alacat wrote:

Shingeki no uws :3/


[Easy]

1. 00:01:454 (1) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical same as here.00:00:172 (1,2) -
   Alright fixed.
   
2. 00:10:910 - add a note ? I guess you follow the guitar at this part.
   It's good suggestion but I'd like to leave blank for now. :<
   
3. 00:18:563 (5) - add a finish to the tail of the slider instead of whistle ? it needs stronger sound imo
   It's too much imo, I prefer whistle since there is no finish in music.
   
4. 00:23:780 (5) - I recommend you to use 1/4 slider at here. i want a drum whistle to the tail of the slider.00:24:106 -
   I feel 1/4 slider is too much here :<
   
5. 00:33:889 (2) - add a whistle to the tail of the slider.
   fixed
   
6. 00:50:843 (2) - same as here. 00:18:563 (5)
   
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7. 00:52:962 - ,00:54:266 - ,00:55:571 - How about putting whistle sound with constant rhyth at kiai time ?
   ok done :3

[Normal]

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1. 00:23:454 (3) - it's fit for drum sound i feel. and you can make the natural flow.
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/950364
   cool
   
2. 00:33:889 (3) - add a whistle to the tail of the slider.
   done
   
3. 00:51:495 (5) - same as easy diff. finish sound ...
   Too much imo.
   
4. 01:03:407 (2) - add a finish to the head of the slider.
   I'll do whistle instead.
   
5. 01:14:973 (2) - add a finish to the tail of the slider instead of clap ?
   Clap seems better for me. ;_;
   
   I want a whistle sound at kiai time too
   dun!

[Insane]

1. OD+1 ? i like more difficult for insane diff.
   Gonna think more about it.
   
2. 00:11:888 (1) - add a whistle to the tail of the slider or put 20-30% volume.
   ok
   
3. 00:16:769 (5) - ctrl +g , it needs more spacing for jump.
   I think crtl + g doesn't work here. :<
   
4. 00:24:595 (1) - try to make the spacing equal here ? looks better imo.
   https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/950924
   fixed
   
5. 00:27:856 (2) - How about remaking this slider ? :3 Aim for the next note.
   https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/950927
   Good idea, I'll try it.
   
   
6. 01:25:600 - 30~50% volume ,please :3
   fixed
   love this diff

this map is really interesting <3

Good luck !

arken1015 wrote:

[Normal]
00:11:888 (1) - With HP drain rate 4, there's no need of 2 finish points like this so remove new combo of this note?
This I'd like to keep because it adds a bit of flare to the start of the break IMO.

00:17:747 (2) - Track of this slider covers (1)'s end point, if possible, would you re-shape this slider like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951040 ?
Ah, this is intentional. :3 I enjoy this flow more so than the blanket, and it's an idea that I think fits the song image.

00:47:419 (1,2) - (Suggestion) Why don't you make this couple same distance(Nazi orz) as 00:48:071 (3,4) :3?
fixed I think :<

[Insane]
00:06:019 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4 Jumps... There are only 80~82 mili-seconds to move cursor with this pattern so I worried for Mouse users orz or, I'm too old orz
00:11:236 (1,2,3,4) - ^
They are pretty difficult, but I think they're a pretty common technique now. I'll try to make them better here.



K...

osu! was changed too much orz

/me tries to learn new-style mapsets' techs

Crazy jumps! >:)

scanter wrote:

General

1. Make sure widescreen storyboard support. it is conflicted between mapsets

fixed

Easy

1. 00:17:095 (3,4,5) - Rhythm is a little strange IMO. how about this rhythm? it looks more followed well vocals.
   
   SPOILER

   

Alright I changed these rhythms.

Insane

1. 00:27:530 (1) - A little bad overlap. how about move to like x:123, y:180?
   moved it ._.
   
2. 00:36:497 (1) - Same. this is intended?
   Intended here.
   
3. 00:46:914 (1) - Unsnapped slider one lol
   fixed :<
   
4. 01:10:418 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - I like it ~~
   <3
   
5. 01:25:057 (3) - nazi. how about makes it more perfect y axis symmetry?

Asphyxia wrote:

Hi, as I requested M4M

General thoughts: Nothing I guess ;__;

Please respond to my suggestions, thanks

Easy>

00:27:530 (1) - I feel like this could be a normal slider because its not a blanket or anything, you know? ):
The reason why I shaped the slider this way is to give a bit of flare to this powerful hit in the music. When a slider has a unique bend, it gives it a really different feel that can match something in the song.

01:07:972 (1) - I feel like this slider would be better if you could do it like this:

SPOILER

Up to you really
This slider shape adds a bit of variety to the section with the previous sliders being just standard curves. It makes it more interesting imo.

01:22:829 (1) - I assume this is unsnapped so fix it maybe?
This is actually snapped in 1/3. Weird huh?
Nothing else, looks nice ^^

Normal>

01:09:928 (6) - Move 1 grid up to match with 01:09:276 (4) - ?
Well I just don't think that would have any benefit. :<

01:22:666 (1) - Same as in easy, well I guess you wanted to do this on purpose so I wont mention this again
Nice diff~

Insane>

+1 OD, Yeah there are streams but Od7 is too easy for this, seriously.
It's a good suggestion. I'll probably end up changing this, but I'd like to think about it more for now.
Nothing found, sorry

I like your mapset, nice! Also I'm so sorry for noob mod... so tired D:

I think I'll throw you couple starts o/

-Bakari- wrote:

Mod4Coffee yes plz

[General]

1. What a nice BG-Video! Give some respect to the studio and credit Wit Studio in tags since you use their video!
   
2. Disable Widescreen Support. It makes no sense to keep it enabled, you have no SB at all! (Widescreen Support is for SBing only, y'know!)
   ok
   
3. I don't really like your bright colours. Try to fade them a bit, think about our eyes!
   
   

   Combo1 : 177,197,184
   Combo2 : 177,151,139
   Combo3 : 190,126,177

Lol fixed. I can't pick good colors to save my life and your colors are awesome. Thanks!
Hopefully the guest mappers won't mind.

[Easy]

1. The diff is pretty nice, but some 3/2 beats and timing changes may bug beginners a bit. Consider reducing your OD by one tick. It will make diff more playable for beginners!
   hrm I think I'd like to leave for now. :< I think it might make the jump to the Normal too big.
   
   
2. 00:23:454 (4) - conider adding one repeat to this slider or making it a bit longer to emphasize vocals and music in this part. It plays much better if you end this slider later
   added a circle after it instead
   
3. 00:33:889 (2,3) - 1/2 sliders here are playable but they wiill stress beginners. Reducing the OD would work perfectly here, try it!
   
   
4. 00:38:617 (2,3,4) - nazi -they're obviously not parallel! It doesn't look cute and will make players/modders sad. Tryto fix it! :<
   fixed
   
5. 01:02:755 (1,2) - (2)'s tail is too close, players may mistakenly hit it. It looks confusing and beginners don't know what's flow So, this pattern will confuse them, try to make it a bit more understandable, please!
   fixed :3
   
   Nice diff. Reducing the OD would make it perfect, but maybe it's just me!

[Normal]

1. 01:07:320 (4,1) - your flow here bugs me a bit. I feel like it flows a bit strange, how about making flow a bit smoother here? Well, my idea is something like this.
   Note: AR here is lowered, so it won't look so messy :3
   Not sure what I was trying there. Fixed though.
   
   Amazing! Great diff, like this so much!

[Insane]

1. 00:09:524 (2,3) - why spacing here is different from previous 1/4s? It doesn't look like stacks and it kinda breaks your flow, consider keeping spacing consistent here!
   hmm I'll try stacking them
   
   Nothing else to say. Patterns are awesome and flow is really, really nice!

Well, this mapset is really great, [Easy] could be a bit more playable for beginners, tho.Anyway, have a well-earned Star! ~

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Good luck!

scanter wrote:

lfj's Insane

1. 00:37:150 (3) - How about change slider shapes like S curve? it would be better for vocals. yeah this is nazi good idea
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:10:571 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Nice work. I like it, but I think sv change like x1.0 -> x0.x more playable like UWS's diff. because of suddenly sv change lol actually this is quite predictable with the vocal changes, plus i used NC here so i think its fine

alacat wrote:

[lfj's Insane]

1. 00:19:052 (1) - add a whistle. sure
2. 00:19:541 (3) - clap ~
3. 01:01:440 (1) - soft - clap is better than drum i feel. i actually like how to drum here feels lol, matches the music pretty well
   only hit sound mod ... orz its fine <3

Asphyxia wrote:

lfj's Insane>

THIS needs +1 OD for sure! lol UWS' insane is already OD8, im keeping this OD7 because this is overall an easier insane and can be used as the transition diff between the hard and "real" insane
01:25:057 (3) - Unsnapped but I guess you wanted to do that. snapped in 1/6 lol
Nothing else, gomene!

-Bakari- wrote:

[lfj's Insane]

1. Since you don't have any long streams and jumps are perfectly playable OD8 would make this diff much more enjoyable for players. I'm not sure about this, so get more opinions before doing this, tho. this is aimed to be a transition diff between hard and UWS' Insane difficulty wise, so as UWS uses OD8 on his Insane i would like to keep this OD7 for spread sake
2. 00:03:084 (2,3,4) - one little thing - consistend spacing between these three objects would flow better, imo. Try to moce them and see if you like it or not! sure
   
   Awesome flow, nice rhythm. I love this! thank you <3

snlrocks wrote:

hey here for the mod cuz this song is so awesome and i sing it in the shower.

ignore that last bit ;3
xDD

[General]
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[Easy]
00:34:378 (3) - i prefer this slider to start 00:34:704 - here and end 00:34:867 - here.
sounds nicer in my opinion. you don't have to do this
I'm pretty confident with this rhythm because it allows the player to click at 00:34:378 - when the rhythm changes.

01:14:484 (1) - i find this spinner a little bit too long.
we don't wanna kill a beginner's hands XD
Hmm but I just don't see any better option here than this spinner.

[Normal]
i think you could enlarge the circle size by one more to make it more "normal"

00:23:128 (2,3,4) - i dont like how these sound very much.
i think the '2' is causing it . 00:23:291 - place it here instead and distance snap it of course.
It's a nice suggestion, but I prefer how it it now because it follows vocals and the bass hits in the percussion. Also moving the 2 forward 1/2 creates an awkward pause and the player has to read the change to 1/1 from 1/2.

00:49:049 (6) -

SPOILER

it looks better like that
ok I fixed but a bit differently :3



[Insane]
OMG THIS IS AWESOME

The distance snap is used so amazingly. usually those distances would annoy the crap out of me, but it works so awesomely here

well thats all for now. hope this helps a little. this map was my funnest mod, mostly cuz this song is so hardcore
Thanks!

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi~

UnitedWeSin wrote:

I'd love it if you would mod. ><><><><

Small suggestions, the mapset is already very good >->

[General]
00:00:172 - 00:01:150 - How about using the whistle from the drum sampleset for the notes here? (At least for your diffs). It sounds very nice imo.
I think they sound decent if I lower volume to like 20% but I think I'd rather just stick with the soft hits since I go straight into normal sample set. ;_;
Consider adding to tags <:

[Easy]
00:33:889 (2) - I'm not an avid user of these 1/2 spacings in an Easy >.<, you could try a 3/2 slider with one repeat.
00:43:001 (3) - ^
Confident in these rhythms ;__;

[Normal]
00:11:073 - How about adding a note here for guitars.
It's a great suggestion but I want to not do so. More simple is better here imo, and the way I placed the slider was inspired by the movement of the guitar. I can't replicate it when I add a note.

00:11:236 (5) - I'd suggest to extend this to 00:11:888, I think the 1/2 here is a bit odd as the song has that constant drums in 1/4 here, which would fit better as a slider.
I think I'd like to keep since there is a distinct change in the guitar at 00:11:725 on the red tick, and smashing the NC circle is something that I think players enjoy.


lfj's looks nice and it looks that you were on a rage in your Insane (all those 1/4 jumps D:), nice flow and rhythm :3
That'd be all from my part ;_; Good luck~ o/

Zero__wind wrote:

:3

General
timing seems complicated, the BPM may be wrong (could be 184.0*) or maybe the map needs additional timing sectional timing section. for example I think the beats at 00:22:313 - and 00:24:595 - are late. but sorry I can't help with this =.=
Totally, I have to get it checked.

Insane
why no finish for the first 4 notes
Because I think it sounds terrible. :< Idk how jona can stand it.

00:24:269 (1) - better move it to somewhere around (224,180) to make it smoother to be reached after hitting 00:24:106 (3) - and so you may try http://puu.sh/4rPEZ.jpg (copy and rotate sliders by 30° to get the latter one)
alright then fixed :3

00:32:584 (1,2) - better switch NC as you're not mapping to vocal?
The NC here makes the increased spacing easier to understand imo.

00:39:921 (1,2) - drum whistle for 1 and drum finish for 2?
Nice idea but I'd like to leave as is. It seems a bit too much noise for me.

00:46:099 (2) - may stack it at 00:46:262 (3) - 's end
To me stacking on the head fits the vocal idea.

00:51:495 (3,1) - better switch NC to tell that you've gone out of the pattern of 00:49:538 (1,2,3,4,1,2) -
I think both might work. I'd like to keep this way as a shout out to previous pattern 00:34:378 (2,3,1,2).

00:51:495 (3,2) - no finish at these?
But I don't hear a finish in the music to call for one.

01:10:418 (1,2) - better exchange NC? if you do, you should also deal with 01:12:364 (1,2) - and the latter
NC at 01:10:418 (1) is better imo to show pattern change and large jump.

01:17:255 (4,5) - move them together to (140,344) may be more powerful (opposite dirrection of the slider means stronger)
cool I'll try it


Normal
lol this is real hard, not gonna adjust to CS3?
I don't think it would be such a good idea. The patterns would not look very good. I'll stick with original intentions here.

Easy
nothing found

That's all
Good luck~