kelvinli wrote:

Hi. M4M!
[General]
Remove the artists from the tags
Try to get a timing mod. Multiple red lines with identical BPM does not make sense, especially when

[Insane]
00:07:503 (1) - How about using a circle here then a spinner afterwards? nice, fix
00:16:478 (2) - space this out, it is very hard to predict(guess) the rhythm It is Insance diff, I think it's okay.
00:18:895 (1,1) - use normal sampleset for these two fix
00:31:281 (5) - space it properly fix
00:32:445 - addable note here fix
00:40:844 (3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing fix
00:41:701 (6) - use this rhythm? ohhhhh, good ! fix

SPOILER

00:45:130 (3,4) - combine them into a slider, it feels empty I think it's okay. sorry
00:48:387 (9) - use a 1 - beat slider here, or it will be empty fix
00:55:930 (1) - I like you finish sound here >w<
00:59:701 (6,1) - add something here, very blank and awkward to play imo fix
01:05:016 (1,2,3,4) - incorrect rhythm: Good ~ fix

SPOILER

01:06:216 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing fix
01:06:901 (10,1) - this transitions plays weird. convert (10) into a slider, fill the remaining red tick with a circle fix
01:12:044 (1) - why not just use normal-sampleset? fix
01:13:416 (4,5,6) - stack them properly fix
01:16:416 (after 11)- add note fix
01:31:032 (5,6,7) - move it further fix
01:49:575 (7,8,9) - inconsistent spacing fix
01:54:546 (6) - this note is unnecessary fix
01:57:975 - add note fix
02:00:889 - ^ fix
02:04:489 (1,2) - don't make a sudden doublet here It's okay
02:19:146 (10) - wrong rhythm, there are beats on the red and white ticks: fix

SPOILER

02:23:689 (12) - listen to the guitar beats and map something after this note, VERY empty fix
02:52:489 (1) - soft does not make sense. Use normal fix
02:54:204 (7,8,9,10,11) - try to make a curved turn here? okay, fix
03:18:547 (9) - listen to the guitar beats and map something after this note fix
03:23:775 (5) - this should be on red tick fix

A last note: Most streams in your map is very linear. Try to use more curve streams! ok, i consider your suggestion

[held]
00:18:191 (3,4,5) - I don't recommend straight lines, they are very hard to catch imo fix
00:45:816 (4,3) - make a blanket here: good, fix

SPOILER

00:55:244 (1) - I don't recommend sliders repeating 2 times on hard, it is very confusing fix
01:05:016 (2) - this should be on the blue tick fix
01:07:758 (7) - same repeating problems fix
01:14:444 (1) - delete NC fix
01:15:130 (3) - NC fix
01:17:873 (1,2,3,4) - they make me feel like they are 1/4 beats apart. Space them as normal spacing fix
01:54:718 (7) - spinner after this fix
02:17:689 (2) - this should be on the blue tick fix
02:20:432 (4) - same repeating problems fix
02:21:804 (2,4) - don't make them overlap sorry
02:27:632 (3,4,5) - tweak them no overlaps are seen fix
02:53:860 (5) - same repeating problems fix
03:03:461 - add note fix
03:09:632 (1) - like in before fix

Overall, the hard has a similar with Insane is that there are too many "empty part", where you play the map and it suddenly stops. If you are not sure what to map in these parts, please try to listen to the guitar beats/ drums/ etc.. and map to them, so that the whole map is consistent.

[Normal and Easy]
wip do it tomorrow

Rice wrote:

hi~

M4M

General

1. an image file "a1.png" is in the map folder. Is this gonna be used?
   
   [notice]Easy
   
   1. 00:06:119 (3) - Move 4 grids upward [ x48, y272 (Grid Size: Tiny) ]
   2. 00:42:216 (3) - Remove Clap at the end of slider
   3. 00:44:273 (2) - Remove Clap
   4. 00:45:644 (4) - ^
   5. 00:47:016 (2) - ^
   6. 00:48:387 (4) - ^
   7. 01:38:285 (3) - This circle doesn't have to necessarily follow the vocals, move it 1 tick forward and further away from the other object.
   8. 01:53:518 (5) - NC
   9. 02:47:004 (1) - Remove Clap then Add Finish
   10. 02:48:375 (4) - Remove Clap at the head of slider
   11. 02:49:404 (1) - Remove Clap on the Reverse Arrow
   12. 02:50:775 (3) - Remove Clap at the end of slider
   13. 02:52:489 (1) - Remove Clap at the head of slider
   14. 02:55:232 (1) - ^
   15. 03:00:718 (3) - Move 4 grids to the right [ x384, y176 (Grid Size: Tiny) ]
   16. 03:48:719 (1) - The spinner is too short, try mapping these parts (03:48:718 - 03:49:746) then start the spinner on 03:49:917 to 03:53:861
       All fix

Normal

1. 00:16:136 (1) - Remove Clap on the Reverse Arrow
2. 00:17:663 (4) - Remove Clap
3. 00:17:663 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - This kind of pattern would be hard for beginners to do, try changing it.
4. 00:34:330 (6) - If suggestion above is ignored, Add Clap
5. 00:35:016 (8) - ^
6. 00:39:301 (4,5) - Remove Whistle
7. 00:51:816 (1,2,3,4) - This kind of pattern is too Hard for a Normal diff. try this:
   
8. 01:14:273 (4,1) - Objects are too far away from each other, try bringing them closer.
9. 01:37:754 (2,3,4) - These objects are offbeat, this should be fixed. ^^"
10. 01:59:004 (1,2,3,4) - This kind of pattern would be hard for beginners to do, try changing it.
11. 02:17:346 (5) - Remove Finish
12. 02:17:689 (7) - ^
13. 02:52:490 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This kind of pattern would be hard for beginners to do, try changing it.
14. 03:35:004 (4) - Move 1 grid to the left then 2 grids down [ x336, y152 (Grid Size: Tiny) ]
    All fix

Hard

1. AR -1 (with a mapflow that fast, it would be too hard to follow)
2. 00:20:952 (2) - Add Finish
3. 00:36:730 (7) - Remove Clap on the Reverse Arrow
4. 00:41:358 (3) - The slowdown is too sudden, try fixing it. ^^" Sorry ;w; I think it's okay
5. 01:05:187 - Add a circle here at [ x284, y260 (Grid Size: Tiny) ] to have a continuous flow with the previous object.
6. 01:38:285 (6) - This slider's end doesn't go with the beat of the song, try fixing it. ^^"
7. 02:50:946 to 02:59:004 - this section is a bit silent, maybe use some strong and louder hitsounds here.Sorry.
8. 03:48:204 (3) - Move 1 tick forward (so that it will follow vocals)

Insane

1. 00:41:187 (4) - This circle can be mistaken as prior to the previous object and therefore, must be put further away.
   Try moving it here [ x96, y76 (Grid Size: Tiny) ]
2. 00:50:273 (1,2,3) - move these 1 snap backwards and extend the slider by 1 snap.
3. 00:53:873 (1,2,3,4) - i think this might be a good way. try rearranging these objects by switching the single circle and the triplets. then move the objects in the field afterwards. Sorry ;w;
4. 01:19:587 - Add another circle here and stack it with 01:19:416 (1,2)
5. 01:30:433 (4) - Extend this slider by 1 snap, at least this way it won't be offbeat.
6. 01:38:285 (11) - This slider is offbeat. Try fixing it. ^^"
7. 01:41:518 (6) - Move this further away from 01:41:175 (5). It might be clicked earlier than expected.
8. 03:23:776 (5) - Move this circle 1 tick forward (to follow vocals) Sorry

played this once, it was fun.

good luck~!

1st: BPM:131 Offset:2422
2nd: BPM:175 Offset:10666

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Losertic wrote:

Hello!

From M4M.

Modding

General

1. Pass.. 와, 잠깐만 변속 쩌시네요.

Easy

1. Aimod 에서 osnapped 체크. 음... 디스턴스는 변속때문에 그렇게 뜨는건가? 일단 보류.
2. 00:24:380 (3) - 뉴 콤보.
3. 00:24:723 (4) - 패턴 바꿔보시는건 어떠세요.
   -뉴패턴
   1. 00:24:380 ~ 00:24:723 - 슬라이더 하나 추가 및 1번 리버스
   2. 00:25:409 ~ 00:25:752 - 슬라이더 하나 추가
4. 00:57:301 (3,4) - 겹친거좀 떼주세요.
5. 00:58:330 (1) - 뉴 콤보.
6. 01:02:787 (1) - 뉴 콤보.
7. 01:09:301 (4) - 뉴 콤보.
8. 02:11:346 (1) - ^
9. 02:16:832 (1) - ^
10. 02:27:804 (1,2) - 겹친거좀 떼주세요.
11. 02:50:775 (3,4,5,6) - 02:50:775 부분에 노트 하나 깔고 02:51:118 ~ 02:52:146 까지 긴 슬라이더 만들어 보시는건 어떠세요? (어렵지만)
12. 03:07:575 (3) - 뉴 콤보.
13. 03:21:289 (4) - ^
14. 03:26:432 (2,4) - 살짝 겹친거 떼주세요.
15. 03:27:804 (1) - 뉴 콤보.
16. 03:28:832 (6) - 이부분은 동글동글하게 만들어도 될듯. 그리고 하신다면 03:29:518 (4) 이거 지우시고 그 슬라이더 리버스 한번 어떠세요. 이렇게? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/975259
17. 03:33:289 (5) - 뉴 콤보.
18. 03:40:832 (3,4) - 살짝 겹친거 떼주세요.
19. 03:36:375 (1) - 이거 지우시고 03:36:375 ~ 03:36:718 - 슬라이더 추가, 03:37:061 ~ 03:37:404 - 슬라이더 추가는 어떠신가요?
20. 03:42:204 (5) - 뉴 콤보.
21. 03:43:232 (7) - 이거 이렇게 하시는건? 03:43:232 ~ 03:43:918 - 슬라이더 추가. 03:44:261 - 노트 추가.
22. 03:47:689 (4) - 뉴 콤보.
23. 03:45:975 (2,3) - 이것도 이렇게?...
    -뉴 패턴
    1. 03:45:975 ~ 03:46:318 - 슬라이더 추가.
    2. 03:46:661 - 노트 하나 추가.
    3. 03:47:004 ~ 03:47:346 - 슬라이더 추가.

Normal

1. 약간 전체적으로 어려운 느낌이 듭니다.
2. 00:04:273 (3) - 뉴 콤보.
3. 00:33:987 (5) - 뉴 콤보.
4. 00:33:987 (5,6,7,8) - 이부분은 초보자들에게 어려울 것 같아요. ( 00:34:673 (7,8) - 이부분은 특히 어려울 듯함..)
5. 00:37:416 (1) - 뉴 콤보, 00:38:101 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거.
6. 00:39:130 (1) - 뉴 콤보.
7. 00:42:044 (1) - ^
8. 01:04:844 (3) - 이 슬라이더가 뒤에 슬라이더들을 가립니다. 바꿔주세요.
   ─ 혹시 디스턴스 체크 하셨나요? 이지는 하신것 같은데 노말은... 음. 변속때문에 그런가??? 안하셨다면 간격 일정하게 하셔야 훨씬 나아져요.
   1. 간격 설정 체크 안한 예제 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/975283
   1(수정). 간격 설정하면... - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/975285
   
   ─ 그리고 개인적으로(...) 이지,노말에서 연속 2번 슬라이더는 가능하면 안쓰셨으면 해요. 네.. 저 초보때 솔직히 그거에 많이 틀려서..후. 이 문장 이후로 2번 연속 슬라이더 글은 지적 안할게요.. 솔직히 이부분은 잘 모르겠어요. 저는 일단 연속2번 이지,노말에선 안쓰는데.. 흠. 잘 모르겠네요....
9. 02:15:118 (4) - 뉴 콤보.
10. 02:17:346 (5) - ^
11. 02:23:004 (1) - ^
12. 02:26:090 (5) - ^
13. 02:57:975 (5) - ^
14. 03:37:060 (4) - ^
15. 03:38:432 (5) - ^

Hard

1. 변속 때문에 간격 일정하지 않은거죠? 그렇다고 말해줘요....
2. 00:34:330 (6,8) - 살짝 겹친거 떼주세요.
3. 00:51:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이부분은 간격 많이 넓히셔도 될것같아요. 제가 처음 볼땐 빠르게 쳐야 하는줄...
4. 00:59:016 (2,4) - 겹친거 떼주세요.
5. 01:07:416 (6) - 뉴 콤보.
6. 01:08:958 - 이부분 이렇게 바꿔보시는건??
   -뉴 패턴
   1. 01:09:816 ~ 01:09:987 - 슬라이더 추가, 1번 리버스.
   2. 01:10:330 ~ 01:10:673 - 슬라이더 추가 .1번 리버스.
   3. 01:11:358 - 노트 추가 01:11:530 - 노트 추가 01:11:701 - 노트 추가
7. 01:35:526 (1) - 뉴 콤보.
8. 02:16:489 (5,7) - 둘이 겹쳐요. 그냥 02:16:832 (7) - 이 슬라이더 모양 바꿔 보시는건 어떠세요?
9. 02:17:518 (1,2,3,4) - 이부분 간격이 일정하진 않지만, 일정하다고 하더라도 박자가 딱딱 맞는게 아니라서 1번 2번 노트 자리에 슬라이더 하나 놓으시는건 어떠세요?
10. 02:30:546 (1,4) - 겹치는거 떼주세요.
11. 03:05:005 (2,4) - 살짝 겹치는거 떼주세요.
12. 03:09:975 (2,3,4) - 이부분 간격 넓게 하셔도 될듯.
13. 03:38:432 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거.
14. 03:46:146 (6) - 뉴 콤보.

Insane

1. 00:36:044 (6) - 대충 이렇게 사각형 모양으로..?? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/975312 아 물론 그 다음 7번 슬라이더 위치는 옮겨주시고요.
2. 01:15:816 (1) - 뉴 콤보.
3. 03:00:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 최대한 간격 맞춰서 이렇게 해보세요. 노트 위치 변경입니다
   03:00:204 (1) - (272,84)
   03:00:375 (2) - (364,136)
   03:00:546 (3) - (424,224)
   03:00:718 (4) - (364,312)
   03:00:889 (5) - (272,356)
   03:01:061 (6) - (176,312)
   03:01:232 (7) - (124,224)
   03:01:404 (8) - (184,136)
4. 03:48:032 (1) - 뉴 콤보.

간격은 일부러 이렇게 하신건가요?

제 취향이 아니지만(???)

노트 배치하고 BPM.. 힛사..

부러무 ㅠㅜ

저도 늅맵퍼라서.. 일단 끝! (하드랑,인세인부터는 저퀄리티 모딩인게 보이시나요.... 시간이 시간이라서.. 후...)

Pizza Kun wrote:

M4M from your modding queue, please check my post ^^

[Insane]

Try to make a rithm less costant

I think is better in this way: 00:02:427 (1,2) - Sorry, i like it



00:11:864 (7) - Move in 316||192
00:14:256 (6,1) - Stack better
00:15:282 (3) - Not snapped
00:15:367 - Add a note sorry
00:17:332 - Add a note in 340||216
00:25:237 (7,8) - Stack better
00:35:187 (12) - Move in 256||320 sorry ;w; i like mine
00:35:016 (11) - Move in 468||328 ^
00:33:987 (1) - NC
00:36:901 (8) - NC
No NC 00:37:416 (1)
00:43:930 (2,4) - Stack better
00:49:073 (1,3) - Ctrl+G
00:51:301 (5,6) - ^
00:55:930 (1,2,3) - Stack
00:57:987 (1,2) - Bad overlap, move it
01:01:930 (10) - Make a slider 1/1 sorry, i think a little strange
01:10:330 (1) - NC
01:15:816 (6) - NC
Fix all stacks
01:24:025 (6,7,8) - try this:

SPOILER

01:29:494 (6) - NC
01:34:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Use hitsounds
01:37:068 (1) - NC
01:50:689 - Add note making a stream sorry ;w;
01:54:718 (1) - Start at 01:54:804
and add note in 01:54:718
02:00:375 (5) - NC
02:12:032 (9) - ^
End of break 02:44:261
02:59:346 (5) - NC
03:22:661 (6,1) - This spacing is bad, receck all map for this type of error
03:25:060 (1) - This pause break the rithm
03:35:690 (1) - NC
03:36:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What? it is hard to red >.<
03:48:032 (6) - NC


Sorry i mod only insane >.<

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

M4M + 1 star

[General]
Uhm...quite passable
You can refer some other diffs around the BPM, use the new search function (ex. BPM<175)
Hard to mod for me ;w;
You can try to make the map more fun :3

[Normal]
00:35:016 (8) - Don't stack at tail
00:36:044 (3) - Distance snap (DS)
00:38:101 (1) - Try to make this DS too
00:48:387 (8) - Reverse 1 more time
00:50:444 (1,2) - Make this same as 02:01:746 (1,2,3,4) -

Sorry, can't mod much

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

Hi!

GENERAL

Good hitsounds, but for some cases, especially Hard, the patterns need rethinking. dont make them too hard or it wont be fun. Remember, fun comes first before difficulty (I dont mean to say all this in an offensive way, its just some friendly advice). Also, for Easy many gaps in the rhythm, need to fill them with at least one note

EASY

00:05:686 - Add a note

00:31:089 (1) - Slider is too close to the next note, may be too difficult for the beginners. Perhaps change it to one long slider that ends at 00:32:616

01:06:216 (5) - Add a note here

01:20:616 (4) - Add a note here, rhythm sounds more appropriate sorry ;w;

01:20:958 (1) - If you follow ^, the slider shold start at 01:20:958 ^

01:52:146 (2,3,4) - 3 circles may be a bit difficult, consider changing 2 of them to a slider, or one bounce back slider

01:54:204 (2) - Change the end to a whistle instead of a clap, sounds better in my opinion sorry i like mine

02:12:718 (3) - Consider changing to long slider, ends at 02:13:404 sorry

02:18:889 (3) - Add a note

02:30:546 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe change these 4 circles to two sliders? Way too hard for an easy difficulty!

02:36:032 (1) - Lower the volume to 5% here sorry

02:51:461 (4,5,6) - 3 circles is too difficult

03:24:718 (5) - Add a note

NORMAL

00:31:089 (4) - Should NC this slider, to show that its different because its slowed

00:57:301 (4,5,1) - Pattern is very confusing in these sliders, head of slider not visible at all

01:06:901 (1,2) - Distance issue, 01:06:901 (1,2) - at X:344 Y: 268

01:11:016 (5) - Add finish sound

01:18:558 (1,2) - No need to NC these

01:38:285 (3) - Should NC this slider, to show that its different because its slowed

01:52:146 (2,3,4) - Pattern is very confusing in these sliders, head of slider not visible at all

02:18:889 (1) - Add a note

00:38:787 (5,6) - Pattern confusing

00:55:587 (2,3,1,2) - Bounce back pattern is very misleading, hard to follow

01:01:073 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Do not make all of the notes have whistles, it does not sound smooth if that happens

01:38:285 (6) - Add a clap at the end

02:07:061 (3,4) - Distance spacing, too close to each other

03:17:346 (5,6,7) - Very misleading pattern

03:43:918 (4) - Bounce back till 03:44:604 sorry


Sorry but I cant mod Insane, too hard for me! But I hoped I helped

lupcha wrote:

Hey, M4M Request here! ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ

General

1. 00:07:503 (1) - I would reduce the volume of the Finish at the spinner end ... to ~ 30% maybe? And why isn't there a Finish in the Easy & Insane Diff ?-?
2. 01:06:901 (1) - increase the volume at the second part of the chorus to ~ 70% maybe?
3. 02:19:575 (1) - ^
4. 03:25:404 (1) - ^
   
   All fix

Easy

1. 00:27:123 (1) – add Finish at the start? (with ~ 20% vol.) Sorry
2. 00:31:089 (5) - maaaybe add here a NC so that the SV change is visible too?
3. 00:31:089 (1) - add Finish at the end?
4. 00:49:073 (1), 00:50:444 (3), 00:51:816 (5) - you could add a Finish at the start of these sliders to emphasize this part of the music.
5. 00:58:330 (1) - move this slider a little so that it doesn't touch the previous note (nazi =v=).
6. 00:59:701 (3,4) - maybe unstack these two notes. It would be a bit more new player-friendly.
7. 01:16:501 (6) - instead of the circle I think a long slider til 01:17:530 would fit better here (because of the long-drawn-out vocal).
8. 01:42:546 (5) - maybe add a NC here? It's kinda a new verse or w/e and I think shorter combos in the Easy Diff are a bit more beginner-friendly. ~
9. 01:57:632 (4, 1) - I would avoid such jumps in the easiest Diff s;
10. 02:05:175 (2) - maybe put the circle at x:264 y:240 so that it doesn't overlap with the previous (2).
11. 02:07:918 (5) - I think it's a bit ... meh that the circle is at the other side where the previous slider ends. Maybe just flip the slider horinzontally to make the flow better?
    
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12. 02:15:118 (3) - move this circle a little so that it doesn't touch the previous note? (nazi =v=)
13. 02:19:575 (1) - ^
14. 02:27:804 (1) - Isn't this slider a bit too close to the previous one? Maybe arrange them like this.
    
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15. 03:00:718 (3) - incorrect spacing, move the slider a bit closer to the previous note. ~
16. 03:28:832 (6,1) - do I see a jump here? :p a little jump

More or less only nazi stuff, I think the Diff is already pretty good!

Normal

1. 00:11:351 (2, 3), 00:14:085 (2,3), 00:17:488 (3,4) - the first thing that got my attention. Stacks in the Normal Diff are okay, but you should be a bit careful with them ... they can still be a bit hard for a new player so I would try to unstack at least one of these.
2. 00:12:718 (5,6) - the flow would be better if (6) was on the other side of (5). Right now, you kinda expect another repeat because of the position. You'd have to move the notes after that a bit tho.
   
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3. 00:18:543 (5) - incorrect spacing. What about a blanket here?
   
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4. 00:33:301 (2,3,4) - I would unstack these.
   
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5. 00:35:358 (1,2) - maybe change this into a 1/2 slider with a repeat (for more variety and the 1/2 slider + circle combo could be a bit hard in the long run).
6. 00:38:101 (3,4) - make it easier and change it into this?
   
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7. 00:39:130 (1,2,3) - I would unstack them again.
8. 00:40:501 (1,2,3) - ^
9. 00:47:701 (5) - I would put a NC here. I think the combo is just too long & hard because of the single notes and this triplet. s; And maybe unstack it again.
10. 01:00:044 (6) - instead of the circle I think a long slider till 01:00:730 would fit better here (because of the long-drawn-out vocal).
11. 01:11:016 (5) - ^ til 01:11:701
12. 01:14:787 (1) - move this circle a little so that it doesn't touch the previous note (nazi =v=).
13. 01:16:501 (5) - and again, I think a long slider til 01:17:530 would be more fitting.
14. 01:26:076 (6) - I would put the (6) on the other side of (5) to make the flow better.
15. 01:37:068 (1) - Sliders with more than one repeat in Normal and/or Easy Diffs are ... hmm. I think it's not too bad, but you could consider to add a cirlce instead of the second repeat.
16. 01:38:285 (1) - I think it sounds awkward to let the slider end at the blue tick ... lengthen it to the red tick?
17. 01:45:632 (1,2,3) - I would unstack this.
18. 01:48:718 (3) - like above, maybe consider adding a circle instead of the second repeat. Or maybe make it like this?
    
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19. 01:58:318 (4) - I would avoid overlaps like this aand again, I would put the (4) at the side (3) actually ends. Something like this? You'd have to move the other notes again.
    
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20. 02:01:746 (1,2,3,4) - I think this stack is really way too hard. s; Would unstack it or make something like this.
    
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21. 02:03:117 (1,2,3) – unstack it maybe.
22. 02:16:317 (1,2,3,4) - move these notes a bit so that they don't touch any previous notes. ((1) = x:152 y:84).
    
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23. 02:17:346 (1,2,3) - unstack it maybe. ~
24. 02:21:632 (1) - put it at the other side for flow?
25. 02:23:004 (1,2,3) – unstack it maybe. ~
26. 02:23:689 (4) - and again, I think a long slider til 02:24:375 would be more fitting.
27. 02:25:061 (2,3,4) – unstack?
28. 02:56:604 (1,2,3) - ^
29. 02:57:975 (1,2,3) - ^
30. 03:29:518 (6) - I think a long slider til 03:30:204 would be more fitting.
31. 03:30:718 (2) - okay, two repeats are already a gray area, but three ...? Please change this, it's too confusing for a new player. ;-;
32. 03:35:004 (4) - and again, I think a long slider til 03:36:032 would be more fitting.

Overall, I really think you could try to make your Normal a tiny bit easier ... like, trying to get it under 4 stars. A few stacks are okay, but there a kinda a LOT of them in your Diff and it would make it already a huge lot easier to unstack some of them. Same thing for the sliders with more than one repeat. They can be a bit tricky for new players and I would try to avoid them.

remapping Normal diff

Hard

1. 00:24:380 (2) – I think a 1/4 slider with a repeat would be more fitting here. sorry
   
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2. 00:35:358 (1) - ^ ^
3. 00:48:387 (3) - make a long slider til 00:48:730 here?
4. 00:57:301 (7,8) - maybe change this circle + slider into one long slider (because of the long-drawn-out vocal)?
5. 01:00:044 (5) - make a long slider til 01:00:730 here? sorry
6. 01:05:530 (5) - ^ til 01:05:873
7. 01:06:730 (3) - change it like this so that you can hit something at the downbeat? (because right now it's at the slider end and hasn't much impact like that).
   
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8. 01:11:016 (8) - make a long slider til 01:11:701 here? sorry
9. 01:12:901 (5) - 01:14:444 (5) – hum, I think this part could be a bit more “exciting” to play? Or with more variety or w/e ... I would suggest something like this. nice, but i like mine. sorry ;w;
   
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10. 01:38:285 (6) - I think it sounds awkward to let the slider end at the blue tick ... lengthen it to the red tick?
11. 01:48:032 (1) - Maybe change it like this? I think it's more fitting. sorry
    
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12. 01:49:232 (6,7) - maybe change this circle + slider into one long slider (because of the long-drawn-out vocal)?
13. 01:57:461 (6) - let this overlap look a bit nicer.
    
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14. 02:02:089 (3,4) - the spacing here is really misleading @_@ I would make it bigger.
15. 02:06:032 (7) - lengthen this slider to the red tick?
16. 02:07:061 (3,4) - I would make the spacing consistent here.
17. 02:12:546 (7) - maybe change this part like this.
    
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18. 02:16:146 (4) - A personal suggestion (again), but I think a pause sounds way better here than this slider. Maybe remove it and add only a circle at 02:16:318 (4). sorry
19. 02:19:404 (4) - I would change it (again) to something like this so that the downbeat can be hit by the player. sorry
    
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20. 02:20:946 (5) - I think you could add some variety and make here (for example) a longer slider so that there are not only these 1/2 sliders + circles all the time.
    
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21. 02:23:689 (9) - make a long slider til 02:24:375 here? sorry
22. 02:29:175 (7) - ^ til 02:30:204 sorry
23. 02:49:918 (4) - try to avoid overlaps like these
24. 03:07:575 (3) - You could add a Finish at the start here.
25. 03:08:775 (3) - add Finish at the end?
26. 03:10:318 (3) - aaand a Finish again (maybe with the Normal sampleset?)
27. 03:11:175 (6) - uhm, the (6) is at (5)'s slider end? ... move it in the timeline so that it's correctly placed.
28. 03:11:689 (1) - end the spinner at 03:13:232. And then you can map the part from 03:13:575 - 03:14:432. Maybe like this? sorry ;w;
    
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29. 03:18:375 (9) - change it like this? sorry
    
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30. 03:24:032 (5) - make a long slider til 03:24:375 here?
31. 03:24:718 (6) - add maybe a note? sorry
32. 03:24:889 (7) - ^ ^
33. 03:29:518 (7) - make a long slider til 03:30:204 here?
34. 03:33:975 (8) - You could remove one repeat and make a long slider from 03:35:004 to 03:36:032.
35. 03:39:289 (1) - try to avoid this overlap.

Insane

1. 00:23:523 (10) - change this into a 1/2 slider?
   
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2. 00:27:123 (1) - add a Finish? And maybe lower the vol. a bit so that it's not that loud.
3. 00:27:123 (1) - 00:29:009 (9) - I honestly think this part would sound more interesting without (2) and (7) ... or maybe that's just me. @_@ You could add little jumps between the parts then, too.
4. 00:35:273 (6) - add a note? Would be a stream then, but I think it just fits more like this? @_@ sorry ;w;
5. 00:36:387 (7) - maybe change it like this? sorry, i keep mine
   
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6. 00:45:644 (5) - make a long slider til 00:45:987 here?
7. 00:57:644 (8,9) - the notes don't seem to be completly stacked with (7)'s slider end, move them a bit without DS and Grid Snap to place them properly under it.
8. 02:26:946 (6,7) - maybe change this circle + slider into one long slider (because of the long-drawn-out vocal)?
9. 03:06:204 (8) - make a long slider til 03:06:889 here?
10. 03:07:575 (4) - add a Finish at the start?
11. 03:08:946 (3) - ^
12. 03:09:375 (6) - change this note into a 1/4 slider with repeat?
    
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13. 03:11:689 (1) - like in Hard, end the spinner at 03:13:232 and then map the part from 03:13:575 - 03:14:432. sorry
14. 03:29:518 (5) - make a long slider til 03:30:204 here?

Hope I could help ... Good Luck! ヽ(*≧ω≦)ﾉ

Shinchaechae wrote:

M4M from your queue ^^

General

1. I suggest looking at Aimod to fix some timing issues
   Notes and sliders are too close together most of the time IMO
   Make sure to keep notes on the grid
   Props to you or not mapping the TV size version

all fix

Easy
00:04:273 (2) - Move down: x336 y:228

00:06:119 (4) - Is off grid.
00:11:009 (2) - Too many straight slider is boring. Try changing this to a slightly curved slider.The spacing is also weird IMO.
00:13:402 (1) - Move accordingly: x172 y:240
00:26:437 (6) - Position like this (just a suggestion)

00:30:209 (4) - Nudge to the right
00:33:987 (3) - Turn into slightly curved slider. Sort of like 00:36:730 (3)

fix something

Normal
00:03:350 (2) - Stack maybe? Feels empty
00:32:958 (2) - Curve plase
01:01:416 (2) - Curve
01:02:787 (4) - Curve..
The spaces you leave between sliders and notes is a little.. Annoying and unnecessary. I suggest removing some of them but it's your map, so..
01:38:285 (1) - This isn't timed correctly. Should be on the white tick. The timing change is unnecessary also
01:57:632 (4) - Is off grid

fix something

Insane and hard diff looks alright to me ^^

Asgard wrote:

[Insane]
00:22:752 (7) - 지워주세요 오버매핑 같습니다 fix
00:24:123 (2) - ^ fix
00:26:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 개인적으로 이런 패턴 싫어합니다 너무 어렵거든요.. 그래도 이 패턴 계속 쓰신다면 뭐 어쩔수없지만.. 만약 이대로 쓰실꺼면 인세인 난이도라 괜찮다고 생각해요.
00:27:466 (3) - 이거 한칸 위로 올려주세요 00:26:095 (1) - 에 스택 시키면 됩니다 fix
00:28:323 (6) - 뉴콤보? 괜찮은 것 같아요.
00:28:666 (7,8,9) - 반대로 된거같아요.. 이렇게 바꿔주세요 http://puu.sh/4SjEt.jpg fix
00:31:089 (4) - 뉴콤보 넣어주세요 갑자기 슬라 속도 바뀌는거 알려주기 위해서 fix
00:32:435 (5) - 뉴콤보 제거 fix
00:41:358 (5) - 이전노트랑 다음노트간의 거리가 너무 이상하네요.. 이전꺼랑 똑같이 다음노트도 1.5되게 맞춰주세요 일부러 그렇게 배치한거라.. 죄송합니다.
00:47:016 (3) - 이런 패턴보다는 http://puu.sh/4SjKU.jpg 이런게 더 좋지 않을까요? fix
00:55:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 스트림 모양이 약간 이상하네요... 슬라이더를 만들어서 스트림으로 변환시켜주세요 더 이쁘게 나오도록 fix
00:56:358 (2,3) - 이전 슬라이더에 완전히 스택시켜주세요 0.04 어긋났어요 fix
00:57:558 (8,9) - 이것도 조금 어긋났습니다 fix
00:59:016 (3,4) - 이 두개의 노트는 이전 두개의 노트에 비해서 거리가 이상하네요.. 이전노트들이랑 거리 맞춰주시는게 좋아요 1.6으로 말이죠 fix
01:07:073 (1) - 이 전까지는 0.6으로 맞췄는데 왜 이 슬라이더는 갑자기 0.3으로 바뀌나요? 똑같이 0.6으로 만들어주세요 fix
01:11:016 (3,4,5) - 슬라이더랑 거리가 너무 멀어요 0.6으로 맞춰주세요 fix
01:13:673 (5,6) - 이것도 좀 어긋났네요 fix
01:25:050 (2) - 0.6으로 맞추시고 이렇게 박자 맞춰주세요 http://puu.sh/4SjV2.jpg 이게 훨씬 재밌어요! fix
01:27:272 (2) - 언랭 요소입니다.. 리턴 애로우가 안보여요 fix
01:38:097 (6) - 4 끝부분에 스택시켜주세요 fix
01:38:285 (7) - 4랑 안겹치게 만들어주세요 이렇게 -> http://puu.sh/4SjYU.jpg 그리고 뉴콤보 fix
01:51:289 (4) - 이다음 노트와의 거리가 이상합니다 fix
01:54:718 (6) - 여기에 놓을빠에는 5에다가 스택시켜주세요 그게 보기엔 더 이뻐요 fix
02:14:604 (10) - 이것도 거리가 이상합니다 점프입니다.
02:15:461 (6) - 뉴콤보 fix
02:22:489 (7) - 뉴콤보 fix
02:23:004 (10,11,12) - 너무 이상해요.. 다른 패턴 사용해주세요 fix
02:46:319 (1) - 갑자기 디스탠스가 이상해지네요 fix
02:50:432 (1,2,3,4) - 패턴이 너무 이상해요... fix
03:02:089 - 개인적으로 이 파트는 0.75 배속으로 더 느리게 매핑하셨으면 좋겠네요.. fix
03:36:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 박자가 안맞아요 맞는 것 같은데 ..;w;

[Hard]
00:07:701 (1) - 피니쉬 제거 너무 이상하게 들려요 fix
00:22:152 (3) - 디스탠스 0.1 줄여주세요 fix
00:27:123 (1,2,3) - 00:26:952 - 로 옮겨주시고 이렇게 박자 바꿔주세요 http://puu.sh/4T2ua.jpg fix
00:28:495 (3) - 슬라이더로 대채해주세요 http://puu.sh/4T2v0.jpg 죄송합니다.
00:31:089 (6) - 뉴콤보 fix
00:34:844 (8,9,10) - 동그랗게 만드는건 어떨까요? http://puu.sh/4T2wN.jpg fix
00:51:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - 박자 안맞습니다.. http://puu.sh/4T2zv.jpg 이런식으로 만들어주세요 죄송합니다.
00:55:930 (1,2) - 보기 좀 힘들어요... 펼쳐 주세요 fix
00:59:530 (4) - 가능하면 다른 슬라이더랑 안겹쳤으면 좋겠네요 fix
01:01:073 (1,2,3) - 좀더 위로 올려서 놔주세요 이런식으로 http://puu.sh/4T2Bg.jpg fix
01:26:418 (2) - 스택 안시킨게 보기 더 좋네요 fix
01:38:285 (6) - 뉴콤보 fix
01:59:346 (2) - 이것도 스택 안시킨게 보기 더 좋네요 fix
02:12:032 (6,7) - 조금 더 아래로 내려주세요 fix
02:48:289 - 노트 추가 하드에선 연타를 안쓰려고 해서요.. 죄송합니다.
03:05:005 (2) - 슬라이더 휘어주세요 이런식으로 http://puu.sh/4T2H2.jpg fix
03:17:861 (7) - 스택 안되있네요... fix
03:25:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - 패턴이 너무 어렵습니다 fix
03:46:146 (1,2,3,4) - 가능하다면 노트랑 슬라이더 안겹치게 됬으면 좋겠네요 fix

[Normal]
00:07:503 (1) - 피니쉬 없애주세요 fix
01:28:810 (1,2,3,4) - 간격 일정하게 해주세요 fix
03:02:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - 패턴이 너무 안좋네요... 최대한 노말에 맞도록 만들어 본거라 ;; 딱히 다른 패턴이 안떠오르네요 ;w;
노멀도 전제적으로 잡을건 많이 보이는데 다 말하면 너무 많을거같아서.. 중요한것들만 몇개 집었습니다...
너무 힘들어서 이지는 모딩 못하겠어요 ㅠㅠ 죄송합니다

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello ^^ Random mod!

[Easy]
Try increasing the DS to 1.1 instead. A little space between each objects would look nice.
00:02:427 (1) - Try adding a finish on the head for a better sound intro into the music.
00:10:668 (1) - Add finish.
00:24:380 (3) - Add whistle on the tail. From here to 00:30:209 create a small whistle pattern here with this:

00:31:066 (1) - Add clap or finish on the tail.
00:40:844 (1) - Change clap on the head to a whistle.
00:55:930 (1) - I prefer using the default soft-finish on the head of this slider to match the cymbal crash heard in the music.
01:12:044 (1) - move to 01:12:387
01:15:130 (3) - NC
01:17:873 (1) - Add finish on the head.
02:04:489 (1) - Change hitsound to finish.
02:11:346 (1) - ?
Makes a better flow
03:00:718 (3) - Change clap on the head to a finish.
03:30:546 (1) - Move to 03:30:889,and remove 03:31:575 (2) -
03:36:375 (1) - Try adding a finish to the head.
03:41:175 (4) - Add a finish to the tail.
03:43:232 (3) - Add a finish to the head.
03:47:004 (4) - Add a finish to the tail.

[Normal]
00:12:718 (5) - Remove clap.
00:14:769 (2) - ^ On the tail.
00:38:101 (2) - Should be NC instead of 00:37:416 (1) -
00:46:330 (1) - add finish on the head?
02:11:004 (6) - NC
02:21:975 (5) - ^
02:30:546 (1) - Add finish to the head?
02:47:004 (1) - ^
02:50:089 (5) - NC
03:17:175 (5) - ^
03:27:461 (6) - ^

[Hard]
00:10:681- 00:18:529 Claps sounds too random, you need to create a rhythm with them :S Here's a common rhythm you can use for your claps:

00:24:037 - 00:26:780 Try using this rhythm?

00:30:380 (3,4) - Replace these objects with one long slider.
00:35:273 - Consider adding a note here.
00:36:730 (7) - Should've started on 00:36:558 instead, to match the long hold on the 'chi' the vocals sing.
00:41:358 (3) - Shrink slider so it ends at 00:42:044 instead.
00:46:330 (1) - Change clap to finish.
00:50:958 (3,4) - Replace with 1 long slider, to match the vocals hold on the 'no'
01:23:342 - 01:31:203 those claps...really needs to be consistent.Same suggestion from 00:10:681- 00:18:529
01:50:775 (2) - Add finish.
02:06:546 (1,2,3,4) - Try replacing it with these objects on 02:06:804:

02:07:575 (1) - Remove, as vocals don't start till 02:07:746
02:31:232 (3,5) - Move more apart please.
02:53:860 (5,8) - Bad overlap, consider remapping this part.
03:41:861 (5) - Why is it beside 03:41:175 (3) - ? Move it here, please below 4th slider.


Really should re-check the rhythm

[Insane]

Sorry can't mod it

Hope this helps~! ^^