As requested! This mapset is already very polished. Almost every thing is just suggestions, except for the things I'll mention on General.
Easy
Increase the AR to 3 or at least 2, the spread between Easy and Normal is really high.
Increase OD to 2 for the same reason I mentioned above.
00:27:208 (2) - You added this circle here, but you didn't add it on 00:28:808, 00:33:608 and etc... and for consistency reasons, if you like consistency, you can either remove this circle and 00:36:808 (2) - and left an empty space or add circles on the empty spaces. My suggestion would be to put circles where you didn't because there's a big emphasizing sound there and you ignored them.
00:43:608 (3) - Probably a nazi thing, but this blanket doesn't fit with the other blankets you made. Doing this would be really better. You can keep it if you like, it's just a personal opinion.
02:24:358 (1) - You should keep the notes as clean as possible, since it's an Easy and the SV is getting faster, stacking notes like this wouldn't be a good idea. I'd suggest you to move it somewhere near x136 y244.
Lapis's Normal
Couldn't find anything wrong. Nice job!
Nya Nya123's Hard
00:14:008 (3) - If you were trying to follow the piano, I guess it's a piano, would be better to start this on the blue tick and end on the next blue tick as well. Example. You should do the same with the following patterns. But if you were trying to follow the drums, ignore this.
01:03:458 - Since you were following the vocal here, would be nice to add a circle here to emphasize it.
01:13:558 (4) - This sudden break here is a bit confusing because you were following the constant 1/2 rhythm, and them you stop with no reason, because the vocal/drums keep following. I'd suggest to add a circle on the red tick.
01:17:058 - Add a circle here for the same motive I mentioned above about the vocal to emphasize it.
01:17:158 (1,2,1) - The DS between 1st (1) and (2) is higher than the 2nd (1) and (2), and the emphasis is higher on the 2nd (1). I'd suggest to increase the DS here 01:17:958 (2,1) - .
03:17:758 (4,1) - Again the DS is really confusing. You should increase it a bit, it's too close. Somewhere near this would be a nice idea.
Kinsane
Couldn't find anything wrong again, except for some confusing spacing. But I guess they're your style. Nice job (:
Fxtra
00:19:608 - I didn't understand why on this section you did it with a lower SV since this is the same section as before, when you used 2,00x SV. In my opinion, would be really better to keep the consistency, but you would have to remap this section. It's your choice c:
01:00:958 (7,8) - Quite low spacing here for such a high SV. Try to use at least 1,0x here.
02:55:358 (3) - In my opinion, as a player, a Ctrl + G here would improve the flow.
03:06:158 - Sounds really empty without a circle here, consider to add one.
Great mapset, I loved the Fxtra. Excelent diff. You have all my support for circle, bubble or qualify icon. Good luck!
General
- The second timing point has a wrong offset. It should be 13.190 instead of 13.208.
- Fix Nya Nya123's tags. They conflict with every difficulty on the mapset.
Increase OD to 2 for the same reason I mentioned above.
00:27:208 (2) - You added this circle here, but you didn't add it on 00:28:808, 00:33:608 and etc... and for consistency reasons, if you like consistency, you can either remove this circle and 00:36:808 (2) - and left an empty space or add circles on the empty spaces. My suggestion would be to put circles where you didn't because there's a big emphasizing sound there and you ignored them.
00:43:608 (3) - Probably a nazi thing, but this blanket doesn't fit with the other blankets you made. Doing this would be really better. You can keep it if you like, it's just a personal opinion.
02:24:358 (1) - You should keep the notes as clean as possible, since it's an Easy and the SV is getting faster, stacking notes like this wouldn't be a good idea. I'd suggest you to move it somewhere near x136 y244.
00:14:008 (3) - If you were trying to follow the piano, I guess it's a piano, would be better to start this on the blue tick and end on the next blue tick as well. Example. You should do the same with the following patterns. But if you were trying to follow the drums, ignore this.
01:03:458 - Since you were following the vocal here, would be nice to add a circle here to emphasize it.
01:13:558 (4) - This sudden break here is a bit confusing because you were following the constant 1/2 rhythm, and them you stop with no reason, because the vocal/drums keep following. I'd suggest to add a circle on the red tick.
01:17:058 - Add a circle here for the same motive I mentioned above about the vocal to emphasize it.
01:17:158 (1,2,1) - The DS between 1st (1) and (2) is higher than the 2nd (1) and (2), and the emphasis is higher on the 2nd (1). I'd suggest to increase the DS here 01:17:958 (2,1) - .
03:17:758 (4,1) - Again the DS is really confusing. You should increase it a bit, it's too close. Somewhere near this would be a nice idea.
00:19:608 - I didn't understand why on this section you did it with a lower SV since this is the same section as before, when you used 2,00x SV. In my opinion, would be really better to keep the consistency, but you would have to remap this section. It's your choice c:
01:00:958 (7,8) - Quite low spacing here for such a high SV. Try to use at least 1,0x here.
02:55:358 (3) - In my opinion, as a player, a Ctrl + G here would improve the flow.
03:06:158 - Sounds really empty without a circle here, consider to add one.
Great mapset, I loved the Fxtra. Excelent diff. You have all my support for circle, bubble or qualify icon. Good luck!