luxoDeh wrote:
Hi! M4M from my queue.
NORMAL
00:33:622 (5,2) - stack them perfectly → Fixed.
02:03:898 (1,3) - ^ → non-fixed. because over distance.
well the diff is quite well made, but what I can suggest more is that you can find other pattern and rhytms to use, especially, for example in the second kiai time, that is quite the same as the first and it can be a bit ripetitive (just for the second, because the third one in some parts have little changes)
for example you can play more with sliders, like in this part: from 02:23:439 - to 02:25:916 - I'll give you a picture of what I did: here I used 3 sliders with different lenght, in my opinion these fills good with the music and it's something different from the same pattern... of caurse this is just a suggestion but I think you can do better. → ahhh, it's better pattern. but, this pattern not good overall difficult rythem
HARD
00:16:008 (1,2) - make this blancket better → Fixed.
00:35:549 - maybe add a note here but place it near to 00:35:824 (1) - → Fixed. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/981860
00:39:678 (1,2) - make a better blancket here too → Fixed.
00:44:356 - add a note here? → Sorry, because... umm.. note rythem? ahhh bad english.
00:56:879 (3) - I think you should move it some grids up... I don't really like this placement, anyway, it's just a personal suggestion → Fixed.
00:59:769 (1,2,3) - stack them perfectly → Fixed.
01:01:283 - I think you should add a note here and make a long stream → Fixed.
02:22:338 - add a note... I feel empty here or maybe you can try something like this here 02:21:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I just tryed to make some rhythm, but you can also leave it as it is of caurse, it's just a suggestion. → add note!
that's all. GL!
Sorry for my late update. because ofc beatmapping contest 8/27 ~ 9/12 now, status - pending! gogo
Thank you!