KOTOKO - Sakura no Ame Moegi no yo

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From my queue~
thanks for M4M!

[General]
  1. Romanised Title: "Sakura no Ame Moegi no Yo"
  2. mp3: outro is too long. I recommend to cut appropriately

[Normal]
  1. 01:41:880- remove whistle
  2. 01:43:531- add whistle
  3. 01:44:081- remove whistle
  4. 02:27:017 (3,4) - I prefer to change for 1 slider
  5. 02:45:463- add a note?
  6. 03:14:907- whistle is necessary?

[Hard]
  1. According to AI-Mod, Object isn't snapped!
  2. 00:35:549 (1) - how about moving to x:272 y:242 (you can make star-pattern)
  3. 00:44:357- I prefer to add a note
  4. 00:53:438 (1) - curve slider is better
  5. 01:06:100 (7,8) - I prefer to change for 1 slider
  6. 01:15:457 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this pyramid-pattern looks awkward. how about this?

    393,135,75457,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    324,176,75733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    393,215,76008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    324,254,76283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    393,295,76558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,216,77109,5,0,0:0:0:0:
  7. 01:22:063~01:24:265- I suggest to reduce SV
  8. 01:41:604 (1) - move whistle from it to 01:41:880
  9. 01:50:412- add a note
  10. 01:57:430 (1) - whistle is necessary?
  11. 02:16:834- I prefer to add a note
  12. 02:53:989 (4,5,6) - I suggest to unifrom DS to 1.45x, and you can make star-pattern
  13. 03:18:760 (4) - I prefer the slider: 03:18:485~03:18:760
  14. 03:35:274~03:36:100- it is better to add someting note (I prefer 1/4 beat rolling)
  15. 04:00:320- add a note


Nice KOTOKO~ :)
~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Losertic

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
thanks for M4M!

[General]
  1. Romanised Title: "Sakura no Ame Moegi no Yo" →

    Umm. wait.
    Title: Accel World ED Single - unfinished
    Artist: KOTOKO

    Tracklist:
    1. unfinished
    2. Sakura no Ame Moegi no yo <<
    3. unfinished (Instrumental)
    4. Sakura no Ame Moegi no yo (Instrumental)
  2. mp3: outro is too long. I recommend to cut appropriately → uh, but. not cut Original-song File ;_;

[Normal]
  1. 01:41:880- remove whistle → Fixed.
  2. 01:43:531- add whistle → Fixed.
  3. 01:44:081- remove whistle → Fixed.
  4. 02:27:017 (3,4) - I prefer to change for 1 slider → i think its' too hard
  5. 02:45:463- add a note? → I think.. umm. it's follow boom- sound
  6. 03:14:907- whistle is necessary? → remove whistle.

[Hard]
  1. According to AI-Mod, Object isn't snapped! → it's my mistake! fixed
  2. 00:35:549 (1) - how about moving to x:272 y:242 (you can make star-pattern) → i want jump(pattern) this part.
  3. 00:44:357- I prefer to add a note → umm. it's great. but, i like this pattern!
  4. 00:53:438 (1) - curve slider is better → Fixed.
  5. 01:06:100 (7,8) - I prefer to change for 1 slider → Fixed.
  6. 01:15:457 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this pyramid-pattern looks awkward. how about this? → Fixed.

    393,135,75457,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    324,176,75733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    393,215,76008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    324,254,76283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    393,295,76558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,216,77109,5,0,0:0:0:0:
  7. 01:22:063~01:24:265- I suggest to reduce SV → what is SV?
  8. 01:41:604 (1) - move whistle from it to 01:41:880 → Fixed.
  9. 01:50:412- add a note → Ummm.....
  10. 01:57:430 (1) - whistle is necessary? → 01:59:494 (1) - remove whistle hitsound much better!
  11. 02:16:834- I prefer to add a note → yep, same opinion.. l like 5 note!
  12. 02:53:989 (4,5,6) - I suggest to unifrom DS to 1.45x, and you can make star-pattern → maybe it's too hard. because 02:54:265 (5) - this.
  13. 03:18:760 (4) - I prefer the slider: 03:18:485~03:18:760 → oh, i think better this pattern: 03:18:485 ~ 03:18:760 - add note.
  14. 03:35:274~03:36:100- it is better to add someting note (I prefer 1/4 beat rolling) → I like this part. (no note, slider..maybe you know why i like this part)
  15. 04:00:320- add a note → i like better now
Nice KOTOKO~ :)
~Good Luck~
Thank you! ;)
Sun Rainbow
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Topic Starter
Losertic

Sun Rainbow wrote:

http://puu.sh/4Un7j.zip

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Thank you! ;) Fixed!
Hanabi
M4M

[Overall]
Slider Tick Rate -> 2

[Hard]
00:48:485 (4,5,7,8,9,10) - 이런 박자 추천 드려요
00:57:843 (6) - NC
01:03:622 (5) - 써클 제거
01:05:962 (6) - ^
01:11:053 (1,2) - 같은 모양으로 체인지
01:12:430 (5) - 써클 제거
01:16:283 (4,5) - 디스턴스 쳌
01:20:411 (1,2,3) - 조금 넓게 해주세요 -> ctrl + shift + S 한후에 1.3정도로
01:55:916 (5) - NC
02:10:503 (5) - 박자 실수하셨네요
02:16:696 - 02:16:971 노트 추가
02:18:485 - 제거
02:24:815 - 힛사 넣어주세요
02:27:292 - 제거
02:44:907 (5) - ^
02:54:265 (5) - NC
04:11:329 (5) - ^

[Normal]
00:34:724 - 클랩
00:35:824 (1,2,3) - 같은 모양으로 -> ctrl + c,v한후에 120도씩 돌리면 되요
00:42:980 (4) - 이렇세
02:27:843 (5) - 제거04:11:054 (4) - 펴주세여
Topic Starter
Losertic

[ Sana ] wrote:

M4M

[Overall]
Slider Tick Rate -> 2 → 히트사운드를 잘 맞추는 것도 아니고 해서 일단은 '1'개로 냅둘게요.

[Hard]
00:48:485 (4,5,7,8,9,10) - 이런 박자 추천 드려요 → 이건.. insane에서나 어울릴듯한 느낌.. 너무 어려운것 같아요
00:57:843 (6) - NC → 수정 완료.
01:03:622 (5) - 써클 제거 → 퉁 거리는 소리도 나고.. 있는게 더 나을것 같습니다. 그리고 노트 2개, 바로 노트2개는 어려 울듯..
01:05:962 (6) - ^ → 위와 같은 이유이고, 에- 라는 소리가 그 부분에서 나옵니다.
01:11:053 (1,2) - 같은 모양으로 체인지 → 1번슬라이더로 교체 해봤으나...이 둘이는 원래 같은 모양입니다 ㅠ.ㅠ
01:12:430 (5) - 써클 제거 → 위와 같은 이유들 입니다.
01:16:283 (4,5) - 디스턴스 쳌 → 수정 완료. 실수;_;
01:20:411 (1,2,3) - 조금 넓게 해주세요 -> ctrl + shift + S 한후에 1.3정도로 → 수정 완료.
01:55:916 (5) - NC → 수정 완료.
02:10:503 (5) - 박자 실수하셨네요 → 수정 완료.
02:16:696 - 02:16:971 노트 추가 → 이부분은 앞에 있는 것처럼 노트 없는게 나을것 같아요.
02:18:485 - 제거 → 위와 같은 이유 입니다.
02:24:815 - 힛사 넣어주세요 → 슬라이더 틱 1개로 설정해서..
02:27:292 - 제거 → 위와 같은 이유 입니다....
02:44:907 (5) - ^ → 위와 같은 이유 입니다.
02:54:265 (5) - NC → 수정 완료.
04:11:329 (5) - ^ → 수정 완료.

[Normal]
00:34:724 - 클랩 → 수정 완료.
00:35:824 (1,2,3) - 같은 모양으로 -> ctrl + c,v한후에 120도씩 돌리면 되요 → 수정 완료.
00:42:980 (4) - 이렇세 → 수정 완료.
02:27:843 (5) - 제거 → 이부분에 보컬이 들려서 일단은 패스..
04:11:054 (4) - 펴주세여 → 수정 완료.

감사합니다! ;)
Xinchii
Hi ~ from your queue :D

[Normal]
  1. 00:17:109(5,6,1) - set at 180|104 , 280|112 , 380|112 to make more fit the circle flow.


[Hard]
  1. 00:32:522(3,4,5) - make it more curve ? will be smooth during play
  2. 00:49:036(1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part I see you want to follow vocal , but current it feel some strange on 00:49:586(3) - and 00:50:687(6) -
    cus both of them's front two note follow vocal close , but those two just set on durm.
    umm... maybe like this :
    or other patterns that have note on 00:49:448 - and 00:50:594 -
  3. 00:59:769(4,5) - Cus it have a storng vocal on 01:00:045 - ,it really not fit with slider end :<
    I will suggest set slider strat at 01:00:045 - and a note at 00:59:769 -
  4. 01:24:265(4) - maybe a spinner will be great with here :3
  5. 02:18:210(3,4,5,6,7,1) - This will be more fit I think.
    http://puu.sh/53GG0.jpg
    02:19:036 - 02:19:586 - have a speed vocal , my view is it seems more fit with stream than 02:18:210 - 02:18:760 -
  6. 03:32:522(2,3,4) - Bigger spacing with (1) to make it symmetry
  7. 04:03:072(5) - stream contine ? until 04:03:347 -

Good song

Good luck for you !
[ Yuki ]
Hello~

[Normal]
03:31:971 (5) - 180'돌리고, Ctrl+G, x:172,y:208

[Hard]
00:49:035 (1,2) - 슬라이드 어때요? <언랭요소 (맞나?ㅇㅅㅇ;)
00:50:136 (4,5) - ^
00:57:843 (1,2,3) - 리버스 슬라이드 어떨까요? <이유^
02:35:824 (3,4) - ^^
03:46:008 (3,4) - ^
04:03:622 (1,2) - ^
04:08:301 (5,6) - ^

죄송합니다 모딩 잘못해요,,ㅇㅅㅇ;
Good song.. GL
Topic Starter
Losertic

leon1341414 wrote:

Hi ~ from your queue :D

[Normal]
  1. 00:17:109(5,6,1) - set at 180|104 , 280|112 , 380|112 to make more fit the circle flow. → Fixed.


[Hard]
  1. 00:32:522(3,4,5) - make it more curve ? will be smooth during play → 00:32:522 (3) - it's blanket 00:31:145 (5) - this note.
  2. 00:49:036(1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part I see you want to follow vocal , but current it feel some strange on 00:49:586(3) - and 00:50:687(6) -
    cus both of them's front two note follow vocal close , but those two just set on durm.
    umm... maybe like this :
    or other patterns that have note on 00:49:448 - and 00:50:594 - → Fixed.
  3. 00:59:769(4,5) - Cus it have a storng vocal on 01:00:045 - ,it really not fit with slider end :<
    I will suggest set slider strat at 01:00:045 - and a note at 00:59:769 - → Fixed.
  4. 01:24:265(4) - maybe a spinner will be great with here :3 → i think better now. same normal diff! (same break time)
  5. 02:18:210(3,4,5,6,7,1) - This will be more fit I think. → nice
    http://puu.sh/53GG0.jpg
    02:19:036 - 02:19:586 - have a speed vocal , my view is it seems more fit with stream than 02:18:210 - 02:18:760 - → long stream.. it's really hard for "Hard" diff
  6. 03:32:522(2,3,4) - Bigger spacing with (1) to make it symmetry → maybe it's too hard;_;
  7. 04:03:072(5) - stream contine ? until 04:03:347 - → i think better now. and it's too hard

Good song

Good luck for you !
Thank you! ;)


[ Yuki ] wrote:

Hello~

[Normal]
03:31:971 (5) - 180'돌리고, Ctrl+G, x:172,y:208 → 수정 완료.

[Hard]
00:49:035 (1,2) - 슬라이드 어때요? <언랭요소 (맞나?ㅇㅅㅇ;) → 이게 언랭 요소인가요...? 일단 이거 말고 그뒤에 노트 슬라이더로 바꿉니다.
00:50:136 (4,5) - ^ → 위와 동일합니다.
00:57:843 (1,2,3) - 리버스 슬라이드 어떨까요? <이유^ → 보컬에 따라서 갔습니다. 노말도 아니니 괜찮을듯.
02:35:824 (3,4) - ^ → 언랭 요소는 아닐 듯 합니다. 네;.
03:46:008 (3,4) - ^ → 위와 동일합니다.
04:03:622 (1,2) - ^ → 역시..
04:08:301 (5,6) - ^→ ㅜ.ㅜ

죄송합니다 모딩 잘못해요,,ㅇㅅㅇ;
Good song.. GL
감사합니다! ;)
Come[Back]Home
Normal

00:30:320 (4) This Repeat Slider just doesnt makes any sense, Maybe like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072422
00:55:641 (3) Move it to x: 496 y: 148 i think it looks better
03:21:513 (4) Delete 5 and do i like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072432

Hard

00:13:531 (1) Why that distance snap? Maybe use normal Distance snap
00:32:522 (3) Why is here a jump? I cant seem to find anything in the song to make a jump there
00:46:008 Add HC, would fit very nice
00:48:210 ^
00:49:861 ^
00:58:393 ^
01:45:182 (3) Move it to x: 336 y: 240
01:45:733 (4) Move it to x: 280 y: 192
04:08:577 Add HC


Thats all, nice Beatmap for your second *_*
The song is actually really catchy :3
Topic Starter
Losertic

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Normal

00:30:320 (4) This Repeat Slider just doesnt makes any sense, Maybe like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072422 → I think better now. umm...
00:55:641 (3) Move it to x: 496 y: 148 i think it looks better → Fixed (495,153)
03:21:513 (4) Delete 5 and do i lik this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072432 → I tried first map set. but.. i like follow vocal XD

Hard

00:13:531 (1) Why that distance snap? Maybe use normal Distance snap → i think better now. it's hard diff!
00:32:522 (3) Why is here a jump? I cant seem to find anything in the song to make a jump there → ^
00:46:008 Add HC, would fit very nice → Fixed. nice
00:48:210 ^ → Fixed.
00:49:861 ^ → Fixed.
00:58:393 ^ → i think better now. follow vocal + hard pattern!
01:45:182 (3) Move it to x: 336 y: 240 → Fixed.
01:45:733 (4) Move it to x: 280 y: 192 → Fixed.
04:08:577 Add HC → I fixed first map set. maybe it's follow vocal.


Thats all, nice Beatmap for your second *_*
The song is actually really catchy :3
Thank you! ;)
Sonnyc
랜덤 모딩~

Hard:

00:14:081 (4) - 이 부분 리듬 처리도 00:15:182 (6,7) 처럼 하는건 어떨까요?
00:22:613 (3,4) - (3)을 1/4 늘이시고 (4) 삭제해 보세요
00:39:678 (1) - 노트를 2개 넣으시고, 슬라이더는 00:40:228 부터 1/1로 가는게 나을듯요
00:59:769 (4) - 뉴콤 어떨까요
01:01:696 (5) - 여기에서의 피니시는 개인적으로 어색하다고 봐요
01:13:255 (1) - 시작의 피니시 삭제
01:22:063 (1,2) - 음...... 음악이 역동적이지 않기 때문에 개인적으로 이렇게 꼬은 거 보다는 무난하게 sv 속도 줄이는게 어울릴거라고 봅니다.
01:42:705 (4) - 다음 슬라와의 점프가 이상한거 같아요. (316,28) 같은데에 놓는게 나을듯요
02:12:155 (1) - 노트 2개와 02:12:705 부터 슬라이더?
02:19:173 (2) - 이거 삭제하고 02:19:724 에 노트 추가가 더 어울릴듯요
02:24:540 (6,7) - 02:24:540 에 노트 두시고 02:24:815 에 1/1 슬라이더 놓는게 더 어울릴듯요
02:32:246 (1) - 노트 하나 넣으시고 스핀은 02:32:522 부터 하는게 어때요?
02:45:732 (1) - 시작의 피니시 제거
02:54:678 (1) - 피니시
03:31:971 (1) - ctrl+G가 더 일관성 있는 패턴으로 보일듯요
03:34:361 - 브레이크 넣어주세요
04:02:797 (3) - 피니시 제거

괜찮게 만드신 것 같습니다. 스타 받으시고 굳럭하세요~!
Topic Starter
Losertic

Sonnyc wrote:

랜덤 모딩~ ♥♥♥♥

Hard:

00:14:081 (4) - 이 부분 리듬 처리도 00:15:182 (6,7) 처럼 하는건 어떨까요? → 수정 완료.
00:22:613 (3,4) - (3)을 1/4 늘이시고 (4) 삭제해 보세요 → 수정 완료.
00:39:678 (1) - 노트를 2개 넣으시고, 슬라이더는 00:40:228 부터 1/1로 가는게 나을듯요 → 수정 완료.
00:59:769 (4) - 뉴콤 어떨까요 → 수정 완료.
01:01:696 (5) - 여기에서의 피니시는 개인적으로 어색하다고 봐요 → 수정 완료.
01:13:255 (1) - 시작의 피니시 삭제 → 수정 완료.
01:22:063 (1,2) - 음...... 음악이 역동적이지 않기 때문에 개인적으로 이렇게 꼬은 거 보다는 무난하게 sv 속도 줄이는게 어울릴거라고 봅니다. → 글을 보니까 왠지 어색한게 느껴지고 그렇다고 슬라이더 속도를 줄이니 너무 밋밋하고ㅠㅠ 그래서 결론은(...) 일단 놔두겠습니다.
01:42:705 (4) - 다음 슬라와의 점프가 이상한거 같아요. (316,28) 같은데에 놓는게 나을듯요 → 수정 완료.
02:12:155 (1) - 노트 2개와 02:12:705 부터 슬라이더? → 그 전에 같은 리듬을 수정했으므로 이것 역시 수정.
02:19:173 (2) - 이거 삭제하고 02:19:724 에 노트 추가가 더 어울릴듯요 → 노트하나-연타5개는 이 하드 난이도안에서는 한개도 없는 리듬입니다(아마도요.) 대신 슬라이더하나-연타5개 or 연타5개-슬라이더하나 or 연타5개-노트하나는 이 비트맵에 있어요(아마도)그래서 일단 놔두겠습니다.
02:24:540 (6,7) - 02:24:540 에 노트 두시고 02:24:815 에 1/1 슬라이더 놓는게 더 어울릴듯요 → 수정 완료. 는 그냥 자리 바꾸기만 했는데 은근히 괜찮은것 같네요... 모양은 그대로.
02:32:246 (1) - 노트 하나 넣으시고 스핀은 02:32:522 부터 하는게 어때요? → 수정 완료.
02:45:732 (1) - 시작의 피니시 제거 → 수정 완료.
02:54:678 (1) - 피니시 → 수정 완료.
03:31:971 (1) - ctrl+G가 더 일관성 있는 패턴으로 보일듯요 → 수정 완료. 이건 좀 역발상....
03:34:361 - 브레이크 넣어주세요 → 수정 완료.
04:02:797 (3) - 피니시 제거 → 수정 완료.

괜찮게 만드신 것 같습니다. 스타 받으시고 굳럭하세요~!
스타&모딩 감사합니다! ;)
Satellite
Hi
KOTOKO <3

[General]
Source: Accel World ?
Tag: Saitou is better?

[Normal]
01:12:980 - add note?
02:23:439 - ^
03:23:714 (1) - why don't use distancesnap?

good.

[Hard]
00:32:246 (2) - why a mini jump? I think not need jump >.>
00:49:861 (4) - remove note? same as 00:46:558 - and 00:48:760 -
00:52:338 (4) - The dirty a little...
01:13:806 (2,3,4,5) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

01:18:760 (5) - add Nc. so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.
01:52:888 (5) - try CTRL+G
02:03:347 (1) - remove Nc and 02:03:897 (2) - add Nc
02:19:861 (6) - Move x256 y96 is better? (DS)
02:24:815 (7) - try CTRL+G
02:32:384 (1) - spinner start 02:32:522 - here

good luck~
Topic Starter
Losertic

Satellite wrote:

Hi
KOTOKO <3

[General]
Source: Accel World ? → hmm. pass. (i don't know this part... maybe. ask to BAT.)
Tag: Saitou is better? http://ja.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?sea ... C%E7%B4%A2 umm... no?

[Normal]
01:12:980 - add note? → Fixed.
02:23:439 - ^ → Fixed.
03:23:714 (1) - why don't use distancesnap? → It's my mistake! o.o. Fixed.

good. → thanks! ;)

[Hard]
00:32:246 (2) - why a mini jump? I think not need jump >.> → hmm, but-..maybe.. it's no problem!...
00:49:861 (4) - remove note? same as 00:46:558 - and 00:48:760 - → Fixed.
00:52:338 (4) - The dirty a little... → umm. like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1079711 (change little shape, ctrl+g)
01:13:806 (2,3,4,5) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
→ wait, what?.. ;_;
01:18:760 (5) - add Nc. so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well. → Fixed.
01:52:888 (5) - try CTRL+G → i think better now. because it's too hard jump. and.. ummmm. not good this voice part+hard jump?
02:03:347 (1) - remove Nc and 02:03:897 (2) - add Nc → Fixed.
02:19:861 (6) - Move x256 y96 is better? (DS) → Fixed.
02:24:815 (7) - try CTRL+G → Fixed.
02:32:384 (1) - spinner start 02:32:522 - here → Fixed.

good luck~
Thank you! ;)
El SolarBeam
from M4M

[Storyboard]

well, since I'm quite fond of SB, I'll include it in this mod~
00:10:503 Add sb/circle to follow the song rythm
00:11:604 ^
00:12:705 ^
00:14:907 ^
00:17:109 ^
00:44:081 I think circle here should be changed with something like this http://puu.sh/5chet.png
01:24:265 Consider adding sb/white
02:17:109 ^
02:41:329 to 02:43:531 Consider fading both bg, then give white flash afterwise. That should do an impact
03:01:146 to 03:14:357 Please give whatever SB element here, cause black bg seems ugly
oh, and I like that snow effect <3


[Normal]

00:33:623 Could you reshape it so that the slider's end make a better blanket with next slider?
00:55:641 Rotate it around 33' to create a symmetry
01:12:980 Maybe move to x:332 y:152
You sure don't want to map it until the end of the song? This diff is good though


[Hard]

00:16:008 Move anchor to x:360 y:144 (sorry if it's just a little different change)
00:16:008 Move slider to x:300 y:88
00:52:338 Just suggestion, make (4) and (5) become reverse slider
01:15:458 Make it into more creative shape maybe?
01:23:990 Add finish
03:25:366 NC
03:28:393 ^
03:47:935 (7) The shape doesn't fit the (6) slider
04:06:100 Move the red anchor to x:276 y:116

not much that I can say, since the map itself is good :3
good luck~
Topic Starter
Losertic

El SolarBeam wrote:

from M4M

[Storyboard]

well, since I'm quite fond of SB, I'll include it in this mod~
00:10:503 Add sb/circle to follow the song rythm
00:11:604 ^
00:12:705 ^
00:14:907 ^
00:17:109 ^
00:44:081 I think circle here should be changed with something like this http://puu.sh/5chet.png
01:24:265 Consider adding sb/white
02:17:109 ^
02:41:329 to 02:43:531 Consider fading both bg, then give white flash afterwise. That should do an impact
03:01:146 to 03:14:357 Please give whatever SB element here, cause black bg seems ugly
oh, and I like that snow effect <3 → I send PM to SB Maker.


[Normal]

00:33:623 Could you reshape it so that the slider's end make a better blanket with next slider? → moved 00:35:825 (1) - this slider.
00:55:641 Rotate it around 33' to create a symmetry → Fixed.
01:12:980 Maybe move to x:332 y:152 → i want 1.0x distance ;_;
You sure don't want to map it until the end of the song? This diff is good though → :3


[Hard]

00:16:008 Move anchor to x:360 y:144 (sorry if it's just a little different change) → Fixed.
00:16:008 Move slider to x:300 y:88 → ummm??.. wait, umm.. well.... like this?... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1089484 i don't like this ;_;
00:52:338 Just suggestion, make (4) and (5) become reverse slider → i think better now :3
01:15:458 Make it into more creative shape maybe? → umm? i think better this note's shape. like bowling? ;)
01:23:990 Add finish → maybe not. hmm. i think weird sound..?
03:25:366 NC → this NC pattern, like 00:39:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - . sorry. umm.
03:28:393 ^ → non fixed.
03:47:935 (7) The shape doesn't fit the (6) slider → Fixed. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1089502
04:06:100 Move the red anchor to x:276 y:116 → move (274,121) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1089506

not much that I can say, since the map itself is good :3
good luck~
Wait. I'll check your mod.

Thank you! ;)
Sun Rainbow
No change,But thx your SB mod!>w<
yurunneram
Normal

00:11:604 (3) - Rather flow-breaking. But actually the problem lies in (1) since people expect it to flow just because the first two notes did

01:02:797 (2) - Stack below the end of slider 01:00:044 (3) (you'd have t rearrange (1))

01:50:411 (4,1) - flows badly. Put them on the left side of (3) instead

02:18:210 (3) - Make good triangle with (1) and (2)

02:22:338 - Add note?

02:46:008 - ^

03:21:513 (4) - This was unexpected

Love your pentagons @w@

HARD

00:23:714 (4,5) - Would rather replace with same slider from (3)

00:42:429 (8) - NC here instead

01:18:760 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hey, this pentagon ain't perfect

02:19:724 - Shouldn't there be a note here?

02:43:256 and 02:43:393 - Add note to make tripplet

Very good ^^ Star~ I'll be waiting for this rank~

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
GugUCorn
late m4m~

[normal]

  1. 00:42:980 (4) - NC.
  2. 00:53:439 (1) - 첫 부분에 피니쉬
  3. 01:02:246 (1) - 피니쉬
  4. 01:04:449 (5) - 가운데 슬라이더 포인트를 (148,228) 으로
  5. 01:19:861 (1) - 피니쉬
  6. 01:22:063 (1) - ^
  7. 02:08:301 (1) - 역시 피니쉬.
  8. 02:15:458 (5) - NC
  9. 03:42:980 (1) - 피니쉬
  10. 03:50:687 (6) - 끝에 피니쉬 빠졌네요
  11. 04:11:604 (1) - 피니쉬


[hard]

  1. 00:24:953 (1) - 00:26:742 이 때 끝내는 건 어떨까요?
  2. 00:33:622 (1) - 2번째 슬라이더 포인트를 (316,144)
  3. 00:38:026 (6) - NC
  4. 00:39:678 (1,3) - 1번 뉴콤 해제,3번 뉴콤
  5. 00:53:438 (1) - 첫 부분 피니쉬
  6. 01:19:861 (5) - 피니쉬
  7. 02:41:329 (4) - 뉴콤보
  8. 03:25:366 (5) - 이 다음 노트가 겹쳐있어서 인식하기 어려울것 같아서, 5번 노트에 뉴콤보!
  9. 03:33:622 (4) - 끝에 피니쉬
  10. 03:36:100 - 여기서부터 보컬이 시작되는거 같은데, 노트추가 제안
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