This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年2月16日 at 14:44:00

Artist: Nekomata Master feat. Hayashi Momoko
Title: Rainbow after snow
Source: beatmania IIDX
Tags: jubeat saucer tricoro Crevice dnb drum and bass d'n'b Café de Tran arutemaren RenKun
BPM: 179
Filesize: 3281kb
Play Time: 01:53
Difficulties Available:

1. Futsuu (3.86 stars, 257 notes)
2. Inner Oni (5 stars, 600 notes)
3. Kantan (1.91 stars, 162 notes)
4. Oni (4.94 stars, 462 notes)
5. Ren's Muzukashii (4.69 stars, 360 notes)

Download: Nekomata Master feat. Hayashi Momoko - Rainbow after snow
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arutemaren の名前が RenKun になりました(ダサW)
著作権侵害 で消されました(ダルW)

hey TKSalt :3 M4M~ \o\ /o/





がっばんて~ >w<
btw nice song~!!

mingmichael wrote:

hey TKSalt :3 M4M~ \o\ /o/

Kantan

• Fine~ =w=)b

Futsuu

1. 00:45:492 (103) - delete this, because 00:45:324 (102,103,104,105,106) - ddkkd for futsuu diff are too hard ;w; and you used 1/2beat snap divisor notes. i am sure that another modders will say it too - agree.
2. 01:09:626 - delete this note, and change 01:09:124 - to be kat << i deleted don at there because it's not fit well, and i saw you used 1/1 beat snap divisor notes at the previous part, and you used dk kd to follow the instrument sounds there >> so, i change 01:09:124 - to follow the instrument sound that you followed too :3 - i see. but i would like to keep.
3. 01:13:481 - don, because the vocal sound decreases here D: e MI << it becomes lower - ok.
4. 01:14:486 - kat, because the vocal sound does not decrease at this part ;w; but it increases from 01:14:151 - . much better use kat for the higher one
   01:14:822 - ; 01:14:989 - ; 01:15:157 - >> don kat don - also, its true. but i feel that now is simple and fit.
5. 01:24:207 - don. because the vocal sound decreases here too D: ho SHI << gets lower than "ho" - ok.
6. 01:25:212 - kat << the pitch sound still keeps like 01:24:877 - . that means they have a same pitch sounds there D: - nope.
7. 01:25:548 (201) - don? :3 - nope.
8. 01:28:899 - kat. because i heard that the vocal has a same pitch sound like 01:29:235 - hi BI KU << same o.o - yes. but fit the drum is better.
9. 01:42:475 - delete D: five notes with 1/2beat snap divisor are quite hard for Futsuu diff - ok.
10. add finisher at 01:42:978 (262) - << because the song gives finisher sound here. and the for the Kiai starts or ends, much better use "finisher" << that's only my opinion lol - ok.

Oni

• changed OD and HP to be 5 D: - no. its too easy.

1. 00:03:592 (7) - don, because the pitch sound (the instrumen pitch sound) is low here D: here carefully, like ren's Muzukashii. 00:02:922 (3,5,7) - has a same pitch sound (the lower one) and 00:03:090 (4,6) - the higher one. so, the best way is don for the lower and kat for the higher. so 00:02:922 (3,4,5,6,7) - will be dkdkd - no. i think now is fit for Taiko sound. also, ren's muzu is arutemaren's diff. not me.
2. upss, you missed kat too at 00:05:101 - D: same like ren's Muzukashii which he forgot use kat at. because i saw you followed the "bell" sound, like 00:04:095 (9,10,11) - . and, at 00:05:101 - , the "bell" sound still appears at here D: - this is intention.
3. 00:08:956 - don too - nope.
4. from 00:10:464 - until 00:11:805 - , i have an idea :3 http://puu.sh/4sOzY.jpg - some fixed.
5. 00:17:503 - don, to follow the don don kat kat pattern that you used - i can't hear the bass.
6. 00:57:391 - finisher? - no. if add finisher here, also be required to other parts. like 00:58:732 (226) -
7. 00:59:403 - kat, because i just wanted to make the vocal changes :3 the previous notes are don and don. so the note will be don don kat kat << balance http://puu.sh/4sOKS.jpg - ok.
8. add don at 01:08:872 - and 01:09:124 - kat here << i added and changed them to follow with the instrument sounds - nope.
9. 01:17:335 - kat? to still keep the high vocal sound at 01:17:168 - before it gets lower at 01:17:503 - - i emphasize this snare sound 01:17:168 (306) -
10. 01:39:542 - move to 01:39:710 - << the ddd triplet which is given much stronger OwO - ok.

Inner Oni

• HP and OD chane to be 6. 7 is unrakable ;~; and all Inner Oni or Oni+ is better use 6 - ? i dont know that rule. also i asked to BAT, but it is wrong.

1. 00:03:592 (7) - don too at here. the reason is same like Muzukashii and Oni diff which i have modded
2. 00:08:956 (25) - ^ - nope.
3. add finisher at 00:57:391 (282) - ? - no.
4. 00:59:403 (285) - kat at here OwO the reason same like Oni mod~ - ok
5. 01:09:124 (316) - kat? - good sound.
6. 01:39:627 (543) - kat - nope.

がっばんて~ >w<
btw nice song~!!

thanks for mod!

mingmichael wrote:

hey TKSalt :3 M4M~ \o\ /o/

ren's Muzukashii

• maybe OD or HP can be changed to be 4?　OD5 keep sorry;;

1. upss, you missed kat at 00:05:101 - D: you followed the "bell" sounds right, like 00:04:430 (10,11) - ? D: you should add kat then　nope.
2. 00:07:782 - don. same like above. you followed the "bell" sounds ^
3. 00:22:196 - kat? no change.
4. 00:25:213 - finisher here, because the song gives "finisher" or "cymbal" sound at here D: i advice you to follow it Nice advice! ok~
5. 00:30:241 - kat, because i saw you followed the "vocal sound" and you used kat. for the example at 00:29:570 - ; 00:29:905 - ; 00:30:408 - << you followed the vocal sounds and you used kats fix!
6. 00:34:849 - delete don. it's not fit if you used ddd triplet here ;w; delete it please, and change 00:34:933 - to be kat~ I changed like this http://puu.sh/4tZIA.png ok~
7. 00:35:939 - add finisher here, because the song gives the "finisher" sound at here fix!
8. 00:40:967 - kat too, to follow the vocal sound which you used kat to follow ^
9. 00:43:816 - don~ nope.
10. 00:46:665 - finisher D: the song gives "finisher" sound again here ok~
11. 00:56:386 - add don here ^
12. 01:00:073 - kat << because the vocal sound increases here! hear it carefully. it gets higher than 00:59:403 - . that means it should be kat, not don, because don is usually and prefer for the lower sound D: no change sorry...
13. 01:00:743 - now this is don, because the vocal decreases from 01:00:073 - << much better use don at 01:00:743 - for the lower sound ^
14. 01:02:419 - don? ^
15. 01:13:481 - ^ ok~
16. 01:21:190 - remove the finsiher D: there's not any finsiher sound here ^
17. 01:53:369 - don nope.

がっばんて~ >w<
btw nice song~!!

mod thx mingmichael!
updateお願いします(..◜ᴗ◝..)
http://puu.sh/4u0cJ.osu

updated

M4M. Sorry, I had many requests, so I wasn't able to mod it imidiatelly.

[ Kantan]

[ Futsuu]

[ Muzukashii]

[ Oni]

[ Inner Oni]

That's all, good luck TKSalt! ╭( ･ㅂ･)و 三☆

OnosakiHito wrote:

M4M. Sorry, I had many requests, so I wasn't able to mod it imidiatelly. - no problem

[ Kantan]

SPOILER

General

- Change HP / OD to level 3?

Notes

00:06:442 (6,7,8) - Suggesting to use the pattern you had at 00:01:079 (1,2) - . - fixed.
00:22:531 (26) - D? After all your main beat is don. - hmm. K is intentional.
00:33:928 (47) - Hm, deleting the note would be nice. It emphasizes 00:34:598 really good. Also overall pattern is long. Or delete 00:32:922 (45) - . - deleted to 00:33:928 (46)
00:57:391 (13) - finisher? - keep it. because Kantan(Futsuu) has less notes. finisher is true but it not fit these notes.
01:36:944 (9,10) - Delete these notes? Having some break is good. - yes. agree.
01:47:335 (28) - Recommending to move this note at 01:47:000. - fixed.

Nice Kantan. The abekobe style in kiai is great.

[ Futsuu]

SPOILER

General

- Change HP / OD to level 4 / 3 ?

Notes

00:06:442 - Adding a don is suggested by me. You have on all othe rmain ticks a don as well. - ok.
00:22:531 (43) - D ? Like in Kantan. - keep :3c
00:28:900 (57) - Suggesting to delete the note, making a bit easier. Doesn't sound bad as well. - deleted.
00:39:626 (85) - ^
01:03:760 (133) - Delete this note. Doesn't fit well, even though it is vocal mapping. This is rather a part where you should use only don. - agree.
01:09:124 (148) - kat ? - keep. i want to emphasize 01:09:794 (149) - .
01:10:799~01:42:978 - Delete some notes. The kiai has a constant 1/2 pattern without breaks. Pretty hard for a Futsuu. Could be considered as easy Muzukashii. Pattern constellation is easy of course. - certainly true. your sliders suggestion is nice, but i fixed on its own.
01:18:509 - I think it would be better to have a slider here instead at 01:20:185. Though, I can imagine why you mapped it like this, so you can keep it if you really want to.
01:29:235 - ^ (here the pattern is also hard)
01:51:861 - Maybe move this note to 01:52:363. Not a must. - ok.

Futsuu is fine so far, but could be a bit easier. - deleted some notes.

[ Oni]

SPOILER

General

Kiai's 1/4 should be reduced just a little, or made a bit easier. Muzukashii doesn't have so many 1/4 in it, so the spread might become a bit high.
- Change HP / OD to level 5 / 5 ? Muzukashii has 4 / 4. Jumping in Oni to 6/6 is questionable. - Muzu is 5 / 5 ;_; so no problem.

Notes

00:31:497 (117) - Not sure about this note. Maybe some other modders will say something about it.
{
00:43:145 (172) - kat
00:43:816 (177) - don
} I think this sounds better. - make a sense!
00:44:318 (179,180,181,182,183,184) - k d d k k d ? - changed to k d d d k d.
00:57:391 (224) - D might be good. Not a must. - ok.
01:03:425 (236,237,238) - Not sure if this really fits good here. Vocal mapping okay, but afterwards not a single kat appears again. Sounds a bit weird. - changed to simple pattern.
01:12:140 (271) - kat for the vocal. - good sounds.
01:21:442 (336,337) - I think a K or D would fit better here. - changed to K.
01:22:866 (345) - Maybe kat ? - yes.

Oni is good. But a bit high spread to Muzukashii. Maybe you have an idea how to solve this. E.g. reducing 1/4 in Oni. - deleted some notes and changed some pattern.

[ Inner Oni]

SPOILER

General

- Change HP / OD to level 6 / 6 ?

Notes

00:57:391 (282) - finisher ? - ok.
01:00:073 - Consider making this to don because the beat is still strong here. - ok.
01:03:425 (294,295,296) - Same as in Oni. - i want some notes in InnerOni. tentatively changed pattern.
01:14:738 (355) - Should be deleted. the vocal is not stretched. - ok.
01:13:984~01:15:157 - How about this: http://puu.sh/4Ayv2.jpg ? Nice alternate, the two kats at 01:13:816 sound nice and pattern fit to vocal as well. - it suggestions is interesting for me. but i felt to have lost the fit of music. sorry ;_;
01:15:324 - This note can be deleted. - deleted.
01:17:000 - Changing to kat sounds good I think. - nice!
01:18:509 - I would rather prefer a slider here. Sometimes the usage of many notes can become boring or something like that. A slider / spinner makes it more interesting. Not a must if you don't want. - i know. but i want to use this streams really.01:18:844 -
01:24:207 - This as don would be awesome. 01:21:861~01:24:375 - the usage of don would be great and kat emphasizes it self really nice! You could do this in some other patterns as well. More don instead of kat. - yeah, i like it :3c and changed 01:28:900 -
01:26:470 - Recommending to change to don. Current pattern is vague. Also deleting note at 01:26:134 might be also good. The vocal is not stretched. - agree!
01:28:900~01:29:403 - kdk d d Seems to be good. the "d d" is a good contrast to the "k k" at 01:29:905. - hmm. i changed to ddd ;_; well, keep.
01:29:235 - Same thing with the slider. - try to spinner.
01:31:497 - Probably better to delete this note. Pattern is really odd, but and fits as kdk better to the vocal in my opinion. - changed some notes.

Inner is actually quiet nice. But reducing some notes wouldn't hurt if you ask me. You have many long paterns e.g. 5-plets which are actually just triplets or shorter. In general my suggestion is to have a long pattern only when the vocal is stretched. - i will recheck the overall later.

That's all, good luck TKSalt! ╭( ･ㅂ･)و 三☆

modありがとう！ it was helpful \( ･ㅂ･ )/

OnosakiHito wrote:

M4M. Sorry, I had many requests, so I wasn't able to mod it imidiatelly.

[ Muzukashii]

SPOILER

General
- 00:27:224 (77,78,79) - These patterns are harder as the ddk from Oni. Wanted just to mention it.
00:28:565 ^

Notes

00:17:503 (46) - delete this note? Maybe making the pattern a bit smaller is better. ok~
00:27:224 (77,78,79) - I think d d k fits better. Beat is strong. Mapping to vocal is questionable here. nope.
00:28:565 (82,83,84) - ^ (same for up coming once) ^
00:31:246 (93) - Could be deleted. I would prefer it. ok!
00:41:972 (132) - ^^
00:49:347 (155) - Maybe don. But you can keep the vocal mapping. ^
00:52:699 (165) - Since you map to vocal, deleting this note would be better. Sounds quiet nice and makes it a bit easier. nope.
00:54:039 (170) - ^ ^
00:56:386 - d k d? High pitch at the end. ^
01:18:173 (240,241,242) - Nah, don't use a 1/4 here. Doesn't fit to the vocal that well. nope...
01:18:844~01:21:190 - Here you can use 1/4 (or a slider) e.g.: http://puu.sh/4Ayac.jpg - Would be important because the kiai in Oni has already many 1/4, so having some entrance into 1/4 pattern in the Muzukashii is recommendable. no change sorry;;
01:28:984 (288) - Same as before. Doesn't fit well. ^
01:29:654 - Here you could add a don to have a ddd. ok~

Muzukashii is so far nice. Some notes could be changed rather to beat based sounds, but let's don't be too strict. lol
Only kiai is a bit questionable to me. Having some breaks would be actually nice... but I won't force it this time.

That's all, good luck TKSalt! ╭( ･ㅂ･)و 三☆

mod thx!
onedesu! http://puu.sh/4CTKM.osu

updated

簡単と普通はわからないので難しい,鬼,インナー鬼だけです！

Inner Oni
00:58:062 - 01:02:754 の間に3連や5連少し混ぜてみてはどうでしょうか？
OD7ですが譜面が少し簡単な気がします
もしくはSV1.6にするとかどうでしょう！？

他は特に問題はなかったです！

OD7なのでランクド期待です>w<

ANGELMYU wrote:

簡単と普通はわからないので難しい,鬼,インナー鬼だけです！

Inner Oni
00:58:062 - 01:02:754 の間に3連や5連少し混ぜてみてはどうでしょうか？
OD7ですが譜面が少し簡単な気がします
もしくはSV1.6にするとかどうでしょう！？

他は特に問題はなかったです！

OD7なのでランクド期待です>w<

「Inner Oni」という難易度自体、全体と比較して難しいものではなく、
マップセット内で比較した際にOniより難しいものくらいの認識なので難易度は問題無い気がします。。
SVについては検討してみます。ありがとうございます。

M4M because hnng

Kantan
00:06:442 (6) - I think k is misplaced. It hasn't this light sound like on 00:01:079 (1). You should do d here instead.
00:10:464 (10) - I find Drumrolls with a higher BPM unsuitable for lower Difficulties, so.. you could replace it with a Spinner?

Nothing more to say, nice Kantan.

Futsuu
00:55:715 (121) - I think d fits better to the music.
01:20:185 (176) - I find this Drumroll unfitting. Better map it with Circles because putting a Drumroll (or Spinner) seems not to fit well here.
01:24:877 (186,187) - The voice on (187) is getting a bit higher and also the cymbal hit in the background should be mapped on k. So change from k d to d k

Enjoyed Futsuu a lot, nice work.

Muzukashii
imo 1,20x SV is more enjoyable to play but you choose it.
00:10:464 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - I am not so satisfied with this pattern. It's quite long and also one of the "harder" ones. You could delete 00:11:302 (28) - to make at least a short break here and split this combo.
00:16:497 (43) - k to follow the d d k k ... pattern.
00:18:173 (47) - k, same reason as above.
00:20:855 (55) - ^
00:22:028 (60,61) - You could change this that (60) is removed and (61) changed to k. seems more logical mapped and it fits better with the rest of this part.
00:28:732 (82,83) - STRG+G, I like to see some kind of switches here, so we got d k dkd then d k dkd and then it would be cool to have d k dkd again. Could you make this?
00:34:933 (106) - Follow the cymbal sound and make this as k.
00:39:458 (120,121) - Same thing as 00:28:732.
00:42:978 (132,133,134,135) - This part is quite weird and sounds not so good.. Let me suggest a good idea: (132) can be replaced as k and (133) removed completely. as last thing change (134) as d. Try it out!
00:51:023 (156,157) - The voice is getting deeper on (156) and the cymbal sound can be heard on (157). So change this to d k.
00:52:363 (161,162) - Basically the same here, (161) sounds better as d.
00:53:034 (163,164,165,166,167) - You should change this part according to my suggestion: remove (163,164) and change (165,166,167) to d d k
00:54:375 (168) - This three circle should be played as k k d since 00:51:693 (158,159,160) is mapped like that.
The Triplets in the Kiai are quite unfitting and shouldn't be there (so remove the 2nd circle of the Triplet)
01:32:252 (294) - Better make this as D?
01:33:760 (299) - Move it to 01:33:090. A 1/2 Note there fits better as this time currently.
01:34:598 (302) - Change it to k, you'll hear a nice sound flow from the background with 01:33:928 (300,301,302).
01:35:101 (304) - Move it to 01:35:771.
01:35:604 (306,307) - When you have done the suggestion above then STRG+G.
01:36:442 (309,310,311) - Remove (309) and make (310,311) as kk.
01:37:782 (314) - Move it to 01:38:453.
01:38:285 (316,317) - When you have done the suggestion above then STRG+G.
01:39:291 (320,322) - k would fit at both better as d.

The problem I had is the less structure in the Kiai Part. I hope you can fix some things there.

Oni
01:53:537 - Eventually a k here?

Solid Difficulty.

Inner Oni
Nothing to say here.. this Difficulty is definitely made by TKSalt™ wwwww

Nice Mapset, this surely can go rank-- wait.. why is this graveyarded!? ;A;

Stefan wrote:

M4M because hnng

Kantan
00:06:442 (6) - I think k is misplaced. It hasn't this light sound like on 00:01:079 (1). You should do d here instead. - indeed.
00:10:464 (10) - I find Drumrolls with a higher BPM unsuitable for lower Difficulties, so.. you could replace it with a Spinner? - ok.

Nothing more to say, nice Kantan.

Futsuu
00:55:715 (121) - I think d fits better to the music. - kept. i want to express the downbeat.
01:20:185 (176) - I find this Drumroll unfitting. Better map it with Circles because putting a Drumroll (or Spinner) seems not to fit well here. - add some notes.
01:24:877 (186,187) - The voice on (187) is getting a bit higher and also the cymbal hit in the background should be mapped on k. So change from k d to d k - its good. but i want to keep the "Friendly pattens". so basically i want to have the opposite color notes before triplet.

Enjoyed Futsuu a lot, nice work.

Oni
01:53:537 - Eventually a k here? - ok.

Solid Difficulty.

Inner Oni
Nothing to say here.. this Difficulty is definitely made by TKSalt™ wwwww - yatta- \:D/

Nice Mapset, this surely can go rank-- wait.. why is this graveyarded!? ;A;

thanks for mod.
what is your map? *runs*
if have decided maps please let me know.

Stefan wrote:

M4M because hnng

Muzukashii
imo 1,20x SV is more enjoyable to play but you choose it. nope.
00:10:464 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - I am not so satisfied with this pattern. It's quite long and also one of the "harder" ones. You could delete 00:11:302 (28) - to make at least a short break here and split this combo. ok!
00:16:497 (43) - k to follow the d d k k ... pattern. ok~
00:18:173 (47) - k, same reason as above. ^
00:20:855 (55) - ^ ^
00:22:028 (60,61) - You could change this that (60) is removed and (61) changed to k. seems more logical mapped and it fits better with the rest of this part. nope.
00:28:732 (82,83) - STRG+G, I like to see some kind of switches here, so we got d k dkd then d k dkd and then it would be cool to have d k dkd again. Could you make this?nope;; sorry...
00:34:933 (106) - Follow the cymbal sound and make this as k. nope.
00:39:458 (120,121) - Same thing as 00:28:732. ^
00:42:978 (132,133,134,135) - This part is quite weird and sounds not so good.. Let me suggest a good idea: (132) can be replaced as k and (133) removed completely. as last thing change (134) as d. Try it out!　Thank you for the good idea! fix!
00:51:023 (156,157) - The voice is getting deeper on (156) and the cymbal sound can be heard on (157). So change this to d k. nope.
00:52:363 (161,162) - Basically the same here, (161) sounds better as d. ^
00:53:034 (163,164,165,166,167) - You should change this part according to my suggestion: remove (163,164) and change (165,166,167) to d d k ^
00:54:375 (168) - This three circle should be played as k k d since 00:51:693 (158,159,160) is mapped like that. ^
The Triplets in the Kiai are quite unfitting and shouldn't be there (so remove the 2nd circle of the Triplet)
01:32:252 (294) - Better make this as D? good mod! fix~
01:33:760 (299) - Move it to 01:33:090. A 1/2 Note there fits better as this time currently. ^
01:34:598 (302) - Change it to k, you'll hear a nice sound flow from the background with 01:33:928 (300,301,302).^
01:35:101 (304) - Move it to 01:35:771. ^
01:35:604 (306,307) - When you have done the suggestion above then STRG+G. ^
01:36:442 (309,310,311) - Remove (309) and make (310,311) as kk. ^
01:37:782 (314) - Move it to 01:38:453. ^
01:38:285 (316,317) - When you have done the suggestion above then STRG+G. ^
01:39:291 (320,322) - k would fit at both better as d. ^

The problem I had is the less structure in the Kiai Part. I hope you can fix some things there.

Thank you for the good mod!
お願いぢます！ http://puu.sh/6cQRq.osu

updated

Hi there~

General
Nothing~

Inner Oni~
00:24:542 - & 00:24:877 - add a note for make it harder + i hear a vocal here (On white line)
00:35:268 - & 00:35:604 - ^
01:09:123 - k (hear more carefully the pitch)
In this diff i'm not sure dkd fit with the music because i heard some dkd that really bad :'( (on triplet)

Oni~
00:34:598 - ddddk looks better because dkddk not fit on "dkd"
00:40:632 - k looks better for me
00:43:481 - ddk pattern looks better because the next is k
00:50:352 - and 00:50:687 - add a note here because i hear a note
00:51:609 - looks unsnapped with the music for me
00:53:034 - add a note
00:54:375 - wrong pattern (should be k d k)
01:08:956 (251,253) - k looks fit because you use d k pattern (1/2) on (245,247)
some of dkd pattern on kiai looks bad for me
01:45:492 - remove because doesn't fit with the pitch

Ren's Moekashii~
00:03:592 - k (for fit with other diffs)
00:08:956 - ^
00:24:207 - i'm not sure with this kat because the pitch still same with before
00:27:391 (76,77) - swap
00:28:732 (81,82) - ^
00:38:118 (114,115) - ^
00:39:458 (119,120) - ^
00:56:721 - k because higher pitch
01:35:771 (304,305) - swap
01:38:453 (313,314) - ^

Futsuu~
00:24:207 - d looks better seems low pitch in here
01:05:436 (134-149) - too long for Futsuu Player maybe you can delete a few note there
01:35:604 (13,14,15) - change to k d k

Kantan~
Looks fit

Finished finally hope it helpfully

Niko-nyan wrote:

Hi there~

General
Nothing~

Inner Oni~
00:24:542 - & 00:24:877 - add a note for make it harder + i hear a vocal here (On white line)
00:35:268 - & 00:35:604 - ^ - it doesnt become harder. and lose the emphasis D.
01:09:123 - k (hear more carefully the pitch) - follow the bassdrum.
In this diff i'm not sure dkd fit with the music because i heard some dkd that really bad :'( (on triplet) - really bad? thanks

Oni~
00:34:598 - ddddk looks better because dkddk not fit on "dkd" - snaredrum is here 00:34:682 -
00:40:632 - k looks better for me - i dont think so, that k will break flow.
00:43:481 - ddk pattern looks better because the next is k - not fit music. what is "looks" ?
00:50:352 - and 00:50:687 - add a note here because i hear a note - vocal is not needed.
00:51:609 - looks unsnapped with the music for me - snaredrum.
00:53:034 - add a note - not sure.
00:54:375 - wrong pattern (should be k d k) - why wrong? cant you hear the snaredrum?
01:08:956 (251,253) - k looks fit because you use d k pattern (1/2) on (245,247) - i want to fit the bassdrum.
some of dkd pattern on kiai looks bad for me - "looks bad"...? sounds bad? concreteness is missing.
01:45:492 - remove because doesn't fit with the pitch - snaredrum.

Futsuu~
00:24:207 - d looks better seems low pitch in here - higher.
01:05:436 (134-149) - too long for Futsuu Player maybe you can delete a few note there - its simply. i dont felt the problem.
01:35:604 (13,14,15) - change to k d k - why?

Kantan~
Looks fit

Finished finally hope it helpfully

thanks for mod. all no changed.

Niko-nyan wrote:

Hi there~

Ren's Moekashii~
00:03:592 - k (for fit with other diffs) ok!
00:08:956 - ^nope.
00:24:207 - i'm not sure with this kat because the pitch still same with before nope;; sorry...
00:27:391 (76,77) - swap ^
00:28:732 (81,82) - ^ ^
00:38:118 (114,115) - ^ ^
00:39:458 (119,120) - ^ ^
00:56:721 - k because higher pitch no change.
01:35:771 (304,305) - swap ^
01:38:453 (313,314) - ^ ^

Finished finally hope it helpfully

Thank you mod:3
http://puu.sh/6ESxP.osu わああ

updated

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[Inner Oni]
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[Oni]

1. 00:05:101 - This felt empty. I suggest you do the same you did in Inner Oni and then probably add a few more notes to Inner Oni instead.
2. 00:46:079 - Add d? ddddk fits better in my opinion because you used dkddk at 00:34:682. It's like a end of phrase.
3. 01:02:754 (233) - d? Fits better because it continues to follow the beats which you are mostly doing here. There is a vocal here but you don't specifically follow it so a d would make more sense to me.
4. 01:39:459 (39,40,41,42) - ddd d? To keep rhythm consistency with 01:34:095 (17,18,19,20).
   

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:31:414 - d? It's still a muzukashii, and following the beat is pretty nice.
2. 00:34:933 (105) - This one should be a k in my opinion. There is a rhythm snare there and it sounds better.
3. 00:42:140 - Same as 00:31:414 up here.
4. 01:28:900 (275,276,277) - Didn't like this. Also didn't like 01:29:570 (279,280,281). I think you could probably map more 1/2 patterns here, up to 5 notes instead. I think this is a little sudden and just here so you have a 1/4 pattern to call this a muzukashii. :3 Just making more 1/2 patterns here and then have a triple would be better in my opinion.
5. 01:34:430 - d? There is a beat there.
6. 01:37:112 - ^
7. 01:51:525 - I suggest you map a d k d here, instead of just having that k alone in the middle. It fits the rhythm better in my opinion.
8. Overall I think you could map pretty much all the bass beats in this diff with dons. Just an opinion, don't have to change it if you don't want, it's not bad like it is now.

[Futsuu]

1. 00:57:391 (126) - A big note would be nice I think.

[Kantan]

1. Maybe use HP5? I tested this and passed with 42% accuracy and 3/4 hp left haha.

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I used your taiko mod tool <3

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[Muzukashii]

1. 00:31:414 - d? It's still a muzukashii, and following the beat is pretty nice. good mod! Thank you!
2. 00:34:933 (105) - This one should be a k in my opinion. There is a rhythm snare there and it sounds better.
3. 00:42:140 - Same as 00:31:414 up here. ok~
4. 01:28:900 (275,276,277) - Didn't like this. Also didn't like 01:29:570 (279,280,281). I think you could probably map more 1/2 patterns here, up to 5 notes instead. I think this is a little sudden and just here so you have a 1/4 pattern to call this a muzukashii. :3 Just making more 1/2 patterns here and then have a triple would be better in my opinion.
5. 01:34:430 - d? There is a beat there. ok~
6. 01:37:112 - ^ ^
7. 01:51:525 - I suggest you map a d k d here, instead of just having that k alone in the middle. It fits the rhythm better in my opinion.
8. Overall I think you could map pretty much all the bass beats in this diff with dons. Just an opinion, don't have to change it if you don't want, it's not bad like it is now.

All fixed! Thank you~

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I used your taiko mod tool <3

It was a very good mod! Thank you~
http://puu.sh/6XHe8.osu　ぴかちゅ

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[Inner Oni]
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[Oni]

1. 00:05:101 - This felt empty. I suggest you do the same you did in Inner Oni and then probably add a few more notes to Inner Oni instead. - i added a don only here.
2. 00:46:079 - Add d? ddddk fits better in my opinion because you used dkddk at 00:34:682. It's like a end of phrase. - its sounds good for me
3. 01:02:754 (233) - d? Fits better because it continues to follow the beats which you are mostly doing here. There is a vocal here but you don't specifically follow it so a d would make more sense to me. - agree. good sound for bassdrum.
4. 01:39:459 (39,40,41,42) - ddd d? To keep rhythm consistency with 01:34:095 (17,18,19,20). - yea, but its intentional pattern.
   

[Futsuu]

1. 00:57:391 (126) - A big note would be nice I think. - agree!

[Kantan]

1. Maybe use HP5? I tested this and passed with 42% accuracy and 3/4 hp left haha. - confirmed it. ww

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I used your taiko mod tool <3
i will fix some problems of the tool ;_;

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and updated RenKun's diff!!

Modding hehe

Kantan

Futsuu

Ren's Muzukashii

Oni

Inner Oni

Good luck with ranking, TKSalt! :3

bbj0920 wrote:

Modding hehe

Kantan
00:22:531 (15) - D sounds better IMO. - sure.
00:57:391 (13) - D - maybe i forgot this ;_;

Oni
00:45:156 (183) - ^ - fixed.

Good luck with ranking, TKSalt! :3

thanks for mod!

and i added some notes 01:06:777 ~ 01:07:950 in Inner Oni.

bbj0920 wrote:

Modding hehe

Ren's Muzukashii

SPOILER

00:11:637 (29) - d no change
00:22:196 (60) - k ^
00:34:598 (105) - d ^
00:51:023 (156) - ^ ok
00:51:358 (157) - k ^
01:42:140 (330) - d nope

Good luck with ranking, TKSalt! :3

mod Thank you!
http://puu.sh/6XVTH.osu ちゅ<3

RenKun wrote:

ちゅ<3

死ね

TKSalt wrote:

RenKun wrote:

ちゅ<3

死ね

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And the star goes back to this beatmap

bbj0920 wrote:

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And the star goes back to this beatmap

dont mind. RenKun is a GAY.
thanks for star!

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ありがとうございます。

Stefan wrote:

M4M

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Stefan wrote:

Stefan wrote:

M4M

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what is your map ;_;

Edit:
was solved. baka stefan.