Hi~
M4M :3
[General]
Kiai time should begin in 00:34:476.
You need to set a Preview Time. I suggest it to put it in 00:34:476 too.
[Suck at Love]
00:22:937 (4,5) - Maybe make the curves open in the opposite side to avoid the overlap with the next slider?
00:26:591 (7,8) - Same as above, this could look better imo.
00:28:322 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The jumps here are toooooo long, you should decrease the distance a bit, also don't make them overlap, as it looks very bad, for the first combo, you can rotate (3,4) 90° clockwise. And for the last, just move (3,4) a bit above or down.
00:43:707 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This par is way confusing as you're using different spacing for the same time and in the same combo and it makes think that 00:44:283 (3,4) are 1/1 instead 1/2, you should put NCs in (3,5,7) to make this part more readable
00:48:322 (5,6,7) - Make this part look neater, and also, uncover the reverse arrow of (7) as this is unrankable.
01:17:553 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The flow you're trying to do is good, but the jumps are a bit long again, it's just matter of decrease the spacing for them.
01:26:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This could look neater with NCs in (3,5).
[Good at Love]
00:06:976 (2) - Unstack it, it may be a bit difficult to read.
00:30:245 (2) - Reverse it (Ctrl+G), this way this would flow better
00:33:514 (3) - Replace this for a single circle, there's no noticeable beat in 00:33:707 and due this it sounds a bit ankward.
00:33:707 - Reverse it (Ctrl+G), the flow will be nicer if you do.
01:16:014 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I thought this was a Hard, and some jumps here are way harder and in the highest diff, try to reduce the jumps here by a lot x.x
01:26:976 (2) - Unstack it, same as first suggestion.
[Perfect at Love]
First of all, is this a Normal? Try to use the same distance spacing for all objects, I really was surprised by the beginning x.x
Approach Rate goes to 5, fits better with the speed you have.
00:04:860 (3,4) - Avoid this kind of flow in a Normal, its a bit confusing for players in this stage as the have to go back what is a bit unexpected for them.
00:06:014 (5) - You also may need to replace this slider for something more easy to catch, like this:
00:14:283 (3) - Try arranging this slider in a way the end leads to the next note, it'll flow better.
00:28:322 (1,2,3) - Make something more simple here, all these repeats are confusing a lot to average players, try something like this:
00:33:514 (6) - As in Good in Love diff, a single circle instead this slider fits better.
00:33:514 (6) - Put NC, the combo is quite long.
00:43:707 (1,2,3,4) - Avoid this overlaps, they're very confusing, you should keep a tidy pattern in this level of difficulty.
00:52:937 (1,2,3) - I'd suggest to make a rhythm similar to 01:14:476 (1,2,3,4), not too needed, but it'd be more fitting here.
00:54:860 (1) - You should try something more simple, as I said above, like this:
01:11:783 (1,2,3) - Flow here is a bit weird imo, how about doing something like this?
01:19:860 (4) - Try to move this a bit away, being covered by previous sliders isn't very nice to see, also a bit hard to read.
01:26:014 (7) - Something like the one I suggested at 00:06:014 (5).
That'd be all from my part, good luck ;3