the circle, 00:30:594 is a minor beat which shouldnt require clicking
00:43:736 (4,5,6) - its best if you can follow the vocals here and use this rhythm:

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00:54:403 (1,2,3) - after some further testing i suggest you shrink 00:54:403 (1) to 00:54:594 and add a note at 00:54:784, much easier rhythm to grasp imo
00:56:308 (1,2) - start with the right slider and then the left, gives a better flow from 00:56:117 (8)

[Insane]
00:23:156 (4,5,6,7) - swap for this rhythm plays better imo

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00:34:403 (6,7) - use the slider first then the circle, covers the vocals better
00:41:070 (5,6,7,8) - the note spam is not very comfortable to play here, you can try something like this:

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00:58:403 (2) - just adjust this a bit so the spacing from the previous and next looks more uniform
01:22:975 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix the curve on this stream so it looks more natural

alright call me back after this~

Frostmourne wrote:

yo

General
"op 2" as a tag doesn't work, change to "op2 opening" instead

Easy
01:20:689 (3) - needs whistle here on the tail

Normal
00:40:117 (2) - whistle every point in this slider so they won't sound inconsistent like this
01:01:641 (2) - follow more precisely on vocal this way. You just start the slider at 01:01:641 , also use only whistle on both head and tail because clap doesn't work on red ticks anymore this case

SPOILER

01:20:308 (4) - remove whistle from head here, you are using them for the sound that appears on such points that mainly have guitar sound to support

Hard
00:36:498 (1) - this suddenly appears exactly under 00:35:546 (2) - which makes me feel unsure if it's rankable. Try to adjust them in another way please
00:49:641 (4,5) - swap this and put a circle on 00:50:213 (1) - 's head because it will sound correspondingly with 00:49:260 (3) - as mainly for vocal transition

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Insane
00:20:864 (1) - change this Sampleset of slider to "Auto" instead of "Soft" , the clap on the head appears awkwardly in this case lol (you have to use test mode to get to it)

I will rank it once you are done fixing/applying these.