1. 00:00:189 (1) - J'aurai Ctrl+J ça pour une meilleure transition avec l'objet suivant
2. 00:02:715 (3,4) - J'aurai mis un slider a la place la , ca fit better
3. 00:05:241 (1) - Same que la première suggestion !
4. 00:07:767 (3,4) - Same as 00:02:715 (3,4) - , met un slider !
5. 00:21:662 (2) - Je l'aurai curv légèrement pour blanket
6. 00:22:294 (3) - Je l'aurai placé là : x:304 y:320 pour suivre la ligne avec (2)
7. 00:25:452 (1) - Pareil mais c'est pour suivre la continuité du slider x:288 y:204
8. 00:25:452 (1,3) - Ptet essaie de les blanket ?
9. 00:28:610 (4,5) - La transition est bizarre ici , et ca peut être mal readable pour les newbies !
10. 00:31:767 (2,3) - Pareil sauf que c'est readable
11. 00:39:346 (5,1) - Cet overlap <.< Tu aurais pu les curv quoi xD
12. 00:45:662 (1,2) - J'vois pas le flow ici owo
13. 00:48:189 (1,2,3,4) - C'est tout sauf readable ça imo ! Je te conseillerai de peaufiner les transitions entre les notes!
14. 00:56:400 (2,3,4,5) - C'est pas bien le C/c
15. 01:15:346 (7,1) - Le blanket peut être meilleur
16. 01:19:136 (5,6) - Ca tu ne pourras pas rank xD C'est tout carré et pis c'est pas bo
17. 01:25:452 (7) - J'irai delete et mettre deux notes a la place o.o
18. 01:29:873 (5,6) - Same as 01:19:136 (5,6) -
19. 01:36:189 (1,2,3) - I can't describe the weirdness here xD
20. 01:38:715 (4) - J'placerai la pour marquer la continuité de la ligne x:480 y:96
21. 01:40:610 (7,1) - J'aurai blanket !
22. 01:41:241 (1,2,3) - Va curv ces sliders , le flow est quasi inexistant laaaaa xD
23. Cette diff est passable , tu peux encore l'améliorer !

1. Le CS est trop petit imo!
2. 00:14:715 (7,1) - J'aurai blanket ici
3. 00:25:452 (1) - Je l'aurai curv comme 00:27:346 (3) - et pis j'aurai reverse
4. 00:41:873 (2,5) - J'aurai stack :p
5. 00:48:189 (5) - Ca sort un peu de l'écran , fais gaffe ! Je te conseille de le curv et de le bouger a droite de façon a que ca blanket avec 00:50:083 (6) -
   
6. 01:01:767 (2) - La , si tu blanket pas , je te bouffe l'anus !
7. 01:01:767 (2,3,4) - J'ferai un triangle avec ces 3 objets !
8. 01:03:346 (5) - New Combo !
9. 01:13:452 (6) - Pareil !
10. 01:24:504 (7,1) - J'aurai stack !
11. 01:33:662 (4,5,6) - Fais un triangle !
12. 01:43:136 (3) - Fais le comme (2)
13. 01:47:557 (2,3) - Va me curv çaaaa , le flow est tout naze ici xD
14. 02:00:820 (3,4,1) - Ton triangle est isocèle pd va me faire plus équitéralement !
15. Très bonne Normal pd

1. 00:00:189 (1,2,3) - You can better blanket !
2. 00:07:767 (4) - The sliderwave can be much better !
3. 00:24:189 (8) - Reduce curv !
4. 00:27:346 (4) - I'd curv it a biiiiit for increase flow
   
   amazing curved slider

   
5. 00:29:241 (5) - You can adjust the point for make a better slider !
6. 00:30:189 (6,4) - I'd stack (4) on (6)
7. 01:06:504 (2) - I'd Ctrl+G here , it fits better imo !
8. 01:08:083 (4) - I'd adjust that note here x:272 y:96
9. 01:19:767 (3,4) - That symmetrical can be much better !
10. 02:01:452 (1) - I'd put that note here for make a triangle x:324 y:128
11. Really nice diff ! Great work !

1. 00:11:873 (5) - Ctrl+G baka
2. 00:23:557 (3,4,5,6) - Ils sont trop carrés tes sliders laaa ;_; Curv les !
3. 01:19:767 (1,2,3,4) - Blanquette de veau incoming
4. 01:21:662 (3) - La même pd
5. 01:29:873 (6) - NC moi ca 01:29:873 (6) -
6. 01:32:399 (1,2,3,4,6,7,8) - Tu peux stack le (2) , le (4) , le (6) et le (8)
7. Great diff Arrival <3

1. 00:37:767 (3,4,1) - I'd space these notes cause it's boring to not move cursor in that slow triple !
2. 01:06:504 (3) - That overlap isn't disturbing but you can change it :p
3. 01:47:557 (1,1,2) - I guess that symmetrical can be much improved !
4. Amazing job you did there !

Secretpipe wrote:

[U38's Insane]

1. 00:37:767 (3,4,1) - I'd space these notes cause it's boring to not move cursor in that slow triple !
   no. disagree with your idea.
2. 01:06:504 (3) - That overlap isn't disturbing but you can change it :p
   ok
3. 01:47:557 (1,1,2) - I guess that symmetrical can be much improved !
   No idea.
4. Amazing job you did there !

Otokaze - Ame Michi

1. 00:32:399 (3) - avoir ce genre de rythme dans une easy est vraiment bizarre je trouve, je te conseille plutot ça http://puu.sh/criDn.jpg ou ça http://puu.sh/criGI.jpg
2. 00:42:189 (2,3) - ta un overlap un etrange, mais je sais pas comment tu pourrais fixé (puisque j'imagine que tu veux garde le 2 parallèle avec le 1 ) sinon une idée
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   ~

1. 01:53:873 (1) - ctrl j + ctrl h + ctrl g ca rend mieu je trouve comme ca

• 
  
  coucou Kawaiwkyik

1. 01:29:241 (2) - rotate this slide in clockwise and make a blanket with the 3, it makes a better flow imo
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   ~
2. 01:53:873 (1,2) - may be this is better
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   ~

1. i'll suggest you to reduce a bit the drain
2. 00:16:767 (2) - this circle is not snapped correctly, may be do a square with jumps
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   ~

Neil Watts wrote:

well, here's my noob mod for my favourite WC

Otokaze - Ame Michi

[Easy]
- 01:49:452 (5) - no hitsounds here?
- 01:59:557 (4) - same
Nothing to say else, except the hitsounds are a little weak (volume).

Hitsound corrigés, je ne pense pas volume up les HS sry.

[Normal]
- 00:41:873 (2) - check the distances? Rien d'anormal OwO
- 00:48:189 (5) - please don't repeat long sliders more than once. Try to put another slider ? J'ai réduit, mais sans rajouter de slider, le rythme étant particulier, j'ai peur que ce soit confus.

[wkyik's Hard]

- 00:28:294 (2,3) - well, I guess it's a jump.
- 00:34:294 (3) - I think it's a bit overmapped.

[Insane]
Nothing to say but I think the first part of the song should have a better soundmapping. J'essaie de bien faire un contraste entre début et fin de la map en fait.
Merci Neil

[U38's Insane]
- 00:00:189 (1,2,3) - well, you should stack them differently to make them easier to read. I think.
- 00:07:136 (5,6,7,8) - I think it will really fits better if you turn them into sliders.
- 00:16:610 (1) - fix distances?
- 00:42:504 (3,3) - be careful. stacking sliders is unrankable - and the QAT feel free to unrank for some very little things since rankingv2.
- 00:48:189 (1,2,3,1,2) - I like your soundmapping style, but I think you should use one of the custom hitsounds here.
- 01:27:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - well... That's...really hard. ._.


Sorry for the short mod. This map seems fine...So I don't find a lot of things.
Good luck to rank this!

Thank you !

Ovoui wrote:

coucou arrival using http://osu.dglover.co/mod/ to mod

[Easy]

1. 00:32:399 (3) - avoir ce genre de rythme dans une easy est vraiment bizarre je trouve, je te conseille plutot ça http://puu.sh/criDn.jpg ou ça http://puu.sh/criGI.jpg Changé
2. 00:42:189 (2,3) - ta un overlap un etrange, mais je sais pas comment tu pourrais fixé (puisque j'imagine que tu veux garde le 2 parallèle avec le 1 ) sinon une idée
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   ~

Changé merci

[Normal]

1. 01:53:873 (1) - ctrl j + ctrl h + ctrl g ca rend mieu je trouve comme ca

Changé

[wkyik's Hard]

• 
  
  coucou Kawaiwkyik

1. 01:29:241 (2) - rotate this slide in clockwise and make a blanket with the 3, it makes a better flow imo
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   ~
2. 01:53:873 (1,2) - may be this is better
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   ~

[U38's Insane]

coucou Urushi38, i love your diff

1. i'll suggest you to reduce a bit the drain
2. 00:16:767 (2) - this circle is not snapped correctly, may be do a square with jumps
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   ~

Well sorry for this tiny nazi mod, i hope it will be usefull ! Gl for rank o/

Thanks a loot !

Secretpipe wrote:

[wkyik's Hard]

1. 00:00:189 (1,2,3) - You can better blanket !
2. 00:07:767 (4) - The sliderwave can be much better !
3. 00:24:189 (8) - Reduce curv ! ?
4. 00:27:346 (4) - I'd curv it a biiiiit for increase flow
   
   amazing curved slider

   
5. 00:29:241 (5) - You can adjust the point for make a better slider !
6. 00:30:189 (6,4) - I'd stack (4) on (6) no, because the ds
7. 01:06:504 (2) - I'd Ctrl+G here , it fits better imo !
8. 01:08:083 (4) - I'd adjust that note here x:272 y:96
9. 01:19:767 (3,4) - That symmetrical can be much better ! better now :3
10. 02:01:452 (1) - I'd put that note here for make a triangle x:324 y:128
11. Really nice diff ! Great work !

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Arrival wrote:

Grazie mille Kama ! <3

PORCO DIO

Arrival wrote:

yea sorry
But what about Mitis - Movement (In my graveyard) ? I'll finish it as soon as this one is ranked.
So if you want....

Arrival wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 25 janvier 2015 at 18:37:17

Artist: Otokaze
Title: amamichi
Tags: Kawaiwkyik Urushi38 Rain
BPM: 95
Filesize: 4137kb
Play Time: 02:01
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1,34 stars, 138 notes)
2. Insane (4,23 stars, 405 notes)
3. Normal (1,85 stars, 175 notes)
4. U38's Insane (4,3 stars, 389 notes)
5. wkyik's Hard (2,13 stars, 198 notes)

Download: Otokaze - amamichi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hey

Realazy wrote:

pretend im a BN

[General]

don't forget to add rizia in tags
you could add "rail road" and "instrumental" to tags according to the ranked set
also according to the ranked mapset, title should be Amamichi Referring to the mania version

you have a lot of DS issues in easy and normal, i suggest you go on a quick overhaul without grid snap to fix DS inconsistencies due to the grid Fixed

really big gap between Hard and Insane, Kin should add a diff between those 2 :thinking:

[Easy]

DS issues

00:20:399 (1) - really far from the last circle
00:34:294 (5) - too far from the next
00:38:715 (4) - too close
00:55:768 (1) - 1.6x DS is way too big
01:05:873 (1) - too close
01:26:083 (1) - too far

00:41:873 - you could add a note here, it feels really empty even for an easy
00:42:189 (2,3) - i don't recommend using such overlaps in easies
01:15:346 (7,1) - pls fix this blanket
01:19:136 (5,6) - you should make the angle between those less sharp, it would make it more comfortable for an easy diff. same goes for 01:42:504 (2) - 01:45:031 (6) - and 01:56:083 (4) -

[Normal]

DS issues

00:19:767 (7) - too far
01:13:136 (5) - too close
01:43:767 (4) - too far

00:37:136 (2) - again that's pretty sharp movement Doesn't seem really off for a normal
00:48:189 (5) - not really a fan of using sliders with multiple repeats since new players aren't really used to them Isn't the normal diff here to help them get used to it ? If someone makes this remark again I'll change it.

[wkyik's Hard]

00:05:557 - why does the spacing suddenly change from 1.2x to 1x here?
00:11:557 (3) - that's a really big jump without any significant sound on the head
00:23:557 (7) - here however, you could consider making this a jump
00:29:241 (5) - stack it on 00:27:346 (4) - 's tail?
00:38:083 (5) - pretty unappealing shape imo
00:49:452 (4) - i assume you're following the drums so this note shouldn't be here
01:11:557 (2,3) - blanket those?
01:19:136 (2) - this shouldn't be a jump considering all the other occurences in the kiai where there was no jump
01:28:294 (6) - this isn't in line with the rest of the pattern, it should go at x:328|y:316
01:38:083 (3,4) - ctrl+g looks less confusing here and more comfortable to play

[Insane]

i don't really hear sounds where most of your 1/8 triplets are but they feel alright to play, just thought i should mention it I'll stick with them for the moment

i also suggest you rework most of your comboing since it's either inconsistent or just done for aesthetics which isn't really a good reason to apply NCs imo, NCs every 2nd downbeat should do the trick since this is a 95bpm map that plays like a 190bpm map Reworked a bit, I think it should be fine

00:14:241 (5,6) - ctrl+g this rhythm, would feel much better to play
00:32:873 (6) - consider splitting this into 2 circles since the second sound is different from the rest of your pattern, and also it's on a downbeat
00:49:610 (1,2,3) - maybe those should have lower spacing than the next pattern for more emphasis
01:01:294 (2) - that's way too big and there's no important sound on here either
01:10:452 - there should be a note here though
01:50:715 (8,9) - those should be the same sliders yet they aren't
01:59:557 (3,4) - ^

[Extra]

00:42:504 (3,3) - you could make those have the same shape potentially? Not fan
01:57:978 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this felt pretty awkward to play and it's somewhat hard to read, you could probably ctrl+g 6 and 7 and place the next slider closer so it doesn't create a huge jump
02:01:452 (4) - NC?

really sick diff