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baka-kodoraka C:<
01:00 Reiji-RJ: insane?
01:02 Kodora: yup
01:03 Reiji-RJ: 00:28:926 (1) - может, финиш?
01:05 Reiji-RJ: 00:51:037 (1,2,3,1,2) - биты на них
01:05 Reiji-RJ: нормал
01:05 Reiji-RJ: срочно
01:05 Reiji-RJ: и на остальные тоже
01:05 Kodora: 1) там свисток уже висит, да и в музыке финиша нет, не слишком ли громко?
01:06 Reiji-RJ: 01:16:920 (5) - финиш
01:06 Reiji-RJ: ну на первый как хочешь
01:06 Reiji-RJ: а на последний желательно бы
01:06 Kodora: 2) аргх уже делал, злились что громко. но раз ты сказала то верну :3
01:06 Reiji-RJ: 01:25:148 (4) - и сюда
01:06 Kodora: на последний сделал
01:06 Reiji-RJ: попробуй не клапом ставить, а тем, что хс меняет
01:06 Reiji-RJ: слева
01:06 Reiji-RJ: в углу
01:06 Reiji-RJ: нормал поставь
01:06 Reiji-RJ: и все
01:07 Reiji-RJ: так вроде тише звучит
01:07 Kodora: там именно нормалы и были
01:07 Reiji-RJ: :О
01:07 Reiji-RJ: 01:26:519 (4) - и сюда финиш мб
01:07 Reiji-RJ: по ритму - отлично
01:07 Reiji-RJ: и по расстановке
01:07 Reiji-RJ: тоже
01:07 Reiji-RJ: и по хс :3
01:07 Kodora: тоже добавил
01:07 Kodora: спасибо огромное ^^
01:08 Reiji-RJ: 00:42:810 - только в этой части жалко, что пропускал биты :С
01:08 Reiji-RJ: остальное отлично
01:08 Reiji-RJ: не за что, бааака
01:08 Reiji-RJ: я всегда рада тебе помочь
01:08 Kodora: >w<
01:08 Kodora: я честно не знаю что с этой частью делать x.x
01:09 Reiji-RJ: ну
01:09 Reiji-RJ: можешь так оставить
01:09 Reiji-RJ: но чисто мое мнение: я бы не пропустила биты. я биты люблю :3
01:10 Kodora: любые идеи в студию плиз :о
01:11 Reiji-RJ: например
01:11 Reiji-RJ: 00:44:524 (2) - убрать
01:11 Reiji-RJ: 00:44:010 (1) - двинуть на даунбит
01:11 Reiji-RJ: вперед
01:11 Kodora: баттхёртослайдер
01:11 Kodora: >_>
01:12 Kodora: который сломал мне ритм
01:12 Reiji-RJ: 00:44:010 - соответственно сюда ноту, можно даже стакнутую с этим слайдером
01:12 Reiji-RJ: 00:45:381 (1) - то же самое сотворить с этим
01:12 Reiji-RJ: и будут тебе даунбиты с ритмом!
01:12 Reiji-RJ: и нормал тогда не забудь :3
posted
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Sekai's Easy

00:01:025(2)- the slider ends at 00:01:948- is better?
00:02:409(1,2)- the rhythm sounds a little strange , change (1) into a note, move (2) to 00:02:871- and it ends at 00:03:794-
can use reverse :3
00:06:563(3)-ehh, the strange rhythm for me, I'd better move (3) to 00:06:333-, and ends at 00:06:794-, and adds a reverse.
00:07:717(1)-maybe can add a reverse
00:09:563(1,2)-move (1,2) to 00:09:794-; (2) ends at 00:10:948-
01:00:465(3)- ends at 01:01:151- is better?
01:03:379(3)-the reverse at 01:03:722- is better; 01:04:407(4)-add note
01:08:864(3)-^
01:23:605(1,2)-remove (1) , move (2) to 01:23:777-
01:25:148(x)-add note
01:25:662(3)-do not use a slider ended at 01:26:005- or 01:26:176-?

abalee's Normal

阿爸么么哒

00:56:523(1)-~00:59:779(4)-不用normal音吗
01:07:150(1)-我觉得拆成note和slider比较好, 01:07:150(8)-add note 然后slider去个折返往后挪
01:10:921(2)-这里用折返一次的slider?
01:14:178(3,4)-可以给(3)加个折返,头上加个soft-finish 后面加clap ,(4)去掉
01:15:378(1)-移到01:15:206-比较好?
01:16:920(4,5)-(4)加个折返 去掉(5)
01:17:777(5)-add note
最后加个spinner吧

Insane

ar 8 is ok

00:00:333(1)-Ctrl+G
01:20:520(3,5)-both Ctrl+G

Skystar's Insane

ar 8 is ok

和我想的jump方向都是反的
posted
As your request~

moe Kodora :3

[Sekai's Easy]
00:57:894 - vocal starts here

[abalee's Normal]
hp-1 od-1
00:12:102 (1) - 我觉得不用stack比较好
sv1.2是不是有点快?我觉得是有点快- -

[alacat's Hard]
awesome hard diff!

[Insane]
00:04:717 (2,3,4,5) - make like this?

00:06:102 (1,2,3,4,5) - make like this?
,

00:34:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - too big distance doesn't fit the rhythm. Try to reduce spacing?
00:39:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:00:122 (3) - move away~
awesome jumping, I like it~
Just suggestion: Make more star-jumping will be fun and fit the song's name.

[Skystar's Insane]
星爷做星桥的图竟然没有星的跳
没啥好挑的

stared.
good luck~
posted
good mapse :)
posted
21:18 Flower: o.o/
21:19 Kodora: hey :3/
21:19 Flower: Got time? Remember yesterday we talked about?
21:20 Kodora: yeah
21:20 Kodora: back home 15 min ago lol
21:20 Flower: k. when you are home call me.
21:21 *Kodora calls Flower
21:21 Kodora: already
21:22 Flower: xD
21:22 Kodora: :3
21:24 Kodora: you want irc?
21:24 Flower: k... Let's do the irc mod. first your insane
21:24 Kodora: one thing pls i wont fix anything for my guest mappers
21:25 Flower: sure, so I'll make a thread for it then
21:25 Flower: 00:01:948 (5) - add whistle? kinda feel weird
21:25 Kodora: sure >w<
21:26 Flower: 00:09:333 (5) - ^
21:26 Flower: 00:13:486 (2) - ^
21:26 Kodora: done all
21:28 Flower: 00:24:212 (4) - I don't feel good at this one. maybe move to 00:24:555 - ?
21:29 Kodora: you mean just make triple in other part?
21:29 Kodora: good, was thinking about it
21:29 Flower: ._.
21:29 Kodora: will change
21:29 Kodora: what ._.
21:30 Kodora: http://puu.sh/4BoqU.jpg this, right?
21:30 Flower: yeah
21:30 Kodora: will do
21:32 Flower: 00:34:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - it's ok, but I don't like the jump here xD such a silence part
21:32 Flower: 00:41:953 (1,2) - add wjost;es?
21:32 Flower: whistles*
21:33 Kodora: 1) any alternatives please. i was sure its fine
21:33 Kodora: 2) good, also killed volume a bit
21:33 Flower: k
21:34 Flower: 00:50:009 - ^
21:34 Kodora: added
21:34 Flower: 00:58:579 (1,2) - use ctrl+G to make better symmetry?
21:36 Kodora: oh yes done
21:36 Flower: 01:09:464 - I hear a clear beat. if you are sure to skip it it's ok, but just think about it.
21:38 Kodora: was thinking about it actually - onliest reason why i not add it yet is because this will take huge pattern rework
21:38 Kodora: maybe will do
21:38 Flower: k
21:38 Flower: 01:12:978 (1,4) - same ctrl+G trick. like this: http://puu.sh/4BoBJ.jpg I'm sure you know how do do it :p
21:39 Flower: 01:19:320 (2) - move to x:78 y:167
21:40 Kodora: 1) oh lol there are also tiny stacking issue what i didnt noticed
21:40 Flower: lol
21:41 Kodora: 2)done
21:41 Flower: 01:27:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - fuck the pattern, ok? XD
21:42 Flower: If you want to do it then use ctrl+shift+D
21:42 Kodora: ok will fuck(runs
21:43 Kodora: it wasnt planned as a star actually XD
21:43 Flower: k
21:43 Flower: the end
21:43 Kodora: thank you very much >w<
21:44 Flower: you are welcome :)


[skystar]
00:08:408 (1) - dat shape. you got time make a can see shape?
00:15:331 (3) - stack 2 tail?
00:17:408 (1) - .
00:30:126 (5) - I suggest splitting to a 1/2 slider + a note to emphasize the finish.
00:50:180 (4) - kinda hard to read. try x:357 y:110?
01:12:121 (3) - slider end at x:79 y:268, which flows better, against 01:11:607 (1) - tail. remember to adjust other notes.

[alacat]
nothing to say. maybe AR+1? can't read well.

[abalee]
00:08:409 (3) - 00:10:256 (6) - kinda overmapped. I suggest using 3/2 slider instead. this rhythm feels bad.
00:31:840 (1,2,3,4) - form a perfect square.
00:42:810 (1) - 0.6 to 1.0 is very tricky. you may want to use 0.8x here, and make a gradual speed up.

[sekai]
AR+1 imo. Can't read it.
00:03:102 (2) - I don't know why you place th rhythm like this. maybe you can move it 1/2 later.
00:04:256 (1,2,3) - spacing inconsistency

Good luck :>
posted
Hi there~ o3o/
from request in game =w=
[Insane]
00:47:438 (2) - it will be better add normal-hitwhistle on 00:47:266 (1) - but not this slider's head :3
01:07:150 - change green line to 01:07:236 -
others looks nice ~

no kds plz
and i'll give you a star instead of my poor mod =3=
good luck =w=)b

p.s. i'm really lazy recently orz
posted
Hi~~~kodora~
As your req~

General
Kiss this song

Insane
00:24:298 (4,5) - don't stack

00:45:381 (1) - make it a 1/2slider + 1/4slider like 00:24:298 (4,5) - there is vocal on blue tick and drun on long white tick
00:46:838 miss sth here...but it is hard to change,so it's call you
00:50:352 (5,6,7) - try to make flow better here but imo,I will make it like this >_>

01:05:436 (3) - this slider must be special one

01:09:464 miss drum here
01:27:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use star patter,Hoshizora e Kakaru Hashi need hoshi
01:06:979 (4,6) - add whistle
01:07:321 (7) - add whistle

Skystar's Insane
00:27:383 (3) - stack好蛋疼。。能不能不stack
00:30:126 (5) - 改1/2加一个note?note往左上角跳一跳

这种感觉
00:46:838 少了什么
01:05:436 (5,6) - 好普通sad,这里有个特殊梗就好了/w\
01:09:378 (3,4,5) - 这边感觉换两个kick加一个note 好,这边滑条尾压鼓声不太舒服
01:27:033 (2,3,4,5) - 加个note画个五角星

abalee's Normal
我想AR+1
一开始的部分加一点whistle好
00:16:948 (5) - 不要stack了吧._.
01:21:891 (3) - 这个感觉有点坑,前面也有1/2折返但是只折返一次的,不过好像不太好改。。去一个折返加个note怎么样
01:23:262 (1,2) -不太对,后面那个滑条改折返
01:27:376 (6) - 上面那个改了的话这个最好也改

alacat's Hard
fine

Sekai's Easy
00:01:025 (2) - I prefer to lengthen it to 00:01:948 and use same rhythm at 00:07:717 (1) - plz
00:02:409 (3) - this slider should start at 00:02:640 and end at 00:03:563
00:31:325 (1) - finish on tail
00:42:810 (1) - finish on head
01:23:948 (2) - finish on head
01:25:662 (3) - finish
01:26:005 add a 1/1 slider here and finish on head

that's all
/me hug kodora
posted
request from in-game :3

[general]
Uninherited timing points confilct :(
Inconsistency in PreviewTime :(
hmm…… AiBAT thinks that lead-in is a bit fast X.X

[sekai's easy]
00:02:409 (1,2) - strange rhythm here o.o
00:04:256 (1) - beat in 00:04:717 - and 00:05:179 - but miss it o.o just a little bit strange
00:58:065 (3) - move to 00:57:894 -
01:03:379 (3) - same as 00:04:256 (1) -
01:06:121 - add a circle?
01:08:864 (3) - same as 00:04:256 (1) - 01:03:379 (3) -
01:20:863 (1) - a bit ugly :X
01:23:948 (2,3) - move to 01:23:777 - ?

00:58:922 (4) - make it curve

nice diff :3


[abalee's Normal]
00:33:897 (4) - move to fit a square
00:39:382 (4) - ^
00:45:552 (3,4,5,6) - ^
:o
00:42:810 (1) - when I first play this diff I break a combo here maybe 0.8x here and 1.0x here:00:51:037 (1) -
quite nice diff :3 just some little things


[alacat]
00:34:411 (9) - delete?
awesome


[insane]
maybe diff spread is not so well 0.0
00:05:179 (3,4,5) - not so beautiful :(
00:07:025 (3,4,5) - ^
00:24:212 (4) - delete maybe ,I'm not sure
00:40:582 (5) - flow is not so well imo
00:43:667 (2,3,4) - make it a regular triangle plz o.o
00:50:609 (6) - delete maybe ,I'm not sure
01:00:465 (1) - can use same trick as 00:17:467 (1) - (spilt the spinner into note+spinner)
01:21:034 (5) - maybe can curve better
01:26:348 (3) - 1 grid up
maybe not so neat when come to tri-shapes before kiai time :(
overall a great diff x3


[skystar]
fine

great mapset with many mappers :3
wish a good rank xD
good luck :>
posted
Insane

ar 8 is ok it works on slowdown parts, but makes almost all jumps (especially at kiai part) just unreadable. No, sorry.

00:00:333(1)-Ctrl+G disagree, it was planned
01:20:520(3,5)-both Ctrl+G same, sorry, this jumps feel weird after Ctrl+G
[Insane]
00:04:717 (2,3,4,5) - make like this? yep, fixed spacing
00:06:102 (1,2,3,4,5) - make like this? sorry, i dont like this ,
00:34:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - too big distance doesn't fit the rhythm. Try to reduce spacing? any alternatives please - it fits for me as it now. Dont trust DS at slowdown parts
00:39:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ same, but i was thinking to change this pattern a bit. maybe will do.
01:00:122 (3) - move away~ nope, this trap was planned
awesome jumping, I like it~
Just suggestion: Make more star-jumping will be fun and fit the song's name. i dont like star patterns tbh XD
Hi there~ o3o/
from request in game =w=
[Insane]
00:47:438 (2) - it will be better add normal-hitwhistle on 00:47:266 (1) - but not this slider's head :3 changed to soft-addition
01:07:150 - change green line to 01:07:236 - really my bad, fixed
others looks nice ~

no kds plz
and i'll give you a star instead of my poor mod =3=
good luck =w=)b no, it was helpful :3

p.s. i'm really lazy recently orz
request from in-game :3

[general]
Uninherited timing points confilct :(noticed this long time ago, i hope Yuko will fix it once he will checked mods. Not going to fix by myself because i really do not want to deal with 1ms unsnapped stuff everywhere
Inconsistency in PreviewTime :(wrong offset issue. will be fixed
hmm…… AiBAT thinks that lead-in is a bit fast X.X 1500 too fast? IMO, 2000 too long. 1750 anyone? XD

[insane]
maybe diff spread is not so well 0.0 Yuko's diff easier than mine. Once alacat will raise AR this would be solved i guess. 3-rd insane is pointless.
00:05:179 (3,4,5) - not so beautiful :(changed spacing a bit, but not going to change the whole pattern
00:07:025 (3,4,5) - ^ Any alternatives please, it looks fine for me.
00:24:212 (4) - delete maybe ,I'm not sure yes, deleted
00:40:582 (5) - flow is not so well imo changed this pattern
00:43:667 (2,3,4) - make it a regular triangle plz o.o disagree
00:50:609 (6) - delete maybe ,I'm not sure disagree
01:00:465 (1) - can use same trick as 00:17:467 (1) - (spilt the spinner into note+spinner) there is no reason to put note at all
01:21:034 (5) - maybe can curve better code pls then :V
01:26:348 (3) - 1 grid up dome
maybe not so neat when come to tri-shapes before kiai time :(fixed one ugly slider before kiai, really do not want to fix others
overall a great diff x3


Thanks for mods! Updated.

And thank you taka >w<
posted
Thanks for helpful mod guys Fixed a lot of stuff :3

http://puu.sh/4BQdR.osu
posted
Slider velocity 0.6->0.8.
some parts and hitsound changed.
background video added.
http://puu.sh/4BS3b.zip
posted
Thanks! Updated :3
posted
только одна дифф твоя .... waw no comment.

#queue req

[Sekai]
  1. HP -1 OD -2
  2. 00:17:409 (1) - you should add a note where the spinner start actualy and start it a bit later
  3. 00:32:182 - you should add a circle here
  4. 00:46:924 (3) - this slider will flow better with a curved form
  5. 00:58:065 (3) - this slider should start at 00:57:894 -
  6. 01:03:379 (3) - drum sampleset on slider start
  7. 01:08:864 (3) - drum sampleset on slider start
  8. 01:23:605 (1,2) - forgot hitsounds here?
  9. 01:25:319 - add something here it feels so empty


[abalee]
  1. OD and HP-1
  2. 00:08:409 (3,4) - try a pattern like this without overlap anything:
  3. 00:13:948 (3,4) - do a blanket here
  4. 01:28:062 - a spinner here would be perfect


[alacat]
  1. 00:52:923 (6) - for a better flow place it like:


[Kodora]
  1. HP+1
  2. 00:07:025 (3,4,5,1) - try to make spacing consistent here,feels fery strange here
  3. 00:08:409 (3,4) - do better blanket here
  4. 00:51:037 (1,2) - try something like this:


[Skystar]
  1. sad no spinner ;_;


good luck ^^
posted
Sekai's Easy:

00:52:409 (2) - Delete Whistle at the end?
01:15:378 (4) - Add Whistle for the pattern?

abalee's Normal:

01:02:350 (1) - Maybe too fast after the spin?
01:23:434 (2) - I think deleting the Finish at the start will emphasize the one at the end better.

alacat's Hard:

00:10:717 (6) - Delete Whistle at the end?
00:31:325 (6) - Not sure if this goes with the previous combo. Maybe start NC here instead 00:31:840 (1)?
00:52:066 (4) - Add Whistle at the start?
00:54:808 (4) - ^
01:13:835 (4) - ctrl+G and adjust spacing? I don't think a jump suits here.
01:16:406 (5) - Add Finish at the start?
01:19:663 (1,2) - I don't think this rhythm fits well. Maybe 1/1 slider and a note will be better.

Insane:

00:44:010 (4,1) - Switching the rhythm will sound better.

skystar's Insane:

00:21:898 (6) - Add Whistle at the start
00:24:640 (5) - Add Whistle
posted

Troogle wrote:

[alacat]
00:34:411 (9) - delete? i want to put 1/1 rhythm in this part.
awesome thank kyu :D

Lally wrote:

[alacat]
  1. 00:52:923 (6) - for a better flow place it like: keep on now :3

Sonnyc wrote:

alacat's Hard:
00:10:717 (6) - Delete Whistle at the end? D: why ?
00:31:325 (6) - Not sure if this goes with the previous combo. Maybe start NC here instead 00:31:840 (1)?
00:52:066 (4) - Add Whistle at the start? break my pattern of whistle.
00:54:808 (4) - ^ Same.
01:13:835 (4) - ctrl+G and adjust spacing? I don't think a jump suits here. on purpose ;)
01:16:406 (5) - Add Finish at the start? ok!
01:19:663 (1,2) - I don't think this rhythm fits well. Maybe 1/1 slider and a note will be better. this is my arrange :p
Thank you for modding ~~~

http://puu.sh/4C5Kz.zip
posted
[abalee's Normal]
01:12:464 (5,6) - Try make like this?-> http://puu.sh/4zNKk.jpg
01:27:719 - clap

[Sekai's Easy]
can use slidertick :3

[Skyatar's Insane]
00:10:024 (4) - x124y124

[Insane]
01:02:008 (4) - NC?

Noob mod :3
if not useful , no kd
posted
Thanks for modding :3

Fixed a lot of stuff~

http://puu.sh/4CxBg.osu
posted
Hi~~~kodora~
As your req~

General
Kiss this song <33

Insane
00:24:298 (4,5) - don't stack fixed

00:45:381 (1) - make it a 1/2slider + 1/4slider like 00:24:298 (4,5) - there is vocal on blue tick and drun on long white tick finally good way to fix it, ily <3
00:46:838 miss sth here...but it is hard to change,so it's call you will take huge remap of this part + this beat is very weak, i'll leave it as it now
00:50:352 (5,6,7) - try to make flow better here but imo,I will make it like this >_> I am.... not sure. It was before actually... will ask Yuko about this

01:05:436 (3) - this slider must be special one That will ruin distance snap, no

01:09:464 miss drum here Fixed
01:27:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use star patter,Hoshizora e Kakaru Hashi need hoshi i was sure i did it from Flower's mod, dunno why it not saved.. fixed anyway
01:06:979 (4,6) - add whistle no, too loud
01:07:321 (7) - add whistle yes

/me hug kodora /me hugs moe baldrace for helpful mod
[Kodora]
  1. HP+1 HP8 will make slowdown parts painful with hr on, so no
  2. 00:07:025 (3,4,5,1) - try to make spacing consistent here,feels fery strange here pretty much intentional, there is no way how to fix it
  3. 00:08:409 (3,4) - do better blanket here fixed
  4. 00:51:037 (1,2) - try something like this: improved pattern in other way
Insane:

00:44:010 (4,1) - Switching the rhythm will sound better. not sure, also for this case i need to remap this part
[Insane]
01:02:008 (4) - NC? yes!~

Noob mod :3
if not useful , no kd thanks, it was helpful!


Thanks for mods, updated :3
posted
yo >~</
it took a bit more time as i expected and to avoid the uselessness of my mod as someone can mod too and post before me - i am leaving only modded easy. tomorrow gonna check and mod all all all the remaining diffs, sry /;~;\ a half for now, k
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[sekai's easy]

  1. 00:06:562 (3) - after more curved (1) this slider looks kinda weird. better to keep the movement of (3) slider just in horizontal way. i'd put this slider some grids down and set the end of the slider on the same y axis
  2. 00:07:716 (1) - if i were you i'd not have started a new phrase (' haato no promise ') with a mirrored slider like this. also on 00:08:408 you have sound ' nooooooo ' and im surprised why you have finished a slider here instead of start it. so the whole suggestion for this part : 00:07:716 (1) - replace as note, 00:08:408 - add a slider
  3. 00:12:101 (2) - same as above. i'd emphasize the long sound ' i ' from the new word ' ieru ' here. it's better to do something else here >~<

    or replace (1,2) as a slider
  4. 00:31:325 (1,2,3,4) - really really really confusing rhythm x~x here is a pretty continuous phrase and you have (1,2,3) as a 1/1 pattern but the place between (3) and (4) feels empty. also the (1,2,3) pattern is kinda awkward.. i'd say that its better to add a note here 00:33:554, but as for the easies difficulty i want to sugget to simplify the rhythm in this way


    or if you dun want to change anything here i can suggest a bit better pattern oзо
  5. 00:37:325 (1,2,3) - hmh what about to change the position of (3) slider? this pattern plays better with flipped (3)~
  6. 00:44:181 (3) - the movement from (1)'s end to (2) and (3) goes horizontally and softly upward, nice. but i have a butthurt in these kind of patterns, cause as you can see the soft movement from (1) and (2) suddenly turns into a sharp movement on the (3) slider here http://puu.sh/4CKzU.jpg. i'd really reccomend you to rotate the (3) ~ -25° to keep the soft movement here
  7. 00:56:523 (2,3) - while testplaying i noticed smth strange in this part, thought here is a spacing issue but its the rhythm itself.. x~x damn odd
  8. 01:15:378 (4) - unnecessary note, really o.o mmm actually there is a hard bit on 01:14:178 and i'd move (3) exactly on this position. but as you have ignored a bit on 01:13:996 and these are on red 1/2 section.. i'd suggest to add a reverse slider to emphasise these bits without confusing 1/2 notes like there


[abalee's normal]

  1. 00:00:331 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - this part is kinda empty without hitsounds, what about to add whistles somewhere to emphasise the high tone of voice and piano like:
    00:01:024 (2) - at the beginning of slider and ending;
    00:02:639 (4) - at the beginning
    00:03:331 (5) - ending
    00:04:716 (2) - at the reverse
    00:06:331 (4) - ;
    00:07:024 (6) - ;
    00:08:408 (3) - ending
    00:10:024 (5) - beginning
    00:10:716 (6) - at the reverse
    00:13:947 (3) - all parts, to fully emphasise the piano sound
    00:15:793 (4) - at the beginning
    00:16:947 (5) -
    ?
  2. 00:17:408 (1) - maybe finish at the end of spinner? озо sound is pretty hard here
  3. 00:47:609 (6) - you didn't ignore hard bits like 00:45:552 (3) and 00:46:924 (5). as for the Normal difficulty i guess it would be good to replace (6) at the 1/2 red section before and follow the natural rhythm, bit on 00:47:438. but it will break your 00:45:552 (3,4,5,6) square pattern, so.. :c
  4. 01:02:693 (2,3,4) - nice pattern, but it doesn't flow good with the rhythm, imho:
    01:03:208 - here you have a new, another intonation and a new word from lyrics ' kono kimochi '. if i were you i'd remove the reverse from 01:02:693 (2) - and added a note on 01:03:379.
    01:04:750 (4) flows good but as placement, i'd rather play something not similar to (2,3) sliders, to emphasise the intonation and phrase change/delete the reverse and added a note:

  5. 01:11:607 (3,4,5,6) - i like this pattern but really, consider that here 01:12:978 is a slowdown and a new different intonation, phrase. i'd rather start with a new slider/note, not finish a slider here


the rest is ok as for me. flows good and i like dem patterns, gj <3

[juda's muzukashii]

  1. 00:11:178 (2) - d at the end flows kinda awkward here x~x i'd rather recomment you to remove this note and make the pattern as it was at the same sounds here 00:08:408 (1,2,3,4). maybe you tried to emphasise the piano sound on (1,2,3) but i found this note a bit out of place
  2. 00:14:639 - add k here? the piano sound starts exactly from this place
  3. 00:14:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - kdkdk feels better here
  4. 00:16:254 (6,7) - vice versa, dk. k to follow the piano sound sound as you were doing before
  5. 00:23:098 (5,6,7,8) - kkdk fits greatly here, imho
  6. 00:24:469 (11) - k is better o3o
  7. 00:34:754 - i'd recommend you to add a note here to fully follow the lyrics here / delete a 00:34:925 (3), as an accent goes exactly on the ' toma ' from ' kimi wa tomadoi ' ~
  8. 00:36:811 (11) - - why did you end the pattern on the place like this? o.o if i were you i'd start a pattern here with ddkd and shorten the previous pattern to follow the lyrics
  9. 00:39:896 - what about a note here to follow the lyrics and to emphasise the word ' hoo ' here?
  10. 00:46:924 (8) - here is a bit where you were using d all the time. d here feels greatly
  11. 00:54:294 (13) - ^


the rest seems ok as for me
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Good map, really poor mod. Sorry ><
[Insane]
Generally you should improve some blankets (00:02:408 (7,1) - for example). The greenline at 19890 is unneeded.
  1. 00:08:408 (3) - I'd increase its lenght by 1/2 to follow the vocals in a better way:
  2. 00:38:182 (3,1) - You should stack these two elements manually, they plays as if the stack leniency is 0.
  3. 01:22:063 (4,5) - What about CTRL+G these two notes? It plays so good!


[Skystar's Insane]
Lovely difficulty.
  1. 01:00:465 (4) - There isn't a good reason, but I'd love tho hear its end with a lower volume (20%).


[alacat's Hard]
I think it's a bit hard for a Hard difficulty, but it's really good!
  1. 01:12:121 (3) - What about reverse this slider (CTRL+G)? It flows so good!


[abalee's Normal]
Really good. The greenline at 87290 is unneeded.

[Sekay's Easy]
I am a bit unsure of this difficulty, the rhythm sounds strange to me. You should try to make a more consistent rhythm; this is an easy difficulty and since you can't put too many notes you should follow something consistent. In general what doesn't make me sure is the red ticks usage.
  1. 00:13:485 (3) - Consider adding a whistle on its end
  2. 00:14:639 (1) - what about remove the whistle from its end and then add a new one on 00:15:793 (2) - 's head?

Sweet! Good luck :3
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