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Yousei Teikoku - Zetsubou Plantation

posted 2013-08-11T14:23:08+00:00

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EneDZakura

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EneDZakura 2013-08-11T14:23:08+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 21 марта 2015 г. at 16:26:33

Artist: Yousei Teikoku
Title: Zetsubou Plantation
Source: Mirai Nikki
Tags: Yuno Gasai Yukiteru Amano Minene Uryuu Murumuru
BPM: 230
Filesize: 6411kb
Play Time: 03:34
Difficulties Available:

Deus Ex [Expert] (6,43 stars, 789 notes)
Murumuru [Easy] (1,6 stars, 193 notes)
Tsubaki Kasugano [Normal] (2,35 stars, 313 notes)
Yukiteru Amano [Hard] (2,91 stars, 458 notes)
Yuno Gasai [Insane] (4,28 stars, 595 notes)

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Zetsubou Plantation
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ver 2.2
My first map ^_^
Thanks for mods and help!!

Last edited by EneDZakura 2015-03-21T11:26:50+00:00, edited 216 times in total.

EneDZakura

Joined February 2013

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EneDZakura 2013-08-11T14:44:01+00:00

Easy is completed!

EneDZakura

Joined February 2013

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EneDZakura 2013-08-12T10:39:15+00:00

Jeiserity is completed!

EneDZakura

Joined February 2013

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EneDZakura 2013-08-12T15:04:33+00:00

Beatmap is completed!

HabiHolic

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-08-13T09:02:32+00:00

good map~

EneDZakura

Joined February 2013

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EneDZakura 2013-08-13T10:34:25+00:00

Thanks =)

EneDZakura

Joined February 2013

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EneDZakura 2013-08-13T16:01:06+00:00

Map is updated.

acid

Joined July 2013

acid 2013-08-15T09:41:16+00:00

Easy:
01:26:121 - 01:30:671 You might want to switch between two hitcircles and a small slider.
02:11:075 - 02:11:345 It went too quick on that part, you can put some distance between them to adjust the timing.
Personally, I also think the hitcircles are a little too large.

Normal:
I find no problem with the normal. It's great work.
Hard:
00:35:369 - 00:35:789 The slider velocity is too quick doesn't match with the beat. 00:37:437 - 00:37:817 Has the same problem as the earlier one.
01:18:695 - 01:22:175 It would be a good idea to put in a long spinner there. The time section that I put isn't exact but you can understand what I mean.

Jeiserity:
00:49:558 - 00:50:228 That stream is a little too quick a small slider with repeating reverse arrows would be a better choice in my opinion. 01:07:400 -01:07:850 The same problem as earlier. The stream is way too quick to press.
01:55:298 - 01:55:798 The stream is too quick again. :O
The only problem I find in this difficulty are the streams, they are too compressed in small timespans

That's it. :O I love this map. It's great work.

MMCherry

Joined July 2010

MMCherry 2013-08-15T09:47:37+00:00

HI。

[Hard]
I find so many notes‘ and sliders' distance are not consistent and too close or far， that i dont know if it is a intentional setting=A=? or you didn't open the disrance snap mode？？
For exmple
01:02:907 (5) - Too close to the previous note。
From02:53:776 (4) - to 02:54:298 (5) - According to the setting of "distance snap"，these sliders’ distance are too close and not consistent
02:55:342 (6) - Too close to the previous slider
and so on。

Besides，this song is 230BPM， those successive notes of 1/4 beat are too hard and fast ，it is not appropriate to the [hard diff] i think..you can use slider to replace it 。

I‘m a tyro and my english is poor，hope you can understand my reply =A=!!

EneDZakura

Joined February 2013

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EneDZakura 2013-08-15T13:51:03+00:00

Thanks all. Done.

EneDZakura

Joined February 2013

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EneDZakura 2013-08-18T14:29:22+00:00

Updated offset.

EneDZakura

Joined February 2013

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EneDZakura 2013-08-26T13:42:35+00:00

Updated, added two new diffs.

N E K O

Joined September 2010

N E K O 2013-08-31T05:03:08+00:00

[General]

umm..did you play the Dnjeiserity Diff and insane diff?
I played and thought they're strange.
First,some parts are not on the beat,that will be a strange part.
second,it's a 230bpm song,so some blank parts have to be mapped.

[DnJeiserity]

From 00:21:404 (1) - to 00:28:709 (2) - and 00:30:013 (6) - to00:36:796 (8) -
I think there're varieties of way to set notes and sliders,give it a different try.And sliders of high speed are not suggested to use this radian.
SPOILER

00:38:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it should start here,you can take 50%speed and listen it again.

00:41:231 Here's a white line ,it means a "beat",so don't make it a blank.this may be better.
SPOILER

00:43:839 (6) - make it a reverse slider.

00:44:361 a note too.
SPOILER

00:45:013 i suggest to have a note here.and then try this.the previous pattern will make people hard to read what the rythem is.
SPOILER

00:53:491 a white line again,i prefer to add note here.

From 00:58:970 (1) - to 01:00:665 (8) - A good part,It Will Be A Good diff if you do it in the whole diff.

I suggest a breack time from 01:21:665 to 01:25:318

01:32:361 umm,a strange break here,try to map it.

01:42:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A good chance to make jumps with notes and sliders!

01:51:144 (1,2) - note a very good idea to put notes on lyrics in the highest difficulty

01:55:318 (1) - nice part from here to 02:02:883 (2) - . then i think put two same sliders here like this.02:03:144 (3,4) -

02:22:448 (1) - really nice part from here to 02:25:448 (8) - .

02:31:318 also don't make blanks like this.map it.

[Hard]

Also some blanks should be mapped in my opinion.
01:28:187 (1,2) - strange,,,try to start from white line to white line.
01:39:144 (7,8,9,10) - i suggest to put them apart like this
SPOILER

And I also saw insane diff,many problems like Dej diff so....
I strongly suggest you to look at Saten-san's Yousei Teikoku map.
Yousei Teikoku's songs are very very nice to map,because it has strong beat and fast speed.Try to think what i mean...
I don't mean to blame or something,just see more maps and then come back to your own map, then you'll see new ideas and get new feelings.

If you still need mod,I'll do it then, just send me messages.Good luck.

EneDZakura

Joined February 2013

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EneDZakura 2013-08-31T07:00:15+00:00

Thanks, N E K O !!!
Thanks for the star!

Cloudchaser

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2013-09-01T08:30:39+00:00

Always Mirai Nikki ;_; by the way I love Yousei Teikoku.
I hope mod this later.~

EneDZakura

Joined February 2013

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EneDZakura 2013-09-01T08:36:24+00:00

-Cloudchaser wrote:
Always Mirai Nikki ;_; by the way I love Yousei Teikoku.
I hope mod this later.~

Thanks ^_^
I love too!

Ciyus Miapah

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2013-09-01T11:09:52+00:00

hello random mods by me

[General]
change BG, im scared
try reduce kiai time
Delete tags DnJeiser Yousei Teikoku Zetsubou Plantation Mirai Nikki. < tags just for user GD or anything related with your maps
are you follow instrument sound or follow vocal sound? your map is little bit confusing

[Begin]
i think just use 1/1 beat in this map
add some Hitsounds for better map

00:29:752 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - - CTRL+ H or CTRL +J seems legit or i think resnap this
00:29:752 (3) - NC
00:33:926 (6) - NC
00:38:231 (1) - why 1/2 beat in here?
00:43:448 (4) - 1/2 beat, resnap the slider

[Easy]
i think this diff is Normal, so Change Easy diff to Normal and change Song Difficulty to Normal

01:02:100 (6) - New combo
01:02:622 (1) - release NC
01:04:709 (3) - new combo
02:10:709 - add circle
02:33:926 (3) - NC
02:36:535 (5) - NC
02:44:883 (6) - NC
02:46:187 (1) - why you NC this?
02:56:883 (6) - NC

[Normal]
change diff name to Normal+

02:31:839 (5) - NC
03:32:883 - add circle
03:33:144 - add circle

[Hard]

00:36:535 (6) - shorter slider to 00:36:796
00:37:187 (7) - resnap slider to 00:37:057
00:54:144 - Add circle
01:36:796 (9) - NC
01:37:187 (1) - release NC
01:37:709 (2,3,4) - stack this, jumps too hard to read
01:45:926 (1,2) - NC in 2
01:49:057 (6,1) - NC in 6
01:51:144 (4) - NC
01:56:883 (4,5,6) - i think this stream is extreme for 230 bpm simply it to1/2 beat
02:50:361 (3,4,5,6) - ^
03:18:013 (3,4,5,6) - ^

[Insane]

AR+1
OD-1 or -2

just Place notes each beat, is insane diff remember
Try Reduce overmap streaming in this map
try New combo new notes pattern

[DnJeiserity]
HP -1 or -2
OD -1

Im surrender!

EneDZakura

Joined February 2013

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EneDZakura 2013-09-01T11:45:26+00:00

Thank you so much!

EneDZakura

Joined February 2013

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EneDZakura 2013-09-01T12:06:45+00:00

Map is general updated!
Please download again :3
Thanks ^_^

-Srui-

Joined October 2012

-Srui- 2013-09-01T13:33:35+00:00

Hihi ~ :3

[Easy]

00:44:622 (5) - NC
between 01:13:578 (1) - and 01:17:752 (1) - so bored add something !
01:30:274 (5) - NC
01:33:404 (1) - remove NC
01:38:883 (4) - same slider shape 01:36:796 (3) -
02:08:883 - add circle ?
between 02:09:404 (4) - and 02:14:100 (1) - add something
02:51:665 (3,4) - jump ?
02:57:926 (6,1) - change NC
03:20:883 (2) - same slider shape 03:16:970 (1) -

[Normal]
- 00:24:535 (1,4) - change NC
  00:29:752 - add circle
  01:00:796 (5) - +1 return or add circle
  01:09:926 - add circle
  01:11:491 (4) - same slider shape 01:10:709 (2) -
  01:27:665 (6) - ^ 01:26:622 (3) -
  01:34:578 (4,1) - change NC
  between 02:06:796 - and 02:09:404 (1) - add something
  02:23:491 (3) - change shape
  02:47:491 - add spinner at 02:49:057 -
  02:49:578 (9) - remove NC
  03:16:709 (5,1) - change NC
  
  [Normal+]
  - between 00:35:361 (8) - and 00:38:231 (1) - insert break time
    00:49:578 (5) - -1 return
    between 00:55:839 - and 00:58:970 (1) - add something
    01:10:970 (3) - move to (232,136)
    01:13:057 (4,1) - change NC
    01:26:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this rhythm
    
    01:29:622 (2,4,6) - place on white tick
    01:35:100 (2) - rhythm error
    01:37:057 (7) - same slider shape 01:36:274 (5) -
    01:42:078 - add circle
    01:42:796 - ^
    01:55:318 (1) - straight line
    01:58:709 (2) - move to (392,224)
    02:09:926 (6) - too bent
    02:37:057 (3) - -1 return and 02:37:839 (1) - move to 02:37:578 - finish at 02:39:144 -
    02:51:404 (5) - +1 return
    02:58:709 (2,3) - distance
    03:26:622 (4) - opposite slider
    
    [Hard]
    - 00:36:535 (6,7) - rhythm error
      00:38:622 (2) - overlapping 00:38:231 (1) - start
      00:44:491 (3) - remove
      00:45:926 (3,4) - distance ?
      00:49:970 (6) - remove
      01:17:491 (1) - move to 01:17:752 -
      01:36:535 (8,1) - too close. Many players will click earlier than necessary.
      01:37:709 (3,4) -exchange
      01:42:535 (8,1) - too close
      01:45:926 (1) - -1 return
      02:05:491 (5) - it's boring
      02:13:839 (1) - move to 02:14:100 - and 02:13:839 - add circle
      02:33:926 (2) - remove NC
      02:57:404 - add circle
      03:16:839 (1) - place on long white tick
      
      [Insane]
      - 00:22:448 (5) - straight slider
        00:38:231 (1) - place on long white tick
        00:45:796 (3,4) - distance
        00:55:839 (4) - -1 return and 00:56:361 - add circle
        01:13:578 (10) - big sv change，it is too sudden
        01:42:665 (3) - move to long white tick
        01:46:448 (6) - 1 gird up
        01:51:926 - add circle
        01:53:100 (1) - move to 01:53:231 - finish at 01:55:057 -
        02:02:883 (2) - -1 return
        02:07:970 (7,8) - remove
        02:13:839 (1) - move to 02:14:100 - and 02:13:839 - add circle
        02:41:100 (3) - rhythm error..
        02:47:231 (1) - move to 02:47:491 -
        02:55:318 (7) - big sv change
        02:58:448 (5) - move to (320,176)
        03:22:187 (1) - remove and add something
        
        [DnJeiserity]
        between 00:36:796 (8) - and 00:38:166 (1) - add something
        00:39:600 (8) - +1 return
        00:44:491 (1,2) - move to white tick
        00:56:426 - add circle
        01:07:318 (5) - NC
        01:38:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not with song
        01:46:970 (4) - NC
        02:03:665 (3) - ^
        02:13:448 (4) - +1 return
        02:20:361 (5) - NC
        02:40:187 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm
        
        03:07:839 (1) - end at 03:08:100 -
        03:16:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - move to long white tick
        03:21:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - not with song

EneDZakura

Joined February 2013

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EneDZakura 2013-09-01T14:33:37+00:00

Thanks!
Done.

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2013-09-01T17:42:50+00:00

Ello! ^^ Random mod!

[Easy]
hmm, some of your objects appear closer then how they really should be :S You should use DS (Distance snapping) to help, especialyl for Easy/Normal modes.
00:24:274 (2) - ?

00:29:752 (1,2,3) - Too close to each other.
00:38:100 (1,2) - ^
00:55:578 (4) - Move to 00:55:839 for better rhythm consistency (so it has the similar spacing from 00:53:752 (2,3) - as 00:50:622 (1) - )
00:58:970 (1) - Add finish to the head. If your unsure how to, simply double click on the head on your timeline like this:

You'll know its been elected once it been highlighted in red. Add the finish and your done! ^^
01:03:144 (5) - NC
01:07:318 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:15:665 (1) - ^
01:34:448 (5) - NC
01:42:796 (9) - ^ And add finish
01:51:144 (2) - Add finish
01:55:318 (1) - ^ on the head
02:03:665 (1) - ^
02:09:404 (5) - NC
02:10:970 (6) - Add finish on the tail (And that is not the reverse sign, its this:

)
02:40:187 (4) - NC
02:49:578 (1) - Add finish
02:49:578 (1,2,3) - Spacing?
02:57:926 (1) - Add finish
03:25:057 (3) - NC
03:33:404 (1) - Add finish

You should really fix your DS in this map

[Normal]

Approach rate Should be around 5.
Overall difficulty +1

00:23:491 (5) - NC
00:25:057 (1) - Remove NC, not necessary here.
00:53:752 (1) - Add finish on the tail at 00:54:796.
00:55:057 (1) - Appears to soon after the slider. Try moving it to 00:55:839, and extend its tail to 00:57:926.
00:58:970 (1) - Add finish to the head (look back to what I've previously mentioned in Easy mode, at 00:58:970 (1))
00:58:970 - Why is the audio soft here??? Change it back to normal please!
01:07:318 (1) - Add finish
01:26:100 (1) - ^
01:30:274 (1) - ^
01:42:274 (2) - Add finish to the tail.
01:55:318 (1) - Add finish to the head.
02:03:665 (6) - ^ Also NC should be here, not 02:03:926 (1) - ...
02:10:970 - Rhythm suggestion:

So you can add that concluding finish hitsound at 02:12:013.
02:43:057 (5) - Add finish to the tail.
02:44:883 (6) - NC
02:47:491 (1) - Add finish
02:49:578 (1) - ^ On the head.
02:57:926 (1) - ^
03:08:361 - 03:11:491 You could also add a spinner here, buts that's just imo.
03:21:013 (6) - NC, not 03:22:448 (1) - .

[Normal+]

A mapset can only have 1 of each difficulty.Either this diff or the other is removed/changed.
Slider velocity is too high. The song's BPM is already high enough, so like the last diff,just simply keep it at 1.00

00:25:318 (2) - Add a finish.
00:31:839 (1) - ^ Instead of whistle.
00:46:448 (5) - ^
00:58:970 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:07:318 (1) - ^
01:15:404 (6) - Add finish on the tail.
01:42:796 (6) - ^
01:51:144 (3) - Add finish on the head.
01:55:318 (1) - ^
02:03:665 (3) - ^
02:12:013 (4) - Add finish
02:37:578 (1) - ^
02:49:578 (1) - ^
02:57:926 (1) - ^ On the head.
03:03:665 - 03:06:274 Map this part please, to remove awkward break.
03:33:404 (1) - Add finish

[Hard]
00:29:753 (1) - Add finish
00:38:622 (2) - I suggest replacing it with 00:38:231 (1) - here.
00:46:187 (4) - Add finish to the tail.
00:54:796 (7) - Add finish to the head.
00:58:970 (1) - ^
01:07:318 (3) - ^
01:26:100 (1) - ^
01:32:361 (3) - ^
01:42:796 (1) - ^
01:51:144 (1) - ^
01:55:318 - Rhythm suggestion:

02:03:665 (6) - Add finish to the head.
02:07:839 (4) - NC since slider has change of speed.
02:12:013 (1) - Add finish to the head.
02:26:622 (1) - ^ Instead of whistle.
02:36:535 (1) - ^ On the tail.
02:49:578 (1) - ^ On the head.
02:57:926 (4) - ^ On the head.
03:06:274 (7) - ^ On the head.
03:07:318 - Add something here, song's not over till its over >.<

[Insane]
...Can't mod maps beyond this level

Sorry.

Overall, I'd say this map looks ok, but there's still lots of room for improvement!
Hope this helps~!

EneDZakura

Joined February 2013

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EneDZakura 2013-09-02T07:20:09+00:00

Thanks!
Done.

Lyase

Joined March 2011

Lyase 2013-09-02T15:51:02+00:00

title is "絶望plantation"

EneDZakura

Joined February 2013

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EneDZakura 2013-09-03T06:35:10+00:00

Lyase wrote:
title is "絶望plantation"

Thanks!

EneDZakura

Joined February 2013

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EneDZakura 2013-09-03T06:49:00+00:00

Updated!
New titles diff.

CryOfDeath

Joined January 2013

CryOfDeath 2013-09-05T16:26:28+00:00

Hello, I'm sorry to interrupt, but the streams is too fast, do all to the 300 will not be easy) Interested in whether you rated your beatmaps - I do not know, but the stream it noticeably decreased, and overall good.

P.S. I have not tried to do beatmaps , so I can`t judge your stream)

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