Tidek wrote:

Hey, from my queue (overdrive and lunatic)

Lunatic

1. 00:06:055 (4,5,6) - no triplet why not?
2. 00:09:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - unnecessary 5circle stack OK I 'll think delete them
3. 00:38:616 - addable circle done
4. 00:47:031 - ^ done
5. 01:02:031 (1,2,3) - it looks really strange in rhytmic, use 1/2 beat here I'll try a new style
6. 01:12:092 (6) - that should be here 01:12:275 if u want follow that rhythm ok yes .fixed
7. 01:14:653 (5,6,7) - no triplet (its earlier) fixed
8. 02:41:726 (4) - delete one reverse and add 2 1/2 circles ok
9. 02:44:653 (4) - ^ ok
10. 03:01:757 (9) - delete circle no
11. 03:10:629 (7) - ^ ok
12. 03:35:324 - just saying that here is addable note OK I'll think about it
    Overall, too many stacked streams, make them more spaced, even 0,3x ds looks more interesting than stack you are right

Sorry if my mod will look useless for u because it will make to remap few sections, but i just want to help, because it look overmapped in some places. (i dont want to disrespect your mapping style either).I'll remap in some sections
GL

Tidek wrote:

Overdrive

• 
  Overall I like streams in that map but i dont like how u expand it and very often u are using triplets without any accent of music, just for raise diffculty (overmapping)
  Before u will decline/accept my mods, try to listen this on 25%/50% playback rate and u will know what i meant.

1. 00:09:165 (1,1,1) - Im sure that atleast 90% players will have problem to read that on first play because u used normal 1/4 triplets before and its very confusing, fix that pattern fixed
2. 00:10:629 (4,5,6) - no triplet
3. 00:13:190 (5,6,7) - no triplet
4. 00:21:604 - triplet here
5. 00:21:970 (3,4,5,6,7) - no triplet, not sure about slider stream
6. 00:27:458 (2) - triplet
7. 00:27:824 (3,4,5) - no triplet
8. 00:28:921 (2) - triplet
9. 00:30:385 (2) - triplet
10. etc etc etc etc... please listen that part 00:12:458 - 00:35:872 on 50% playback and u will clearly see that sometimes it looks overmapping (so unrankable) and u are missing/adding triplets where they should/not be
    I think it is ok here.It is hard to hear the correct triplets until listening on 25%/50% playback rate in editor
11. 00:54:165 (2,3) - looks ugly, unstack this fixed
12. 00:57:824 (7,8,1) - higher ds? ok
13. 00:59:287 (3,4,5) - ^ ok
14. 01:06:055 - addable circle no
15. 01:07:519 - ^ no
16. 01:07:519 - ^ no
17. 01:16:482 - 01:28:555 - and here is everything fine, i like how u accented sliders to music in stream, why u didnt do that on beginning? ;_; Just one suggestion 01:27:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - streams here are really too much spaced, make less spacing. (1,3x - 1,4x) no
18. 01:45:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - that ds change here looks strange (nothing happening in music) fixed
19. 02:13:190 (3) - unrhytmic, make something like this http://puu.sh/4fabP.jpg ok
20. 02:15:385 - 02:27:092 - here distance snap is too high, reduce it because the "boss" moment is on last kiai part fixed
21. 02:50:507 - 03:10:994 - look here 00:12:458 - 00:35:872, do it more rhythmic, because there is a lot of unnecessaries triplets/5circles 1/4 (i wrote a lot of mistakes on up, they are similar in every part so i dont have to do it million of times, just listen music on 50% playback rate and u will find mistakes)
22. last kiai part - i wont help u too much here, rhytmic is ok (i like sliders), because i can barely pass it, idk its fun for really pro player. But places with sudden ds change like here 03:26:726 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) wont be fun fixed some parts

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ sjoy M4M

( My Map = http://osu.ppy.sh/s/115082 )

sorry .. I can not be modding Insane difficulty

[Normal]

00:05:872 (4) -

More Good beat

done!

00:11:726 (5) -

More Good beat

done!

00:24:897 (2) - 00:26:360 (4) -

More Good beat

done!

00:27:824 (2) -

More Good beat

done!

00:30:750 (2) -

More Good beat

done!

00:35:141 (4) -

More Good beat

no
00:49:409 (2) -

More Good beat

no

01:17:580 (2) -

More Good beat

done!


[Lunatic]

00:23:068 (2,3,4) - Consistent distance recommended

Good.. Map!!

Star!!! thanks

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

渣mod一个

难度：Normal
00:31:482 (3,4,5) - 感觉不太跟旋律 还好啊
01:47:397 (2,3) - 半拍感觉有点难度 还好吧
02:02:397 (2,3) - 同上 ^
02:05:324 (4,5) - 同上 ^
02:17:580 (5) - 截短一半，做一个往返 改了
02:20:507 (5) - 同上 改了

难度：Hard
ar-1吧，看上去平滑一点 2333

难度：Lunatic
01:06:970 (3,4,5,6) - 从下到上排列，叠起来就自动变成了左上到右下了


难度：Overdrive
没有发现

加油

_AI wrote:

From modding queue

[Normal]
OD3 - HP3
00:17:214 (4) - move the red tick in the slider, don't let the slider hit the end of 00:16:116 (2) done
01:18:311 (3,4,5) - Try too avoid too make 1/2 sticking together done
01:21:238 (3,4,5) - ^ done
01:25:629 (1,2) - Suggest to change it like PIC1 done

PIC1

02:09:897 (2,3,4) - This doesn't match the song actually, suggest to change ok.I'll think about it
02:57:458 (5) - NC done
~Nothing much here actually, nicely mapped thanks

[Hard]
00:06:147 (5) - Remove this done
00:18:129 (4) - Suggest to stack on the head of 00:18:311 done
00:24:622 (3) - Remove this done
00:26:726 (6) - Make it a longer slider instead of repeating it keep
00:48:677 (3) - Move it to other place, don't stack keep
03:01:665 (2,3,4,5,6) - Its not following the musicI'll think about it
03:18:129 (5) - Stack this on 03:18:311 (1)done
03:18:677 (2) - Move to x4 y300, make a triangle
~Kinda too much triplets for the last kiai time I'll think about it
[Lunatic]
02:13:190 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try to make it curve, it help the flow keep
~haha, nothing much to say, great thanks

[Overdrive]
No problem to me~ Perfectly mapped thanks
but the stream look like this song \o.<

1. Romansed Title: "Kobito of the Shining Needle ~ Little Princess"

1. 00:53:433 (1,2) - this jump shold be avoided
2. 02:54:897- add a note
3. 03:14:287 (2,3) - blanket correctly

1. 00:30:385 (2,3,4) - not stack is on purpose?
2. 00:51:970 (4,5) - it is better to stack in the same pattern as before
3. 02:58:555 (5,6) - rhythm suggetion
   
4. 02:59:287 (1,1) - cool!

1. 00:05:140 (1) - move to x:110 y:226 (stack correctly)
2. 01:41:452 (7) - I prefer to delete

1. 01:45:019 (5,6) - I prefer to uniform to the same pattern as before 01:44:288 (5) -

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. Romansed Title: "Kobito of the Shining Needle ~ Little Princess"fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:53:433 (1,2) - this jump shold be avoided fixed
2. 02:54:897- add a note keep
3. 03:14:287 (2,3) - blanket correctly fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:30:385 (2,3,4) - not stack is on purpose? fixed
2. 00:51:970 (4,5) - it is better to stack in the same pattern as before fixed
3. 02:58:555 (5,6) - rhythm suggetion fixed
   
4. 02:59:287 (1,1) - cool!

[Lunatic]

1. 00:05:140 (1) - move to x:110 y:226 (stack correctly) fixed
2. 01:41:452 (7) - I prefer to delete keep

[Extra]

1. 01:45:019 (5,6) - I prefer to uniform to the same pattern as before 01:44:288 (5) - fixed

Wow, that's a latest touhou's song, isn't it? yes.
Japanese hit-sounds are very nice! ~☆
~Good Luck~

lkx_Shore wrote:

你为什么要用这么多奇葩滑条，好丑

sjoy wrote:

lkx_Shore wrote:

你为什么要用这么多奇葩滑条，好丑

请指出具体滑条并分析为什么丑
不然我会无视的

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m~
有gd所以就英文了

[Lunatic]
00:03:129 (7) - reverse this feels better 改了
01:51:238 (4,5,1) - didn't compose well... at least set 4 and 5 not like a cross with 1 while keepping the symm我在考虑一下
02:00:019 (7) - reverse? 改了
02:01:482 (3,4) - nc them改了
02:40:629 (1) - here comes strange nc, 02:41:726 (4) - and 02:44:653 (4) - should set nc改了
02:51:238 (3) - drum sample from here sounds a bit loud, try to turn down it改了
03:09:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't stack them, try an arc改了

random objs in this diff at all... some sliders feel a bit awkward with their flow 作图渣水平
[Extra]
00:35:324 (5,6,7) - larger ds
02:30:019 (4) - nc改了
02:32:946 (4,1) - move nc改了
03:36:421 (8,9) - ctrl+g

good diff!
[Hard]
03:01:574 add a note? 改了
03:23:433 (3,1) - larger ds plz!改了

hmm... this diff gave me a random feeling as well... and maybe there's too much straight sliders, try some curve ones 0.0
[Normal]
00:16:116 (2,4) - they r nearly overlapped, try to separate them a bit
00:16:116 (2) - and 00:19:043 (2) - have similiar melody with them, idk what logic u set them, and objs after this like them...
00:46:482 (1,2) - blanket? and many more
01:28:555 add a note
01:42:275 (4) - don't stack, try 421,102

hmm... the composing can be better imo

...
good luck

hitsuhanayami wrote:

Wish you success (Rooting)
---Eventually this song come out.

Losertic wrote:

Hello!

From M4M.

Modding

General

1. Pass.

Normal

1. check distance. (check aimod)
2. 00:16:116 (2) - move (468,228)? fixed
   
3. 00:41:543 - add note? fixed
   
4. 01:15:385 (3,4) - check distance..? (1.02x → 0.98x ~ 1.01x) fixed
   
5. 02:51:604 (3) - change " 02:50:507 (1) " slider. and move (221,268)? fixed

Hard

1. 00:17:580 (3) - how about this? remove slider, 00:17:580 , 00:17:763 , 00:17:946 - add note. keep
2. 00:21:970 (3) - ^
3. 01:07:336 (1) - NC, 01:08:068 (3) - remove NC, 01:09:348 (1) - NC? fixed
4. 01:19:043 (3) - change roundly slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1026133 fixed
5. 01:26:360 (4,5,6) - maybe too close?.. move note far away fixed
6. 01:43:921 (3,1) - blanket? fixed
7. 02:23:068 (2,3) - overlap. fixed
8. 02:40:994 (7,8) - how about this? (change shape) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1026166 fixed
9. 02:43:738 (6) - change 1.0x distance! fixed
10. 02:51:604 (4) - move (116,300), and 02:51:970 (1) - check distance. (1.0x ↑) fixed
11. 02:59:287 (7) - remove NC..? fixed
12. 03:11:543 (2,1) - overlap. fixed

Extra

1. 00:09:165 (1,1) - remove NC?
2. 00:18:311 (1) ~ 00:20:872 (9) - change 0.4x distance? or 0.95x distance. fixed
   
3. 00:52:061 (1) - remove spinner, change rythem...? it's my opinion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1026192 (only rythem) fixed
   
4. 02:01:482 (1) - remove NC

LoserticLunatic

1. 00:06:055 (4,5,6) - too close. move note far away. (1.2 ~ 1.3x distance?) - like this - 00:40:993 (3,4) fixed
   
2. 00:49:043 (1) - change same slider → 00:49:592 (3) fixed
   
3. 00:53:433 (1) - ^ → 00:54:165 (2) fixed
   
4. 02:39:897 (3) - ^ → 02:38:799 (1) fixed
   
5. 03:26:360 (1) - remove NC fixed
   
6. 03:26:909 (7) - NC fixed
   
7. 03:27:275 (1) - remove NC fixed
   
8. 03:29:287 (7) - remove NC fixed
   
9. 03:30:750 (1) - ^ fixed
   
10. 03:36:421 (7) - remove slider, add note - 03:36:421 , 03:36:604 ?

Sorry, i'm not good mod insane↑ diff.

I hope bother to shape!

smallboat wrote:

嗨，sjoy，In-game M4M req。

[General]

None.

[Normal]

00:38:068 (4) - 這段00:30:750 (2,3,4,5) - 一樣 要不要試試縮短? fixed
00:50:324 (3) - 前端+w fixed
03:09:531 (1) - 試試轉盤+f? fixed

[Hard]

SPOILER

01:08:982 (5) - 無rhythm，還是弄的簡單點這裡不要擺note吧? fixed
01:09:897 (2) - x:304 y:240 做正三角 fixed
01:13:921 (1,2,3) -這6個有點擠，3個全選轉角度，選最下面那兩個轉-180度(跟456一樣方向)。移到 x:52 y:248 改了
01:14:287 (4,5,6) - 全選移到 x:60 y:132 ^
01:19:775 (1) - 可以小跳 應該不錯 移到 x:160 y:172 好
01:22:702 (1) - ^ x:370 y:293 好
01:43:555 (2) - 試試移到 x:124 y:288 也是1.0x 好
02:12:275 (5) - 包一下? x:384 y:116 好
02:23:433 (3) - 尾端的stack歪出。fixed
02:26:726 (7,1) - 這兩個移中間不是比較好看? 全選 移到 x:172 y:164 左右位置 改了
03:11:726 (1) - stack歪出。fixed
03:26:909 (1) - 小跳一下 x:292 y:120 好
03:34:775 (2) - ^ x:128 y:120 好
03:36:604 (4) - ^ x:180 y:152 不了

[Lunatic]

SPOILER

00:23:433 (3) - 可以跟00:22:702 (1) 做個對稱，複製(1)，Ctrl+H，folw感覺也蠻好? 好
01:05:507 (3,4,5,6) - 感覺這邊連打音量要小點 有點刺耳 可40或50 好
01:06:970 (3,4,5,6) - ^ 後面就能放大音量了 好
01:15:385 (1,2,3) - 建議以01:16:482 (4) 做圓心，2個長條之間尾端角度一致，像12現在偏直角，23銳角，不太平均。改了
01:23:068 (2) -跟(1)靠在一起了 要不要換個位置? 其他都有空隙。先这样
01:25:994 (2) - 往上移一點? 好
01:51:604 (5) - 第一眼感覺還以為是短滑條，原來是折返，換個位置? 打HD應該很坑 不会啊 有4提示左右
01:56:177 (1,2,3,4,5) - 整串往左移 x:352 y:172 試試? 好
02:12:458 (1) - 夾著不太好看，移到x:144 y:152 試試? 好
02:51:970 (1,2) - 試著把這折返的藍線都變auto看看 也搬動whistle，剩下clap。 如果改的話後面也要改。没啥区别不改好了
02:53:799 (2,3) - ^
03:07:702 (3) - 移到 x:136 y:68? 改了
03:15:933 (2) - 往下移點用連打包住?这样3不好接

[Extra] 好鬼畜的map

SPOILER

00:06:238 (6) - 很大聲，調 40或50 好
00:11:360 (2) - 移到 x:336 y:300?好
00:33:677 (5) - 應該可以跟(6)搞個對稱
00:41:360 (5,6,7,8) - 要不要跟後面長條呈個弧形? 雖然後面也有類似情況..
00:42:641 (2) - test一下感覺有點扭。
01:26:543 (8) - 這個好遠連的到? 改了
01:28:007 (6) - ^改了
01:45:385 (1) -這段能玩?
01:46:026 (8) - 突出來了改了
02:27:824 (2,4) - 前端+w
03:24:531 (1) - 這段遮檔好多 感覺不太好。
03:32:580 (1) - ^
剩下没改了

[Other]

1.如果有任何修改上的問題，可以 PM 或 In-game 詢問。
2.Good Luck,祝Ranked.

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello ^^ Random mod!

[Normal]
00:27:824 (2,4) - Move more apart, since I can see them slightly overlapping. fixed
00:35:141 (4) - Add finish on the tail.fixed
00:47:580 (2) - Try extending the tail to 00:48:311 to match the same hold the piano has on that note. fixed

You can also re-arrange 00:46:482 (1,2) - to this if you like:

*00:47:580 (2,1) - Makes a good overlap! ^^

01:00:750 (6) - Slider really doesn't fit in this part with the multiple notes heard here. Try using two 1/1 sliders and add a note, like this:I know it but the diffcult rating just 3.25+
I don't see any harm in placing them 1/2 apart in a Normal diff
01:08:068 (4) - NC, since it jumps onto a higher note, and stays on that same tempo.
01:13:921 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:28:555 - Add a note here with a finish for a better ending for the chorus.
01:43:190 (1) - Change finish on the head to a whistle instead, there's no cymbal crash here.
01:46:116 (1) - ^
01:48:311 (3) - ^ On the tail instead.
01:51:970 (1) - ^
01:54:897 (1) - ^
01:57:493 - ^
01:57:493 - ^
02:06:604 (1) - ^
02:09:531 (1) - ^
02:27:092- Add a note here with a finish, to make the chorus sound more complete. ok
02:46:116 - Same suggestion as 01:00:750 (6)
02:54:165 (5,2) - Should be moved apart, but that might corrupt the entire flow, so just try to stack their tails please?
02:57:824-Same suggestion as 01:00:750 (6)
03:03:311 - Slider doesn't fit here, since you hear no note from the instruments (specifically the trumpet). Try using this rhythm instead:fixed

03:09:531 (1) - Having it start at 03:10:994 instead, for consistency. Now fill in 03:09:531 with your sliders, or my suggestion on 01:00:750 (6)01:00:750 (6) -
03:16:848 (1) - Remove finish, try not to overuse this hitsound.
03:22:702 (1) - ^
03:28:555 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:50:141 (8) - Consider removing this note, as no note from the piano is heard here.ok
01:01:848 (8) - Move to 01:02:031 ok
01:40:263 (1) - Add finish ok
01:46:848 (3) - Remove reverse?
02:03:677 (1) - Add finish on the head. ok
02:38:799 (1) - ^ ok
02:50:507 (1) - ^ok
03:02:214 (1) - ^ok

[Extra]
00:47:580 (4) - Umm consider remodeling this slider, because of the overlap of 00:46:848 (2,4) - :

00:50:507 (5) - Remove clap.
01:13:921 (2) - Change clap on the head to a finish.
02:07:519 (4,1) - Bad overlap..
02:38:799 (1) - Add finish on the head.
02:50:507 (1) - Add finish.
03:02:214 (1) - ^ On the head.
03:30:385 (1,5) - Stack?

[Lunatic]
Uhh extra's already been enough for my eyes...@_@ I had to idea Extra = Expert diff
So many streams..

Nice song though
Hope this helps~!

P A N wrote:

hi :3, from my queue.

[Lunatic]

try to add finish-drum like this I think its really fit :3\
OK I'll think about it.In fact it's too hard to hear the finish-drum
00:16:116 (3,2) - move to 217|300 for perfect stack, better imo. fixed
00:52:702 (2) - I think this spacing will confuse player, what about move (1) to stack this or almost stack? ok
01:01:665 (4) - move to 288|108 is better blanket imo, if you fix this please move next slider for blanket too. fixed
02:20:507 (3,5) - add whistle instead?. fixed
02:47:397 - add some whistle spam on stream in this part? ok
02:52:702 (3,4,1) - its not symmetry yet. please follow this > (3) - move tail to 232|112. (4) - move to 305|231 , center point: 288|272 tail: 224|296. (1) - move to 280|164 , center point: 328|160 , tail: 364|188.. fixed
03:16:848 (1,2) - I think use just 3 slider point here and make better blanket is better. and move 03:15:933 (2) to 144|196 for be a center of stream?. fixed
03:19:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I think you can make this stream better (half of circle pattern)03:16:848 (1) - ?. fixed
03:30:750 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - ^?. fixed
[Xtra]

same sugges about drum-finish
00:56:360 (4) - blanket like this? ok

SPOILER

nice extra, even its hard.

[Hard]

same sugges about drum-finish
00:34:958 (1) - I think spread it to note is more fun to play. ok

SPOILER

01:01:665 (7) - I think add slider instead and end at 01:02:031 is more fit with music. fixed
01:10:263 (3,4,5,6,1) - star pattern here? ok
01:11:726 (2,3,4,1) - square pattern here? ok
01:13:921 (1) - add finish? no
01:26:909 - add note? ok
02:49:775 (3) - move tail to 128|156 for parallel with (2)?
03:19:775 (1) - add finish instead? ok

[Normal]
00:13:921 (2,3) - make it flow like this? . fixed

SPOILER

00:17:214 (4) - move second point to 260|88 and red point: 328|104 for better blanket. ok
00:55:263 (1) - what about 288|384? i not recommend to stack the note in easiest diff.ok
01:00:750 (6) - move second point to 388|352 for better blanket.ok
01:13:921 (1,2,3,4) - make them blanket each other is better and looks more comfortable to eye :X ok
here just example, don't need to blanket like this.

SPOILER

01:28:555 - I think add note here with finish hitsound is also fine and fit the music. you do it same here too 02:27:092 ok
02:40:629 (3) - move second point to 272|248 and red point: 260|184.. fixed
02:46:116 (5) - ^ to 200|184 and red point: 88|168.. fixed
03:10:994 (1) - end on 03:12:458 for give a break after spinner for beginner. the current one is too suddenly imo.. fixed
03:32:214 (3) - move second point to 60|252.

nice nice, I love stream map :3
take my star thank you very much

Xinely wrote:

Hi from my queue ~

• 
  Hard
  01:06:238 (4) - 24,320 for better flow? no
  01:26:360 (4) - the spacing? intentional for anti jump? if yes use NC instead to make it readable o.o added a note to make it two squares
  02:24:165 (1,2) - swap NC? due in (2) have different pattern >< no~
  02:27:092 (1) - reduce spacing of jump? too much hard in hard diff imo reduced
  02:39:348 - add note? kinda weird if you skip this time imo no, there're no note in other parts
  02:46:482 (4) - nazi, but use consistency spacing (1,00x) please lol it's fine > >
  03:06:604 (4,1) - swap NC, due stanza also different pattern removed the second nc

Xinely wrote:

Hi from my queue ~

• 
  Normal
  AR+1? AR 3 pretty slow for me also for better spread, Hard use AR8 and Normal use AR3 it's so bad imo ok
  00:00:751 (1) - add finish with 20% volume? i heard a low cymbal here >_< ok
  00:08:799 (4) - extend to 00:09:165 - ? i know in 00:08:982 - have a enough loud music but i guess you need to make easier in this diff >< no
  00:10:263 (2) - add one repeat? i mean http://puu.sh/4TJHB.jpg for better follow music^
  00:19:409 - have a kinda loud sound so i think you need to map this imo, 00:19:043 (2) - extend until 00:19:409 - ? ok
  00:20:507 (4) - nazi, tail 340,364 for better flow
  well, i suggestion to reduce some 1/2 sliders here, the music not forcing you to use red tick so please make it easier for better spread diff too
  00:42:458 (2) - spacing issue fixed
  00:43:190 - sound of music is loud here, i really suggest you to map this time no
  00:46:116 - same here ^ no
  00:49:043 (2) - make it blanket with (2)green slider better imo, i mean https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1045951 ok
  00:59:287 (4) - whistle in head? feel empty without hitsound imo ok
  01:15:385 (3) - spacing issue (0,94x) here fixed
  01:16:848 (1) - aaa add finish with additions soft. it will be better since have loud sound ok
  01:19:775 (1,1,1) - finish for all circles, loud cymbal on that time ok
  01:50:324 (1) - change the spin with pattern or anything, this is Easiest diff and have a slider after spin without break (at least need 1 whitetick for break). too much confusing for newbie ok
  01:53:983 (4) - clap in tail? for consistency with 01:52:702 (2) -
  01:56:909 (4) - same as above, oh if you follow this, do at all in 3rd whitetick until 02:08:799 -
  02:15:385 (1) - make it same as first kiai 01:16:848 (1) - ? i mean add clap :3 ok
  02:38:799 - i feel 40% kinda low in this time, how about 50%? ok
  03:01:482 (1) - feel kinda empty, add sampleset drum? if you feel still low sound, add finish or clap with drum ofc, it will be fine ~ ok
  03:09:531 (6) - in head feel so empty without hitsound.whistle in head due trumpet sound? ok
  03:13:921 - in kiai rhythm is fine but it's boring due repetitive here, i hope you can find another rhythm for variety I try._.

• 
  Hard
  00:00:751 (1) - add hitsound in head just like in Normal diff for consistency
  00:02:214 (1) - anti jump? better if you use normal spacing here
  00:12:092 (4,5,6,7) - i guess this too much hard since bpm in here enough high. make them become 1/4 slider repeat?
  00:34:409 (5) - make it become straight slider, flow will be better
  00:49:409 (5) - make it like http://puu.sh/4UnUM.jpg for better flow?
  01:01:482 - add note for better rhythm? sound better imo xD
  01:06:238 (4) - 24,320 for better flow?
  01:26:360 (4) - the spacing? intentional for anti jump? if yes use NC instead to make it readable o.o
  01:59:653 (6) - your hard have less of jump, how about make jump here? http://puu.sh/4Uovw.jpg
  02:24:165 (1,2) - swap NC? due in (2) have different pattern ><
  02:27:092 (1) - reduce spacing of jump? too much hard in hard diff imo
  02:39:348 - add note? kinda weird if you skip this time imo
  02:46:482 (4) - nazi, but use consistency spacing (1,00x) please lol
  03:06:604 (4,1) - swap NC, due stanza also different pattern
  03:22:702 (1,2) - make it like http://puu.sh/4Up7B.jpg ? better flow imo xD

• 
  Insane
  01:25:263 (4) - need NC due different pattern. just like 01:23:433 (1) - ok
  01:48:311 (3) - NC for readable as 1/4 slider repeat jump ok
  01:51:238 (4) - ^ etc which i mean need to NC for 1/4 slider repeat jumpok
  well it's nice diff ~

sorry i can't mod your extra diff due lack of experience mapping extra diff =w=

Good Luck ~
sorry this is poor mod asdf

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

M4M req in my queue

[General]

1. None

[Normal]

1. 00:03:677 (1) - 我觉得whistle去掉比较好 改了
3. 00:21:970 (2,3,4) - 强迫症表示这是blanket吗？改了
5. 00:32:946 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里节奏一换突然不习惯了改了
7. 01:13:921 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个尾clap 改了
9. 01:49:409 (4,1) - NC移到那个4上面改了
10. 
    
11. 02:25:629 (3,4) - 尾clap
12. 02:57:824 (5) - 再拉好点改了

[Hard]

1. 01:03:677 (1,2,3,4,5) - 放在hard里面有点偏难了，特别后面还接一个三连 改了
3. 01:13:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 良心何在 好吧 改了[/color
4. 01:16:482 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - ^ ……
5. 01:23:799 (1,2) - 弄平行吧 好
6. 01:25:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我没看错吧这是hard吧这真的是hard吧 很难么？
7. 01:51:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 还有后面的 好吧改了
8. 02:07:336 (3,4,5,1) - 下面我如果在后面不写mod的话，那就是吐槽你的良心 ;w;
9. 02:23:799 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ;w;
10. 02:26:726 (7,1) - 1去掉，折返弄多一个 好
11. 03:00:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 改了
12. 最后一段kiai……不多说了
13. 我个人认为，这可以说是一个hard，但高难度的hard一般是在没有insane难度的情况下才会用的，所以我“个人”不太喜欢这个hard的作法。

其实吧我觉得4.9左右难度差不多我都是看星定HARD的;w;
[Lunatic]

1. 00:32:213 (3,4,5,6,1) - flow有点卡手
3. 03:36:421 (7) - 最好首尾的音量能改一下以便能听清两个finish 改了
5. 别的没啥，自己打了一遍觉得不错的说。

[Extra]

1. 00:30:750 (3,4,5,6,7) - overmaped不是什么大问题，不过我觉得这段连打没必要 改了
2. 
   00:52:336 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
3. 01:28:555 (5) - finish
4. 变速用的太多了可能会不符合rank规则，我记得要求是3个以内（包括×1.0），不过我想extra应该问题也不大吧，毕竟ex摆在那里。
5. Powerful streams.

Good luck~

BakaHuang wrote:

sorry

Lunatic

00:00:751(1)-slider换成一个note比较好 叠在(2)上面 好
00:03:311(6)-这里可以去掉折返 换成note 其实我更倾向于都用note 好
后面同样的part也是这个想法 好
00:09:531(1)-Ctrl+G 因为(6)是向上滑的..所以我觉得(1)改到上面的flow比较好? (2)-要不要Ctrl+G? 好
01:19:043(3)-Ctrl+G 好
01:21:970(3)-向下弯比较好咯?好
01:24:897(3,1)-就是(3)如果向下弯的话后面(1)就从下往上弯比较好哦 (1)放在(3)的斜下方这种改其他了
02:01:848(1)-这段的normalhit音不需要加吗好像不错
02:16:116(1,3)-用finish音 我觉得最后一节 用就够了
02:16:848(1,2)-头上都用finish音,就是音乐里有这音的都用finish音比较好 比较能突显气势0.0b

连打有些地方我觉得不是很必要 然后排版还是需要多加努力
我尽力吧
Extra

00:06:238(6)-this note is a bit louder
00:34:043(6)-you can change slider to notes to make typeset better

Hard

00:34:958(1)- is is not on the same straight line with (2,3,4,5)

mod有点水orz..人老了看不久了 线充愉快:)

azuretwinight wrote:

hello~



蓝色是我的建议（只是建议而已） 粉红色是我觉得需要修改的地方

General
好长= =看的我有点困= =
话说这曲子本身就可以有很多自创节奏，所以节奏上我不会提出问题，不是太打不上拍子的节奏我都能够接受
音效给个赞
总体很好，找不出什么地方来说，仅提几点建议，请多指教！
刚才忘记给星星了。。

Normal
好评无建议

Hard
好评无建议

Lunatic
最后那些滑条打的很过瘾
02:09:531 (1) - 这个note的摆放位置我不是很同意，这里按照你之前的摆法会是很顺畅的，这里却又把折返滑条拆掉一段，反而往回点了个note，跟下面也不是很搭，读图也比之前的地方更有难度了
02:09:531 (1) - 音效上加鼓点强调这段kiai很不错，不过这个鼓点感觉略违和

Extra
这个我打不了真心摸不了。。
不过看这张图还是很过瘾的，音效好评，然后连打很有标志性

由于只是看图没能实际打，就只能水点比较无聊的建议

00:41:360 (5,6,7,8,1) - 连打和滑条没有对齐
00:53:068 (4,5,6,7,1) - 连打和滑条没有对齐
01:46:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的连打做成流线型而非直线型会觉得看上去舒服些~
03:21:787 (3,4,5) - flow觉得比较难，考虑到难度的话倒也正常

没摸出啥来。。水mod抱歉。。
比较不错的图，祝早日rank

Sorry for not modding this a long time because I am too busy with my mapping and my studies too hope you will bear with me

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228,132,17214,2,0,B|268:76|340:88|340:88|352:-4,1,200.000001192092

323,348,60750,2,0,B|384:340|404:280|404:280|468:244|468:244|468:128,1,300.000001788138,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

196,276,65141,6,0,B|108:216|160:164|64:80,2,200.000001192092,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

280,280,71726,2,0,B|232:276|232:276|216:353|140:352,2,150.000000894069

252,256,131177,2,0,B|336:220|336:220|324:276|384:328|436:308,1,250.000001490115,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

344,268,160629,2,0,B|280:248|260:184|260:184|164:184,1,200.000001192092,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

188,300,166116,2,0,B|200:184|88:168|88:168|152:76,1,300.000001788138

204,112,177824,2,0,B|128:168|48:100|48:100|16:224,1,300.000001788138