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TKDz2b - Never Say Never (TV Size)

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Citrus
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年5月22日,星期四 at 9:04:50

Artist: TKDz2b
Title: Never Say Never (TV Size)
Source: ダンガンロンパ 希望の学園と絶望の高校生
Tags: Danganronpa: Kibou no Gakuen to Zetsubou no Koukousei The Animation opening PSP game PlayStation Portable Megurine Luka
BPM: 128
Filesize: 15150kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.09 stars, 84 notes)
  2. Insane (4.99 stars, 303 notes)
  3. Luka's Hard (4.86 stars, 234 notes)
  4. Normal (3.53 stars, 102 notes)
Download: TKDz2b - Never Say Never (TV Size)
Download: TKDz2b - Never Say Never (TV Size) (no video)
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Luka's Hard—Megurine Luka
LKs
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offest 5358(+10)
Topic Starter
Citrus

LKs wrote:

timing check:

offest 5358(+10)
Thank you~
Megurine Luka
马克
-Srui-
Hi ~

[Easy]
  • 01:03:483 (1) - ctrl + J


    [Normal]
    • 00:25:045 (2) - add clap on start
      00:38:639 (5) - a little curve
      01:26:920 (2) - ctrl + H and fix distance


      [Luka's Hard]
      • 01:14:733 (6) - NC


        [Insane]
        • Perfect

          Wow ~ It's nice song !
Topic Starter
Citrus

-Srui- wrote:

Hi ~
[Easy]
01:03:483 (1) - ctrl + J

[Normal]
00:25:045 (2) - add clap on start Fixed
00:38:639 (5) - a little curve Good idea
01:26:920 (2) - ctrl + H and fix distance

[Luka's Hard]
01:14:733 (6) - NC Fixed

[Insane]
Perfect


Wow ~ It's nice song !
Thank you very much~
Megurine Luka
http://puu.sh/4gtlX.flv

video here

0.0 我是来骗kd的啦啦啦
Topic Starter
Citrus

Megurine Luka wrote:

http://puu.sh/4gtlX.flv

video here

0.0 我是来骗kd的啦啦啦
该如何感谢大哥?
Flask
我來騙kd了

[General]
  1. Source寫Danganronpa: Kibou no Gakuen to Zetsubou no Koukousei The Animation
  2. 都不tag腳色名 傷心 但至少要加PSP game之類的
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:186 (7,8) - 節奏突然慢下來我覺得可以拉開點 (7,8,9)擺個等距也可行
  2. 00:24:108 (1) - 不跟vocal下些串嗎
  3. 00:34:889 (1,1) - 別overlap
  4. 00:38:170 (4) - 我覺得這個可以改成1/4或者1/2 這樣00:38:404 - 就不會太空了
  5. 01:02:076 (2) - 加個折返? 主要是白線太空不太好打._.
[打嗝]
  1. 00:08:639 (5,6,1) - nazi下 spacing不太對啊 (等距等距
  2. 00:48:483 (2,3,4,5) - 不下點串嗎 用折返slider也行
[N]
  1. 01:10:046 (2,3,4) - 這不是明顯都該往前1/2嗎
[E]
  1. 直覺HPOD-1
BG沒有苗木我好傷心 我也好想做這首歌啊
Topic Starter
Citrus

Flask wrote:

我來騙kd了

[General]
  1. Source寫Danganronpa: Kibou no Gakuen to Zetsubou no Koukousei The Animation已修改
  2. 都不tag腳色名 傷心 但至少要加PSP game之類的已修改
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:186 (7,8) - 節奏突然慢下來我覺得可以拉開點 (7,8,9)擺個等距也可行
  2. 00:24:108 (1) - 不跟vocal下些串嗎4连+2连已经丧心病狂了,这里决定舒缓一下
  3. 00:34:889 (1,1) - 別overlapoverlap是为了提醒player这里是减速+1/4,暂时先不改了
  4. 00:38:170 (4) - 我覺得這個可以改成1/4或者1/2 這樣00:38:404 - 就不會太空了还没先到更好的节奏,先不改
  5. 01:02:076 (2) - 加個折返? 主要是白線太空不太好打._.
[打嗝]
  1. 00:08:639 (5,6,1) - nazi下 spacing不太對啊 (等距等距已修改
  2. 00:48:483 (2,3,4,5) - 不下點串嗎 用折返slider也行
[N]
  1. 01:10:046 (2,3,4) - 這不是明顯都該往前1/2嗎 已修改
[E]
  1. 直覺HPOD-1已修改
BG沒有苗木我好傷心 我也好想做這首歌啊
非常感谢~
kamisamaaa
从我的Q过来的~我是新手 希望能帮到你~
[总体]
总体来说 这首歌曲非常柔和 并且BPM只有128 但你的insane里面却用了很多连打 我觉得非常不合适 毕竟BPM很低 128速度的连打的话 对单点有点快 对双指又太慢了 所以会玩的很不舒服 建议换换别的节奏方法额
00:50:240 这个kiai结束应该在这里 00:48:483
01:04:889 这个在 01:03:483
一般歌曲kiai无论开始还是结束都应该在长白线 也就是重音才对
[easy]
00:12:858 (1) - 这种滑条难道不应该网友边防note构成blanket么 单独这么折叠感觉没意义的扭曲额0.0
01:09:108 (1) - 这个样子的滑条也有点多 可以换换样子0.0
01:22:233 (3) - 为何不与2 4前后blanket
[normal]
00:26:920 (2) - 这个结尾很奇怪 改到白线?
01:07:701 (6,7) - 这个模式的滑条遮挡用得太多了啊 无论是insane还是normal
01:12:858 (1) - 这种折的太厉害了 新手可能会读不懂图
[hard]
做得很好没啥问题
01:17:076 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 这个建议用到insane 对hard来说有点难
[insane]
节奏
01:16:139 (6) - 去掉这个clap
00:40:045 (6,7) - 这里感觉应该改成从6开始的一个滑条 比较舒服
01:16:608 从这里开始的那些啊啊声 五个一组 并且声调慢慢变高 是这首歌最有意思的地方 这里就别管别的节奏了 你现在这样子 那个滑条以及后面的节奏下的 导致不是很突出 我觉得最好设计一个特别的梗把他们突出一下 而且这里可以跳一点 比如声调越高跳得越远 要不然一张图都基本差不多的距离感显得很平淡 (比如像hard那样 可以把间距做成一组组扩大的 就很有趣了)
01:20:358 从这里往后的打碟声 可不可以全部变成高速滑条 这后面只用滑条表现打碟声 是不是也比较适合你这歌的特殊梗
00:27:623 (1,2,3) - 跟鼓点这里应该是1/8音
00:48:483 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这里的男声很有意思啊 为什么不做出来
摆放
1.感觉比较单调额 不过歌曲时间短应该还好
2.做blanket的时候去掉GS做得比较好
3.你可以ctrl+a 全选一下看看 你的note都集中在中间 四个角很少 左下角一个都没有 左边边上也基本没有 版面利用不是很好额
00:06:295 (4) - blanket?
00:07:701 (3) - 没包好
00:20:358 (1,2,3,4) - 这里四个音各不相同 你这么摆感觉是完全相同的四个音 完全没体现出变化额
00:35:358 (1,2) - 这两个之间那个红线和蓝线和2的声音一样啊 为什么选择了一个蓝线不用别的





很好的图~希望mod能帮到你
Topic Starter
Citrus

kamisamaaa wrote:

从我的Q过来的~我是新手 希望能帮到你~
[总体]
总体来说 这首歌曲非常柔和 并且BPM只有128 但你的insane里面却用了很多连打 我觉得非常不合适 毕竟BPM很低 128速度的连打的话 对单点有点快 对双指又太慢了 所以会玩的很不舒服 建议换换别的节奏方法额 TAT
00:50:240 这个kiai结束应该在这里 00:48:483
01:04:889 这个在 01:03:483
一般歌曲kiai无论开始还是结束都应该在长白线 也就是重音才对 这里是为了要kiai的喷泉闪光效果,先保留如果真的有问题我会改
[easy]
00:12:858 (1) - 这种滑条难道不应该网友边防note构成blanket么 单独这么折叠感觉没意义的扭曲额0.0 其实我是想象力匮乏了才用这种扭来扭去的滑条来掩饰的
01:09:108 (1) - 这个样子的滑条也有点多 可以换换样子0.0
01:22:233 (3) - 为何不与2 4前后blanket
[normal]
00:26:920 (2) - 这个结尾很奇怪 改到白线?
01:07:701 (6,7) - 这个模式的滑条遮挡用得太多了啊 无论是insane还是normal
01:12:858 (1) - 这种折的太厉害了 新手可能会读不懂图
[hard]
做得很好没啥问题
01:17:076 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 这个建议用到insane 对hard来说有点难
[insane]
节奏
01:16:139 (6) - 去掉这个clap
00:40:045 (6,7) - 这里感觉应该改成从6开始的一个滑条 比较舒服
01:16:608 从这里开始的那些啊啊声 五个一组 并且声调慢慢变高 是这首歌最有意思的地方 这里就别管别的节奏了 你现在这样子 那个滑条以及后面的节奏下的 导致不是很突出 我觉得最好设计一个特别的梗把他们突出一下 而且这里可以跳一点 比如声调越高跳得越远 要不然一张图都基本差不多的距离感显得很平淡 (比如像hard那样 可以把间距做成一组组扩大的 就很有趣了)如果能想到更好的梗,我会改
01:20:358 从这里往后的打碟声 可不可以全部变成高速滑条 这后面只用滑条表现打碟声 是不是也比较适合你这歌的特殊梗
00:27:623 (1,2,3) - 跟鼓点这里应该是1/8音 改了
00:48:483 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这里的男声很有意思啊 为什么不做出来
摆放
1.感觉比较单调额 不过歌曲时间短应该还好
2.做blanket的时候去掉GS做得比较好
3.你可以ctrl+a 全选一下看看 你的note都集中在中间 四个角很少 左下角一个都没有 左边边上也基本没有 版面利用不是很好额
00:06:295 (4) - blanket?虽然没理解是什么意思但是还是调整了一下
00:07:701 (3) - 没包好
00:20:358 (1,2,3,4) - 这里四个音各不相同 你这么摆感觉是完全相同的四个音 完全没体现出变化额
00:35:358 (1,2) - 这两个之间那个红线和蓝线和2的声音一样啊 为什么选择了一个蓝线不用别的





很好的图~希望mod能帮到你
真的真的非常感谢~
kamisamaaa
00:50:240 这个kiai结束应该在这里 00:48:483
01:04:889 这个在 01:03:483
一般歌曲kiai无论开始还是结束都应该在长白线 也就是重音才对 这里是为了要kiai的喷泉闪光效果,先保留如果真的有问题我会改
喷泉效果是在kiai的开头 你开头没问题 是结尾位置不对 改这个不影响喷泉闪光的
00:06:295 (4) - blanket?虽然没理解是什么意思但是还是调整了一下
意思就是吧滑条做成包住前一个note的样子


还有什么问题随时PM我就好 或者有图需要mod都PM我
Ethercastle
From my queue~
嘛 感觉似乎没啥好Mod的了,射颗星然后尽量乱提点建议吧 全部无视就好

[General]
N/A

[Insane]
很喜欢这个Diff,打起来相当爽啊 比Rank的那版爽多了.

00:08:756 - 感觉略有点空 加个圈?
00:15:201 (2,3) - 这里前后都跟的Vocal所以感觉有点怪 不过似乎这里vocal完全跟不了也想不到有啥方法- -
00:20:358 (1,2,3,4) - 这里跟Vocal可能好一点 跟乐器的话感觉排列直了点,稍微加点角度会好一些
00:29:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里四个圈跟vocal也略有点不合。改成两个短滑条可能会好些 (三个滑条对应vocal的三个词)
00:30:553 (1) - 这里考虑用1/2的滑条? vocal里的 "the"可以跟一下.
00:31:139 (3) - 考虑滑条减下速?
00:39:928 (5,6,7) - 这里的Spacing打起来有点不舒服,建议减小 或者00:39:928 (5,6) 换滑条
00:44:147 (5,1) - ^ 相当不舒服,强烈建议减小
00:51:647 (3,4) - 这两个稍微逆时针转一下可能好看一些
01:00:670 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 整一个往外多扭一些(尤其最后一个slider)?
01:14:264 (6) - spacing同略大

[Luka's Hard]
没啥问题 nazi一下好了- -..

00:13:561 (4,5,6) - Spacing?
00:57:858 (1) - 这个slider改成3/4 跟其他的统一一下?
00:21:295 (6) - 这个摆得似乎稍微近了一点. (360,57)?
01:20:358 (1,2,3) - spacing略不对?

[Normal]
00:19:186 (2) - clap?
00:21:764 - 这里会不会空了点?
00:30:201 (4) - 这个滑条形状是刻意为之么?
00:40:045 (3) - clap?
00:53:639 (6,7,1) - 7似乎应该往外一点?
00:59:498 (3) - clap?
01:16:608 (1,2,3,4) - 这段whistle是忘了加还是刻意的?

[easy]
我太蠢了一开始把easy当成normal在mod= =中途换成normal了还没发现....

00:24:108 (1) - 这个摆对称一点?
00:54:108 (1) - ctrl + g?
00:59:733 (3) - 感觉没包好
01:11:920 (4,5,1) - 三角形正一点 滑条平一点可能会更好看
01:24:108 (1,2) - 这个包得不够好看呃 把1的滑条头往下挪点?


差不多就这样 希望有点帮助>_<
Topic Starter
Citrus

kamisamaaa wrote:

00:50:240 这个kiai结束应该在这里 00:48:483
01:04:889 这个在 01:03:483
一般歌曲kiai无论开始还是结束都应该在长白线 也就是重音才对 这里是为了要kiai的喷泉闪光效果,先保留如果真的有问题我会改
喷泉效果是在kiai的开头 你开头没问题 是结尾位置不对 改这个不影响喷泉闪光的 懂了 已修改
00:06:295 (4) - blanket?虽然没理解是什么意思但是还是调整了一下
意思就是吧滑条做成包住前一个note的样子 好像已经包好了


还有什么问题随时PM我就好 或者有图需要mod都PM我
Topic Starter
Citrus

Ethercastle wrote:

From my queue~
嘛 感觉似乎没啥好Mod的了,射颗星然后尽量乱提点建议吧 全部无视就好

[General]
N/A

[Insane]
很喜欢这个Diff,打起来相当爽啊 比Rank的那版爽多了.
都试了一下,有的感觉并不是很合适 :(
00:08:756 - 感觉略有点空 加个圈?这里先暂时保留,如果还有人提出来的话我会加上
00:15:201 (2,3) - 这里前后都跟的Vocal所以感觉有点怪 不过似乎这里vocal完全跟不了也想不到有啥方法- -
00:20:358 (1,2,3,4) - 这里跟Vocal可能好一点 跟乐器的话感觉排列直了点,稍微加点角度会好一些
00:29:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里四个圈跟vocal也略有点不合。改成两个短滑条可能会好些 (三个滑条对应vocal的三个词)
00:30:553 (1) - 这里考虑用1/2的滑条? vocal里的 "the"可以跟一下.
00:31:139 (3) - 考虑滑条减下速?
00:39:928 (5,6,7) - 这里的Spacing打起来有点不舒服,建议减小 或者00:39:928 (5,6) 换滑条
00:44:147 (5,1) - ^ 相当不舒服,强烈建议减小
00:51:647 (3,4) - 这两个稍微逆时针转一下可能好看一些
01:00:670 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 整一个往外多扭一些(尤其最后一个slider)?最后一个slider多扭了一点
01:14:264 (6) - spacing同略大

[Luka's Hard]
没啥问题 nazi一下好了- -..

00:13:561 (4,5,6) - Spacing? 改了
00:57:858 (1) - 这个slider改成3/4 跟其他的统一一下?
00:21:295 (6) - 这个摆得似乎稍微近了一点. (360,57)? 改了
01:20:358 (1,2,3) - spacing略不对?改了

[Normal]
00:19:186 (2) - clap?
00:21:764 - 这里会不会空了点?
00:30:201 (4) - 这个滑条形状是刻意为之么?就是这个形状
00:40:045 (3) - clap?
00:53:639 (6,7,1) - 7似乎应该往外一点?好主意
00:59:498 (3) - clap?
01:16:608 (1,2,3,4) - 这段whistle是忘了加还是刻意的?刻意的

[easy]
我太蠢了一开始把easy当成normal在mod= =中途换成normal了还没发现....

00:24:108 (1) - 这个摆对称一点?原本就不是打算对称的
00:54:108 (1) - ctrl + g? 好主意
00:59:733 (3) - 感觉没包好 这里就是这样的
01:11:920 (4,5,1) - 三角形正一点 滑条平一点可能会更好看 把三角形弄正了一点
01:24:108 (1,2) - 这个包得不够好看呃 把1的滑条头往下挪点?这里没打算包


差不多就这样 希望有点帮助>_<
非常感谢~
Kayano
Mod request from Popner's Modding Team

  1. Red - Unrankable
  2. Purple - Highly recommended
  3. Black - You'd better fixed
  4. Gray - Just suggestion
  • General
  1. 所有难度:00:50:240 - 这条绿线多余了 plz remove

    Insane
  2. 我一开始先看的这个diff 哇这个clap加的真是非常炫酷 但是加的有点略随机了 这里有一些建议补上的地方 听着会更爽【我觉得比较好的基础下法是长白线(第1白线)—第2白线后的红线—第3白线后的白线 然后在第2个加clap的地方的前/后1/4处的蓝线上视情况加clap来制造变化 下面几个clap下法就是根据这个来mod的】
  3. 00:06:529 - 这个地方可以加clap
  4. 00:07:936 - 这里就更像是漏clap了
  5. 00:08:404 (5) - clap
  6. 00:10:279 - ^
  7. 00:12:154 - ^
  8. 00:15:904 (6) - ^
  9. 00:17:311 - ^
  10. 00:17:662 (4,5) - ^ (第一个note可选)
  11. 00:21:529 - 00:21:998 - 看得出来你前面是想跟电子琴 但是中间感觉空了点 这两个地方也有琴音 可以加两个note 这样连贯性会好一点
  12. 00:25:279 - clap?
  13. 00:29:029 - ^?
  14. 00:36:764 - clap move to 00:36:529 (3) -
  15. 00:37:233 (1) - 这里的flow感觉略不好 换个位置和样子?
  16. 00:40:279 - clap
  17. 00:44:967 - remove clap
  18. 00:48:365 (3) - clap move to 00:48:131 (1) -
  19. 00:49:654 - 这里感觉最好加一个note
  20. 00:51:412 (2) - clap
  21. 00:53:404 (3) - ^
  22. 01:02:311 - ^
  23. 01:08:404 (6,7) - ^
  24. 01:16:608 ~ 01:19:889 - 这一段不妨试试所有note都clap 听起来真是炒鸡爽
  25. 01:27:154 - 这里有音 可以加note
    其他还不错 打着还蛮爽的

    Luka's Hard
  26. 这个难度由于下的节奏的问题没法像Insane一样下clap真是悲哀 但是还是有几个地方加上clap感觉会更好(这里我也只是写了几个违和感比较强的地方 )
  27. 00:10:279 - clap
  28. 00:17:311 (2) - ^
  29. 00:17:779 - ^
  30. 01:04:772 - 加个note?
  31. 01:16:608 ~ 01:19:889 - 同Insane
Easy Normal也没有什么问题 可能还是需要按Insane的mod给点clap
好图给星
听了这首歌我决定去补这部番了
Good Luck on getting it ranked! :)
Topic Starter
Citrus

OniJAM wrote:

Mod request from Popner's Modding Team

  1. Red - Unrankable
  2. Purple - Highly recommended
  3. Black - You'd better fixed
  4. Gray - Just suggestion
  • General
  1. 所有难度:00:50:240 - 这条绿线多余了 plz remove 改了

    Insane
  2. 我一开始先看的这个diff 哇这个clap加的真是非常炫酷 但是加的有点略随机了 这里有一些建议补上的地方 听着会更爽【我觉得比较好的基础下法是长白线(第1白线)—第2白线后的红线—第3白线后的白线 然后在第2个加clap的地方的前/后1/4处的蓝线上视情况加clap来制造变化 下面几个clap下法就是根据这个来mod的】
  3. 00:06:529 - 这个地方可以加clap 这里加了听着有点别扭
  4. 00:07:936 - 这里就更像是漏clap了 加上了
  5. 00:08:404 (5) - clap
  6. 00:10:279 - ^
  7. 00:12:154 - ^
  8. 00:15:904 (6) - ^ 没加
  9. 00:17:311 - ^
  10. 00:17:662 (4,5) - ^ (第一个note可选) 第二个加了
  11. 00:21:529 - 00:21:998 - 看得出来你前面是想跟电子琴 但是中间感觉空了点 这两个地方也有琴音 可以加两个note 这样连贯性会好一点 这里跟的是比较明显的那几个音
  12. 00:25:279 - clap? 没加
  13. 00:29:029 - ^?
  14. 00:36:764 - clap move to 00:36:529 (3) - 改了之后听着不太舒服啊
  15. 00:37:233 (1) - 这里的flow感觉略不好 换个位置和样子? 这里就是要恶心人的
  16. 00:40:279 - clap
  17. 00:44:967 - remove clap 没删
  18. 00:48:365 (3) - clap move to 00:48:131 (1) - 理由同上
  19. 00:49:654 - 这里感觉最好加一个note 这里跟的是比较明显的音
  20. 00:51:412 (2) - clap
  21. 00:53:404 (3) - ^
  22. 01:02:311 - ^
  23. 01:08:404 (6,7) - ^
  24. 01:16:608 ~ 01:19:889 - 这一段不妨试试所有note都clap 听起来真是炒鸡爽 这里感觉还是保持原样比较好
  25. 01:27:154 - 这里有音 可以加note 理由同之前
    其他还不错 打着还蛮爽的

    Luka's Hard
  26. 这个难度由于下的节奏的问题没法像Insane一样下clap真是悲哀 但是还是有几个地方加上clap感觉会更好(这里我也只是写了几个违和感比较强的地方 )
  27. 00:10:279 - clap
  28. 00:17:311 (2) - ^
  29. 00:17:779 - ^
  30. 01:04:772 - 加个note?没加
  31. 01:16:608 ~ 01:19:889 - 同Insane
Easy Normal也没有什么问题 可能还是需要按Insane的mod给点clap 按照Insane加上了
好图给星
听了这首歌我决定去补这部番了
Good Luck on getting it ranked! :)
非常感谢~
Gamu


Hi~

Request from Queue~

  • [General]
  1. Artist: TKDz2b
    Artist name is wrong, so please fix it!
  2. Preview time is unsnapped. snap to 34889
  3. Changed to 0 from 10. I think it should be 0 in the Event of osu.file.
    Video,0,"DanganRonpa.flv"

  • [Easy]
  1. Stack Leniency: Please set the default(0.7). It doesn't work this diff, and doesn't make sense. 0.7 is default in osu.file.
  2. 00:22:233 (2,3) - Remove a whistle of the start point.
  3. 00:19:889 (T) - It may be necessary to reduce the volume. 100% volume is so noisy. About 80% would be better~
  4. 00:31:608 (1,1) - Interval is too short (time), so move to 00:34:420 (the end of the spinner).
  5. 00:41:451 (2) - Add a whistle on the start point.
  6. 00:42:858 (1) - ^ end point.
  7. 00:47:545 (2) - ^
  8. 00:49:889 (2) - Add a whistle (S:C2).
  9. 00:55:983 (3) - Add a whistle on the middle point.
  10. 00:57:858 (1) - ^ end point.
  11. 00:59:733 (3) - ^
  12. 01:00:670 (4) - Move to x:216 y:92.
  13. 01:07:233 (3) - Add a whistle on the end point.
  14. 01:10:983 (3) - ^
  15. 01:14:733 (3) - ^
  16. 01:26:451 (2) - Remove a whistle.

  • [Normal]
  1. Stack Leniency: Same as Easy diff.
  2. 00:19:889 (T) - Same as Easy diff
  3. 00:22:233 (2) - Add a new combo.
  4. 00:29:733 (3) - ^
  5. 00:36:061 (2,3) - It is hard to grasp the rhythm,so suggestion of rhythm. This might be a good~
  6. 00:38:639 (5,1) - Hmm...I think it is not so good. Remove the circle, and extend to 1/1 slider (00:38:639~00:39:108).
  7. 00:49:889 (3) - Add a whistle on the start point (S:C2). Then, it might be nice if you also add to the end point.
  8. 00:51:061 (2) - Remove a slider, and add a circle on the 00:51:295. It will fit the song.
  9. 00:53:873 (7) - Remove a circle. It is not necessary in Normal diff, and make a easy map for Beginner.
  10. 00:59:498 (3) - ^
  11. 01:01:373 (6) - ^
  12. 01:06:061 (2) - ^
  13. 01:06:764 (4,5) - Same as 00:38:639.
  14. 01:09:811 (2,3) - Replace with a slider instead of a circle.
  15. 01:12:623 (6) - Same as 00:53:873.

  • [Luka's Hard]
  1. Stack Leniency: Unless you have a specific reason, you should set to the default. It is not recommended that you set to other than default IMO. Honestly, i think it is not much different. Please try in the default setting~
  2. 00:05:592 (2) - Move to x:388 y:204. Unify the spacing (1, 2, 3).
  3. 00:05:826 (3,4,5,6) - i think Its rhythm is bad. A slider is shrink in 00:06:061 and add a circle in the 00:06:295. Then, 00:06:647 (6,7) - Replace with a slider instead of a circle.
  4. 00:19:889 (T) - Same as Easy diff.
  5. 00:31:373 (6) - Add a whistle on the end point (S:C2).
  6. 00:33:483 (2) - ^ start point.
  7. 00:34:420 (4) - ^ ?
  8. 00:40:983 (5) - Add a new combo.
  9. 00:52:233 (5) - ^
  10. 00:52:936 (6,8) - I think this stack is not so good in Hard diff.
  11. 00:55:748 (4,1) - Replace the new combo.
  12. 01:04:537 (5) - Add a whistle (S:C2).
  13. 01:10:748 (6,1) - Same as 00:55:748.
  14. 01:17:076 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - It is good o3o But...If possible, please replace the slider part of the circle. I think that it is difficult for Hard player.
  15. 01:27:389 (7) - Rreduce the volume of the end point. about 40%?.

  • [Insane]
  1. Same as Hard diff.
  2. 00:19:889 (T) - Same as Easy diff
  3. 00:20:826 (3) - Remove a whistle.
  4. 00:23:287 (3) - ^
  5. 00:23:522 (5) - ^
  6. 00:23:170 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think rhythm is so strange, so remove a circle in the 00:23:756 and 00:23:873. Then, add a slider in the 1/2 slider (00:23:639~00:23:873) and whistle on the start point.
  7. 00:30:553 (1) - Add a whistle on the end point (S:C2).
  8. 00:30:904 (2) - ^
  9. 00:31:608 (1) - Shrink in the 00:34:420, and add whistle?
  10. 00:46:608 (1) - Add a clap on the start and add a whistle on the end point.
  11. 00:48:014 (x) - Add a whistle and circle.
  12. 00:49:537 (2) - Add a whistle.
  13. 00:49:889 (4) - ^
  14. 00:50:123 (1) - ^ on the start point, and remove a new combo.
  15. 00:50:358 (2) - Add a new combo.
  16. 01:03:483 (2) - Add a whistle on the end point.
  17. 01:04:537 (5) - ^ start point.
  18. 01:05:358 (2) - Add a new combo.

ok! I think need more Mod in hard diff and Insane diff.
But, please do not give up :)

good luck :3
Topic Starter
Citrus

-Gamu- wrote:



Hi~

Request from Queue~

  • [General]
    All fixed
  1. Artist: TKDz2b
    Artist name is wrong, so please fix it!
  2. Preview time is unsnapped. snap to 34889
  3. Changed to 0 from 10. I think it should be 0 in the Event of osu.file.
    Video,0,"DanganRonpa.flv"

  • [Easy]
    All fixed
  1. Stack Leniency: Please set the default(0.7). It doesn't work this diff, and doesn't make sense. 0.7 is default in osu.file.
  2. 00:22:233 (2,3) - Remove a whistle of the start point.
  3. 00:19:889 (T) - It may be necessary to reduce the volume. 100% volume is so noisy. About 80% would be better~
  4. 00:31:608 (1,1) - Interval is too short (time), so move to 00:34:420 (the end of the spinner).
  5. 00:41:451 (2) - Add a whistle on the start point.
  6. 00:42:858 (1) - ^ end point.
  7. 00:47:545 (2) - ^
  8. 00:49:889 (2) - Add a whistle (S:C2).
  9. 00:55:983 (3) - Add a whistle on the middle point.
  10. 00:57:858 (1) - ^ end point.
  11. 00:59:733 (3) - ^
  12. 01:00:670 (4) - Move to x:216 y:92.
  13. 01:07:233 (3) - Add a whistle on the end point.
  14. 01:10:983 (3) - ^
  15. 01:14:733 (3) - ^
  16. 01:26:451 (2) - Remove a whistle.

  • [Normal]
    All fixed
  1. Stack Leniency: Same as Easy diff.
  2. 00:19:889 (T) - Same as Easy diff
  3. 00:22:233 (2) - Add a new combo.
  4. 00:29:733 (3) - ^
  5. 00:36:061 (2,3) - It is hard to grasp the rhythm,so suggestion of rhythm. This might be a good~
  6. 00:38:639 (5,1) - Hmm...I think it is not so good. Remove the circle, and extend to 1/1 slider (00:38:639~00:39:108).
  7. 00:49:889 (3) - Add a whistle on the start point (S:C2). Then, it might be nice if you also add to the end point.
  8. 00:51:061 (2) - Remove a slider, and add a circle on the 00:51:295. It will fit the song.
  9. 00:53:873 (7) - Remove a circle. It is not necessary in Normal diff, and make a easy map for Beginner.
  10. 00:59:498 (3) - ^
  11. 01:01:373 (6) - ^
  12. 01:06:061 (2) - ^
  13. 01:06:764 (4,5) - Same as 00:38:639.
  14. 01:09:811 (2,3) - Replace with a slider instead of a circle.
  15. 01:12:623 (6) - Same as 00:53:873.

  • [Luka's Hard]
    Fixed some
  1. Stack Leniency: Unless you have a specific reason, you should set to the default. It is not recommended that you set to other than default IMO. Honestly, i think it is not much different. Please try in the default setting~
  2. 00:05:592 (2) - Move to x:388 y:204. Unify the spacing (1, 2, 3).
  3. 00:05:826 (3,4,5,6) - i think Its rhythm is bad. A slider is shrink in 00:06:061 and add a circle in the 00:06:295. Then, 00:06:647 (6,7) - Replace with a slider instead of a circle.
  4. 00:19:889 (T) - Same as Easy diff.
  5. 00:31:373 (6) - Add a whistle on the end point (S:C2).
  6. 00:33:483 (2) - ^ start point.
  7. 00:34:420 (4) - ^ ?
  8. 00:40:983 (5) - Add a new combo.
  9. 00:52:233 (5) - ^
  10. 00:52:936 (6,8) - I think this stack is not so good in Hard diff.I want to keep this :(
  11. 00:55:748 (4,1) - Replace the new combo.
  12. 01:04:537 (5) - Add a whistle (S:C2).
  13. 01:10:748 (6,1) - Same as 00:55:748.
  14. 01:17:076 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - It is good o3o But...If possible, please replace the slider part of the circle. I think that it is difficult for Hard player. I want to keep this :(
  15. 01:27:389 (7) - Rreduce the volume of the end point. about 40%?.

  • [Insane]
    Fixed some
  1. Same as Hard diff.
  2. 00:19:889 (T) - Same as Easy diff
  3. 00:20:826 (3) - Remove a whistle.
  4. 00:23:287 (3) - ^
  5. 00:23:522 (5) - ^
  6. 00:23:170 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think rhythm is so strange, so remove a circle in the 00:23:756 and 00:23:873. Then, add a slider in the 1/2 slider (00:23:639~00:23:873) and whistle on the start point. I want to keep this :(
  7. 00:30:553 (1) - Add a whistle on the end point (S:C2).
  8. 00:30:904 (2) - ^
  9. 00:31:608 (1) - Shrink in the 00:34:420, and add whistle?I don't like this
  10. 00:46:608 (1) - Add a clap on the start and add a whistle on the end point.No change
  11. 00:48:014 (x) - Add a whistle and circle.No change
  12. 00:49:537 (2) - Add a whistle.
  13. 00:49:889 (4) - ^
  14. 00:50:123 (1) - ^ on the start point, and remove a new combo.
  15. 00:50:358 (2) - Add a new combo.
  16. 01:03:483 (2) - Add a whistle on the end point.No need to add a whistle here
  17. 01:04:537 (5) - ^ start point.
  18. 01:05:358 (2) - Add a new combo.

ok! I think need more Mod in hard diff and Insane diff.
But, please do not give up :)

good luck :3
Thank you very much~Very useful~
Fycho
~popner's modding team~


[Mod Info]
  1. Black: Suggestions
  2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
  3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
Fine.

[Insane]
  1. 00:05:358 -00:20:358 –这段soft的whistle只加在2,4白线上略少,建议可以多加些,和你最后那部分一样。例如00:06:178 -00:06:529 -00:09:928 -00:19:186 (7,8) –这两滑条尾等等。只是建议。
  2. 00:30:904 (2) –滑条尾同样可加whistle跟着钢琴。总感觉就这一句00:23:170 (2,3,4,5,6,7) –突出的加这么多有些别扭。
  3. 00:21:295 –这里的break,使我打的时候下意识以为这00:26:686 (5,6,7) –也是空白段。很违和,可能是00:22:233 (1) –跟钢琴,而其他地方都跟的人声,突然串轨导致的问题。
  4. 01:27:037 (3) –加whistle

[ Luka's Hard]
大哥近来是否安康>_>
  1. HP+1
  2. 00:06:647 (6) –尾上whistle挪头上来
  3. 00:29:264 (5) –这3/4不知道你怎么想的,我觉得这不管怎么样这都是1/2合适吧。而且00:29:498 –还有个人声
  4. 00:40:983 (1) –折返加个whistle,太空了,就像00:47:545 (1) –一样
  5. 00:55:514 (3,4) –我强烈建议这两个对调,大白线放滑条尾很不爽。虽然知道是跟人声,但是这还是不要跟了吧。而且这段NC太长,考虑到你这00:52:233 (1) –加了nc,所以这还是加下00:55:748 (4,5) -。后面一段KIAI类似
  6. 01:09:811 (2,3,4,5) –连续note似乎不怎么合曲,节奏上和这01:06:295 (3,4) –也不怎么配合

[Normal]
  1. 00:27:858 (1,2) –nazi,有点难看,其实是我个人不怎么喜欢这种遮住半个滑条尾的。
  2. 00:42:858 (1,2) –还是别碰到一起了,这非常容易读成1/2,而且特别这00:43:561 –有人声,很容易听着曲子打着打着不看收缩圈就读错。
  3. KIAI可以跟人声的地方更多一点,例如00:55:279 –00:58:561 -之类,现在似乎只有01:09:811 (2) – 而且这跟着人声建议把后面白线那个关键节奏加个circle。

[Easy]
  1. 00:55:983 (3) –我觉得这flow不怎么好,试试这样?
  2. 01:20:358 (1) –新手可能不会读这个,最好在意下。
Good luck.
Topic Starter
Citrus

Fycho wrote:

~popner's modding team~


[Mod Info]
  1. Black: Suggestions
  2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
  3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
Fine.

[Insane]
  1. 00:05:358 -00:20:358 –这段soft的whistle只加在2,4白线上略少,建议可以多加些,和你最后那部分一样。例如00:06:178 -00:06:529 -00:09:928 -00:19:186 (7,8) –这两滑条尾等等。只是建议。加上了一些
  2. 00:30:904 (2) –滑条尾同样可加whistle跟着钢琴。加了总感觉就这一句00:23:170 (2,3,4,5,6,7) –突出的加这么多有些别扭。这里是跟的钢琴啊
  3. 00:21:295 –这里的break,使我打的时候下意识以为这00:26:686 (5,6,7) –也是空白段。很违和,可能是00:22:233 (1) –跟钢琴,而其他地方都跟的人声,突然串轨导致的问题。 用00:24:108 (1) - 做了缓冲,应该能反应过来吧
  4. 01:27:037 (3) –加whistle

[ Luka's Hard]
大哥近来是否安康>_>
  1. HP+1
  2. 00:06:647 (6) –尾上whistle挪头上来
  3. 00:29:264 (5) –这3/4不知道你怎么想的,我觉得这不管怎么样这都是1/2合适吧。而且00:29:498 –还有个人声改了
  4. 00:40:983 (1) –折返加个whistle,太空了,就像00:47:545 (1) –一样加了
  5. 00:55:514 (3,4) –我强烈建议这两个对调,大白线放滑条尾很不爽。虽然知道是跟人声,但是这还是不要跟了吧。而且这段NC太长,考虑到你这00:52:233 (1) –加了nc,所以这还是加下00:55:748 (4,5) -。后面一段KIAI类似只改了NC
  6. 01:09:811 (2,3,4,5) –连续note似乎不怎么合曲,节奏上和这01:06:295 (3,4) –也不怎么配合我想保留大哥的意志

[Normal]
  1. 00:27:858 (1,2) –nazi,有点难看,其实是我个人不怎么喜欢这种遮住半个滑条尾的。还算比较工整吧
  2. 00:42:858 (1,2) –还是别碰到一起了,这非常容易读成1/2,而且特别这00:43:561 –有人声,很容易听着曲子打着打着不看收缩圈就读错。感觉不至于这么困难啊
  3. KIAI可以跟人声的地方更多一点,例如00:55:279 –00:58:561 -之类,现在似乎只有01:09:811 (2) – 而且这跟着人声建议把后面白线那个关键节奏加个circle。改成不跟人声了

[Easy]
  1. 00:55:983 (3) –我觉得这flow不怎么好,试试这样?改了
  2. 01:20:358 (1) –新手可能不会读这个,最好在意下。stress
Good luck.
非常感谢~
YTYuyu
hey~ i'm here from my queue :D.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[General]
add "PlayStation Portable" in the tags. some people might not know what PSP means, as well as "video" beside "game" for more specification.

[Easy]
00:20:358 (1) - i think you should add a repeat on this slider to keep the general flow steady. ending it at the red tick like this feels like the general flow came to a sudden halt. i feel that it'll follow the music as well during gameplay IMO.
00:24:108 (1) - just a suggestion, but making this symmetrical would make this slider a lot nicer during gameplay. you just need to adjust the 2nd half of this slider, and it'll be fine IMO.
00:37:233 (3) - make this a NC. it'll be consistent with the other combos throughout the diff.
00:48:483 (1) - you have 2 options for this part. either remove the finish because it sounds too distracting and noisy, or reduce the volume of the finish to make it less distracting to follow during gameplay.
01:03:483 (1) - ^
nice easy you got here :).

[Normal]
00:17:076 (2,3) - try to make this fully readable. with the majority of (3) being covered, players would most likely assume that this is a circle and not a slider. i can tell you wanna keep the look. try doing something like this or this so that it's more readable for players during gameplay.
00:21:529 - i think you can add a 1/2 slider in this part to follow the vocals smoothly during gameplay IMO.
00:48:483 (1) - same as easy.
01:07:701 (4,5) - same idea as 00:17:076,
besides those overlaps i mentioned, nice normal.

[Luka's Hard]
00:15:670 (3,4,5,6) - to make this easier, perhaps you can use a kick slider instead of this mini-stream? i feel that this stream could stress out players during gameplay IMO. you can keep the jump, but try using a kick slider for this and tell me what you think.
00:53:873 (4,1) - reduce the gap for this part. the spacing is too large and it can mess up players during gameplay.
01:02:662 (4) - i feel that if you make this a NC, it'll me more readable and from 1st play, it looks misleading to follow during gameplay without the NC.
the only problem i have with this diff are the jumps. some are too large, and others are fine to follow.

[Insane]
00:10:279 (6) - i think you can space this out to make it more fun to follow during gameplay. the overlap looks ugly to follow during gameplay.
i was gonna say that it's overdoing it, but it follows the music nonetheless.

nice set you got here. i'll leave a star since this set has the potential for a bubble :D. GL and don't give up on this map. you're almost there.

Topic Starter
Citrus

Byakugan249 wrote:

hey~ i'm here from my queue :D.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[General]
add "PlayStation Portable" in the tags. some people might not know what PSP means, as well as "video" beside "game" for more specification. Fixed

[Easy]
All fixed
00:20:358 (1) - i think you should add a repeat on this slider to keep the general flow steady. ending it at the red tick like this feels like the general flow came to a sudden halt. i feel that it'll follow the music as well during gameplay IMO.
00:24:108 (1) - just a suggestion, but making this symmetrical would make this slider a lot nicer during gameplay. you just need to adjust the 2nd half of this slider, and it'll be fine IMO.
00:37:233 (3) - make this a NC. it'll be consistent with the other combos throughout the diff.
00:48:483 (1) - you have 2 options for this part. either remove the finish because it sounds too distracting and noisy, or reduce the volume of the finish to make it less distracting to follow during gameplay.
01:03:483 (1) - ^
nice easy you got here :).

[Normal]
All fixed
00:17:076 (2,3) - try to make this fully readable. with the majority of (3) being covered, players would most likely assume that this is a circle and not a slider. i can tell you wanna keep the look. try doing something like this or this so that it's more readable for players during gameplay.
00:21:529 - i think you can add a 1/2 slider in this part to follow the vocals smoothly during gameplay IMO.
00:48:483 (1) - same as easy.
01:07:701 (4,5) - same idea as 00:17:076,
besides those overlaps i mentioned, nice normal.

[Luka's Hard]
00:15:670 (3,4,5,6) - to make this easier, perhaps you can use a kick slider instead of this mini-stream? i feel that this stream could stress out players during gameplay IMO. you can keep the jump, but try using a kick slider for this and tell me what you think.I want to keep this,not very hard for players :(
00:53:873 (4,1) - reduce the gap for this part. the spacing is too large and it can mess up players during gameplay.
01:02:662 (4) - i feel that if you make this a NC, it'll me more readable and from 1st play, it looks misleading to follow during gameplay without the NC.
the only problem i have with this diff are the jumps. some are too large, and others are fine to follow.

[Insane]
All fixed
00:10:279 (6) - i think you can space this out to make it more fun to follow during gameplay. the overlap looks ugly to follow during gameplay.
i was gonna say that it's overdoing it, but it follows the music nonetheless.

nice set you got here. i'll leave a star since this set has the potential for a bubble :D. GL and don't give up on this map. you're almost there.

Thank you very much~
HabiHolic
go go! thou bad!!!
IamKwaN
Hi, from my queue here.

General

  1. 沒有耶

Insane

  1. 00:14:264 (8,1) - 這個我覺得你可以改變一下overlap的幅度, 現在這個樣子不太美觀
  2. 00:21:295 - 這裡空了感覺不太好follow,加圓圈不好嗎?
  3. 00:30:904 (2,3) - 跟00:14:264 (8,1)一樣
  4. 00:36:998 (6,1) - 這包得不好
  5. 00:39:108 (3,4) - 這既不是blanket,flow也不算全對,不如把00:39:576 (4) 放在(252,56)?
  6. 00:43:678 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這裡如果能有多點弧度,流向會更好,最好能更00:44:264 (1) 做blanket
  7. 00:59:733 (1,2) - 這種overlap也是如上面說的,幅度減到最低就更好
  8. 01:01:608 (1,2) - ^
  9. 01:03:483 (2,3) - ^
  10. 01:05:358 (1,2,4) - ^ ;w; 可能我個人不喜歡這種排位 (後面那些我就不吐槽了233
  11. 01:10:983 (1,2) - 未包好

Hard

  1. 00:09:108 (1) - 這個的位置我會嘗試放在(468,220)
  2. 00:13:561 (4) - 這滑條沒有捕捉到rap的歌詞我感覺漏了點東西,所以我建議這樣:
  3. 00:33:483 (2) - 我覺得這個滑條CTRL+J的形狀比較好
  4. 01:17:076 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 好想吐槽這兒的難度.. 看得有點頭暈..何況前面已經有短stream,有必要弄得那麼難嗎?
  5. 01:27:037 (4,5,6,7) - 這裡弄成直線比較好,畢竟不是平常的2連圓+1連滑條,會比較好讀

Normal

  1. 00:13:795 (3,1) - 這裡做個blanket也不錯,flow不會太奇怪
  2. 00:24:108 (1,2) - 沒包好
  3. 00:31:608 (1) - 這個延長到00:34:889 也可以呀
  4. 00:40:045 (2) - (124,104)會好看些
  5. 00:42:389 (4,1) - 這重疊跟insane一樣不好看
  6. 01:04:889 (3,1) - ^ (後面也不吐槽)
  7. 這N不錯

Easy

  1. 01:00:670 (4,1) - 這樣如何?
  2. 這E也好 \:D/

話說我還沒看完這番,聽完這歌我覺得我應該開始回看.
就這樣,祝好運!
Topic Starter
Citrus

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from my queue here.

General

  1. 沒有耶

Insane

  1. 00:14:264 (8,1) - 這個我覺得你可以改變一下overlap的幅度, 現在這個樣子不太美觀 个人还是挺喜欢的
  2. 00:21:295 - 這裡空了感覺不太好follow,加圓圈不好嗎? 这里不打算加
  3. 00:30:904 (2,3) - 跟00:14:264 (8,1)一樣 同上
  4. 00:36:998 (6,1) - 這包得不好 包得挺好的啊
  5. 00:39:108 (3,4) - 這既不是blanket,flow也不算全對,不如把00:39:576 (4) 放在(252,56)? 感觉还行啊
  6. 00:43:678 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這裡如果能有多點弧度,流向會更好,最好能更00:44:264 (1) 做blanket 改了
  7. 00:59:733 (1,2) - 這種overlap也是如上面說的,幅度減到最低就更好 同上
  8. 01:01:608 (1,2) - ^ ^
  9. 01:03:483 (2,3) - ^ ^
  10. 01:05:358 (1,2,4) - ^ ;w; 可能我個人不喜歡這種排位 (後面那些我就不吐槽了233 ^
  11. 01:10:983 (1,2) - 未包好 感觉还行啊

Hard

  1. 00:09:108 (1) - 這個的位置我會嘗試放在(468,220) 把6和1改到一条直线上了
  2. 00:13:561 (4) - 這滑條沒有捕捉到rap的歌詞我感覺漏了點東西,所以我建議這樣: 暂时不打算改
  3. 00:33:483 (2) - 我覺得這個滑條CTRL+J的形狀比較好 这样会碰到血条的
  4. 01:17:076 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 好想吐槽這兒的難度.. 看得有點頭暈..何況前面已經有短stream,有必要弄得那麼難嗎? OD不高,感觉可以接受
  5. 01:27:037 (4,5,6,7) - 這裡弄成直線比較好,畢竟不是平常的2連圓+1連滑條,會比較好讀 改了

Normal

  1. 00:13:795 (3,1) - 這裡做個blanket也不錯,flow不會太奇怪 改了
  2. 00:24:108 (1,2) - 沒包好 这里没必要的
  3. 00:31:608 (1) - 這個延長到00:34:889 也可以呀 目的是给新人玩家更多反应时间
  4. 00:40:045 (2) - (124,104)會好看些 真的很难看么
  5. 00:42:389 (4,1) - 這重疊跟insane一樣不好看 ^
  6. 01:04:889 (3,1) - ^ (後面也不吐槽) ^
  7. 這N不錯

Easy

  1. 01:00:670 (4,1) - 這樣如何? 没必要非要包起来吧
  2. 這E也好 \:D/

話說我還沒看完這番,聽完這歌我覺得我應該開始回看.
就這樣,祝好運!
非常感谢~
S o a p
声音大概在60~70比较好 然后美丽 :D
no KD
Topic Starter
Citrus

S o a p wrote:

声音大概在60~70比较好 然后美丽 :D
no KD
改到70了
非常感谢~
Koiyuki


From my queue

[General]
  1. None.

[Easy]
  1. 01:24:108 (1,2) - 1尾包好了2的头没包好

[Normal]
  1. 00:21:529 (2) - 感觉移到前面的白线上更好一点
  2. 00:48:483 (1) - 去掉nc
  3. 00:38:639 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/6QHxz.jpg

[Luka's Hard]
  1. Nothing to say.

[Insane]
  1. 00:23:170 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个四连接二连打起来觉得有点怪,00:23:639 - 白线的音还是很清楚的
  2. 01:27:623 - 这里加个note或者把5做成个1/2slider?

打起来和看起来都可以啊
Topic Starter
Citrus

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:



From my queue

[General]
  1. None.

[Easy]
  1. 01:24:108 (1,2) - 1尾包好了2的头没包好 改了

[Normal]
  1. 00:21:529 (2) - 感觉移到前面的白线上更好一点 不太好吧
  2. 00:48:483 (1) - 去掉nc 改了
  3. 00:38:639 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/6QHxz.jpg感觉有点别扭啊

[Luka's Hard]
  1. Nothing to say.

[Insane]
  1. 00:23:170 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个四连接二连打起来觉得有点怪,00:23:639 - 白线的音还是很清楚的 改了
  2. 01:27:623 - 这里加个note或者把5做成个1/2slider?这里我想保留

打起来和看起来都可以啊
非常感谢~
wcx19911123
wocao,你+24了还要mod?

[Easy]
00:40:983 (1,2) - 这两个时间位置上换一下顺序,节奏稍微好点

[Luka's Hard]
00:11:217 - 我觉得这里很不协调,前面跟节奏,后面又跟vocal去了,我建议slider停在这里,然后下一个slider从00:11:334 - 这里开始。这样的话都跟vocal,效果好不少
00:15:436 (2,3) - 这个跳有点难了,尤其接下来是串的话,建议缩小点spacing,也可以把串改点去slider,毕竟这图每个diff都比普通的要简单
00:22:584 - slider停在这里,跟piano?感觉好些
01:02:662 (2,3) - 其实这个跳并不难,可惜跟这些slider放在一起就太confusing了,建议改改pattern,把spacing修一下
01:03:600 (2,3) - 要是想保持这个跳的话,建议把01:03:951 (3,4) - 这个spacing弄更大点
01:17:076 - 01:19:889 - 这些跳要是随着歌曲慢慢变的越来越大的话就好了

[Insane]
00:39:928 (5,6,7) - 这几个slider打击感很差,主要是因为slider头全部不在重音上,调整下节奏会好很多
01:03:483 (2,3) - 这个要是改成01:02:662 (1,2,3) - 跟这个一样的节奏会好些,现在感觉有点不太协调
01:19:654 (3,4) - 这个跳虽然很合曲,可是之前的跳全都是一个间距,到这里却突然变很大,歌曲这里音量是渐变的,如果图这一段的spacing也是慢慢变大,那就很合曲了
Topic Starter
Citrus

wcx19911123 wrote:

wocao,你+24了还要mod?

[Easy]
00:40:983 (1,2) - 这两个时间位置上换一下顺序,节奏稍微好点

[Luka's Hard]
00:11:217 - 我觉得这里很不协调,前面跟节奏,后面又跟vocal去了,我建议slider停在这里,然后下一个slider从00:11:334 - 这里开始。这样的话都跟vocal,效果好不少 改了
00:15:436 (2,3) - 这个跳有点难了,尤其接下来是串的话,建议缩小点spacing,也可以把串改点去slider,毕竟这图每个diff都比普通的要简单想不到更好的改法,只好保留大哥的意志
00:22:584 - slider停在这里,跟piano?感觉好些 感觉不算太难啊
01:02:662 (2,3) - 其实这个跳并不难,可惜跟这些slider放在一起就太confusing了,建议改改pattern,把spacing修一下 这里我想保留,大哥的这个梗还是很有特点的
01:03:600 (2,3) - 要是想保持这个跳的话,建议把01:03:951 (3,4) - 这个spacing弄更大点 改了
01:17:076 - 01:19:889 - 这些跳要是随着歌曲慢慢变的越来越大的话就好了 stress

[Insane]
00:39:928 (5,6,7) - 这几个slider打击感很差,主要是因为slider头全部不在重音上,调整下节奏会好很多 改了
01:03:483 (2,3) - 这个要是改成01:02:662 (1,2,3) - 跟这个一样的节奏会好些,现在感觉有点不太协调 感觉还好啊
01:19:654 (3,4) - 这个跳虽然很合曲,可是之前的跳全都是一个间距,到这里却突然变很大,歌曲这里音量是渐变的,如果图这一段的spacing也是慢慢变大,那就很合曲了想不到更好的改法,只好先保留了 :(
非常感谢长喜欧尼酱~
Megurine Luka
好像没啥能帮忙的,补个星吧;w;

加油
BeatofIke
Clearing old requests!
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:061 (4,1) - The only thing that bothered me in this difficulty was the lack of notes here to follow some of the vocals here. I understand that you followed the piano parts at 00:20:358 (1,2,3,4), but afterwars it feels kinda empty. I suggest adding some notes here.
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