Hi! Here's your mod from the QAT queue!
General:The video and combo colours are too similar (oragen and yellow), and sometimes they blend too much with the background, so please try changing them.
Also, please check AiMod on each difficulty because of tags and audio lead in and also, the kiai times seem to be different on Teru's difficulty
http://puu.sh/5sdj1.png and the other difficulties -->
http://puu.sh/5sdoC.pngEasy:00:04:549 (2,4) - these are a bit confusing, they should start on the blue tick, if you listen to it on 25% (or simply by just listening carefully), you'll hear, that the bigger beats start on blue ticks, also, if you make (2) and (3) a slider, it won't be so confusing -
http://puu.sh/5rghN.jpg00:07:049 - this place is too empty, there is a big beat, but you don't hit it, the hit circle is later, so it's a bit confusing, I would suggest to add something here, maybe a short slider (because 2 hit circles might be hard to play) -
http://puu.sh/5rgLS.jpg01:01:367 (4,1) - I think this doesn't flow well, so you could improve it by replacing a few objects, for example:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1122535 and
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/112253801:10:458 (2,3) - small thing, but I think you could improve this pattern a bit by lowering the 2nd point of the slider:
http://puu.sh/5rT9v.jpg02:17:731 (1,2) - I think the flow here could be improved, because
http://puu.sh/5rTrV.jpg - so instead of this you could try something else, for example:
http://puu.sh/5rTx5.jpg - it would fit well to the lyrics too
02:24:549 (4,5) - this would be more comfortable to play, if you made them a slider, because (4) should actually start on a blue tick, you can hear it (especially while listening to it with 25%), both the beat and lyrics start on the blue tick so that's why you should either do this:
http://puu.sh/5rTL3.jpg or
http://puu.sh/5rTGm.jpgTeru's Normal:Why didn't you map the ending? I know it's a guest difficulty, but the end point of the difficulties should be the same, it should be consistent! Also, it doesn't make sense, Easy is longer than the Normal, I would kind of understand if Easy was shorter than the other difficulties, but that's not the case. Even if it's a guest difficulty, it should be consistent with the other difficulties of the mapset. The Guidelines of the ranking criteria also says this: "
Your difficulties should all end at the same spot.".
00:05:347 (1,2,3,4) - I think a slider at the place of (4) doesn't really fit, and I think that you could generally improve it, for example by trying something like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1124465 - because 00:05:915 (2,3,4) - instead of a sliderend - circle - sliderstart a reverse slider would fit a lot better to the music, and also this slider 00:06:710 (4) - it starts on a section where (in my opinion) something should end, and also in the middle of a slider a new melody starts, so it would be better to change it imo
00:13:641 (3) - this:
http://puu.sh/5rWNW.jpg the flow could be improved:
http://puu.sh/5rWLS.jpg00:23:641 (1) - well this is really just my opinion, but the slider looks weird :< maybe you could try using less zig-zags, well just an example:
http://puu.sh/5rXax.jpg00:35:232 (3,4) - again a small thing, but if you don't want to make it a blanket, then put it further from the middle of the slider, because if it's too close, it will look like a bad blanket (when you didn't even want to make a blanket in the first place), OR just simply make it a blanket if you want to? -
http://puu.sh/5rXp6.jpg00:45:459 (1) - remove new combo maybe? it is not so necessary, moreover the 2 combo colours are similar, so it is easier to differenciate -red and orange, and the new section starts here 00:46:596 (1) - so the previous NC is not that necessary (even though I can see why you put it there) -
http://puu.sh/5rXyk.jpg01:07:278 (1,2,3) - this sounds weird in my opinion, so I think you could change this part to something like this:
http://puu.sh/5rYot.jpg or
http://puu.sh/5rYrh.jpg - on the screenshot (4) fits to the soft melody in the background, afterwards the hit circle fits the "mo"
01:38:187 (1,2) - swap the combo colours? because they blend with the video too much:
http://puu.sh/5s0A6.jpg -
http://puu.sh/5s0R2.jpg01:43:641 (1) - it's just my opinion, but you could make this nicer, don't let the end of the slider reach the beginning of the slider:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/112472201:56:823 (3,1,2) - nazi, move these about 2 grids down, so that (3) won't reach 01:56:368 (2) -
02:36:368 (1) - starting here...why the copy paste? ;_; you didn't even flip it, just simple copy paste, but oh well, it's just my opinion, but I think copy pasting whole choruses is lazy and uncreative (even if it flows well) also I didn't mean to offend you, it's not like you will remap 2 whole choruses because I said I didn't like copy pasta (and it's not like I want you to remap it), but I hope
next time you won't do something like this >.<
Please check AiMod, because there seem to be a lot of unsnapped objects.
Hard:AR -1 because 8 is quite fast, and because 8 AR and 6 OD isn't really a good spread, so I think 7 would be better, and also because Insane also uses AR 8
00:16:595 (2) - remove hit circle? it feels unnecessary, and if you delete it the higher pitched voice will get a bigger emphasis:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/112475600:18:867 (2) - I think a 1/2 slider would fit better because of the lyrics:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/112478900:33:640 (2,3) - I don't understand why you put a jump here, I don't hear anything in the music, which would be a reason for a jump, so I think you should put (3) closer to (2)
00:36:140 (5) - it disturbs me, that you didn't follow the lyrics properly, so maybe try this? -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/112479900:43:413 (1) - give this a different direction, so that the flow is better:
http://puu.sh/5s3rZ.jpg -->
http://puu.sh/5s3uL.jpg00:44:776 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I think it would be better if you did some changes to the combos:
http://puu.sh/5s3xQ.jpg - I think that 00:44:776 (4,5,1,2) - these belong together according to the lyrics and later 00:46:595 (3,4,5) - they feel a bit separate from the previous notes, and the new combos would fit "da-ke-do", and it would look good if it looked like a triangle
00:55:231 (2) - this should be on the blue tick, that's how it fits to the song:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/112482001:02:504 (2) - same here, it should be on the blue tick, and the slider afterwards should start on the blue tick too, because that's where the lyrics start:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/112482101:16:595 (1) - use ctrl+g on this for better flow (between these - 01:16:595 (1,2) - ) and for better distance, or maybe like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/112482801:49:890 - add hit circle, so that it fits better to the music :3
01:58:186 (7,1) - this doesn't flow well in my opinion -->
http://puu.sh/5s4iq.jpg - maybe try this? -->
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/112483802:44:208 - add hit circle, so that it fits the "ta-ta-tata" pattern in the lyrics
02:44:322 (5) - this should start on the blue tick, and just an example how to remake the pattern, you don't have to change a lot, but of course in the end, it's up to you, if you'll change it or not -->
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/112484602:55:913 (4,5) - higher spacing looks unnecessary here in my opinion, the sounds in the music don't really give a reason for higher spacing, so I think you should put (5) closer to (4) -->
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/112484903:28:640 (3,4,1) - I don't understand the higher spacing, because at the previous part, which is similar - 03:26:140 (2,3,4) - you used the usual spacing, so I think you should fix spacing
Akareh's Insane:00:10:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why is the spacing smaller than before? you should use the same spacing for the stream that you used at the previous streams
00:42:504 (8) - the slider ends where the singing starts, I think you should remove the reverse slider and make it a hit circle -->
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1125041 (and add a hit circle here 00:42:958 - )
01:47:958 (6) -
http://puu.sh/5sbeq.jpg - remove the reverse and add a hit circle, it would flow better:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/112504702:00:686 (6) - I think this should be an 1/2 slider, it fits better to the lyrics, and I don't hear anything in the backgground which would mean you should add something:
http://puu.sh/5sbtH.jpg (or try 2 hit circles)
02:06:481 (1) - ctrl+g for better flow, because it doesn't flow well like this -->
http://puu.sh/5sbBJ.jpg however this -->
http://puu.sh/5sbEz.jpg would play good imo
02:19:890 - add hit cirlce because of the lyrics (or maybe a short slider), without the hit circle, it feels too empty
02:20:458 (3,5) - remove the finish from these? it sounds a bit too loud and also unnecessary, if you want to put hitsounds there, use something softer
02:37:163 (3) - ctrl+g for better flow? also improve the blanket here 02:36:367 (1,3) -
http://puu.sh/5sc57.jpg02:39:776 (1,2) - use a reverse slider here? it feels like she starts singing earlier than the red tick (where you placed (1)), so I think it would be a nice solution if you used a reverse slider -->
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1125073 (of course in a nicer way)
02:42:504 (5,6,7) - you used different spacing, even though on the timeline they are in equal distance:
http://puu.sh/5scq9.jpg so try to use the same spacing, just an example -->
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1125081Also, fix artist and title:
http://puu.sh/5scTC.pngGood luck, I hope my mod helped!