Hi! Your request mod from long ago sorry about that X_X
[General]
The kiai time is very inconsistent throughout the difficulties, please fix this.
[Storyboard]
[General]
The kiai time is very inconsistent throughout the difficulties, please fix this.
[Storyboard]
- 00:55:147 - why not make this flash longer? so make it disappear a bit later because the beat is big and I think it will look nicer that way, but of course just a suggestion
- Also why do you have 2 black pictures? you could just use one of them, can't you? o.o
- 01:02:044 (2,3) - I think this would fit better to the song because 01:02:044 (2) - at the end of this slider there is a big beat so you should start something there and not end it - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2129720 - and 01:03:768 (3) - the start of this is basically on "nothing" and it doesn't feel good to play
- 02:33:768 (3,1,2) - huh very nazi but you can do this better - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2129735
- 02:37:216 (1) - again small thing xD just put the end of the slider a little up to make it parallel with 02:35:837 (3) - oh and also fix the distance please, it doesn't make sense to use 1,20 then 1,10 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2129742
- 03:31:010 (2) - this hit circle would fit better 03:31:354 - because of the small beat, it feels rather weird at it's current point
- 03:32:389 (1,2) - try this - http://puu.sh/carlP/35bf01fb70.jpg - because it fits better to the music >.< 03:33:078 - there is a beat here so ending the slider here would be better and also 03:33:423 - he starts singing here and the slider tick will be enough to emphasize the stuff in the middle what you actually mapped to
- 03:37:906 (1,2) - same as above - http://puu.sh/cartW/0b05a095d4.jpg
- 03:32:389 (1,2,3,1) - if you don't follow my suggestion at least fix the distance because it changes unreasonably
- 03:35:147 (1,2) - distance also
- 03:39:975 (3,1) - very small distance issue but I mostly suggest to improve the pattern - http://puu.sh/carHx/bdbb149d98.jpg
- 03:46:182 (1,2) - distance issue again, fix please
- 04:26:872 (4) - try replacing this for better flow - http://puu.sh/carM7/af032937ff.jpg
- 04:49:630 (1) - put this closer to 2, again unreasonable distance change - http://puu.sh/carPj/fd14827a2e.jpg
This diff is mainly fine even though I dislike SV change on the easiest difficulties and I hope the distance changes will be fixed as well (obviously where it's unreasonable).
- 01:11:010 (5,1) - the flow could be improved here, since (1) leads backwards, and the end of the slider is closer to the previous object, than the beginning of the slider, so try this for better flow and easier readability - http://puu.sh/cjPVu/0a9a404c35.jpg
- 01:14:803 (3) - why not remove this? it sounds better in my opinion and it also fits better to the song, it won't feel "overmapped"
- 01:48:941 (1,2,3,4) - this feels a bit hard and fast I think that removing 01:49:458 (2) - would make it easier and it would still fit to the song well, this difficulty already has plenty of 1/2s
- 01:54:975 (2) - why not remove this too to make it a little bit easier? it would also emphasize the melody better
- 02:02:561 (2) - this also feels a little forced in my opinion, and look at this - http://puu.sh/cjUc6/98fe614269.jpg - removing this note won't harm your diff imo, since as I said there is plenty of 1/2 and it really fits better because the vocals are also kind of slow at this part
- 02:03:941 (4) - ^
- 02:13:596 (2) - ^
- 02:14:975 (4) - ^
- 04:17:734 (2,1) - try to replace these for easier readability - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2155037
- 04:20:665 (1) - same here, but it's rather for polishing the pattern - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2155040
- 04:44:113 (1,2) - I'm sure you can make this nicer - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2155048
Anonymous:
- 01:20:320 (1) - you could maybe try this for better flow - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2155123
- 02:44:975 (6,7) - the clap would fit better on (6), and I would remove clap from the ending of (7), you can hear the beat is different on (6) than on the end of (7)
- 04:11:182 (1,2,3) - this really feels like it's late, I would place all of them 1/2 earlier, like this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2155169
- 04:19:113 (2) - I would rather put a slider start on the big beat than the middle of a slider - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2155174 - the pattern is just an example of course
- 04:19:975 (4,5) - if you don't want to do the previous point, at least make this blanket nicer - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2155181
- 04:24:630 (2) - same as 04:19:113 (2) -
- 04:29:630 (2) - remove clap from the beginning, it sounds unfitting
- 04:31:527 - add a hit circle maybe? it would fit better to the song in my opinion
- 04:35:147 (6) - remove clap from the beginning and well actually I don't really see this 1/4 reverse slider fitting, why not use 1/2 instead? http://puu.sh/ck1sq/3418ace8e2.jpg - it plays a lot better, because the big beats are here 04:35:320 - and 04:35:492 - so it feels better to click on hit circles than just click one on a small beat and wait for the reverse slider to end >.< (and also use claps at both of these places)
Irreversible: - 02:06:872 (1,2) - I didn't really like this overlap, maybe you could try something similar but in my opinion nicer - http://puu.sh/cjZxL/f03c92c065.jpg
- 02:07:906 (1,2,3) - this was rather "surprising" to play, but I might as well say it played weird for me because (2) doesn't feel right there, it would feel better to play if it was replaced to the soft beat at 02:09:113 - and it was also "surprising" because of the stack - jump pattern
Lizzy: - 02:49:975 (3,6) - it sounded "off" that you didn't use normal/soft claps here, it feels inconsistent, so I would rather not use drum addition + on (6) I would use clap
- 03:01:872 (1) - it would feel better to play if there was something to hit in the middle of the slider since that's the big beat which should be emphasized - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2155162
- 04:57:561 (3) - try this please - http://puu.sh/ck1CN/ed8cd2406d.jpg - it plays better than a reverse slider in my opinion, because the big beat at the end will be emphasized with a hit circle :3
Lizzy:
- 01:06:872 (1) - I think you should remove this, it feels very uncomfortable to play, I played it twice before and I hit 50 both times, I guess you tried to map to the "vocals" (when the singer takes a breath) but it shouldn't be emphasized imo
- 02:44:975 (5,1) - add clap to these? they are big beats so they should be emphasized
- 03:48:941 (3) - add finish? it sounds like the music has a finish sound here too so it would fit well
- 04:57:216 (7) - same thing I mentioned on Hard, I think this would be better if you emphasized it with hit circles and not a reverse slider because the beats are strong so hitting hit circles would fit better imo
D33d: - 04:09:285 (4) - missing clap?
- 00:39:630 (3,4,5) - why don't you use the same distance here? I mean you used higher distance and suddenly small distasnce, it makes the map inconsistent
- 01:21:872 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why not add some whistle sounds around here? before this you used them but then you stopped so it's kind of empty, well my opinion 01:21:872 (2) - beginning of the slider 01:22:389 (3) - and 01:23:078 (5) - whistle would fit
- 01:24:630 (4,5,6,7,8) - same thing about hitsounds, it's a bit empty
- 01:27:389 (4,5) - same as above ^
- 01:39:458 (2) - ctrl + G would make a better flow here imo
- 01:45:837 (6,1) - this might be "nazi" but I don't really like this overlap, maybe you could try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2165152 or if you really want to keep the overlap at least try to place it differently - osu.ppy.sh/ss/2165154
- 02:14:803 (5,1) - same thing about the overlap, it's not appealing like this imo so try not to overlap them (or just place it differently)
- 02:22:734 (3) - it's annoying that you don't hit the beat in the middle of the slider, especially on the Extra difficulty, I think it should be emphasized and it doesn't fit the vocals either, because even the vocals are fast so I don't know why you used a long and slow slider here I would use 3 hit circles
- 02:43:078 (2,4) - try to make this pattern nicer a little (even if (2) almost disappears by the time (4) comes), just an example - osu.ppy.sh/ss/2165178 - I'm sure you can do it better (and also (4) is not as "curved" as (2) so maybe you could also fix that
- 03:07:044 (2) - add clap? there are no hitsounds here but on the other similar parts you added a finish (which I think could be replaced with a clap) so you should add something here because of the music
- 03:42:217 (3,4) - and 03:44:976 (3,4) - why the sudden jumps? it sounds unreasonable to me at these 2 points and it also flows better if you don't do these jumps also because it's pretty unfomcortable to play and it's a slow part the whole difficulty is full of jumps already
- 04:14:285 (2) - well most of the combo hits (I mean 300, 100..etc.) disappear by the time this note comes but it's still pretty annoying to me, it would be better not to overlap this circle with that stream