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Irreversible

osu! Alumni

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2013-12-13T17:28:40+00:00

hi, i'll reply to what i didn't fix

Delis:

00:04:140 (2) - delete the red point of centre, feels doesn't fit on the music imo yeah.. well, i'd like to Keep it like this, it flows pretty well. Also, I can't really see how you defined the Music there, because there are other shapes like this O_O

P A N:

00:02:240 - don't need to skip this beat imo, its not different from has note.
00:38:968 - strong beat here, I think add note is better to catch the rhythm. I made both of this for rhythm Variation, I don't wanna stick to lame 1/1.

Kodora:

◾00:02:240 - Add note here to keep your rhythm consistent explained above. Well, I might Change it, since some People complain about ><
◾00:38:968 - add note here too for consistent rhythm - there is strong beat here same
◾01:06:514 (1,2,3) - Don't really think that it is good idea for 190 bpm song Normal with OD4.I think simple replacement with 1/2 reverse-slider would work much better here. this is to Balance the spread from normal > hard.
◾01:11:264 (3,4,5) - Really bad idea for Normal diff - you started new part of music with passive hitobject (sliderend), and it makes this part kinda hard to catch for beginners. If you want to keep your rhythm & pattern here try to replace (4) and (5) with 1/2 slider - it will work much more intuitive here. same for this one, i think it should be okay.

Thanks guys!

new map

osu file format v12

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Title:No Money Down, Low Monthly Payments
TitleUnicode:No Money Down, Low Monthly Payments
Artist:Nero's Day At Disneyland
ArtistUnicode:Nero's Day At Disneyland
Creator:grumd
Version:Irre's Normal
Source:
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ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2013-12-13T17:37:34+00:00

Kodora wrote:
[General]

[Ryuu] в тэги т.к. у неё есть ранки с этим ником nobody cares. поиску плевать на спец.символы. всем плевать на мои карты.
[ryuu's Easy]

*someone please ban CS2 from ranking again Q.Q

00:10:155 (3,4) - Я бы не советовал делать стаки в изе (особенно учитывая тот факт что в нормале подобных стаков нет вообще). Очень рекомендую анстакнуть это и всё подобное (я не буду их все перечислять) было исправлено выше
00:10:630 - 00:10:789 - сделай N:C1 на этих зелёных линиях, для лучшего ритма не нравится
01:16:013 (4) - hitfinish here было выше
01:44:509 (4,5) - Смотрится как не очень красивое флоу, да и 01:45:459 (5,2) - смотрятся как не очень красивый оверлап. Попробуй что-нибудь типа такого: окей

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02:13:005 (1,2) - То же самое, смотрятся не очень хорошо, попробуй как-нибудь вот так: что-то поменяла. уже не помню. но суть в том, что (1) я делала для пред. слайдера

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grumd

1,790 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

grumd 2013-12-13T18:14:11+00:00

Only quoting the stuff I didn't apply or I have comments for.

"Delis"

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[Insane]
00:25:353 (5) - looks quite bad only this, 00:25:037 (2,3,4,5) - move a little to right them, then move 00:25:353 (5) - neatly
remapped part of the beginning
01:23:929 (2,3) - little confused on first play, also reverse is only here in part, consider to change
a 1.0x spaced slider with a reverse can't be confusing in such pattern. not fixing it
01:37:464 (3) - I don't liked here, feels weird flow to me. try to add two circles instead of a slider
i like it and use it a lot

such mapping style really good

[Hard]
00:25:670 (4) - add a slider instead of a circle here, would be fit on the music. like 01:22:662 (1) - this.
i dont want to make it too similar to insane, keeping this one
01:20:287 - add a circle here? so I think you should follow the music ==;
01:26:620 - ^
i don't want to overmap this Hard. i'm setting the right accents with these pauses
02:03:190 (3) - this slider is need the two red points.. ? I want to delete either
this is my favourite slider in the whole diff
02:08:889 (1) - make a curve (like Insane)

"P A N"

[Insane]

00:21:870 (1) - you didn't make a jump on 00:14:588 (1), maybe make it jump too or follow the first one to make them same?
uh they sounds a bit different to me, so i'm going to keep it
00:41:501 (3) - try ctrl+g? 0.0 better flow imo.
idk, keeping my pattern because i like it more
01:12:372 - make 2 to 3 spacing to same spacing as 1 to 2?
nnope, it's done with visual spacing consistency
hmm some part is too hard for me but anyway D:

"Kodora"

Yo, as requested
not my fauvorite kind of song but anyway

[Insane]

00:10:472 (1,2,3) - в принципе идея понятна, но кружок на голубом тике немного сложно поймать, да и после чистой 1/2 до этого это смотрится немного внезапно. Попробуй заменить (1) на два круга чтобы триплет было легче поймать:
как по мне так обычный трипл после слайдера, вообще не сложно
00:20:287 (1) - второе подряд НК не нужно я думаю?
00:27:886 (1) - ^
нужно, я все такие паттерны с клепами выделяю
00:54:483 (1) - ненужное нк опять?
00:56:382 (2,3) - мне немного не очень нравится эта идея c финишами, какие-нибудь хорошие кастомные хитсаунды были бы лучше здесь имхо, финиши сами по себе громко звучат.. может хоть звук убавить на них? (то же самое на остальных диффах)
ну нее, мне лень пиздец, оставлю так. не слишком это и плохо
01:16:171 - добавь ноту - и играться будет лучше, и заодно пофиксишь спейсинг между 01:16:013 (8,1)
не, мне пауза нравится
01:23:612 (1,2,3) - (3) звучит немного против ритма - попробуй поменять (2) и (3) местами, имхо будет звучить лучше (и играться тоже):
хз почему вы все об этом толкуете, как по мне так нормальный слайдер. звучит вполне хорошо. а красивый паттерн по-другому там уже сложно будет сделать
01:27:411 (1,2) - Не совсем нравится флоу между ними, попробуй так:
SPOILER
фу, ненавижу такие слайдеры. а у меня флоу нормальный, я часто такое делаю
01:29:549 (2) - Попробуй удалить кружок, а 01:29:311 (1) - протянуть на 1 тик дальше - и звучить, и играться будет лучше
01:29:469 - тут нота есть вообще-то, да и в начале такое же 00:10:472 (1,2,3,4) -
01:33:586 (4,5) - После предыдущих джампов что-то типа небольшого стака будет играться лучше, попробуй так:
нигде в карте такого нет вообще, не нравится мне такое
01:57:016 (2) - Реверс не вписывается в общее флоу, попробуй заменить триплетом как-нибудь
мне наоборот нравится
02:09:206 (1) - Ненужное НК. Не надо ставить НК по смене СВ, pls
я просто вот этот выделяю 02:08:889 (1) - он особенный

[Hard]

*Очень не нравится прыжок в ОД с 6 в харде на 8 в инсе. Я понимаю что ты уменьшил ОД ради триплетов здесь, но имхо было бы лучше вместо этого юзать меньше триплетов чем убавлять ОД - да и в принципе они играются даже с дт не очень тяжело с ОД7
шта. я ОД ставил вообще по рандому. какие триплеты, мне похуям на триплеты) ОД7 слишком близко к инсайну, не хочу второй инсайн. ОД6 тоже норм

[list][*]00:02:873 (1,3) - это больше моё личное предпочтение, но имхо идеальный стак смотрелся бы гораздо лучше чисто визуально ~~в принципе у тебя довольно много таких, я бы поправил~~
в эдиторе может быть, но в игре такие проще играть
[*]00:05:723 (1,3) - Не очень красивый оверлап, который довольно-таки заметен с АР8. Подвинь (3) чуть правее плиз.
я про него знаю, это специально было сделано. что-то меня укусило, вот и захотел
[*]00:34:219 (1,1) - может стакнуть? и смотрится красивее, и хорошая ловушка для любителей хиддена
опять же специально не стакал. мои карты славятся хорошей игрой с хидденом)
[*]01:03:031 (2,3,4,1,2) - Не идеальный стак смотрится немного некрасиво, попробуй так:
я лучше стак сделаю неидеальный, чем спейсинг испорчу
[*]01:06:118 (4,5) - Попробуй заменить коротким 1/4 слайдером, так будет легче играться, особенно с дт
я карту не для ДТ делал, а короткие слайдеры сами по себе играются сложнее в таких случаях имхо
[*]01:07:781 (2,3,4) - Я бы заменил коротким 1/4 реверсом чтобы легче игралоь с дт (будет небольшая передышка после предыдущего триплета)
почему именно тут? музыка в этом месте требует роста высоты звука, поэтому стрим идёт вверх. стоячий на месте репит впихнуть же вообще некуда
[*]01:14:113 (1,2,3) - ^
[*]01:20:446 (2,1) - немного не нравится флоу в этой части, попробуй как-нибудь вот так:
специально делал птичку :С

[*]01:29:549 (2) - same as at Insane
[*]02:16:646 (5,6) - я бы просто удалил эти две ноты, одна в самом конце сама по себе звучит лучше имхо - да и это было бы более дружелюбно для харда
очень плохо звучит, пусто как-то/list]
Good luck~

Uuuh, so much modding. Thank you guys!

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-12-13T18:58:42+00:00

'sup grumd

any Taiko modders, feel free to bubble this map

osu! icon here

Umi

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Umi 2013-12-14T22:55:57+00:00

shiit >.< i was out this week-end, too late for me :/ poke me on your next map

grumd

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grumd 2013-12-15T00:05:59+00:00

-Umi- wrote:
your next map

uuuh, this will be like in a year

Loctav

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Loctav 2013-12-15T00:12:09+00:00

Seems like this isnt graved anymore? lmao

grumd

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grumd 2013-12-15T00:27:47+00:00

Loctav wrote:
Seems like this isnt graved anymore? lmao

It's on its ranking process. Waiting for Tasha for an in-deep taiko mod.

Stefan

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Stefan 2013-12-15T00:33:08+00:00

Because this is one of the best things I've heard for weeks.

[Oni]
00:46:884 (11) - weird place for using d if you ask me, I consider using k to make it more emphasised with 00:47:042 (12,13,14).
00:48:784 (26) - to that aspect do the same here.
01:11:501 (103) - I think 01:11:422 (102) should be more played as single note and making 01:11:580 (104,105,106) as triplet instead as Stream is more neater.
01:14:667 - you actually could put d here to use the similar rhythm as 01:13:163 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) (since 01:14:113 - 01:14:746 is similar as well)

[Muzukashii]
00:10:630 (26) - It's too "unrelated" to put 1/2 here, from 00:15:221 I am fine with them.
01:48:625 (316,317,318,319,320) - I honestly find this way too harsh for a Muzukashii with such a BPM. At least split the Stream into ddd d. The other alternative would be Drumrolls. Same here as 01:56:224 (348,349,350,351,352) and 02:00:024 (367,368,369,370,371).

9.2/10, would ~~bang~~ play

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-Kazu- 2013-12-15T00:34:43+00:00

How about adding -Anhedonia- to tags?
Also maybe you could put "Oni by Loctav, Muzu by -Anhedonia" ..
:O

Stefan

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Stefan 2013-12-15T00:36:06+00:00

Just noticed that both Taiko Diffs has been mapped by two different person.

..I seriously should go sleep some hours.

grumd

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grumd 2013-12-15T00:43:32+00:00

I'll need to change the taiko names properly, yeah.

Loctav

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Loctav 2013-12-15T14:18:48+00:00

Stefan wrote:
[Oni]
01:14:667 - you actually could put d here to use the similar rhythm as 01:13:163 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) (since 01:14:113 - 01:14:746 is similar as well) music is less dense, therefore this was pretty much required to represent the less density here.

Fixed everything else. Thanks!
Renamed diff.

http://puu.sh/5Npx5/47b3565174.osu

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2013-12-16T08:26:30+00:00

I was told by Irreversible to mod this map! I just have a few things to mention!

[General]

Nothing to really point out, just change the names and you will be fine. I also like the clock storyboard! Very simple, yet clever! :3

[Muzukashii]

00:28:520 (70,72) - I would suggest a big don here, since it emphasizes better with the lower bell sounds. The big notes itself are already emphasizing the brass sounds. I do understand that the pitch of brass is increasing which you may have used to emphasize this part, so this suggestion is completely optional. If suggested, you can replace the big kat at 00:58:915 (148) with a big don.
01:16:963 (215,216) - If you want, you can add two notes (preferably kats) between these notes. It adds full emphasis with the main/prominent sounds and it sounds more complete. It would also be consistent with 01:18:863 (217,218,219,220) as both share similar sounds.
01:48:625 (316,317,318,319,320) - As Stefan mentioned already (since I do agree with him), this short don stream is a bit too fast considering the high BPM. Please consider removing the blue tick (1/4) notes in that stream (or use a drum roll even). Same applies to 01:56:224 (348,349,350,351,352) and 02:00:024 (367,368,369,370,371). An alternate solution would be to replace these streams with drum rolls.

[Oni]

00:20:129 (8) - Not sure if intentional, but I believe you forgot to replace this kat with a don, considering the surrounding pattern.

That's all I found. Good luck with your map! :3

P A N

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P A N 2013-12-17T17:54:47+00:00

lol i just realize that the pic i gave are fail code
anyway i waiting to play this

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UninvitedGuest_old 2013-12-20T20:06:25+00:00

Осторожно! Nazi Mod!

Insane
01:00:815 (1) - сделать слайдер неповторяющимся, 01:01:290 (2,3,4) - передвинуть на 2 тика влево и добавить две ноты. так будет звучать лучше, имхо.
01:03:586 (7) - зачем? звука-то тут вроде и нету.
01:09:285 (7) - ^
01:31:211 (1) - сделать неповторяющимся, 01:31:686 (2,3,4) - передвинуть на 2 тика влево и добавить стрим из трёх нот на 01:31:844 (4)
01:33:427 (3) - тут будет лучше слайдер, разве нет? звук-то длинный.
01:35:564 (4,5) - звучит как-то странно. или мне одному так кажется?
01:37:227 (2,3) - тоже как-то странно звучит
01:40:868 (2,3) - сместить на 2 тика вправо. так будет в ритм, я считаю.
02:06:673 (2,3,4) - расстояние великовато, как мне кажется.
02:10:947 (5) - зачем?
02:11:422 (2) - поставить на его месте двухтиковый сладйре и 02:11:580 (3) - передвинуть на 2 тика вперёд. опять же, лучше в ритм попадает, как мне кажется
02:14:113 (2) - передвинуть на 2 тика вперёд. РИТМРИТМРТИМ

в остальных диффах всё нормально, как мне кажется

удачи~

grumd

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grumd 2013-12-21T16:14:30+00:00

UninvitedGuest wrote:
Осторожно! Nazi Mod!

Insane
01:00:815 (1) - сделать слайдер неповторяющимся, 01:01:290 (2,3,4) - передвинуть на 2 тика влево и добавить две ноты. так будет звучать лучше, имхо.
01:03:586 (7) - зачем? звука-то тут вроде и нету.
01:09:285 (7) - ^
01:31:211 (1) - сделать неповторяющимся, 01:31:686 (2,3,4) - передвинуть на 2 тика влево и добавить стрим из трёх нот на 01:31:844 (4)
01:33:427 (3) - тут будет лучше слайдер, разве нет? звук-то длинный.
01:35:564 (4,5) - звучит как-то странно. или мне одному так кажется?
01:37:227 (2,3) - тоже как-то странно звучит
01:40:868 (2,3) - сместить на 2 тика вправо. так будет в ритм, я считаю.
02:06:673 (2,3,4) - расстояние великовато, как мне кажется.
02:10:947 (5) - зачем?
02:11:422 (2) - поставить на его месте двухтиковый сладйре и 02:11:580 (3) - передвинуть на 2 тика вперёд. опять же, лучше в ритм попадает, как мне кажется
02:14:113 (2) - передвинуть на 2 тика вперёд. РИТМРИТМРТИМ

в остальных диффах всё нормально, как мне кажется

удачи~

совершенно всё неверно.
01:00:815 (1) - здесь ритм карты чётко соответствует ритму песни. сдвигая на 2 тика, я тупо кладу хуй на ритм. что за бред?
01:03:586 (7) - тут звук есть, сделай музыку погромче или замедли воспроизведение.
«как-то странно звучит» — неубедительная причина чт-то менять. мне всё нравится.
«02:06:673 (2,3,4) - расстояние великовато, как мне кажется» — просто некоторые, вроде тебя, ещё не привыкли к новым видам паттернов. играется это легко.
«РИТМРИТМРТИМ» — никакого следования ритму в твоём моде вообще нет. спасибо и до свидания.

karterfreak

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karterfreak 2013-12-25T18:26:06+00:00

Loctav's Oni

12:55 Tasha: just lemme know when you can look
12:56 OnosakiHito: Sure.
13:09 OnosakiHito: okay.
13:10 Tasha: 01:06:514 (56) -
13:11 Tasha: 01:08:414 (76) -
13:11 Tasha: 01:11:264 (102) -
13:11 Tasha: 01:12:213 (111) -
13:12 Tasha: 01:44:826 (357) -
13:12 Tasha: 01:49:575 (6) -
13:13 Tasha: 02:07:306 (161) -
13:13 Tasha: 02:12:056 (206) -
13:13 Tasha: 02:13:005 (216) -
13:13 Tasha: 02:15:222 (238) -
13:14 Tasha: that's pretty much it
13:14 Tasha: i feel like almost every single one I linked a note could be removed before the finisher
13:14 Tasha: and for some of them a finisher is completely unnecessary to begin with
13:16 OnosakiHito: I feel the same.
13:16 OnosakiHito: And it doesn't look appealing
13:17 OnosakiHito: First note stamp for example
13:17 OnosakiHito: the whole pattern doesn't actually exist in the song, it's rather two-plet or something like that.
13:17 OnosakiHito: 01:06:435 (55) - doesn't have a significant sound.
13:18 OnosakiHito: And sounds without note (55) in my opinion, better.
13:19 Tasha: its pretty much like that for every finisher i listed
13:19 OnosakiHito: Indeed.
13:19 Tasha: it sounds better if you remove the note just before them
13:19 Tasha: maybe one or two exceptions
13:19 Tasha: anyways i'm just gonna post this so I have someone backing me up on it
13:19 OnosakiHito: Sure.

For the notes listed there, I highly suggest you remove the note before them as mentioned. I have no issue with the map other than the finisher usage in the places mentioned. My explanation for this is in the spoilerbox above.

Loctav

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Loctav 2013-12-29T13:33:27+00:00

Tasha wrote:
Loctav's Oni
12:55 Tasha: just lemme know when you can look
12:56 OnosakiHito: Sure.
13:09 OnosakiHito: okay.
13:10 Tasha: 01:06:514 (56) -
13:11 Tasha: 01:08:414 (76) -
13:11 Tasha: 01:11:264 (102) -
13:11 Tasha: 01:12:213 (111) -
13:12 Tasha: 01:44:826 (357) -
13:12 Tasha: 01:49:575 (6) -
13:13 Tasha: 02:07:306 (161) -
13:13 Tasha: 02:12:056 (206) -
13:13 Tasha: 02:13:005 (216) -
13:13 Tasha: 02:15:222 (238) -
13:14 Tasha: that's pretty much it
13:14 Tasha: i feel like almost every single one I linked a note could be removed before the finisher
13:14 Tasha: and for some of them a finisher is completely unnecessary to begin with
13:16 OnosakiHito: I feel the same.
13:16 OnosakiHito: And it doesn't look appealing
13:17 OnosakiHito: First note stamp for example
13:17 OnosakiHito: the whole pattern doesn't actually exist in the song, it's rather two-plet or something like that.
13:17 OnosakiHito: 01:06:435 (55) - doesn't have a significant sound.
13:18 OnosakiHito: And sounds without note (55) in my opinion, better.
13:19 Tasha: its pretty much like that for every finisher i listed
13:19 OnosakiHito: Indeed.
13:19 Tasha: it sounds better if you remove the note just before them
13:19 Tasha: maybe one or two exceptions
13:19 Tasha: anyways i'm just gonna post this so I have someone backing me up on it
13:19 OnosakiHito: Sure.

For the notes listed there, I highly suggest you remove the note before them as mentioned. I have no issue with the map other than the finisher usage in the places mentioned. My explanation for this is in the spoilerbox above.

Readjusted the finisher's placements, I probably killed all 1/4 finishers (but one, for transistion purposes), therefore I moved around several patterns to make the finishers appear constantly throughout the entire kiai times without being 1/4 anymore.

-Kazu-

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-Kazu- 2013-12-30T00:20:17+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
[Muzukashii]
00:28:520 (70,72) - I would suggest a big don here, since it emphasizes better with the lower bell sounds. The big notes itself are already emphasizing the brass sounds. I do understand that the pitch of brass is increasing which you may have used to emphasize this part, so this suggestion is completely optional. If suggested, you can replace the big kat at 00:58:915 (148) with a big don.
01:16:963 (215,216) - If you want, you can add two notes (preferably kats) between these notes. It adds full emphasis with the main/prominent sounds and it sounds more complete. It would also be consistent with 01:18:863 (217,218,219,220) as both share similar sounds. Hm, sounds fine but i dont want it,because the kats are added on high pitched parts. I would make those "d" as "d k" as i did before but i wanted a crescent amount of notes.
01:48:625 (316,317,318,319,320) - As Stefan mentioned already (since I do agree with him), this short don stream is a bit too fast considering the high BPM. Please consider removing the blue tick (1/4) notes in that stream (or use a drum roll even). Same applies to 01:56:224 (348,349,350,351,352) and 02:00:024 (367,368,369,370,371). An alternate solution would be to replace these streams with drum rolls.3 mentions to this ,so ok,ill put drumrolls

http://puu.sh/62Uvw : Added -Anhedonia- to tags in my diff so please add it on the others :3

grumd

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grumd 2013-12-30T00:29:03+00:00

Updated.

karterfreak

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karterfreak 2014-01-01T13:42:50+00:00

Standard diffs are already approved, so bubbling!

grumd

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grumd 2014-01-01T15:11:37+00:00

yey thanks Tasha

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2014-01-01T18:39:43+00:00

cool!

p3n

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p3n 2014-01-01T21:27:36+00:00

TICK TACK (>°.°)>

grumd

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grumd 2014-01-01T21:36:35+00:00

yeeeeeeeeeeeeey thanks p3n

Loctav

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Loctav 2014-01-01T21:44:57+00:00

Eheeeeeeee

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Shohei Ohtani 2014-01-01T21:46:47+00:00

Disneyland is fucking expensive tho I'ma need to start making monthly payments to visit that shit

Stefan

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Stefan 2014-01-01T22:00:23+00:00

Wonderful.

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gz

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Kyouren 2014-01-02T00:29:50+00:00

Gratzz!! ryuu, Irreversible, kazukisinx, Loctav, and grumd!!^^

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Ehee

Asphyxia

osu! Alumni

1,986 posts

Joined June 2012

Asphyxia 2014-01-02T01:03:45+00:00

Awsome, graz!

Lust

osu! Alumni

2,667 posts

Joined January 2013

Lust 2014-01-02T01:55:03+00:00

congrats

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2014-01-02T02:58:15+00:00

Gratz!!

Hula

581 posts

Joined January 2013

Hula 2014-01-02T03:25:15+00:00

congrats

idk if you noticed but with headphones on in like the 1st minute there's like a quiet muffled barking sound, and when you have a dog, it's like uwot

DenoisoGoiso

681 posts

Joined April 2013

DenoisoGoiso 2014-01-02T06:59:42+00:00

congrats :3

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2014-01-02T10:42:15+00:00

congratulations, irreversible, kazukisinx, loctav and tosha :3

Dainesl

898 posts