KOTOKO - Sakura no Ame Moegi no yo

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sjoy
Hi from my queue :)
[Normal]
00:28:118 (2) - try to move it avoid overlap with 00:30:320 (4) -
01:11:054 (1) - add fin?
01:22:063 (1) - ^
01:59:494 (1) - ^
02:25:916 (1) - ^
02:40:228 (2) - ctrl+g?
02:54:540 (1) - add n-fin?
[Hard]
00:17:109 (3,4) - ctrl+g ?I think the flow is not good now
00:32:934 (6,7) - stack on 00:32:522 (5) 's end?
00:49:035 (1,2,3,4) - I think it's too boring for hard diff try to make more patterns
01:20:411 (1) - ctrl+j?
01:51:512 (2) - move to 256,264 to make a same spacing?
02:00:320 (2) - ^to 328,192
02:53:577 02:53:714 02:53:852- add notes

03:55:916 add a note?
03:57:017^
04:10:641~04:10:916 add notes?
in general it looks good
good luck for rank.star~ :)
Hinsvar
Well hi there.

Sorry for taking my time too much.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General
  1. ...I actually expected an even smaller BG file size, considering the BG is filled with black shades (mostly), but it's fine I suppose.
  2. Accel World is not the source. In fact, this song doesn't come from any show at all. It is simply the B-side of the "unfinished" single, so please remove Accel World from the source column.
  3. Also remove Satoshi Yaginuma because he isn't involved in the song at all; only Shinya Saito does.
  4. Maybe add "The Sakura Rain is Pale Green" (the English title of the song, though not official) to the tags? Not necessary, but still.
  5. Set the offset to -505 please. The current offset makes the beginning of the stanzas one beat earlier.
  6. 00:27:017 - I'd increase the volume to 75% here in all diffs to follow the song's increase in power/loudness.


>Normal
  1. Umm, why do you use an NC every one or two stanzas (00:53:439 (1,2,1,2,3,4) for example)? Make them consistent, please. I recommend using an NC every two stanzas.
  2. 00:33:622 (5,1) - Try to make a nice blanket here?
  3. 01:17:659 (1) - I don't really have the time to check it, but this can be off-screen in 4:3 resolutions. Try to see if it's true?
  4. 01:44:907 - I recommend to add a 1/2 slider here to follow the instrument and then remove 01:45:182 (4), but this isn't really necessary.
  5. 03:27:567 (1,2,3) - Hmm, Ctrl+G for the rhythm so they will follow the vocal and instrument more correctly?
  6. 03:50:687 (6) - Just for aesthetic reasons so the pattern here will look neater: Ctrl+J?


>Hard
  1. 00:09:402 (1,2,3) - The blanket is pretty weird here, too. Just saying.
  2. 00:16:833 (2,3,4) - If you want to make a jump, make one between (3) and (4), not (2) and (3). The instrument's pitch increases in the transition from (3) to (4), not (2) to (3). The current jump is just really hard to expect and is an awkward one.
  3. 00:31:421 (2,4) - Why do they overlap each other partially? This is really easy to avoid, seriously... I think you know how to fix this yourself.
  4. 00:42:980 (2) - I prefer to move this to (448,264) to make the flow here better. Well, up to you for this.
  5. 00:50:962 (5) - I'd add an NC here to indicate that this is a completely different and separate pattern from the previous square to make the pattern readable.
  6. 00:55:641 (2,3,4) - This kind of flow is weird for me, IMO. Hitting a note to the left that is only 1/4 beats apart and suddenly having to go up straightly 1/2 beats after? Feels strange, but maybe it's just me.
  7. 00:58:944 (4) - Also NC here to indicate the change of the rhythm?
  8. 01:00:044 - I heavily recommend to map this spot to follow the vocal. Right now, it just feels so awkward to leave the place unmapped...
  9. 01:01:145 (3,4,5,6,7) - ...Why does the stream's shape look so random? Maybe try to curve them, or remove (5) to create an interesting rhythm?
  10. 01:04:173 (1) - Move this to (136,208) to make the flow better?
  11. 01:04:861 - I also recommend to add a circle here to follow the vocal; feels kinda empty currently.
  12. 01:09:953 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 01:01:145 (3,4,5,6,7).
  13. 01:24:127 - Hmm, add a circle here to follow the instrument?
  14. 01:52:889 (5) - NC to make the combo pattern consistent, please?
  15. 01:53:439 - And maybe map this with a slider's repeat or a circle to follow the vocal? idk, I don't feel comfortable seeing the vocal being skipped using the middle of a slider.
  16. 02:28:944 (3,4,5,6) - Change the rhythm to this instead to follow the song (especially the vocal) more accurately?
  17. 02:42:430 (3,4) - Combine them into a slider to emphasize the vocal in the middle of the two circles?
  18. 02:45:733 (1) - Shorten the slider to 02:45:870 to follow the vocal? Feels better than following the instrument, IMO.
  19. 02:46:421 (4) - And remove this for the same reason as the suggestion above?
  20. 03:39:815 (7) - Maybe end this slider at 03:40:090 and add a circle at 03:40:228 to follow the vocal and instrument better?
  21. 04:02:934 (4) - Remove this to emphasize the vocal at 04:02:797 and 04:03:072?
  22. 04:08:577 (7) - Also remove this to emphasize the vocal around it too?


Mostly about rhythm stuff and minor things, although there are a few must-fixes. Your map is fine; I just don't really like how you map lol

Sorry if that sounded rude. Still a nice map, so don't mind my words too much.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Topic Starter
Losertic

sjoy wrote:

Hi from my queue :)
[Normal]
00:28:118 (2) - try to move it avoid overlap with 00:30:320 (4) - → i think it's not. because blanket by 00:27:017 (1)
01:11:054 (1) - add fin? → Fixed.
01:22:063 (1) - ^ → umm... not good?..
01:59:494 (1) - ^ → Fixed.
02:25:916 (1) - ^ → Fixed.
02:40:228 (2) - ctrl+g? → Fixed.
02:54:540 (1) - add n-fin? → Fixed.
[Hard]
00:17:109 (3,4) - ctrl+g ?I think the flow is not good now → ummmmm... fixed.
00:32:934 (6,7) - stack on 00:32:522 (5) 's end? → I think not good shape. (also, too many 00:32:934 (6,7) rythem. not change)
00:49:035 (1,2,3,4) - I think it's too boring for hard diff try to make more patterns → okay.. umm.... make it temporarily pattern
01:20:411 (1) - ctrl+j? → nice. but, too close
01:51:512 (2) - move to 256,264 to make a same spacing? → Fixed.
02:00:320 (2) - ^to 328,192 → Fixed.
02:53:577 02:53:714 02:53:852- add notes → sorry.. umm i want consistent rythem this part.

03:55:916 add a note? → Fixed.
03:57:017^ → Fixed.
04:10:641~04:10:916 add notes? → sorry.. umm i want consistent rythem this part.
in general it looks good
good luck for rank.star~ :)

Thank you! ;) and again, thanks for your kudosu ;)
Topic Starter
Losertic

Hinsvar wrote:

Well hi there.

Sorry for taking my time too much.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General
  1. ...I actually expected an even smaller BG file size, considering the BG is filled with black shades (mostly), but it's fine I suppose.
  2. Accel World is not the source. In fact, this song doesn't come from any show at all. It is simply the B-side of the "unfinished" single, so please remove Accel World from the source column.
  3. Also remove Satoshi Yaginuma because he isn't involved in the song at all; only Shinya Saito does.
  4. Maybe add "The Sakura Rain is Pale Green" (the English title of the song, though not official) to the tags? Not necessary, but still.
  5. Set the offset to -505 please. The current offset makes the beginning of the stanzas one beat earlier.
  6. 00:27:017 - I'd increase the volume to 75% here in all diffs to follow the song's increase in power/loudness.


>Normal
  1. Umm, why do you use an NC every one or two stanzas (00:53:439 (1,2,1,2,3,4) for example)? Make them consistent, please. I recommend using an NC every two stanzas.
  2. 00:33:622 (5,1) - Try to make a nice blanket here?
  3. 01:17:659 (1) - I don't really have the time to check it, but this can be off-screen in 4:3 resolutions. Try to see if it's true?
  4. 01:44:907 - I recommend to add a 1/2 slider here to follow the instrument and then remove 01:45:182 (4), but this isn't really necessary.
  5. 03:27:567 (1,2,3) - Hmm, Ctrl+G for the rhythm so they will follow the vocal and instrument more correctly?
  6. 03:50:687 (6) - Just for aesthetic reasons so the pattern here will look neater: Ctrl+J?


>Hard
  1. 00:09:402 (1,2,3) - The blanket is pretty weird here, too. Just saying.
  2. 00:16:833 (2,3,4) - If you want to make a jump, make one between (3) and (4), not (2) and (3). The instrument's pitch increases in the transition from (3) to (4), not (2) to (3). The current jump is just really hard to expect and is an awkward one.
  3. 00:31:421 (2,4) - Why do they overlap each other partially? This is really easy to avoid, seriously... I think you know how to fix this yourself.
  4. 00:42:980 (2) - I prefer to move this to (448,264) to make the flow here better. Well, up to you for this.
  5. 00:50:962 (5) - I'd add an NC here to indicate that this is a completely different and separate pattern from the previous square to make the pattern readable.
  6. 00:55:641 (2,3,4) - This kind of flow is weird for me, IMO. Hitting a note to the left that is only 1/4 beats apart and suddenly having to go up straightly 1/2 beats after? Feels strange, but maybe it's just me.
  7. 00:58:944 (4) - Also NC here to indicate the change of the rhythm?
  8. 01:00:044 - I heavily recommend to map this spot to follow the vocal. Right now, it just feels so awkward to leave the place unmapped...
  9. 01:01:145 (3,4,5,6,7) - ...Why does the stream's shape look so random? Maybe try to curve them, or remove (5) to create an interesting rhythm?
  10. 01:04:173 (1) - Move this to (136,208) to make the flow better?
  11. 01:04:861 - I also recommend to add a circle here to follow the vocal; feels kinda empty currently.
  12. 01:09:953 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 01:01:145 (3,4,5,6,7).
  13. 01:24:127 - Hmm, add a circle here to follow the instrument?
  14. 01:52:889 (5) - NC to make the combo pattern consistent, please?
  15. 01:53:439 - And maybe map this with a slider's repeat or a circle to follow the vocal? idk, I don't feel comfortable seeing the vocal being skipped using the middle of a slider.
  16. 02:28:944 (3,4,5,6) - Change the rhythm to this instead to follow the song (especially the vocal) more accurately? → hmm.. changed new pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1031523
  17. 02:42:430 (3,4) - Combine them into a slider to emphasize the vocal in the middle of the two circles? → add note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1031538
  18. 02:45:733 (1) - Shorten the slider to 02:45:870 to follow the vocal? Feels better than following the instrument, IMO. → hmm. not change. because many same pattern in hard diff. also, i think... great?
  19. 02:46:421 (4) - And remove this for the same reason as the suggestion above? → Fixed.
  20. 03:39:815 (7) - Maybe end this slider at 03:40:090 and add a circle at 03:40:228 to follow the vocal and instrument better? → i think great for now.
  21. 04:02:934 (4) - Remove this to emphasize the vocal at 04:02:797 and 04:03:072? → no, i heard the voice 04:02:935 so.. non-fixed.
  22. 04:08:577 (7) - Also remove this to emphasize the vocal around it too? → Fixed.

Mostly about rhythm stuff and minor things, although there are a few must-fixes. Your map is fine; I just don't really like how you map lol

Sorry if that sounded rude. Still a nice map, so don't mind my words too much.

Good luck on the way 8-)
really long- modding 0_0 (maybe i don't have a time for now tomorrow, i'll fix your mod!)

yeah, i'm so lazy...

finally, fixed!

Thank you! ;)
Hinsvar
Hmm, about the general stuff...

When I'm talking about the file size, I'm talking about how much space it occupies in your storage (in bytes). 1024x768 is the resolution of the image. Well, it's not that much of a problem, though.

And about the source, yes, I do realize that the name of an album/single isn't supposed to appear in the source column, but no, this song doesn't show up in Accel World at all. This is why you should remove Accel World and leave the source column empty.

Just my two cents; I'm fine for the other rejections :D
Topic Starter
Losertic

Hinsvar wrote:

Hmm, about the general stuff...

When I'm talking about the file size, I'm talking about how much space it occupies in your storage (in bytes). 1024x768 is the resolution of the image. Well, it's not that much of a problem, though. → it's my mistake X_X (Because I'm not good other language T_T)

And about the source, yes, I do realize that the name of an album/single isn't supposed to appear in the source column, but no, this song doesn't show up in Accel World at all. This is why you should remove Accel World and leave the source column empty. → ahhhh, i don't know. It is not heard in the Accel World Anime. but.. this song in Accel World " →Unfinished→ " Album. hoo... really i don't know.

change source → tags for now.

Just my two cents; I'm fine for the other rejections :D
oah- nice!

Thank you! ;)
Topic Starter
Losertic
Update/

Move "Accel World"

Source → Tags

...where is delete this post?
-Neipezi
hi From Kritio's Modding Queuse (Normal / M4M)

[General]
- bpm offset 9,403으로 수정해주세요. -505가 아닙니다.
- BG 바꿔주세요. 노래하고 BG가 어울리지 않습니다.
- 모든 난이도에 00:09:128 - 초록색 선 삭제해주세요.
- 히트사운드 중에 normal-hitclap는 소리가 안들리니 삭제해주세요.. normal-hitclap2는 사용 안하는 히트사운드 삭제

[Noraml]
00:33:623 (5) - NC 추가
01:22:063 - ~ 01:24:265 - 노트 추가하세요.
01:22:063 (1) - 01:24:402 - 01:33:072 - 으로 이동해서 스핀 추가
03:21:512 (4,5) - 박자 이상하네요.배치 추천
03:34:173 - 서클 추가
04:11:604 - ~ 04:13:806 - 이 구간 노트 추가하세요.
04:11:743 (1) - 스핀 여기부터입니다.04:13:806 - ~ 04:22:614 -

[Hard]
00:20:412 (3) - 1/1 슬라이드 아닙니다. 보컬에 맞게 수정해주세요. this
00:21:513 - 여기에 서클 추가
00:38:027 (6,7) - 00:20:412 (3) - 와 같게
00:49:861 - 서클 추가
00:50:688 (7) - 00:50:549 - 으로 이동
00:53:439 (1) - 클랩을 피니시로 바꿔주세요
01:24:402 - 01:33:072 - 노멀과 동일
01:22:063 (1) - 보기 않좋은 슬라이더 입니다. this
01:23:165 (2) - ^
01:57:293 (9) - NC 추가
01:59:495 (1,2,3) - 간격 유지 x1.0
02:10:504 (5,1) - NC 반대로
02:41:330 (4) - NC 추가
04:11:604 - ~ 04:13:806 - 노멀과 동일
04:11:743 (1) - 노멀과 동일

GL
Topic Starter
Losertic

-Kirito wrote:

hi From Kritio's Modding Queuse (Normal / M4M)

[General]
- bpm offset 9,403으로 수정해주세요. -505가 아닙니다. → 수정 완료.
- BG 바꿔주세요. 노래하고 BG가 어울리지 않습니다. → 음... 이부분을 일단 보류 할게요. 마땅한 백그라운드가 없어요.. 이것도 그나마 찾은거라서;.
- 모든 난이도에 00:09:128 - 초록색 선 삭제해주세요. → 수정 완료.
- 히트사운드 중에 normal-hitclap는 소리가 안들리니 삭제해주세요.. normal-hitclap2는 사용 안하는 히트사운드 삭제 → 히트클랩2 삭제 완료. 근데 나머지 하나는 음.. 지우면 히트사운드 소리 없게 하는건가요? 일단 나둬둘게요;.

[Normal]
00:33:623 (5) - NC 추가 → 수정 완료.
01:22:063 - ~ 01:24:265 - 노트 추가하세요. → 이 부분은 다른 리듬에서도 스핀을 했기에 그대로 나두겠습니다. ( 02:54:540 (1) - 04:11:604 (1) - )
01:22:063 (1) - 01:24:402 - 01:33:072 - 으로 이동해서 스핀 추가 → 위와 동일합니다..
03:21:512 (4,5) - 박자 이상하네요.배치 추천 → 수정 완료.
03:34:173 - 서클 추가 → 수정 완료.
04:11:604 - ~ 04:13:806 - 이 구간 노트 추가하세요.
04:11:743 (1) - 스핀 여기부터입니다.04:13:806 - ~ 04:22:614 - → 저는 이 부분 스핀이 맘에 든다고 생각해서. 이것 포함 스핀 3개는 수정 안하겠습니다 죄송합니다-

[Hard]
00:20:412 (3) - 1/1 슬라이드 아닙니다. 보컬에 맞게 수정해주세요. this → 수정 완료.
00:21:513 - 여기에 서클 추가 → 서클 하나 대신에 슬라이더를 넣었습니다.
00:38:027 (6,7) - 00:20:412 (3) - 와 같게 → 이부분은 보컬대신에 크게 퉁퉁 거리는 소리를 따라 넣었습니다.
00:49:861 - 서클 추가 → 이부분도 보컬보단 퉁퉁 거리는 소리를 따라서...
00:50:688 (7) - 00:50:549 - 으로 이동 → 위와 동일 합니다.
00:53:439 (1) - 클랩을 피니시로 바꿔주세요 → 수정 완료.
01:24:402 - 01:33:072 - 노멀과 동일 → 노말과 같은 이유로 수정 안할게요..
01:22:063 (1) - 보기 않좋은 슬라이더 입니다. this → 수정 완료.
01:23:165 (2) - ^ → 수정 완료.
01:57:293 (9) - NC 추가 → 수정 완료.
01:59:495 (1,2,3) - 간격 유지 x1.0 → 01:50:687 (1,2,3) - 이부분이랑 동일하게 해서... 일단은 놔둘게요.
02:10:504 (5,1) - NC 반대로 → 수정 완료.
02:41:330 (4) - NC 추가 → 수정 완료.
04:11:604 - ~ 04:13:806 - 노멀과 동일 → 수정 안하겠습니다.
04:11:743 (1) - 노멀과 동일

GL
감사합니다! ;)
RandF
From my queue~
thanks for M4M!

[General]
  1. Romanised Title: "Sakura no Ame Moegi no Yo"
  2. mp3: outro is too long. I recommend to cut appropriately

[Normal]
  1. 01:41:880- remove whistle
  2. 01:43:531- add whistle
  3. 01:44:081- remove whistle
  4. 02:27:017 (3,4) - I prefer to change for 1 slider
  5. 02:45:463- add a note?
  6. 03:14:907- whistle is necessary?

[Hard]
  1. According to AI-Mod, Object isn't snapped!
  2. 00:35:549 (1) - how about moving to x:272 y:242 (you can make star-pattern)
  3. 00:44:357- I prefer to add a note
  4. 00:53:438 (1) - curve slider is better
  5. 01:06:100 (7,8) - I prefer to change for 1 slider
  6. 01:15:457 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this pyramid-pattern looks awkward. how about this?

    393,135,75457,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    324,176,75733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    393,215,76008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    324,254,76283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    393,295,76558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,216,77109,5,0,0:0:0:0:
  7. 01:22:063~01:24:265- I suggest to reduce SV
  8. 01:41:604 (1) - move whistle from it to 01:41:880
  9. 01:50:412- add a note
  10. 01:57:430 (1) - whistle is necessary?
  11. 02:16:834- I prefer to add a note
  12. 02:53:989 (4,5,6) - I suggest to unifrom DS to 1.45x, and you can make star-pattern
  13. 03:18:760 (4) - I prefer the slider: 03:18:485~03:18:760
  14. 03:35:274~03:36:100- it is better to add someting note (I prefer 1/4 beat rolling)
  15. 04:00:320- add a note


Nice KOTOKO~ :)
~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Losertic

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
thanks for M4M!

[General]
  1. Romanised Title: "Sakura no Ame Moegi no Yo" →

    Umm. wait.
    Title: Accel World ED Single - unfinished
    Artist: KOTOKO

    Tracklist:
    1. unfinished
    2. Sakura no Ame Moegi no yo <<
    3. unfinished (Instrumental)
    4. Sakura no Ame Moegi no yo (Instrumental)
  2. mp3: outro is too long. I recommend to cut appropriately → uh, but. not cut Original-song File ;_;

[Normal]
  1. 01:41:880- remove whistle → Fixed.
  2. 01:43:531- add whistle → Fixed.
  3. 01:44:081- remove whistle → Fixed.
  4. 02:27:017 (3,4) - I prefer to change for 1 slider → i think its' too hard
  5. 02:45:463- add a note? → I think.. umm. it's follow boom- sound
  6. 03:14:907- whistle is necessary? → remove whistle.

[Hard]
  1. According to AI-Mod, Object isn't snapped! → it's my mistake! fixed
  2. 00:35:549 (1) - how about moving to x:272 y:242 (you can make star-pattern) → i want jump(pattern) this part.
  3. 00:44:357- I prefer to add a note → umm. it's great. but, i like this pattern!
  4. 00:53:438 (1) - curve slider is better → Fixed.
  5. 01:06:100 (7,8) - I prefer to change for 1 slider → Fixed.
  6. 01:15:457 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this pyramid-pattern looks awkward. how about this? → Fixed.

    393,135,75457,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    324,176,75733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    393,215,76008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    324,254,76283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    393,295,76558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    256,216,77109,5,0,0:0:0:0:
  7. 01:22:063~01:24:265- I suggest to reduce SV → what is SV?
  8. 01:41:604 (1) - move whistle from it to 01:41:880 → Fixed.
  9. 01:50:412- add a note → Ummm.....
  10. 01:57:430 (1) - whistle is necessary? → 01:59:494 (1) - remove whistle hitsound much better!
  11. 02:16:834- I prefer to add a note → yep, same opinion.. l like 5 note!
  12. 02:53:989 (4,5,6) - I suggest to unifrom DS to 1.45x, and you can make star-pattern → maybe it's too hard. because 02:54:265 (5) - this.
  13. 03:18:760 (4) - I prefer the slider: 03:18:485~03:18:760 → oh, i think better this pattern: 03:18:485 ~ 03:18:760 - add note.
  14. 03:35:274~03:36:100- it is better to add someting note (I prefer 1/4 beat rolling) → I like this part. (no note, slider..maybe you know why i like this part)
  15. 04:00:320- add a note → i like better now
Nice KOTOKO~ :)
~Good Luck~
Thank you! ;)
Sun Rainbow
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Topic Starter
Losertic

Sun Rainbow wrote:

http://puu.sh/4Un7j.zip

I am sorry for my lazy
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Thank you! ;) Fixed!
Hanabi
M4M

[Overall]
Slider Tick Rate -> 2

[Hard]
00:48:485 (4,5,7,8,9,10) - 이런 박자 추천 드려요
00:57:843 (6) - NC
01:03:622 (5) - 써클 제거
01:05:962 (6) - ^
01:11:053 (1,2) - 같은 모양으로 체인지
01:12:430 (5) - 써클 제거
01:16:283 (4,5) - 디스턴스 쳌
01:20:411 (1,2,3) - 조금 넓게 해주세요 -> ctrl + shift + S 한후에 1.3정도로
01:55:916 (5) - NC
02:10:503 (5) - 박자 실수하셨네요
02:16:696 - 02:16:971 노트 추가
02:18:485 - 제거
02:24:815 - 힛사 넣어주세요
02:27:292 - 제거
02:44:907 (5) - ^
02:54:265 (5) - NC
04:11:329 (5) - ^

[Normal]
00:34:724 - 클랩
00:35:824 (1,2,3) - 같은 모양으로 -> ctrl + c,v한후에 120도씩 돌리면 되요
00:42:980 (4) - 이렇세
02:27:843 (5) - 제거04:11:054 (4) - 펴주세여
Topic Starter
Losertic

[ Sana ] wrote:

M4M

[Overall]
Slider Tick Rate -> 2 → 히트사운드를 잘 맞추는 것도 아니고 해서 일단은 '1'개로 냅둘게요.

[Hard]
00:48:485 (4,5,7,8,9,10) - 이런 박자 추천 드려요 → 이건.. insane에서나 어울릴듯한 느낌.. 너무 어려운것 같아요
00:57:843 (6) - NC → 수정 완료.
01:03:622 (5) - 써클 제거 → 퉁 거리는 소리도 나고.. 있는게 더 나을것 같습니다. 그리고 노트 2개, 바로 노트2개는 어려 울듯..
01:05:962 (6) - ^ → 위와 같은 이유이고, 에- 라는 소리가 그 부분에서 나옵니다.
01:11:053 (1,2) - 같은 모양으로 체인지 → 1번슬라이더로 교체 해봤으나...이 둘이는 원래 같은 모양입니다 ㅠ.ㅠ
01:12:430 (5) - 써클 제거 → 위와 같은 이유들 입니다.
01:16:283 (4,5) - 디스턴스 쳌 → 수정 완료. 실수;_;
01:20:411 (1,2,3) - 조금 넓게 해주세요 -> ctrl + shift + S 한후에 1.3정도로 → 수정 완료.
01:55:916 (5) - NC → 수정 완료.
02:10:503 (5) - 박자 실수하셨네요 → 수정 완료.
02:16:696 - 02:16:971 노트 추가 → 이부분은 앞에 있는 것처럼 노트 없는게 나을것 같아요.
02:18:485 - 제거 → 위와 같은 이유 입니다.
02:24:815 - 힛사 넣어주세요 → 슬라이더 틱 1개로 설정해서..
02:27:292 - 제거 → 위와 같은 이유 입니다....
02:44:907 (5) - ^ → 위와 같은 이유 입니다.
02:54:265 (5) - NC → 수정 완료.
04:11:329 (5) - ^ → 수정 완료.

[Normal]
00:34:724 - 클랩 → 수정 완료.
00:35:824 (1,2,3) - 같은 모양으로 -> ctrl + c,v한후에 120도씩 돌리면 되요 → 수정 완료.
00:42:980 (4) - 이렇세 → 수정 완료.
02:27:843 (5) - 제거 → 이부분에 보컬이 들려서 일단은 패스..
04:11:054 (4) - 펴주세여 → 수정 완료.

감사합니다! ;)
Xinchii
Hi ~ from your queue :D

[Normal]
  1. 00:17:109(5,6,1) - set at 180|104 , 280|112 , 380|112 to make more fit the circle flow.


[Hard]
  1. 00:32:522(3,4,5) - make it more curve ? will be smooth during play
  2. 00:49:036(1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part I see you want to follow vocal , but current it feel some strange on 00:49:586(3) - and 00:50:687(6) -
    cus both of them's front two note follow vocal close , but those two just set on durm.
    umm... maybe like this :
    or other patterns that have note on 00:49:448 - and 00:50:594 -
  3. 00:59:769(4,5) - Cus it have a storng vocal on 01:00:045 - ,it really not fit with slider end :<
    I will suggest set slider strat at 01:00:045 - and a note at 00:59:769 -
  4. 01:24:265(4) - maybe a spinner will be great with here :3
  5. 02:18:210(3,4,5,6,7,1) - This will be more fit I think.
    http://puu.sh/53GG0.jpg
    02:19:036 - 02:19:586 - have a speed vocal , my view is it seems more fit with stream than 02:18:210 - 02:18:760 -
  6. 03:32:522(2,3,4) - Bigger spacing with (1) to make it symmetry
  7. 04:03:072(5) - stream contine ? until 04:03:347 -

Good song

Good luck for you !
[ Yuki ]
Hello~

[Normal]
03:31:971 (5) - 180'돌리고, Ctrl+G, x:172,y:208

[Hard]
00:49:035 (1,2) - 슬라이드 어때요? <언랭요소 (맞나?ㅇㅅㅇ;)
00:50:136 (4,5) - ^
00:57:843 (1,2,3) - 리버스 슬라이드 어떨까요? <이유^
02:35:824 (3,4) - ^^
03:46:008 (3,4) - ^
04:03:622 (1,2) - ^
04:08:301 (5,6) - ^

죄송합니다 모딩 잘못해요,,ㅇㅅㅇ;
Good song.. GL
Topic Starter
Losertic

leon1341414 wrote:

Hi ~ from your queue :D

[Normal]
  1. 00:17:109(5,6,1) - set at 180|104 , 280|112 , 380|112 to make more fit the circle flow. → Fixed.


[Hard]
  1. 00:32:522(3,4,5) - make it more curve ? will be smooth during play → 00:32:522 (3) - it's blanket 00:31:145 (5) - this note.
  2. 00:49:036(1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part I see you want to follow vocal , but current it feel some strange on 00:49:586(3) - and 00:50:687(6) -
    cus both of them's front two note follow vocal close , but those two just set on durm.
    umm... maybe like this :
    or other patterns that have note on 00:49:448 - and 00:50:594 - → Fixed.
  3. 00:59:769(4,5) - Cus it have a storng vocal on 01:00:045 - ,it really not fit with slider end :<
    I will suggest set slider strat at 01:00:045 - and a note at 00:59:769 - → Fixed.
  4. 01:24:265(4) - maybe a spinner will be great with here :3 → i think better now. same normal diff! (same break time)
  5. 02:18:210(3,4,5,6,7,1) - This will be more fit I think. → nice
    http://puu.sh/53GG0.jpg
    02:19:036 - 02:19:586 - have a speed vocal , my view is it seems more fit with stream than 02:18:210 - 02:18:760 - → long stream.. it's really hard for "Hard" diff
  6. 03:32:522(2,3,4) - Bigger spacing with (1) to make it symmetry → maybe it's too hard;_;
  7. 04:03:072(5) - stream contine ? until 04:03:347 - → i think better now. and it's too hard

Good song

Good luck for you !
Thank you! ;)


[ Yuki ] wrote:

Hello~

[Normal]
03:31:971 (5) - 180'돌리고, Ctrl+G, x:172,y:208 → 수정 완료.

[Hard]
00:49:035 (1,2) - 슬라이드 어때요? <언랭요소 (맞나?ㅇㅅㅇ;) → 이게 언랭 요소인가요...? 일단 이거 말고 그뒤에 노트 슬라이더로 바꿉니다.
00:50:136 (4,5) - ^ → 위와 동일합니다.
00:57:843 (1,2,3) - 리버스 슬라이드 어떨까요? <이유^ → 보컬에 따라서 갔습니다. 노말도 아니니 괜찮을듯.
02:35:824 (3,4) - ^ → 언랭 요소는 아닐 듯 합니다. 네;.
03:46:008 (3,4) - ^ → 위와 동일합니다.
04:03:622 (1,2) - ^ → 역시..
04:08:301 (5,6) - ^→ ㅜ.ㅜ

죄송합니다 모딩 잘못해요,,ㅇㅅㅇ;
Good song.. GL
감사합니다! ;)
Come[Back]Home
Normal

00:30:320 (4) This Repeat Slider just doesnt makes any sense, Maybe like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072422
00:55:641 (3) Move it to x: 496 y: 148 i think it looks better
03:21:513 (4) Delete 5 and do i like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072432

Hard

00:13:531 (1) Why that distance snap? Maybe use normal Distance snap
00:32:522 (3) Why is here a jump? I cant seem to find anything in the song to make a jump there
00:46:008 Add HC, would fit very nice
00:48:210 ^
00:49:861 ^
00:58:393 ^
01:45:182 (3) Move it to x: 336 y: 240
01:45:733 (4) Move it to x: 280 y: 192
04:08:577 Add HC


Thats all, nice Beatmap for your second *_*
The song is actually really catchy :3
Topic Starter
Losertic

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Normal

00:30:320 (4) This Repeat Slider just doesnt makes any sense, Maybe like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072422 → I think better now. umm...
00:55:641 (3) Move it to x: 496 y: 148 i think it looks better → Fixed (495,153)
03:21:513 (4) Delete 5 and do i lik this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072432 → I tried first map set. but.. i like follow vocal XD

Hard

00:13:531 (1) Why that distance snap? Maybe use normal Distance snap → i think better now. it's hard diff!
00:32:522 (3) Why is here a jump? I cant seem to find anything in the song to make a jump there → ^
00:46:008 Add HC, would fit very nice → Fixed. nice
00:48:210 ^ → Fixed.
00:49:861 ^ → Fixed.
00:58:393 ^ → i think better now. follow vocal + hard pattern!
01:45:182 (3) Move it to x: 336 y: 240 → Fixed.
01:45:733 (4) Move it to x: 280 y: 192 → Fixed.
04:08:577 Add HC → I fixed first map set. maybe it's follow vocal.


Thats all, nice Beatmap for your second *_*
The song is actually really catchy :3
Thank you! ;)
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