jonathanlfj wrote:

reserving post for mod~

EDIT: mod

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
im pretty sure the source should be "One Off" as it is originally the opening of the OVA
kkkkkkkkkkk

disable your widescreen storyboard toggles (only insane has it disabled)
it shall be done

also if you want, 00:04:781 - add a red line here for a stanza reset, so nightcore mod can have its sound effects set at the right time
Unsure, I'll have to ask those.


[Easy]
00:23:531 (3) - since you seem to be mainly following vocals, its best to start this at 00:23:322 to catch the vocal start there
I think it's difficult to say since 00:21:239 (1,2) isn't exactly following vocals, so starting the 3 there on the red tick feels a bit weird to me. If anything I'd change the entire combo to a different rhythm. I find the current rhythm to be pretty nice so I'd like more opinions.

00:50:614 (4) - think u forgot to hitsound the end here
added

01:18:114 (3) - i think the NC belongs here judging from your NC patterns
true that

01:44:572 (2) - omg ur gonna drive OCD people crazy, move the red node right by 1 grid
ok ;w;

01:48:531 (3) - the same with 00:23:531 (3)
same

02:15:614 (4) - drum sample the end
adsfnaef

02:43:114 (3) - NC should be here (why do i smell copy paste...)
fixeded

02:49:572 (1) - end this at 02:50:197 would fit the music better imo
Is good suggestion but I feel mine is easier to understand since strings hits at 02:50:406 also.

02:51:239 (3) - similar thing, end at 02:52:072

Going to sit on these two. I don't like shortening this slider because it's too much gap to the next slider and I'd like a consistent gap with 02:57:906 (3,1). I could add note in between but it feels strange for me since it's not following strings.

03:04:572 (2,3,4) - how bout a smexy triangle?

SPOILER

hawt

03:36:447 (1) - OCD
asdfasf

03:47:906 (2) - this blanket can be made better around the end of 03:46:447 (1)
meh is fine imo for flow into 3

03:59:781 (3) - NC here, take off 04:01:239 (1) would be better
indeed

04:32:281 (4) - maybe a clap addition on the start here
kk

[Normal]
star rating seems to always work against you, HP-1 solves all problems but i will see if simplifying some rhythm will do
fixed without

00:12:281 (2) - would look nice if it blanketed around the end of 00:11:447 (1)
I suppose ;w; imo flow is more natural this way.

00:16:864 (4,5,6) - this rhythm sounds better here imo:

SPOILER

totally but I added repeat to last slider cuz yea

00:42:072 (2,3) - if you convert to a setup like this, it could effectively reduce star rating due to having more time space between notes (but only if you convert like, more than 5 of them throughout the diff):

SPOILER

changed that is more fitting rhythm

00:48:947 (2,3) - covert to a repeat slider, the effect is immediate \:D/ (again there are many occurrences of this setup, just pick the ones you want to change)
changed the first ones but I'd like to keep the ones right before kiai

01:18:947 (2) - drum sample on the end
kkkk

01:46:239 (1) - just 2 more pixels and i would have called red font and go asdf, might want to move this up a bit anyways to keep parallel with 01:47:281 (2)
hahahalalalatrolalala

02:17:906 (4) - NC here like 00:52:906 (1)
NO. ok

03:03:947 (2) - make a better blanket around the end of 03:03:114 (1)
Prefer this way ;w; more vertical flow after 1 and contrast with 3.

03:24:781 (3) - drum sample on end
kkkkkkkkkk

03:34:572 (3) - NC again
kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

04:12:489 (5) - 1 grid down and right to get in a better position with 04:11:656 (4)
kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

04:17:281 (2) - i just feel that there is too much block on 04:17:906 (3), maybe curve this down to expose it more
Rotating the 2 breaks the pattern with 1. I'll move the 3 more out and in symmetry with 1 which you may like.

[Insane]
00:00:614 (1) - 1/6 snap would be more correct here
definitely

00:01:239 (2) - drum clap start?
mmmhm

00:42:489 (4,1) - not that it really matters but these two are not exactly parallel
weird, fixed

00:51:031 (6) - drum sample on start
fixed

01:19:364 (6) - drum sample
fixed, copied from other diffs xD

01:22:801 - how bout a note here to cover the drums, then form it like this?

SPOILER

Is good idea but I would find it really difficult to read the rhythm on the triplet after the long slow slider. Plus I'd like to kick start the new phrase with this jump to the 1 which is what strings suggest.

01:51:031 (3) - avoid the partial overlap with 01:50:406 (3) will make the patter cleaner imo
kk

02:02:906 (9) - place it here for a more natural curve flow:

SPOILER

great

02:39:676 (1,2) - i would still recommend you stack this, since the timing gap here is a tad bit harder to read if you dont do the stack
Cxu said that very same thing orz. I really like it, so I'll sit on it for a bit.

02:45:197 (4) - drum sample on start
ah but drums skip over this beat, I'll add whistle instead

02:47:072 (2,1) - should try to perfectly stack them
blurry :<

03:35:822 (5) - right by 1 grid so the stream shape looks cleaner (maybe you should make a mirror with 03:36:239 (7) as well)
sweet done

03:47:906 (3) - kill the OCD patients
;____;

04:08:322 (2) - drum sample on end
ye yeyeyeye

04:12:489 (1) - not really needed NC here, having the same colours will provides a more symmetrical formation with 04:11:864 (2,3)
I'd prefer to keep it for now, I think it accents how unique the section is in the map.

04:21:656 (2) - drum sample on end
ya

smexy jumps
<33

i might not have caught all the missing drum sounds on all diffs, you might want to do a parallel comparison between diffs when applying hitsound suggestions (cause hitsound copier huehue)

yeeeee rank nao pls \:D/

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340,300,227697,1,2,3:2:0:0:
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48,320,237697,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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228,172,238531,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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460,184,239572,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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320,80,240406,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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300,156,241239,6,0,P|328:180|340:228,1,82.5000025177003,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,296,241656,2,0,P|272:272|260:224,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
420,228,242072,2,0,P|409:267|379:294,1,82.5000025177003,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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444,220,243322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,244572,12,0,246239,0:0:0:0:
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168,144,247072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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60,76,247697,1,2,3:0:0:0:
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380,260,249364,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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340,100,251031,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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56,184,251864,1,0,3:0:0:0:
56,184,251968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,273114,12,0,278114,0:0:0:0:

HelloSCV wrote:

as M4M from your queue

General

1. try -226 (-7), fits best imo

Easy

nothing~

Normal

02:48:843 (4) - how about making this to more playable? (at least like http://puu.sh/4Lw5s.jpg this)
I think I'd like to try the placement I have currently.

03:47:906 (4) - add finish here if you add in Insane diff
done

Insane

00:22:072 (3,4) - i think this placement isn't good for playing (actually i missed it in first test playing). placing http://puu.sh/4LuIq.jpg like this will be better
fixed

01:23:531 (3) - drum whistle fits nice
seems fine without

01:26:871 (5,6) - hmm maybe reverse this rhythm? since all of sliders you placed have piano? sound in start while this slider isn't in this part
I think I'd like to keep this one since it's following strings.

01:28:739 (3,4) - how about adding finishes instead of whistles? (on start ofc) those fit really well with music imo
k

01:53:947 (5) - since i think there is no sound on 01:54:051 - here, maybe changing it as note feels nice
i'd like to keep the 1/4 slider if possible, I thought it made the section more interesting

02:02:176 (4,5) - different DS is purposed? (and 02:02:489 (6,7,8) - here) -nazi
fixed

03:36:031 (6) - try drum whistle here (04:01:656 (2) - like you did in here)
done

03:47:906 (3) - how about finish??
kk

good luck~

Tsumetaku wrote:

Hi~,M4M From your Queue
Soft BG and soft music owo//

★=Comment or Suggestions

General
=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=
nah
★ But about SCV say's offset i think can be -212(+7) I got 0~2ms early when testplaying with this ><

Easy
=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=
★ Maybe the last spinner can end at 04:37:906 or 04:38:739 cuz there are bell's sound
but if you tend it to last for 3 sections just ignore this (same as all Diff)
I prefer to have the spinner ending on a downbeat, it feels more natural imo.

Normal
=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=
03:41:239 (3) - How about making this more curve... cant conbine it with (2)
k

04:17:906 (3) - Maybe swap this's head to x268 y328? seems better shape
i'd like to keep symmetry with 1


Insane
=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=
★ Interest Diff i like it >3< as a noob player I can pass but cant FC just like these jump,challenging
01:48:739 (3) - change another's curve to Like a shape//http://puu.sh/4Ly8P.jpg
changed

02:34:572 (1) - how about making this a bigger jump like 1.7x?w
I think I want to maintain the blanket here

02:25:822 (6,7,8) - just think this 3-hit can make a bigger DS like 1.4x with (5) .c.
fixed

03:53:010 (2) - i thought this circle can change 3-hit rhythm to 03:52:593 - or sounds a little bit weird when playing
I think it fits alright, just following the strum in guitar there.

Great~~~~ Really like this~~~~~

Sorry just these ;w; looks like nazi mod...
perfect map~~

Urushi38 wrote:

for M4M
[General]

1. TitleUnicode:
2. Add 　in tags(anime title in Japanese)
   done!

[Easy]

1. 02:50:822 (2) - put on (141,357)? Looks nice
   I prefer a more zigzag motion here.
   
2. 03:32:281 (3) - I wonder why you put such a slider
   Not sure the problem.

[Normal]

1. 00:10:197 (4) - add soft whistle?
   k
   
2. 00:16:239 (3) - how about this
   
   fixed
   
3. 01:33:114 (1,2,3) - move like this?
   
   hope it's good

[Insane]

1. A lot of jumps, especially 00:47:697 (8,1) - 01:34:156 (1,2) - these jumps with AR8 are really hard to read.
   so I suggest AR9.
   I think I'd like to stick with 8 if possible.
   
2. 00:04:156 (1) - How about this flow?(spining flow)
   
   changed it
   
3. 00:13:530 (3) - put on (314, 345)? make triangle
   fixed
   
4. 00:21:031 (8) - put on (52,268)? I feel this is better flow
   I feel it breaks the line with 1, I'd prefer to keep current placement.
   
5. 00:27:072 (4,5,6) -How about like this flow? (flow repeat 00:26:239 (1,2) )
   
   good suggestion but I'd like flow to stop on the triplet there
   
6. 00:46:447 (1,2) - ｃｔｒｌ+Ｇ？ spining flow and 00:46:864 (3,4) - this jump more fun for me
   k lets try
   
7. 00:58:114 (1) - Add finish on head?
   whistle is enough for here imo since there is no finish in the music
   
8. 01:27:489 (7) - How about this flow? I think this is better way.
   
   lets try it
   
9. 01:47:906 (1,2,3) - Why only 3 is different from the others?
   
   fixed it
   
10. 03:21:656 (2) - ctrlG? this match the clam part.
    I don't really like the flow into 3 with this

nice mapset! good luck!

Edit:fixed pictures

Sieg wrote:

Hello

General:
clear

Easy:
01:44:572 (2) - maybe move this closer to center, something like 332:112 looks better imo
it breaks flow with 1 imo, i'd prefer the current placement

01:51:239 (2) - same with this 336:64, i know they not symmetrically but that's somehow looks more balanced for me
again I feel it's not really necessary

And think about usage of angular sliders eg 01:03:114 (3) - , yes it's variety but you use only five or six over all map and imo they don't very fit overall style of this diff, i prefer to see waved instead
hm yea it's kind of something i've been doing lately, maybe I should reconsider

Normal:
00:27:072 (4,1) - blanket here can be improved, nazi but whatever, noticeable on play
fixed

00:44:781 (1,2,3) - maybe 'round' this a bit? http://puu.sh/4NXYo.jpg
120,224,44781,6,0,P|103:161|128:107,1,120,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
166,79,45406,2,0,P|230:66|290:107,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,137,46031,1,0,3:0:0:0:
01:08:114 (1,2) - maybe something like http://puu.sh/4NYcP.jpg
62,173,68114,6,0,P|18:205|-1:269,1,120,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
63,354,68947,2,0,P|118:353|172:314,1,120,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
199,273,69572,2,0,P|266:228|367:233,1,180,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
the puush links are gone here so I hope it's alright :<

02:50:406 (2) - opposite position? http://puu.sh/4NYhQ.jpg

Insane:
cool jumps :3
don't really had a problem to fc this, all reads good, maybe 1\4 jumps sometimes appears suddenly lol, but all looks well made
i have some idea here about 1\4 jumps, you can make them easier by highlighting them with special cc
nothing more, flow is fine as for me :3
thanks ^^ I reduced some 1/4 jumps

Good Luck!

Asphyxia wrote:

M4M~

General thoughts

1. Clean

Insane

1. I feel like AR9 could fit very well here. Your jumps are quite harsh (imo) for Ar8 but I guess that's fine though
   I think it was my ignorance that made it this way. I don't think AR9 fits this particular map since it was mapped with 8, so I'd like to stick with 8. If I went 9, I'd remap.
   
2. 00:10:203 (2,1) - Played quite funny to me, I'd prefer it to be stacked OR moved more down, like this:
   
   The anti-jump seems pretty standard to me, I don't think moving it downwards makes it easier to read so I'd like to keep it this way if possible.
   
3. 00:17:912 (8,9,10) - This triplet was the only one in the whole map that played badly so that's why I suggest you to remove 00:18:016 (9) - .
   I think this triplet is important for the structure here, especially for the next phrase. I'd like to keep if possible.
   
4. 00:27:912 (1,2) - There's some room to improve the blanket here!
5. 00:29:578 (1,2) - ^
   k
   
6. 00:53:745 (1) - I honestly think this note is a bit overmapped? Well, I mean that there isn't a beat that this could mapped to (vocals, yeah) but if you would remove it, it'd be way cooler opening for the chorus! Or if you insist having something there, a 1/2 slider could fit too.
   I originally had nothing there when I mapped it xD. I feel a note there is needed so I'm going to try stacking it on the next slider to suggest the lack of drums with no movement.
   
7. 01:22:807 - Here should and could be a note, there's a beat.
   I just felt it would be really hard to hit the 1/4 notes in time after the slowdown and because there is no percussion during the whole slider 01:21:453 (1). That's why I did this jump to the 01:22:912 (1) instead. I leave it for now but maybe people won't like it.
   
8. 01:24:578 (1,2,3) - Since 01:24:578 (1,2) - isn't ''symmetric'', I don't think you should turn 01:25:412 (3) - into a symmetric one. Well, here's an example how I would do it! (Just rotate it by selection centre a bit)
   
   fixxxed
   
9. 02:39:370 (5,1) - This spacing surprised me a lot, you could make it a bit more easy to notice. Well, here's an example
   I'll change the rhythm.
   
10. 02:44:891 (2,3) - It'd be cool if you could make the spacing go more to the 0.8x and less higher. It's fine though if you wanted a higher spacing because the music is more intense.
11. 02:45:516 (1) - Same would apply here then ^
    Seems ok.
    
12. 02:53:745 (5,6) - These straight sliders seemed a bit dull to me. Considering you have pretty much curved ones all the time, these could be too! Atleast I think it'd be way cooler.
    
    tried it
    
13. 03:05:203 (2,3,4,1) - Since your volume is gradually lowering here, I was thinking the spacing could too! What do you think about it? :3
    kk will try
    
14. 03:34:578 (1) - I guess this is a bit unifitting in a way, I mean that the red point of it makes it kind of ''unpolished'' and the bump makes it look weird. I'd recommend you to make the normal wave slider or try something else. :c
    
    hmm ok I'll do normal wave then
    
15. 04:01:662 (2) - I think the drum addition sounds here a bit... wrong?
    There is a drum whistle in the music. It's unique here so I added it.
16. Cool diff! :3

Normal

1. 00:21:037 (5) - Creating a small curve would be nice looking!
   
   kkkk
   
2. 01:12:912 (3) - If you would move this slider down, the flow would be better.
   Idk I really enjoy the upward reach, I think it's way more interesting especially with vocals there.
   
3. 02:06:245 - This place really could use a note :3
   I thought it would be too difficult and star rating is pushing 4.25 enough already.
4. Nice!!

Easy

1. 01:12:912 (2,3,1) - Maybe if you'd rearrange them like this, the flow would improve a bit!
   
   I suppose so but I prefer the current placement since I find it more interesting. I feel the downwards motion after the 2 is natural.
2. Good job dude!

That's a really nice mapset you got there! Btw I love the BG ~ GL with the ranking ! Have a star also

11t wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:11:037 (5) - Switch to Drum sampleset (Shift + R) on the slider head, and add a drum-hitclap onto the end? I think this fits the percussion in the music here.
   I think I prefer the soft whistle on the head but the drumclap on the end 4sure.
   
   
2. 00:21:245 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Wow, this is extremely good flow.
   
   Flow lines

   
   This is just amazing on so many levels. Your use of the 1/4 (3) slider here brings about a change in speed which adds a unique flavor to the pattern. It also forces the motion towards (4) to be smooth and curved, rather than sudden and angular. Usually, there'd be the danger here of the player simply treating the pattern as an extended triangle and moving through (2-3-4) in a series of quick, straight jumps. But the slight curvature and the 1/4 slide of (3) encourages a more fluid motion through the pattern. The result is a beautiful S-shaped flow on (2-3-4-5), which plays smoothly, satisfyingly, and uniquely.
   
   The impact of the (6-1) downwards stroke is enhanced by your use of exaggerated spacing; (2-3-4-5-6) were spaced relatively uniformly, and so the increased spacing at (6-1) feels much more dramatic. This is a perfect finish for the pattern, combo, and musical measure all at once, and the finish hitsound only adds to the dramatic effect.
   
   As a whole, the way this pattern flows is just completely outstanding. As a bonus, it looks clean and organized; the (1-4) stack as well as the formation of the (4-5-6) triangle gives structure to the pattern, and lends itself well to aesthetic stability.
   
   The more I trace my cursor over this pattern, the more amazing I realize it is. But
   
   omg

   
   This isn't even visible on decent AR settings but now that I know it's there, it really bothers me orz
   lolol thanks<3
   
3. 00:48:537 (3,4,5,6,1) - I didn't like this flow at first, since I thought it was a bit sharp for a smooth map like this, but now I'm really starting to appreciate it.
   
   Ignore the weird box

   
   The sharp reverse at (6-1) gives the impact at (6) more contrast, which really does fit the music well, as does your choice of hitsounding.
   
   
4. 00:52:912 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I love this. The broad sweep across to the right side of the screen and then swinging back to the left plays extremely well and feels incredibly smooth; overall it's a great start to the kiai. Especially at 00:54:787 (1,2,3,4), I think most mappers would have chosen to curve the (4) slider in the other direction:
   
   Image

   
   This is a very common blanket pattern in modern mapping styles, and it creates a more circular flow (sort of like a shape) on (1-2-3-4) when considering it in isolation. But the way you've curved the (4) slider is perfect for preparing for the sweeping motion across to the other side via 00:56:037 (5,6) directly after. The direction of the curvature in the image above just wouldn't have been suitable for something like that.
   
   In general, your 1/1 slider usage throughout the kiai is wonderful. The large sliders guide the player into making broad strokes with their cursor here, and it feels almost like painting a picture (especially with a tablet). The circular flow is powerful where you've chosen to use it.
   :>>
   
5. 01:28:745 (3) - <3 this hitsounding. Have you thought about SV changes here? Something like 1.20x on this (3) slider alone would be slight enough to be easily readable but still different enough that an attentive player would be able to feel a slight change in pace. I think it might be a good way to add some subtle impact to this section. Another thing you could experiment with is 0.80x here, and then 1.20x or 1.10x at 01:29:162 (4) for more contrast. There's absolutely nothing wrong with how this section currently is, though.
   Great idea but I think I'd like to keep it this way. The basic motion suggested here is enough imo and I kind of want to keep it basic.
   
   
6. 01:29:578 (6) - Consider drum-hitclap or drum-hitfinish here.
   I just thought they stood out too much since there wasn't a clear finish/clap in the music. I'll try a drum hit.
   
   
7. 02:15:203 (2,3,4,6,1,2) - The spacing here seems a bit inconsistent. The (2) and (6) sliders are parallel but the angles of the 02:15:516 (3,4) and 02:16:349 (1,2) stacks aren't; (3,4) is directly below its slider but (1,2) is sort of to the left. (3,4) is spaced at 0.88x distance snapping whereas (1,2) is spaced at 1.02x. The 0.88x seems more consistent with the spacing of later triples in this map.
   fixed it
   
8. 02:18:745 - I think the start of this second kiai lacks some of the impact of the first. Personally I don't like 02:19:162 (2,3,4) too much; I think it halts the flow for too long. I guess it's okay for contrast, but I don't really think it works here. The reason why the start of the first kiai was so great in my opinion was that the first slider at 00:54:787 (1) marked the continuation of a sweeping movement that started previously at 00:53:953 (2,3,4,5). On the other hand, 02:19:787 (1) isn't the continuation of a movement, it's a quick jump from the stall at 02:19:162 (2,3,4). Maybe you could experiment with this object rhythm:
   
   
   Possible placements

   
   
   Something like this makes the flow in this section more active for the player, which I think is important in capturing the arpeggiation in the instrumentation here.
   Totally. I just threw this in too quickly. The problem with the two 1/2 sliders is just that they don't fit the music at all. So I tried something else here I really hope you like it.
   
9. 02:46:453 - The 1.10x SV here is a nice touch. I was just about to suggest an SV increase here, and then I took a look at your timing points and realized that you already had an SV increase here! That said, maybe the increase is TOO subtle? You definitely want the player to feel the change in speed, because the violin in this section is just so well-suited for it. Though maybe I'm just insensitive to these sorts of things. Or maybe the reason I wanted to suggest an SV increase is because I actually subconsciously felt the 1.10x?
   Thanks for pointing it out. I think I'll stick with the 1.1 here. It makes it the same as the kiai for a little speed boost, I think going 1.2 might complicate it and with how old this map is, I don't want to do that.
   
10. 03:05:203 (2,3,4) - Consider SV deceleration here. You've already captured some of the falling action in the music by decreasing your object spacing, and I think this would be complemented nicely with SV deceleration. 1.05x on (3) and 1.00x on (4), for example, could lead well into the tight spacing at 03:06:037 (4,1) imo.
    done
    
11. 03:36:037 - That piano roll hng. I wish there were some way to capture that in your map.
    
    ...okay okay I know this seems silly but
    
    
    
    Placement

    
    .osu Code

    260,84,216037,2,0,B|252:164|172:204|172:204|152:136,1,188.999994232178,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:

    Add greenline with 1.40x SV for (6). Actually I think this works really well. It transitions nicely into the kiai start (1) slider, and the flow is somewhat reminiscent of the swinging sweeps you had at the start of the first kiai (though here the motion is much faster). The increased SV matches the piano roll here, and the angle at the end of the slider preserves the vocal rhythm.
    I love your idea but I'm sorry it just doesn't seem like something I'd map, and I'm pretty fond of the current symmetry transition.
    
    
12. 04:04:578 (1) - The slowdown here works really well. I think more dramatic accelerated spacing would work better for 04:05:203 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) though, to match the rising drumming. Currently the pattern feels too tightly packed together. Maybe something like this instead?
    
    
    Placement

    
    .osu code

    456,192,245203,1,0,3:0:0:0:
    472,304,245412,1,0,3:0:0:0:
    292,344,245620,1,0,3:0:0:0:
    340,260,245828,5,0,3:0:0:0:
    332,232,245932,1,0,3:0:0:0:
    316,212,246037,2,0,P|292:188|264:176,1,45,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
    184,212,246245,1,4,3:0:0:0:
    88,340,246453,6,0,P|43:359|-2:357,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

    With no change in object rhythm.
    kkkk gonna try it
    
13. 04:10:203 (4) - I sorta wish you skipped mapping this, so that there's more emphasis on the piano here.
    Hmm I just think it's an important beat for percussion and rhythm.
    
14. 04:23:328 (1) - gg uws
    gee gee
    
15. 04:23:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - GG
    map got too good here. i quit

The hitsounding is really great; I love the use of drum-hitnormal as your choice for the snare sound. Its subtlety suits the feeling of the music well, but it's different enough from the regular soft-hitnormal sound that you can definitely tell it's there during play. You've also done a fantastic job with drum-hitclaps and drum-hitfinishes, not a lot of mappers are attentive enough to the music to know to include these sounds on their objects.

The slow SV makes the map more relaxed as a whole, and at times your longer sliders flow so well that it feels as if my cursor is melting into the map. That said, I think that my biggest concern for this map is that the SV is slow enough that every 1/2 slider can be treated as a hold; the sliders are short enough that slider leniency allows for players to 300 every 1/2 slider without having to move their cursor from the slider starts. The map is still incredibly fun even if you don't move on any of the sliders, but in my opinion, the smoothness and melty quality of the map really is best experienced by tracing out the slider paths. It's great that you've chosen to use so many 1/4 double stacks under your sliders, because this encourages even the laziest of players to move through the sliders since frequently there's something that they need to click at the end.

Overall this is an amazing map. The flow is just absolutely insane at some parts. Object placement always seems to make sense and visually captures the contours of the melodies. This map isn't obsessed with geometry or strict distance snapping, and this gives it a more natural and free-flowing feel, suitable for the mood of the song. A lot of maps play like a well-constructed building, very architecturally and a bit predictably. This isn't one of those maps; this map feels spontaneously designed, something that just sort of emerged naturally. It's unique in that regard from a lot of maps out there today, and I think that the osu community in general would benefit from having a map like this one available for ranked play.

[Normal]

1. 01:16:245 (3,4,5) - This rhythm feels sort of awkward since it doesn't match the vocals. There are vocal syllables at 01:17:078 and 01:17:495 but you skip over both. Personally I think that something like this works better:
   
   
   Good suggestion but I feel I want to keep this rhythm since it fits with the crash on the head of the 3 and the holding feeling that I'm getting from the music, likely from the strings there. Also did the same/similar things in the other kiais.
   
   
2. 01:35:203 (4) - Consider moving to 306,368. I think this looks better if it's linearly aligned with the (3) slider.
   It's just a preference of mind, I like a more organic placement.
   
3. 02:21:245 (3) - <3
   <33
   
4. 02:57:912 (4) - ehhhh this one not so much. Maybe just a simple semi-circle?
   
   Image

   
   You'll have to adjust 02:58:953 (5) a bit to keep distance snapping.
   Hmm yea the idea was to have straight down flow into the 4 and then twist it left. I'll flaten it a bit. Not sure I like the semi-circle.

[Easy]

Sometimes the red tick rhythms are a bit confusing in this map but that's unavoidable due to a lot of the emphasis points in the song falling on red ticks. I think you've mapped the rhythms well, considering. I don't see any problems here.

[Closing]
Lovely song, even lovelier maps.
uws, pls rank

(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ☆～

alacat wrote:

Hi~ uws and Moeway lol

[General]

1. Tag Suggestion : opening
   added

[Easy]

1. 00:06:245 (2) - i think it's better to add a finish to the head of the slider to follow the crash cymbal in the music same as your previous part.
   fixed \:D/
   
2. 00:22:287 (2,3,4) - Rhythm suggestion : i recommend you to follow the vocal in this part. then, it would fit well with this kind of music. for example
   
3. 01:47:287 (2,3,4) - ^ Same.
   ok I changed these rhythms.
   
4. 02:27:912 (2,3) - how about making one repeat slider for beginner ? :3
   I think the current rhythm is ok because I want to hold with 2 for strings. ;w;
   
5. 03:31:245 - missing a finish to the head
   Here I think drum hit is better because there is no clear finish in music.
   
6. 03:47:912 - ^

[Normal]

1. 00:25:620 (2) - i prefer to make a straight slider for design
   
   img

   
   fixed
   
2. 01:35:203 (4) - why don't you put in straight line with 01:34:578 (3) - ? you would improve this flow a bit and be natural.
   
   img

   
   I think I want to keep it offset I think it is more interesting.
   
3. 01:55:203 - i guess you forgot to use drum sound here.
   ah but there is no drum sound in music there, I will add soft whistle
   
4. 02:44:578 (1,2,3) - i feel kind of empty here 02:45:203 - and you followed this sound at #1 kiai 01:18:537 - so you should consider adding an object here like this image
   
   okkk
   
5. 03:31:245 (4) - add a finish to the head pls!
   ok ;w;

[Insane]

1. 00:51:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - How about increasing the distance gradually ? it would fit well with this kind of music !
   
   img

   
   cool
   
2. 03:31:245 (1) - same as normal diff.
   fixed

That's all ~ excellent ! Call me back