1. Hard (4.63 stars, 280 notes)
2. Normal (2.83 stars, 176 notes)

sheela901 wrote:

[General]
You forgot to put your name in the beatmap creator. (:3)How that even happen ;-;
Add some tags.Added Album name: Gradation

[Normal]
There's a lot of distance problem. You can check the AiMod
00:17:282 (2) - The distance to 00:17:491 (3) is not okay. It must be somewhere to Prev: 1.10x, Next: 1.10x like 00:12:699 (3)Done
00:27:907 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Fix the distance spacing.Done
And make something like that:

SPOILER

SPOILER

00:23:116 (5) - New combo?I think it would make too short
00:35:616 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Distance problem.Made Sliders instead so it's easier to read
02:29:366 (3,4,5,6) - Ugly overlaps. Try to change them.I tried

[Hard]
00:15:616 (1) - Maybe a blanket so it won't get overlap.Changed the rest of the combo as well
00:24:782 (6) - Distance problem.
00:27:907 (1) - ^
00:37:282 (1) - ^
00:39:157 (7) - ^
00:44:157 (3) - ^
00:46:032 (2) - ^
00:46:657 (4) - ^
01:02:907 (1) - ^
01:14:991 (6) - ^
01:24:366 (7) - ^
Stacked some and x1.00 on others
01:42:282 (4) - Don't get this overlapMoved so they don't overlap
02:19:157 (1) - Don't get overlap itself. It's kind of unreadable. But maybe you can let it. I'm not sureLet it what? *cliffhangers , I like though, so I'll keep it for now
02:44:991 (4,5,6) - Flip them vertically.Replaced with a slider so it's more readable

So, generally, pay attention on the distance spacing that where you put the circles and the sliders.

Good Luck!

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Good Thanks~

[Normal]
Mapping is good, just some spacing suggestions here.
Keep all notes at a constant DS if possible, try tiny grid size maybe
00:11:866 (2) - Keep at 1.0x or 0.9x DS (distance snap) Done
00:14:366 (7) - If possible don't stack this with 00:13:116 (5) - Managed to squeeze it in
00:15:616 (1) - Keep at 1.0x DS Done
00:19:366 (4) - ^ (applies to other notes too)
00:25:616 (1) - Doesn't suit the flow, Ctrl+G Done
00:26:866 (2) - Don't stack with 00:25:616 (1) - Made it blanket around 00:27:907 (1)
00:28:741 (5) - Finish hitsound here
00:28:949 - Remove finish Sounded better
00:29:574 (7,8,9) - Make it suits the shape of 00:28:949 (6) - Made it climb up instead of the awkward change
00:30:616 (1) - DS Changed the pattern entirely, not trying symmetry anymore
00:38:116 (1,2,1) - Follow this with 00:35:616 (1,2,3) - because 00:39:366 (1) - is too jumpy I sorta forgot it's normal
00:43:116 (2) - DS Done for now, might change this entirely but I don't have inspiration
00:48:116 (2,3,4,5) - Too close Done
00:59:366 (2) - DS Changed pattern, DS'd other notes too
01:04:574 (3) - Make this 0.7x DS instead of 0.61x Thinking of making the whole thing 1.0x to keep consistency, but I'll keep think about this
01:18:116 (3) - Move to 1 white tick behind Not sure what you're asking but i think it's fine
02:26:866 (1) - Decrease by 1 reverse Done and added a circle to make up for it
02:41:866 (1,2,3) - The flow is strange here Minor adjustments, I think its fine though
DS'd a lot thanks to you!~
[Hard]
00:13:741 (2) - Ctrl+G Changed for now, might change it back because of difficulty
00:29:991 (8) - Move to X:216 Y:124 Mved the prev note as well to make it curve nicer
00:46:032 (2) - Prefer not to stack
00:46:657 (4) - ^ Changed to 0.4x
01:11:866 (3) - Stack with tail of 01:10:616 (1) - Hopefully stacked better this time
02:51:866 (1,2,3,4) - same with 00:46:032 (2) -