1. 00:14:336 (4,1) - maybe switch those nc, it'll fit better with vocal if it's on 4 instead imo
2. 00:21:783 (4,1) - ^
3. 00:11:854 (2) - move the last slider point 1 grid up so it'll blanket better with the next slider
4. 00:17:646 (4) - small spacing problem here
5. 00:35:021 (2) - this would look better imo if you move this slider at x:280 y:192 it'll be better with your current flow
6. 00:37:503 (1) - ^
7. 00:46:605 (4) - i don't really like this kind of sliders in easys so, maybe remove the red point and make it like this instead?
   
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8. 01:07:290 (2) - how about moving this 3 grids down and rotate it -10 clockwise it'll blanket better imo
9. 01:13:082 (x) - why leaving the strong beat without note and anything, i suggest you to add something here, because it's weird to leave it like this :c

1. 00:53:224 (3) - umm it looks bad, maybe stuck it under 00:51:569 (1) - perfectly?

1. 00:09:785 (3) - move this slider 1 grid up so it'll be perfect mirror effect with the other slider
2. 00:11:854 (4) - move it 1 grid down so it'll blanket the other slider better
3. 00:50:535 (2) - i don't honestly like how you placed this note, i suggest you to move it like this
   
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Oyatsu wrote:

Hi Gero-chan <3

General

Ok!!

Hard

1. 00:10:406 (4,1) - it isn't blanketed. Need give up red point at 364/280 Fixed
2. 00:12:474 (1,2) - I think this rhythm is fine but I want a rhythm both good and hitsound, so you can try this: I prefer to keep it at this way
   
   Example

   
   
   

   300,76,12474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   300,76,12578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   300,76,12681,6,0,L|400:104,1,80

3. 00:15:370 (5,6) - They seems too curve at (6) to blanket, Try 2nd point of (6) at 268/44 Fixed
4. 00:39:986 (6,1) - I think NC is at (6) because I can see a big tick at head of (6) and u putted a finish , right? If you maybe followed vocal? ^
5. 00:41:123 - Yea, I often see this. Cahm hitsound isn't needed but which hitsounds like this. When we use tickthey often louder than when we add in note. so u can discrease volumn this into 20~30% Fixed
6. 00:54:465 (2,3) - Tail of 00:54:879 (3) - is at 340/248 and after, fix DS this too 00:55:499 (4) - Fixed
7. 00:59:223 (2,3) - 2nd point is at 212/308 is better to blanket ^
8. 01:01:498 (1,2) - This rhythm is really repeat because preivous rhythm you followed vocal so this is also so. Ctrl+G ^
9. 01:04:808 (4,5) - yea this is unrankble... 2 notes the same time/rhythm. And before, I have some example for this rhythm, you also followed vocal. So try this: why this is unrankable (? o.o
   
   Example

   
   
   

   254,109,64394,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   176,132,64601,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   220,200,64808,2,0,L|260:280,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

10. 01:15:357 (5) - This is maybe NC
11. 01:26:320 (4) - NC too

Rakuen's Normal

1. 00:14:750 (3,4) - Need blanket this, 00:15:164 (4) - middle point is at 232/336, end point at 272/296 and after, you need fix DS of 00:15:991 (5) - ... Fixed
2. 00:17:129 - Like I said on Hard, this need discrease the volumn to sensible of hitsound- clap. about 30~45 % Fixed
3. 00:16:818 (6) - I can hear a changing in vocal so you need NC, afterward you remove NC at 00:18:473 (1) - I didn't see a changing. And NC at 00:20:128 (3) - Fixed
4. 00:22:093 - It is too, discrease volumn.Fixed
5. 00:23:024 (2) - It is at 468/104 to blanket with 00:21:783 (1) - . It didn't really blanket before mmm imo is fine
6. 00:36:676 (5) - I didn't hear a finish in instrument, so you need remove it Sounds good D:
7. 00:45:364 - 00:46:191 - 01:01:808 - 01:05:118 - 01:08:531 - 01:11:841 - 01:12:668 - 01:15:150 - 01:15:978 - You need discrease volumn them Fixed
8. 00:54:672 (3,4) - They didn't creat a good follow So try 00:54:672 (3) - at 88/196 and 00:54:879 (4) - 104/160 ^
9. 00:59:843 (3) - Tail of it should be at 204/224 ^
10. 01:02:739 (2,3,4,1,2) - They are really quite difficult for noob player can't click 5 times circle. So change 01:03:980 (1,2) - into slider plz (other if u want). ^
11. 01:14:737 (5) - Previous rhythms, I see you map quite active about rhythm but this time you ingore 4~5 beats, oh you really are lazy? Consider to map plz. Need a logic for rhythm in kiai meh is a good rhythm

Normal

1. 00:10:199 (1) - Tail is at 428/204 to blanket with 00:08:958 (4) - . Only abit but I think it is important Fixed
2. 00:32:539 (4,1) - This you need blanket, right? 00:33:366 (1) - Middle point is at 152/276 and end point at 144/336 in my opinion this well
3. 01:11:427 (1,2) - I can hear a long vocal lasts, so I think you can repeat this rhythm that Ctrl+G is better. 01:14:737 (3,4) - is too^

Easy

1. 01:10:600 (1,2) - Remove NC at (1) and NC (2), because (1) doesn't change and (2) is at kiai- big tick Fixed
2. 01:17:219 (1) - 260/292 to blanket with 01:15:978 (2) - Fixed
   
   Good easy!! I love this <3

WOW!! After a month, I mod again. Good luck!! Gero-chan <3

Irreversible wrote:

Requested mod~ Thanks a lot ~

[General]

I guess the mp3 quality is rather bad, where did you get it from? I don't remember but I guess it was on a page of anime
Overall the hitsounds are too loud, I suggest lowering them a bit. kk Fixed

[Easy]

About NCing. What did you follow in particular? Sometimes it’s just really inconsistent, please go have a look at this. The problem is following; 00:36:262 (3) - If you put sliders like this (having something on the big white tick) you can’t put a NC there, which can cause problems. 00:46:605 (4) - And something like this, it should have a NC if you ask me. but this is unnecesary o.o because since as I can not put it in a place on reverse , then I put in the next slider for consistency about the NC I follow the voice.

00:10:199 (3) - That’s slightly offsymmetry, if you wanna keep consistency here, I’d fix that. Fixed
00:15:991 (3) - 306 329 for a slightly neater transition? Fixed
00:17:646 (5) - 48 132 same reason! Fixed

Feedback: The rhythm is interesting, but sometimes you could slightly improve it. Having something ended on the downbeat works, but I personally like to have the click feeling there. That’s, as said, just personal though. (and it also causes problems with consistent NCing, sometimes).

[Normal]

00:39:986 (4,1) - Same NC problem as in Easy Fixed I work a bit about the NC

Feedback: Yeah, it’s basically the same stuff as in easy, according to the NC and the rhythm (although you can leave this, if you like). If you need more stuff pointed out, you can reach me ingame.

[Rakuen’s Normal]

00:10:199 (5) - 00:11:027 (1) - swap NC to keep consistency Fixed
00:20:128 (5) - NC is missing Fixed
00:26:747 (4,1) - Swap NC again? Fixed
00:31:712 (3) - I guess this should have a NC to emphasize the finish here.. Fixed
01:19:287 (4) - Why the timing lines here? Fixed

Feedback: I guess I can see where you’ve put the NCs (according to the vocals?) But that is a bit odd to me since it’s on the red ticks, so.. it feels delayed.


[Hard]

00:39:986 (1) - Before you’ve followed the vocals with NC, then with the finish, it’s really unconsistent >< I Don't think so because I want to be consistent with this pattern 00:36:676 (5)
00:41:640 (1) - Why that NC here? Fixed

Feedback: I enjoyed the diff! But again, the NC.

[Overall]

I guess the mapset is okay, if you could only give it a bit more consistency (or explain me what you've actually followed). Spread was fine too, since Rakuens normal is fixing the gap between normal and hard.

Sorry for that crappy mod, orz
Good luck!

1. Cleaaan

1. 00:06:889 (1) - You probably want to add a whistle start of this slider like you did in normal difficulty, you know, consistency and all that
2. 00:06:889 (1,2) - This blanket isn't perfect >:
3. 00:11:854 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:20:128 - I think the beat here is quite strong to ignore it, well, consider removing the reverse on 00:19:301 (2) - and adding a note, that would be better imo
5. 00:47:846 (1,2,3) - Blankets plz
6. Sorry that I didn't find much stuff, but I guess blankets are better than nothing xD

1. 00:41:227 (3) - Doesn't fit that well, considering the ''motto'' starts on the big white tick, this would follow the vocals a bit better I guess
   
   Example

   
2. 00:42:882 (5,1) - I think doesn't fit either, considering 00:43:709 (1) - this slider should start 00:43:295 - here instead, so consider using a rhythm like this:
   
   Example

   
3. 00:48:053 (4) - Felt kind of unfitting and random, considering you didn't use notes like this before so removing it could be nice
4. 01:01:084 (2,3) - Mmh, pretty much the same reason I stated on the 42:882 part
   
   Example

   
5. Good!

1. Didn't find anything major, sorry >_<

1. 00:50:742 (2) - This played better for me if CTRL + G'd, try it!
2. Nice

1. Please re-encode your video or find another one. It have very low quality & 17MB weight, which is too much Q.Q
2. I feel offset slighty late at the beginning & during kiai. Can't say for sure, but please get someone to recheck it. Might also be mp3 issue.

1. 00:38:124 (2,3,4) - Hm, i find this part a bit weird to follow, how about try to make your flow at this part more bezier?
   
   
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2. 00:46:605 (1) - Ctrl+G flows better
3. 00:53:224 (3) - Missed clap on repeat
4. 00:54:465 (5) - Ew, whistle & clap together sounds kinda noisy. Kill whistle please
5. 01:00:464 (5,1) - Swap NCs follow lyrics?
6. 01:01:498 (1,2,3,4) - Not really pretty overlap. Would be better if you raise spacing here a bit for perfect overlap, something like this:
   
   
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   169,247,61498,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   257,209,61705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   345,246,61912,1,10,0:0:0:0:
   256,289,62119,2,0,B|256:127,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

7. 01:24:045 (4) - Finish instead of whistle to follow music properly
8. 01:25:079 (2) - Only one drum-whistle at the whole map? Should use normal-addition for sure.
9. 01:26:320 (1) - Kill whistle

1. 00:29:850 (7) - Delete it please, this note just doesn't fit and only makes this part harder
2. 00:54:672 (3) - Same here, also this note might be really too hard to catch for beginners
3. 01:14:737 (5) - Repeat of this slider should be at 01:15:150, currently it doesn't follows anything in music
4. 01:23:838 (1,2,3) - Plays kinda weird for a Normal diff, (2) is very hard to catch, try something like this:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:25:493 (4) - Again, why drum-sampleset here? It doesn't fit at all.

1. 00:15:577 (4) - Missed claps on start & tail

1. 00:47:432 - Add note fere for consistent rhythm

CDFA wrote:

Overall:
tbh the hitsounds are super heavy, especially in the beginning. Consider lowering the volume or utilizing a combination of normal and soft hitsounds Fixed

Hard:
00:56:741 (1,2) - this was handled very nicely and I love you for it. I'm glad that you like it
01:24:045 (4,5) - tbh i wish this was a 1/1 slider rather than what it is now, just to emphasize the finish Sure thing

Normal:
00:43:709 (2) - Curvy curve ;w; Fixed

Easy:
Fine yay

tbh I'd bubble this as soon as you finished the changes, but I realize that it's been about 6 months since your last mod, so I don't want to be the only one modding this after that long. Get me like 2 more mods or something then bug me about this.

Very nice mapset though.

1. 00:10:613 (5) What about to unstack this object?. Try moving it to x:348 y:200. It will be easy to read for beginner players
2. 00:13:922 (3) Same suggestion here
3. 00:56:741 (1) Starting in a red tick could be really hard to read for beginner players in my opinion. Could be better if the slider starts in 00:56:534
4. 00:58:602 (2) What about to add a NC here? Kiai time and rhythm changes here
5. 01:00:671 (3) CTRL+J here will work better with previous and next objects
6. 01:23:424 (3) I really dislike how this slider breaks the good flow that you was doing. A better idea could be if this slider starts under (2). Something like this:
   
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1. 00:08:958 (4) Hmm . . I would like to finish this slider in 00:09:372 and add a circle on 00:09:785. Plays better imo
2. 00:23:024 (3) This slider is ignoring a important downbeat in 00:23:438 . I really would like to click in that downbeat while playing
3. 01:03:980 (1) The 1/2 slider doesn't fit very well here in my opinion. Could be better if you replace it with 2 circles
4. 01:13:495 (1) Honestly this slider feels really weird while playing. What about to replace it with a circle?
5. 01:15:150 (4) I would like to CTRL+J this slider. It gives a better flow with the previous and next object

• Naughty Gero

1. 00:22:610 (3) Some grids up could improve the flow since the previous object is a straight slider and feels a bit weird how it affects here . Maybe move it to x:328 y:168
2. 00:26:747 Why is this combo very short? Compared at rest of beatmap
3. 01:13:702 (^) This combo is a bit long compared at rest of beatmap

That's all, Good luck with ranking !

1. 00:12:681 (2) - I don't think this clap on the slider's repeat is following anything in the song so i suggest you to remove it
2. 00:25:092 (1) - ^

1. 00:19:714 (3) - one note don't really fit this part, i honestly suggest you adding note here 00:19:921 or you can just do something like this, if you're that lazy lol
2. 00:31:712 (2,3) - how about changing those two notes into sliders, you already added many notes here so yeah, i suggest you doing that ></
3. 00:46:812 (2) - maybe add note here since it fits with vocal imo, or you can do something like i said here 00:19:714 (3) -

1. 00:10:199 (4) - you made a lot of liner sliders on these map, why are you so lazy how about making something like this for a change? it'll make the more neater and prettier imo <3
   
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2. 00:43:295 (1) - ^
3. 01:03:567 (7,1) - how about making ctrl+g on these two notes? it'll make fun jump o.o

1. 00:09:372 (3) - Maybe this is your style, but I'd prefer not use red curve here, I think regular curve slider without red point would work better since you can kinda get a blanket with the previous slider.
   
   try

   
2. 00:14:336 (4) - The combo here is rather long, I'd add a new combo here to match with the new combo you did at 00:40:813 (1) - and to shorten this combo a little bit.
   
3. 01:21:356 (1) - I would really want you to prevent doing stack on easy diff, it's not really beginner friendly and seems to be not very good to play, but its entirely your choice. try to move this note?
   
4. 01:26:320 (4) - Since you added a new combo to the last note in hard, maybe add it here too?

1. 00:37:503 (3,4,5,1) - The whole pattern needs to be centered, I think it best fits your style since you like symmetry, and trust me symmetry looks way better if you center this whole thing. since this already symmetrical.
   
2. 00:51:569 (1) - A little overmapped in my eyes? why don't you just use regular circle here? last time you used this rhythm you added a finish right after,
   but I don't see a finish at the start of 00:51:983 (2) -
   
3. 00:54:465 (4) - Entirely up to you, but since the end note has a strong beat maybe remove the reverse and add a circle to there instead? it will show some emphasis towards it
   
4. 00:56:741 (2,3) - Are you sure this is not snap to 1/6? In fact, I'd rather you not map this part, and maybe try this , the beats there are really weird.
   
   
   01:26:320 (4) - Same as easy, add a new combo .[/lst]
   
   

   Hard

   
   
   
   1. 00:40:606 (2,3) - Looks really messy , maybe you could line them up? , I'd prefer you move 3 down though because moving notes higher could cause the risk of having notes touch the hp bar.
      
   2. 00:58:051 (3) - I'm scared notes like these are snapped wrong, my best bet would be to remove 3 and space 2 a little farther away? maybe you could try this :
      
      click

      

Tari wrote:

Hi Gero~ Hi Tari ~

Hard

1. 00:58:051 (3) - I'm scared notes like these are snapped wrong, my best bet would be to remove 3 and space 2 a little farther away? maybe you could try this :
   
   click

   
   I disagree with this since if you listen with carefully you can notice that fits with the instrumental (try with 25 % of speed)

Great mapset, tell me when you apply fixes~