Mitchie M - Viva Happy · forum

MiniKotoba

Joined November 2011

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MiniKotoba 2013-08-12T13:15:00+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, November 10, 2013 at 4:05:37 PM

Artist: Mitchie M
Title: Viva Happy
Tags: Hatsune Miku Vocaloid Greatest Idol seijiro
BPM: 148
Filesize: 22587kb
Play Time: 03:26
Difficulties Available:

Happy (3.31 stars, 219 notes)
seijiro's Hard (4.3 stars, 384 notes)
Viva (1.5 stars, 136 notes)

Download: Mitchie M - Viva Happy
Download: Mitchie M - Viva Happy (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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If there are something odd in this map,tell me. I'll fix them as fast as possible~
Skin mixed from : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/55657
Viva - 100%
Happy - 100%
seijiro's hard - 100%
Waiting for more GDs too! If you want to make one, you're welcome > w <)\

(First Beatmap ; - ;")

Last edited by MiniKotoba 2013-11-10T09:07:03+00:00, edited 59 times in total.

seijiro_old

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Joined June 2013

seijiro_old 2013-08-12T13:25:05+00:00

Keep up your work! I wait for all level of this soon! ;w;/

Cartographer

94 posts

Joined November 2012

Cartographer 2013-08-12T13:50:06+00:00

Random mod.

AiMod says things are outta the screen, I suggest fixing that

Also try adding Kiai Mode somewhere!

01:24:354 (1) - Not Snapped (Delete the spinner and replace it)
02:07:325 (1) - ^

Good luck!
If you need help just PM me in osu!

MiniKotoba

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Topic Starter

MiniKotoba 2013-08-18T05:54:56+00:00

Cartographer wrote:
Random mod.

AiMod says things are outta the screen, I suggest fixing that

Also try adding Kiai Mode somewhere!

01:24:354 (1) - Not Snapped (Delete the spinner and replace it)
02:07:325 (1) - ^

Good luck!
If you need help just PM me in osu!

Fixed. Thanks for helping ;; w ;;
~~Waiting for moddings on hard diff. (maybe others too)~~
completed

Wanwizzy

1 post

Joined January 2013

Wanwizzy 2013-08-18T09:19:13+00:00

หนุกมากเบย!!!!!!!!

starlightmylife

1 post

Joined August 2013

starlightmylife 2013-08-18T09:22:32+00:00

Cool finally Viva Happy Song is in Osu.
I love this song Pochamin's first level is very nice.
( ; w ; )b
ชอบมากๆจ้า~~~

Rayz141

433 posts

Joined February 2013

Rayz141 2013-08-31T07:12:06+00:00

okay then
personal suggestions

[General]
seijiro's Hard is a GD i guess? then you should add 'seijiro' to the tags
[Normal]
00:35:708 (3) - change the pattern so that it stacks with the slider
00:37:735 (1) - add 1 reverse
00:42:194 (3) - do the same like in 00:35:708 (3)
00:45:843 - add slider, remove 00:46:248 (2)
00:48:072 (1) - shorten the slider end to 00:48:275 & add 1 reverse after that
00:49:086 - add hitcircle
01:01:653 (1,1) -

make it like this

01:04:896 (1,1) - ^
01:14:625 (1,1) - ^
01:17:868 (1,1) - ^
01:23:138 (2) - shorten the slider to 01:23:544 then add 1 reverse
02:00:434 (1,2,3) -

make it like this

03:10:565 (1) - shorten the slider to 03:10:971 then add 1 reverse
the rest if fine for me
[Easy]
00:36:114 (1) - too many reverse, change it with something
00:42:600 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:44:218 (1) - ^
02:53:539 (1) - ^
03:06:512 (1) - make this slider more interesting?
03:19:484 (1) - ^
[seijiro's Hard]
i suggest to do major changes on the pattern & rhythm placements. use 1/8 beat snap divisor if you think you can do it

MiniKotoba

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Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

MiniKotoba 2013-08-31T07:14:25+00:00

Rayz141 wrote:
okay then
personal suggestions
[General]
seijiro's Hard is a GD i guess? then you should add 'seijiro' to the tags
[Normal]
00:35:708 (3) - change the pattern so that it stacks with the slider
00:37:735 (1) - add 1 reverse
00:42:194 (3) - do the same like in 00:35:708 (3)
00:45:843 - add slider, remove 00:46:248 (2)
00:48:072 (1) - shorten the slider end to 00:48:275 & add 1 reverse after that
00:49:086 - add hitcircle
01:01:653 (1,1) -
make it like this
01:04:896 (1,1) - ^
01:14:625 (1,1) - ^
01:17:868 (1,1) - ^
01:23:138 (2) - shorten the slider to 01:23:544 then add 1 reverse
02:00:434 (1,2,3) -
make it like this
03:10:565 (1) - shorten the slider to 03:10:971 then add 1 reverse
the rest if fine for me
[Easy]
00:36:114 (1) - too many reverse, change it with something
00:42:600 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:44:218 (1) - ^
02:53:539 (1) - ^
03:06:512 (1) - make this slider more interesting?
03:19:484 (1) - ^
[seijiro's Hard]
i suggest to do major changes on the pattern & rhythm placements. use 1/8 beat snap divisor if you think you can do it

oh, thank you so much ;; v ;;!!

Easy and Normal's editing completed!

kocaca2009

36 posts

Joined January 2013

kocaca2009 2013-08-31T09:11:30+00:00

Random mod here...still downloading,but wait.
There's somehing you should know first:
You should only give kudosu to who helps you...

seijiro wrote:
Keep up your work! I wait for all level of this soon! ;w;/
You gave a kudosu because he said that?
If a BAT saw that...It's not good,anyway.

Last edited by kocaca2009 2013-08-31T09:28:23+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

MiniKotoba

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Topic Starter

MiniKotoba 2013-08-31T09:13:21+00:00

kocaca2009 wrote:
Random mod here...still downloading,but wait.
There's somehing you should know first:
You should only give kudosu to who helps you...

seijiro wrote:
Keep up your work! I wait for all level of this soon! ;w;/
You gave a kudosu because he said that?
If a BAT saw that...It's not good,anyway.

I didn't know that... sorry. If any BATs are reading and saw this, remove those kudos for me please ; _ ;"

And thanks for mod, too ; w ;

kocaca2009

36 posts

Joined January 2013

kocaca2009 2013-08-31T09:21:49+00:00

pochamin wrote:
I didn't know that... sorry ; _ ;"

Thanks for mod, too ; w ;

No,I should apoligize.It's my fault,I didn't find that he gave you a kudosu for the map,it's alright.
You didn't do anything wrong. I'm sorry to tell you my mod have to delay for a while because of the laming internet.

MiniKotoba

95 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

MiniKotoba 2013-08-31T09:23:02+00:00

kocaca2009 wrote:
pochamin wrote:
I didn't know that... sorry ; _ ;"

Thanks for mod, too ; w ;
No,I should apoligize.It's my fault,I didn't find that he gave you a kudosu for the map,it's alright.
You didn't do anything wrong. I'm sorry to tell you my mod have to delay for a while because of the laming internet.

No problem. I can always wait for that > w <)/

Pizza Kun

455 posts

Joined March 2011

Pizza Kun 2013-08-31T09:35:57+00:00

M4M from queue

[seijiro's Hard]

Circle Size: 4

00:02:669 (1) - Sampleset: soft
00:16:858 (4) - Crtl + G
00:18:074 (1) - Finish
00:26:384 (1,2,3) - :< bad overlap, move this 3 notes
00:30:033 (4,5) - Too closed (set grid level: 3) , move 5 in x 256||y 56 and move 6 in 376||56

00:39:965 (2,3) - Move 2 to 208||224
00:48:478 (8) - Centre this note
00:49:491 (2) - Ctrl + G
01:09:761 (1) - Move in 01:09:558
01:09:558 (1) - Stack on 01:10:166 (2)
01:21:111 (1) - Ctrl + G
01:21:719 (2) - ^
01:25:571 (7) - NC
Move Breack to 01:27:598

01:55:772 (2,3,4) - not rankable under the slider
02:11:379 (1) - Finish
02:16:852 (2) - No finish D:
02:19:487 (1) - Same for 01:09:761 (1)
03:08:133 (1) - ^
02:21:109 (5) - NC
Start break on 02:37:324
Start break on 03:00:025
03:11:782 (1) - Ctrl + G
03:24:551 (1) - Finish spin on 03:26:173 And add Finish at finish of spin owo

-Srui-

94 posts

Joined October 2012

-Srui- 2013-08-31T11:12:59+00:00

Hi ~ M4M from your quque

[Viva [Easy]]

00:34:492 (1) - move to center
00:34:897 (1) - move left 1 gird
00:52:329 (1) - ctrl + <
01:12:193 (4) - add clap on mid and delete finish on mid.
01:42:597 (1) - move to center
01:43:002 (1) - move left 1 gird

[Happy [Normal]]
- 00:35:708 (3,1) - distance ?
  between 00:54:356 (1) - and 00:55:572 (1) - a little bored
  01:23:138 (2) - remove whistle on body
  02:21:514 (1,2) - too close
  03:15:430 - add circle ?
  03:18:673 - ^
  
  [seijiro's Hard]
  - 00:30:337 (5) - move to (256,64). It look like better
    01:11:788 (6) - NC
    02:17:460 - add circle ?
    
    wow ~ this song is very cute >w<
    Nice

kocaca2009

36 posts

Joined January 2013

kocaca2009 2013-08-31T11:27:20+00:00

Nice skin.
Okay,here we go.
as usual:
Blue=Highly recommend
Boldface letter=my opinion
Black=take a look

General

Change offset to 34,better early than late.
Your BPM should be 148.000.Change it later,or you will found many problems about "Object isn't snapped"
Yeah,if you change your BPM set,use Ai mod (Ctrl+Shift+A) to check out the problems.
Map set should be consistent in all diff.I'm really puzzled that you wrote down the sourse "Vocaloid seijiro" in the highest diff but deleted the word "seijiro" in easy and normal diff.
Decrease the volume by at least 40%.Normally,we will not use 100% volume.
03:23:132 -Delay the spinner's end to 03:26:375

Easy

I don't really understand...what kind of rhythm form 00:06:520 to 00:19:087
remember:easy diff should have a changeless rhythm.
try this:
00:07:330 (2) -Delete the slider,replace it by a note.
00:08:952 (2) -^,same thing.
00:11:384 (3) -Delete the reverse and move the slider to 00:11:790
00:13:411 (1) -Delete the slider,replace it by a note.
00:14:222 -Add note.
00:15:033 -Add note.
00:15:844 -Add note.
00:18:681 -Add a reverse and move it to 00:18:276
That's all,you can find it yourself in the whole diff.
00:36:113 -Distance problem.
00:45:437 -Oh!Unnecessary reverses...what about change it to 2 sliders:one from 00:45:437 to 00:46:247
one from 00:47:058 to 00:47:869 ?
00:49:085 (1) -^
00:52:328 (1) -^
01:00:841 -Add note.
01:04:084 -Add note.
01:07:327 -Add note.
Same as later....
03:10:565 (1) -Out of screen!fix it.
What's more,as I mentioned ,decrease your hit sound's volume.

Normal

Edit it under Distance Snap.
00:09:763 (1) -Distance problem.
00:38:950 (1) -Unreasonable distance in normal diff,better closer than further.
00:49:896 -Add note.
00:52:734 (1,1,1) -Too close?
01:38:948 (1,1,1,1,1) -I didn't see anyone do that before I mod your map.
01:43:812 (1) -Distance problem.
02:11:378 (1) -Too easy.Try to replace these by multi-slider.Or you can do what you did at 02:17:865 (1,1)
02:14:621 (1) -^
02:24:351 (1) -^
02:27:594 (1) -^
02:30:837 (1) -^
03:12:997 (1) -^
03:16:240 (1) -^

Hard

01:04:895 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -Try not to repeat what you did,try (Ctrl+>)
01:17:867 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -^
02:14:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -^
02:27:594 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -^
03:16:240 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -^
What's more,fix distance problems like:faster-beat-notes' distance longer than slower notes.

That's all.

Tired...
Anyway,good luck!

Oh,don't forget to give me a feedback!

MiniKotoba

95 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

MiniKotoba 2013-08-31T11:31:48+00:00

kocaca2009 wrote:
Nice skin.
Okay,here we go.
as usual:
Blue=Highly recommend
Boldface letter=my opinion
Black=take a look

General
Change offset to 34,better early than late.
Your BPM should be 148.000.Change it later,or you will found many problems about "Object isn't snapped"
Yeah,if you change your BPM set,use Ai mod (Ctrl+Shift+A) to check out the problems.
Map set should be consistent in all diff.I'm really puzzled that you wrote down the sourse "Vocaloid seijiro" in the highest diff but deleted the word "seijiro" in easy and normal diff.
Decrease the volume by at least 40%.Normally,we will not use 100% volume.
03:23:132 -Delay the spinner's end to 03:26:375

Easy
I don't really understand...what kind of rhythm form 00:06:520 to 00:19:087
remember:easy diff should have a changeless rhythm.
try this:
00:07:330 (2) -Delete the slider,replace it by a note.
00:08:952 (2) -^,same thing.
00:11:384 (3) -Delete the reverse and move the slider to 00:11:790
00:13:411 (1) -Delete the slider,replace it by a note.
00:14:222 -Add note.
00:15:033 -Add note.
00:15:844 -Add note.
00:18:681 -Add a reverse and move it to 00:18:276
That's all,you can find it yourself in the whole diff.
00:36:113 -Distance problem.
00:45:437 -Oh!Unnecessary reverses...what about change it to 2 sliders:one from 00:45:437 to 00:46:247
one from 00:47:058 to 00:47:869 ?
00:49:085 (1) -^
00:52:328 (1) -^
01:00:841 -Add note.
01:04:084 -Add note.
01:07:327 -Add note.
Same as later....
03:10:565 (1) -Out of screen!fix it.
What's more,as I mentioned ,decrease your hit sound's volume.

Normal
Edit it under Distance Snap.
00:09:763 (1) -Distance problem.
00:38:950 (1) -Unreasonable distance in normal diff,better closer than further.
00:49:896 -Add note.
00:52:734 (1,1,1) -Too close?
01:38:948 (1,1,1,1,1) -I didn't see anyone do that before I mod your map.
01:43:812 (1) -Distance problem.
02:11:378 (1) -Too easy.Try to replace these by multi-slider.Or you can do what you did at 02:17:865 (1,1)
02:14:621 (1) -^
02:24:351 (1) -^
02:27:594 (1) -^
02:30:837 (1) -^
03:12:997 (1) -^
03:16:240 (1) -^

Hard
01:04:895 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -Try not to repeat what you did,try (Ctrl+>)
01:17:867 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -^
02:14:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -^
02:27:594 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -^
03:16:240 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -^
What's more,fix distance problems like:faster-beat-notes' distance longer than slower notes.

That's all. Tired...
Anyway,good luck!
Oh,don't forget to give me a feedback!

Thank you so much! It helps me a lot <3

MiniKotoba

95 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

MiniKotoba 2013-09-01T08:13:18+00:00

Updated, hard diff has many things to edit ,so maybe later... T T.

_dog

171 posts

Joined August 2012

_dog 2013-09-03T00:50:53+00:00

old skool map

Hard:

AR+2 Make this AR 7
00:13:006 (1,2,3) - Why ignore the 1/4? This is 1/4

00:21:520 (9) - Make this a slider to the next 1/1 large white tick. The one "10" is on. Then stack 11 under it's end.

00:28:006 (8) - ^

00:47:871 (6,7,8) - There's a sound you should map here: 00:48:277

02:03:479 - why skip beats :c

02:05:101 - ^

Normal:

00:15:034 (4) - Make a more nicer curve.

00:16:250 (1,2) - line up the end of 1 with 2's start.

00:36:115 (1,1,1,1) - keep consistent spacing

00:42:601 (1,1,1) - consistent spacing please

01:57:601 (2,3) - spaced incorrectly

03:18:277 (1) - usually i dont like red tick sliders but this should be on the next red tick and spaced correctly after being moved with 1 repeat taken away.

Easy:

00:09:763 - slider starting from here to 00:10:169 -

00:11:790 (3) - this should be on the large rwhite tick before. stop skipping the strong beats. It's especially important for an easy diff.

02:00:033 - place a circle here ontop of the start of the next slider.

Didn't have much to mod of this map, cause old skool but good luck

Kirin

267 posts

Joined August 2012

Kirin 2013-09-03T09:05:30+00:00

Hellow. MasterKirin from my queue

Let's begin o/

[General]
You should add kiai time at 01:01:655 and end it at 01:26:790
Add kiai time at 02:11:385 and end it at 02:36:520
Remove that [Easy] and [Normal] in "Viva" and "Happy" diffs. Players know from the star difficulty what diff is.

[Viva Easy]
00:06:520 (1) Move that circle at x:40 y:32 like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964220
00:07:331 (2) ^ but at this position x:40 y:320 like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964227
01:56:790 (1) Move that slider at x:88 y:128 like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964233
02:00:844 (1) ^ but at this position x:160 y:224 like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964237

[Happy Normal]
Put the grid level to 3 or 4
00:34:898 (1) Move it at x:480 y:16 like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964247
00:35:304 (2) ^ but at x:480 y:104 like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964251

[seijiro's Hard]
Put the CS at 4. Circles are too tiny
You MUST re-check the timing of this difficulty. I take a B when i test it.

My work ends here. Good luck for ranking

MiniKotoba

95 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

MiniKotoba 2013-09-07T05:21:58+00:00

Edited~

Thanks!

Losertic

461 posts

Joined May 2012

Losertic 2013-09-15T11:09:45+00:00

Hello!

From M4M.

Modding

General

Plz change background size. → 16:9 Size! (ex. 1024x768)
Remove tags "Vocaloid"?

Viva

00:08:142 (3) - Remove NC.
01:38:952 (1) - maybe it's too hard for beginner. change please. (two reverse)
01:53:547 (1) - same problem. how about this pattern?
1. add slider 01:53:547 ~ 01:54:358
2. add slider 01:55:169 ~ 01:55:979
01:56:790 (1) - ^

Happy

plz check distance. (ex. 01:48:277 (3,4,1) - really hard?)
00:16:250 (1,2) - overlap
00:16:250 (1) - move slider end at 00:16:655
00:16:858 (2) - move slider end at 00:17:061 and add one reverse?
00:36:115 (1) - move (480,280)
00:36:925 (1) - remove NC
00:37:736 (1) - ^
00:47:061 (4) - NC, 00:48:074 (1) - remove NC
00:49:088 (2) - NC
00:50:304 (5) - ^
02:13:412 (1) - it's reallly hard. (beginner think - 1~2 reverse. but, it's 3 reverse. change this)
02:16:655 (1) - ^
02:26:385 (1) - ^
02:29:628 (1) - ^
02:53:547 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - need more NC? i think not..

Seijiro's Hard

OD -1 , HP +1?? and need correct distance ;_; ex. 03:16:250 (1,2,3,4)
00:50:304 (3,4,5) - really hard bit. change slider? add 00:50:304 ~ 00:50:608 slider. and add one reverse.
00:54:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - shake slider, and add jump plz.
03:06:115 (1) - blanket? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/985279
03:09:763 (1) - NC

Viva~

MiniKotoba

95 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

MiniKotoba 2013-09-20T14:50:43+00:00

Losertic wrote:
Hello!

From M4M.

Modding
General
Plz change background size. → 16:9 Size! (ex. 1024x768)
Remove tags "Vocaloid"?
Viva
00:08:142 (3) - Remove NC.
01:38:952 (1) - maybe it's too hard for beginner. change please. (two reverse)
01:53:547 (1) - same problem. how about this pattern?
1. add slider 01:53:547 ~ 01:54:358
2. add slider 01:55:169 ~ 01:55:979
01:56:790 (1) - ^
Happy
plz check distance. (ex. 01:48:277 (3,4,1) - really hard?)
00:16:250 (1,2) - overlap
00:16:250 (1) - move slider end at 00:16:655
00:16:858 (2) - move slider end at 00:17:061 and add one reverse? sorry..
00:36:115 (1) - move (480,280)
00:36:925 (1) - remove NC
00:37:736 (1) - ^
00:47:061 (4) - NC, 00:48:074 (1) - remove NC
00:49:088 (2) - NC
00:50:304 (5) - ^
02:13:412 (1) - it's reallly hard. (beginner think - 1~2 reverse. but, it's 3 reverse. change this) sorry, i like that one.. ; _ ;
02:16:655 (1) - ^ sorry..
02:26:385 (1) - ^ sorry..
02:29:628 (1) - ^ sorry..
02:53:547 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - need more NC? i think not..
Seijiro's Hard
OD -1 , HP +1?? and need correct distance ;_; ex. 03:16:250 (1,2,3,4)
00:50:304 (3,4,5) - really hard bit. change slider? add 00:50:304 ~ 00:50:608 slider. and add one reverse.
00:54:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - shake slider, and add jump plz. I don't quite understand that... ; _ ; sorry
03:06:115 (1) - blanket? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/985279
03:09:763 (1) - NC

Viva~

updated! thanks!

Last edited by MiniKotoba 2013-09-22T03:16:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

CsavarNat16

340 posts

Joined July 2012

CsavarNat16 2013-09-21T10:26:24+00:00

Uhm.. Just passing by..
The Vocaloid name should go only in tag, don't put it in the title.
Anyway, good luck. ^^

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2013-09-21T18:51:22+00:00

I'll mod this later :3

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2013-09-21T20:30:52+00:00

Hi there! I saw you are a newbie mapper then I will only write suggestion of how to improve your map.

General:

1. Offset: 6.520ms BPM: 148,00
Title: ビバハピ (Viva Happy), also remove Hatsune Miku from the title, it must be in tags.
Artist: Mitchie M (without the dot)
Source: let this space empty, Vocaloid isn't a source anymore, please add into tags.
Tags: Vocaloid, Hatsune Miku, Greatest Idol <- album (and please don't add the commas, lel)
Remove widescreen support because it isn't necessary here, it is just for sbs (with widesize resolution)

Viva

I suppose this diff is a Normal but the patterns looks like as a Easy diff but there are a lot of empty spaces. You should make more 'harder' adding 1/2 notes and 1/4 notes(only if it is necessary and fits there.) because make 1/1 spam notes is kinda boring. "Any example?" sure I have: 00:32:465 - .
About placement of the notes, you must make the diff more beautiful, I just see weird flow and crashing sliders. try to make a slider (same for circles) what don't touch other notes like in 01:39:763 (1,1) - (looks a bit odd if you look well), 01:40:574 (1,1) - this part will look better if you stack 01:42:601 (1) - here in 01:40:574 (1) - 's position. etc etc.
About New Combos, you must use it when the rhythm/sound of the notes changes (downbeat) random NCs can be confusing to play. example: 00:32:466 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - the next new combo will be in 00:38:952 (1) - at 00:40:979 (3) - . use new combo every 3-4 notes approx I suggest in this diff.

I'll continue later ^^ I have things to do for now

MiniKotoba

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MiniKotoba 2013-09-26T14:34:32+00:00

-Cloudchaser wrote:
Hi there! I saw you are a newbie mapper then I will only write suggestion of how to improve your map.

General:
1. Offset: 6.520ms BPM: 148,00
Title: ビバハピ (Viva Happy), also remove Hatsune Miku from the title, it must be in tags.
Artist: Mitchie M (without the dot)
Source: let this space empty, Vocaloid isn't a source anymore, please add into tags.
Tags: Vocaloid, Hatsune Miku, Greatest Idol <- album (and please don't add the commas, lel)
Remove widescreen support because it isn't necessary here, it is just for sbs (with widesize resolution)

Viva
I suppose this diff is a Normal but the patterns looks like as a Easy diff but there are a lot of empty spaces. You should make more 'harder' adding 1/2 notes and 1/4 notes(only if it is necessary and fits there.) because make 1/1 spam notes is kinda boring. "Any example?" sure I have: 00:32:465 - .
About placement of the notes, you must make the diff more beautiful, I just see weird flow and crashing sliders. try to make a slider (same for circles) what don't touch other notes like in 01:39:763 (1,1) - (looks a bit odd if you look well), 01:40:574 (1,1) - this part will look better if you stack 01:42:601 (1) - here in 01:40:574 (1) - 's position. etc etc.
About New Combos, you must use it when the rhythm/sound of the notes changes (downbeat) random NCs can be confusing to play. example: 00:32:466 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - the next new combo will be in 00:38:952 (1) - at 00:40:979 (3) - . use new combo every 3-4 notes approx I suggest in this diff.
I'll continue later ^^ I have things to do for now

Viva is the easy diff~ ; w ;

I'll make my map's flow better.. editing! ; w ;!

Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2013-09-28T04:22:09+00:00

Go go <3

MiniKotoba

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Topic Starter

MiniKotoba 2013-09-28T13:19:05+00:00

Viva and Happy is updated~

Distance checking on hard. update 100% ; w ;

nattap_old

121 posts

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nattap_old 2013-10-05T12:38:40+00:00

ดีครับจาก Q
[Easy]
00:18:277 (3) - ความเห็น : ถ้ายกขึ้นมาที่ y=144 ละก็ 00:16:655 (1,2,3) - จะมีหัวเรียงกันเป็นสามเหลี่ยมด้านเท่าครับ หรือว่าทำให้พาดกลางแบบนี้ http://puu.sh/4I55m.jpg

[Normal]
00:16:250 (1,2) - ไม่ควรมี Anti Jump ครับเดี๋ยวคนเล่นหัวทิ่ม
02:03:682 (1,2,3,4) -ทำให้ 1,2 กะ 3,4 อยู่ตรงข้ามกันพอดี ที่ x=88 y=ตามใจครับ แล้วก็ย้าย 02:06:115 (1) ตาม Distance Snap ครับ
แนะนำให้เป็นแบบนี้ http://puu.sh/4I4w0 จุดคือ 336,136 256,232 176,136
02:13:006 (3,1) - อย่า Anti Jump ใน Normal ดีกว่านะครับ
02:17:871 (1,1,1) - ทำเป็น Etna Slider แบบนี้ http://puu.sh/4I4Qo.jpg
02:24:358 (1) - ความเห็นเฉยๆ : ลองให้หัวของมันเป็น Soft Hitsound ครับ
03:21:115 (1,2,3,4,5) - ทำเป็นรูป 5 เหลี่ยมดีกว่าไหมครับ จะดูสวยขึ้น http://puu.sh/4I4Zp.jpg

[Hard]
01:13:817 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - มันเป็นก้อนเลยครับ แก้หน่อย
02:55:169 (1,2,3,4) - เลือก 4 เม็ดนี้แล้วกด Ctrl+H มันจะได้ไม่ทับกับ Slider อันก่อน
02:52:736 (1,1,2) - อย่าเอาหัวไปทับกันเลยครับ มันจะดูแปลก
ไม่มีจุดพลาดอะไรมากแต่ คุณภาพดิฟนี้มันแปลกๆ
มันอธิบายยากอยู่ มันดูออกแข็งๆ ตรงๆ เกินไป ขาดความโค้งอะครับ และ วงกลมไม่น่าอยู่ในเส้นตรงเดียวกันบ่อยเกินไปนะ

ก็ดีครับ
แล้วทำไมตอนฟังครั้งแรกรู้สึกเหมือนมันร้อง ปีโป้ ฟระ

MiniKotoba

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MiniKotoba 2013-10-05T13:42:11+00:00

nattap wrote:
ดีครับจาก Q
[Easy]
00:18:277 (3) - ความเห็น : ถ้ายกขึ้นมาที่ y=144 ละก็ 00:16:655 (1,2,3) - จะมีหัวเรียงกันเป็นสามเหลี่ยมด้านเท่าครับ หรือว่าทำให้พาดกลางแบบนี้ http://puu.sh/4I55m.jpg

[Normal]
00:16:250 (1,2) - ไม่ควรมี Anti Jump ครับเดี๋ยวคนเล่นหัวทิ่ม
02:03:682 (1,2,3,4) -ทำให้ 1,2 กะ 3,4 อยู่ตรงข้ามกันพอดี ที่ x=88 y=ตามใจครับ แล้วก็ย้าย 02:06:115 (1) ตาม Distance Snap ครับ
แนะนำให้เป็นแบบนี้ http://puu.sh/4I4w0 จุดคือ 336,136 256,232 176,136
02:13:006 (3,1) - อย่า Anti Jump ใน Normal ดีกว่านะครับ
02:17:871 (1,1,1) - ทำเป็น Etna Slider แบบนี้ http://puu.sh/4I4Qo.jpg
02:24:358 (1) - ความเห็นเฉยๆ : ลองให้หัวของมันเป็น Soft Hitsound ครับ
03:21:115 (1,2,3,4,5) - ทำเป็นรูป 5 เหลี่ยมดีกว่าไหมครับ จะดูสวยขึ้น http://puu.sh/4I4Zp.jpg

[Hard]
01:13:817 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - มันเป็นก้อนเลยครับ แก้หน่อย
02:55:169 (1,2,3,4) - เลือก 4 เม็ดนี้แล้วกด Ctrl+H มันจะได้ไม่ทับกับ Slider อันก่อน
02:52:736 (1,1,2) - อย่าเอาหัวไปทับกันเลยครับ มันจะดูแปลก
ไม่มีจุดพลาดอะไรมากแต่ คุณภาพดิฟนี้มันแปลกๆ
มันอธิบายยากอยู่ มันดูออกแข็งๆ ตรงๆ เกินไป ขาดความโค้งอะครับ และ วงกลมไม่น่าอยู่ในเส้นตรงเดียวกันบ่อยเกินไปนะ

ก็ดีครับ
แล้วทำไมตอนฟังครั้งแรกรู้สึกเหมือนมันร้อง ปีโป้ ฟระ

แก้หมดแล้วฮะ ขอบคุณมาก > w <

Jaxalotl

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Jaxalotl 2013-10-05T14:33:41+00:00

Happy

00:17:466 Add a circle here for flow
02:11:993 Here 02:12:804 Here 02:13:209 Here add circles cause it sounds so much better and to the same in on each red tick like before until you get to here 02:22:736

MiniKotoba

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Topic Starter

MiniKotoba 2013-10-06T03:47:07+00:00

Thor wrote:
Happy
00:17:466 Add a circle here for flow - fixed
02:11:993 Here 02:12:804 Here 02:13:209 Here add circles cause it sounds so much better and to the same in on each red tick like before until you get to here 02:22:736 - sorry, i think it's too hard to play..

Sallad4ever

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Sallad4ever 2013-10-06T04:31:30+00:00

Halo there

General

The spacing on Happy diff is inconsistent. The first part of the map (00:06:520 - 00:17:162) have a spacing of 0.7x while the later part are 0.8x (ex: 00:36:115 (1) - ) and some are even 0.9x (ex: 00:32:466 (1) - ). Go through Happy diff then make all the spacing to be consistent choose either 0.8x or 0.9x as the spacing. (I recommend 0.9x)
Try to use only 4 color for the slider/circle, 8 color is too redundant and unnecessary.

Viva

Some Spacing errors
1. 00:39:358 (2) - The spacing is too far, reduce it
2. 00:45:439 (1) - ^
3. 01:08:142 (1) - The spacing is too close to the previous note, make it far a bit
4. 01:01:655 (2) - ^ or maybe you can just stack it to 01:01:655 (2)
5. 01:15:844 (2) - ^ You can squeeze the slider so it fit the 0.8x spacing that you used
6. 01:40:574 (1) - The spacing is too far from the previous note, reduce it a bit
7. 01:40:574 (1) - Spacing too close to prev note
8. 01:49:088 (1) - Spacing too far from the prev note
9. 02:27:601 (1,2,3) - ~~The spacing of these notes is too damn high~~ Use 0.8x spacing for these notes
00:45:439 (1) - Try to make this curve slider with less anchor point. Here's some example, here's the code if you want it
```
200,312,45439,6,0,B|136:264|120:192|136:120|200:72,1,280
```
00:47:061 (1) - You can copy the previous slider to make it the same
00:48:682 (1) - Hmm please use a different shape, the current one look too rigid it's bad. Maybe use a simple wave slider? ofc you can use your own idea, just change it from the current one
00:55:574 (1,1,2) - This rhythm as just to lacking and very confusing (cause it doesn't really follow anything). I recommend to change to rhythm below

Starting from 00:54:966 to 00:58:209, they are on the red tick (aka 1/2 beat) but it's mostly slider and it follows lyric so it's not too hard for newbie player
01:02:871 (3) - Avoid using double hitsound, it's too loud and it can even over power the music. Remove one hitsound from this note
01:03:277 (4) - Same as above but it's on the slider end
01:04:898 (1) - The slider overlapped with the previous one, move it into another position
01:04:898 (1) - And, it's another very rigid looking slider, maybe change into something like this?
01:23:952 - Hmm maybe add a circle here?
01:43:006 (2,1) - Bad overlap can you move them so they won't overlap like that? or even better is to make it like this here
01:46:250 (3) - Remove the clap. You can also lower the sound of this note to further synch it with the music (40% volume is good). I trust you know how to do it right?
02:03:682 (1,1,2) - Same as 00:55:574 (1,1,2). Use the rhythm I recommend there
02:47:061 (1,2,3,4) - The previous rhythm are already mostly on white ticks (aka 1/1 beat) so try to spice this part a bit more. I recommend something like this

I basically use sliders first to let player familiarize with the rhythm, then use circle to follow the lyric
02:50:304 - A blank space here is too sudden. Use spinner if you can't use slider/circle but try to make it long enough. Maybe start the circle from 02:50:304 to 02:51:925 (you have to delete 02:51:925 (1) though) then add circle on 02:52:736, that will give enough time for player
02:55:979 (4) - Remove the clap, finish is enough
02:56:790 (1) - The spinner doesn't really fit with the "bomb" sound on the music. Circle with finish is more suitable here.
I have to say, the last kiai is rather anti-climax with how it mostly use long slider repeat, while the previous 2 kiai section are more diverse on the note. The last part of this song is kinda like the last spurt right before the finish so try to make it more exciting then the previous 2 kiai. I'm sure you know how but if you have difficulties, I can help you if you wantThis is it for now I'll comeback later to mod the other diff

Kinda tired cause I haven't mod for so long ; w ;

Edit: Continuation

Happy

As I said on the General section, fix the inconsistent spacing on the first part of the map (before the first break)
Avoid using double hitsound it's too loud, use either one of them. Here are some of then
1. 00:35:709 (3) - Finish without whistle sounds good
2. 00:36:115 (1) - Remove the finish on the end of the slider
3. 00:36:925 (2) - ^
4. 00:40:574 (3) - Change to whistle only
5. 00:44:628 (3) - Change the hitsound to whistle then add finish on 00:45:439 (1) there's a finish sound on the music so this place is more suitable with finish hitsound
6. There are a lot more so please got through all of them and remove the double/triple hitsound
00:44:628 (3,1,2) - Bad overlap, try to change the direction of 00:45:844 (2) or maybe you can try something like this
00:55:574 - Same as the one in Viva diff. Try to add more note to make it more easy to follow.
00:59:223 (1) - This spinner would sounds sooooo much better with finish
01:40:574 (1,2) - A little bit overlapped by the previous notes. It'll look more neat if you can move them to other position
01:56:182 - This place could use the same notes as 00:48:074 (3), they have similar rhythm so why not use similar note?
01:59:223 - This one should have the same note as 00:51:115 (3,4)
02:03:682 - Same as 00:55:574
02:07:331 (1) - End this spinner on 02:08:142 then add a break section to fill the blank space
02:23:142 - The lyric in this section is so catchy, it should be mapped. A simple 1/1 circles is enough, or if you want to make it more accurate use a 1/2 beat slider repeat like this one below
02:48:682 (1) - Start this spinner at 02:50:304 then end it on 02:51:925, after that add circle on 02:52:331 & 02:52:736 (You have to delete 02:51:115 (1) first). Don't forget to fill the blank space after you move the spinner
02:56:790 (1) - Circle with finish works better than spinner
03:11:790 - Same as 02:23:142
03:23:142 (1) - This spinner sounds better if it's on 03:24:561. Don't forget to shorten the spinner if you move it. (Do this for Viva diff too)

seijiro's Hard

Ah.... I see why someone mention this is and old school mapping style, short distance snap with the majority of the notes are circles. Just so you know there's nothing wrong with it :3
Spacing issue
- There are soooooo many spacing error in this diff. Please go through all of them and fix them to the distance spacing that you used (which is 0.7x) below are some of them:
1. 00:33:479 (3) - Unintuitive spacing, fix it
2. 01:09:561 (1) - This is a strange place for a jump or is it a spacing error? if it is please fix it
3. 01:14:628 (1) - Spacing is too close to the prev note
4. 01:43:817 (1) - Spacing is too close to the prev note
5. 01:47:061 (1) - Spacing is too far from the prev note
6. 01:57:601 (3) - ^
00:26:385 (1,2,3) - These circles is overlapped by the previous slider, please move it somewhere else
01:22:736 (1,2,3,1) - This jump would be better if they have the same distance. Currently 01:23:952 (1) is farther than the rest, so I suggest to make all of 01:22:736 (1,2,3,1) to use 1.5x as the spacing distance
02:08:547 (1) - You can start this spinner on 02:08:243 so the spinner start following the lyric
02:52:331 - Add circle here
02:52:736 (1) - This doesn't work.There aren't any beat after 02:52:736 so the 3/4 slider repeat is redundant and sounds awkward. Remove it or change it into a single circle
02:56:790 (1) - Same as on the other 2 diffs above
03:06:115 (1) - Use finish for the slider end, instead of whistle
03:23:142 (1) - Same as the above diff

OK that's all from me, good luck with the map~
I have to say that the song is quite catchy (Kabaddi lol)

MiniKotoba

95 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

MiniKotoba 2013-10-06T15:05:19+00:00

Sallad4ever wrote:
Halo there

General
The spacing on Happy diff is inconsistent. The first part of the map (00:06:520 - 00:17:162) have a spacing of 0.7x while the later part are 0.8x (ex: 00:36:115 (1) - ) and some are even 0.9x (ex: 00:32:466 (1) - ). Go through Happy diff then make all the spacing to be consistent choose either 0.8x or 0.9x as the spacing. (I recommend 0.9x)
Try to use only 4 color for the slider/circle, 8 color is too redundant and unnecessary.
Viva
Some Spacing errors
00:39:358 (2) - The spacing is too far, reduce it
00:45:439 (1) - ^
01:08:142 (1) - The spacing is too close to the previous note, make it far a bit
01:01:655 (2) - ^ or maybe you can just stack it to 01:01:655 (2)
01:15:844 (2) - ^ You can squeeze the slider so it fit the 0.8x spacing that you used
01:40:574 (1) - The spacing is too far from the previous note, reduce it a bit
01:40:574 (1) - Spacing too close to prev note
01:49:088 (1) - Spacing too far from the prev note
02:27:601 (1,2,3) - ~~The spacing of these notes is too damn high~~ Use 0.8x spacing for these notes
00:45:439 (1) - Try to make this curve slider with less anchor point. Here's some example, here's the code if you want it
200,312,45439,6,0,B|136:264|120:192|136:120|200:72,1,280
00:47:061 (1) - You can copy the previous slider to make it the same
00:48:682 (1) - Hmm please use a different shape, the current one look too rigid it's bad. Maybe use a simple wave slider? ofc you can use your own idea, just change it from the current one
00:55:574 (1,1,2) - This rhythm as just to lacking and very confusing (cause it doesn't really follow anything). I recommend to change to rhythm below

Starting from 00:54:966 to 00:58:209, they are on the red tick (aka 1/2 beat) but it's mostly slider and it follows lyric so it's not too hard for newbie player
01:02:871 (3) - Avoid using double hitsound, it's too loud and it can even over power the music. Remove one hitsound from this note
01:03:277 (4) - Same as above but it's on the slider end
01:04:898 (1) - The slider overlapped with the previous one, move it into another position
01:04:898 (1) - And, it's another very rigid looking slider, maybe change into something like this?
01:23:952 - Hmm maybe add a circle here?
01:43:006 (2,1) - Bad overlap can you move them so they won't overlap like that? or even better is to make it like this here
01:46:250 (3) - Remove the clap. You can also lower the sound of this note to further synch it with the music (40% volume is good). I trust you know how to do it right?
02:03:682 (1,1,2) - Same as 00:55:574 (1,1,2). Use the rhythm I recommend there
02:47:061 (1,2,3,4) - The previous rhythm are already mostly on white ticks (aka 1/1 beat) so try to spice this part a bit more. I recommend something like this

I basically use sliders first to let player familiarize with the rhythm, then use circle to follow the lyric
02:50:304 - A blank space here is too sudden. Use spinner if you can't use slider/circle but try to make it long enough. Maybe start the circle from 02:50:304 to 02:51:925 (you have to delete 02:51:925 (1) though) then add circle on 02:52:736, that will give enough time for player
02:55:979 (4) - Remove the clap, finish is enough
02:56:790 (1) - The spinner doesn't really fit with the "bomb" sound on the music. Circle with finish is more suitable here.
I have to say, the last kiai is rather anti-climax with how it mostly use long slider repeat, while the previous 2 kiai section are more diverse on the note. The last part of this song is kinda like the last spurt right before the finish so try to make it more exciting then the previous 2 kiai. I'm sure you know how but if you have difficulties, I can help you if you wantThis is it for now I'll comeback later to mod the other diff
Kinda tired cause I haven't mod for so long ; w ;

Edit: Continuation

Happy
As I said on the General section, fix the inconsistent spacing on the first part of the map (before the first break)
Avoid using double hitsound it's too loud, use either one of them. Here are some of then
00:35:709 (3) - Finish without whistle sounds good
00:36:115 (1) - Remove the finish on the end of the slider
00:36:925 (2) - ^
00:40:574 (3) - Change to whistle only
00:44:628 (3) - Change the hitsound to whistle then add finish on 00:45:439 (1) there's a finish sound on the music so this place is more suitable with finish hitsound
There are a lot more so please got through all of them and remove the double/triple hitsound
00:44:628 (3,1,2) - Bad overlap, try to change the direction of 00:45:844 (2) or maybe you can try something like this
00:55:574 - Same as the one in Viva diff. Try to add more note to make it more easy to follow.
00:59:223 (1) - This spinner would sounds sooooo much better with finish
01:40:574 (1,2) - A little bit overlapped by the previous notes. It'll look more neat if you can move them to other position
01:56:182 - This place could use the same notes as 00:48:074 (3), they have similar rhythm so why not use similar note?
01:59:223 - This one should have the same note as 00:51:115 (3,4)
02:03:682 - Same as 00:55:574
02:07:331 (1) - End this spinner on 02:08:142 then add a break section to fill the blank space
02:23:142 - The lyric in this section is so catchy, it should be mapped. A simple 1/1 circles is enough, or if you want to make it more accurate use a 1/2 beat slider repeat like this one below
02:48:682 (1) - Start this spinner at 02:50:304 then end it on 02:51:925, after that add circle on 02:52:331 & 02:52:736 (You have to delete 02:51:115 (1) first). Don't forget to fill the blank space after you move the spinner
02:56:790 (1) - Circle with finish works better than spinner
03:11:790 - Same as 02:23:142
03:23:142 (1) - This spinner sounds better if it's on 03:24:561. Don't forget to shorten the spinner if you move it. (Do this for Viva diff too)
seijiro's Hard
Ah.... I see why someone mention this is and old school mapping style, short distance snap with the majority of the notes are circles. Just so you know there's nothing wrong with it :3
Spacing issue
There are soooooo many spacing error in this diff. Please go through all of them and fix them to the distance spacing that you used (which is 0.7x) below are some of them:
00:33:479 (3) - Unintuitive spacing, fix it
01:09:561 (1) - This is a strange place for a jump or is it a spacing error? if it is please fix it
01:14:628 (1) - Spacing is too close to the prev note
01:43:817 (1) - Spacing is too close to the prev note
01:47:061 (1) - Spacing is too far from the prev note
01:57:601 (3) - ^
00:26:385 (1,2,3) - These circles is overlapped by the previous slider, please move it somewhere else
01:22:736 (1,2,3,1) - This jump would be better if they have the same distance. Currently 01:23:952 (1) is farther than the rest, so I suggest to make all of 01:22:736 (1,2,3,1) to use 1.5x as the spacing distance
02:08:547 (1) - You can start this spinner on 02:08:243 so the spinner start following the lyric
02:52:331 - Add circle here
02:52:736 (1) - This doesn't work.There aren't any beat after 02:52:736 so the 3/4 slider repeat is redundant and sounds awkward. Remove it or change it into a single circle
02:56:790 (1) - Same as on the other 2 diffs above
03:06:115 (1) - Use finish for the slider end, instead of whistle
03:23:142 (1) - Same as the above diff
OK that's all from me, good luck with the map~
I have to say that the song is quite catchy (Kabaddi lol)

~~editting... viva completed~~

All fixed~ thanks!

RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-10-10T14:54:12+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

you shold add guest name ("seijiro") for tags

[Viva]

00:39:358 (2,2) - avoid overlap
01:16:250 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:47:061 (1,1) - stack
01:47:466 (2,2) - avoid overlap
02:00:844 (2) - because straight sliders are too many, I suggest to change it for curve slider
02:14:628 (1) - ^

02:24:358 (1,2,3) - awkward, i think. how about this?

SPOILER

208,92,144358,6,2,B|132:144|132:144|132:240|132:240|208:292,1,280
256,192,145574,1,10,0:0:0:0:
308,92,145979,2,2,B|384:144|384:144|384:240|384:240|308:292,1,280

02:50:304 (6) - NC
03:19:493 (1) - it is better to make the knotch larger like this (if you want to uniform DS, Ctrl+J)
SPOILER
```
144,236,199493,6,0,B|232:216|304:192|404:124|320:8|192:8|108:124|208:192|280:216|
```

[Happy]

I think that straight sliders are too many. it is better to exchange some of them for curve sliders
00:54:561~00:54:966- I prefer to add a slider
00:59:223 (1) - For normal-diff, this sppiner is too short
01:45:439 (2) - Ctrl+G (smoother cursor moving)
01:51:925 (2) - ^
02:02:669~02:03:074- I prefer to add a slider
02:07:331 (1) - For normal-diff, this sppiner is too short

[seijiro's Hard]

00:20:608 (5) - move to x:276 y:344
00:22:331 (10) - move to x:258 y:144 (stack correctly)
00:28:817 (9) - move to x:274 y:192 (stack correctly)
01:09:561 (1) - it is better to change for a slider: 01:09:561~01:09:966
01:22:533- add a note
01:52:736 (7) - I prefer to change for a circle at 01:52:736 (and add finish)
02:05:912- add a note and NC
02:23:142 (6,1) - avoid overlap

Good star skinning

that suits to this song very much!

~Good Luck~

MiniKotoba

95 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

MiniKotoba 2013-10-13T04:05:46+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[General]
you shold add guest name ("seijiro") for tags
[Viva]
00:39:358 (2,2) - avoid overlap
01:16:250 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:47:061 (1,1) - stack
01:47:466 (2,2) - avoid overlap
02:00:844 (2) - because straight sliders are too many, I suggest to change it for curve slider
02:14:628 (1) - ^
02:24:358 (1,2,3) - awkward, i think. how about this?
SPOILER
208,92,144358,6,2,B|132:144|132:144|132:240|132:240|208:292,1,280
256,192,145574,1,10,0:0:0:0:
308,92,145979,2,2,B|384:144|384:144|384:240|384:240|308:292,1,280
02:50:304 (6) - NC
03:19:493 (1) - it is better to make the knotch larger like this (if you want to uniform DS, Ctrl+J)
SPOILER
144,236,199493,6,0,B|232:216|304:192|404:124|320:8|192:8|108:124|208:192|280:216|
[Happy]
I think that straight sliders are too many. it is better to exchange some of them for curve sliders
00:54:561~00:54:966- I prefer to add a slider
00:59:223 (1) - For normal-diff, this sppiner is too short I think it's okay..?
01:45:439 (2) - Ctrl+G (smoother cursor moving)
01:51:925 (2) - ^
02:02:669~02:03:074- I prefer to add a slider
02:07:331 (1) - For normal-diff, this sppiner is too short I think it's okay..?
[seijiro's Hard]
00:20:608 (5) - move to x:276 y:344
00:22:331 (10) - move to x:258 y:144 (stack correctly)
00:28:817 (9) - move to x:274 y:192 (stack correctly)
01:09:561 (1) - it is better to change for a slider: 01:09:561~01:09:966
01:22:533- add a note
01:52:736 (7) - I prefer to change for a circle at 01:52:736 (and add finish)
02:05:912- add a note and NC
02:23:142 (6,1) - avoid overlap
Good star skinning
that suits to this song very much!

~Good Luck~

All fixed!

Bara-

11,955 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2013-10-15T16:26:13+00:00

My Map, which was requested in my queue, is done. It is Insane

Hitsounds can be too loud, if you're using standard skin hitsound
Don't forget to put my name in the tags

If something went wrong, PM me
I'm Subscribed to this map, so I see every mod, you don't need to PM me if I recieved a mod

osu file format v12

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Mode: 0
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TitleUnicode:ビバハピ
Artist:Mitchie M
ArtistUnicode:Mitchie M
Creator:pochamin
Version:Baraatje123's Insane
Source:
Tags:Hatsune Miku Vocaloid Greatest Idol seijiro Baraatje123
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256,128,186520,2,0,P|336:96|472:264,1,300.000011444092
328,240,187128,2,0,P|248:272|112:104,1,300.000011444092
416,80,187939,6,0,P|440:160|432:240,1,150.000005722046
416,80,188344,2,0,P|392:160|400:240,1,150.000005722046
248,192,188750,2,0,B|248:40|248:40|248:192,1,300.000011444092
104,192,189358,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,344,189561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,344,189763,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,40,190169,5,8,0:0:0:0:
104,40,190372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,190574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,192,190979,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,40,191182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,191384,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,344,191790,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,344,191993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,192,192195,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,344,192398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,344,192601,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,344,192804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,192,193006,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,192,193412,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,193615,2,8,L|-56:192,1,300.000011444092
208,40,194425,2,0,P|304:96|304:304,1,300.000011444092
32,192,195236,6,0,L|112:112,1,75.0000028610231
136,192,195439,2,0,L|200:256,1,75.0000028610231
248,192,195642,2,0,L|304:136,1,75.0000028610231
352,192,195844,2,0,L|408:248,1,75.0000028610231
104,192,196250,5,0,0:0:0:0:
408,192,196656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,196859,2,0,L|568:192,1,300.000011444092
304,344,197669,2,0,P|208:288|208:80,1,300.000011444092
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176,192,199898,2,0,B|176:88|176:88|80:88,1,150.000005722046
16,192,200304,2,0,B|16:296|16:296|112:296,1,150.000005722046
352,208,200912,1,2,0:0:0:0:
502,186,201115,6,0,P|391:95|256:144,1,300.000011444092
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246,272,203344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
283,272,203445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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440,32,204662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,32,204763,5,2,0:0:0:0:
328,32,204966,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,32,205169,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,32,205371,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,32,205574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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74,32,205675,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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37,32,205776,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,45,205827,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,64,205878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,83,205928,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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dennischan

454 posts

Joined June 2013

dennischan 2013-10-31T09:36:22+00:00

General
Nice skin; and also difficulty spread is quite good.

Viva

00:08:142 (2) - move it to 00:07:939; the "kyun" note is there
00:16:655 (1,2) - move forward one beat maybe
add slider with 00:40:777 as start and 00:41:182 as end; to keep consistent style
00:48:074 - the music suggests a repeat slider here 00:48:479 -
00:51:317 - 00:51:723 - the same
01:53:547 (1,2,1,2) - too much straight line sliders

Happy

01:02:466 (2,3,4) - move forward half beat
01:05:709 (2,3,4) - same
01:12:398 - add note here
01:12:601 - here too
01:13:006 (3) - move forward half beat
01:15:439 (2,3,4) - same
01:18:682 (2,3,4) - same
01:55:979 (5) - same
02:02:466 (4) - same
02:13:412 (1) - shorten by half a beat and move backward(to the right) half a beat
02:16:655 (1) - same
02:26:385 (1) - same
02:29:628 (1) - same

sejiro's hard

Too less notes in general
HP drain is also not appropriate
you should make it lower
00:02:669 (1) - I think this spinner should be deleted for consistency
00:06:115 (1) - delete this
00:31:250 (7) - why not four circles
00:35:709 (1) - I think there should be return sliders for each kabadi note
00:42:196 (1) - same
00:52:736 (1,2,3) - why only three notes
00:54:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think you should map with the kimimi notes and keep pace with the music
01:03:885 (3,4,5) - where did the "churuchuchu" go
01:07:128 (3,4,5) - same
01:16:858 (3,4,5) - same
01:20:101 (3,4,5) - same
01:46:250 (7) - there should be a slider instead to illustrate miku falling

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

theramdans 2013-11-09T12:19:28+00:00

hi m4m

Viva

I suppose this is an easy diff so here is my thought: AR 5 is too fast for an Easy, use AR4 or AR3
00:08:952 (3) - [40||368]
00:09:763 (1) - [148||176]
00:10:574 (2) - [288||64]
00:19:493 - start the break section here (you can drag it)
00:43:817 (2) - [328||240]
00:56:182 (2) - [132||144]
01:02:871 (3) - [260||200]
01:10:979 (3) - [184||236]
01:15:844 (2,3,1) - why so sudden spacing inconsistency, it is bad for Easy, fix it.
01:27:601 - start the break section here (you can drag it)
01:45:439 (2) - [260||308]
01:49:088 - add a circle here
02:18:682 (2) - [308||60]
02:23:142 - this part is empty, fill it with sliders maybe
02:27:601 (1) - so sudden spacing change [128||156]
02:37:331 - start the break section here (you can drag it)
03:00:033 - same^
03:08:142 (3) - [160||276]
03:14:223 (2) - so sudden spacing change [240||176]

I suggest you hitsound those slider ticks during the kiai with a clap sound, it really fits the song ^^

Normal

I dont know, but the sv in this diff is same with Easy, which is supposed to be different,usually.
00:10:574 (2,3) - [180||256]
00:13:006 (1) - maybe you should replace this slider with a new one, it makes the spacing messy (prev 1.23)
00:17:466 (3) - [44||296]
00:19:493 - start the break section here (you can drag it)
00:34:493 - add a circle
00:36:925 (2) - [224||84]
00:38:952 (1) - [204||264]
00:40:574 (3) - [440||120)
00:40:979 - add a circle here
00:54:358 (3) - stack with 1
00:56:182 (3,4,5) - [88||152]
01:03:277 (3) - [256||228]
01:03:277 (4,1) - [184||144]
01:05:709 (2) - [20||332]
01:12:601 (3) - [292||304]
01:13:006 (3) - [408||336]
01:16:655 (4,1) - [268||132]
01:18:682 (2) - [452||24]
01:22:736 (1) - remove NC, [0||332]
01:27:196 - start the break section here (you can drag it)
01:40:574 (1) - [304||132]
01:45:439 - ctrl + g
01:47:061 (1) - [280||16]
01:49:088 (1) - [228||232]
01:49:493 (2) - ctrl + . and then [288||136]
01:51:925 (2) -[184||128]
02:12:196 (2) - [392||240]
02:13:006 (3,1) - [280||248]
02:14:628 (1) - [392||240]
02:16:655 (1) - way too far [220||128]
02:18:682 - 02:21:115 - why is everything 0.68~0.69 suddenly? keep at 0.8
02:23:142 (1) - [144||132]
02:26:385 (1,1) - STOP jumping like this pls
02:27:601 (1) - [464||152]
02:30:844 (1) - [192||152]
02:32:466 (2) - [164||208]
02:37:331 - start the break section here (you can drag it)
02:48:277 (3) - [264||320]
02:52:736 (2) - [180||272]
03:00:033 - start the break section here (you can drag it)
03:16:250 (1) - [20||264]
03:21:115 (1) - STOP jumping like this pls, fix it

urgh I am tired, hope these help!

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2013-11-09T14:04:47+00:00

Hi，pochamin。From popner's modding team.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Difficulty illegible.Proposed reference ranked map to mapping.

[Viva] Notice: Why is AR5 ? Too quickly,suggest AR2 or 3(recommend).(Because it is easy

mode.)(unrankable) and DS. SV speed is 0.80~1.00x.

SPOILER

00:09:763 (1) - This DS have a bit problem,0.7x? (Should 0.8x)
00:34:898 (2) - Slider end should add whistle? (Because 00:32:871 (2) have added.)
00:38:952 (1) - Please put another location,beacuse it can"t hit the Hp Bar. (unrankable)
00:42:601 (1) - Blanket (2)
00:50:304 (2) - Move to (296|200),blanket.
00:56:182 (2) - Move to (132|145),make good pattern.
01:01:655 (2) - DS. Shouldn't place here to make a pattern,read hard.
01:09:763 (2) - DS
01:17:871 (1) - ^
01:40:979 (2,2) - Try to do symmetric?
02:04:290 (2) - Move to (285|201),make good pattern.
02:27:601 (1) - DS.
02:30:844 (1) - DS.
03:09:358 (1) - Blanket 03:08:142 (3) slider head.
03:13:006 (1) - DS,(480|288).

[Happy] AR+1~2 OD+1 SV is shouldn"t the same with viva diff. Notice DS.

SPOILER

00:06:520 (1) - Please put another location,beacuse it can"t hit the Hp Bar. (unrankable)
00:17:770 (1) - Start should place 00:18:074. End at 00:19:493
00:43:817 (2) - Slider head stack 00:42:196 (3) .
00:45:844 (2) - Blanket(3).
00:48:074 (3) - Don"t overlap (2). Pattern is not good.
00:51:723 (4) - Unrankable. Please place down.
00:52:736 (1) - Please put another location,beacuse it can"t hit the Hp Bar. (unrankable)
00:53:547 (2) - Unrankable. Please place down.
00:56:182 (3,4,5) - Stack a lot.
00:57:601 (4) - Move to white line.
01:03:885 (1) - DS,it is read hard.
01:17:871 (1) - ^
01:47:061 (1) - DS,place so far.
01:53:547 (1) - DS,it is read hard.
02:06:115 (2) - Slider head move to 02:06:317,02:06:115 (2) add note.
02:14:628 (1) - DS,place so far.
02:16:655 (1) - DS
02:17:871 (1) - ^
02:19:493 (3) - ^
02:23:142 (1) - Too many exhumation
02:48:277 (3) - DS
03:21:115 (1) - DS
03:24:561 (1) - Spinner end sound should add a green line 10% volume? (Feel shouldn"t have sound.)

[seijiro's Hard] AR+1 OD+2

I checked this diff for a while.
I dont like this mapping style.
Find that you spent a lot of circle, a bit slider.This mapping style is 2009~2010, too old.
Maybe you should turn mapping style on this diff. You can put more sliders.
Proposed reference ranked map to mapping.
Good Luck.

[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you improved.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

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