1. 00:08:780 (1,3) - i really don't suggest you to make these kind of blind, it looks kinda bad looking like this ;w; so i suggest you moving the slider end a bit to the right or you can just move the 00:11:088 (3) - to right to avoid blinding them together
   
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2. 00:12:934 (5,6) - this kind of sliders looks kinda hard for the easiest diff, i suggest you removing them and adding 1 note each or you can do something like this:
3. 00:25:396 (3,1) - same as i said here 00:08:780 (1,3) -
4. 00:35:088 (4) - i highly suggest you adding a nc here since it fits with how you added nc all over the place o.o
5. 00:59:549 (1) - i didn't see any slider like this in this map, so why did you just add it here? i suggest you to remove it and add one note instead. It'll fit better on this diff instead of repeat slider

1. 00:00:472 (1,2,1) - i think making start like is kinda boring imo, how about making epic start with making something like this? (it's also fine if you wanna keep it as it is, but it's just my suggesting to this start o3o)
   
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2. 00:15:242 (3) - one note seems don't fit with this part, how about doing something like this to fit this part better?
3. 00:59:549 (3,4) - ^

1. 00:16:857 (3) - i suggest you remove the whistle on this slider's end, it don't fit really ;w;
2. 00:17:549 (6) - ^
3. 00:18:703 (4) - ^ but at slider's start
4. 00:19:165 (5,6) - switch the whistles from the 5 to 6's slider head, and also remove the whistle on the slider's end
5. 00:20:203 (2,3) - ^
6. 00:21:011 (5) - Switch the whistles from the start to the end please ;w;
7. 00:21:472 (6) - remove the whistle (and do like this to every slider and notes on this part, since, whistles on red tick honestly don't fit with this music ;w;)
8. 00:45:242 (4,5) - switch the claps on the 4's end and 5 to whistles it'll fits much better with music imo

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Normal:
I highly suggest you lowering the AR on this diff it's too high, maybe by one or two o.o okaaay

1. 00:00:472 (1,2,1) - i think making start like is kinda boring imo, how about making epic start with making something like this? (it's also fine if you wanna keep it as it is, but it's just my suggesting to this start o3o) yes sir
   
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2. 00:15:242 (3) - one note seems don't fit with this part, how about doing something like this to fit this part better? I prefer to keep it like it's...
3. 00:59:549 (3,4) - ^ and here I tried adding one note but still not sure

Hard:
I also think you can lower the AR and OD on this diff by one since it's too much, and it don't really fit with this map, so i highly suggest you to lower them o.o
(maybe AR 7.5 will be fine for it, in the other hand lol) lol okay

1. 00:16:857 (3) - i suggest you remove the whistle on this slider's end, it don't fit really ;w;
2. 00:17:549 (6) - ^
3. 00:18:703 (4) - ^ but at slider's start
4. 00:19:165 (5,6) - switch the whistles from the 5 to 6's slider head, and also remove the whistle on the slider's end
5. 00:20:203 (2,3) - ^
6. 00:21:011 (5) - Switch the whistles from the start to the end please ;w;
7. 00:21:472 (6) - remove the whistle (and do like this to every slider and notes on this part, since, whistles on red tick honestly don't fit with this music ;w;)
8. 00:45:242 (4,5) - switch the claps on the 4's end and 5 to whistles it'll fits much better with music imo fixed xD

Good, diff honestly i couldn't find anything besides the hitsounds that looks kinda bad in some parts so, Good job Vicho as always Vicho o3o/ about the whistles, I prefer to keep them since I like them ^^' don't punch me, anyways sankyuu for modding mah pony map <3


That's all i can find now, I hope this mod can help you in some way xD gogo rank this <3

smallboat wrote:

Hi,Vicho,In-game PM req.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

None.

[CDFA's Easy] HP & AR+1? Seems the difficulty have a bit low.

00:05:780 (2) - Recommended slider head at 00:05:549 (2) is fit,because strong beat at this here.(Easy almost place white line.)

Del 00:12:934 (5,6).
and: ↓
00:12:934 (5) - Place slider,slider head at 00:12:934 (5) ,end is 00:13:396.
00:13:857 (6) - Add a note make play to easy.

00:53:088 (2) - Add finish hitosund ?(Look the 00:45:703 (1) ,it is in the same rhythm,the slider head have finish.)
01:07:857 (5) - As above,add a finish here.

[Normal]

00:04:626 (5) - Reduce a reverse,and delete note in 00:05:319 (1),last place a slider at 00:05:088 (6) ,remember use "NC". (Because the vocal start in 00:05:088)
00:21:472 (3) - Slider head should start at 00:21:703 (3) ? (Place this part make play to easy)
00:23:319 (4) - Slider head should start at 00:23:549 (4) ?
00:29:088 (2,3) - The strong vocal in big white line,so suggest place the slider head,will be play better :

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00:34:396 (1) - As above reason,slider head should start at 00:34:626 (1) ?
00:35:780 (3) - Move to 00:35:549 (3) . (Drum point here.)
00:36:011 (4) - Strong drum point here,so suggest place this rhythm,too. :

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00:41:780 (3) - Slider move to 00:42:011 (3) ?
00:48:933 (5) - Same reason as 00:04:626 (5),this suggest rhythm :

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00:50:780 (4) - Try this rhythm?

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00:53:087 (1) - Slider head +finish?
01:07:857 (1) - Slider head +finish?

[Hard]

00:07:396 (6) - Perhaps can stack the 00:06:011 (3) slider head? Make pattern neat.
00:08:549 (4) - Feel change 2 note is fit the music better.
00:28:511 (5) - Feel no stream at this blue line,remove it? (Has no voice in this time point)
00:46:857 (5,6,7) - Maybe this stream's DS suggest in the same with 00:42:011 (1,2,3) ?
01:00:011 (6) - Try to stack the 01:00:472 (1) ?
01:07:857 (1) - Slider head +finish.
01:09:472 (1) - Feel change 2 note is fit the music better.
01:11:549 (1) - Slider head +finish.
01:14:088 (4) - Maybe can move to (432|40)? Seems sounds like the music ,can do a jump which I think.

[Other]
Hope my mod is useful to you.

1. 00:08:780 (1) - I guess it will be better to make a blanket with the form of your slider with the end of the previous one, just to make it aesthetically better, and with the next circles, it looks terrible the fact that they are stacked together, like this, for an example. I suggest you to move it somewhere else to avoid this.
2. 00:24:934 (2) - Shouldn't this circle be moved to x:84 y;92 so it can be directly infront of the previous slider? (You will need to rearrange the spacing after it, of course)
3. 00:36:472 (5,6) - You can make better blankets here, darling
4. 01:03:703 (1) - To keep the consistency within your combos, it would be better to delete this new combo and then, add one to 01:06:934 (4) - and of course, delete the combo to 01:11:549 (1) - since it's a one-object combo and it can be with the previous combo.
5. 01:04:165 (2) - Same as 00:36:472 (5,6) -

1. 01:11:549 - A new combo can be added to this object since, if we look to the next combos, most of them only last one measurement, so it's better to keep it that way.
2. 00:13:396 (1) - As for the new combo again, it is weird that make this slider and the previous one a one-object combo when they can be in the same combo. I highly suggest you to delete this combo to add it to the previous combo. Makes me think of this, for a simple reason: 00:56:780 (4,5) - .

1. 01:10:626 - Is there missing a whistle here?

1. 00:00:069 - En mi opinión el preview time sonaría mucho mejor si se coloca aquí, ya que sinceramente donde se encuentra ahora suena bastante tarde.
2. Tus tags están siendo inconsistentes en en todas las dificultades, considera arreglarlo.

1. 00:05:088 (1,2) - Considera arreglar el espacio entre ambos ya que a simple vista se ve la diferencia lo cual puede crear confusión a la hora de jugarlo.
2. 00:08:780 (1,3) - Para ser honesto esto le quita bastante estética al mapa porque al hacer testplay se sigue observando que el slider 1 esta cubriendo a el circulo 3, considera cambiarlo o hacer algo como esto.
3. 00:25:396 (3,4,1,3) - Lo mismo ^
4. 00:36:934 (6,3) - ^
5. 00:11:549 (4) - Este se podría decir que es el único slider que termina en un strong beat lo cual crea inconsistencia con los anteriores patrones, ten en cuenta acortar esto para hacer uno pequeño y por supuesto agregando una nota en 00:12:472 - con NC obviamente.
6. 00:17:088 (1) - Con las nuevas reglas que ahora se implementaron se debe tener en cuenta el tiempo de descanso en todas las dificultades y en easy debe de haber un tiempo aproximado de 4 beats, la solución a esto seria la eliminación de este mismo.
7. 00:35:088 (4,5,6) - Nazi* que opinas de hacer un bonito patrón de blankets con estos sliders.

1. 00:16:626 (1) - Arregla el spacing.
2. 00:30:934 (1) - ^ 00:54:934 (1) - ^
3. 00:34:396 (1) - El ritmo no es el ideal ya que el NC debería de ir en el strong beat y en realidad parece que lo haz agregado en donde no hay algo muy notable como cambio de vocal/ritmo, así que te recomiendo la adición de un circulo en 00:34:396 - y un slider en 00:34:626 - o bien dos círculos también podría ser una solución.
4. 00:41:780 (3) - ^
5. 00:45:472 - Solo es un gusto personal pero en mi opinión ya que es un cambio bastante notable debería de haber una nota aquí con whistle.
6. 00:51:703 (5) - Considera agregar un NC aquí ya que es el único que es bastante largo en comparación con los otros.

1. 00:00:242 (1,2,3,4) - La verdad para ser honesto deberías de intentar colocar el mismo spacing para esto ya que en todo el mapa es la única sección la cual cuenta con uno diferente y de alguna manera esto puede causar confusión la primera vez que se juega.
2. 00:30:011 (5,6) - Comparando los hitsounds de la normal haz olvidado añadir un par de claps a estos.
3. 00:43:857 (7,8) - Al probar esto varias veces llegue a la conclusión de que no se siente muy natural que digamos así que opto por sugerir cambiar esto por dos círculos en lugar de un simple slider.
4. 01:09:011 (4,5) - ^
5. 00:59:549 - Ten en cuenta que en la normal haz agregado una nota para seguir la vocal y en la hard la ignoraste completamente así que te sugiero agregar algo acá.
6. 01:00:011 (6,1) - El spacing entre ambos no es el correcto.
7. 01:14:549 (1,2) - ^

1. 00:35:088 (4,5,6) - Make better blankets here
2. 00:40:165 (4,5) - Quite weird that you're making a blanket with the shape of the slider (5), but not with the slider (4), make them looks similar.
   [00:59:549 (1) - Make this move to x:452 y:184 so it could be aligned and have some kind of space between the previous and the next object.
3. 01:11:549 (1) - I'd suggest you to make a better blanket with the previous slider shape.

1. 00:03:934 (2,3,4,5,1) - Pretty unsure of this spacing here, most of them has a little difference between the previous and the next objects.
2. 01:09:011 (4,5,1) - I'd rather change these objects to replace them for something that fits more the song. Here's my idea:
   

Kenezz wrote:

Congratz Vicho :3